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Frostings

Joined May 2013

Frostings 2014-03-27T20:31:03+00:00

Hi there. noob mod

[Easy]

00:49:000 (1) - bad overlap with 00:47:400 (3). I suggest http://puu.sh/7LLGR.jpg
01:28:200 (3,4) - looks really weird

they should be parallel if anything. I suggest you make 01:27:000 (5,1,2,3) a square so that the 3 doesn't go off the screen. maybe like http://puu.sh/7LMeq.jpg ? or stack 4 with the 5 circle

[Normal]
00:23:000 (6,1) - blanket can be better
00:27:401 (2,4) - stack properly ?

[Hard]
00:30:200 (2,3) - make these the same slider? rotated 180 degrees
~~01:05:000 - hitsounds?~~ nevermind
02:36:600 (2,3) - (subtle) 2 should be made smoother to be parallel with 3
02:41:800 (7) - smoother wave ? http://puu.sh/7LOfP.jpg
02:45:800 (1) - make blanket with 02:45:600 (8) ?

[Insane]
00:13:400 (4,1) - blanket
00:18:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - star pattern can be made cleaner: http://puu.sh/7LQ6a.jpg

SPOILER

264,308,18200,5,0,0:0:0:0:
177,106,18400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,318,18600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,174,18800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,194,19000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,308,19200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,106,19400,2,0,L|261:106,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:32:600 (8,2) - stack? not sure if this was intentional also 02:33:200 (2,5) should blanket

good luck ~

EDIT: oh, didn't realize there was GD and Kibbleru didn't apply the previous mod yet. sorry sorry ;w; there is one overlapped mod at 00:47:400 which was probably already fixed

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-03-28T00:52:21+00:00

FlawlessTea wrote:
Hi there. noob mod

[Normal]
00:23:000 (6,1) - blanket can be better looks fine to me, maybe I changed it earlier, not sure
00:27:401 (2,4) - stack properly ? fixed

[Hard]
00:30:200 (2,3) - make these the same slider? rotated 180 degrees fixed
~~01:05:000 - hitsounds?~~ nevermind
02:36:600 (2,3) - (subtle) 2 should be made smoother to be parallel with 3 fixed
02:41:800 (7) - smoother wave ? http://puu.sh/7LOfP.jpg fixed
02:45:800 (1) - make blanket with 02:45:600 (8) ? fixed

[Insane]
00:13:400 (4,1) - blanket fixed
00:18:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - star pattern can be made cleaner: http://puu.sh/7LQ6a.jpg fixed
SPOILER
264,308,18200,5,0,0:0:0:0:
177,106,18400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,318,18600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,174,18800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,194,19000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,308,19200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,106,19400,2,0,L|261:106,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:32:600 (8,2) - stack? not sure if this was intentional also 02:33:200 (2,5) should blanket fixed

good luck ~

EDIT: oh, didn't realize there was GD and Kibbleru didn't apply the previous mod yet. sorry sorry ;w; there is one overlapped mod at 00:47:400 which was probably already fixed

Thanks for modding!

Teru21

746 posts

Joined September 2011

Teru21 2014-03-30T04:13:07+00:00

Don't kudosu this ;; I already get from the previous one

so yay ;; I come again for recheck .w.)/ do I sound like a bat? =A= ;; I'm not ;; I'll just take a look at the hitsound again anw I miss some stuff on last irc mod ;;

[General]
02:29:800 - this part should be kiai ._.
the white combo color ;A; I kind of never like to use real white combo color which is 255/255/255 ;; try.. this one .w.)b https://www.dropbox.com/s/cmg6pqhmvxnv0 ... .11.16.png almost white. but its actually cream >w<

[Insane]
woops I lied ;; I come here to mod
00:24:400 - add whistle to the first 2 notes (slider head with a reverse) :3 give a sweet sound
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the stream. it'll be more viable if you break the stream. 00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,1) - try to reangle this to 30degree and place it with the same distance like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465164 I move the (2) abit so you can see there is polygonal pattern with (2,3,4)
00:28:200 (1) - stack to 00:27:200 (2) - ? tidier
00:28:600 (2) - copy paste from 00:28:200 (1) - and ctrl+h and ctrl+j . to make it tidier and accurate reflection.
00:29:000 (3,4) - ^
00:29:400 (4,1) - this suppose to reflect perfectly.
00:33:000 - add finish here
00:34:200 - you miss the whistle here
00:36:500 (2,3) - maybe unstack this? ;; play better I guess
-reffrain-
some Normal sampleset with soft addition are missing ;; check again .w. ;; also the whistle pattern was (W W WWW) means first-third white tick , first-second-third white tick.

SPOILER

01:05:800 (3) - idk what you are thinking about. but this doesnt look right. delete the 4th point of the slider point (simply click your slider and right click at a point to delete them) ;; shall look better now http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465196 (I move the 5th slider point <after delete the 4th point> / 6th slider point <before delete the 4th point> abit so it'll look more symmetric~)
01:07:400 (4) - you may want to try this out http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465206 :3 wiggwie
01:09:000 (4) - symmetric more (third slider point move to left 2 ~ 3 grid) :3 sorry being too nazi
01:11:000 - forgot to tell you lower the volume a bit ;; will give people kind of heart attack wwwww 50% is fine :3
01:11:400 - add finish ;----;
01:19:400 (1) - ctrl+G ;; flow better. http://i.cubeupload.com/loCyuF.jpg
01:20:600 (4) - ctrl+> and x412 y156..? and ctrl+G this 01:21:000 (1) - ;; move and symmetric a bit ;; and I think it'll flow better
01:23:800 (5) - I somehow find this missplace.. doesn't look too good... if you could find some way to make it look greater...
01:43:400 - add finish. normal or soft. both great
01:46:600 (1,2) - try to mirror this. on irc ;; I asked you to reflect it. but It'll still be even better if you mirror it. something like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465226
01:49:800 (1) - stack properly with 01:49:000 (5) -
01:56:200 - add finish. normal or soft. both great. also I can't really find the clap sound here. place it on the second and fourth white tick :OO ;;;
02:01:800 (1) - try to. make this linear or curved in the other way. because of the beeping sound
02:02:600 (1) - ^ and make a lil angle at the slider's tail.
02:09:000 - add finish. normal or soft. both great
02:15:000 (7) - resnap. end it at the 1/4 tick

02:21:400 (5) - maybe -30degree and re-place it again ._. ;; because this 02:20:600 (3,4) - -30degree ;; sorry again for the naziness
02:29:800 - still add clap at the fourth tick. to make it different from the second part of the last refrain ( 02:36:200 - ) ;; don't put whistle on the first part of the last refrain. :3 there ;; difference XD

[Hard]
AR+1 ;; too much note on the screen if its AR7 ;w;
00:12:200 (1) - it'll be better if you just use 3 circles :3 ;; spinner doesn't give any sound effect that fit the drum ;___; XD
00:17:000 (1) - stack to 00:16:000 (6) - to make it tidier
00:26:200 (1) - NC? for anti jump
00:30:600 - missing clap hitsound
00:32:600 (5,1) - try to symmetric this ;A;
00:35:400 (3,1) - stack pls.
00:36:200 (1,3,4) - try to create polygonal pattern
00:37:900 (1) - why no one complain about this. it suppose to be ended 00:38:600 - ;; your hitsound follows the drum after all. add clap too
00:39:400 - add finish
00:42:600 (1,3) - doesn't look great to me. try to symmetric it properly
00:49:800 (3,4) - the sudden 1/4 ;; I miss this part ;-----; how about 1/1 slider with 1/2 circle? ;; follows the vocal
00:51:800 - clap hitsound?
01:11:000 - same as insane.
01:11:400 - finish too. err ;; change the other too that I mention on insane.
01:22:200 (4,5,1,2) - I can't really understand this pattern.
01:26:400 (6,8,9) - polygonal pls.
01:30:200 (2,3) - addition drum and add whistle
01:46:600 (1,2) - this looks gorgeous actually. try to make the spacing closer. and people can see the pattern and feel the slur(in music world means umm ;; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slur_(music) *runs*)
01:49:800 (1,2) - curve this a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit
01:55:400 - triplet. 01:55:800 - triplet. 01:56:200 - circle? :OO
02:09:000 - the epicness part ;; I kind of feel it'll be great if you can make antijumps in this part. something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465300 ;; just suggestion tho
02:29:800 (1,2,3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465309 ;A;
02:34:200 (5,1,2) - polygonal ;A; fix spacing after that

[Normal]
00:12:200 (1) - umm ;; same as the other diff ;; avoid using spinner here. just try a circle with 1/1 slider ;;
00:23:400 (1) - nazi ;; 1 grid down ;; symmetric ;w;
00:32:600 (5) - stack on top of (1) ? to make the viable better
00:37:800 (1) - same as hard. if you think its too short. then use slider instead of spinner.
00:49:800 (2) - put this on the top part ;; or upper part ;; just don't stack it with 00:48:200 (4) -
01:07:400 (5,6) - change this into 3/4 slider. (6)'s rhythm is out of place. it won't be hard if you turn this into 3/4 slider. because you click the slider head instead of the tail right. :3
01:19:400 (3,4,5,1) - it'll look better if you do the (5,1)'s spacing same as (3,4)
01:38:600 (3,4,5) - polygon.....
01:41:000 (3,5) - symmetric..........
01:48:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - ;; do (3,4)'s spacing same as (1,2)'s. just flip here and there. (3,4,5) polygon or make it square.
02:15:000 (3) - tilt it a bit. :3 perfect vertical doesn't really looks great at all. there;; is what I usually called art. XD
02:28:200 (1) - -1/2 beat. :O follow the bgm.
02:34:600 (3,4,5,6,1) - y u no star or pentagon
~uhh there are stuff i don't wanna mention ;; or you would think that I ask you to remap ;____;

[Easy]
something is wrong in this map. around like ;; AR should be faster because the slidervelocity is kinda fast for an easy. I use to have 1.00x for easy or lower. ;; maybe AR+1/2 and HP+1
00:10:600 (1) - hmm.. end it here 00:12:200 - and maybe add circle here 00:13:400 - ;; like what I mention in the other difficulties ;w;
00:19:800 (4) - stack properly ;A; under 00:18:200 (2) -
00:25:000 (4,5,1) - symmetric this ;A;
00:33:000 (1,2) - (2) should be reflect and mirror by (1). ctrl+J and ctrl+G
00:37:800 - spinner :I ;; or maybe 2/1 long slider
00:42:600 (1,2) - this kinda looked awkward. move (2) x380 y212
00:51:000 - 00:51:800 - clap :I
01:17:800 (1,2,3) - make this linear? (3) reduce some grid vertically
01:30:200 - sampleset auto and addition drum add whislte
02:07:400 (4) - -150 degree? :OO flow better
uhh ;; too much break? @A@;; I kinda think it'll be great if you map this part 02:09:400 - ;; because this part is kind of climax and the awesome part on this map. tho its still your decision to map this part or not
02:20:200 (1) - spinner should start 02:21:800 - and end 02:23:000 - or 02:23:400 - ; because the only part where the beeping sound stretch out is 02:21:800 -
02:29:800 (1,2) - same as above
02:31:400 (3,4,5,6) - umm.... doesn't make any sense. try to make the pattern more viable.. like;; proper diamond pattern

02:34:600 (4,5,6) - make this linear pattern. like what you did to 02:32:600 (6,1,2) -
02:35:800 - add something here? you kinda break the flow ;-;

Thats it .w.)/

GoodLuck~ .w.)/ take my star ;; I can see the potential already ww X')

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-03-30T14:23:28+00:00

Teru21 wrote:
Don't kudosu this ;; I already get from the previous one

so yay ;; I come again for recheck .w.)/ do I sound like a bat? =A= ;; I'm not ;; I'll just take a look at the hitsound again anw I miss some stuff on last irc mod ;; I thought you were a BAT and you came to save me \o/

[General]
02:29:800 - this part should be kiai ._. hmm ok
the white combo color ;A; I kind of never like to use real white combo color which is 255/255/255 ;; try.. this one .w.)b https://www.dropbox.com/s/cmg6pqhmvxnv0 ... .11.16.png almost white. but its actually cream >w< well this looks better than white

[Insane]
woops I lied ;; I come here to mod you liar :'(
00:24:400 - add whistle to the first 2 notes (slider head with a reverse) :3 give a sweet sound done
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the stream. it'll be more viable if you break the stream. 00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,1) - try to reangle this to 30degree and place it with the same distance like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465164 I move the (2) abit so you can see there is polygonal pattern with (2,3,4) done
00:28:200 (1) - stack to 00:27:200 (2) - ? tidierdone
00:28:600 (2) - copy paste from 00:28:200 (1) - and ctrl+h and ctrl+j . to make it tidier and accurate reflection. done
00:29:000 (3,4) - ^ done
00:29:400 (4,1) - this suppose to reflect perfectly. done
00:33:000 - add finish here done
00:34:200 - you miss the whistle here added
00:36:500 (2,3) - maybe unstack this? ;; play better I guess
-reffrain-
some Normal sampleset with soft addition are missing ;; check again .w. ;; also the whistle pattern was (W W WWW) means first-third white tick , first-second-third white tick.
SPOILER

01:05:800 (3) - idk what you are thinking about. but this doesnt look right. delete the 4th point of the slider point (simply click your slider and right click at a point to delete them) ;; shall look better now http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465196 (I move the 5th slider point <after delete the 4th point> / 6th slider point <before delete the 4th point> abit so it'll look more symmetric~) done
01:07:400 (4) - you may want to try this out http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465206 :3 wiggwie wigglewiggle
01:09:000 (4) - symmetric more (third slider point move to left 2 ~ 3 grid) :3 sorry being too nazi done
01:11:000 - forgot to tell you lower the volume a bit ;; will give people kind of heart attack wwwww 50% is fine :3 LOL okok
01:11:400 - add finish ;----; done
01:19:400 (1) - ctrl+G ;; flow better. http://i.cubeupload.com/loCyuF.jpg done
01:20:600 (4) - ctrl+> and x412 y156..? and ctrl+G this 01:21:000 (1) - ;; move and symmetric a bit ;; and I think it'll flow better fixed in own way
01:23:800 (5) - I somehow find this missplace.. doesn't look too good... if you could find some way to make it look greater... moved it up more
01:43:400 - add finish. normal or soft. both great done
01:46:600 (1,2) - try to mirror this. on irc ;; I asked you to reflect it. but It'll still be even better if you mirror it. something like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465226 done
01:49:800 (1) - stack properly with 01:49:000 (5) - done
01:56:200 - add finish. normal or soft. both great. also I can't really find the clap sound here. place it on the second and fourth white tick :OO ;;; done
02:01:800 (1) - try to. make this linear or curved in the other way. because of the beeping sound made it straight
02:02:600 (1) - ^ and make a lil angle at the slider's tail. done
02:09:000 - add finish. normal or soft. both great done
02:15:000 (7) - resnap. end it at the 1/4 tick done, but I think you told me to end it on a 1/6 tick or something in IRC i forgot xD
02:21:400 (5) - maybe -30degree and re-place it again ._. ;; because this 02:20:600 (3,4) - -30degree ;; sorry again for the naziness done
02:29:800 - still add clap at the fourth tick. to make it different from the second part of the last refrain ( 02:36:200 - ) ;; don't put whistle on the first part of the last refrain. :3 there ;; difference XD done \o/

[Hard]
AR+1 ;; too much note on the screen if its AR7 ;w; done, but maybe it will be too hard for hard difficulty
00:12:200 (1) - it'll be better if you just use 3 circles :3 ;; spinner doesn't give any sound effect that fit the drum ;___; XD done
00:17:000 (1) - stack to 00:16:000 (6) - to make it tidier done
00:26:200 (1) - NC? for anti jump well there is already another NC right after if I put a NC here, it might look weird :S
00:30:600 - missing clap hitsound done
00:32:600 (5,1) - try to symmetric this ;A; ok ;w;
00:35:400 (3,1) - stack pls. done
00:36:200 (1,3,4) - try to create polygonal pattern well...00:36:600 (2,4) - kind of blanket each other with the slider bodies I guess, and I already stacked the thing before so I think it should be fine .w.''
00:37:900 (1) - why no one complain about this. it suppose to be ended 00:38:600 - ;; your hitsound follows the drum after all. add clap too haha I think nobody complained because otherwise the spinner would be a little short, but I guess that's fine as long as it matches music (the spinner isn't that short anyways)
00:39:400 - add finish done
00:42:600 (1,3) - doesn't look great to me. try to symmetric it properly done
00:49:800 (3,4) - the sudden 1/4 ;; I miss this part ;-----; how about 1/1 slider with 1/2 circle? ;; follows the vocal I think this is fine
00:51:800 - clap hitsound? done
01:11:000 - same as insane. done
01:11:400 - finish too. err ;; change the other too that I mention on insane. done
01:22:200 (4,5,1,2) - I can't really understand this pattern. fixed it a bit (stacked (4,5) and placed (1) in line with (2)
01:26:400 (6,8,9) - polygonal pls. fixed
01:30:200 (2,3) - addition drum and add whistle done
01:46:600 (1,2) - this looks gorgeous actually. try to make the spacing closer. and people can see the pattern and feel the slur(in music world means umm ;; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slur_(music) *runs*) I play piano so I know what this means! >8D
01:49:800 (1,2) - curve this a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit done
01:55:400 - triplet. 01:55:800 - triplet. 01:56:200 - circle? :OO done
02:09:000 - the epicness part ;; I kind of feel it'll be great if you can make antijumps in this part. something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465300 ;; just suggestion tho hmm when I think of something cool later I'll add it in
02:29:800 (1,2,3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465309 ;A; ;A; ok
02:34:200 (5,1,2) - polygonal ;A; fix spacing after that done

[Normal]
00:12:200 (1) - umm ;; same as the other diff ;; avoid using spinner here. just try a circle with 1/1 slider ;; done
00:23:400 (1) - nazi ;; 1 grid down ;; symmetric ;w; done
00:32:600 (5) - stack on top of (1) ? to make the viable better done
00:37:800 (1) - same as hard. if you think its too short. then use slider instead of spinner. made 1/1 repeat slider
00:49:800 (2) - put this on the top part ;; or upper part ;; just don't stack it with 00:48:200 (4) - done
01:07:400 (5,6) - change this into 3/4 slider. (6)'s rhythm is out of place. it won't be hard if you turn this into 3/4 slider. because you click the slider head instead of the tail right. :3 done
01:19:400 (3,4,5,1) - it'll look better if you do the (5,1)'s spacing same as (3,4) done
01:38:600 (3,4,5) - polygon..... ?
01:41:000 (3,5) - symmetric.......... ok I made it a triangle
01:48:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - ;; do (3,4)'s spacing same as (1,2)'s. just flip here and there. (3,4,5) polygon or make it square. done
02:15:000 (3) - tilt it a bit. :3 perfect vertical doesn't really looks great at all. there;; is what I usually called art. XD done
02:28:200 (1) - -1/2 beat. :O follow the bgm. it's like this because otherwise spinner would be too short
02:34:600 (3,4,5,6,1) - y u no star or pentagon I need to keep it 1.0x distance snap ;_;
~uhh there are stuff i don't wanna mention ;; or you would think that I ask you to remap ;____; now I am genuinely concerned that there is something wrong with this difficulty ;w;

Thats it .w.)/

GoodLuck~ .w.)/ take my star ;; I can see the potential already ww X')

Thanks for modding again and for the star! o3o

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-03-30T22:44:50+00:00

Hey, M4M request.

[Easy]
00:12:600 - I think the green line that lands here can be removed, since there's 00:10:600 .
00:19:800 (4) - Add a clap here?
00:42:600 (1,2,3,4) - I was thinking of this:

SPOILER

135,240,42600,6,0,P|182:276|204:332,1,120,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
308,268,43400,2,0,P|329:323|376:359,1,120,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
488,312,44200,2,0,P|480:224|352:116,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,120,45400,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:43:000 (1) - Remove the new combo here.
00:45:800 (1) - Add a point to x:140 y:256 to turn this into a curve slider?
00:47:400 (3) - Though it's a little overlap, move it to x:336 y:32. Move the second point to x:392 y:24, and last to x:444 y:56.
01:56:600 (2) - It should have the same slider pattern as 01:57:800 (3) , but flip vertically.
02:38:600 (4,5) - I suggest to move 02:38:600 (4) to x:452 y:80, and 02:39:000 (5) to x:360 y:4, to avoid the overlap.

[Normal]
00:42:600 (1) - Add a point to x:184 y:296 so it could be a curve slider?
00:49:800 (2) - It could have the same slider pattern as 00:49:000 (1) . Copy-paste it, and flip it vertically and horizontally, and Ctrl+G, and move it to x:264 y:188.
01:37:000 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this pattern can be in a normal difficulty. Try to play with 01:37:800 (2) .

SPOILER

01:41:800 (4) - Add a new combo.

[Hard]
00:37:900 (1) - In the AiBat, it says that the length of this spinner is less 750 ms. Convert it into a slider.
01:05:800 (3) - This is nazi, but move the last point to x:184 y:128, so it could make a perfect blanket.
01:22:800 (2) - Add a point to x:188 y:160, so it could have a better flow.

[Insane]
00:26:266 (2,3,5) - I feel that these notes don't land on a beat of the music, which is called overmapped
00:34:800 (1) - Move this to x:492 y:216. It confuse the players.
01:06:400 (4) - Move this to x:408 y:344.
02:04:600 (2) - Move it to x:212 y:220, or to another place.

So, that's it. Good Luck on ranking this map. Feel free to ask me questions.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-03-30T23:22:53+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey, M4M request.

[Normal]
00:42:600 (1) - Add a point to x:184 y:296 so it could be a curve slider? alright, fixed
00:49:800 (2) - It could have the same slider pattern as 00:49:000 (1) . Copy-paste it, and flip it vertically and horizontally, and Ctrl+G, and move it to x:264 y:188. fixed
01:37:000 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this pattern can be in a normal difficulty. Try to play with 01:37:800 (2) .
SPOILER
rearranged (2)
01:41:800 (4) - Add a new combo. fixed

[Hard]
00:37:900 (1) - In the AiBat, it says that the length of this spinner is less 750 ms. Convert it into a slider. I like the spinner here to transition into kiai time. Instead I shortened 00:37:400 (4) - and extended the spinner, then moved it back to 00:37:400 (4) - . Spinner is a bit longer now.
01:05:800 (3) - This is nazi, but move the last point to x:184 y:128, so it could make a perfect blanket. changed
01:22:800 (2) - Add a point to x:188 y:160, so it could have a better flow. fixed

[Insane]
00:26:266 (2,3,5) - I feel that these notes don't land on a beat of the music, which is called overmapped hm I'm not quite sure how I feel about this...I'll keep this in mind and see what other people think about this section then take action accordingly, thanks for the heads-up
00:34:800 (1) - Move this to x:492 y:216. It confuse the players. fixed in own way
01:06:400 (4) - Move this to x:408 y:344. alright
02:04:600 (2) - Move it to x:212 y:220, or to another place. moved it to the right a little, I like the placement as of now as the jump between (2) and (3) matches the music pretty well in my opinion

So, that's it. Good Luck on ranking this map. Feel free to ask me questions.

Thanks for modding!

moshiri

65 posts

Joined August 2012

moshiri 2014-04-05T01:03:27+00:00

~~Title : えれくとりっく・えんじぇる~~ <-- wrong!

[Normal]
01:29:800 (4) - I think this slider protruded, may bring it near to center.　

(๓´罒`๓)(´☯ω☯｀)

[Edited 04/06]
Thanks kudos, I checked that slider is better. also 01:26:600 (4) - protruded this slider may do that like same reason.
Oh Title is lol, you said correctly, I didn't know that.
I Hope this beatmap would be ranked.

Last edited by moshiri 2014-04-06T13:34:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-05T22:08:00+00:00

moshiri wrote:
Title : えれくとりっく・えんじぇる the last character in the title should actually be ぅ

[Normal]
01:29:800 (4) - I think this slider protruded, may bring it near to center. I see what you mean, I moved 01:29:000 (3,4) - down a bit, it should be ok now

(๓´罒`๓)

Thanks for the suggestions, I also remapped normal a bit to make it look better.

