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Lanturn
Yay! It's back <3 *throws star*

69653863
Mod request from my queue
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
  1. Tell BATs to change title text colour to 253,179,179.
  2. When you wrote on the tags, did you mean "GigaP"? What I see here is "Giga-P" which is already used on artist field
Easy
  1. HP1? Really? You can use HP2 and it'll be okay
  2. 00:17:000 (1,2,3) - Doesn't this looks nicer: http://puu.sh/8qF1b.jpg (-:
  3. 00:29:800 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/8qF2K.jpg (-: You know, niceties.
  4. 00:45:800 (1,2,3) - Imperfect triangle formation. Whenever you're trying to make a triangle formation, rotate a slider 120 degree or -120 degree (both works) and place them properly.
  5. 00:52:200 (1) - Remove NC? Kind of nonsense to have just 1 combo to play (you'll feel how nonsense it is when playing with TAG mode)
  6. 01:11:000 (4,1) - Blanket please? It'll look nice, I swear.
  7. 01:11:000 (4,3) - Imperfect stack.
  8. 01:35:400 (3) - In order to perfectly symmetrize such sliderwave, make sure that the red sliderpoint is right on top of the slidertick, see example: http://puu.sh/8qFjK.jpg Don't forget to readjust the other sliderpoints.
  9. 02:44:200 (3,4,5,6) - What about http://puu.sh/8qFoo.jpg looks nicer ain't it? (-:
Nice diff.

Normal
  1. 00:12:200 (1,2) - Somehow it'll follow music better if you replace these with 3 circles.
  2. 00:17:800 (1) - Why NC?
  3. 00:37:800 (3) - Not a good way to create sliderwave. To make a good sliderwave, put sliderpoints this way: http://puu.sh/8qFym.jpg and make sure you put them in symmetrical way. This applies to other sliderwaves in this map as well.
  4. 01:14:600 (1) - Oh god what is this, I'm sorry, but this is just plain ugly. Put a simpler curve instead?
  5. 01:36:000 - Add note?
  6. 01:47:800 (3,1,2) - This is confusing for newbies. At least don't stack (3) with (2)
  7. 01:49:800 (1,1) - Remove NC?
  8. 01:55:800 (1) - ^
Hard
  1. [00:21:800 (1,4) - Slightly imperfect stack (-:
  2. 00:33:000 (1) - Not a good sliderwave, refer to my guide on how to make good sliderwave on Normal. Watch out for others too!
  3. 00:41:600 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket.
  4. 00:51:800 (4) - What about a kickstream? I mean like http://puu.sh/8qFQp.jpg Trust me, it'll be nice. If you did apply this, apply to other similar parts too!
  5. 01:27:400 (1) - Not a good place for such spinner. I believe you could map this part (-:
  6. 01:33:800 (1) - This sliderwave is not bad actually. You could also use this as an example of good sliderwave.
  7. 02:13:800 (1,2) - Not a good jump )-:
Insane
  1. 00:14:600 (4,5) - Blanket please )-:
  2. 00:22:600 (4) - What about http://puu.sh/8qG2J.jpg ? Looks better ain't it?
  3. 00:31:000 (5) - Put it more symmetrical like http://puu.sh/8qG4c.jpg
  4. 00:51:200 (1) - Instead of a short spinner, why don't you map this part with, like, streams? It'll emphasize this part better.
  5. 01:11:000 (7) - Supposedly, if you want a perfect-flow star formation you should stack this with 01:10:000 (2) - instead.
  6. 01:30:200 (1) - Bad flow. I prefer 2 circle jumps instead of such hold slider.
  7. 01:33:800 (1,2) - Bad, especially because wrong overlapping
  8. 02:05:800 (1,2,3) - Not in a good pattern polarity. I suggest to add note at 02:06:000 - (better stack it with (2)) and 02:06:300 - stack it with (3).
Nice map, you're going in the right direction. Although you can still use more mods I'd like to give you some appreciation on this map.

Starred. Good luck.
Topic Starter
pkk

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
  1. Tell BATs to change title text colour to 253,179,179. sorry but I'm not sure what you mean by this/what this will do. Could you elaborate?
  2. When you wrote on the tags, did you mean "GigaP"? What I see here is "Giga-P" which is already used on artist field someone said I should put the artist in the tags as well so I left it as Giga-P
Normal
  1. 00:12:200 (1,2) - Somehow it'll follow music better if you replace these with 3 circles. alright, fixed
  2. 00:17:800 (1) - Why NC? you're right, NC does seem a bit unnecessary here
  3. 00:37:800 (3) - Not a good way to create sliderwave. To make a good sliderwave, put sliderpoints this way: http://puu.sh/8qFym.jpg and make sure you put them in symmetrical way. This applies to other sliderwaves in this map as well. thanks, fixed
  4. 01:14:600 (1) - Oh god what is this, I'm sorry, but this is just plain ugly. Put a simpler curve instead? lol that slider shape, alright just a simple curve now
  5. 01:36:000 - Add note? I didn't add a note here in any of the other kiai times so I'd like to leave it as it is
  6. 01:47:800 (3,1,2) - This is confusing for newbies. At least don't stack (3) with (2) unstacked this
  7. 01:49:800 (1,1) - Remove NC? I think this is fine since it emphasizes the change in vocal
  8. 01:55:800 (1) - ^ I think I'd like to keep this as NC to match the start of the music in the break. I have NC because it's also the last note before the break, if there was a spinner after this I would not NC.
Hard
  1. [00:21:800 (1,4) - Slightly imperfect stack (-: recreated slider to stack on tail
  2. 00:33:000 (1) - Not a good sliderwave, refer to my guide on how to make good sliderwave on Normal. Watch out for others too! fixed
  3. 00:41:600 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket. fixed
  4. 00:51:800 (4) - What about a kickstream? I mean like http://puu.sh/8qFQp.jpg Trust me, it'll be nice. If you did apply this, apply to other similar parts too! this is nice, fixed
  5. 01:27:400 (1) - Not a good place for such spinner. I believe you could map this part (-: ok, mapped
  6. 01:33:800 (1) - This sliderwave is not bad actually. You could also use this as an example of good sliderwave.
  7. 02:13:800 (1,2) - Not a good jump )-: fixed
Insane
  1. 00:14:600 (4,5) - Blanket please )-: increased spacing
  2. 00:22:600 (4) - What about http://puu.sh/8qG2J.jpg ? Looks better ain't it? yep this looks better, changed it to this except I did not have the whole slider head overlap the body
  3. 00:31:000 (5) - Put it more symmetrical like http://puu.sh/8qG4c.jpg I didn't want it in one line so I spaced it out a bit more
  4. 00:51:200 (1) - Instead of a short spinner, why don't you map this part with, like, streams? It'll emphasize this part better. I had a stream here before but it was sort of awkward, I'll see if I can find a nice way to arrange it
  5. 01:11:000 (7) - Supposedly, if you want a perfect-flow star formation you should stack this with 01:10:000 (2) - instead. fixed
  6. 01:30:200 (1) - Bad flow. I prefer 2 circle jumps instead of such hold slider. I feel that a slider matches this part better. I spaced this out from the next note a bit to create a jump so the flow should be a bit better now
  7. 01:33:800 (1,2) - Bad, especially because wrong overlapping stacked slider ends instead
  8. 02:05:800 (1,2,3) - Not in a good pattern polarity. I suggest to add note at 02:06:000 - (better stack it with (2)) and 02:06:300 - stack it with (3).
this is a nice change, fixed
Nice map, you're going in the right direction. Although you can still use more mods I'd like to give you some appreciation on this map.

Starred. Good luck.
Thanks for modding!
69653863


This is the title text.
253,179,179 is the RGB code for a pink color. Which means changing the title text color to 253,179,179 will recolor the title text to pink.
Why pink? It fits more to the background and less blending (current white color render the title text hard to see)
DeletedUser_3044645
Such lewd SP. Report pls
LexiaLovesU

No Dap wrote:

Such lewd SP. Report pls
not 69 anymore xD
Kibbleru
wait whats wrong with 69?
waxman

No Dap wrote:

Such lewd SP. Report pls

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ


[Insane]
00:50:200 (5) - add Finish. it's better for me. :D
01:55:400 (7,1) - Not too bad, but I recommended take same spacing like 01:55:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1).
02:12:400 (1) - miss Clap.
02:29:400 (6,1) - 02:29:800 (1) move left a bit for beauty.
02:47:000 (6) - add Finish. same as 00:50:200 (5). PLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLS D:

[Hard]
00:20:800 (2) - x:172 y:184
00:25:800 (3) - stack on the beginning of 00:26:200 (4) perfectly.
00:49:400 (2) - It's not intentional spacing. so just move to x:176 y:192
01:28:200 (5,6) - This overlapping is unnecessary for me. According to 01:27:400 (1,2,3,4,5).
01:50:600 (3) - This overlapping is not recommended. because maybe this slider looks like a circle.
02:47:400 (1) - delete Finish. same as Insane diff.

GOOD LUCK!
(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Topic Starter
pkk

waxman wrote:

No Dap wrote:

Such lewd SP. Report pls

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ QQ not 69 anymore q_q


[Insane]
00:50:200 (5) - add Finish. it's better for me. :D ok
01:55:400 (7,1) - Not too bad, but I recommended take same spacing like 01:55:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1). fixed
02:12:400 (1) - miss Clap.fixed
02:29:400 (6,1) - 02:29:800 (1) move left a bit for beauty.fixed
02:47:000 (6) - add Finish. same as 00:50:200 (5). PLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLS D: fixed

[Hard]
00:20:800 (2) - x:172 y:184 fixed
00:25:800 (3) - stack on the beginning of 00:26:200 (4) perfectly. fixed
00:49:400 (2) - It's not intentional spacing. so just move to x:176 y:192 fixed
01:28:200 (5,6) - This overlapping is unnecessary for me. According to 01:27:400 (1,2,3,4,5). fixed
01:50:600 (3) - This overlapping is not recommended. because maybe this slider looks like a circle. hmm ok
02:47:400 (1) - delete Finish. same as Insane diff. finish should be there

GOOD LUCK!
(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Thank you for modding :OOOO
Kinomi
General
you should pay more attention to arrangements, now your map looks random, not clean or well designed

Kibbleru's Easy
00:29:800 (1) - remove clap on tail,and add 00:31:000 (2) - clap
since music 00:26:600 (1,2,3) - and 00:29:800 (1,2,3) - are similar, and your ehythm here is similar, so using same hitsound seem to be better

00:19:800 (4) - add clap maybe more consistant.since you add clap at 00:16:600 (4) - and 00:22:600 (5) -

01:29:000 (4) - its shape can be more strange xD, to show the special vocal
02:28:200 (3) - drum finish on tail, it fits the music very well, better than soft finish

Normal
00:19:400 (6) - same as easy, and 00:26:200 (6) - add clap plz

01:26:600 (4) - make it a bit more curve for better flow

01:29:000 (4) - same as easy

01:33:399 (5) - too close to 01:32:200 (3) -, looks ugly when playing,move it down a bit

Hard
minor spacing change made this diff looks not very clean, plz don't do so much minor spacing change in hard, of course it isn't a serious problem, but it affect the image people get when they playing your map for first time.
and you chould pay more attention to the appearance of arrangment.
sth like
02:29:800 (1,2,3) -
blanket problems
and sth like
02:38:600 (4,5,1) -
this looks really bad. its not a very hard thing to make it more pretty.

in hard and insane,i think you can delete some spiner and map these part to show more things of the music, bu it's call you. for example you can delete the last spiner,map that part, then start a spiner at 02:49:100 and end at 02:50:600.

