Erina wrote:

Hey! From my mod for voice queue (_verto_ was the one who posted :3)

[Hard]
Consider lowering OD7 --> OD6 - why?
00:31:519 (6,1) - Switch NCs - no, because he starts singing the new section just where the new combo is now
00:46:879 (1,2) - Consider moving to (x:360 y:188) (yes it's a really small almost negligible movement but idk my OCD kicks in there for some reason) - but they are already placed there xD
01:02:239 (5) - Consider angling the end of the slider up a bit more (to x:359 y:179) - no, because it is supposed to be a blanket for 01:01:279 (3) -
02:18:879 (6,7,1) - I feel like this spacing is kinda hard to read for a "hard" difficulty - I put them a bit closer
02:24:799 (4) - Consider moving to (x:448 y:152) and then adjust spacing on the three notes before it respectively, I think this fits in with the next two objects better - I didn't exactly do it like this, but I adjusted it :3
02:39:999 (1) - Remove NC, 02:40:159 (2) - add NC - okay
02:54:399 (5,6) - Consider moving to (x:168) to be an exact horizontal reflection of 02:54:079 (3) - I think you selected the wrong notes, but I know what you mean, I changed it
03:03:199 (1) - Consider adding NC here (just for emphasis, up to you of course) - no, I don't want to have just one combo

[Normal]
01:39:679 (2) - Consider aligning directly under the previous slider and giving it more curve so it looks more symmetrical - copy pasted the previous slider and flipped it, should be fine now
01:41:599 (4) - Add NC to keep consistent with 01:49:279 (1) - - sure
01:43:039 (5) - Consider overlapping with 01:41:119 (3) - - hmmm okay
01:44:479 (6) - Consider giving more curve so that it's curves flow parallel to 01:43:039 (5) - - okay I only gave a little bit more curve

[Easy]
00:41:599 (2) - This slider doesn't perfectly blanket 00:43:999 (3) - , consider reducing the curve a bit - it wasn't perfect, I don't think I reduced the curve but I improved the blanket
00:48:799 (5) - Consider changing to a slider that lasts for one white tick - okay
01:05:599 (1) - Consider overlapping with 01:00:799 (1) - - no, that ruins the blanket, and overlapping won't change anything
01:25:759 (2) - Consider moving down a few pixels - no, why would I? o.o
01:47:839 (3) - I feel as if this might be better: http://puu.sh/8oosS.jpg - I like the long slider as well, moreover there is nothing that loud in the middle of the long slider which means it should be emphasized, so no change in this
02:18:559 (2,3) - Why not blanket these sliders instead? - okay
02:57:919 (2) - Move to x:356 y:44 - no, it ruins blanket, and you didn't give me a reason to move it, and it also ruins distance

Sorry for the late mod, hope this is helpful! - no problem! :3 it was helpful thank you!

Contact me later about what you'll be singing, verto!

• Easy

1. 00:24:799 (1,2) - flow could be made a little bit better here. move 2 either upwards or to the right a bit
2. 00:30:079 (1,2) - blanket could be improved here a little
3. 01:38:719 (1,2) - symmetry could be improved here. 1 isn't the same as 2, etc
4. 01:42:559 (2,3) - blanket here? o.o
5. 01:53:119 (3,1) - flow is just a tad off here from the end of 3 to 1
6. 02:47:839 (1,2) - seems oddly close together. wanted to try and do something where 1 is above 2, but that seems to be kinda ugly too, idk. up to you on this one
   

• Normal Collab

1. 00:23:359 (2,3) - this part's a little messy flowwise. I'd turn both 1 and 2 down so their ends are facing 3 a little better
2. 00:29:439 (3,1) - blanket's a little bad here.
3. 00:46:879 (3) - ctrl g, plays much better
4. 01:07:359 (4,1) - these 2 still overlap. maybe just switch 1 and 2 so they're going vertical instead of horizontal? (and then subsequently 4 and the notes after so they fit more
5. 01:11:839 (4,5) - blanket could be improved on the ends of these 2.
6. 01:11:839 (4,1) - overlap with 4 and 1
7. 01:27:519 (1,2,3) - seems rather repetitive. flip 2 around so it's facing towards the opposite side, maybe?
   http://puu.sh/8uQlv.jpg
8. 01:33:759 (1,2) - same thing here, except move 1 instead of 2
9. 01:41:599 (1,2) - flow slightly off here. angle 1 up a bit higher
10. 02:05:599 (1,2) - curving these 2 towards each other a little more would make them look better and more fun to play
11. 02:36:799 (4,1) - not the same slider. might as well copy and paste 4 and make it the new 1 without the repeat
12. 02:44:479 (2) - different from the last one that you used in the first half of the kiai. consider using the other one maybe, it played an looked better
13. 02:45:759 (3,4) - move 3 up a few grids
14. 03:04:479 (2) - just ctrl g this