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-04-07T11:07:21+00:00

hi, encoding video you have requested has been completed.

Files : Download (16.0MB)

good lucky~

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-04-07T20:22:30+00:00

Im done, quite proud of this actually

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pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-08T23:41:11+00:00

-Neipezi wrote:
hi, encoding video you have requested has been completed.

Files : Download (16.0MB)

good lucky~

Thank you for the video!

Kibbleru wrote:
Im done, quite proud of this actually

senpai is proud

Milkshake

532 posts

Joined August 2011

Milkshake 2014-04-10T08:57:47+00:00

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE INSANE DIFF IT BECAME MUCH MORE EASIER WHAT THE FUCK NO

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-10T10:52:05+00:00

Milkshake wrote:
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE INSANE DIFF IT BECAME MUCH MORE EASIER WHAT THE FUCK NO

yooo I had to make it nicer, the random streams I put in there didn't really have a purpose. Anyways I'll try to find a way to make it harder without overmapping just for you bby <3

Milkshake

532 posts

Joined August 2011

Milkshake 2014-04-10T12:20:12+00:00

I think they were just fine I mean the insane is now semi-hard diff and i prefere it the way it was before
:just muh opinion:

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-04-12T16:44:18+00:00

Hihi~ ~~M4M~~~ From my modding queue~
Wow it's a nice song >_>

[Kibbleru's Easy]
00:29:800 (1,3) - If these two sliders follow the same style,it will look better lol
00:50:200 (2) - DS problem I know what you thought so just move all

SPOILER

01:33:800 (1,2) - A blanket here~
01:37:800 (2,3) - ^
01:56:200 (1,2) - I think make it a blanket like this looks better

SPOILER

02:45:800 (1) - The angle is too large and looks a bit weird,Try to make the angle smaller.

[Normal]
00:14:600 (3,4) - Move a bit to make a nice blanket.
00:33:800 (2,3) - Make it like this sounds better ?

SPOILER

01:29:000 (4,5) - ^

SPOILER

02:13:400 (4) - 412|300
02:20:200 (1,2) - Move them to be a nice blanket.
02:41:400 (3) - I may prefer this slider looking like this

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:09:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow doesn't feel so good,try to swap 3 & 4

SPOILER

01:29:000 (1,2,3) - Make them a regular triangle.
01:41:000 (3) - Just let it a 1/2 slider to fit with 1、2、4 and you'll find it fits better.
02:17:000 (1,2) - Also not on a line.

[Insane]
00:24:800 (5) - It feels better if you move it away,putting it under a reverse slider will mislead the players.
00:39:200 (2,1) - A blanket here.
Since I can't play this diff by myself I think I can't give some useful suggestions here.

Nice mapset~
Will rank soon lol~~

pkk

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-12T18:52:18+00:00

examination wrote:
Hihi~ ~~M4M~~~ From my modding queue~
Wow it's a nice song >_>.

[Normal]
00:14:600 (3,4) - Move a bit to make a nice blanket. fixed
00:33:800 (2,3) - Make it like this sounds better ?
SPOILER
I like it the way it is, it fits the vocal nicely
01:29:000 (4,5) - ^
SPOILER
fixed
02:13:400 (4) - 412|300 fixed
02:20:200 (1,2) - Move them to be a nice blanket. fixed
02:41:400 (3) - I may prefer this slider looking like this
SPOILER

I think my way flows better, and I like to have sliders going in different direction which is why (3) is curved down and (4) is curved up

[Hard]
01:09:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow doesn't feel so good,try to swap 3 & 4
SPOILER
switched, also rearranged 01:10:600 (5) - and 01:11:000 (6) -
01:29:000 (1,2,3) - Make them a regular triangle. 01:11:000 (6) - fixed
01:41:000 (3) - Just let it a 1/2 slider to fit with 1、2、4 and you'll find it fits better.
02:17:000 (1,2) - Also not on a line.made it into a line now

[Insane]
00:24:800 (5) - It feels better if you move it away,putting it under a reverse slider will mislead the players. fixed
00:39:200 (2,1) - A blanket here.
Since I can't play this diff by myself I think I can't give some useful suggestions here.

Nice mapset~ thanks ;w;
Will rank soon lol~~ yea I hope I get a BAT mod sometime soon xD

Thanks for the mod!

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-15T23:03:19+00:00

Fixed mostly flow, random jumps, and shapes.

IRC mod

16:11 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/367011 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Kibbleru's Easy]]
16:11 No Dap: are you ready
16:11 pkmnyab: my body is ready
16:18 No Dap: 02:48:600 (4,1) - the only stacked not in this diff
16:18 No Dap: I prefer you don't
16:18 No Dap: notes*
16:18 pkmnyab: k
16:19 No Dap:  02:01:000 (3,4) - this plays fine but feels like too many 1/2 in a short time
16:19 No Dap: yeah that's fine i guess
16:19 No Dap: you don't need to change
16:20 No Dap: everything else seems nice in easy
16:20 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363640 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Normal]]
16:21 No Dap: 00:32:600 (5,1) - this is ok
16:21 No Dap: but 00:32:200 (4,5) - this doesn't look good
16:22 No Dap: you can blanket them and it will still have good flow
16:22 pkmnyab: alright
16:24 No Dap: 01:27:400 (1) - 
16:24 No Dap: try to give it a little curve
16:24 No Dap: according to this flow01:27:400 (1,2,3) - 
16:25 pkmnyab: ok
16:25 No Dap: 01:33:800 (1) - match the shape with 01:34:600 (2) - ?
16:26 pkmnyab: k
16:27 No Dap: 02:21:800 (1) - finish?
16:27 pkmnyab: ye
16:28 No Dap: well 02:28:200 (1) - I'd prefer if you delete this spinner
16:28 No Dap: it's not needed and only making it hard to hit the next circle
16:28 No Dap: and it also apeears way to early while spinning
16:30 No Dap: did you fix or not
16:31 pkmnyab: fixed
16:31 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/cadf39354dba5036d9140a36e5084907 put a repeat slider + circle
16:37 No Dap: k
16:37 No Dap: got sunchips
16:37 No Dap: 02:42:600 (1,2) - I think these two are too close
16:37 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515793
16:37 pkmnyab: man sunchips were the shit in my school 5 years ago
16:37 pkmnyab: but they died down
16:37 No Dap: lol
16:38 pkmnyab: k spaced out
16:38 No Dap: french onion best flavor!
16:38 No Dap: 02:43:400 (2,3) - dont forget to adjut DS 
16:38 No Dap: 02:43:400 (2,3) - 
16:38 No Dap: and further mroe as require
16:38 No Dap: dd
16:38 pkmnyab: yea
16:38 pkmnyab: wtf french onion i thought there was only regular
16:38 No Dap: there alsa also
16:39 No Dap: and spicy
16:39 No Dap: by the way 
16:39 No Dap: I would decrease HP by 1 tick on both easy and normal
16:39 No Dap: since hard has hp 5
16:40 pkmnyab: i see
16:40 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363638 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Hard]]
16:40 No Dap: OD+1?
16:40 No Dap: Od5 i for noobs
16:40 No Dap: is*
16:40 pkmnyab: wtf you say to me
16:40 pkmnyab: ok ok od 5 it is
16:40 pkmnyab: i mean 6
16:41 No Dap: no od6
16:41 No Dap: lol
16:44 No Dap: 00:13:000 (3,4) - should be slider
16:44 No Dap: 00:13:000 (3) - this is holding
16:45 pkmnyab: ok
16:46 No Dap: 00:17:400 (2) - this flows bad
16:46 No Dap: curve it the other way
16:46 pkmnyab: I think it's fine
16:46 pkmnyab: hang on
16:47 No Dap: orsomething like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515815
16:47 No Dap: he flow itself is fine but the shape is making players feel awkward
16:47 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/5c29fb73c06923cc10aa8e747fd3ca2f
16:47 pkmnyab: o
16:47 No Dap: I should have said it doesnt look good 
16:47 No Dap: my bad
16:48 pkmnyab:  what about this http://gyazo.com/d4fbd823d566c6619c57bd162909e14f I just moved 2 to the left
16:49 pkmnyab: actually I'll do your suggestion, the flow is good
16:49 No Dap: it till feels awkward
16:49 No Dap: yeah
16:49 No Dap: mine is drop flow and it also looks flowy
16:52 pkmnyab: sorry, crappy internet too op
16:54 No Dap: 00:35:400 (6,1) - stack?
16:54 No Dap: 00:36:200 (1) - 
16:54 pkmnyab: k
16:54 No Dap: I would also rotate
16:54 No Dap: 00:36:200 (1,2) -  more
16:54 No Dap: cuz 00:36:600 (2) - is touching 00:35:800 (7) - 
16:55 pkmnyab: alright
16:55 No Dap: 00:37:000 (3,4) - completetly tack
16:55 pkmnyab: k
16:56 No Dap:  00:50:600 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
16:57 pkmnyab: k, made it all 1.5x
16:58 No Dap: 01:11:000 (6,1) - 
16:58 pkmnyab: ok stacked heads
16:58 No Dap: no
16:58 No Dap: im coming up with a placemnet
16:59 pkmnyab: o
16:59 No Dap: I tweaked 01:10:200 (3,4,5,6) - 
16:59 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515842
17:01 pkmnyab: cool
17:01 pkmnyab: k done
17:02 No Dap: glad you liked it
17:02 No Dap: 01:12:800 (4,5) - angle?
17:02 No Dap: doesnt really make much in game play
17:03 pkmnyab: ?
17:03 No Dap: but id surely look better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515845
17:03 No Dap: much difference*
17:03 No Dap: my brain
17:03 pkmnyab: k
17:04 No Dap: 01:22:800 (2,3) - I don't really like this shape
17:04 pkmnyab: k, I took 01:22:800 (2) - and ctrl+h + j'd it
17:05 No Dap: 01:22:800 (2) - and this passive slider i don't think it fits
17:05 No Dap: it should be like this http://puu.sh/8a8ZB.jpg
17:05 No Dap: since 01:22:600 -  and 01:22:800 - are connected vocal 
17:06 pkmnyab: o
17:06 No Dap: it much more intutivie with my pattern
17:08 No Dap: let me know what you did
17:08 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/6595fc48b65949e6ec6ed3a390f38c3a
17:10 No Dap: wait 01:21:800 (3,4) -  what is this spacing
17:10 pkmnyab: wtf how did that get there o.o
17:10 No Dap: lol
17:11 No Dap: 01:26:400 (6,7,8,9) - id say this needs to be restructured
17:11 No Dap: let me see if i can come up  with a better structure
17:12 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515863 how about this?
17:12 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/98ed8590a1ccc9dbd44f09c04f277d56
17:12 No Dap: i stacked 6 and 8 
17:12 No Dap: that looks good too
17:12 pkmnyab: ok
17:13 No Dap: 01:30:200 (2) - NC should start here
17:13 No Dap: to distinguish the vocal 01:30:200 (2,3) - 
17:14 pkmnyab: k
17:15 No Dap: 01:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - 
17:15 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515869 ?
17:15 No Dap: ur current flow is fine
17:15 No Dap: but just a suggestion
17:16 No Dap: 01:41:800 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
17:16 pkmnyab: wow im so bad
17:16 No Dap: lol
17:17 No Dap: fixed?
17:18 pkmnyab: yes
17:18 No Dap: 01:43:400 (1,2) - 
17:18 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8aa0d.jpg
17:20 pkmnyab: fixed
17:20 No Dap: 01:50:200 (2,3) - try stacking end
17:21 pkmnyab: k
17:21 No Dap: 01:52:200 (4) - 
17:21 No Dap: stack with 01:51:000 (4) - ?
17:21 No Dap: move 01:51:800 (2,3) -  as needed
17:21 No Dap: and 01:52:800 (5) - 
17:21 No Dap: also i prefer this shape rather than fat circle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515877
17:22 pkmnyab: done
17:22 No Dap: 01:53:000 (1) - this too
17:22 No Dap: its too curvy
17:22 No Dap: fat circle
17:23 pkmnyab: lmao fat circle
17:23 pkmnyab: ok it lost some weight
17:23 No Dap: lmao
17:23 No Dap: 01:56:200 (8) - NC ?
17:24 pkmnyab: btw what do you think if i ctrl+g'd 01:54:600 (1,2) -  each of the separately
17:24 pkmnyab: brb 2 minutes making rice lol
17:25 No Dap: wtf
17:25 No Dap: ok
17:25 No Dap: that would mkake things too hard imo.
17:27 pkmnyab: ok im back from hell
17:28 No Dap: are you ghost
17:28 pkmnyab: no i am me
17:28 No Dap: 01:54:600 (1,2) - don't crtl g they are fine as they are
17:28 pkmnyab: ok
17:28 No Dap: did you nc 01:56:200 (8) - ?
17:28 pkmnyab: yes
17:30 No Dap: 02:13:800 (1,2,3) - wot the spacing
17:30 pkmnyab: omg blankets pls
17:30 pkmnyab: k i will fix
17:30 No Dap: lol
17:31 No Dap: you dont have to change
17:31 No Dap: just nazi
17:31 pkmnyab: k i won't fix
17:31 No Dap: or what you cant do is
17:31 No Dap: move the head up
17:31 No Dap: 02:14:400 (2) - 
17:32 pkmnyab: ok
17:33 No Dap: 02:17:200 (2) - wot the spacing
17:33 No Dap: suddenly 1.3?
17:33 No Dap: same part 1.0->1.3
17:33 No Dap: mind blown
17:33 pkmnyab: what
17:34 pkmnyab: fixed
17:34 No Dap: fixed he spacing after?
17:34 pkmnyab: yes
17:34 pkmnyab: 1.0 is now 1.3
17:34 No Dap: no they should be 1.3
17:34 No Dap: i mean 1.0
17:35 No Dap: 02:09:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 
17:35 pkmnyab: o
17:35 No Dap: all 1.0
17:35 pkmnyab: ok
17:36 No Dap: I would keep evreything 1.0
17:36 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - until this spinner 02:22:000 (1) - 
17:36 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 
17:36 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 
17:36 No Dap: wtf my keyboard
17:36 pkmnyab: oh my god
17:37 pkmnyab: ok everything is 1.0 in the section between break and spinner
17:37 pkmnyab: except when i put jumps for blanket or whatevs
17:37 No Dap: k
17:38 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - finish as normal?
17:38 pkmnyab: done
17:38 No Dap: 02:32:800 (8,1) - is this jump really needed
17:39 pkmnyab: no i think i put it there so the two sliders wouldn't overlap
17:39 pkmnyab: I'll rearrange the objects
17:39 No Dap: the rest looks ok
17:39 No Dap: yeah
17:39 pkmnyab: omg my insane is so bad you don't even know
17:39 pkmnyab: mercy pls
17:40 No Dap: lol
17:40 No Dap: will take long  guess
17:40 No Dap: or i quit here
17:40 No Dap: hue
17:40 *pkmnyab grabs onto moms legs
17:40 pkmnyab: pls
17:41 No Dap: ROFL
17:41 No Dap: 00:16:000 (4,5,6) - i will ill you
17:41 No Dap: kill
17:41 pkmnyab: oh my god
17:42 pkmnyab: it seemed like a good idea in my head LOL
17:42 No Dap: thats nearly
17:42 No Dap: extra lvl
17:42 pkmnyab: should i just delete 00:16:100 (5) - 
17:42 No Dap: even in extra it should be questionable
17:42 No Dap: no
17:42 No Dap: stack 4 on 5
17:43 No Dap: let me come up with a better flow for you
17:44 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515922
17:45 pkmnyab: nice, fixed
17:45 No Dap: 00:17:800 (3,1) - i will kill you
17:45 No Dap: 00:17:400 (2,3) - also
17:45 pkmnyab: wtf it's not that hard
17:45 No Dap: horrible flow
17:46 pkmnyab: the flow there is fine imo
17:46 No Dap: no
17:46 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515926 this is what i'd do
17:47 No Dap: but if you want to keep it as it is its fine
17:47 No Dap: i aint no BAT no trouble
17:47 pkmnyab: fixed
17:49 No Dap: 00:32:400 (6) - 
17:49 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515933?
17:49 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515933 ?
17:49 pkmnyab: k
17:50 No Dap: 00:33:600 (3) - move it to 368 264
17:50 No Dap: the flow makes more sense 
17:50 No Dap: 00:32:800 (7) - 00:33:800 (4) - stack?
17:51 pkmnyab: done
17:52 No Dap: 00:34:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really get how you came up with this jump
17:52 No Dap: was it random
17:52 pkmnyab: i have no idea
17:52 pkmnyab: i should probably fix that
17:52 No Dap: I will 
17:53 No Dap: 00:35:000 (2) - stack on 00:35:400 (4) - 
17:53 No Dap: 00:35:200 (3) -  stack on00:33:600 (3) - 
17:53 No Dap: if you do fix the flow her 00:35:400 (4,5,6) - 
17:53 No Dap: accodring to 00:35:200 (3) - 
17:54 pkmnyab: fixed
17:55 No Dap: how did you fix 00:35:400 (4,5,6) - 
17:55 No Dap: show me
17:55 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/b9ab648aa37885a9545f749341df13dc
17:56 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515956
17:56 No Dap: make them go up more
17:56 pkmnyab: k
17:56 No Dap: 00:37:000 (1) - delete NC
17:57 pkmnyab: 00:36:800 (4,1,2,3,4,5) -  this part bgus me
17:57 No Dap: no that part is fine
17:57 No Dap: plays very well
17:58 No Dap: 00:39:000 (1,2) - k let me teach you 1 technique
17:58 No Dap: put a 1/1 slider with .5 SV
17:58 pkmnyab: 1/1 as in white tick to white tick
17:58 No Dap: it works very well when emphasizing kiai lead in
17:58 pkmnyab: or white to red
17:58 No Dap: i mean
17:58 No Dap: 1/2
17:58 No Dap: fml
17:58 pkmnyab: k
17:59 No Dap: 00:41:800 (6,7) - this is probably not a good idea
17:59 No Dap: considering you have stacked notes on 
17:59 No Dap: 00:40:200 (4,5) - 00:39:400 (1,2) - 
17:59 No Dap: decreae DS a bit
18:00 pkmnyab: decreased DS to 1.65x
18:00 No Dap: make em look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515962
18:01 No Dap: usually whe you have 3/4 its because you are emphasizing that the vocals are connected and holding
18:01 No Dap: if you have a jump, you're ruining the purpose
18:01 pkmnyab: i see
18:01 pkmnyab: ok, fixed
18:01 No Dap: 00:45:000 (3) - 
18:02 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515969 this flows much better imo
18:03 No Dap: if you don't understand why i did that please ask
18:03 No Dap: cuz if you don't learn anything from my suggestions its not worht 
18:03 No Dap: me doing this
18:04 pkmnyab: oh this does flow better
18:04 No Dap: 00:46:400 (3) - id rather have it like this
18:04 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515972
18:05 pkmnyab: k
18:05 No Dap: 00:45:800 (1,2) - also i think you should keep this as 1/1
18:06 No Dap: other parts like 00:46:600 (4,5) -  is fine
18:06 No Dap: because the vocal is strong and cutting
18:06 No Dap: whereas 00:45:800 (1,2) - this is pretty much connected 
18:06 pkmnyab: alright
18:06 pkmnyab: i hear what you mean
18:06 No Dap: 00:49:000 (1,2) - I think this might be too much spacing
18:06 No Dap: maybe 1.3?
18:08 pkmnyab: 1.3 between all of them?
18:08 No Dap: jut btwn 1 and 2
18:08 pkmnyab: k
18:09 No Dap: that 1/4 00:50:200 (5,6) - 
18:09 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515976 by this you get triangle and a jump 6->1
18:09 No Dap: also flows good
18:10 pkmnyab: alright
18:11 No Dap: 01:17:000 (4,5) - unstack
18:11 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515981 ?
18:13 pkmnyab: done
18:13 No Dap: 01:19:400 (1,2,3,4) - random jump 
18:13 No Dap: 01:19:800 (2) - this is the most problem here
18:13 pkmnyab: *beautiful jump
18:13 pkmnyab: hm should i curve that
18:14 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515987
18:14 No Dap: no
18:14 No Dap: stack 3 on 1 tail
18:14 No Dap: or if you can come up with a better one don't hesitate to do so
18:15 pkmnyab: ok i'll stick to your suggestion for now since it's pretty good
18:15 No Dap: 01:21:800 (3,4,5) - this is fine i guess
18:15 No Dap: but really no reason to make this part o hard
18:15 No Dap: so*
18:16 No Dap: decrease ds
18:16 pkmnyab: k
18:16 No Dap: let me know how you did
18:16 No Dap: becaue the next pattern needs to be reshaped too
18:17 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/9b0fe60b532191dd37dc8e6e980e97e0
18:19 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515992 I like this 
18:21 pkmnyab: o that's a nice pattern
18:21 pkmnyab: fixeddddddddddd
18:21 No Dap: 01:25:000 (3) - I would delete the middle point
18:21 No Dap: and make it straight
18:21 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515996
18:21 pkmnyab: k
18:22 No Dap: 01:24:600 (2,2) -  stack and remake the trianle 01:26:400 (3) - 
18:22 No Dap: for the sake of clean ness
18:23 pkmnyab: done
18:24 No Dap: 01:30:200 (6) - you can do the .5 SV here too
18:24 No Dap: don't forget to NC if you do
18:24 pkmnyab: k
18:25 No Dap: 01:31:400 (5) - this S shape isnt really smooth
18:25 No Dap: so i  recommend just curving it the other way
18:25 pkmnyab: alright
18:25 No Dap: so it flows better with 01:31:800 (6) - 
18:25 pkmnyab: I have no idea what I was trying to do with that because making an s shape did not occur to me at all LOL
18:26 No Dap: lol
18:26 No Dap: 01:36:800 (4) - rather than stacking on head
18:27 No Dap: you can try blanket with 3
18:27 pkmnyab: 3 or 1
18:27 pkmnyab: o you mean under 3
18:28 No Dap: K I twaked it a bit
18:28 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516007
18:28 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8af8E.jpg
18:28 No Dap: I stacked evreything
18:28 No Dap: 01:37:000 (1,3) - 
18:29 No Dap: if you don't see or get something let me know
18:31 pkmnyab: got it
18:31 No Dap: 01:39:400 (3) - stack with 01:38:400 (8) - 
18:32 pkmnyab: k
18:32 No Dap: 01:41:401 (5,1) - matching shape?
18:32 No Dap: curve 1 
18:33 pkmnyab: done
18:33 pkmnyab: oh man the next part is killer
18:33 No Dap: actually id do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516014
18:33 No Dap: blanket 01:41:401 (5,6,7) - 
18:33 No Dap: also good flow
18:33 No Dap: 01:41:800 (6,7,1) - 
18:34 No Dap: 01:43:400 (1) - she needs to go on a diet
18:34 pkmnyab: omg pls
18:34 No Dap: lol
18:34 No Dap: did you fix everything
18:34 pkmnyab: yep
18:35 No Dap: 01:43:800 (2,3,4,5) - definitely reduce DS
18:35 No Dap: this isn't extra
18:35 pkmnyab: k i stacked 01:43:400 (1,4) - 
18:36 No Dap: 01:42:200 (7,1) - i hope you stacked these too
18:36 pkmnyab: wait what
18:36 pkmnyab: 01:42:400 (1,2,3) -  the whole thing on 7?
18:37 No Dap: wot
18:37 No Dap: oh
18:37 No Dap: 01:43:400 (1,4) - 
18:37 No Dap: lol
18:37 No Dap: my bad
18:37 pkmnyab: T_T
18:37 No Dap: 01:43:000 (1) - delete NC here
18:37 pkmnyab: done
18:38 No Dap: ` 01:49:800 (1,2,3) - nice job
18:38 No Dap: 01:51:600 (2) - you can delete this
18:38 No Dap: tis not needed and this is a good place for an anti jump
18:38 pkmnyab: tyty
18:39 No Dap: 01:51:400 (1) - stack on 01:51:800 (2) - 
18:39 pkmnyab: done
18:40 No Dap: actuall
18:40 No Dap: y
18:40 No Dap: Id do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516030
18:40 No Dap: the jump01:50:800 (4,5,6,7) - WTF 1/6
18:40 No Dap: pls make this kick slider
18:40 pkmnyab: ?
18:40 No Dap: 01:50:800 (4,5,6,7) - 
18:40 No Dap: make this kick slider
18:41 pkmnyab: a what
18:41 No Dap: kick slider
18:41 No Dap: like this 01:53:400 (1) - 
18:41 pkmnyab: yea I have no idea what that is
18:41 No Dap: short reverse slider
18:41 pkmnyab: o
18:41 pkmnyab: done
18:41 No Dap: 01:57:799 (1,2) - DS pls
18:42 No Dap: 01:58:200 (2) - 404 152?
18:42 pkmnyab: k
18:42 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516033
18:42 No Dap: I curved this 01:57:799 (1) - 
18:43 No Dap:  and considering how strong this beat i 01:58:400 (3) -  jump fits well imo
18:43 No Dap: 01:58:400 (3,4,5) - DS pls
18:43 pkmnyab: omg 
18:44 No Dap: 02:05:800 (1,2,3,4) - you probably want to keep the spacing consistent here
18:44 pkmnyab: done
18:45 No Dap: 02:15:800 (5,6,7) - spacing
18:45 pkmnyab: ;_;
18:45 No Dap: 02:19:200 (5,6,7) - here too
18:45 No Dap: 02:21:000 (4,5) - blanket better rofl
18:46 pkmnyab: done
18:46 No Dap: 02:21:900 (1) - finish like other diff
18:47 No Dap: 02:28:200 (1,2,3) - don't make me kill you again
18:47 pkmnyab: yup, normal finish
18:47 pkmnyab: wtf
18:47 pkmnyab: that's so soft
18:48 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8agwi.jpg do this
18:48 No Dap: follow the base here
18:48 No Dap: dont overmap
18:48 pkmnyab: alright
18:48 No Dap: 02:30:200 (2,3,4) - spacing here
18:49 pkmnyab: k
18:50 No Dap: 02:34:200 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516044 ?
18:50 No Dap: 02:35:000 (3,4,5,6) - stack on this fits really well imo
18:50 No Dap: since 02:35:000 (3) - this beat
18:50 No Dap: theres like a tick sound
18:50 No Dap: or whatever
18:52 pkmnyab: done
18:52 No Dap: 02:35:800 (7) - stack on 02:34:200 (7) - 
18:53 No Dap: 02:36:000 (8) - move to somewhere like this
18:53 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516049
18:54 pkmnyab: k
18:54 No Dap: 02:34:800 (2,1) - stack pls
18:55 No Dap: 02:37:000 (5) - curve is the other way
18:55 No Dap: flows so bad
18:56 pkmnyab:    k
18:56 No Dap: 02:37:400 (7) - you better curve this the other way too
18:56 No Dap: 02:38:600 (5,6,7,1) - DS
18:56 No Dap: put 02:38:600 (5,6) - closer
18:57 No Dap: like other
18:57 pkmnyab: k
18:57 No Dap: 02:40:200 (3,4,5) - Hi there
18:57 pkmnyab: ḱ
18:57 pkmnyab: yooooooooooooo
19:00 No Dap: 02:43:000 (2,5) -  stack on 02:41:700 (4) - 
19:00 No Dap: 02:42:600 (1) - stack on02:41:400 (2) - 
19:01 pkmnyab: k
19:01 No Dap: k the rest looks good

pkk

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pkk 2014-04-15T23:05:19+00:00

No Dap wrote:

Fixed mostly flow, random jumps, and shapes.