Insane
have to mention again that you should improvement your arrangement, objects seem to be snapped randomly, not intentional or well designed.
to make the rhythm consistant you can add a 1/4 slider at 00:51:000 like 02:48:000 (3) - :?
02:06:200 miss a note here,and if you want to put a even stream, it should start at 02:06:100 not 02:06:000
01:53:400 (1) - remove a repeat, move 01:53:900 (2,3) - to 01:53:800 and add a note at 01:54:200, then people can click at 01:54:200
02:14:400 (5) - shorten it to 02:14:600 you missed a strong beat here and add a note at 02:14:700
01:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is very uncomfortable, since shere are many sounds at white line which confuse players
try this rhythm
about 02:09:700 and 02:10:500 and 02:16:100 these parts, if you follow the electronic music, i think you can add notes
i can't point out all the problems about these bad-looking arrangements...you need more work on it.
good luck
Kibbleru
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SPOILER
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Topic Starter
pkk

Tsukuyomi wrote:

General
you should pay more attention to arrangements, now your map looks random, not clean or well designed

Normal
00:19:400 (6) - same as easy, and 00:26:200 (6) - add clap plz I only added clap at places where there was a clap in the music

01:26:600 (4) - make it a bit more curve for better flow ok, fixed

01:29:000 (4) - same as easy I think this shape is fine

01:33:399 (5) - too close to 01:32:200 (3) -, looks ugly when playing,move it down a bit fixed

Hard
minor spacing change made this diff looks not very clean, plz don't do so much minor spacing change in hard, of course it isn't a serious problem, but it affect the image people get when they playing your map for first time.
and you chould pay more attention to the appearance of arrangment.
sth like
02:29:800 (1,2,3) -
blanket problems
and sth like
02:38:600 (4,5,1) -
this looks really bad. its not a very hard thing to make it more pretty.

in hard and insane,i think you can delete some spiner and map these part to show more things of the music, bu it's call you. for example you can delete the last spiner,map that part, then start a spiner at 02:49:100 and end at 02:50:600. cleaned up blankets and spacing

Insane
have to mention again that you should improvement your arrangement, objects seem to be snapped randomly, not intentional or well designed.
to make the rhythm consistant you can add a 1/4 slider at 00:51:000 like 02:48:000 (3) - :? I don't have 1/4 slider here because there is no drum sound in the background. The drum is much more clear in the end of the song, which is why I added 1/4 slider there
02:06:200 miss a note here,and if you want to put a even stream, it should start at 02:06:100 not 02:06:000 fixed
01:53:400 (1) - remove a repeat, move 01:53:900 (2,3) - to 01:53:800 and add a note at 01:54:200, then people can click at 01:54:200 fixed
02:14:400 (5) - shorten it to 02:14:600 you missed a strong beat here and add a note at 02:14:700 fixed
01:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is very uncomfortable, since shere are many sounds at white line which confuse players
try this rhythm I think this is fine, but if I find a better arrangement I will change it
about 02:09:700 and 02:10:500 and 02:16:100 these parts, if you follow the electronic music, i think you can add notes fixed
i can't point out all the problems about these bad-looking arrangements...you need more work on it.
good luck
Thanks for modding!
Lanturn
Ahh, when I meant the tag "GigaP" i meant it as "GigaP" not "Giga-P" this is so when people search for this artist, both "GigaP" and "Giga-P" will yield results.

Please change the tag Giga-P to GigaP
Topic Starter
pkk

Lanturn wrote:

Ahh, when I meant the tag "GigaP" i meant it as "GigaP" not "Giga-P" this is so when people search for this artist, both "GigaP" and "Giga-P" will yield results.

Please change the tag Giga-P to GigaP
hm ok I suppose I'll have to do that with orebananaP and YasuoP as well
Kibbleru
iikkkeeee mod this pplzz
Kyouren
Hi, Testplay in my Queues^^


Wow!, This is a Amazing!!!
Funny Video^^

Good Luck~
Mortem
Hi.
As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

Normal:
01:25:000 (2) - This slider doesn't fit for me. Try to improve the design of it, like the end of the slider will point to (3).

Hard:
00:12:200 (1,2) - Put them on the slider. Looks good imo.
00:14:400 (2) - Move it little bit to the right.
00:50:200 (4) - Make the slider's end point to (1).
01:29:000 (1) - Little bit closer to (4). (Put it little higher).

That's it.
Good mapset, you really now how to map.
Hope that'll helps
If not then sorry.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
pkk

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi.
As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

Normal:
01:25:000 (2) - This slider doesn't fit for me. Try to improve the design of it, like the end of the slider will point to (3). ok, I see what you mean. I changed it now so that it is symmetrical with the slider right after

Hard:
00:12:200 (1,2) - Put them on the slider. Looks good imo. changed it differently, I ended up unstacking all of them
00:14:400 (2) - Move it little bit to the right. moved right to improve flow
00:50:200 (4) - Make the slider's end point to (1). I ended up remapping this part a bit
01:29:000 (1) - Little bit closer to (4). (Put it little higher). moved to avoid overlap

That's it.
Good mapset, you really now how to map.
Hope that'll helps
If not then sorry.
Good Luck!
Thanks for modding!
BeatofIke

Kibbleru wrote:

iikkkeeee mod this pplzz
Soon...I'm active again guys!
Kibbleru
gogogo rank my first GD pls
yurunneram
GOMENE FOR LATE O-O; I suddenly had stuff to do and once I was done I had a camp.

Just a lil mod

This version is way better than miku's btw

And I also got you that laptop you wanted! Except uhm...



I really don't know what happened to it... Really...



ANYWAYS enough sidetracking

GENERAL

Generally I wouldn't suggest white as a combo colour cuz kiai might be too blinding to see the white. Consider changing

EASY

00:22:200 (4,5) - Suggestion only. Why not do it like this? symmetry is wonderful for easys


00:47:400 (3) - See this? I would bless your map if the stack was perfect (ofc you don't need to make it perfect)


00:50:200 (2) - move to x192 y60 better flow desu

01:13:000 (3) - Same with the second suggestion. Move the head down and adjust the blanket till the stack on the tail is perfect. This is perfectly doable so no excuse desu

02:07:400 (3) - Could be confusing for beginners cuz they wouldn't know which slider end to click on but if you think they ain't stupid then let it be

NORMAL

01:06:600 (3) - Move the tail up to x480 y60 or something? Then the flow would be better imo

01:09:000 (2) - Lower it if jya ain't gonna blanket

01:40:800 (2,3) - Found the flow here bad and rather irritating. Move (3) up?

HARD

Can't really mod hards. And it looks fine anyways

DON'T GIVE KUDOS

I probly entertained more than modded and I'm so late anyways

Fluffy fluffy sayonara >wO)/
Topic Starter
pkk
aaah

yurunneram wrote:

GOMENE FOR LATE O-O; I suddenly had stuff to do and once I was done I had a camp. I hope you had fun :)

Just a lil mod

This version is way better than miku's btw ;w;

And I also got you that laptop you wanted! Except uhm...



I really don't know what happened to it... Really...



NOOOOOOO MY LAPTOP

oh it's a dell laptop, ew


ANYWAYS enough sidetracking

GENERAL

Generally I wouldn't suggest white as a combo colour cuz kiai might be too blinding to see the white. Consider changing
you're right, I changed it now to a darker beige
NORMAL

01:06:600 (3) - Move the tail up to x480 y60 or something? Then the flow would be better imo I prefer the current one as it makes the flow more interesting since there is more direction involved

01:09:000 (2) - Lower it if jya ain't gonna blanket fixed

01:40:800 (2,3) - Found the flow here bad and rather irritating. Move (3) up? fixed

HARD

Can't really mod hards. And it looks fine anyways

DON'T GIVE KUDOS I'll see if Kibbleru decides to change anything in his GD

I probly entertained more than modded and I'm so late anyways

Fluffy fluffy sayonara >wO)/

Thanks for modding!
Kibbleru

yurunneram wrote:

GOMENE FOR LATE O-O; I suddenly had stuff to do and once I was done I had a camp.

Just a lil mod

This version is way better than miku's btw

And I also got you that laptop you wanted! Except uhm...



I really don't know what happened to it... Really...



ANYWAYS enough sidetracking

GENERAL

Generally I wouldn't suggest white as a combo colour cuz kiai might be too blinding to see the white. Consider changing true, but it's been done many times and it's perfectly rankable so i really don't see why not

EASY

00:22:200 (4,5) - Suggestion only. Why not do it like this? symmetry is wonderful for easys k


00:47:400 (3) - See this? I would bless your map if the stack was perfect (ofc you don't need to make it perfect) k


00:50:200 (2) - move to x192 y60 better flow desu nah i want a perfect square

01:13:000 (3) - Same with the second suggestion. Move the head down and adjust the blanket till the stack on the tail is perfect. This is perfectly doable so no excuse desu eh it's not really noticeable in game but w/e done

02:07:400 (3) - Could be confusing for beginners cuz they wouldn't know which slider end to click on but if you think they ain't stupid then let it be [/color]


I probly entertained more than modded and I'm so late anyways

Fluffy fluffy sayonara >wO)/
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[Quick mod on hard]
  1. 00:13:800 (1) - why is this a brezier curve?
  2. 00:29:000 (3) - bleh looks kinda ugly to me dunno why try this
  3. 00:48:200 (3) - you really need to improve on your wave sliders, the waves should look even and smooth (if any of the curves look sharp then that's noo good)
    ^do this for every single one of ur wave sliders
  4. 01:46:600 (1) - the second curve on this one looks sharp which is no good, you can just make it like this actually


GOD DAMMIT I DIDN'T UPDATE, (still consider on the wave sliders thing though)
BeatofIke
Topic Starter
pkk

BeatofIke wrote:

>> how Ike feels when he plays the insane difficulty

/me runs away
Kibbleru

BeatofIke wrote:

how i feel like when i try to look for bats



have faith, in my first ranked GD i mean your first ranked map
BeatofIke


Indeed! Here's a quick mod!

[Easy]
  1. 00:45:800 (1,2,3) - Good map, but this pattern needs more polishing:
    Image and Code

    364,368,45800,6,0,P|315:358|264:355,1,100
    224,264,46600,2,0,P|256:226|284:184,1,100
    384,196,47400,2,0,P|400:243|423:288,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]
  1. Good map, but AR8 is too high for this difficulty and it doesn't balance well the difficulty spread!
  2. No problems on playability/sight-reading however, so that's a plus!
[Insane]
  1. AR9 is too high, for this BPM, but do what you like! It's not my map anyways! >.<
  2. 02:29:400 (6) - This 1/12 kick slider does not make sense! It follows nothing in the music. You're better off using a 1/2 slider.
Normal difficulty is good to go. I would like to see a few more improvements on the Insane difficulty.
Have a star icon, because why the hell not. I show interest with this map!
Kibbleru
ITS HAPPENING btw i guess ill give you a mod on insane when u get on

BeatofIke wrote:

02:29:400 (6) - This 1/12 kick slider does not make sense! It follows nothing in the music. You're better off using a 1/2 slider.
i believe he was trying to map out that clicky sound or w/e but i think that is on 1/8 and not 1/12, so if you switch it to 1/8 i think it should be fine
i lied this maps nothing my suggestion for this is you can do this for the buildup and silence that slider BE SURE TO SILENCE IT. Oh and decrease SV too

01:29:800 (5) - i think this is 1 repeat too many?
I also noticed that you have a bunch of random ass brezier sliders which need to be replaced lol.. ie. 02:36:200 (1) -



Also
wtf i fixed that from the previous mod PK DID U EVEN UPDATE THIS CODE???
Edit: Nevermind it's me who fked up and posted the wrong code =w=

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Topic Starter
pkk

BeatofIke wrote:



Indeed! Here's a quick mod!