• Hard Collab

1. 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at
2. 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket
3. 00:55:999 (7,8,9) - slider doesn't really follow the jump
4. 01:01:119 (2,5) - blanket could be done a bit better here. might as well just make 5 a circle around 2, looks fantastic http://puu.sh/8uRd2.jpg (of course, 1, 2 and 3 would have to be changed in the next combo a bit)
5. 01:07:039 (6,1) - awkward overlap
6. 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything.
7. 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better http://puu.sh/8uRqT.jpg
8. 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit
9. 01:26:079 (2,3) - not same spacing between 2 and 3 as 1/2 and 3/4. was this intentional? if so it's fine
10. 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit
11. 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter
12. 02:28:639 (3,4) - may want to distance these 2 a bit away because they don't follow the normal pattern
13. 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here
14. 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here
15. 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o

Maeglwn wrote:

hello

• Easy

1. 00:24:799 (1,2) - flow could be made a little bit better here. move 2 either upwards or to the right a bit - I moved it a little
2. 00:30:079 (1,2) - blanket could be improved here a little - alright
3. 01:38:719 (1,2) - symmetry could be improved here. 1 isn't the same as 2, etc - they aren't supposed to be symmetryc and it's not like peole can see it
4. 01:42:559 (2,3) - blanket here? o.o - no, it's not supposed to be a blanket >.<
5. 01:53:119 (3,1) - flow is just a tad off here from the end of 3 to 1 - a few pixels of movement won't change the flow
6. 02:47:839 (1,2) - seems oddly close together. wanted to try and do something where 1 is above 2, but that seems to be kinda ugly too, idk. up to you on this one - I changed this on my own way, I hope it looks better now :3
   

• Normal Collab

1. 00:23:359 (2,3) - this part's a little messy flowwise. I'd turn both 1 and 2 down so their ends are facing 3 a little better - I think it's okay like this
2. 00:29:439 (3,1) - blanket's a little bad here. - I think it's not supposed to be a blanket
3. 00:46:879 (3) - ctrl g, plays much better - it ruins the distance >.<
4. 01:07:359 (4,1) - these 2 still overlap. maybe just switch 1 and 2 so they're going vertical instead of horizontal? (and then subsequently 4 and the notes after so they fit more - I'll ask Aleks about this one
5. 01:11:839 (4,5) - blanket could be improved on the ends of these 2. - I don't think they are supposed to be blankets, hence the end of the sliders are not even curvy
6. 01:11:839 (4,1) - overlap with 4 and 1 - that's alright, it can't be seen during gameplay, because (4) disappears already by the time (1) appears
7. 01:27:519 (1,2,3) - seems rather repetitive. flip 2 around so it's facing towards the opposite side, maybe? - I like how it flows like this and the pattern looks nicer than that zig-zag you made (in my opinion) :<
   http://puu.sh/8uQlv.jpg
8. 01:33:759 (1,2) - same thing here, except move 1 instead of 2 - same
9. 01:41:599 (1,2) - flow slightly off here. angle 1 up a bit higher - if I made the end of the slider higher it would ruin it more thus it should be actually moved down which I did
10. 02:05:599 (1,2) - curving these 2 towards each other a little more would make them look better and more fun to play - I like them like this >.< and having them face each other is too mainstream xD
11. 02:36:799 (4,1) - not the same slider. might as well copy and paste 4 and make it the new 1 without the repeat - I copy pasted 1 instead
12. 02:44:479 (2) - different from the last one that you used in the first half of the kiai. consider using the other one maybe, it played an looked better - I want it to have some variety so no change in this
13. 02:45:759 (3,4) - move 3 up a few grids - umm no, why? it flows good like this imo
14. 03:04:479 (2) - just ctrl g this - ruins distance and I think it flows good like this

• Hard Collab

1. 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at
2. 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket
3. 00:55:999 (7,8,9) - slider doesn't really follow the jump - what do you mean?
4. 01:01:119 (2,5) - blanket could be done a bit better here. might as well just make 5 a circle around 2, looks fantastic http://puu.sh/8uRd2.jpg (of course, 1, 2 and 3 would have to be changed in the next combo a bit) - it looks nice but I want to have that slider because of the vocals :<
5. 01:07:039 (6,1) - awkward overlap - it's not even visible during gameplay D:
6. 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything.
7. 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better http://puu.sh/8uRqT.jpg
8. 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit
9. 01:26:079 (2,3) - not same spacing between 2 and 3 as 1/2 and 3/4. was this intentional? if so it's fine - the pattern looks nice like this so I think it was intentional
10. 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit
11. 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter
12. 02:28:639 (3,4) - may want to distance these 2 a bit away because they don't follow the normal pattern - I don't want to put them further from each other, they play quite fast so I wouldn't put more distance between them
13. 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here
14. 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here
15. 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o

as usual, a beautiful map from both of you. good luck, I like it a lot. :3 - thank you! :3

Maeglwn wrote:

hello

• Hard Collab

1. 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at mmm, no, it's fine
2. 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket i see your point, but blanket will ruin smooth shape of slider, sorry
3. 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything. agree, fixed
4. 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better fixed kinda
5. 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit moved
6. 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit changed a lot
7. 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter ^
8. 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here arcs are too annoying
9. 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here aaaaaand i'm sorry about it
10. 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o cuz i like it! also next pattern is fixed too