IRC mod

16:11 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/367011 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Kibbleru's Easy]]
16:11 No Dap: are you ready
16:11 pkmnyab: my body is ready
16:18 No Dap: 02:48:600 (4,1) - the only stacked not in this diff
16:18 No Dap: I prefer you don't
16:18 No Dap: notes*
16:18 pkmnyab: k
16:19 No Dap:  02:01:000 (3,4) - this plays fine but feels like too many 1/2 in a short time
16:19 No Dap: yeah that's fine i guess
16:19 No Dap: you don't need to change
16:20 No Dap: everything else seems nice in easy
16:20 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363640 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Normal]]
16:21 No Dap: 00:32:600 (5,1) - this is ok
16:21 No Dap: but 00:32:200 (4,5) - this doesn't look good
16:22 No Dap: you can blanket them and it will still have good flow
16:22 pkmnyab: alright
16:24 No Dap: 01:27:400 (1) - 
16:24 No Dap: try to give it a little curve
16:24 No Dap: according to this flow01:27:400 (1,2,3) - 
16:25 pkmnyab: ok
16:25 No Dap: 01:33:800 (1) - match the shape with 01:34:600 (2) - ?
16:26 pkmnyab: k
16:27 No Dap: 02:21:800 (1) - finish?
16:27 pkmnyab: ye
16:28 No Dap: well 02:28:200 (1) - I'd prefer if you delete this spinner
16:28 No Dap: it's not needed and only making it hard to hit the next circle
16:28 No Dap: and it also apeears way to early while spinning
16:30 No Dap: did you fix or not
16:31 pkmnyab: fixed
16:31 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/cadf39354dba5036d9140a36e5084907 put a repeat slider + circle
16:37 No Dap: k
16:37 No Dap: got sunchips
16:37 No Dap: 02:42:600 (1,2) - I think these two are too close
16:37 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515793
16:37 pkmnyab: man sunchips were the shit in my school 5 years ago
16:37 pkmnyab: but they died down
16:37 No Dap: lol
16:38 pkmnyab: k spaced out
16:38 No Dap: french onion best flavor!
16:38 No Dap: 02:43:400 (2,3) - dont forget to adjut DS 
16:38 No Dap: 02:43:400 (2,3) - 
16:38 No Dap: and further mroe as require
16:38 No Dap: dd
16:38 pkmnyab: yea
16:38 pkmnyab: wtf french onion i thought there was only regular
16:38 No Dap: there alsa also
16:39 No Dap: and spicy
16:39 No Dap: by the way 
16:39 No Dap: I would decrease HP by 1 tick on both easy and normal
16:39 No Dap: since hard has hp 5
16:40 pkmnyab: i see
16:40 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363638 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Hard]]
16:40 No Dap: OD+1?
16:40 No Dap: Od5 i for noobs
16:40 No Dap: is*
16:40 pkmnyab: wtf you say to me
16:40 pkmnyab: ok ok od 5 it is
16:40 pkmnyab: i mean 6
16:41 No Dap: no od6
16:41 No Dap: lol
16:44 No Dap: 00:13:000 (3,4) - should be slider
16:44 No Dap: 00:13:000 (3) - this is holding
16:45 pkmnyab: ok
16:46 No Dap: 00:17:400 (2) - this flows bad
16:46 No Dap: curve it the other way
16:46 pkmnyab: I think it's fine
16:46 pkmnyab: hang on
16:47 No Dap: orsomething like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515815
16:47 No Dap: he flow itself is fine but the shape is making players feel awkward
16:47 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/5c29fb73c06923cc10aa8e747fd3ca2f
16:47 pkmnyab: o
16:47 No Dap: I should have said it doesnt look good 
16:47 No Dap: my bad
16:48 pkmnyab:  what about this http://gyazo.com/d4fbd823d566c6619c57bd162909e14f I just moved 2 to the left
16:49 pkmnyab: actually I'll do your suggestion, the flow is good
16:49 No Dap: it till feels awkward
16:49 No Dap: yeah
16:49 No Dap: mine is drop flow and it also looks flowy
16:52 pkmnyab: sorry, crappy internet too op
16:54 No Dap: 00:35:400 (6,1) - stack?
16:54 No Dap: 00:36:200 (1) - 
16:54 pkmnyab: k
16:54 No Dap: I would also rotate
16:54 No Dap: 00:36:200 (1,2) -  more
16:54 No Dap: cuz 00:36:600 (2) - is touching 00:35:800 (7) - 
16:55 pkmnyab: alright
16:55 No Dap: 00:37:000 (3,4) - completetly tack
16:55 pkmnyab: k
16:56 No Dap:  00:50:600 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
16:57 pkmnyab: k, made it all 1.5x
16:58 No Dap: 01:11:000 (6,1) - 
16:58 pkmnyab: ok stacked heads
16:58 No Dap: no
16:58 No Dap: im coming up with a placemnet
16:59 pkmnyab: o
16:59 No Dap: I tweaked 01:10:200 (3,4,5,6) - 
16:59 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515842
17:01 pkmnyab: cool
17:01 pkmnyab: k done
17:02 No Dap: glad you liked it
17:02 No Dap: 01:12:800 (4,5) - angle?
17:02 No Dap: doesnt really make much in game play
17:03 pkmnyab: ?
17:03 No Dap: but id surely look better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515845
17:03 No Dap: much difference*
17:03 No Dap: my brain
17:03 pkmnyab: k
17:04 No Dap: 01:22:800 (2,3) - I don't really like this shape
17:04 pkmnyab: k, I took 01:22:800 (2) - and ctrl+h + j'd it
17:05 No Dap: 01:22:800 (2) - and this passive slider i don't think it fits
17:05 No Dap: it should be like this http://puu.sh/8a8ZB.jpg
17:05 No Dap: since 01:22:600 -  and 01:22:800 - are connected vocal 
17:06 pkmnyab: o
17:06 No Dap: it much more intutivie with my pattern
17:08 No Dap: let me know what you did
17:08 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/6595fc48b65949e6ec6ed3a390f38c3a
17:10 No Dap: wait 01:21:800 (3,4) -  what is this spacing
17:10 pkmnyab: wtf how did that get there o.o
17:10 No Dap: lol
17:11 No Dap: 01:26:400 (6,7,8,9) - id say this needs to be restructured
17:11 No Dap: let me see if i can come up  with a better structure
17:12 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515863 how about this?
17:12 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/98ed8590a1ccc9dbd44f09c04f277d56
17:12 No Dap: i stacked 6 and 8 
17:12 No Dap: that looks good too
17:12 pkmnyab: ok
17:13 No Dap: 01:30:200 (2) - NC should start here
17:13 No Dap: to distinguish the vocal 01:30:200 (2,3) - 
17:14 pkmnyab: k
17:15 No Dap: 01:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - 
17:15 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515869 ?
17:15 No Dap: ur current flow is fine
17:15 No Dap: but just a suggestion
17:16 No Dap: 01:41:800 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
17:16 pkmnyab: wow im so bad
17:16 No Dap: lol
17:17 No Dap: fixed?
17:18 pkmnyab: yes
17:18 No Dap: 01:43:400 (1,2) - 
17:18 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8aa0d.jpg
17:20 pkmnyab: fixed
17:20 No Dap: 01:50:200 (2,3) - try stacking end
17:21 pkmnyab: k
17:21 No Dap: 01:52:200 (4) - 
17:21 No Dap: stack with 01:51:000 (4) - ?
17:21 No Dap: move 01:51:800 (2,3) -  as needed
17:21 No Dap: and 01:52:800 (5) - 
17:21 No Dap: also i prefer this shape rather than fat circle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515877
17:22 pkmnyab: done
17:22 No Dap: 01:53:000 (1) - this too
17:22 No Dap: its too curvy
17:22 No Dap: fat circle
17:23 pkmnyab: lmao fat circle
17:23 pkmnyab: ok it lost some weight
17:23 No Dap: lmao
17:23 No Dap: 01:56:200 (8) - NC ?
17:24 pkmnyab: btw what do you think if i ctrl+g'd 01:54:600 (1,2) -  each of the separately
17:24 pkmnyab: brb 2 minutes making rice lol
17:25 No Dap: wtf
17:25 No Dap: ok
17:25 No Dap: that would mkake things too hard imo.
17:27 pkmnyab: ok im back from hell
17:28 No Dap: are you ghost
17:28 pkmnyab: no i am me
17:28 No Dap: 01:54:600 (1,2) - don't crtl g they are fine as they are
17:28 pkmnyab: ok
17:28 No Dap: did you nc 01:56:200 (8) - ?
17:28 pkmnyab: yes
17:30 No Dap: 02:13:800 (1,2,3) - wot the spacing
17:30 pkmnyab: omg blankets pls
17:30 pkmnyab: k i will fix
17:30 No Dap: lol
17:31 No Dap: you dont have to change
17:31 No Dap: just nazi
17:31 pkmnyab: k i won't fix
17:31 No Dap: or what you cant do is
17:31 No Dap: move the head up
17:31 No Dap: 02:14:400 (2) - 
17:32 pkmnyab: ok
17:33 No Dap: 02:17:200 (2) - wot the spacing
17:33 No Dap: suddenly 1.3?
17:33 No Dap: same part 1.0->1.3
17:33 No Dap: mind blown
17:33 pkmnyab: what
17:34 pkmnyab: fixed
17:34 No Dap: fixed he spacing after?
17:34 pkmnyab: yes
17:34 pkmnyab: 1.0 is now 1.3
17:34 No Dap: no they should be 1.3
17:34 No Dap: i mean 1.0
17:35 No Dap: 02:09:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 
17:35 pkmnyab: o
17:35 No Dap: all 1.0
17:35 pkmnyab: ok
17:36 No Dap: I would keep evreything 1.0
17:36 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - until this spinner 02:22:000 (1) - 
17:36 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 
17:36 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 02:22:000 (1) - 
17:36 No Dap: wtf my keyboard
17:36 pkmnyab: oh my god
17:37 pkmnyab: ok everything is 1.0 in the section between break and spinner
17:37 pkmnyab: except when i put jumps for blanket or whatevs
17:37 No Dap: k
17:38 No Dap: 02:22:000 (1) - finish as normal?
17:38 pkmnyab: done
17:38 No Dap: 02:32:800 (8,1) - is this jump really needed
17:39 pkmnyab: no i think i put it there so the two sliders wouldn't overlap
17:39 pkmnyab: I'll rearrange the objects
17:39 No Dap: the rest looks ok
17:39 No Dap: yeah
17:39 pkmnyab: omg my insane is so bad you don't even know
17:39 pkmnyab: mercy pls
17:40 No Dap: lol
17:40 No Dap: will take long  guess
17:40 No Dap: or i quit here
17:40 No Dap: hue
17:40 *pkmnyab grabs onto moms legs
17:40 pkmnyab: pls
17:41 No Dap: ROFL
17:41 No Dap: 00:16:000 (4,5,6) - i will ill you
17:41 No Dap: kill
17:41 pkmnyab: oh my god
17:42 pkmnyab: it seemed like a good idea in my head LOL
17:42 No Dap: thats nearly
17:42 No Dap: extra lvl
17:42 pkmnyab: should i just delete 00:16:100 (5) - 
17:42 No Dap: even in extra it should be questionable
17:42 No Dap: no
17:42 No Dap: stack 4 on 5
17:43 No Dap: let me come up with a better flow for you
17:44 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515922
17:45 pkmnyab: nice, fixed
17:45 No Dap: 00:17:800 (3,1) - i will kill you
17:45 No Dap: 00:17:400 (2,3) - also
17:45 pkmnyab: wtf it's not that hard
17:45 No Dap: horrible flow
17:46 pkmnyab: the flow there is fine imo
17:46 No Dap: no
17:46 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515926 this is what i'd do
17:47 No Dap: but if you want to keep it as it is its fine
17:47 No Dap: i aint no BAT no trouble
17:47 pkmnyab: fixed
17:49 No Dap: 00:32:400 (6) - 
17:49 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515933?
17:49 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515933 ?
17:49 pkmnyab: k
17:50 No Dap: 00:33:600 (3) - move it to 368 264
17:50 No Dap: the flow makes more sense 
17:50 No Dap: 00:32:800 (7) - 00:33:800 (4) - stack?
17:51 pkmnyab: done
17:52 No Dap: 00:34:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really get how you came up with this jump
17:52 No Dap: was it random
17:52 pkmnyab: i have no idea
17:52 pkmnyab: i should probably fix that
17:52 No Dap: I will 
17:53 No Dap: 00:35:000 (2) - stack on 00:35:400 (4) - 
17:53 No Dap: 00:35:200 (3) -  stack on00:33:600 (3) - 
17:53 No Dap: if you do fix the flow her 00:35:400 (4,5,6) - 
17:53 No Dap: accodring to 00:35:200 (3) - 
17:54 pkmnyab: fixed
17:55 No Dap: how did you fix 00:35:400 (4,5,6) - 
17:55 No Dap: show me
17:55 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/b9ab648aa37885a9545f749341df13dc
17:56 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515956
17:56 No Dap: make them go up more
17:56 pkmnyab: k
17:56 No Dap: 00:37:000 (1) - delete NC
17:57 pkmnyab: 00:36:800 (4,1,2,3,4,5) -  this part bgus me
17:57 No Dap: no that part is fine
17:57 No Dap: plays very well
17:58 No Dap: 00:39:000 (1,2) - k let me teach you 1 technique
17:58 No Dap: put a 1/1 slider with .5 SV
17:58 pkmnyab: 1/1 as in white tick to white tick
17:58 No Dap: it works very well when emphasizing kiai lead in
17:58 pkmnyab: or white to red
17:58 No Dap: i mean
17:58 No Dap: 1/2
17:58 No Dap: fml
17:58 pkmnyab: k
17:59 No Dap: 00:41:800 (6,7) - this is probably not a good idea
17:59 No Dap: considering you have stacked notes on 
17:59 No Dap: 00:40:200 (4,5) - 00:39:400 (1,2) - 
17:59 No Dap: decreae DS a bit
18:00 pkmnyab: decreased DS to 1.65x
18:00 No Dap: make em look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515962
18:01 No Dap: usually whe you have 3/4 its because you are emphasizing that the vocals are connected and holding
18:01 No Dap: if you have a jump, you're ruining the purpose
18:01 pkmnyab: i see
18:01 pkmnyab: ok, fixed
18:01 No Dap: 00:45:000 (3) - 
18:02 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515969 this flows much better imo
18:03 No Dap: if you don't understand why i did that please ask
18:03 No Dap: cuz if you don't learn anything from my suggestions its not worht 
18:03 No Dap: me doing this
18:04 pkmnyab: oh this does flow better
18:04 No Dap: 00:46:400 (3) - id rather have it like this
18:04 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515972
18:05 pkmnyab: k
18:05 No Dap: 00:45:800 (1,2) - also i think you should keep this as 1/1
18:06 No Dap: other parts like 00:46:600 (4,5) -  is fine
18:06 No Dap: because the vocal is strong and cutting
18:06 No Dap: whereas 00:45:800 (1,2) - this is pretty much connected 
18:06 pkmnyab: alright
18:06 pkmnyab: i hear what you mean
18:06 No Dap: 00:49:000 (1,2) - I think this might be too much spacing
18:06 No Dap: maybe 1.3?
18:08 pkmnyab: 1.3 between all of them?
18:08 No Dap: jut btwn 1 and 2
18:08 pkmnyab: k
18:09 No Dap: that 1/4 00:50:200 (5,6) - 
18:09 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515976 by this you get triangle and a jump 6->1
18:09 No Dap: also flows good
18:10 pkmnyab: alright
18:11 No Dap: 01:17:000 (4,5) - unstack
18:11 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515981 ?
18:13 pkmnyab: done
18:13 No Dap: 01:19:400 (1,2,3,4) - random jump 
18:13 No Dap: 01:19:800 (2) - this is the most problem here
18:13 pkmnyab: *beautiful jump
18:13 pkmnyab: hm should i curve that
18:14 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515987
18:14 No Dap: no
18:14 No Dap: stack 3 on 1 tail
18:14 No Dap: or if you can come up with a better one don't hesitate to do so
18:15 pkmnyab: ok i'll stick to your suggestion for now since it's pretty good
18:15 No Dap: 01:21:800 (3,4,5) - this is fine i guess
18:15 No Dap: but really no reason to make this part o hard
18:15 No Dap: so*
18:16 No Dap: decrease ds
18:16 pkmnyab: k
18:16 No Dap: let me know how you did
18:16 No Dap: becaue the next pattern needs to be reshaped too
18:17 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/9b0fe60b532191dd37dc8e6e980e97e0
18:19 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515992 I like this 
18:21 pkmnyab: o that's a nice pattern
18:21 pkmnyab: fixeddddddddddd
18:21 No Dap: 01:25:000 (3) - I would delete the middle point
18:21 No Dap: and make it straight
18:21 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1515996
18:21 pkmnyab: k
18:22 No Dap: 01:24:600 (2,2) -  stack and remake the trianle 01:26:400 (3) - 
18:22 No Dap: for the sake of clean ness
18:23 pkmnyab: done
18:24 No Dap: 01:30:200 (6) - you can do the .5 SV here too
18:24 No Dap: don't forget to NC if you do
18:24 pkmnyab: k
18:25 No Dap: 01:31:400 (5) - this S shape isnt really smooth
18:25 No Dap: so i  recommend just curving it the other way
18:25 pkmnyab: alright
18:25 No Dap: so it flows better with 01:31:800 (6) - 
18:25 pkmnyab: I have no idea what I was trying to do with that because making an s shape did not occur to me at all LOL
18:26 No Dap: lol
18:26 No Dap: 01:36:800 (4) - rather than stacking on head
18:27 No Dap: you can try blanket with 3
18:27 pkmnyab: 3 or 1
18:27 pkmnyab: o you mean under 3
18:28 No Dap: K I twaked it a bit
18:28 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516007
18:28 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8af8E.jpg
18:28 No Dap: I stacked evreything
18:28 No Dap: 01:37:000 (1,3) - 
18:29 No Dap: if you don't see or get something let me know
18:31 pkmnyab: got it
18:31 No Dap: 01:39:400 (3) - stack with 01:38:400 (8) - 
18:32 pkmnyab: k
18:32 No Dap: 01:41:401 (5,1) - matching shape?
18:32 No Dap: curve 1 
18:33 pkmnyab: done
18:33 pkmnyab: oh man the next part is killer
18:33 No Dap: actually id do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516014
18:33 No Dap: blanket 01:41:401 (5,6,7) - 
18:33 No Dap: also good flow
18:33 No Dap: 01:41:800 (6,7,1) - 
18:34 No Dap: 01:43:400 (1) - she needs to go on a diet
18:34 pkmnyab: omg pls
18:34 No Dap: lol
18:34 No Dap: did you fix everything
18:34 pkmnyab: yep
18:35 No Dap: 01:43:800 (2,3,4,5) - definitely reduce DS
18:35 No Dap: this isn't extra
18:35 pkmnyab: k i stacked 01:43:400 (1,4) - 
18:36 No Dap: 01:42:200 (7,1) - i hope you stacked these too
18:36 pkmnyab: wait what
18:36 pkmnyab: 01:42:400 (1,2,3) -  the whole thing on 7?
18:37 No Dap: wot
18:37 No Dap: oh
18:37 No Dap: 01:43:400 (1,4) - 
18:37 No Dap: lol
18:37 No Dap: my bad
18:37 pkmnyab: T_T
18:37 No Dap: 01:43:000 (1) - delete NC here
18:37 pkmnyab: done
18:38 No Dap: ` 01:49:800 (1,2,3) - nice job
18:38 No Dap: 01:51:600 (2) - you can delete this
18:38 No Dap: tis not needed and this is a good place for an anti jump
18:38 pkmnyab: tyty
18:39 No Dap: 01:51:400 (1) - stack on 01:51:800 (2) - 
18:39 pkmnyab: done
18:40 No Dap: actuall
18:40 No Dap: y
18:40 No Dap: Id do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516030
18:40 No Dap: the jump01:50:800 (4,5,6,7) - WTF 1/6
18:40 No Dap: pls make this kick slider
18:40 pkmnyab: ?
18:40 No Dap: 01:50:800 (4,5,6,7) - 
18:40 No Dap: make this kick slider
18:41 pkmnyab: a what
18:41 No Dap: kick slider
18:41 No Dap: like this 01:53:400 (1) - 
18:41 pkmnyab: yea I have no idea what that is
18:41 No Dap: short reverse slider
18:41 pkmnyab: o
18:41 pkmnyab: done
18:41 No Dap: 01:57:799 (1,2) - DS pls
18:42 No Dap: 01:58:200 (2) - 404 152?
18:42 pkmnyab: k
18:42 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516033
18:42 No Dap: I curved this 01:57:799 (1) - 
18:43 No Dap:  and considering how strong this beat i 01:58:400 (3) -  jump fits well imo
18:43 No Dap: 01:58:400 (3,4,5) - DS pls
18:43 pkmnyab: omg 
18:44 No Dap: 02:05:800 (1,2,3,4) - you probably want to keep the spacing consistent here
18:44 pkmnyab: done
18:45 No Dap: 02:15:800 (5,6,7) - spacing
18:45 pkmnyab: ;_;
18:45 No Dap: 02:19:200 (5,6,7) - here too
18:45 No Dap: 02:21:000 (4,5) - blanket better rofl
18:46 pkmnyab: done
18:46 No Dap: 02:21:900 (1) - finish like other diff
18:47 No Dap: 02:28:200 (1,2,3) - don't make me kill you again
18:47 pkmnyab: yup, normal finish
18:47 pkmnyab: wtf
18:47 pkmnyab: that's so soft
18:48 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8agwi.jpg do this
18:48 No Dap: follow the base here
18:48 No Dap: dont overmap
18:48 pkmnyab: alright
18:48 No Dap: 02:30:200 (2,3,4) - spacing here
18:49 pkmnyab: k
18:50 No Dap: 02:34:200 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516044 ?
18:50 No Dap: 02:35:000 (3,4,5,6) - stack on this fits really well imo
18:50 No Dap: since 02:35:000 (3) - this beat
18:50 No Dap: theres like a tick sound
18:50 No Dap: or whatever
18:52 pkmnyab: done
18:52 No Dap: 02:35:800 (7) - stack on 02:34:200 (7) - 
18:53 No Dap: 02:36:000 (8) - move to somewhere like this
18:53 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1516049
18:54 pkmnyab: k
18:54 No Dap: 02:34:800 (2,1) - stack pls
18:55 No Dap: 02:37:000 (5) - curve is the other way
18:55 No Dap: flows so bad
18:56 pkmnyab:    k
18:56 No Dap: 02:37:400 (7) - you better curve this the other way too
18:56 No Dap: 02:38:600 (5,6,7,1) - DS
18:56 No Dap: put 02:38:600 (5,6) - closer
18:57 No Dap: like other
18:57 pkmnyab: k
18:57 No Dap: 02:40:200 (3,4,5) - Hi there
18:57 pkmnyab: ḱ
18:57 pkmnyab: yooooooooooooo
19:00 No Dap: 02:43:000 (2,5) -  stack on 02:41:700 (4) - 
19:00 No Dap: 02:42:600 (1) - stack on02:41:400 (2) - 
19:01 pkmnyab: k
19:01 No Dap: k the rest looks good

Thank you for taking your time to mod the map!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-04-17T08:25:16+00:00

This video <3

Speaking of it.