[Hard]
  1. Good map, but AR8 is too high for this difficulty and it doesn't balance well the difficulty spread! ok, lowered AR to 7
  2. No problems on playability/sight-reading however, so that's a plus!
[Insane]
  1. AR9 is too high, for this BPM, but do what you like! It's not my map anyways! >.<
  2. 02:29:400 (6) - This 1/12 kick slider does not make sense! It follows nothing in the music. You're better off using a 1/2 slider.
followed kibb's suggestion

Normal difficulty is good to go. I would like to see a few more improvements on the Insane difficulty.
Have a star icon, because why the hell not. I show interest with this map!
yea I need to make insane look nicer :?
Thanks for the mod and star!!! :D
Kibbleru
We did a long IRC mod and polished some things up, i think it's ready now tbh

inb4 "this insane is worse now"

lets try to get this bubbled by the end of this weekend :D

looonngg ass irc mod
16:49 Kibbleru: oh also i did post some of my concerns with that normal diff
16:49 Kibbleru: also dw about the 3.5 star diff rating
16:49 Kibbleru: apparently
16:49 Kibbleru: as long as it plays like a normal
16:49 Kibbleru: then its fine
16:49 pkmnyab: ya i looked them over
16:49 pkmnyab: good, i will make a 5 star normal
16:50 Kibbleru: lol
16:50 Kibbleru: gl
16:50 pkmnyab: tyty
16:51 Kibbleru: btw for ur insane diff
16:51 Kibbleru: u have a bunch of fking brezier sliders
16:51 Kibbleru: so fix those
16:52 Kibbleru: and then call me back for a throughout polishing irc mod
16:52 pkmnyab: what bezier slider
16:52 pkmnyab: red point?
16:52 pkmnyab: oh wait i think red point is linear
16:52 pkmnyab: okok i will make them straight
16:52 Kibbleru: 02:02:600 (1) - this stuff
16:52 Kibbleru: no
16:52 Kibbleru: brezier slider
16:52 Kibbleru: okay
16:53 Kibbleru: u know theres the new slider algorithm
16:53 Kibbleru: ?
16:53 pkmnyab: okok
16:53 pkmnyab: what
16:53 Kibbleru: where u make 3 points
16:53 Kibbleru: perfect curve
16:53 Kibbleru: some of ur curves are still using old slider algorithm
16:53 pkmnyab: idk
16:53 pkmnyab: oh
16:53 Kibbleru: so just remake them
16:53 Kibbleru: to use the new one
16:53 Kibbleru: okay
16:53 Kibbleru: this is an old alorithm curve 02:02:600 (1) -
16:54 Kibbleru: 02:03:400 (4) - this is new one
16:54 pkmnyab: yea i know
16:54 Kibbleru: move the middle point
16:54 Kibbleru: yah kk
16:54 pkmnyab: when you drag the middle point around
16:54 Kibbleru: yah
16:54 pkmnyab: ya i was like wtf
16:54 Kibbleru: just fix those i think thats one of the things holding this diff back lol
16:54 pkmnyab: y some of them turn big and others dont
16:54 pkmnyab: lol this diff is so ugly
16:54 pkmnyab: im going to cry
16:54 Kibbleru: 02:19:200 (5) - here is one lol
16:54 Kibbleru: yah just fix those first then well get into detail stuff
16:55 Kibbleru: playing is fine i think
16:55 Kibbleru: its just the
16:55 Kibbleru: well it just needs polishing
17:02 pkmnyab: btw do you want battlefield 3 for PC
17:02 Kibbleru: idek if my computer can run it lols
17:43 Kibbleru: ok
17:43 Kibbleru: fuuk
17:45 Kibbleru: wtf this ashe build http://puu.sh/96K3s/4f4dc15492.jpg
18:37 Kibbleru: yo
18:37 Kibbleru: u there?
18:37 Kibbleru: salkjfals
18:37 pkmnyab: i am always here
18:37 pkmnyab: for youuuuuuuuuuuuu
18:37 pkmnyab: jk
18:37 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
18:37 *pkmnyab is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
18:38 pkmnyab: i might have dinner any time soon within 10 minutes so do not be alarmed if I am forced to leave
18:38 Kibbleru: first of all i suggest u make these parts consistent throughout all kiaias 00:39:000 (1) -
18:38 Kibbleru: k just tell me if u do
18:38 pkmnyab: hm i only have two of those
18:38 pkmnyab: oh wait i have 3
18:38 Kibbleru: no im saying u should make them the same
18:38 Kibbleru: cuz ur last kiai one is different
18:38 pkmnyab: ya hmmm
18:39 Kibbleru: why not just copy paste these? 00:21:800 (1,3) -
18:39 pkmnyab: i like the last one though
18:39 pkmnyab: k
18:39 Kibbleru: 00:22:100 (2,4) - stack is off
18:39 pkmnyab: ohwait let me upload to latest version
18:39 Kibbleru: and no i mean u should make them all like the last one
18:40 Kibbleru: with the 3/4 silence thing
18:40 Kibbleru: did u update
18:41 Kibbleru: o-o
18:42 pkmnyab: k done
18:42 pkmnyab: i accidentally closed chatbox when uploading
18:42 pkmnyab: so i couldn't open it gg
18:42 pkmnyab: i changed some stuff in the beginning, mainly around 00:22:600 (4,5) - and after that
18:43 Kibbleru: hmm how bout this 00:25:000 (1) - http://puu.sh/96ORv/7dc81cee16.jpg or something
18:44 pkmnyab: hmmmm ok
18:44 Kibbleru: 00:36:900 (4,5) - put a little jump here to differentiate for when the vocals start?\
18:44 pkmnyab: would that be weird
18:44 Kibbleru: i dont think so o-o
18:44 pkmnyab: nvm i got it
18:45 Kibbleru: 00:43:800 (5) - also i think missing clap on head but im not sure what ur adding ur claps to
18:45 pkmnyab: oops
18:45 Kibbleru: 00:48:200 (3) - u forgot to fix this slider
18:46 pkmnyab: but how will people know I made this map before sliders were cool?
18:46 pkmnyab: fixed
18:47 Kibbleru: 00:39:000 (1) - uhh make this similar to 02:29:400 (1) -
18:47 Kibbleru: 01:30:200 (1) - same with this
18:47 Kibbleru: 01:30:200 (1) - missing clap?
18:47 Kibbleru: oh wait i said that alrdy
18:48 pkmnyab: the one at 02:29:400 (1) - is fine because it's silent at that part
18:48 pkmnyab: but i guess the other two are sort of similar
18:48 Kibbleru: no im saying make them all like this one 02:29:400 (1) -
18:48 pkmnyab: k
18:48 Kibbleru: 02:30:600 (5,6) - btw u forgot to fix these sliders
18:49 Kibbleru: 01:06:800 (2) - passive slider feels weird here
18:49 Kibbleru: maybe ctrl g this rhythm 01:06:800 (2,3) -
18:50 Kibbleru: 01:22:800 (2,3) - can u ctrl g this? its hard to expect the circle exactly under the slider right after a fairly big jump
18:50 Kibbleru: and if u do that
18:50 Kibbleru: 01:22:800 (2,4) - space out
18:51 Kibbleru: 01:32:800 (4,5) - make this jump a bit bigger since (5) should be slightly more emphasized
18:53 Kibbleru: 01:48:600 (2) - try something like this here? http://puu.sh/96PEG/ef587e5cee.jpg i think it looks slightly nicer and ik for a fact that ike likes blankets so
18:53 Kibbleru: 01:53:400 (2) - remove 2 reverses here and move 01:53:900 (3) - up by 1/4 and add a reverse to it
18:53 pkmnyab: ok
18:54 Kibbleru: 02:01:000 (1,2) - make kickslider? to emphasize that
18:54 Kibbleru: idk
18:54 Kibbleru: similar to 02:01:800 (1) -
18:54 pkmnyab: fixed all up until the 2 reverses thing
18:54 pkmnyab: thanks for helping so far, brb dinner afk
18:54 Kibbleru: k brb another league match
19:26 Kibbleru: o-o
19:26 pkmnyab: welcome back
19:27 Kibbleru: 02:06:600 (5,6) - right
19:27 Kibbleru: so
19:27 Kibbleru: uh
19:27 Kibbleru: blaknet kinda?
19:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96SuY/be57e1bf94.jpg
19:28 pkmnyab: okie
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:38:600 (5) - fix this slider too
19:28 Kibbleru: if u ahvent
19:28 Kibbleru: havent
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:39:800 (2,3) - maybe just copy paste one?
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:45:000 (3) - fix slider
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:45:400 (4) - ^
19:29 Kibbleru: 02:19:800 (8) - ^
19:30 Kibbleru: 02:36:200 (1) -
19:30 Kibbleru: u missed alot lol
19:30 Kibbleru: 02:37:000 (4) -
19:30 Kibbleru: 02:39:800 (2) -
19:30 Kibbleru: 01:30:600 (1) -
19:31 Kibbleru: 01:31:400 (4,5) -
19:31 Kibbleru: 01:35:400 (1,2) - just copy paste for these?
19:31 pkmnyab: do i have to fix those sliders
19:31 pkmnyab: there's no noticeable difference
19:32 pkmnyab: like old sliders
19:32 Kibbleru: yes :o
19:32 Kibbleru: there is a difference
19:32 pkmnyab: ._.
19:32 Kibbleru: 01:18:600 (3) - ^
19:33 Kibbleru: 00:13:800 (1,2) - whynot blanket?
19:35 Kibbleru: 00:36:200 (1) - how bout do this http://puu.sh/96T4k/01b01061f0.jpg reason being is that it seems like it should be copy pasted from 00:35:800 (8) - this slider but it's not so it bothers me but it'd look better if you made the sliders more different
19:36 Kibbleru: 00:44:200 (1,2) - how boud making these slider linear bend things cuz i think i'd look cool :o
19:36 Kibbleru: zzz push
19:36 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96Tb3/f71d96648f.jpg
19:37 Kibbleru: idk i just think u can add a few of those in here and there to give some variety :P
19:38 Kibbleru: how bout liks this instead? 01:12:600 (4) - http://puu.sh/96Tik/fb9a8b6989.jpg
19:38 Kibbleru: ofc dont take the suggestion of u don't like it
19:38 Kibbleru: but i do recommend you adding one of those linear bends here and there, they looks nice :D
19:39 Kibbleru: 01:37:800 (4) - like here might fit
19:39 Kibbleru: 01:41:400 (5,1) -
19:40 Kibbleru: 01:56:600 (2) - i dun really like this pattern dunno why, looks better like this tbh http://puu.sh/96Tuc/96ac99934b.jpg
19:41 Kibbleru: yah just idk
19:41 pkmnyab: ya that looks better
19:41 Kibbleru: add a few of those linear sliders here and there
19:41 Kibbleru: poke me again when you've uploaded and added those :3
19:42 Kibbleru: 01:55:400 (1) - u can lower sv maybe?
19:42 Kibbleru: for a similar effect to
19:42 Kibbleru: as 02:29:400 (1) -
19:43 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96TGI/cd3b1bbc95.jpg frostings slider :P
19:44 pkmnyab: my slider now
19:44 Kibbleru: lol
19:50 Kibbleru: u done fixing :P?
19:50 Kibbleru: o-o
19:51 Kibbleru: 02:41:400 (3,5) - i cant say im a big fan of this pattern but if you really like it then keep
19:51 pkmnyab: ohya i fixed that
19:52 Kibbleru: ok i guess thats all for placement for now
19:52 Kibbleru: lets take a look at rhythm and hitsounds
19:53 Kibbleru: 00:18:600 (1,3,5) - missing normal samplesets
19:54 pkmnyab: lol oops
19:54 Kibbleru: oh wait update first
19:54 Kibbleru: pls
19:55 pkmnyab: i did
19:55 Kibbleru: k
19:56 Kibbleru: 01:05:800 (3) - missing normal sampleset
19:57 Kibbleru: 01:12:600 (4) - why did u ctrl g this lol x.x
19:57 Kibbleru: now the antijump feels weird lol
19:58 Kibbleru: 01:26:600 (5) - FSKJAHFKJSAH fix
19:58 pkmnyab: holy shit that's so ugly
19:58 Kibbleru: this one's actually noticeable
19:59 Kibbleru: 01:29:000 (1,2) - i feel like this needs like claps or something
19:59 Kibbleru: idk
19:59 Kibbleru: 01:43:400 - doesnt the kiai end here?,,
20:00 pkmnyab: i felt that this part was super cool
20:00 pkmnyab: 01:43:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
20:00 pkmnyab: so cool
20:00 Kibbleru: but thats not the chorus...
20:01 pkmnyab: well i feel that it needs to be emphasized
20:01 pkmnyab: i'll see if anyone else thinks it's a problem :S
20:01 Kibbleru: 01:55:400 (1,1) - btw u can add a bit of ajump here or try this http://puu.sh/96UVb/28da13721a.jpg (the curve looks a bit too curved btw)
20:01 pkmnyab: ok did that
20:02 Kibbleru: 01:34:600 (4,6) - copy paste one another??
20:02 pkmnyab: k
20:03 Kibbleru: 02:01:000 (1,2) - u didnt make this a kickslider :(
20:03 pkmnyab: it seemed really weird
20:03 Kibbleru: 02:11:800 (6) - clap
20:04 pkmnyab: actually i don't like this entire thing 02:01:200 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
20:04 pkmnyab: random slider in the middle throws off accuracy
20:04 Kibbleru: 02:21:400 (1) - clap?
20:04 Kibbleru: i think the slider is good
20:04 Kibbleru: goes well with the high pitch
20:04 Kibbleru: idk what insturment
20:05 pkmnyab: i think you just call it a synth
20:05 pkmnyab: usually those electronic noises in music are called synths because they're made by synthesizers in the music program
20:05 pkmnyab: ...the more you knowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............
20:05 Kibbleru: oh right
20:05 Kibbleru: btw did u add claps?
20:06 pkmnyab: yep
20:06 Kibbleru: 02:32:200 (4) - i think this would look nice if it was linear curve
20:06 pkmnyab: hm linear curve would also match the vocal
20:06 pkmnyab: k
20:08 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96VmN/4b9dea0a7e.jpg 02:30:600 (5,6) - idek im just giving out random ass suggestions now
20:08 Kibbleru: that part kinda bothered me tho
20:08 Kibbleru: cuz
20:08 Kibbleru: 02:30:600 (5,1) - this distance
20:08 Kibbleru: isnt the same as 02:31:000 (6,3) -
20:08 pkmnyab: weirdest flow NA
20:09 Kibbleru: u can curve it the other way lol
20:09 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96Vr0/aafbeb0156.jpg
20:09 pkmnyab: i fixed it another way
20:09 pkmnyab: just deleted 02:31:700 (2) -
20:10 pkmnyab: nvm not going to delete it
20:10 Kibbleru: btw ur doubleclaps seem inconsistent across the kiais
20:10 Kibbleru: fix those pls
20:11 pkmnyab: fixed
20:11 Kibbleru: 02:33:400 (3,6) - btw i think claps should still continue
20:11 Kibbleru: untill
20:11 Kibbleru: 02:35:800 -
20:12 pkmnyab: k
20:12 Kibbleru: 02:41:400 (3,4,5) - isnt this a bit harsh?
20:12 pkmnyab: lol with no mods this is okay
20:12 pkmnyab: but with HR people will die huehuehue
20:12 pkmnyab: ok i will fix
20:12 Kibbleru: u can do this or something http://puu.sh/96VE4/653c4db285.jpg
20:12 pkmnyab: ok
20:13 Kibbleru: 02:42:600 (1) - this would bother me less if it was linear or something idk
20:13 Kibbleru: 02:42:600 (1,4) - dun like this pattern
20:13 Kibbleru: i have no idea why
20:14 Kibbleru: u just need to make ur doubleclaps more consistent
20:14 pkmnyab: my double claps are consistent
20:14 pkmnyab: only 2 in every kiai
20:14 Kibbleru: hang on
20:15 pkmnyab: btw g2g take a walk in 5 mins lol
20:15 Kibbleru: 02:32:600 (6,7) - should this be double clap?
20:16 pkmnyab: idk
20:16 Kibbleru: 02:46:200 (3) - why is this doubleclap? you have nothing like this in your other kiai
20:16 pkmnyab: there's only one clap on that
20:16 Kibbleru: nvm i lied
20:16 pkmnyab: o i probably removed it
20:17 Kibbleru: eh idun even know
20:17 pkmnyab: ya i fixed the random double claps
20:17 pkmnyab: so now only 2 per kiai
20:17 Kibbleru: k
20:17 Kibbleru: 01:12:200 (3,4) - uhh copy paste?
20:18 Kibbleru: 01:27:800 (3) - this clap at the end
20:18 Kibbleru: sounds weird
20:18 Kibbleru: whoops
20:18 Kibbleru: 01:28:800 -
20:19 pkmnyab: ok deleted
20:19 Kibbleru: 02:07:800 (4) - clap?
20:20 pkmnyab: k
20:20 pkmnyab: uh brb 20 mins
20:20 Kibbleru: k i think thats all
20:41 pkmnyab: i come back from the outside world
20:41 Kibbleru: did u die from sunlight?
20:41 pkmnyab: no
20:41 pkmnyab: i did some sick parkour
20:42 Kibbleru: 01:30:600 (1,2) - erm make this blanket better?
20:42 Kibbleru: actually u can do this or something
20:42 pkmnyab: k
20:42 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96XFJ/a721a7fd52.jpg
20:43 pkmnyab: i'll blanket for now
20:43 Kibbleru: go check ur other diffs for missing claps and old slidercurves
20:43 Kibbleru: then go ask beat if he can recheck or something
20:44 Kibbleru: im gunna post this log gimme kudo :D
Kibbleru
81 SP PLS AT LEAST BUBBLE DIS D:<
Frostings
hey i found the chat log