Please uncheck this. When the break comes, It's a bit annoying to try and watch the video only to have most of it cut off ;_;

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-04-18T07:01:15+00:00

examination wrote:
Hihi~ ~~M4M~~~ From my modding queue~
Wow it's a nice song >_>

[Kibbleru's Easy]
00:29:800 (1,3) - If these two sliders follow the same style,it will look better lol hmm i have considered this b4 just was 2 lazy to change xD but ok fixed
00:50:200 (2) - DS problem I know what you thought so just move all owo how did that happen? oh well fixed nice catch~
SPOILER
01:33:800 (1,2) - A blanket here~ nah
01:37:800 (2,3) - ^ nah
01:56:200 (1,2) - I think make it a blanket like this looks better nah
SPOILER
02:45:800 (1) - The angle is too large and looks a bit weird,Try to make the angle smaller. i made it larger

Nice mapset~
Will rank soon lol~~

code

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Creator:pkmnyab
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468,244,146600,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,147400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,148200,2,0,P|272:276|196:300,2,100,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,149800,6,0,P|428:108|400:64,1,100,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,20,150600,2,0,P|313:81|289:127,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
292,216,151400,2,0,P|350:194|402:192,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,300,152600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,300,153000,5,0,1:2:0:0:
112,204,153400,2,0,P|84:196|56:184,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,154200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,116,154600,2,0,P|298:54|322:8,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,144,156200,6,0,P|172:120|196:100,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,200,157000,2,0,P|148:224|124:244,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
120,328,157800,2,0,P|76:351|26:358,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,308,159000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
312,280,159400,6,0,B|356:300|356:300|408:284|408:284|460:304|516:276,1,200,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,196,160600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
372,136,161000,2,0,B|392:108|392:108|404:72|428:48,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,164,162200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
204,232,162600,6,0,L|120:168,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,264,163400,2,0,L|167:324,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,364,164200,1,2,1:2:0:0:
324,284,164600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,276,165000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
400,180,165400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
460,100,165800,6,4,P|424:64|380:92,1,100,6|12,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
400,180,166600,2,0,P|320:164|296:140,1,100,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,220,167400,2,0,P|258:297|249:330,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
212,120,168600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
308,148,169000,5,4,1:2:0:0:

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Okoayu 2014-04-18T09:17:57+00:00

So here it is:
from my queue

[Insane]

Imma nazi a bit about some things, and maybe I'll be making some suggestions aswell (this diff is nice)

00:18:200 (1) - might stack properly
00:36:600 (3) - ^
00:39:800 (2) - ^
01:08:600 (3) - Something like this might look nicer
SPOILER

-up to you-
01:10:800 (6) - might stack properly
01:42:400 (1,2) - ^
01:45:500 - might want to map this vocal ?
01:57:300 - might want to map this sound aswell?
02:00:900 (1) - might move this one and the whole stream so it matches the distance between 02:00:700 (5) - and 02:00:100 (2) - on the grid?
SPOILER

The distance between 02:00:700 (5) - and 02:00:100 (2) -

The distance between 02:00:300 (3) - and 02:00:900 (1) -
02:11:500 - might add a circle for this strong sound? (you map it here aswell: 02:17:700 (4) - )
02:13:800 (1) - might stack properly
02:17:200 (1,2) - might stack properly
02:29:400 (6) - why is it shorter ?? I see no reason to not end it on the red tick
SPOILER
02:42:400 (7) - consider stacking with the anchor of 02:41:400 (3) -

That's all, overall really nice.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-19T15:19:35+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
So here it is:
from my queue
[Insane]

Imma nazi a bit about some things, and maybe I'll be making some suggestions aswell (this diff is nice)

00:18:200 (1) - might stack properly fixed
00:36:600 (3) - ^ fixed
00:39:800 (2) - ^ fixed
01:08:600 (3) - Something like this might look nicer changed it differently
SPOILER

-up to you-
01:10:800 (6) - might stack properly fixed
01:42:400 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:45:500 - might want to map this vocal ? mapped, looks much nicer now
01:57:300 - might want to map this sound aswell? I prefer to leave this empty because if I map this the objects will be a bit crowded. Maybe if I can find a way to make it look nice later I will map it.
02:00:900 (1) - might move this one and the whole stream so it matches the distance between 02:00:700 (5) - and 02:00:100 (2) - on the grid?
SPOILER
nice change, fixed
The distance between 02:00:700 (5) - and 02:00:100 (2) -

The distance between 02:00:300 (3) - and 02:00:900 (1) -
02:11:500 - might add a circle for this strong sound? (you map it here aswell: 02:17:700 (4) - ) fixed
02:13:800 (1) - might stack properly fixed
02:17:200 (1,2) - might stack properly fixed
02:29:400 (6) - why is it shorter ?? I see no reason to not end it on the red tick fixed
SPOILER
02:42:400 (7) - consider stacking with the anchor of 02:41:400 (3) - fixed
That's all, overall really nice.

Thanks for modding!

Lanturn wrote:
This video <3

Speaking of it.

Please uncheck this. When the break comes, It's a bit annoying to try and watch the video only to have most of it cut off ;_;

Sorry I didn't see this earlier, my email notifications must have broken or something. Letterbox is unchecked in all diffs

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-20T21:17:27+00:00

Hey, M4M for Kibbleru queue

Normal

00:15:200 - There's a sudden space here, which typically breaks the pattern that you had going on here. Consider adding a note here, since you seem to be following the vocals in this part. Placing a note here will hit the vocals "ta" in utau that's said here.

00:18:400 - a Not should be added here as well, so it will fulfill the vocal saying "tsu - ku - ra" as a run on (meaning you hear no pause or break from the vocals when he/she is saying the phrase).

00:21:600 -Add a note here, same reason as 00:15:200 - . There is no break or pause for the vocals, they continue.
00:24:800 - ^

00:26:600 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.
00:33:000 (1) - ^

00:49:800 (3) - Remove the finish it sounds too much here. Plus, you don't hear any cymbal crash here either, so please refrain of overusing this loud hitsound.

01:08:800 - Needs a note. In the previous rhythm in correspondence to this one, you've used a note on 01:05:600 (2) - .

01:17:800 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.

01:33:800 (1) - Personally, I think this flow looks weird. It shows no proper alignment from 01:33:800 (1) - 's tail to 01:34:600 (2) - . Try using this flow instead:

SPOILER

172,212,93800,6,0,P|108:188|52:208,1,120,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,308,94600,2,0,P|172:332|228:304,2,120,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:

01:43:400 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.

01:44:600 (3,5) - Move more apart, I can still see 01:45:800 (5) - touching the remains of 01:44:600 (3) - .

01:50:200 - 01:54:600 How the NC steak should look:

Where there is a NC at 01:50:200 and 01:52:600.

02:32:200 (5,2) - Try to stack these notes by the head, or don't bother having them overlapping like this, because it looks really disorganized right now.

Hard

00:27:400 (3,5) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please try to make 00:27:400 (3) - blanket 00:28:200 (5) - 's end better, like this for instance:

00:43:400 (3,4) - ^ Same suggestion as above
00:45:600 (7,1) - ^
00:45:800 (1,3) - ^

01:43:400 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.

02:20:200 (1,2) - Still think you could improve the blanket here.

02:32:800 (8,1) - ^ Move these notes higher?

02:39:200 (5,1) - ^

This diff would actually look pretty decent, if it wasn't for all these bad blankets >_<

Good luck!

pkk

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-20T22:02:16+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, M4M for Kibbleru queue
Normal
Added notes in all parts where you suggested
00:15:200 - There's a sudden space here, which typically breaks the pattern that you had going on here. Consider adding a note here, since you seem to be following the vocals in this part. Placing a note here will hit the vocals "ta" in utau that's said here.

00:18:400 - a Not should be added here as well, so it will fulfill the vocal saying "tsu - ku - ra" as a run on (meaning you hear no pause or break from the vocals when he/she is saying the phrase).

00:21:600 -Add a note here, same reason as 00:15:200 - . There is no break or pause for the vocals, they continue.
00:24:800 - ^

00:26:600 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. fixed
00:33:000 (1) - ^ fixed

00:49:800 (3) - Remove the finish it sounds too much here. Plus, you don't hear any cymbal crash here either, so please refrain of overusing this loud hitsound. I think this one is fine, I use the finish here to emphasize vocal. The reason I have another finish is because one finish alone sounds awkward, but if other people point this out then I will consider changing it.

01:08:800 - Needs a note. In the previous rhythm in correspondence to this one, you've used a note on 01:05:600 (2) - .

01:17:800 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. fixed

01:33:800 (1) - Personally, I think this flow looks weird. It shows no proper alignment from 01:33:800 (1) - 's tail to 01:34:600 (2) - . Try using this flow instead:
SPOILER
172,212,93800,6,0,P|108:188|52:208,1,120,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,308,94600,2,0,P|172:332|228:304,2,120,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
This is fine, I angle the first slider that way so that it flows well from the previous note, and then from that slider to the next is a drop, which I think flows well.
01:43:400 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.

01:44:600 (3,5) - Move more apart, I can still see 01:45:800 (5) - touching the remains of 01:44:600 (3) - . fixed

01:50:200 - 01:54:600 How the NC steak should look: fixed

Where there is a NC at 01:50:200 and 01:52:600.

02:32:200 (5,2) - Try to stack these notes by the head, or don't bother having them overlapping like this, because it looks really disorganized right now.
stacked
Hard
00:27:400 (3,5) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please try to make 00:27:400 (3) - blanket 00:28:200 (5) - 's end better, like this for instance: fixed

00:43:400 (3,4) - ^ Same suggestion as above fixed
00:45:600 (7,1) - ^ fixed
00:45:800 (1,3) - ^ fixed

01:43:400 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. fixed

02:20:200 (1,2) - Still think you could improve the blanket here. fixed

02:32:800 (8,1) - ^ Move these notes higher? fixed

02:39:200 (5,1) - ^ fixed

This diff would actually look pretty decent, if it wasn't for all these bad blankets >_< crystalmask senpai pls, I sleep with blankets every night so I think I know how to blanket omg im so bad at blankets
Good luck!

Thank you for modding!

Don

218 posts

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Don 2014-04-21T12:51:43+00:00

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-21T15:05:10+00:00

Hi

pkk

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Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-21T15:15:57+00:00

SPOILER

Don wrote:
Hey! From M4M. Sorry I don't really have a lot to say! I really enjoyed the map as is.

Consider fixing spacing your hard and insane.

Normal
00:31:391 (3) - http://puu.sh/8gE6t.jpg
00:43:177 (1) - ^
01:06:534 (5) - Claps here feel too much. Consider removing them as they overlap with the music
02:06:963 (1) - This stack doesn't feel fitting as the rest of the song doesn't use similar stacks.
03:27:534 (1,2) - ^
04:12:320 (6,1) - Turn these into a short slider

Hard
I like the sliders! Generally, spacing is very inconsistent. Notes like 03:14:034 (3) feel hard to play because of the spacing. I won't really name it much more, try distance snapping your difficulty. Don't feel afraid to change spacing from time to time, just be consistent and don't randomly change it.
00:32:249 (3,4,5) - Spacing here feels very inconsistent
01:20:034 (3) - Move this one a little bit down
02:06:534 (4,5) - I feel like these notes don't flow well
02:59:677 (3) - http://puu.sh/8htfo.jpg
03:06:963 (4) - I feel like this stack doesn't really fit well

Insane
Once again, try to keep spacing consistent! Try only to break distance spacing when you're doing a pattern. It feels kind of like a mess. Great difficulty nonetheless and not a lot to say about it apart from that, though!
00:36:107 (7) - Move this note a little down
01:58:820 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/8htUo.jpg

Yo man you posted Kibbleru's map mod on my thread LOL, here copy and paste this to t/197940/start=45 . You'll be doing M4M with Kibbleru, have fun!

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-24T15:56:28+00:00

omg you gave me the wrong link and i posted here

pkk

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Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-24T15:57:39+00:00

No Dap wrote:
omg you gave me the wrong link and i posted here

hue

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-04-24T21:15:33+00:00

Mod time. Been busy last couple days, but here I am!

[General]
Consider adding "GigaP" to your tags as some people have labeled these both ways.

[Easy]
Missing Video | I refuse to star this map until it comes back </3

00:13:400 (1) - Please remove this note. It's hard enough for a new players as is when there isn't anything major sounding to hit besides a random beat thing in the background. Highly highly recommended. Easy diffs are much better started with a slider anyways.
00:10:600 (1) - If you do the above, maybe consider ending this at 00:13:000 - so the length of the spinner is a bit longer. If you do this, consider placing 00:13:800 (2) - closer to the middle.
00:22:200 (4,5,1) - You should consider using the same level of descent, for which you ascended 00:19:800 (4,1) - to. What? Put (4) lower, and rework (5,1) to fit. | http://puu.sh/8imMe.jpg | First thing that bugged me was the oddly placed (5) slider so I'm offering this
00:37:800 (3) - Add a small curve into this so it gives better flow to the next notes. | http://puu.sh/8imXv.jpg
00:41:000 (3) - This slider really bugs me. I don't really have much of a suggestion though, Maybe try curving it just a bit more.
00:49:000 (1,3) - Try adding finishes to all points of these notes for more effect at the end of the Kiai.
00:50:600 (3) - Is the reverse missing a Normal sampleset? (I notice you don't do this to the other spots at this point in the kiai, so I won't mention this anymore)
01:06:600 (3) - Control+J and blanket? | http://puu.sh/8ioxP.jpg
01:22:600 (3) - I feel this slider could be improved on greatly as well. why not try to blanket it around the upcoming (4) or something? The current way you have the tail pointing makes it seem like its just there without any thought or focus on the notes around it.
01:24:200 (1,2,3) - All of these missing Normal sampleset?
01:29:000 (4,5) - For a bit of variety, how about trying to incorporate a 3/2 slider with a reverse? This will change up your constant 1/1 patterns a little bit, and hit the important note at 01:30:400 - | You can also try a 3/2 slider with a 1/2 slider afterwards at 01:30:000 -
01:43:000 (1) - Just a circle at 01:43:400 - ? It feels more correct to hit than a slider that begins too early.
01:41:800 (4) - Finishes on the points, much like 49 secs
02:05:800 (1) - Something like this? | http://puu.sh/8ipcT.jpg | Feels much more natural than how you currently have it curved. (which is pretty sharp again)
02:28:200 (3) - whistles on the head and reverse? Mostly for effect like you have on the previous set
02:31:400 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - A lot of these notes are missing normal sampleset. I don't think this is intentional?
02:45:800 (1) - This curve is way to tight. Try something like this | http://puu.sh/8ioia.jpg
02:45:800 (1,2,3) - same idea as 49 seconds with adding finishes to the heads of (1,2,3) and the reverse and end of (3)
02:46:600 (2) - and one more missing Normal sampleset on the head of this.

[Normal]

00:18:600 (3,4) - Try joining these up as a slider? that way it doesn't make hitting 3 circles in a row so awkward.
00:16:600 (1) - reverse 1/2 slider? to capture all of the watashi.. Or you can make this a 1/2 slider with a 1/1 slider afterwards? | This gets rid of the incorrect slider startings (as they normally begin on the big white tick or the middle small white tick on Easy/Normal Diffs)
00:21:600 (4) - for the sake of a normal, how about removing this so you don't have such a long chain of 1/2 notes?
00:37:800 (3) - x242 y260 for a proper stack?
00:36:200 (1) - Missing Normal sampleset
00:42:200 (5) - Just a normal circle is enough, no need for a 1/2 slider because of the lyrics and nothing actually plays on the end of the slider.
00:48:000 - Add a note here?
00:48:200 (4) - Missing Normal sampleset on Tail.
01:07:000 (5) - Slight curve so it flows a bit better into (6)? | http://puu.sh/8jq3R.jpg
01:08:200 (1) - More nazi. Try moving this up and left a little bit with Distance snap, then have the tail end flow/curve a bit more nicely into the next two notes. | http://puu.sh/8jqcE.jpg
01:09:800 (4) - Missing normal as well?
01:20:600 (6) - ^
01:25:000 (2) - There is a similar descent between the previous and next notes. so Why not just make the slider horizontally bound? | http://puu.sh/8jqu2.jpg maybe?
01:29:000 (4,5) - This is kind of a repeat of what I mentioned in Easy, but how about a pattern like this so it feels more compatible with the music? | http://puu.sh/8jpVn.jpg
01:33:800 (1) - Missing normal on Tail
01:36:200 (4) - More 1/2's? Try a circle and then a 1/2 slider maybe? Just so there is a bit more variety in the kiai time.
01:42:200 (2) - Normal missing here? or is this intentional? Thought I'd just leave this in-case
01:44:600 (3) - Normal Circle here? It feels like it'd match the other patterns since they all use 1/2 notes.
01:49:000 (3,4) - Try swapping these so it goes the reverse slider, then the circle. This will mimic the pattern at 01:50:600 (2,1) -
01:55:400 (5) - probably missing normal here as well.
02:15:000 (3) - Mostly just a suggestion so you can retain your big white tick back. Try changing this to a circle and adding a circle or slider to the now empty spot.
02:32:000 - another circle? You have a big gap of 1/1s coming up, so it'd be awesome to have a little more variety.
02:35:400 (5) - Stuff like this you can use the lead-in 1/2 slider if you want (Like 1:36)
02:37:800 (3) - Missing normal on head
02:40:200 (2) - Missing normal on reverse
02:44:200 (3) - stack this on (1)
02:44:800 - Circle?

[Hard]

I don't really understand your NC patterning for this diff. Most of them are two measures, but there are quite a number that only last 1 measure
http://puu.sh/8leuO.jpg & http://puu.sh/8leAz.jpg | As you can see in this, It is very very inconsistent. I highly highly recommend going through this and NCing every measure so you don't end up with random long 9+ combos and keep them around 4-5.
00:18:600 (1,2,3,4) - A lot of these notes are missing the Normal hit sound. Try turning down your music volume while keeping the effect high. It sticks out pretty badly
00:32:000 (3) - how about a Normal on the head?
00:47:400 (5) - Missing normal sampleset
00:51:000 (2) - missing Normal as well?
01:07:400 (7) - whistle on slider intentional?
01:30:600 (1) - Missing finish on head (comparing to first kiai)
01:36:200 (7) - Missing normal on tail?
00:49:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Read below ---v
01:40:200 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Try a finish on (1,3)'s head, and then the second (1,2,3) with all finishes. Remove (2,4)'s finishes.
02:33:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same idea.
02:45:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same idea, just to reduce finish spam a litt.e remove from (2,4)
01:45:400 (2) - Missing normal
01:49:400 (3) - ^
01:51:000 (4) - ^ on tail
01:55:000 (2) - This is intentional with the normal on the tail?
02:11:800 (4,4) - Not sure if this is intended as well, maybe, for not having Normal
02:29:800 (1) - Finish?
So that about wraps up the hitsounding. Be sure to turn your music down to low when you edit the above part
00:17:400 (2) - Lower the tail end of this by a bit? It has such a tight curve.
00:20:000 (4) - x236 y250 to stack with the previous (2) properly.
00:45:000 (6) - x279 y229
01:16:000 (5) - Maybe try moving this just a bit lower to like x205 y305 so it'll help slowly decrease your big spacing you've been using for the past few notes?
01:17:800 (1,2) - Make these a 180° rotate of each other? you have two different sliders right now and it kinda ruins the point of having them rotated like this.
01:22:600 (1) - Lift the end of this up a bit more so it provides some extra flow to the next couple notes | http://puu.sh/8lYIm.jpg
01:27:200 (9) - Honestly, try putting this off to the left instead of stacking so it gets the same feel as (4,5,6) |
01:31:400 (3,4) - This feels kind of sharp, and doesn't look that great overall. Maybe try coming off the bottom end? or redesigning the shape of it? | http://puu.sh/8lZ6U.jpg
01:43:400 (1,3) - This awkward placing really makes it visually annoying to look at. It feels way too cluttered to understand what's going on with only the 1/2 (2) slider to serve as a gap. I feel this needs to be moved elsewhere, instead of crammed up with all the other notes.
02:32:000 (6) - x215 y168 for a proper stack (currently x216)
02:45:600 (8,3) - Eh, I realize you aren't a fan of stacking, but why not at least these?

[Insane]

00:18:600 (3) - Normal
00:31:400 (1) - Feels like it's missing a normal (maybe add one for (2) as well. This is just trying to go with the flow of the hitsounding)
00:35:400 (4) - Normal
00:39:800 (2) - ^
01:07:400 (4) - ^
01:09:800 (1) - ^
01:30:600 (1) - Finish?
01:37:800 (4) - Normal
01:51:800 (2,4) - and this whole section around it. probably missing some normal hits as well. I suggest going through this yourself so you get what you want. Again, listen at 10% music volume so you can hear the hitsounds.
02:10:600 (4) - Normal
02:38:600 (5) - ^
02:39:400 (1) - ^
02:41:400 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - what.. happened? You completely ignored all of your normal sampleset???
00:25:400 (2,3) - Swap places? It'd make the stream less stupid to try and hit lol.
00:30:400 (2) - x216 y108 so it fits more naturally in the blanket the (1) slider provided?
00:45:600 (4) - Maybe try stacking on the previous (2) for more circular flow and having a nice triangle?
01:09:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try remaking this with the polygon creator. Right now if you line up all your notes in a circle. they have varied distance snapping. Go to 1/2 Beat snap divisor and try at 1.4ish distance snapping with 5 circles (you can add the extra one later, as it'll just be a stacked note. Control+G them around after.
01:22:100 (4) - Make the distance spacing between these even? It looks really sloppy.
01:45:400 (2) - x12 y172?
02:21:400 (5) - I'm surprised you didn't make this a stream. It would work pretty well actually. from the start to end. Try just converting the slider to a stream so you get nice spacing :3
02:48:800 (7,8) - even out this spacing? Currently 1.14 while the rest are 1.10 or 1.09

Good luck. Have a

.... When the video is readded on Easy ;_;

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-04-24T22:26:06+00:00

Fixed about 95%

GD update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Kagamine Rin & LenElectricAngel .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39000
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Angel
TitleUnicode:えれくとりっく・えんじぇぅ
Artist:Giga-P
ArtistUnicode:ギガP
Creator:pkmnyab
Version:Kibbleru's Easy
Source:
Tags:Kagamine Rin Len Vocaloid Kibbleru Yasuo-P Orebanana-P
BeatmapID:367011
BeatmapSetID:146794

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
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DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-24T23:12:09+00:00

mission

SPOILER

go to a cave

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-25T00:19:56+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Mod time. Been busy last couple days, but here I am!

[General]
Consider adding "GigaP" to your tags as some people have labeled these both ways.done

[Normal]
00:18:600 (3,4) - Try joining these up as a slider? that way it doesn't make hitting 3 circles in a row so awkward. fixed
00:16:600 (1) - reverse 1/2 slider? to capture all of the watashi.. Or you can make this a 1/2 slider with a 1/1 slider afterwards? | This gets rid of the incorrect slider startings (as they normally begin on the big white tick or the middle small white tick on Easy/Normal Diffs) fixed with 1/2 and 1/1 slider
00:21:600 (4) - for the sake of a normal, how about removing this so you don't have such a long chain of 1/2 notes? alright
00:37:800 (3) - x242 y260 for a proper stack? properly stacked
00:36:200 (1) - Missing Normal sampleset added
00:42:200 (5) - Just a normal circle is enough, no need for a 1/2 slider because of the lyrics and nothing actually plays on the end of the slider. alright
00:48:000 - Add a note here? fixed
00:48:200 (4) - Missing Normal sampleset on Tail. fixed
01:07:000 (5) - Slight curve so it flows a bit better into (6)? | http://puu.sh/8jq3R.jpg fixed
01:08:200 (1) - More nazi. Try moving this up and left a little bit with Distance snap, then have the tail end flow/curve a bit more nicely into the next two notes. | http://puu.sh/8jqcE.jpg fixed
01:09:800 (4) - Missing normal as well? added
01:20:600 (6) - ^ added
01:25:000 (2) - There is a similar descent between the previous and next notes. so Why not just make the slider horizontally bound? | http://puu.sh/8jqu2.jpg maybe? fixed, but also reversed and rearranged a few notes after
01:29:000 (4,5) - This is kind of a repeat of what I mentioned in Easy, but how about a pattern like this so it feels more compatible with the music? | http://puu.sh/8jpVn.jpg cool, fixed
01:33:800 (1) - Missing normal on Tail added
01:36:200 (4) - More 1/2's? Try a circle and then a 1/2 slider maybe? Just so there is a bit more variety in the kiai time. fixed
01:42:200 (2) - Normal missing here? or is this intentional? Thought I'd just leave this in-case yea this was intentional, it sounded really weird when I put normal there so I left it out
01:44:600 (3) - Normal Circle here? It feels like it'd match the other patterns since they all use 1/2 notes. oh this is nice, fixed
01:49:000 (3,4) - Try swapping these so it goes the reverse slider, then the circle. This will mimic the pattern at 01:50:600 (2,1) - fixed
01:55:400 (5) - probably missing normal here as well. added
02:15:000 (3) - Mostly just a suggestion so you can retain your big white tick back. Try changing this to a circle and adding a circle or slider to the now empty spot. turned into 1/2 slider and added hit circle on bit white tick
02:32:000 - another circle? You have a big gap of 1/1s coming up, so it'd be awesome to have a little more variety. fixed
02:35:400 (5) - Stuff like this you can use the lead-in 1/2 slider if you want (Like 1:36) added note at 02:36:000 - instead right after slider
02:37:800 (3) - Missing normal on head added
02:40:200 (2) - Missing normal on reverse added
02:44:200 (3) - stack this on (1) fixed
02:44:800 - Circle? fixed
[Hard]
I don't really understand your NC patterning for this diff. Most of them are two measures, but there are quite a number that only last 1 measure
http://puu.sh/8leuO.jpg & http://puu.sh/8leAz.jpg | As you can see in this, It is very very inconsistent. I highly highly recommend going through this and NCing every measure so you don't end up with random long 9+ combos and keep them around 4-5. fixed, NC pattern changed to every 2 measures
00:18:600 (1,2,3,4) - A lot of these notes are missing the Normal hit sound. Try turning down your music volume while keeping the effect high. It sticks out pretty badly haha yea I seem to forget to re add the normal when I delete/add notes
00:32:000 (3) - how about a Normal on the head? added
00:47:400 (5) - Missing normal sampleset fixed
00:51:000 (2) - missing Normal as well? this is intentional
01:07:400 (7) - whistle on slider intentional? yea, intentional since the vocal had nothing much going on
01:30:600 (1) - Missing finish on head (comparing to first kiai) added
01:36:200 (7) - Missing normal on tail? added
00:49:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Read below ---v
01:40:200 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Try a finish on (1,3)'s head, and then the second (1,2,3) with all finishes. Remove (2,4)'s finishes. fixed
02:33:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same idea. fixed
02:45:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same idea, just to reduce finish spam a litt.e remove from (2,4) fixed
01:45:400 (2) - Missing normal added all
01:49:400 (3) - ^
01:51:000 (4) - ^ on tail
01:55:000 (2) - This is intentional with the normal on the tail? oops, fixed
02:11:800 (4,4) - Not sure if this is intended as well, maybe, for not having Normal added
02:29:800 (1) - Finish? added
So that about wraps up the hitsounding. Be sure to turn your music down to low when you edit the above part thanks for the tip
00:17:400 (2) - Lower the tail end of this by a bit? It has such a tight curve. fixed
00:20:000 (4) - x236 y250 to stack with the previous (2) properly. fixed
00:45:000 (6) - x279 y229 stacked with first hitcircle instead
01:16:000 (5) - Maybe try moving this just a bit lower to like x205 y305 so it'll help slowly decrease your big spacing you've been using for the past few notes? alright
01:17:800 (1,2) - Make these a 180° rotate of each other? you have two different sliders right now and it kinda ruins the point of having them rotated like this. fixed
01:22:600 (1) - Lift the end of this up a bit more so it provides some extra flow to the next couple notes | http://puu.sh/8lYIm.jpg fixed
01:27:200 (9) - Honestly, try putting this off to the left instead of stacking so it gets the same feel as (4,5,6) | nice, fixed
01:31:400 (3,4) - This feels kind of sharp, and doesn't look that great overall. Maybe try coming off the bottom end? or redesigning the shape of it? | http://puu.sh/8lZ6U.jpg fixed
01:43:400 (1,3) - This awkward placing really makes it visually annoying to look at. It feels way too cluttered to understand what's going on with only the 1/2 (2) slider to serve as a gap. I feel this needs to be moved elsewhere, instead of crammed up with all the other notes. stacked the notes after this with this slider to tidy it up
02:32:000 (6) - x215 y168 for a proper stack (currently x216)
02:45:600 (8,3) - Eh, I realize you aren't a fan of stacking, but why not at least these? stacked these earlier but I didn't update the difficulty xD thanks for pointing it out anyways
[Insane]
00:18:600 (3) - Normal
00:31:400 (1) - Feels like it's missing a normal (maybe add one for (2) as well. This is just trying to go with the flow of the hitsounding) added all hit sounds
00:35:400 (4) - Normal
00:39:800 (2) - ^
01:07:400 (4) - ^
01:09:800 (1) - ^
01:30:600 (1) - Finish?
01:37:800 (4) - Normal
01:51:800 (2,4) - and this whole section around it. probably missing some normal hits as well. I suggest going through this yourself so you get what you want. Again, listen at 10% music volume so you can hear the hitsounds.
02:10:600 (4) - Normal
02:38:600 (5) - ^
02:39:400 (1) - ^
02:41:400 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - what.. happened? You completely ignored all of your normal sampleset???
00:25:400 (2,3) - Swap places? It'd make the stream less stupid to try and hit lol. fixed
00:30:400 (2) - x216 y108 so it fits more naturally in the blanket the (1) slider provided? fixed
00:45:600 (4) - Maybe try stacking on the previous (2) for more circular flow and having a nice triangle? fixed
01:09:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try remaking this with the polygon creator. Right now if you line up all your notes in a circle. they have varied distance snapping. Go to 1/2 Beat snap divisor and try at 1.4ish distance snapping with 5 circles (you can add the extra one later, as it'll just be a stacked note. Control+G them around after. fixed
01:22:100 (4) - Make the distance spacing between these even? It looks really sloppy. fixed
01:45:400 (2) - x12 y172? fixed
02:21:400 (5) - I'm surprised you didn't make this a stream. It would work pretty well actually. from the start to end. Try just converting the slider to a stream so you get nice spacing :3 this was actually a stream for quite a while before I changed it to a slider because the slider right after the stream seemed a bit weird. I'll change it back to stream for now and ask people what they think
02:48:800 (7,8) - even out this spacing? Currently 1.14 while the rest are 1.10 or 1.09 fixed
Good luck. Have a .... When the video is readded on Easy ;_;

Thanks for modding! Video should be working, although no videos on any beat map appear to be showing up for me for some reason even though I enabled video ._.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-04-25T02:15:58+00:00

Yay! It's back <3 *throws star*

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2014-04-28T08:09:42+00:00

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General

Tell BATs to change title text colour to 253,179,179.
When you wrote on the tags, did you mean "GigaP"? What I see here is "Giga-P" which is already used on artist field

Easy

HP1? Really? You can use HP2 and it'll be okay
00:17:000 (1,2,3) - Doesn't this looks nicer: http://puu.sh/8qF1b.jpg (-:
00:29:800 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/8qF2K.jpg (-: You know, niceties.
00:45:800 (1,2,3) - Imperfect triangle formation. Whenever you're trying to make a triangle formation, rotate a slider 120 degree or -120 degree (both works) and place them properly.
00:52:200 (1) - Remove NC? Kind of nonsense to have just 1 combo to play (you'll feel how nonsense it is when playing with TAG mode)
01:11:000 (4,1) - Blanket please? It'll look nice, I swear.
01:11:000 (4,3) - Imperfect stack.
01:35:400 (3) - In order to perfectly symmetrize such sliderwave, make sure that the red sliderpoint is right on top of the slidertick, see example: http://puu.sh/8qFjK.jpg Don't forget to readjust the other sliderpoints.
02:44:200 (3,4,5,6) - What about http://puu.sh/8qFoo.jpg looks nicer ain't it? (-:

Nice diff.

Normal

00:12:200 (1,2) - Somehow it'll follow music better if you replace these with 3 circles.
00:17:800 (1) - Why NC?
00:37:800 (3) - Not a good way to create sliderwave. To make a good sliderwave, put sliderpoints this way: http://puu.sh/8qFym.jpg and make sure you put them in symmetrical way. This applies to other sliderwaves in this map as well.
01:14:600 (1) - Oh god what is this, I'm sorry, but this is just plain ugly. Put a simpler curve instead?
01:36:000 - Add note?
01:47:800 (3,1,2) - This is confusing for newbies. At least don't stack (3) with (2)
01:49:800 (1,1) - Remove NC?
01:55:800 (1) - ^

Hard

[00:21:800 (1,4) - Slightly imperfect stack (-:
00:33:000 (1) - Not a good sliderwave, refer to my guide on how to make good sliderwave on Normal. Watch out for others too!
00:41:600 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:800 (4) - What about a kickstream? I mean like http://puu.sh/8qFQp.jpg Trust me, it'll be nice. If you did apply this, apply to other similar parts too!
01:27:400 (1) - Not a good place for such spinner. I believe you could map this part (-:
01:33:800 (1) - This sliderwave is not bad actually. You could also use this as an example of good sliderwave.
02:13:800 (1,2) - Not a good jump )-:

Insane

00:14:600 (4,5) - Blanket please )-:
00:22:600 (4) - What about http://puu.sh/8qG2J.jpg ? Looks better ain't it?
00:31:000 (5) - Put it more symmetrical like http://puu.sh/8qG4c.jpg
00:51:200 (1) - Instead of a short spinner, why don't you map this part with, like, streams? It'll emphasize this part better.
01:11:000 (7) - Supposedly, if you want a perfect-flow star formation you should stack this with 01:10:000 (2) - instead.
01:30:200 (1) - Bad flow. I prefer 2 circle jumps instead of such hold slider.
01:33:800 (1,2) - Bad, especially because wrong overlapping
02:05:800 (1,2,3) - Not in a good pattern polarity. I suggest to add note at 02:06:000 - (better stack it with (2)) and 02:06:300 - stack it with (3).

Nice map, you're going in the right direction. Although you can still use more mods I'd like to give you some appreciation on this map.

Starred. Good luck.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-04-28T19:44:19+00:00

inverness wrote:
Mod request from my queue
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
Tell BATs to change title text colour to 253,179,179. sorry but I'm not sure what you mean by this/what this will do. Could you elaborate?
When you wrote on the tags, did you mean "GigaP"? What I see here is "Giga-P" which is already used on artist field someone said I should put the artist in the tags as well so I left it as Giga-P
Normal
00:12:200 (1,2) - Somehow it'll follow music better if you replace these with 3 circles. alright, fixed
00:17:800 (1) - Why NC? you're right, NC does seem a bit unnecessary here
00:37:800 (3) - Not a good way to create sliderwave. To make a good sliderwave, put sliderpoints this way: http://puu.sh/8qFym.jpg and make sure you put them in symmetrical way. This applies to other sliderwaves in this map as well. thanks, fixed
01:14:600 (1) - Oh god what is this, I'm sorry, but this is just plain ugly. Put a simpler curve instead? lol that slider shape, alright just a simple curve now
01:36:000 - Add note? I didn't add a note here in any of the other kiai times so I'd like to leave it as it is
01:47:800 (3,1,2) - This is confusing for newbies. At least don't stack (3) with (2) unstacked this
01:49:800 (1,1) - Remove NC? I think this is fine since it emphasizes the change in vocal
01:55:800 (1) - ^ I think I'd like to keep this as NC to match the start of the music in the break. I have NC because it's also the last note before the break, if there was a spinner after this I would not NC.
Hard
[00:21:800 (1,4) - Slightly imperfect stack (-: recreated slider to stack on tail
00:33:000 (1) - Not a good sliderwave, refer to my guide on how to make good sliderwave on Normal. Watch out for others too! fixed
00:41:600 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket. fixed
00:51:800 (4) - What about a kickstream? I mean like http://puu.sh/8qFQp.jpg Trust me, it'll be nice. If you did apply this, apply to other similar parts too! this is nice, fixed
01:27:400 (1) - Not a good place for such spinner. I believe you could map this part (-: ok, mapped
01:33:800 (1) - This sliderwave is not bad actually. You could also use this as an example of good sliderwave.
02:13:800 (1,2) - Not a good jump )-: fixed
Insane
00:14:600 (4,5) - Blanket please )-: increased spacing
00:22:600 (4) - What about http://puu.sh/8qG2J.jpg ? Looks better ain't it? yep this looks better, changed it to this except I did not have the whole slider head overlap the body
00:31:000 (5) - Put it more symmetrical like http://puu.sh/8qG4c.jpg I didn't want it in one line so I spaced it out a bit more
00:51:200 (1) - Instead of a short spinner, why don't you map this part with, like, streams? It'll emphasize this part better. I had a stream here before but it was sort of awkward, I'll see if I can find a nice way to arrange it
01:11:000 (7) - Supposedly, if you want a perfect-flow star formation you should stack this with 01:10:000 (2) - instead. fixed
01:30:200 (1) - Bad flow. I prefer 2 circle jumps instead of such hold slider. I feel that a slider matches this part better. I spaced this out from the next note a bit to create a jump so the flow should be a bit better now
01:33:800 (1,2) - Bad, especially because wrong overlapping stacked slider ends instead
02:05:800 (1,2,3) - Not in a good pattern polarity. I suggest to add note at 02:06:000 - (better stack it with (2)) and 02:06:300 - stack it with (3).
this is a nice change, fixed
Nice map, you're going in the right direction. Although you can still use more mods I'd like to give you some appreciation on this map.

Starred. Good luck.

Thanks for modding!

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2014-04-29T03:48:26+00:00

This is the title text.
253,179,179 is the RGB code for a pink color. Which means changing the title text color to 253,179,179 will recolor the title text to pink.
Why pink? It fits more to the background and less blending (current white color render the title text hard to see)

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-29T22:03:12+00:00

Such lewd SP. Report pls

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2014-05-01T14:18:34+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Such lewd SP. Report pls

not 69 anymore xD

Kibbleru

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5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-05-02T20:50:05+00:00

wait whats wrong with 69?

waxman

467 posts

Joined February 2012

waxman 2014-05-03T03:51:39+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Such lewd SP. Report pls

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Insane]
00:50:200 (5) - add Finish. it's better for me.

01:55:400 (7,1) - Not too bad, but I recommended take same spacing like 01:55:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1).
02:12:400 (1) - miss Clap.
02:29:400 (6,1) - 02:29:800 (1) move left a bit for beauty.
02:47:000 (6) - add Finish. same as 00:50:200 (5). PLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLS D:

[Hard]
00:20:800 (2) - x:172 y:184
00:25:800 (3) - stack on the beginning of 00:26:200 (4) perfectly.
00:49:400 (2) - It's not intentional spacing. so just move to x:176 y:192
01:28:200 (5,6) - This overlapping is unnecessary for me. According to 01:27:400 (1,2,3,4,5).
01:50:600 (3) - This overlapping is not recommended. because maybe this slider looks like a circle.
02:47:400 (1) - delete Finish. same as Insane diff.

GOOD LUCK!
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

pkk

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-05-03T12:06:48+00:00

waxman wrote:
No Dap wrote:
Such lewd SP. Report pls

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ QQ not 69 anymore q_q

[Insane]
00:50:200 (5) - add Finish. it's better for me. ok
01:55:400 (7,1) - Not too bad, but I recommended take same spacing like 01:55:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1). fixed
02:12:400 (1) - miss Clap.fixed
02:29:400 (6,1) - 02:29:800 (1) move left a bit for beauty.fixed
02:47:000 (6) - add Finish. same as 00:50:200 (5). PLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLS D: fixed

[Hard]
00:20:800 (2) - x:172 y:184 fixed
00:25:800 (3) - stack on the beginning of 00:26:200 (4) perfectly. fixed
00:49:400 (2) - It's not intentional spacing. so just move to x:176 y:192 fixed
01:28:200 (5,6) - This overlapping is unnecessary for me. According to 01:27:400 (1,2,3,4,5). fixed
01:50:600 (3) - This overlapping is not recommended. because maybe this slider looks like a circle. hmm ok
02:47:400 (1) - delete Finish. same as Insane diff. finish should be there

GOOD LUCK!
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

Thank you for modding :OOOO

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-05-06T14:46:02+00:00

General
you should pay more attention to arrangements, now your map looks random, not clean or well designed

Kibbleru's Easy
00:29:800 (1) - remove clap on tail,and add 00:31:000 (2) - clap
since music 00:26:600 (1,2,3) - and 00:29:800 (1,2,3) - are similar, and your ehythm here is similar, so using same hitsound seem to be better

00:19:800 (4) - add clap maybe more consistant.since you add clap at 00:16:600 (4) - and 00:22:600 (5) -

01:29:000 (4) - its shape can be more strange xD, to show the special vocal

SPOILER

02:28:200 (3) - drum finish on tail, it fits the music very well, better than soft finish

Normal
00:19:400 (6) - same as easy, and 00:26:200 (6) - add clap plz

01:26:600 (4) - make it a bit more curve for better flow

SPOILER

01:29:000 (4) - same as easy

01:33:399 (5) - too close to 01:32:200 (3) -, looks ugly when playing,move it down a bit

Hard
minor spacing change made this diff looks not very clean, plz don't do so much minor spacing change in hard, of course it isn't a serious problem, but it affect the image people get when they playing your map for first time.
and you chould pay more attention to the appearance of arrangment.
sth like
02:29:800 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

blanket problems
and sth like
02:38:600 (4,5,1) -

SPOILER

this looks really bad. its not a very hard thing to make it more pretty.

SPOILER

in hard and insane,i think you can delete some spiner and map these part to show more things of the music, bu it's call you. for example you can delete the last spiner,map that part, then start a spiner at 02:49:100 and end at 02:50:600.

Insane
have to mention again that you should improvement your arrangement, objects seem to be snapped randomly, not intentional or well designed.
to make the rhythm consistant you can add a 1/4 slider at 00:51:000 like 02:48:000 (3) -

02:06:200 miss a note here,and if you want to put a even stream, it should start at 02:06:100 not 02:06:000
01:53:400 (1) - remove a repeat, move 01:53:900 (2,3) - to 01:53:800 and add a note at 01:54:200, then people can click at 01:54:200
02:14:400 (5) - shorten it to 02:14:600 you missed a strong beat here and add a note at 02:14:700
01:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is very uncomfortable, since shere are many sounds at white line which confuse players
try this rhythm

SPOILER

about 02:09:700 and 02:10:500 and 02:16:100 these parts, if you follow the electronic music, i think you can add notes
i can't point out all the problems about these bad-looking arrangements...you need more work on it.
good luck

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-05-06T20:11:29+00:00

gd

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Kagamine Rin & LenElectricAngel .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39000
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Electric Angel
TitleUnicode:えれくとりっく・えんじぇぅ
Artist:Giga-P
ArtistUnicode:ギガP
Creator:pkmnyab
Version:Kibbleru's Easy
Source:
Tags:Kagamine Rin Len Vocaloid Kibbleru Yasuo-P Orebanana-P Giga-P
BeatmapID:367011
BeatmapSetID:146794

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
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pkk

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Topic Starter

pkk 2014-05-06T21:17:27+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General
you should pay more attention to arrangements, now your map looks random, not clean or well designed

Normal
00:19:400 (6) - same as easy, and 00:26:200 (6) - add clap plz I only added clap at places where there was a clap in the music

01:26:600 (4) - make it a bit more curve for better flow ok, fixed
SPOILER

01:29:000 (4) - same as easy I think this shape is fine

01:33:399 (5) - too close to 01:32:200 (3) -, looks ugly when playing,move it down a bit fixed

Hard
minor spacing change made this diff looks not very clean, plz don't do so much minor spacing change in hard, of course it isn't a serious problem, but it affect the image people get when they playing your map for first time.
and you chould pay more attention to the appearance of arrangment.
sth like
02:29:800 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
blanket problems
and sth like
02:38:600 (4,5,1) -
SPOILER
this looks really bad. its not a very hard thing to make it more pretty.
SPOILER

in hard and insane,i think you can delete some spiner and map these part to show more things of the music, bu it's call you. for example you can delete the last spiner,map that part, then start a spiner at 02:49:100 and end at 02:50:600. cleaned up blankets and spacing

Insane
have to mention again that you should improvement your arrangement, objects seem to be snapped randomly, not intentional or well designed.
to make the rhythm consistant you can add a 1/4 slider at 00:51:000 like 02:48:000 (3) - I don't have 1/4 slider here because there is no drum sound in the background. The drum is much more clear in the end of the song, which is why I added 1/4 slider there
02:06:200 miss a note here,and if you want to put a even stream, it should start at 02:06:100 not 02:06:000 fixed
01:53:400 (1) - remove a repeat, move 01:53:900 (2,3) - to 01:53:800 and add a note at 01:54:200, then people can click at 01:54:200 fixed
02:14:400 (5) - shorten it to 02:14:600 you missed a strong beat here and add a note at 02:14:700 fixed
01:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is very uncomfortable, since shere are many sounds at white line which confuse players
try this rhythm I think this is fine, but if I find a better arrangement I will change it
SPOILER
about 02:09:700 and 02:10:500 and 02:16:100 these parts, if you follow the electronic music, i think you can add notes fixed
i can't point out all the problems about these bad-looking arrangements...you need more work on it.
good luck

Thanks for modding!