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2014-05-31 19:16 pkmnyab: flawlesstea senpaiiiiiii
2014-05-31 19:16 pkmnyab: can you IRC mod with me so ike will rank my map Q(owoQ)
2014-05-31 19:17 Frostings: yeah let me just look over the map quickly
2014-05-31 19:17 Frostings: is it just Insane
2014-05-31 19:17 Frostings: or all
2014-05-31 19:18 pkmnyab: just insane
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: ok here we go
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: bear with me i don't like IRC mods ><
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: i'm slow
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
2014-05-31 19:20 pkmnyab: ok :)
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: for some reason
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: 00:17:800 (4,5,6) - these bother me
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: and all the other ones
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: i think it's the distance
2014-05-31 19:21 pkmnyab: hm
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: i would snap it 0.9 like all the other ones
2014-05-31 19:21 pkmnyab: k
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: or whatever you're using
2014-05-31 19:22 Frostings: 00:18:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is kinda meh
2014-05-31 19:22 Frostings: keep if you want it
2014-05-31 19:23 Frostings: but maybe consider sort of a better pattern
2014-05-31 19:24 pkmnyab: i'll change it if i can think of something
2014-05-31 19:24 Frostings: you could probably put any pattern there
2014-05-31 19:24 Frostings: and it would work
2014-05-31 19:25 Frostings: 00:39:800 (2,3,4) -
2014-05-31 19:25 Frostings: same as before
2014-05-31 19:26 Frostings: lol
2014-05-31 19:26 pkmnyab: sorry, my internet randomly dc'd
2014-05-31 19:26 Frostings: 00:39:800 (2,3,4) -
2014-05-31 19:26 Frostings: same as before
2014-05-31 19:26 pkmnyab: ok
2014-05-31 19:27 Frostings: 00:51:000 - why not put one more hitcircle here
2014-05-31 19:27 pkmnyab: k
2014-05-31 19:27 Frostings: i wouldn't put the three notes stacked though
2014-05-31 19:28 pkmnyab: yea i stacked it on 00:51:200 (4) -
2014-05-31 19:28 Frostings: 01:08:200 (1,2,3) - same as before
2014-05-31 19:29 Frostings: 01:21:800 (4,5,6) - ^
2014-05-31 19:29 pkmnyab: life is hard
2014-05-31 19:30 Frostings: 01:50:800 (4) - maybe paralllel to 01:49:800 (1,2) -
2014-05-31 19:30 Frostings: :P
2014-05-31 19:30 pkmnyab: ok
2014-05-31 19:31 Frostings: 01:52:600 (1) - i don't think NC req
2014-05-31 19:31 Frostings: 01:55:800 (1) - here too
2014-05-31 19:31 pkmnyab: ok, removed
2014-05-31 19:32 Frostings: 02:21:900 (1) -
2014-05-31 19:32 Frostings: what do you think about ending the spinner here 02:23:000 -
2014-05-31 19:32 Frostings: and then putting a hitcircle
2014-05-31 19:32 pkmnyab: oh that's nice
2014-05-31 19:32 pkmnyab: ok fixed
2014-05-31 19:33 Frostings: ok i will check hitsounds
2014-05-31 19:34 Frostings: 00:19:900 (2,4) -
2014-05-31 19:34 Frostings: i think you should have claps on 00:19:800 (1,3) -
2014-05-31 19:34 Frostings: isntead
2014-05-31 19:35 Frostings: maybe move whistles too
2014-05-31 19:35 pkmnyab: ok
2014-05-31 19:39 Frostings: alright
2014-05-31 19:39 Frostings: everything's good
2014-05-31 19:39 pkmnyab: thank you for your time :D
Xiaolin
Rin and Len senpai are kawaii ~ <33
[General]
  1. When I modded easy there was no video, but when I modded normal, there was a video, you forgot to add a video in easy ~ :(
    [Kibbleru's Easy]
    1. 00:10:600 (1) - I think this spinner should be till 00:12:200
    2. 00:13:800 (1) - Finish ~ ?
    3. 00:15:400 (3) - I think its much better to add whistle ~ :>
    4. 00:18:200 (2) - ^
    5. 00:20:200 (1) - ^ At the end of the slider
    6. 00:22:800 (3) - ^
    7. 00:22:600 (5) - ^ At the beginning of the slider
    8. 00:39:400 (1,2) - I suggest that you make these two more curve ~
    1. 01:20:600 (4) - You should move this to x:264 y:192 for perfect blanket
    [Normal]
    1. 00:15:400 (3) - I suggest that you use whistle better ~
    2. 00:17:800 (2) - ^ At the end of the slider ~
    3. 00:19:400 (5) - Missing clap at the repeat :( Please add clap at the repeat ~
    4. 00:20:600 (2) - Move to x:284 y:212 for better blanket ~ ?
    5. 00:37:000 (2) - Whistle at the repeat ?
    6. 01:11:000 (5) - I think this should be like this, more curve:

Its pretty much a long mod so I guess I'll skip hard and insane, I also checked them, they were fine ~ :3

Good luck with rank ~ !! >w<
Topic Starter
pkk

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Rin and Len senpai are kawaii ~ <33
[General]
  1. When I modded easy there was no video, but when I modded normal, there was a video, you forgot to add a video in easy ~ :(
    ahh I think there was an issue with copying codes and video somehow got left out, I'll add it back in once kibbleru updates his code
    [Normal]
    1. 00:15:400 (3) - I suggest that you use whistle better ~ I only use the clap in the beginning section and add whistles starting in the next section
    2. 00:17:800 (2) - ^ At the end of the slider ~
    3. 00:19:400 (5) - Missing clap at the repeat :( Please add clap at the repeat ~ added clap
    4. 00:20:600 (2) - Move to x:284 y:212 for better blanket ~ ? fixed blanket
    5. 00:37:000 (2) - Whistle at the repeat ? added whistle
    6. 01:11:000 (5) - I think this should be like this, more curve:
ok, curved it a bit more

Its pretty much a long mod so I guess I'll skip hard and insane, I also checked them, they were fine ~ :3