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-07T23:33:05+00:00

Ahh, when I meant the tag "GigaP" i meant it as "GigaP" not "Giga-P" this is so when people search for this artist, both "GigaP" and "Giga-P" will yield results.

Please change the tag Giga-P to GigaP

pkk

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pkk 2014-05-07T23:37:55+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Ahh, when I meant the tag "GigaP" i meant it as "GigaP" not "Giga-P" this is so when people search for this artist, both "GigaP" and "Giga-P" will yield results.

Please change the tag Giga-P to GigaP

hm ok I suppose I'll have to do that with orebananaP and YasuoP as well

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-05-11T04:08:36+00:00

iikkkeeee mod this pplzz

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-05-14T13:46:43+00:00

Hi, Testplay in my Queues^^

SPOILER

Wow!, This is a Amazing!!!
Funny Video^^

Good Luck~

Mortem

705 posts

Joined July 2013

Mortem 2014-05-16T15:55:23+00:00

Hi.
As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

Normal:
01:25:000 (2) - This slider doesn't fit for me. Try to improve the design of it, like the end of the slider will point to (3).

Hard:
00:12:200 (1,2) - Put them on the slider. Looks good imo.
00:14:400 (2) - Move it little bit to the right.
00:50:200 (4) - Make the slider's end point to (1).
01:29:000 (1) - Little bit closer to (4). (Put it little higher).

That's it.
Good mapset, you really now how to map.
Hope that'll helps
If not then sorry.
Good Luck!

pkk

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-05-16T21:37:37+00:00

Pjecoo wrote:
Hi.
As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

Normal:
01:25:000 (2) - This slider doesn't fit for me. Try to improve the design of it, like the end of the slider will point to (3). ok, I see what you mean. I changed it now so that it is symmetrical with the slider right after

Hard:
00:12:200 (1,2) - Put them on the slider. Looks good imo. changed it differently, I ended up unstacking all of them
00:14:400 (2) - Move it little bit to the right. moved right to improve flow
00:50:200 (4) - Make the slider's end point to (1). I ended up remapping this part a bit
01:29:000 (1) - Little bit closer to (4). (Put it little higher). moved to avoid overlap

That's it.
Good mapset, you really now how to map.
Hope that'll helps
If not then sorry.
Good Luck!

Thanks for modding!

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-05-21T13:04:55+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
iikkkeeee mod this pplzz

Soon...I'm active again guys!

Last edited by BeatofIke 2014-05-26T13:26:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-05-22T20:55:43+00:00

gogogo rank my first GD pls

yurunneram

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Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-05-25T12:17:33+00:00

GOMENE FOR LATE O-O; I suddenly had stuff to do and once I was done I had a camp.

Just a lil mod

This version is way better than miku's btw

And I also got you that laptop you wanted! Except uhm...

I really don't know what happened to it... Really...

ANYWAYS enough sidetracking

GENERAL

Generally I wouldn't suggest white as a combo colour cuz kiai might be too blinding to see the white. Consider changing

EASY

00:22:200 (4,5) - Suggestion only. Why not do it like this? symmetry is wonderful for easys

00:47:400 (3) - See this? I would bless your map if the stack was perfect (ofc you don't need to make it perfect)

00:50:200 (2) - move to x192 y60 better flow desu

01:13:000 (3) - Same with the second suggestion. Move the head down and adjust the blanket till the stack on the tail is perfect. This is perfectly doable so no excuse desu

02:07:400 (3) - Could be confusing for beginners cuz they wouldn't know which slider end to click on but if you think they ain't stupid then let it be

NORMAL

01:06:600 (3) - Move the tail up to x480 y60 or something? Then the flow would be better imo

01:09:000 (2) - Lower it if jya ain't gonna blanket

01:40:800 (2,3) - Found the flow here bad and rather irritating. Move (3) up?

HARD

Can't really mod hards. And it looks fine anyways

DON'T GIVE KUDOS

I probly entertained more than modded and I'm so late anyways

Fluffy fluffy sayonara >wO)/

pkk

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pkk 2014-05-25T12:49:00+00:00

aaah

yurunneram wrote:
GOMENE FOR LATE O-O; I suddenly had stuff to do and once I was done I had a camp. I hope you had fun

Just a lil mod

This version is way better than miku's btw ;w;

And I also got you that laptop you wanted! Except uhm...

I really don't know what happened to it... Really...

NOOOOOOO MY LAPTOP

oh it's a dell laptop, ew

ANYWAYS enough sidetracking

GENERAL

Generally I wouldn't suggest white as a combo colour cuz kiai might be too blinding to see the white. Consider changing
you're right, I changed it now to a darker beige
NORMAL

01:06:600 (3) - Move the tail up to x480 y60 or something? Then the flow would be better imo I prefer the current one as it makes the flow more interesting since there is more direction involved

01:09:000 (2) - Lower it if jya ain't gonna blanket fixed

01:40:800 (2,3) - Found the flow here bad and rather irritating. Move (3) up? fixed

HARD

Can't really mod hards. And it looks fine anyways

DON'T GIVE KUDOS I'll see if Kibbleru decides to change anything in his GD

I probly entertained more than modded and I'm so late anyways

Fluffy fluffy sayonara >wO)/

Thanks for modding!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-05-25T18:26:21+00:00

yurunneram wrote:
GOMENE FOR LATE O-O; I suddenly had stuff to do and once I was done I had a camp.

Just a lil mod

This version is way better than miku's btw

And I also got you that laptop you wanted! Except uhm...

I really don't know what happened to it... Really...

ANYWAYS enough sidetracking

GENERAL

Generally I wouldn't suggest white as a combo colour cuz kiai might be too blinding to see the white. Consider changing true, but it's been done many times and it's perfectly rankable so i really don't see why not

EASY

00:22:200 (4,5) - Suggestion only. Why not do it like this? symmetry is wonderful for easys k

00:47:400 (3) - See this? I would bless your map if the stack was perfect (ofc you don't need to make it perfect) k

00:50:200 (2) - move to x192 y60 better flow desu nah i want a perfect square

01:13:000 (3) - Same with the second suggestion. Move the head down and adjust the blanket till the stack on the tail is perfect. This is perfectly doable so no excuse desu eh it's not really noticeable in game but w/e done

02:07:400 (3) - Could be confusing for beginners cuz they wouldn't know which slider end to click on but if you think they ain't stupid then let it be [/color]

I probly entertained more than modded and I'm so late anyways

Fluffy fluffy sayonara >wO)/

code:

SPOILER

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[Quick mod on hard]
00:13:800 (1) - why is this a brezier curve?
00:29:000 (3) - bleh looks kinda ugly to me dunno why try this
SPOILER
00:48:200 (3) - you really need to improve on your wave sliders, the waves should look even and smooth (if any of the curves look sharp then that's noo good)
SPOILER
^do this for every single one of ur wave sliders
01:46:600 (1) - the second curve on this one looks sharp which is no good, you can just make it like this actually
SPOILER

GOD DAMMIT I DIDN'T UPDATE, (still consider on the wave sliders thing though)

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-05-26T23:41:46+00:00

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-05-27T15:57:38+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:

>> how Ike feels when he plays the insane difficulty

/me runs away

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-05-28T15:14:10+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:

how i feel like when i try to look for bats

have faith, in ~~my first ranked GD~~ i mean your first ranked map

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-05-29T04:12:34+00:00

Indeed! Here's a quick mod!

[Easy]

00:45:800 (1,2,3) - Good map, but this pattern needs more polishing:

Image and Code

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[Hard]

Good map, but AR8 is too high for this difficulty and it doesn't balance well the difficulty spread!
No problems on playability/sight-reading however, so that's a plus!
Score

[Insane]

AR9 is too high, for this BPM, but do what you like! It's not my map anyways! >.<
02:29:400 (6) - This 1/12 kick slider does not make sense! It follows nothing in the music. You're better off using a 1/2 slider.

Normal difficulty is good to go. I would like to see a few more improvements on the Insane difficulty.
Have a star icon, because why the hell not. I show interest with this map!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-05-29T19:50:45+00:00

ITS HAPPENING btw i guess ill give you a mod on insane when u get on

BeatofIke wrote:
02:29:400 (6) - This 1/12 kick slider does not make sense! It follows nothing in the music. You're better off using a 1/2 slider.

~~i believe he was trying to map out that clicky sound or w/e but i think that is on 1/8 and not 1/12, so if you switch it to 1/8 i think it should be fine~~
i lied this maps nothing my suggestion for this is you can do this for the buildup and silence that slider BE SURE TO SILENCE IT. Oh and decrease SV too

01:29:800 (5) - i think this is 1 repeat too many?
I also noticed that you have a bunch of random ass brezier sliders which need to be replaced lol.. ie. 02:36:200 (1) -

Also
~~wtf i fixed that from the previous mod PK DID U EVEN UPDATE THIS CODE???~~
Edit: Nevermind it's me who fked up and posted the wrong code =w=

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Last edited by Kibbleru 2014-05-29T20:47:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-05-29T20:29:30+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:

Indeed! Here's a quick mod!

[Hard]
Good map, but AR8 is too high for this difficulty and it doesn't balance well the difficulty spread! ok, lowered AR to 7
No problems on playability/sight-reading however, so that's a plus!
Score
[Insane]
AR9 is too high, for this BPM, but do what you like! It's not my map anyways! >.<
02:29:400 (6) - This 1/12 kick slider does not make sense! It follows nothing in the music. You're better off using a 1/2 slider.
followed kibb's suggestion

Normal difficulty is good to go. I would like to see a few more improvements on the Insane difficulty.
Have a star icon, because why the hell not. I show interest with this map! yea I need to make insane look nicer

Thanks for the mod and star!!!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-05-30T00:45:43+00:00

We did a long IRC mod and polished some things up, i think it's ready now tbh

inb4 "this insane is worse now"

lets try to get this bubbled by the end of this weekend

looonngg ass irc mod

16:49 Kibbleru: oh also i did post some of my concerns with that normal diff
16:49 Kibbleru: also dw about the 3.5 star diff rating
16:49 Kibbleru: apparently
16:49 Kibbleru: as long as it plays like a normal
16:49 Kibbleru: then its fine
16:49 pkmnyab: ya i looked them over
16:49 pkmnyab: good, i will make a 5 star normal
16:50 Kibbleru: lol
16:50 Kibbleru: gl
16:50 pkmnyab: tyty
16:51 Kibbleru: btw for ur insane diff
16:51 Kibbleru: u have a bunch of fking brezier sliders
16:51 Kibbleru: so fix those
16:52 Kibbleru: and then call me back for a throughout polishing irc mod
16:52 pkmnyab: what bezier slider
16:52 pkmnyab: red point?
16:52 pkmnyab: oh wait i think red point is linear
16:52 pkmnyab: okok i will make them straight
16:52 Kibbleru: 02:02:600 (1) - this stuff
16:52 Kibbleru: no
16:52 Kibbleru: brezier slider
16:52 Kibbleru: okay
16:53 Kibbleru: u know theres the new slider algorithm
16:53 Kibbleru: ?
16:53 pkmnyab: okok
16:53 pkmnyab: what
16:53 Kibbleru: where u make 3 points
16:53 Kibbleru: perfect curve
16:53 Kibbleru: some of ur curves are still using old slider algorithm
16:53 pkmnyab: idk
16:53 pkmnyab: oh
16:53 Kibbleru: so just remake them
16:53 Kibbleru: to use the new one
16:53 Kibbleru: okay
16:53 Kibbleru: this is an old alorithm curve 02:02:600 (1) -
16:54 Kibbleru: 02:03:400 (4) - this is new one
16:54 pkmnyab: yea i know
16:54 Kibbleru: move the middle point
16:54 Kibbleru: yah kk
16:54 pkmnyab: when you drag the middle point around
16:54 Kibbleru: yah
16:54 pkmnyab: ya i was like wtf
16:54 Kibbleru: just fix those i think thats one of the things holding this diff back lol
16:54 pkmnyab: y some of them turn big and others dont
16:54 pkmnyab: lol this diff is so ugly
16:54 pkmnyab: im going to cry
16:54 Kibbleru: 02:19:200 (5) - here is one lol
16:54 Kibbleru: yah just fix those first then well get into detail stuff
16:55 Kibbleru: playing is fine i think
16:55 Kibbleru: its just the
16:55 Kibbleru: well it just needs polishing
17:02 pkmnyab: btw do you want battlefield 3 for PC
17:02 Kibbleru: idek if my computer can run it lols
17:43 Kibbleru: ok
17:43 Kibbleru: fuuk
17:45 Kibbleru: wtf this ashe build http://puu.sh/96K3s/4f4dc15492.jpg
18:37 Kibbleru: yo
18:37 Kibbleru: u there?
18:37 Kibbleru: salkjfals
18:37 pkmnyab: i am always here
18:37 pkmnyab: for youuuuuuuuuuuuu
18:37 pkmnyab: jk
18:37 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
18:37 *pkmnyab is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
18:38 pkmnyab: i might have dinner any time soon within 10 minutes so do not be alarmed if I am forced to leave
18:38 Kibbleru: first of all i suggest u make these parts consistent throughout all kiaias 00:39:000 (1) -
18:38 Kibbleru: k just tell me if u do
18:38 pkmnyab: hm i only have two of those
18:38 pkmnyab: oh wait i have 3
18:38 Kibbleru: no im saying u should make them the same
18:38 Kibbleru: cuz ur last kiai one is different
18:38 pkmnyab: ya hmmm
18:39 Kibbleru: why not just copy paste these? 00:21:800 (1,3) -
18:39 pkmnyab: i like the last one though
18:39 pkmnyab: k
18:39 Kibbleru: 00:22:100 (2,4) - stack is off
18:39 pkmnyab: ohwait let me upload to latest version
18:39 Kibbleru: and no i mean u should make them all like the last one
18:40 Kibbleru: with the 3/4 silence thing
18:40 Kibbleru: did u update
18:41 Kibbleru: o-o
18:42 pkmnyab: k done
18:42 pkmnyab: i accidentally closed chatbox when uploading
18:42 pkmnyab: so i couldn't open it gg
18:42 pkmnyab: i changed some stuff in the beginning, mainly around 00:22:600 (4,5) - and after that
18:43 Kibbleru: hmm how bout this 00:25:000 (1) - http://puu.sh/96ORv/7dc81cee16.jpg or something
18:44 pkmnyab: hmmmm ok
18:44 Kibbleru: 00:36:900 (4,5) - put a little jump here to differentiate for when the vocals start?\
18:44 pkmnyab: would that be weird
18:44 Kibbleru: i dont think so o-o
18:44 pkmnyab: nvm i got it
18:45 Kibbleru: 00:43:800 (5) - also i think missing clap on head but im not sure what ur adding ur claps to
18:45 pkmnyab: oops
18:45 Kibbleru: 00:48:200 (3) - u forgot to fix this slider
18:46 pkmnyab: but how will people know I made this map before sliders were cool?
18:46 pkmnyab: fixed
18:47 Kibbleru: 00:39:000 (1) - uhh make this similar to 02:29:400 (1) -
18:47 Kibbleru: 01:30:200 (1) - same with this
18:47 Kibbleru: 01:30:200 (1) - missing clap?
18:47 Kibbleru: oh wait i said that alrdy
18:48 pkmnyab: the one at 02:29:400 (1) - is fine because it's silent at that part
18:48 pkmnyab: but i guess the other two are sort of similar
18:48 Kibbleru: no im saying make them all like this one 02:29:400 (1) -
18:48 pkmnyab: k
18:48 Kibbleru: 02:30:600 (5,6) - btw u forgot to fix these sliders
18:49 Kibbleru: 01:06:800 (2) - passive slider feels weird here
18:49 Kibbleru: maybe ctrl g this rhythm 01:06:800 (2,3) -
18:50 Kibbleru: 01:22:800 (2,3) - can u ctrl g this? its hard to expect the circle exactly under the slider right after a fairly big jump
18:50 Kibbleru: and if u do that
18:50 Kibbleru: 01:22:800 (2,4) - space out
18:51 Kibbleru: 01:32:800 (4,5) - make this jump a bit bigger since (5) should be slightly more emphasized
18:53 Kibbleru: 01:48:600 (2) - try something like this here? http://puu.sh/96PEG/ef587e5cee.jpg i think it looks slightly nicer and ik for a fact that ike likes blankets so
18:53 Kibbleru: 01:53:400 (2) - remove 2 reverses here and move 01:53:900 (3) - up by 1/4 and add a reverse to it
18:53 pkmnyab: ok
18:54 Kibbleru: 02:01:000 (1,2) - make kickslider? to emphasize that
18:54 Kibbleru: idk
18:54 Kibbleru: similar to 02:01:800 (1) -
18:54 pkmnyab: fixed all up until the 2 reverses thing
18:54 pkmnyab: thanks for helping so far, brb dinner afk
18:54 Kibbleru: k brb another league match
19:26 Kibbleru: o-o
19:26 pkmnyab: welcome back
19:27 Kibbleru: 02:06:600 (5,6) - right
19:27 Kibbleru: so
19:27 Kibbleru: uh
19:27 Kibbleru: blaknet kinda?
19:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96SuY/be57e1bf94.jpg
19:28 pkmnyab: okie
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:38:600 (5) - fix this slider too
19:28 Kibbleru: if u ahvent
19:28 Kibbleru: havent
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:39:800 (2,3) - maybe just copy paste one?
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:45:000 (3) - fix slider
19:28 Kibbleru: 02:45:400 (4) - ^
19:29 Kibbleru: 02:19:800 (8) - ^
19:30 Kibbleru: 02:36:200 (1) -
19:30 Kibbleru: u missed alot lol
19:30 Kibbleru: 02:37:000 (4) -
19:30 Kibbleru: 02:39:800 (2) -
19:30 Kibbleru: 01:30:600 (1) -
19:31 Kibbleru: 01:31:400 (4,5) -
19:31 Kibbleru: 01:35:400 (1,2) - just copy paste for these?
19:31 pkmnyab: do i have to fix those sliders
19:31 pkmnyab: there's no noticeable difference
19:32 pkmnyab: like old sliders
19:32 Kibbleru: yes

19:32 Kibbleru: there is a difference
19:32 pkmnyab: ._.
19:32 Kibbleru: 01:18:600 (3) - ^
19:33 Kibbleru: 00:13:800 (1,2) - whynot blanket?
19:35 Kibbleru: 00:36:200 (1) - how bout do this http://puu.sh/96T4k/01b01061f0.jpg reason being is that it seems like it should be copy pasted from 00:35:800 (8) - this slider but it's not so it bothers me but it'd look better if you made the sliders more different
19:36 Kibbleru: 00:44:200 (1,2) - how boud making these slider linear bend things cuz i think i'd look cool

19:36 Kibbleru: zzz push
19:36 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96Tb3/f71d96648f.jpg
19:37 Kibbleru: idk i just think u can add a few of those in here and there to give some variety

19:38 Kibbleru: how bout liks this instead? 01:12:600 (4) - http://puu.sh/96Tik/fb9a8b6989.jpg
19:38 Kibbleru: ofc dont take the suggestion of u don't like it
19:38 Kibbleru: but i do recommend you adding one of those linear bends here and there, they looks nice

19:39 Kibbleru: 01:37:800 (4) - like here might fit
19:39 Kibbleru: 01:41:400 (5,1) -
19:40 Kibbleru: 01:56:600 (2) - i dun really like this pattern dunno why, looks better like this tbh http://puu.sh/96Tuc/96ac99934b.jpg
19:41 Kibbleru: yah just idk
19:41 pkmnyab: ya that looks better
19:41 Kibbleru: add a few of those linear sliders here and there
19:41 Kibbleru: poke me again when you've uploaded and added those :3
19:42 Kibbleru: 01:55:400 (1) - u can lower sv maybe?
19:42 Kibbleru: for a similar effect to
19:42 Kibbleru: as 02:29:400 (1) -
19:43 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96TGI/cd3b1bbc95.jpg frostings slider

19:44 pkmnyab: my slider now
19:44 Kibbleru: lol
19:50 Kibbleru: u done fixing

?
19:50 Kibbleru: o-o
19:51 Kibbleru: 02:41:400 (3,5) - i cant say im a big fan of this pattern but if you really like it then keep
19:51 pkmnyab: ohya i fixed that
19:52 Kibbleru: ok i guess thats all for placement for now
19:52 Kibbleru: lets take a look at rhythm and hitsounds
19:53 Kibbleru: 00:18:600 (1,3,5) - missing normal samplesets
19:54 pkmnyab: lol oops
19:54 Kibbleru: oh wait update first
19:54 Kibbleru: pls
19:55 pkmnyab: i did
19:55 Kibbleru: k
19:56 Kibbleru: 01:05:800 (3) - missing normal sampleset
19:57 Kibbleru: 01:12:600 (4) - why did u ctrl g this lol x.x
19:57 Kibbleru: now the antijump feels weird lol
19:58 Kibbleru: 01:26:600 (5) - FSKJAHFKJSAH fix
19:58 pkmnyab: holy shit that's so ugly
19:58 Kibbleru: this one's actually noticeable
19:59 Kibbleru: 01:29:000 (1,2) - i feel like this needs like claps or something
19:59 Kibbleru: idk
19:59 Kibbleru: 01:43:400 - doesnt the kiai end here?,,
20:00 pkmnyab: i felt that this part was super cool
20:00 pkmnyab: 01:43:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
20:00 pkmnyab: so cool
20:00 Kibbleru: but thats not the chorus...
20:01 pkmnyab: well i feel that it needs to be emphasized
20:01 pkmnyab: i'll see if anyone else thinks it's a problem :S
20:01 Kibbleru: 01:55:400 (1,1) - btw u can add a bit of ajump here or try this http://puu.sh/96UVb/28da13721a.jpg (the curve looks a bit too curved btw)
20:01 pkmnyab: ok did that
20:02 Kibbleru: 01:34:600 (4,6) - copy paste one another??
20:02 pkmnyab: k
20:03 Kibbleru: 02:01:000 (1,2) - u didnt make this a kickslider

20:03 pkmnyab: it seemed really weird
20:03 Kibbleru: 02:11:800 (6) - clap
20:04 pkmnyab: actually i don't like this entire thing 02:01:200 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
20:04 pkmnyab: random slider in the middle throws off accuracy
20:04 Kibbleru: 02:21:400 (1) - clap?
20:04 Kibbleru: i think the slider is good
20:04 Kibbleru: goes well with the high pitch
20:04 Kibbleru: idk what insturment
20:05 pkmnyab: i think you just call it a synth
20:05 pkmnyab: usually those electronic noises in music are called synths because they're made by synthesizers in the music program
20:05 pkmnyab: ...the more you knowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............
20:05 Kibbleru: oh right
20:05 Kibbleru: btw did u add claps?
20:06 pkmnyab: yep
20:06 Kibbleru: 02:32:200 (4) - i think this would look nice if it was linear curve
20:06 pkmnyab: hm linear curve would also match the vocal
20:06 pkmnyab: k
20:08 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96VmN/4b9dea0a7e.jpg 02:30:600 (5,6) - idek im just giving out random ass suggestions now
20:08 Kibbleru: that part kinda bothered me tho
20:08 Kibbleru: cuz
20:08 Kibbleru: 02:30:600 (5,1) - this distance
20:08 Kibbleru: isnt the same as 02:31:000 (6,3) -
20:08 pkmnyab: weirdest flow NA
20:09 Kibbleru: u can curve it the other way lol
20:09 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96Vr0/aafbeb0156.jpg
20:09 pkmnyab: i fixed it another way
20:09 pkmnyab: just deleted 02:31:700 (2) -
20:10 pkmnyab: nvm not going to delete it
20:10 Kibbleru: btw ur doubleclaps seem inconsistent across the kiais
20:10 Kibbleru: fix those pls
20:11 pkmnyab: fixed
20:11 Kibbleru: 02:33:400 (3,6) - btw i think claps should still continue
20:11 Kibbleru: untill
20:11 Kibbleru: 02:35:800 -
20:12 pkmnyab: k
20:12 Kibbleru: 02:41:400 (3,4,5) - isnt this a bit harsh?
20:12 pkmnyab: lol with no mods this is okay
20:12 pkmnyab: but with HR people will die huehuehue
20:12 pkmnyab: ok i will fix
20:12 Kibbleru: u can do this or something http://puu.sh/96VE4/653c4db285.jpg
20:12 pkmnyab: ok
20:13 Kibbleru: 02:42:600 (1) - this would bother me less if it was linear or something idk
20:13 Kibbleru: 02:42:600 (1,4) - dun like this pattern
20:13 Kibbleru: i have no idea why
20:14 Kibbleru: u just need to make ur doubleclaps more consistent
20:14 pkmnyab: my double claps are consistent
20:14 pkmnyab: only 2 in every kiai
20:14 Kibbleru: hang on
20:15 pkmnyab: btw g2g take a walk in 5 mins lol
20:15 Kibbleru: 02:32:600 (6,7) - should this be double clap?
20:16 pkmnyab: idk
20:16 Kibbleru: 02:46:200 (3) - why is this doubleclap? you have nothing like this in your other kiai
20:16 pkmnyab: there's only one clap on that
20:16 Kibbleru: nvm i lied
20:16 pkmnyab: o i probably removed it
20:17 Kibbleru: eh idun even know
20:17 pkmnyab: ya i fixed the random double claps
20:17 pkmnyab: so now only 2 per kiai
20:17 Kibbleru: k
20:17 Kibbleru: 01:12:200 (3,4) - uhh copy paste?
20:18 Kibbleru: 01:27:800 (3) - this clap at the end
20:18 Kibbleru: sounds weird
20:18 Kibbleru: whoops
20:18 Kibbleru: 01:28:800 -
20:19 pkmnyab: ok deleted
20:19 Kibbleru: 02:07:800 (4) - clap?
20:20 pkmnyab: k
20:20 pkmnyab: uh brb 20 mins
20:20 Kibbleru: k i think thats all
20:41 pkmnyab: i come back from the outside world
20:41 Kibbleru: did u die from sunlight?
20:41 pkmnyab: no
20:41 pkmnyab: i did some sick parkour
20:42 Kibbleru: 01:30:600 (1,2) - erm make this blanket better?
20:42 Kibbleru: actually u can do this or something
20:42 pkmnyab: k
20:42 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/96XFJ/a721a7fd52.jpg
20:43 pkmnyab: i'll blanket for now
20:43 Kibbleru: go check ur other diffs for missing claps and old slidercurves
20:43 Kibbleru: then go ask beat if he can recheck or something
20:44 Kibbleru: im gunna post this log gimme kudo

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-05-31T05:53:48+00:00

81 SP PLS AT LEAST BUBBLE DIS D:<

Frostings

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Frostings 2014-06-01T01:26:10+00:00

hey i found the chat log

SPOILER

2014-05-31 19:16 pkmnyab: flawlesstea senpaiiiiiii
2014-05-31 19:16 pkmnyab: can you IRC mod with me so ike will rank my map Q(owoQ)
2014-05-31 19:17 Frostings: yeah let me just look over the map quickly
2014-05-31 19:17 Frostings: is it just Insane
2014-05-31 19:17 Frostings: or all
2014-05-31 19:18 pkmnyab: just insane
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: ok here we go
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: bear with me i don't like IRC mods ><
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: i'm slow
2014-05-31 19:20 Frostings: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
2014-05-31 19:20 pkmnyab: ok

2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: for some reason
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: 00:17:800 (4,5,6) - these bother me
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: and all the other ones
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: i think it's the distance
2014-05-31 19:21 pkmnyab: hm
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: i would snap it 0.9 like all the other ones
2014-05-31 19:21 pkmnyab: k
2014-05-31 19:21 Frostings: or whatever you're using
2014-05-31 19:22 Frostings: 00:18:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is kinda meh
2014-05-31 19:22 Frostings: keep if you want it
2014-05-31 19:23 Frostings: but maybe consider sort of a better pattern
2014-05-31 19:24 pkmnyab: i'll change it if i can think of something
2014-05-31 19:24 Frostings: you could probably put any pattern there
2014-05-31 19:24 Frostings: and it would work
2014-05-31 19:25 Frostings: 00:39:800 (2,3,4) -
2014-05-31 19:25 Frostings: same as before
2014-05-31 19:26 Frostings: lol
2014-05-31 19:26 pkmnyab: sorry, my internet randomly dc'd
2014-05-31 19:26 Frostings: 00:39:800 (2,3,4) -
2014-05-31 19:26 Frostings: same as before
2014-05-31 19:26 pkmnyab: ok
2014-05-31 19:27 Frostings: 00:51:000 - why not put one more hitcircle here
2014-05-31 19:27 pkmnyab: k
2014-05-31 19:27 Frostings: i wouldn't put the three notes stacked though
2014-05-31 19:28 pkmnyab: yea i stacked it on 00:51:200 (4) -
2014-05-31 19:28 Frostings: 01:08:200 (1,2,3) - same as before
2014-05-31 19:29 Frostings: 01:21:800 (4,5,6) - ^
2014-05-31 19:29 pkmnyab: life is hard
2014-05-31 19:30 Frostings: 01:50:800 (4) - maybe paralllel to 01:49:800 (1,2) -
2014-05-31 19:30 Frostings:

2014-05-31 19:30 pkmnyab: ok
2014-05-31 19:31 Frostings: 01:52:600 (1) - i don't think NC req
2014-05-31 19:31 Frostings: 01:55:800 (1) - here too
2014-05-31 19:31 pkmnyab: ok, removed
2014-05-31 19:32 Frostings: 02:21:900 (1) -
2014-05-31 19:32 Frostings: what do you think about ending the spinner here 02:23:000 -
2014-05-31 19:32 Frostings: and then putting a hitcircle
2014-05-31 19:32 pkmnyab: oh that's nice
2014-05-31 19:32 pkmnyab: ok fixed
2014-05-31 19:33 Frostings: ok i will check hitsounds
2014-05-31 19:34 Frostings: 00:19:900 (2,4) -
2014-05-31 19:34 Frostings: i think you should have claps on 00:19:800 (1,3) -
2014-05-31 19:34 Frostings: isntead
2014-05-31 19:35 Frostings: maybe move whistles too
2014-05-31 19:35 pkmnyab: ok
2014-05-31 19:39 Frostings: alright
2014-05-31 19:39 Frostings: everything's good
2014-05-31 19:39 pkmnyab: thank you for your time

Xiaolin

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Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-06-04T17:27:49+00:00

Rin and Len senpai are kawaii ~ <33
[General]

When I modded easy there was no video, but when I modded normal, there was a video, you forgot to add a video in easy ~
[Kibbleru's Easy]
1. 00:10:600 (1) - I think this spinner should be till 00:12:200
2. 00:13:800 (1) - Finish ~ ?
3. 00:15:400 (3) - I think its much better to add whistle ~ :>
4. 00:18:200 (2) - ^
5. 00:20:200 (1) - ^ At the end of the slider
6. 00:22:800 (3) - ^
7. 00:22:600 (5) - ^ At the beginning of the slider
8. 00:39:400 (1,2) - I suggest that you make these two more curve ~
Example
1. 01:20:600 (4) - You should move this to x:264 y:192 for perfect blanket
[Normal]
1. 00:15:400 (3) - I suggest that you use whistle better ~
2. 00:17:800 (2) - ^ At the end of the slider ~
3. 00:19:400 (5) - Missing clap at the repeat Please add clap at the repeat ~
4. 00:20:600 (2) - Move to x:284 y:212 for better blanket ~ ?
5. 00:37:000 (2) - Whistle at the repeat ?
6. 01:11:000 (5) - I think this should be like this, more curve:

Example

Its pretty much a long mod so I guess I'll skip hard and insane, I also checked them, they were fine ~ :3

Good luck with rank ~ !! >w<

pkk

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-06-04T20:20:03+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Rin and Len senpai are kawaii ~ <33
[General]
When I modded easy there was no video, but when I modded normal, there was a video, you forgot to add a video in easy ~
ahh I think there was an issue with copying codes and video somehow got left out, I'll add it back in once kibbleru updates his code
[Normal]
00:15:400 (3) - I suggest that you use whistle better ~ I only use the clap in the beginning section and add whistles starting in the next section
00:17:800 (2) - ^ At the end of the slider ~
00:19:400 (5) - Missing clap at the repeat Please add clap at the repeat ~ added clap
00:20:600 (2) - Move to x:284 y:212 for better blanket ~ ? fixed blanket
00:37:000 (2) - Whistle at the repeat ? added whistle
01:11:000 (5) - I think this should be like this, more curve:
Example
ok, curved it a bit more

Its pretty much a long mod so I guess I'll skip hard and insane, I also checked them, they were fine ~ :3

Good luck with rank ~ !! >w<

Thank you for modding!

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-04T20:28:11+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Rin and Len senpai are kawaii ~ <33
[General]
When I modded easy there was no video, but when I modded normal, there was a video, you forgot to add a video in easy ~
[Kibbleru's Easy]
00:10:600 (1) - I think this spinner should be till 00:12:200 removed spinner and did what pk did in his diffs
00:13:800 (1) - Finish ~ ? k
00:15:400 (3) - I think its much better to add whistle ~ :> i don't rly like these x.x
00:18:200 (2) - ^
00:20:200 (1) - ^ At the end of the slider
00:22:800 (3) - ^
00:22:600 (5) - ^ At the beginning of the slider
00:39:400 (1,2) - I suggest that you make these two more curve ~ i like it how it is atm
Example
01:20:600 (4) - You should move this to x:264 y:192 for perfect blanket not rly going for a blanket

Its pretty much a long mod so I guess I'll skip hard and insane, I also checked them, they were fine ~ :3

Good luck with rank ~ !! >w<

ty4 mod

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Blueprint

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Blueprint 2014-06-06T12:31:21+00:00

I really like the insane " ar 9 is to high for this bpm" I think ar9 will get more attention ^^, just a suggestion make it OD 8
Going to edit it to AR 8 see how it is,
I think it's more difficult with 8 a little more effort to FC and I guess AR 8 would open it up to DT scores.
Looking forward to this being ranked

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-07T13:11:10+00:00

Blueprint wrote:
I really like the insane " ar 9 is to high for this bpm" I think ar9 will get more attention ^^, just a suggestion make it OD 8
Going to edit it to AR 8 see how it is,
I think it's more difficult with 8 a little more effort to FC and I guess AR 8 would open it up to DT scores.
Looking forward to this being ranked

Thanks for the feedback, I made it OD 8 now since I don't plan on lowering the AR. 150 BPM + the way I mapped this song would make it too hard for DT, even on AR8.

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-06-09T22:12:08+00:00

senpai pls

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-09T22:14:22+00:00

No Dap wrote:
senpai pls

wow and here I thought they ranked my map when I received the email notification

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-06-13T02:00:16+00:00

map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-13T02:02:32+00:00

No Dap wrote:
map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone

hmm I've been considering that for a while since the ending of the song is basically just the part at 00:52:200 - which I left as a break. Well, since I didn't map it in the previous section I think I'll map the ending. That stream at the end is also pretty sketchy so this gives me a good reason to remove it.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-13T02:05:16+00:00

No Dap wrote:
map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone

NO I DON'T WANT MORE FUCKING WORK

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-13T02:06:17+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
No Dap wrote:
map the ending of the song

because I was threatened to say this by someone
NO I DON'T WANT MORE FUCKING WORK

LOL calm down I'll only do it in insane

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-13T02:11:55+00:00

pkmnyab wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:
NO I DON'T WANT MORE FUCKING WORK
LOL calm down I'll only do it in insane

that'll make it unrankable

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-13T02:17:52+00:00

pkmnyab wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:
LOL calm down I'll only do it in insane
that'll make it unrankable

ok I'll map it in all diffs, you better do it too

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-06-13T06:22:12+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
that'll make it unrankable

Nope. Ranking criteria does not say "must." It says "should."

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-06-13T14:00:51+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:
that'll make it unrankable
Nope. Ranking criteria does not say "must." It says "should."

ok since I'm lazy I'll just do it for insane difficulty. Kibb, you don't have to map it

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-06-13T14:40:41+00:00

Did IRC mod with pk

he has the log

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-06-13T14:55:23+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Did IRC mod with pk

he has the log

IRC with mom

10:06 No Dap: 02:49:400 (4,5,6) -
10:06 No Dap: rekt shape
10:07 pkmnyab: lmfao
10:07 No Dap: Fk
10:07 No Dap: Crashed again
10:07 No Dap: This is why I never cop pasye
10:07 pkmnyab: map op
10:07 No Dap: Anyway
10:08 No Dap: 3 :3 something
10:08 No Dap: The anti jump is hard to read
10:08 No Dap: The 2nd anti jump
10:08 pkmnyab: ok
10:08 No Dap: Because of 1/2 stafk
10:09 No Dap: Lmao did I just say stafk
10:10 No Dap: Ncm
10:10 No Dap: Nvm
10:10 No Dap: The antijump plays fine
10:10 No Dap: Dont change
10:10 pkmnyab: k
10:10 No Dap: though there are a few flows i didnt like
10:11 No Dap: 02:48:800 -
10:12 No Dap: it plays fine but the shape rekt
10:12 pkmnyab: wtf
10:12 No Dap: 02:50:600 - crtl + g please
10:12 No Dap: flow rekted
10:12 pkmnyab: k
10:12 No Dap: the jump should be bigger between here 02:58:500 -
10:13 No Dap: k
10:13 No Dap: you're gonna get tons of 1 ratings
10:13 No Dap: if you don't fix this
10:13 No Dap: 03:07:800 -
10:13 No Dap: reading rekted
10:13 pkmnyab: ???
10:14 pkmnyab: k
10:14 No Dap: player : omg I almost FC'd
10:14 pkmnyab: LOL
10:14 No Dap: WTF I MISSED THAT
10:14 No Dap: the flow could be a bit better there too
10:15 No Dap: 03:07:000 (3,4,5) - rekt
10:15 No Dap: actually thats fine
10:15 No Dap: why si this part 03:05:100 - different
10:15 No Dap: you should either stack or have the 2nd anti jump like this
10:17 pkmnyab: k stacked
10:17 No Dap: 01:07:000 -
10:17 No Dap: 1~the triple
10:17 No Dap: why is the jump so big here
10:17 No Dap: this is like the calm part
10:18 pkmnyab: k made jump between triple and previous note smaller
10:18 pkmnyab: is 01:08:000 (9) - fine or should i just delete it
10:18 No Dap: hmm
10:18 No Dap: oh thats fine
10:19 No Dap: 01:14:000 - I don't like this flow
10:19 No Dap: its a bit awkward to play
10:19 No Dap: 01:12:200 - stack on this or somewhere around that?
10:20 pkmnyab: k
10:20 No Dap: 01:14:400 - some where like 432 : 256 would flow a lot better
10:20 pkmnyab: k
10:20 No Dap: 01:22:000 -
10:21 No Dap: i got an idea for you
10:21 pkmnyab: btw i changed the flow of the four notes before it
10:21 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710274
10:21 No Dap: rip
10:21 No Dap: the 4 notes before the one i just pointed out?
10:21 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/9d2596de6a2aca6af647ee1c91d7bcbe
10:21 pkmnyab: your screenshot is black, rip
10:22 No Dap: i know
10:22 No Dap: fk this
10:22 No Dap: oh yeah
10:22 No Dap: thats a lot better to play
10:22 No Dap: the triple at the top was too far to reach
10:23 No Dap: btw are you also getting this glitch
10:23 No Dap: where all notes disappear from the screen and no hitsound
10:23 pkmnyab: yea
10:23 pkmnyab: that happens a lot when i click on timeline, so i just scroll
10:24 No Dap: that happens
10:24 No Dap: when i fking click a note
10:25 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710289
10:25 No Dap: are you
10:25 No Dap: KIDDING ME MAC
10:25 No Dap: 01:50:500 -
10:25 No Dap: I wouldn't stack
10:25 No Dap: cuz it's almost not visible
10:26 No Dap: especially with the stack it will appear even worse
10:26 pkmnyab: actually i don't like the flow at 01:49:800 (1,2) -
10:26 pkmnyab: i'll just rearrange the whole thing
10:26 No Dap: no
10:26 No Dap: that plays very fine
10:26 No Dap: noooooooo
10:26 pkmnyab: ok ok fine
10:26 No Dap: that plays fine
10:26 No Dap: lol
10:26 No Dap: just unstack
10:26 pkmnyab: done
10:27 No Dap: 01:50:500 - I get your emphasizing the
10:27 No Dap: ggggggguguuuuguck sound
10:27 No Dap: but the SV makes it look like
10:27 No Dap: the next slider is fking fast too
10:27 No Dap: at least NC it or delete the SV change
10:27 pkmnyab: did you copy the right time
10:27 No Dap: 01:53:600 -
10:27 No Dap: rip
10:27 pkmnyab: k i'll delete sv
10:28 pkmnyab: YO WTF
10:28 pkmnyab: DID YOU GO INTO SONG SETUP
10:28 No Dap: delete nc?
10:28 No Dap: 01:55:800 -
10:28 pkmnyab: YOU CAN GO UP BETWEEN 9 AND 10 AR
10:28 pkmnyab: HOLY SHIT
10:28 pkmnyab: 9.1 AR
10:28 pkmnyab: 9.5
10:28 pkmnyab: OMG
10:28 pkmnyab: WHAT
10:28 No Dap: did you not know
10:29 No Dap: look at my userpage
10:29 pkmnyab: omg
10:29 pkmnyab: yes
10:29 pkmnyab: ar9.5
10:29 No Dap: this happened yesterday at midnight
10:29 No Dap: 02:04:000 - rip flow
10:29 pkmnyab: wow song is 10x more fun with ar9.5
10:30 No Dap: fk mac
10:30 No Dap: somwehre like
10:30 No Dap: 327 129
10:30 No Dap: would flow well
10:30 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/6ea2e903da38c023496626fec9acc8a7
10:31 No Dap: 02:11:900 - rip DS
10:31 No Dap: rip slider break rage
10:31 pkmnyab: LOL
10:31 No Dap: Rip
10:31 No Dap: That link
10:31 No Dap: Crashed , ac
10:31 No Dap: Mac
10:31 No Dap: It didnt crash osu
10:31 No Dap: It crashed mac
10:32 No Dap: that looks good
10:33 No Dap: a02:19:000 - rip reading
10:33 No Dap: rip DS
10:33 No Dap: 02:20:500 -
10:34 pkmnyab: ok DS should be k now
10:35 No Dap: 02:34:000 -
10:35 pkmnyab: holy AR 9.5 is like the best thing ever for songs where ar 9 is too slow and ar10 is too fast
10:35 pkmnyab: peppy for president
10:35 No Dap: stack 2 and 5
10:35 No Dap: at this 02:32:000 -
10:36 pkmnyab: ?
10:36 No Dap: ?
10:36 pkmnyab: what
10:36 No Dap: stack
10:36 No Dap: 02:33:200 -
10:36 No Dap: 02:33:800 -
10:36 No Dap: on
10:37 No Dap: 02:32:000 - ?
10:37 pkmnyab: k
10:37 No Dap: 02:40:000 - move this a bit to the left
10:37 No Dap: for better transition
10:38 pkmnyab: k
10:39 No Dap: k others look fine
10:39 No Dap: post on thread and gimmie kds pls
10:39 pkmnyab: no you post on thread
10:39 No Dap: I don't have the long
10:39 No Dap: i fucking crahsed like

Ike rank this please (Y)

Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-13T19:58:26+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:
that'll make it unrankable
Nope. Ranking criteria does not say "must." It says "should."

asked frosty apparently it's not unrankable lol o_O

(wtf i swear i read somewhere it was -_-)

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-06-15T15:36:26+00:00

Just one more thing to fix:
[Insane]

01:47:800 (6) - this kick slider should be 1/4 btw. Always slow down the music to verify that the rhythm is correct.

EDIT: Good luck!

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-06-15T19:13:50+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Just one more thing to fix:
[Insane]
01:47:800 (6) - this kick slider should be 1/4 btw. Always slow down the music to verify that the rhythm is correct.

aahh I have no idea how that became 1/6 xD anyways thanks for catching that, fixed.

EDIT: thanks for the bubble! <3 <3 <3

Last edited by pkk 2014-06-16T11:26:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Garven

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Joined January 2010

Garven 2014-06-16T09:52:43+00:00

[General]
You have two MP3's in the .osz. Remove one.
Even after removing one mp3, you'll need to make the video a bit smaller. You're almost at 26 MB file size and you should be aiming at 20 MB (the 128 kbs mp3 is about 3 MB).
Tick rate 2 fits this song best

[Easy]
01:38:600 (3,4) - Miss a couple whistle/claps?
01:56:200 - Having a long break, then play a section as long as that break, then break again... particularly poor pacing, probably. Prolong playing pace properly! I'd follow Normal for a good guideline.
02:23:400 (1) - This is kind of soon after a spinner for an Easy. I recommend 3-4 beats at this BPM.

[Normal]
00:26:600 (1) - This section feels... exactly like the other section before it even though the song's pacing has completely changed. I recommend that you use single circles instead of the 1/1 sliders to give a better feel of a general slowdown. Then things pick back up at 00:33:000 - of course.
01:05:000 (1) - Same thing going on here.

[Hard]
OD +2
I'm not understanding why you're adding all these 1/4 rhythms to a very strong 1/2 driven song. Feels like you're just trying to add filler.
Same pacing commentary from the Normal.
00:36:200 (1,2) - Snapped wrong
00:49:800 (3) - ^
01:16:200 (1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
01:21:000 (1) - Snapped wrong
01:27:400 (1,2) - ^
01:39:400 (3) - ^
01:56:200 (1,2) - ^
02:07:400 (1,2,3,4) - These would be so much better if you went more with the percussion/synth instead of half of it.
This'll be pretty nice once you fix up all the rhythm problems.

[Insane]
This is a huge jump up in difficulty from the Hard and the rest of the difficulty spread. :/
Overall it's really trying hard to go beyond the difficulty of the song itself with the extra rhythms all over the place. The general distance snap feels really high compared to the SV as well, so sliders feel really slow for most of the map. Try following the music a bit more - it'll produce a much more satisfying product in the end.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-06-16T11:13:12+00:00

Garven wrote:
[General]
You have two MP3's in the .osz. Remove one.
Even after removing one mp3, you'll need to make the video a bit smaller. You're almost at 26 MB file size and you should be aiming at 20 MB (the 128 kbs mp3 is about 3 MB). re-downloaded map set and there does not appear to be a second mp3 file so it looks like it sorted itself out
Tick rate 2 fits this song best fixed

[Normal]
00:26:600 (1) - This section feels... exactly like the other section before it even though the song's pacing has completely changed. I recommend that you use single circles instead of the 1/1 sliders to give a better feel of a general slowdown. Then things pick back up at 00:33:000 - of course.
01:05:000 (1) - Same thing going on here. mapped both sections with more circles to match the slower pace

[Hard]
OD +2
I'm not understanding why you're adding all these 1/4 rhythms to a very strong 1/2 driven song. Feels like you're just trying to add filler.
Same pacing commentary from the Normal.
00:36:200 (1,2) - Snapped wrong fixed
00:49:800 (3) - ^ fixed
01:16:200 (1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam k
01:21:000 (1) - Snapped wrong fixed
01:27:400 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:39:400 (3) - ^ fixed
01:56:200 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:07:400 (1,2,3,4) - These would be so much better if you went more with the percussion/synth instead of half of it. fixed rhythm
This'll be pretty nice once you fix up all the rhythm problems.