Good luck with rank ~ !! >w<
Thank you for modding! :)
Kibbleru

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Rin and Len senpai are kawaii ~ <33
[General]
  1. When I modded easy there was no video, but when I modded normal, there was a video, you forgot to add a video in easy ~ :(
    [Kibbleru's Easy]
    1. 00:10:600 (1) - I think this spinner should be till 00:12:200 removed spinner and did what pk did in his diffs
    2. 00:13:800 (1) - Finish ~ ? k
    3. 00:15:400 (3) - I think its much better to add whistle ~ :> i don't rly like these x.x
    4. 00:18:200 (2) - ^
    5. 00:20:200 (1) - ^ At the end of the slider
    6. 00:22:800 (3) - ^
    7. 00:22:600 (5) - ^ At the beginning of the slider
    8. 00:39:400 (1,2) - I suggest that you make these two more curve ~ i like it how it is atm
    1. 01:20:600 (4) - You should move this to x:264 y:192 for perfect blanket not rly going for a blanket

Its pretty much a long mod so I guess I'll skip hard and insane, I also checked them, they were fine ~ :3

Good luck with rank ~ !! >w<
ty4 mod

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480,20,49000,6,0,B|460:4|412:12|392:28|392:28|340:12|268:36,1,200,4|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,104,50200,1,12,1:2:0:0:
116,124,50600,2,0,B|112:92|112:92|96:68|92:36|92:36|72:12,2,100,0|8|0,1:1|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
136,220,51800,1,8,1:2:0:0:
236,200,52200,5,4,1:2:0:0:
480,40,65000,6,0,P|444:92|396:120,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
316,96,65800,2,0,P|276:126|250:168,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,268,66600,2,0,B|304:260|327:231|327:231|364:228,2,100,0|0|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
68,240,68200,6,0,P|44:184|36:128,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
136,156,69000,2,0,P|158:99|192:54,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
240,148,69800,2,0,P|285:127|334:116,2,100,0|0|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
248,248,71000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,316,71400,6,0,P|272:344|224:344,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
344,220,72600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
357,120,73000,2,0,P|267:154|248:248,1,200,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
184,324,74200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
84,324,74600,6,0,P|72:272|82:225,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
148,152,75400,2,0,P|180:180|212:194,2,50,0|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
120,56,76200,2,0,P|76:80|48:144,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
72,220,77000,2,0,L|164:288,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
247,323,77800,6,0,P|247:273|268:228,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,292,79000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
364,196,79400,2,0,B|360:164|344:136|344:136|312:108,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,228,80600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
176,188,81000,6,0,L|100:112,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
140,24,81800,2,0,L|216:100,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,136,82600,2,0,B|352:108|352:108|400:112|400:112|428:72|484:68,1,200,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
484,168,83800,1,8,1:2:0:0:
480,268,84200,6,0,P|424:248|389:184,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,228,85000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
308,328,85400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
208,340,85800,2,0,B|164:344|164:344|144:352|144:352|104:356,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
228,240,87000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
292,160,87400,5,2,1:2:0:0:
392,160,87800,1,8,1:2:0:0:
344,248,88200,2,0,L|392:304,2,50,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
292,160,89000,2,0,B|336:140|336:140|340:112|360:96|360:96|384:88|404:48,2,150,0|0|2,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,240,90600,6,0,P|196:192|192:136,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
92,157,91400,2,0,P|111:92|139:53,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
224,40,92200,2,0,B|252:44|252:44|272:68|308:68|308:68|332:76,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
200,136,93400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
292,176,93800,6,0,P|360:164|400:136,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
448,228,94600,2,0,P|487:171|496:123,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,60,95400,2,0,B|384:32|336:60|336:60|288:84|240:56,1,200,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
160,108,96600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
92,184,97000,6,0,B|104:216|116:240|116:240|156:272,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
84,344,97800,2,0,B|115:358|140:366|140:366|191:360,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,340,98600,2,0,P|276:264|280:236,1,100
276,140,99400,2,0,P|228:152|192:196,1,100
96,200,100200,5,6,1:2:0:0:
72,104,100600,1,12,1:2:0:0:
152,40,101000,2,0,P|208:62|259:56,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
332,112,101800,2,0,L|288:202,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
432,284,103400,5,4,1:2:0:0:
80,188,116200,6,0,P|140:152|156:128,1,100,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,48,117000,2,0,P|184:32|160:8,2,50,0|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
304,100,117800,2,0,B|280:164|280:164|252:204,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,268,118600,2,0,B|348:204|348:204|376:164,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
444,116,119400,6,0,P|456:40|468:12,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
464,216,120600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
404,296,121000,2,0,P|404:328|408:360,2,50,0|0|10,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
312,260,121800,2,0,P|289:282|269:308,2,50,0|0|10,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,180,122600,6,0,B|384:144|384:144|368:112|376:72,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,64,123400,2,0,B|268:100|268:100|284:132|276:172,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
180,176,124200,2,0,B|188:140|188:140|172:108|180:68,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
92,28,125000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
36,112,125400,1,10,1:2:0:0:
84,200,125800,6,0,P|132:212|152:272,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
148,356,126600,2,0,P|212:340|252:352,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
344,360,127400,2,0,P|436:244|268:252,1,400,4|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140200,12,0,142600,0:0:0:0:
416,304,143400,5,4,1:2:0:0:
456,108,144200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,145000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,200,145400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,288,145800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,244,146600,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,147400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,148200,2,0,P|272:276|196:300,2,100,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
476,148,149800,6,0,P|428:108|400:64,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,20,150600,2,0,P|313:81|289:127,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
292,216,151400,2,0,P|350:194|402:192,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:1:0:0:
240,300,152600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
140,300,153000,5,0,1:1:0:0:
112,204,153400,2,0,P|84:196|56:184,2,50,8|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:1:0:0:
196,152,154200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
288,116,154600,2,0,P|298:54|322:8,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:1:0:0:
88,144,156200,6,0,P|172:120|196:100,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,200,157000,2,0,P|148:224|124:244,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
120,328,157800,2,0,P|76:351|26:358,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,308,159000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
312,280,159400,6,0,B|356:300|356:300|408:284|408:284|460:304|516:276,1,200,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,196,160600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
372,136,161000,2,0,B|392:108|392:108|404:72|428:48,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,164,162200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
204,232,162600,6,0,L|120:168,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,264,163400,2,0,L|167:324,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,364,164200,1,2,1:2:0:0:
324,284,164600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,276,165000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
400,180,165400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
472,108,165800,6,0,P|429:83|379:81,1,100,4|12,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
400,180,166600,2,0,P|320:164|296:140,1,100,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,220,167400,2,0,P|258:297|249:330,2,100,0|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
212,120,168600,1,0,1:2:0:0:
308,148,169000,5,4,1:2:0:0:
Blueprint
I really like the insane " ar 9 is to high for this bpm" I think ar9 will get more attention ^^, just a suggestion make it OD 8
Going to edit it to AR 8 see how it is,
I think it's more difficult with 8 a little more effort to FC and I guess AR 8 would open it up to DT scores.
Looking forward to this being ranked
Topic Starter
pkk

Blueprint wrote:

I really like the insane " ar 9 is to high for this bpm" I think ar9 will get more attention ^^, just a suggestion make it OD 8
Going to edit it to AR 8 see how it is,
I think it's more difficult with 8 a little more effort to FC and I guess AR 8 would open it up to DT scores.
Looking forward to this being ranked
Thanks for the feedback, I made it OD 8 now since I don't plan on lowering the AR. 150 BPM + the way I mapped this song would make it too hard for DT, even on AR8.
DeletedUser_3044645
senpai pls
Topic Starter
pkk

No Dap wrote:

senpai pls
wow and here I thought they ranked my map when I received the email notification
DeletedUser_3044645
map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone
Topic Starter
pkk

No Dap wrote:

map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone
hmm I've been considering that for a while since the ending of the song is basically just the part at 00:52:200 - which I left as a break. Well, since I didn't map it in the previous section I think I'll map the ending. That stream at the end is also pretty sketchy so this gives me a good reason to remove it.
Kibbleru

No Dap wrote:

map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone
NO I DON'T WANT MORE FUCKING WORK
Topic Starter
pkk

Kibbleru wrote:

No Dap wrote:

map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone
NO I DON'T WANT MORE FUCKING WORK
LOL calm down I'll only do it in insane
Kibbleru

pkmnyab wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

NO I DON'T WANT MORE FUCKING WORK
LOL calm down I'll only do it in insane
that'll make it unrankable
Topic Starter
pkk

pkmnyab wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

LOL calm down I'll only do it in insane
that'll make it unrankable
ok I'll map it in all diffs, you better do it too :)
DeletedUser_3044645

Kibbleru wrote:

that'll make it unrankable
Nope. Ranking criteria does not say "must." It says "should."
Topic Starter
pkk

No Dap wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

that'll make it unrankable
Nope. Ranking criteria does not say "must." It says "should."
ok since I'm lazy I'll just do it for insane difficulty. Kibb, you don't have to map it
DeletedUser_3044645
Did IRC mod with pk

he has the log
Topic Starter
pkk

No Dap wrote:

Did IRC mod with pk

he has the log
IRC with mom
10:06 No Dap: 02:49:400 (4,5,6) -
10:06 No Dap: rekt shape
10:07 pkmnyab: lmfao
10:07 No Dap: Fk
10:07 No Dap: Crashed again
10:07 No Dap: This is why I never cop pasye
10:07 pkmnyab: map op
10:07 No Dap: Anyway
10:08 No Dap: 3 :3 something
10:08 No Dap: The anti jump is hard to read
10:08 No Dap: The 2nd anti jump
10:08 pkmnyab: ok
10:08 No Dap: Because of 1/2 stafk
10:09 No Dap: Lmao did I just say stafk
10:10 No Dap: Ncm
10:10 No Dap: Nvm
10:10 No Dap: The antijump plays fine
10:10 No Dap: Dont change
10:10 pkmnyab: k
10:10 No Dap: though there are a few flows i didnt like
10:11 No Dap: 02:48:800 -
10:12 No Dap: it plays fine but the shape rekt
10:12 pkmnyab: wtf
10:12 No Dap: 02:50:600 - crtl + g please
10:12 No Dap: flow rekted
10:12 pkmnyab: k
10:12 No Dap: the jump should be bigger between here 02:58:500 -
10:13 No Dap: k
10:13 No Dap: you're gonna get tons of 1 ratings
10:13 No Dap: if you don't fix this
10:13 No Dap: 03:07:800 -
10:13 No Dap: reading rekted
10:13 pkmnyab: ???
10:14 pkmnyab: k
10:14 No Dap: player : omg I almost FC'd
10:14 pkmnyab: LOL
10:14 No Dap: WTF I MISSED THAT
10:14 No Dap: the flow could be a bit better there too
10:15 No Dap: 03:07:000 (3,4,5) - rekt
10:15 No Dap: actually thats fine
10:15 No Dap: why si this part 03:05:100 - different
10:15 No Dap: you should either stack or have the 2nd anti jump like this
10:17 pkmnyab: k stacked
10:17 No Dap: 01:07:000 -
10:17 No Dap: 1~the triple
10:17 No Dap: why is the jump so big here
10:17 No Dap: this is like the calm part
10:18 pkmnyab: k made jump between triple and previous note smaller
10:18 pkmnyab: is 01:08:000 (9) - fine or should i just delete it
10:18 No Dap: hmm
10:18 No Dap: oh thats fine
10:19 No Dap: 01:14:000 - I don't like this flow
10:19 No Dap: its a bit awkward to play
10:19 No Dap: 01:12:200 - stack on this or somewhere around that?
10:20 pkmnyab: k
10:20 No Dap: 01:14:400 - some where like 432 : 256 would flow a lot better
10:20 pkmnyab: k
10:20 No Dap: 01:22:000 -
10:21 No Dap: i got an idea for you
10:21 pkmnyab: btw i changed the flow of the four notes before it
10:21 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710274
10:21 No Dap: rip
10:21 No Dap: the 4 notes before the one i just pointed out?
10:21 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/9d2596de6a2aca6af647ee1c91d7bcbe
10:21 pkmnyab: your screenshot is black, rip
10:22 No Dap: i know
10:22 No Dap: fk this
10:22 No Dap: oh yeah
10:22 No Dap: thats a lot better to play
10:22 No Dap: the triple at the top was too far to reach
10:23 No Dap: btw are you also getting this glitch
10:23 No Dap: where all notes disappear from the screen and no hitsound
10:23 pkmnyab: yea
10:23 pkmnyab: that happens a lot when i click on timeline, so i just scroll
10:24 No Dap: that happens
10:24 No Dap: when i fking click a note
10:25 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710289
10:25 No Dap: are you
10:25 No Dap: KIDDING ME MAC
10:25 No Dap: 01:50:500 -
10:25 No Dap: I wouldn't stack
10:25 No Dap: cuz it's almost not visible
10:26 No Dap: especially with the stack it will appear even worse
10:26 pkmnyab: actually i don't like the flow at 01:49:800 (1,2) -
10:26 pkmnyab: i'll just rearrange the whole thing
10:26 No Dap: no
10:26 No Dap: that plays very fine
10:26 No Dap: noooooooo
10:26 pkmnyab: ok ok fine
10:26 No Dap: that plays fine
10:26 No Dap: lol
10:26 No Dap: just unstack
10:26 pkmnyab: done
10:27 No Dap: 01:50:500 - I get your emphasizing the
10:27 No Dap: ggggggguguuuuguck sound
10:27 No Dap: but the SV makes it look like
10:27 No Dap: the next slider is fking fast too
10:27 No Dap: at least NC it or delete the SV change
10:27 pkmnyab: did you copy the right time
10:27 No Dap: 01:53:600 -
10:27 No Dap: rip
10:27 pkmnyab: k i'll delete sv
10:28 pkmnyab: YO WTF
10:28 pkmnyab: DID YOU GO INTO SONG SETUP
10:28 No Dap: delete nc?
10:28 No Dap: 01:55:800 -
10:28 pkmnyab: YOU CAN GO UP BETWEEN 9 AND 10 AR
10:28 pkmnyab: HOLY SHIT
10:28 pkmnyab: 9.1 AR
10:28 pkmnyab: 9.5
10:28 pkmnyab: OMG
10:28 pkmnyab: WHAT
10:28 No Dap: did you not know
10:29 No Dap: look at my userpage
10:29 pkmnyab: omg
10:29 pkmnyab: yes
10:29 pkmnyab: ar9.5
10:29 No Dap: this happened yesterday at midnight
10:29 No Dap: 02:04:000 - rip flow
10:29 pkmnyab: wow song is 10x more fun with ar9.5
10:30 No Dap: fk mac
10:30 No Dap: somwehre like
10:30 No Dap: 327 129
10:30 No Dap: would flow well
10:30 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/6ea2e903da38c023496626fec9acc8a7
10:31 No Dap: 02:11:900 - rip DS
10:31 No Dap: rip slider break rage
10:31 pkmnyab: LOL
10:31 No Dap: Rip
10:31 No Dap: That link
10:31 No Dap: Crashed , ac
10:31 No Dap: Mac
10:31 No Dap: It didnt crash osu
10:31 No Dap: It crashed mac
10:32 No Dap: that looks good
10:33 No Dap: a02:19:000 - rip reading
10:33 No Dap: rip DS
10:33 No Dap: 02:20:500 -
10:34 pkmnyab: ok DS should be k now
10:35 No Dap: 02:34:000 -
10:35 pkmnyab: holy AR 9.5 is like the best thing ever for songs where ar 9 is too slow and ar10 is too fast
10:35 pkmnyab: peppy for president
10:35 No Dap: stack 2 and 5
10:35 No Dap: at this 02:32:000 -
10:36 pkmnyab: ?
10:36 No Dap: ?
10:36 pkmnyab: what
10:36 No Dap: stack
10:36 No Dap: 02:33:200 -
10:36 No Dap: 02:33:800 -
10:36 No Dap: on
10:37 No Dap: 02:32:000 - ?
10:37 pkmnyab: k
10:37 No Dap: 02:40:000 - move this a bit to the left
10:37 No Dap: for better transition
10:38 pkmnyab: k
10:39 No Dap: k others look fine
10:39 No Dap: post on thread and gimmie kds pls
10:39 pkmnyab: no you post on thread
10:39 No Dap: I don't have the long
10:39 No Dap: i fucking crahsed like

Ike rank this please (Y) :)
Kibbleru

No Dap wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

that'll make it unrankable
Nope. Ranking criteria does not say "must." It says "should."
asked frosty apparently it's not unrankable lol o_O

(wtf i swear i read somewhere it was -_-)
BeatofIke
Just one more thing to fix:
[Insane]
  1. 01:47:800 (6) - this kick slider should be 1/4 btw. Always slow down the music to verify that the rhythm is correct.
EDIT: Good luck!
Topic Starter
pkk

BeatofIke wrote:

Just one more thing to fix:
[Insane]
  1. 01:47:800 (6) - this kick slider should be 1/4 btw. Always slow down the music to verify that the rhythm is correct.
aahh I have no idea how that became 1/6 xD anyways thanks for catching that, fixed.

EDIT: thanks for the bubble! <3 <3 <3
Garven
[General]
You have two MP3's in the .osz. Remove one.
Even after removing one mp3, you'll need to make the video a bit smaller. You're almost at 26 MB file size and you should be aiming at 20 MB (the 128 kbs mp3 is about 3 MB).
Tick rate 2 fits this song best

[Easy]
01:38:600 (3,4) - Miss a couple whistle/claps?
01:56:200 - Having a long break, then play a section as long as that break, then break again... particularly poor pacing, probably. Prolong playing pace properly! I'd follow Normal for a good guideline.
02:23:400 (1) - This is kind of soon after a spinner for an Easy. I recommend 3-4 beats at this BPM.

[Normal]
00:26:600 (1) - This section feels... exactly like the other section before it even though the song's pacing has completely changed. I recommend that you use single circles instead of the 1/1 sliders to give a better feel of a general slowdown. Then things pick back up at 00:33:000 - of course.
01:05:000 (1) - Same thing going on here.

[Hard]
OD +2
I'm not understanding why you're adding all these 1/4 rhythms to a very strong 1/2 driven song. Feels like you're just trying to add filler.
Same pacing commentary from the Normal.
00:36:200 (1,2) - Snapped wrong
00:49:800 (3) - ^
01:16:200 (1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
01:21:000 (1) - Snapped wrong
01:27:400 (1,2) - ^
01:39:400 (3) - ^
01:56:200 (1,2) - ^
02:07:400 (1,2,3,4) - These would be so much better if you went more with the percussion/synth instead of half of it.
This'll be pretty nice once you fix up all the rhythm problems.

[Insane]
This is a huge jump up in difficulty from the Hard and the rest of the difficulty spread. :/
Overall it's really trying hard to go beyond the difficulty of the song itself with the extra rhythms all over the place. The general distance snap feels really high compared to the SV as well, so sliders feel really slow for most of the map. Try following the music a bit more - it'll produce a much more satisfying product in the end.
Topic Starter
pkk

Garven wrote:

[General]
You have two MP3's in the .osz. Remove one.
Even after removing one mp3, you'll need to make the video a bit smaller. You're almost at 26 MB file size and you should be aiming at 20 MB (the 128 kbs mp3 is about 3 MB). re-downloaded map set and there does not appear to be a second mp3 file so it looks like it sorted itself out
Tick rate 2 fits this song best fixed


[Normal]
00:26:600 (1) - This section feels... exactly like the other section before it even though the song's pacing has completely changed. I recommend that you use single circles instead of the 1/1 sliders to give a better feel of a general slowdown. Then things pick back up at 00:33:000 - of course.
01:05:000 (1) - Same thing going on here. mapped both sections with more circles to match the slower pace

[Hard]
OD +2
I'm not understanding why you're adding all these 1/4 rhythms to a very strong 1/2 driven song. Feels like you're just trying to add filler.
Same pacing commentary from the Normal.
00:36:200 (1,2) - Snapped wrong fixed
00:49:800 (3) - ^ fixed
01:16:200 (1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam k
01:21:000 (1) - Snapped wrong fixed
01:27:400 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:39:400 (3) - ^ fixed
01:56:200 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:07:400 (1,2,3,4) - These would be so much better if you went more with the percussion/synth instead of half of it. fixed rhythm
This'll be pretty nice once you fix up all the rhythm problems.

[Insane]
This is a huge jump up in difficulty from the Hard and the rest of the difficulty spread. :/
Overall it's really trying hard to go beyond the difficulty of the song itself with the extra rhythms all over the place. The general distance snap feels really high compared to the SV as well, so sliders feel really slow for most of the map. Try following the music a bit more - it'll produce a much more satisfying product in the end.

Thanks for modding! :) :)

I cannot seem to find the second mp3 file in the folder, and I'm sure there should only be one since I deleted the old 128 kbps version when I replaced it:

Anyways, do you have any more suggestions on how I should fix my insane? I would really like to keep the difficulty level so that more experienced players would actually play the map.

Thanks~
Kiiwa

pkmnyab wrote:

Anyways, do you have any more suggestions on how I should fix my insane? I would really like to keep the difficulty level so that more experienced players would actually play the map.
Thanks~
There is no real reason why an experienced player wouldn't play this.
If it was simply too easy for them, they would either SS it or add a mod.

A maps difficulty should reflect the song. The map SHOULD NOT try to be something that is overly hard, difficult and unnecessarily more challenging than the song needs to be. Why would you want to keep the difficulty level of the Insane over improving the rhythm of your map and possibly making your Insane match the song more? If you make a map which is easy to some, is that a bad thing?

Honestly, I wouldn't even use AR9 here because of the low bpm its not really needed, but its your choice entirely.

Anyway, best of luck ;)
Topic Starter
pkk

Kiiwa wrote:

pkmnyab wrote:

Anyways, do you have any more suggestions on how I should fix my insane? I would really like to keep the difficulty level so that more experienced players would actually play the map.
Thanks~
There is no real reason why an experienced player wouldn't play this.
If it was simply too easy for them, they would either SS it or add a mod.

A maps difficulty should reflect the song. The map SHOULD NOT try to be something that is overly hard, difficult and unnecessarily more challenging than the song needs to be. Why would you want to keep the difficulty level of the Insane over improving the rhythm of your map and possibly making your Insane match the song more? If you make a map which is easy to some, is that a bad thing?

Honestly, I wouldn't even use AR9 here because of the low bpm its not really needed, but its your choice entirely.

Anyway, best of luck ;)
Alright, thanks for the feedback. I think I'll upload my current insane as an extra diff and put it in the map description (not included in map set) so that people can choose to download it if they want something more challenging to play while being unranked.