[Insane]
This is a huge jump up in difficulty from the Hard and the rest of the difficulty spread. :/
Overall it's really trying hard to go beyond the difficulty of the song itself with the extra rhythms all over the place. The general distance snap feels really high compared to the SV as well, so sliders feel really slow for most of the map. Try following the music a bit more - it'll produce a much more satisfying product in the end.

Thanks for modding!

I cannot seem to find the second mp3 file in the folder, and I'm sure there should only be one since I deleted the old 128 kbps version when I replaced it:

Folder screenshot

Anyways, do you have any more suggestions on how I should fix my insane? I would really like to keep the difficulty level so that more experienced players would actually play the map.

Thanks~

Last edited by pkk 2014-06-16T15:26:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kiiwa

928 posts

Joined January 2010

Kiiwa 2014-06-16T13:08:10+00:00

pkmnyab wrote:
Anyways, do you have any more suggestions on how I should fix my insane? I would really like to keep the difficulty level so that more experienced players would actually play the map.
Thanks~

There is no real reason why an experienced player wouldn't play this.
If it was simply too easy for them, they would either SS it or add a mod.

A maps difficulty should reflect the song. The map SHOULD NOT try to be something that is overly hard, difficult and unnecessarily more challenging than the song needs to be. Why would you want to keep the difficulty level of the Insane over improving the rhythm of your map and possibly making your Insane match the song more? If you make a map which is easy to some, is that a bad thing?

Honestly, I wouldn't even use AR9 here because of the low bpm its not really needed, but its your choice entirely.

Anyway, best of luck

pkk

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

pkk 2014-06-16T15:30:28+00:00

Kiiwa wrote:
pkmnyab wrote:
Anyways, do you have any more suggestions on how I should fix my insane? I would really like to keep the difficulty level so that more experienced players would actually play the map.
Thanks~
There is no real reason why an experienced player wouldn't play this.
If it was simply too easy for them, they would either SS it or add a mod.

A maps difficulty should reflect the song. The map SHOULD NOT try to be something that is overly hard, difficult and unnecessarily more challenging than the song needs to be. Why would you want to keep the difficulty level of the Insane over improving the rhythm of your map and possibly making your Insane match the song more? If you make a map which is easy to some, is that a bad thing?

Honestly, I wouldn't even use AR9 here because of the low bpm its not really needed, but its your choice entirely.

Anyway, best of luck

Alright, thanks for the feedback. I think I'll upload my current insane as an extra diff and put it in the map description (not included in map set) so that people can choose to download it if they want something more challenging to play while being unranked.

That being said, I'll try to make my current insane difficulty match the song better. Thanks again~

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-06-16T18:12:56+00:00

Life is so hard. So hard to get a first ranked map. Good luck pk :p

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-16T20:22:38+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Easy]
01:38:600 (3,4) - Miss a couple whistle/claps? fix
01:56:200 - Having a long break, then play a section as long as that break, then break again... particularly poor pacing, probably. Prolong playing pace properly! I'd follow Normal for a good guideline. okay i mapped out the section after second kiai
02:23:400 (1) - This is kind of soon after a spinner for an Easy. I recommend 3-4 beats at this BPM. fix (i may remove this spinner if you don't think this is a good place to end spinner)

[Insane]
This is a huge jump up in difficulty from the Hard and the rest of the difficulty spread. :/
Overall it's really trying hard to go beyond the difficulty of the song itself with the extra rhythms all over the place. The general distance snap feels really high compared to the SV as well, so sliders feel really slow for most of the map. Try following the music a bit more - it'll produce a much more satisfying product in the end. in my opinion, the hard has some pretty complicated jumps and stuff o-o. and the song is pretty intensive with the beats. but idk. im not a bat soo..

code

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424,288,45400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
360,364,45800,6,0,P|292:352|248:352,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
224,260,46600,2,0,P|268:207|290:169,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
385,196,47400,2,0,P|401:243|424:288,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
448,116,48600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
480,20,49000,6,0,B|460:4|412:12|392:28|392:28|340:12|268:36,1,200,4|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,104,50200,1,12,1:2:0:0:
116,124,50600,2,0,B|112:92|112:92|96:68|92:36|92:36|72:12,2,100,0|8|0,1:1|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
136,220,51800,1,8,1:2:0:0:
236,200,52200,5,4,1:2:0:0:
480,40,65000,6,0,P|444:92|396:120,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
316,96,65800,2,0,P|276:126|250:168,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,268,66600,2,0,B|304:260|327:231|327:231|364:228,2,100,0|0|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
68,240,68200,6,0,P|44:184|36:128,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
136,156,69000,2,0,P|158:99|192:54,1,100,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
240,148,69800,2,0,P|285:127|334:116,2,100,0|0|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
248,248,71000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,316,71400,6,0,P|272:344|224:344,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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357,120,73000,2,0,P|267:154|248:248,1,200,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
184,324,74200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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247,323,77800,6,0,P|247:273|268:228,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,292,79000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
364,196,79400,2,0,B|360:164|344:136|344:136|312:108,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,228,80600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
176,188,81000,6,0,L|100:112,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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484,168,83800,1,8,1:2:0:0:
480,268,84200,6,0,P|424:248|389:184,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,228,85000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
308,328,85400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
208,340,85800,2,0,B|164:344|164:344|144:352|144:352|104:356,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
228,240,87000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
292,160,87400,5,2,1:2:0:0:
392,160,87800,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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92,157,91400,2,0,P|111:92|139:53,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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200,136,93400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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160,108,96600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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276,140,99400,2,0,P|228:152|192:196,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,100200,5,6,1:2:0:0:
72,104,100600,1,12,1:2:0:0:
152,40,101000,2,0,P|208:62|259:56,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
332,112,101800,2,0,L|288:202,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,312,103400,6,0,P|268:316|220:296,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,324,104200,2,0,P|120:348|120:376,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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119,36,105800,2,0,P|168:27|215:43,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,100,106600,6,0,P|360:132|448:120,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,44,108200,2,0,P|200:100|212:152,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,109000,2,0,P|246:285|230:332,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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28,148,110600,2,0,L|15:196,2,50,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,64,111400,2,0,B|128:44|180:68|180:68|240:48|280:76,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,124,112600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,212,113000,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,312,113400,2,0,P|332:308|292:328,1,100,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,368,114200,1,10,0:0:0:0:
116,344,114600,2,0,L|77:375,2,50,4|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,252,115400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,188,115800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,188,116200,6,0,P|140:152|156:128,1,100,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,48,117000,2,0,P|184:32|160:8,2,50,0|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
304,100,117800,2,0,B|280:164|280:164|252:204,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,268,118600,2,0,B|348:204|348:204|376:164,1,100,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
464,204,119400,6,0,P|456:132|392:80,2,150,0|0|8,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
404,284,121000,2,0,P|404:316|408:348,2,50,0|0|10,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
308,260,121800,2,0,P|285:282|265:308,2,50,0|0|10,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,180,122600,6,0,B|384:144|384:144|368:112|376:72,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,64,123400,2,0,B|268:100|268:100|284:132|276:172,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
180,176,124200,2,0,B|188:140|188:140|172:108|180:68,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
92,28,125000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
36,112,125400,1,10,1:2:0:0:
84,200,125800,6,0,P|132:212|152:272,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
148,356,126600,2,0,P|212:340|252:352,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
344,360,127400,2,0,P|436:244|268:252,1,400,4|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140200,12,4,141800,0:0:0:0:
416,304,143400,5,4,1:2:0:0:
456,108,144200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,145000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,200,145400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,288,145800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,244,146600,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,147400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,148200,2,0,P|272:276|196:300,2,100,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
476,148,149800,6,0,P|428:108|400:64,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
324,20,150600,2,0,P|313:81|289:127,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
292,216,151400,2,0,P|350:194|402:192,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:1:0:0:
240,300,152600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
140,300,153000,5,0,1:1:0:0:
112,204,153400,2,0,P|84:196|56:184,2,50,8|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:1:0:0:
196,152,154200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
288,116,154600,2,0,P|298:54|322:8,2,100,0|8|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:1:0:0:
88,144,156200,6,0,P|172:120|196:100,1,100,6|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
232,200,157000,2,0,P|148:224|124:244,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
120,328,157800,2,0,P|76:351|26:358,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
216,308,159000,1,8,1:2:0:0:
312,280,159400,6,0,B|356:300|356:300|408:284|408:284|460:304|516:276,1,200,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,196,160600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
372,136,161000,2,0,B|392:108|392:108|404:72|428:48,2,100,2|8|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
276,164,162200,1,8,1:2:0:0:
204,232,162600,6,0,L|120:168,1,100,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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260,364,164200,1,2,1:2:0:0:
324,284,164600,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,276,165000,1,2,1:2:0:0:
400,180,165400,1,8,1:2:0:0:
472,108,165800,6,0,P|429:83|379:81,1,100,4|12,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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212,120,168600,1,0,1:2:0:0:
308,148,169000,5,4,1:2:0:0:

Kibbleru

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5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-19T17:48:06+00:00

last recheck before rank hopefully

SPOILER

12:34 pkmnyab: HOW
12:34 pkmnyab: WAS YOUR
12:34 pkmnyab: MATH EXAM
12:34 pkmnyab: KEK
12:34 Kibbleru: omg
12:34 Kibbleru: that was brutal
12:35 Kibbleru: i took the entire 3 hrs lol
12:35 pkmnyab: what was the hardest part
12:35 Kibbleru: and i still couldn't figure out the
12:35 Kibbleru: trig identities ;w;
12:35 Kibbleru: yo
12:35 Kibbleru: see if u can do this
12:37 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/9AHiX/854fc47490.png
12:37 Kibbleru: k
12:37 pkmnyab: LOOOOOOOOOOOL
12:37 pkmnyab: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
12:37 pkmnyab: LAUGH MY FUCKING ASS OFF
12:37 pkmnyab: wait
12:37 pkmnyab: k
12:37 Kibbleru: lol
12:37 Kibbleru: its harder than it looks
12:37 pkmnyab: lol probably
12:40 Kibbleru:
12:41 pkmnyab: got it
12:41 pkmnyab: lemme take a picture
12:41 Kibbleru: wow
12:41 Kibbleru: teach me pls
12:41 pkmnyab: k
12:42 pkmnyab: take left side
12:42 pkmnyab: because left is cool
12:42 Kibbleru: lol
12:42 Kibbleru: ik
12:43 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/fe12858c320bffeca8955650153c238d
12:44 pkmnyab: lmao that was fun
12:44 pkmnyab: i finished remapping my insane hooray
12:45 Kibbleru: yay
12:47 Kibbleru: oh my god
12:47 Kibbleru: why didnt
12:47 Kibbleru: i think of that
12:47 Kibbleru: askfjhaslkfjsakflhdsfkhdliuewhfjdkshfliuewhfjdkhkgfsa
12:47 Kibbleru: sdfjhksaldhfaldskfhsad
12:47 pkmnyab: get rekt son
12:47 Kibbleru: fuck trig identities

12:48 Kibbleru: btw
12:48 Kibbleru: ur writing
12:48 Kibbleru: looks like a 7 year old's
12:48 pkmnyab: it's bad
12:48 pkmnyab: but usually it's better
12:48 pkmnyab: its cuz i was in 300% thinking mode bro
12:49 Kibbleru: ksalfjsalkfjsaf
12:49 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/a968dfa5624aa9f9d0939c997cace744
12:49 pkmnyab: here you go
12:49 pkmnyab: teacher writes notes too fast on board
12:49 pkmnyab: i cry
12:49 Kibbleru: lol
12:49 Kibbleru: i cry cuz i didnt get that t-t
12:49 Kibbleru: asnwer
12:49 Kibbleru: t-t
12:49 pkmnyab: qq
12:54 Kibbleru: omg i beat my own map
12:54 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/440395 LiSA - Rising Hope [Hope]]
12:54 Kibbleru: finaly
12:54 pkmnyab: so you beat your map
12:54 pkmnyab: but you couldn't beat your math exam?
12:54 *pkmnyab runs
12:54 pkmnyab: congrats \o/
12:54 Kibbleru: LOL
12:54 Kibbleru: ;w;
12:55 Kibbleru: hey its fine i think i got every other question
12:55 Kibbleru: whats this test diff
12:56 pkmnyab: oh that was so i could skip the whole song
12:56 pkmnyab: and go tot he last part
12:56 pkmnyab: so i could testplay with DT
12:56 pkmnyab: gonna remove it now
12:57 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
12:57 pkmnyab: 20 years later map still doesn't submit
12:58 Kibbleru: 00:17:400 (2,3) - blanket better lel
12:58 pkmnyab: k after i submit
12:58 pkmnyab: fk this thing broken
12:58 pkmnyab: i'll submit later LOL
12:58 pkmnyab: fixed
12:59 Kibbleru: 00:17:800 (3) - hm this jump feels better to play if u ctrl g idk test it uself
12:59 Kibbleru: urself*
13:00 pkmnyab: k
13:00 Kibbleru: (optional for http://puu.sh/9AJeV/89a15d7dc1.jpg) perhaps try something like that if it looks better to u 00:26:600 (1,3) -
13:01 Kibbleru: 00:30:400 (2,3) - i think a bit of a jump may fit better
13:01 Kibbleru: to emphasize that clap sound i think
13:01 Kibbleru: on (3)
13:01 pkmnyab: brb 5 mins lunch
13:01 pkmnyab: nvm i lied im back
13:01 Kibbleru: lol
13:02 pkmnyab: k made jump
13:02 Kibbleru: 00:42:200 (7,1) - blanket better

13:02 pkmnyab:

OK
13:03 Kibbleru: 00:35:000 (3,4) - ridiculously big compared to the previous jumps
13:03 pkmnyab: k
13:04 Kibbleru: maybe
13:04 Kibbleru: you can
13:04 pkmnyab: i fixed
13:04 Kibbleru: 00:34:800 (2,4) - ctrl g these 2 or something okay w/e u did
13:05 Kibbleru: 00:44:800 (3,4,5) - this is a bit awkward since (5) should be the emphasized note not (4)
13:05 Kibbleru: as in like jump distance wise
13:07 pkmnyab: lol
13:07 pkmnyab: ya
13:09 Kibbleru: 01:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - try this, i think it flows better http://puu.sh/9AKdG/fef9ba52dd.jpg
13:09 pkmnyab: fixed
13:09 Kibbleru: i only moved (1)
13:09 pkmnyab: ya it does, thanks
13:11 Kibbleru: 02:05:800 (1,2) - jump is absudly big
13:11 Kibbleru: for such a quiet note at (2)
13:11 Kibbleru: actually i cant even hear (2)
13:11 Kibbleru: well
13:11 Kibbleru: nv
13:11 Kibbleru: m
13:11 Kibbleru: it's just a change in chord or something
13:11 Kibbleru: you can make the jump a bit smaller or change (1) to a slider
13:11 pkmnyab: ya made it smaller
13:12 Kibbleru: actually
13:12 Kibbleru: this is a triplet i believe
13:12 Kibbleru: the sound thing 02:06:100 - is at here
13:14 Kibbleru: i believe the rhythm should be something like this
13:14 Kibbleru: but idk
13:14 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/9AKKY/6d46dbd4d2.jpg
13:14 pkmnyab: hm
13:15 Kibbleru: hang on
13:15 Kibbleru: i gotta fix up my gd for no dap so zero can bubble
13:15 Kibbleru: lol
13:15 pkmnyab: lol k
13:25 Kibbleru: okay
13:25 Kibbleru: back to ur mod
13:26 Kibbleru: u there still?
13:26 pkmnyab: ye
13:26 Kibbleru: 02:10:000 (1,2,3) - reduce this spacing to like .7 or something cuz idk
13:26 Kibbleru: if u wana really reduce the diff, make your strems with less ds
13:27 pkmnyab: k
13:27 Kibbleru: 02:29:100 - there's a pretty prominant beat you're missing here o-o
13:27 Kibbleru: just do what u did 00:13:400 (4,5) -
13:28 Kibbleru: 02:28:900 - here too
13:28 Kibbleru: o_O
13:28 pkmnyab: k
13:28 pkmnyab: fk
13:28 Kibbleru: don't overmap != undermap

13:28 pkmnyab: i will just make a 4 note stream
13:28 pkmnyab: fk kick sliders
13:29 Kibbleru: yeah that works
13:29 Kibbleru: also
13:29 Kibbleru: 02:35:000 (3,4,5,6) -
13:29 Kibbleru: ik this with experience
13:29 Kibbleru: these are fking stupid hard to play
13:29 pkmnyab: get
13:29 pkmnyab: fking
13:29 pkmnyab: rekt
13:30 pkmnyab: k i will fix so kiddies don't rage
13:30 Kibbleru: 02:39:400 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9AMjs/9255c04f0d.jpg do something like this instead, movement feels more comfortable
13:31 pkmnyab: k
13:31 Kibbleru: 03:05:000 (1,2,3) - space this out kinda like what you have 03:03:400 (1,2,3) -
13:31 Kibbleru: easier to read
13:33 Kibbleru: k ill test this out now
13:33 Kibbleru: dw
13:33 Kibbleru: im a certified noob
13:33 Kibbleru: to testplay easy maps
13:33 Kibbleru: 01:13:200 (2,3) - feels weird without a jump here owo
13:34 pkmnyab: k
13:35 Kibbleru: 02:17:200 (1,2,3) - this kinda looked ugly in play mode lol
13:36 Kibbleru: watch garven say
13:36 pkmnyab: k reduced DS
13:36 pkmnyab: and made i straight
13:36 Kibbleru: "now it's undermapped"
13:36 pkmnyab: LOL
13:37 Kibbleru: 02:44:200 (1,2,3) - more distance problems
13:37 pkmnyab: fixed
13:38 Kibbleru: is bss still down?
13:38 pkmnyab: probably idk
13:39 Kibbleru: try
13:39 pkmnyab: k
13:42 Kibbleru: 00:51:000 - consider adding clap here?
13:42 Kibbleru: 00:51:800 - and here
13:42 Kibbleru: cuz there's that
13:42 Kibbleru: like
13:42 Kibbleru: tss sound or w/e
13:43 pkmnyab: k
13:44 Kibbleru: 01:17:400 (7) - i don't think you should miss the clap here
13:44 pkmnyab: ya i was remapping
13:44 pkmnyab: prob forgot to add some hitsounds
13:44 pkmnyab: so yaaaa i'll add them in later lol
13:45 pkmnyab: because if i end up having to change rhythm/delete notes then there would have been no point in me adding the hitsound
13:45 pkmnyab: because i'd have to add again and im lazy
13:46 Kibbleru: k get no dap to mod now
13:46 pkmnyab: kty
13:46 Kibbleru: 02:23:400 (1) - this meeds to be a bit louder i think
13:46 Kibbleru: imo
13:47 Kibbleru: ill post this log so garven can see that u got modszz

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-20T20:36:06+00:00

Did some IRC with No Dap regarding the revised insane difficulty

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15:31 No Dap: unreadable anti jump
15:31 No Dap: unrankable
15:31 pkmnyab: gg
15:31 pkmnyab: wanna spec me DT it
15:31 pkmnyab: :-)
15:31 No Dap: lol ok
15:32 pkmnyab: rekt
15:32 No Dap: unrankable
15:34 pkmnyab: gg
15:34 No Dap: less combo than me pls
15:34 pkmnyab: pls
15:34 No Dap: play ez ht
15:34 No Dap: and get rekt
15:34 pkmnyab: ok
15:35 No Dap: wow
15:35 pkmnyab: this is too hard
15:36 No Dap: hax
15:36 pkmnyab: ???
15:36 No Dap: i quit
15:36 No Dap: lets mod
15:36 pkmnyab: LOL k
15:36 No Dap: you too pro
15:36 pkmnyab: i am cookiezi's illegitimate son
15:36 pkmnyab: ssh
15:36 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363639 Giga-P - Electric Angel [Insane]]
15:39 No Dap: 01:43:761 - spacing
15:39 No Dap: 01:42:900 -
15:39 No Dap: 01:43:700 -
15:39 No Dap: almost identical
15:39 pkmnyab: k
15:42 No Dap: 02:09:300 -
15:42 No Dap: this is gonna look weird in game play
15:42 No Dap: because of stack
15:42 No Dap: you want this?
15:42 pkmnyab: hm
15:42 No Dap: 02:13:200 - why NC
15:42 No Dap: get rekt
15:42 pkmnyab: LOL oops
15:42 pkmnyab: k fixed
15:43 pkmnyab: also removed nc at 02:16:400 -
15:43 pkmnyab: yolo
15:43 No Dap: 02:16:400 -
15:43 No Dap: 02:19:800 -
15:43 No Dap: wht combo
15:43 No Dap: whyyyy
15:43 No Dap: inconsistent
15:43 pkmnyab: fixed combo
15:44 No Dap: i know this is insane
15:44 No Dap: 02:29:400 - but this part is a bit really
15:44 No Dap: tricky to read
15:45 pkmnyab: hmmm
15:45 No Dap: just 02:29:200 - make this stream too?
15:45 pkmnyab: yea
15:45 No Dap: cuz they look the same
15:45 No Dap: regardless the nc
15:45 No Dap: hard to read
15:46 No Dap: 02:33:600 - stack on02:34:800 - ?
15:46 No Dap: itd flow better imo
15:47 pkmnyab: jump between 3 and 4 is smallt hough
15:48 pkmnyab: i'll just move 3
15:48 pkmnyab: http://gyazo.com/f302861e4708338e91898bdb696a1227
15:48 No Dap: k
15:48 No Dap: i don't wanna click that
15:48 No Dap: cuz i crash
15:48 pkmnyab: lolol
15:48 No Dap: 03:06:400 -
15:48 No Dap: the slider pls
15:49 No Dap: move the tail
15:49 No Dap: to like
15:49 No Dap: 224 300
15:49 No Dap: or something
15:51 pkmnyab: ok
15:51 No Dap: rest looks ok to play
15:51 No Dap: it's your choice wheather you wanna post this or not
15:52 pkmnyab: post the log
15:52 No Dap: i can't
15:52 No Dap: i crash
15:52 No Dap: and i cri
15:52 pkmnyab: LOL
15:52 pkmnyab: k

File size reduced as well, map should be ready for a re-check now. (^・ω・^ )

Garven

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Garven 2014-06-21T04:57:50+00:00

The remap looks much better!

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) -

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-21T05:15:16+00:00

This is troll post :3

Garven wrote:
The remap looks much better!

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky fixed
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) - fixed

IT'S FINALLY HAPPENING

inb4 another bat comes along to tell you to remap hard

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-21T12:16:48+00:00

Garven wrote:
The remap looks much better! @w@ thanks

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky ok, I adjusted spacing so it was easier to read
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) - alright, flow should be better now and the jump should be easier to read

Everything fixed, thanks for modding!

EDIT: Can a BAT change the title text colour in-game to 253,179,179? (pink) thanksss

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Garven 2014-06-22T16:05:23+00:00

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-22T16:07:32+00:00

Garven wrote:

thank you for re-bubble!!! : DDD

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-22T17:06:54+00:00

Garven wrote:

let me buy some of that moe pls

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Atrue 2014-06-23T15:10:28+00:00

Hello~
From random bubble check

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Quite a successful remap, a lot better than what I last time saw.
Please add Video in Kibbleru's Easy.
Just pointing out something worth saying.

[Kibbleru's Easy]
General
Good diff~

[Normal]
General
Good diff, especially on beats.

[Hard]
General
Just some minor stuff.
Placement
00:26:200 (4) - Maybe just make the note not stacked is better for reading. Example:

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01:07:400 (3,4) - Also here the stack is not recommended, because the rhythm here is really not as other parts of the music and stacking may lead to puzzling in first try. Example:

SPOILER

01:19:400 (1,2,3) - Ah.. Also stacking here is not recommended. This time is because the music is quite flowing and the stop on the note would be a little strange imo. Example:

SPOILER

[Insane]
General
Overall fine~ but some distance is still need to be more controlled.
Placement
01:27:200 (7) - Here the note needs a jump to show the jumps in next notes, and music is becoming more and more strong in that part. Example:

SPOILER

01:51:600 (2,3,4) - See the distance here, 1/2 and 1/4 are in the same distance, which is puzzling. I suggest making 1/4 jumps on 3,4. Example:

SPOILER

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