That being said, I'll try to make my current insane difficulty match the song better. Thanks again~
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Life is so hard. So hard to get a first ranked map. Good luck pk :p
Kibbleru

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
01:38:600 (3,4) - Miss a couple whistle/claps? fix
01:56:200 - Having a long break, then play a section as long as that break, then break again... particularly poor pacing, probably. Prolong playing pace properly! I'd follow Normal for a good guideline. okay i mapped out the section after second kiai
02:23:400 (1) - This is kind of soon after a spinner for an Easy. I recommend 3-4 beats at this BPM. fix (i may remove this spinner if you don't think this is a good place to end spinner)

[Insane]
This is a huge jump up in difficulty from the Hard and the rest of the difficulty spread. :/
Overall it's really trying hard to go beyond the difficulty of the song itself with the extra rhythms all over the place. The general distance snap feels really high compared to the SV as well, so sliders feel really slow for most of the map. Try following the music a bit more - it'll produce a much more satisfying product in the end. in my opinion, the hard has some pretty complicated jumps and stuff o-o. and the song is pretty intensive with the beats. but idk. im not a bat soo..
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84,200,125800,6,0,P|132:212|152:272,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
148,356,126600,2,0,P|212:340|252:352,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
344,360,127400,2,0,P|436:244|268:252,1,400,4|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140200,12,4,141800,0:0:0:0:
416,304,143400,5,4,1:2:0:0:
456,108,144200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,145000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,200,145400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,288,145800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,244,146600,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,147400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,148200,2,0,P|272:276|196:300,2,100,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
476,148,149800,6,0,P|428:108|400:64,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,20,150600,2,0,P|313:81|289:127,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
292,216,151400,2,0,P|350:194|402:192,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:1:0:0:
240,300,152600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
140,300,153000,5,0,1:1:0:0:
112,204,153400,2,0,P|84:196|56:184,2,50,8|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:1:0:0:
196,152,154200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
288,116,154600,2,0,P|298:54|322:8,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:1:0:0:
88,144,156200,6,0,P|172:120|196:100,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,200,157000,2,0,P|148:224|124:244,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
120,328,157800,2,0,P|76:351|26:358,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,308,159000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
312,280,159400,6,0,B|356:300|356:300|408:284|408:284|460:304|516:276,1,200,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,196,160600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
372,136,161000,2,0,B|392:108|392:108|404:72|428:48,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,164,162200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
204,232,162600,6,0,L|120:168,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,264,163400,2,0,L|167:324,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,364,164200,1,2,1:2:0:0:
324,284,164600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,276,165000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
400,180,165400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
472,108,165800,6,0,P|429:83|379:81,1,100,4|12,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
400,180,166600,2,0,P|320:164|296:140,1,100,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,220,167400,2,0,P|258:297|249:330,2,100,0|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
212,120,168600,1,0,1:2:0:0:
308,148,169000,5,4,1:2:0:0:
Kibbleru
last recheck before rank hopefully

SPOILER
12:34 pkmnyab: HOW
12:34 pkmnyab: WAS YOUR
12:34 pkmnyab: MATH EXAM
12:34 pkmnyab: KEK
12:34 Kibbleru: omg
12:34 Kibbleru: that was brutal
12:35 Kibbleru: i took the entire 3 hrs lol
12:35 pkmnyab: what was the hardest part
12:35 Kibbleru: and i still couldn't figure out the
12:35 Kibbleru: trig identities ;w;
12:35 Kibbleru: yo
12:35 Kibbleru: see if u can do this
12:37 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/9AHiX/854fc47490.png
12:37 Kibbleru: k
12:37 pkmnyab: LOOOOOOOOOOOL
12:37 pkmnyab: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
12:37 pkmnyab: LAUGH MY FUCKING ASS OFF
12:37 pkmnyab: wait
12:37 pkmnyab: k
12:37 Kibbleru: lol
12:37 Kibbleru: its harder than it looks
12:37 pkmnyab: lol probably
12:40 Kibbleru:
12:41 pkmnyab: got it
12:41 pkmnyab: lemme take a picture
12:41 Kibbleru: wow
12:41 Kibbleru: teach me pls
12:41 pkmnyab: k
12:42 pkmnyab: take left side
12:42 pkmnyab: because left is cool
12:42 Kibbleru: lol
12:42 Kibbleru: ik
12:43 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/fe12858c320bffeca8955650153c238d
12:44 pkmnyab: lmao that was fun
12:44 pkmnyab: i finished remapping my insane hooray
12:45 Kibbleru: yay
12:47 Kibbleru: oh my god
12:47 Kibbleru: why didnt
12:47 Kibbleru: i think of that
12:47 Kibbleru: askfjhaslkfjsakflhdsfkhdliuewhfjdkshfliuewhfjdkhkgfsa
12:47 Kibbleru: sdfjhksaldhfaldskfhsad
12:47 pkmnyab: get rekt son
12:47 Kibbleru: fuck trig identities :(
12:48 Kibbleru: btw
12:48 Kibbleru: ur writing
12:48 Kibbleru: looks like a 7 year old's
12:48 pkmnyab: it's bad
12:48 pkmnyab: but usually it's better
12:48 pkmnyab: its cuz i was in 300% thinking mode bro
12:49 Kibbleru: ksalfjsalkfjsaf
12:49 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/a968dfa5624aa9f9d0939c997cace744
12:49 pkmnyab: here you go
12:49 pkmnyab: teacher writes notes too fast on board
12:49 pkmnyab: i cry
12:49 Kibbleru: lol
12:49 Kibbleru: i cry cuz i didnt get that t-t
12:49 Kibbleru: asnwer
12:49 Kibbleru: t-t
12:49 pkmnyab: qq
12:54 Kibbleru: omg i beat my own map
12:54 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/440395 LiSA - Rising Hope [Hope]]
12:54 Kibbleru: finaly
12:54 pkmnyab: so you beat your map
12:54 pkmnyab: but you couldn't beat your math exam?
12:54 *pkmnyab runs
12:54 pkmnyab: congrats \o/
12:54 Kibbleru: LOL
12:54 Kibbleru: ;w;
12:55 Kibbleru: hey its fine i think i got every other question
12:55 Kibbleru: whats this test diff
12:56 pkmnyab: oh that was so i could skip the whole song
12:56 pkmnyab: and go tot he last part
12:56 pkmnyab: so i could testplay with DT
12:56 pkmnyab: gonna remove it now
12:57 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
12:57 pkmnyab: 20 years later map still doesn't submit
12:58 Kibbleru: 00:17:400 (2,3) - blanket better lel
12:58 pkmnyab: k after i submit
12:58 pkmnyab: fk this thing broken
12:58 pkmnyab: i'll submit later LOL
12:58 pkmnyab: fixed
12:59 Kibbleru: 00:17:800 (3) - hm this jump feels better to play if u ctrl g idk test it uself
12:59 Kibbleru: urself*
13:00 pkmnyab: k
13:00 Kibbleru: (optional for http://puu.sh/9AJeV/89a15d7dc1.jpg&#41; perhaps try something like that if it looks better to u 00:26:600 (1,3) -
13:01 Kibbleru: 00:30:400 (2,3) - i think a bit of a jump may fit better
13:01 Kibbleru: to emphasize that clap sound i think
13:01 Kibbleru: on (3)
13:01 pkmnyab: brb 5 mins lunch
13:01 pkmnyab: nvm i lied im back
13:01 Kibbleru: lol
13:02 pkmnyab: k made jump
13:02 Kibbleru: 00:42:200 (7,1) - blanket better :D
13:02 pkmnyab: :D OK
13:03 Kibbleru: 00:35:000 (3,4) - ridiculously big compared to the previous jumps
13:03 pkmnyab: k
13:04 Kibbleru: maybe
13:04 Kibbleru: you can
13:04 pkmnyab: i fixed
13:04 Kibbleru: 00:34:800 (2,4) - ctrl g these 2 or something okay w/e u did
13:05 Kibbleru: 00:44:800 (3,4,5) - this is a bit awkward since (5) should be the emphasized note not (4)
13:05 Kibbleru: as in like jump distance wise
13:07 pkmnyab: lol
13:07 pkmnyab: ya
13:09 Kibbleru: 01:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - try this, i think it flows better http://puu.sh/9AKdG/fef9ba52dd.jpg
13:09 pkmnyab: fixed
13:09 Kibbleru: i only moved (1)
13:09 pkmnyab: ya it does, thanks
13:11 Kibbleru: 02:05:800 (1,2) - jump is absudly big
13:11 Kibbleru: for such a quiet note at (2)
13:11 Kibbleru: actually i cant even hear (2)
13:11 Kibbleru: well
13:11 Kibbleru: nv
13:11 Kibbleru: m
13:11 Kibbleru: it's just a change in chord or something
13:11 Kibbleru: you can make the jump a bit smaller or change (1) to a slider
13:11 pkmnyab: ya made it smaller
13:12 Kibbleru: actually
13:12 Kibbleru: this is a triplet i believe
13:12 Kibbleru: the sound thing 02:06:100 - is at here
13:14 Kibbleru: i believe the rhythm should be something like this
13:14 Kibbleru: but idk
13:14 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/9AKKY/6d46dbd4d2.jpg
13:14 pkmnyab: hm
13:15 Kibbleru: hang on
13:15 Kibbleru: i gotta fix up my gd for no dap so zero can bubble
13:15 Kibbleru: lol
13:15 pkmnyab: lol k
13:25 Kibbleru: okay
13:25 Kibbleru: back to ur mod
13:26 Kibbleru: u there still?
13:26 pkmnyab: ye
13:26 Kibbleru: 02:10:000 (1,2,3) - reduce this spacing to like .7 or something cuz idk
13:26 Kibbleru: if u wana really reduce the diff, make your strems with less ds
13:27 pkmnyab: k
13:27 Kibbleru: 02:29:100 - there's a pretty prominant beat you're missing here o-o
13:27 Kibbleru: just do what u did 00:13:400 (4,5) -
13:28 Kibbleru: 02:28:900 - here too
13:28 Kibbleru: o_O
13:28 pkmnyab: k
13:28 pkmnyab: fk
13:28 Kibbleru: don't overmap != undermap :o
13:28 pkmnyab: i will just make a 4 note stream
13:28 pkmnyab: fk kick sliders
13:29 Kibbleru: yeah that works
13:29 Kibbleru: also
13:29 Kibbleru: 02:35:000 (3,4,5,6) -
13:29 Kibbleru: ik this with experience
13:29 Kibbleru: these are fking stupid hard to play
13:29 pkmnyab: get
13:29 pkmnyab: fking
13:29 pkmnyab: rekt
13:30 pkmnyab: k i will fix so kiddies don't rage
13:30 Kibbleru: 02:39:400 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9AMjs/9255c04f0d.jpg do something like this instead, movement feels more comfortable
13:31 pkmnyab: k
13:31 Kibbleru: 03:05:000 (1,2,3) - space this out kinda like what you have 03:03:400 (1,2,3) -
13:31 Kibbleru: easier to read
13:33 Kibbleru: k ill test this out now
13:33 Kibbleru: dw
13:33 Kibbleru: im a certified noob
13:33 Kibbleru: to testplay easy maps
13:33 Kibbleru: 01:13:200 (2,3) - feels weird without a jump here owo
13:34 pkmnyab: k
13:35 Kibbleru: 02:17:200 (1,2,3) - this kinda looked ugly in play mode lol
13:36 Kibbleru: watch garven say
13:36 pkmnyab: k reduced DS
13:36 pkmnyab: and made i straight
13:36 Kibbleru: "now it's undermapped"
13:36 pkmnyab: LOL
13:37 Kibbleru: 02:44:200 (1,2,3) - more distance problems
13:37 pkmnyab: fixed
13:38 Kibbleru: is bss still down?
13:38 pkmnyab: probably idk
13:39 Kibbleru: try
13:39 pkmnyab: k
13:42 Kibbleru: 00:51:000 - consider adding clap here?
13:42 Kibbleru: 00:51:800 - and here
13:42 Kibbleru: cuz there's that
13:42 Kibbleru: like
13:42 Kibbleru: tss sound or w/e
13:43 pkmnyab: k
13:44 Kibbleru: 01:17:400 (7) - i don't think you should miss the clap here
13:44 pkmnyab: ya i was remapping
13:44 pkmnyab: prob forgot to add some hitsounds
13:44 pkmnyab: so yaaaa i'll add them in later lol
13:45 pkmnyab: because if i end up having to change rhythm/delete notes then there would have been no point in me adding the hitsound
13:45 pkmnyab: because i'd have to add again and im lazy
13:46 Kibbleru: k get no dap to mod now
13:46 pkmnyab: kty
13:46 Kibbleru: 02:23:400 (1) - this meeds to be a bit louder i think
13:46 Kibbleru: imo
13:47 Kibbleru: ill post this log so garven can see that u got modszz
Topic Starter
pkk
Did some IRC with No Dap regarding the revised insane difficulty

SPOILER
15:31 No Dap: unreadable anti jump
15:31 No Dap: unrankable
15:31 pkmnyab: gg
15:31 pkmnyab: wanna spec me DT it
15:31 pkmnyab: :-)
15:31 No Dap: lol ok
15:32 pkmnyab: rekt
15:32 No Dap: unrankable
15:34 pkmnyab: gg
15:34 No Dap: less combo than me pls
15:34 pkmnyab: pls
15:34 No Dap: play ez ht
15:34 No Dap: and get rekt
15:34 pkmnyab: ok
15:35 No Dap: wow
15:35 pkmnyab: this is too hard
15:36 No Dap: hax
15:36 pkmnyab: ???
15:36 No Dap: i quit
15:36 No Dap: lets mod
15:36 pkmnyab: LOL k
15:36 No Dap: you too pro
15:36 pkmnyab: i am cookiezi's illegitimate son
15:36 pkmnyab: ssh
15:36 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
15:39 No Dap: 01:43:761 - spacing
15:39 No Dap: 01:42:900 -
15:39 No Dap: 01:43:700 -
15:39 No Dap: almost identical
15:39 pkmnyab: k
15:42 No Dap: 02:09:300 -
15:42 No Dap: this is gonna look weird in game play
15:42 No Dap: because of stack
15:42 No Dap: you want this?
15:42 pkmnyab: hm
15:42 No Dap: 02:13:200 - why NC
15:42 No Dap: get rekt
15:42 pkmnyab: LOL oops
15:42 pkmnyab: k fixed
15:43 pkmnyab: also removed nc at 02:16:400 -
15:43 pkmnyab: yolo
15:43 No Dap: 02:16:400 -
15:43 No Dap: 02:19:800 -
15:43 No Dap: wht combo
15:43 No Dap: whyyyy
15:43 No Dap: inconsistent
15:43 pkmnyab: fixed combo
15:44 No Dap: i know this is insane
15:44 No Dap: 02:29:400 - but this part is a bit really
15:44 No Dap: tricky to read
15:45 pkmnyab: hmmm
15:45 No Dap: just 02:29:200 - make this stream too?
15:45 pkmnyab: yea
15:45 No Dap: cuz they look the same
15:45 No Dap: regardless the nc
15:45 No Dap: hard to read
15:46 No Dap: 02:33:600 - stack on02:34:800 - ?
15:46 No Dap: itd flow better imo
15:47 pkmnyab: jump between 3 and 4 is smallt hough
15:48 pkmnyab: i'll just move 3
15:48 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/f302861e4708338e91898bdb696a1227
15:48 No Dap: k
15:48 No Dap: i don't wanna click that
15:48 No Dap: cuz i crash
15:48 pkmnyab: lolol
15:48 No Dap: 03:06:400 -
15:48 No Dap: the slider pls
15:49 No Dap: move the tail
15:49 No Dap: to like
15:49 No Dap: 224 300
15:49 No Dap: or something
15:51 pkmnyab: ok
15:51 No Dap: rest looks ok to play
15:51 No Dap: it's your choice wheather you wanna post this or not
15:52 pkmnyab: post the log
15:52 No Dap: i can't
15:52 No Dap: i crash
15:52 No Dap: and i cri
15:52 pkmnyab: LOL
15:52 pkmnyab: k

File size reduced as well, map should be ready for a re-check now. (^・ω・^ )
Garven
The remap looks much better!

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) -
Kibbleru
This is troll post :3

Garven wrote:

The remap looks much better!

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky fixed
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) - fixed

IT'S FINALLY HAPPENING

inb4 another bat comes along to tell you to remap hard
Topic Starter
pkk

Garven wrote:

The remap looks much better! @w@ thanks

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky ok, I adjusted spacing so it was easier to read
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) - alright, flow should be better now and the jump should be easier to read
Everything fixed, thanks for modding! :D

EDIT: Can a BAT change the title text colour in-game to 253,179,179? (pink) thanksss
Garven
Topic Starter
pkk

Garven wrote:

thank you for re-bubble!!! : DDD
Kibbleru

Garven wrote:

let me buy some of that moe pls
Atrue
Hello~
From random bubble check

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Quite a successful remap, a lot better than what I last time saw.
Please add Video in Kibbleru's Easy.
Just pointing out something worth saying.
[Kibbleru's Easy]
General
Good diff~
[Normal]
General
Good diff, especially on beats.
[Hard]
General
Just some minor stuff.
Placement
00:26:200 (4) - Maybe just make the note not stacked is better for reading. Example:01:07:400 (3,4) - Also here the stack is not recommended, because the rhythm here is really not as other parts of the music and stacking may lead to puzzling in first try. Example:01:19:400 (1,2,3) - Ah.. Also stacking here is not recommended. This time is because the music is quite flowing and the stop on the note would be a little strange imo. Example:
[Insane]
General
Overall fine~ but some distance is still need to be more controlled.
Placement
01:27:200 (7) - Here the note needs a jump to show the jumps in next notes, and music is becoming more and more strong in that part. Example:01:51:600 (2,3,4) - See the distance here, 1/2 and 1/4 are in the same distance, which is puzzling. I suggest making 1/4 jumps on 3,4. Example:
Call me back when you are ready~
Topic Starter
pkk

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From random bubble check

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Quite a successful remap, a lot better than what I last time saw. thank you ;w;
Please add Video in Kibbleru's Easy. lol for some reason video always disappears in kibbleru's easy, anyways I added back now
Just pointing out something worth saying.
[Kibbleru's Easy]
General
Good diff~
[Normal]
General
Good diff, especially on beats.
[Hard]
General
Just some minor stuff.
Placement
00:26:200 (4) - Maybe just make the note not stacked is better for reading. Example: unstacked
01:07:400 (3,4) - Also here the stack is not recommended, because the rhythm here is really not as other parts of the music and stacking may lead to puzzling in first try. Example: unstacked
01:19:400 (1,2,3) - Ah.. Also stacking here is not recommended. This time is because the music is quite flowing and the stop on the note would be a little strange imo. Example: unstacked

[Insane]
General
Overall fine~ but some distance is still need to be more controlled. made some spacing between a few jumps consistent
Placement
01:27:200 (7) - Here the note needs a jump to show the jumps in next notes, and music is becoming more and more strong in that part. Example:fixed
01:51:600 (2,3,4) - See the distance here, 1/2 and 1/4 are in the same distance, which is puzzling. I suggest making 1/4 jumps on 3,4. Example:ok, fixed

Call me back when you are ready~
All fixed, map is ready to go. Thanks for modding! :)
Kibbleru
woot it's finally happening!
Atrue
The offset of the movie is different with other diffs in Easy... Please fix it. (others are -50)
Teru21
before it get ranked. retake alook on it >< don't kd

pls check this one on hard and insane. 00:24:400 - ;; add time line on 00:24:400 - volume turn down to 30% , add timeline on 00:24:500 - volume turn down to 50% , and add timeline on 00:24:600 - make it 70% back. probably the last mod. >< the sound seems too loud and does bothers me alot

and on easy diff, 00:27:800 (2) - there shouldn't be any clap here, the clap suppose to be here 00:27:400 -
GOGO RANK *A*)///////////
Topic Starter
pkk

Atrue wrote:

The offset of the movie is different with other diffs in Easy... Please fix it. (others are -50)
ah, fixed

Teru21 wrote:

before it get ranked. retake alook on it >< don't kd

pls check this one on hard and insane. 00:24:400 - ;; add time line on 00:24:400 - volume turn down to 30% , add timeline on 00:24:500 - volume turn down to 50% , and add timeline on 00:24:600 - make it 70% back. probably the last mod. >< the sound seems too loud and does bothers me alot

and on easy diff, 00:27:800 (2) - there shouldn't be any clap here, the clap suppose to be here 00:27:400 -
GOGO RANK *A*)///////////
ok, added timing points to reduce the volume. Also fixed the clap on easy, thanks for modding again!! (╯°Д°)╯︵/(.□ . \)
Atrue
Rechecked and.. Ok~ Time to get it qualified.
:)
Congratulations on the first ranked map!
Ranked~
Topic Starter
pkk
thank you so much : DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

big thanks to everyone who helped make it possible <333333333333333

...(^・ω・^ )
Myxo
Congratz ^-^
koreapenguin
first Rank!! Congratz!!
Mao
omg, gratz pkmnyab <3
Lach
All of these samples using the bamboo sound are produced with the same 10ms delayed sample. I suggest everyone disable map samples.

Edit: re-made samples with correct delay http://puu.sh/9I2WF/a0f8abfeeb.rar
rezoons
It's ranked, yay! Congratz ^^
Frostings
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
Topic Starter
pkk
Sorry, but could a BAT unrank this quickly?

As Lach pointed out, a few of the hitsounds where two noises were supposed to play at the same time are in fact several ms off of each other. Lach sent me the fixed .wav files and I've replaced them, I just need someone to unrank this so I can update.

Thanks~

EDIT: RIP scores
UnderminE
i like this song, unf unf aniki unf gratz

don't worry about scores, quality comes first
RandF
Gratz !
Kibbleru
Yay my second ranked GD- i mean gratz on your first ranked map



whatever ill post this now

sorry i cant photoshop like you senpai

Topic Starter
pkk

Kibbleru wrote:

Yay my second ranked GD- i mean gratz on your first ranked map



whatever ill post this now

sorry i cant photoshop like you senpai

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL k
KSHR

pkmnyab wrote:

Sorry, but could a BAT unrank this quickly?

As Lach pointed out, a few of the hitsounds where two noises were supposed to play at the same time are in fact several ms off of each other. Lach sent me the fixed .wav files and I've replaced them, I just need someone to unrank this so I can update.

Thanks~

EDIT: RIP scores
Unqualified as per the creator's request. Let me know when you are done.
Kibbleru
early 2nd gratz

Q_Q argg i gotta w8 4 more days for mine nvm i dont

pkmnyab wrote:

thank you so much : DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

big thanks to everyone who helped make it possible <333333333333333

...(^・ω・^ )
fggt put me, no dap, and frostings in the credits for modding this about 40 times each.
KSHR
  • Thing which the creator fixed:
  1. Change the stack leniency to 5 in order to let 02:17:200 (1,2,3,5) - stack correctly.
  2. Replace hitsounds; nromal-hitnormal1~3 and soft-hitnormal1~2.

This map should be good to go! Reranked!
koreapenguin
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Topic Starter
pkk

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
RIP koreapenguin's 230 pp
DeletedUser_3044645

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
크크크크크크크크킄

PK!!!! WHY AM I NOT IN THE POSTER
Topic Starter
pkk

No Dap wrote:

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
크크크크크크크크킄

PK!!!! WHY AM I NOT IN THE POSTER
I DIDN'T MAKE IT, KIBB DID! GO BEAT HIM UP INSTEAD
Teru21
graaatz? X'3
Nya Nya Neko
Finally....
congrats
- Yuuto -
Congrats!! :3
69653863
rip my score on kibbleru's easy
Koiyuki
pk gratz for first rank~
恭喜~
Xiaolin
Dat picture LOL

Gratz

RAINBOW cuz why not
Fycho

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Frostings wrote:

yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
gratz for your 1st ranked map~!
Zero__wind
Rip Unranked again due to bad timing, no one found that it's currently too early?
1014 (+14) shuold be a much more appropriate offset for this mapset

also, 00:32:412 (6) - in Insane diff should be snapped to 1/6 instead of 1/4
00:32:400 (7) - in Hard ^

00:36:900 (5) - in Insane shuold be snapped to 1/6 as well, there're four beats on 1/6 snap divisor from 00:36:800 - to 00:37:000 - if you listen closely
but for this case, the simplest sollution is to remove 00:36:900 (5) - and move 00:36:900 (5) - further to the upright, example below ↓

Besides, you could do some other minor changes for hitsounds or anything to improve the mapset, as long as you tell me what you've changed
maybe consider shorten 00:39:000 (1) - and 02:29:400 (1) - to 1/2 sliders, like what you have in Hard diff, that would sound and play much better imo

Call me back when you think it's ready
Sorry for the inconvenience
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