1. Hard (3.09 stars, 616 notes)
2. Insane (5.11 stars, 1091 notes)
3. Normal (1.99 stars, 348 notes)

tellertheworld wrote:

Frist~!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

GD please :3

P A N wrote:

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

GD please :3

hmm I plan to map this on my own but let's see if I'm too lazy XD

No Dap wrote:

BG not hentai enough so you only get 1 star mwahaha

tellertheworld wrote:

P A N is hentai

From as M4M request.

[Gerenal]

1. Please add some tags. ok
   　
2. add some colours for Hitcircle / Slider combos. ok
   　
3. Insane: tick Widescreen Support. ok
   　
4. Offset : 750ms BPM:150 ok
   　　　　　　1160ms BPM:150

Insane

1. 01:04:923 - add note? 01:04:656 (1) - it is loudly, it is not smae at 01:04:834 (2,3,4) - . .if you add note here and make them 01:04:834 (2,3) - triple. I think it can make 01:04:656 (1) - more prominent. I think it's fine because 1/2 still fit well and it will ruin my pattern also.
2. 01:14:952 (2) - you can try to overlap with 01:15:130 (3) - . because the tone look like 01:13:355 (2,3) - and 01:14:065 (2,3) - . will think about it, I want to make both stack. will look for other opinion.
3. 01:20:455 (2) - there is no durm sound but you are make a big jump here. I think it is improper. it's fine imo, it's still comfortable to play.
4. 01:27:556 (2,3) - is same at 01:28:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - . Do you make 01:27:733 (3) - curve. I think use straight line for this is better flow.
5. 01:46:195 (7) - NC [color=#FF0000]already add on 01:47:260 (1) so I think it's not nescessery.
6. 02:00:396 (1) - move to X:40 Y:228 may be well at flow. ok
7. 02:06:609 (2) - the jump is too far? I think that 02:09:272 (2,3,4) - distance is more comfortably. I think it's ok because that 1/2 is 1/2 distance from 1/1 too and many testplayer not misread it.
8. 02:38:739 - missing a loudly voice. you can make it same with 02:41:402 (6,1) - . ok
9. 02:43:355 (1,2,3) - why you are map this in 1/3 beat snap. 02:43:591 (2) - it shout be start at 02:43:532 - . I think 1/3 is already fit here.
10. 02:47:615 (5,6) - you can make a jump between it. or you can try this. I try other thing.
    
11. 03:14:153 - same at b4 (01:04:923 - ).same
12. 03:24:538 (1) - change to 1/4 and rebound two time or make two 1/4 slider. I think it is match the rhythm more. I will think about it, I want to add note just the beat that hear clearly so it won't confuse the player.
    
    
13. 03:43:887 (7,8) - the rhythm look like speed up. you should be change faster rhythm here. same, will think about it, It's a good idea though but it will quiet harder.
    
14. 04:10:336 (4) - ↓ (suggestion) there have a finish. make different with 04:08:384 (3,4,5,1,2) - . I think it's fine but if I change, I still don't have any idea to place a note somewhere also.
    
15. 04:13:709 (1) - player may be click it early.( click at 04:13:532 - ) will think about it, looks for more opnion
16. 04:16:017 (2) - end at 04:16:372 - ? will think about it, looks for more opnion
    

working....

Hinsvar wrote:

So I just testplayed Insane and...

Dude, AR9.5 doesn't fit for the intensity of the map. Just go back to AR9, because that's the AR that fits with the diff; just saying. It feels far more comfortable to play that way!

Good map anyway, so here's a star. And good luck o/

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

*Little Sheep Jumping saying Loli BG!*

Xinely wrote:

That BG.. PAN really likes pantsu

Normal

01:03:591 add a long note then end it here 01:04:301 also put a repeat here 01:03:946
Like This -
03:57:201 move to here 03:57:023
-No Major Problems-

Hard

00:20:633 add a note
00:22:053 ^
00:23:473 ^
00:24:804 move placement x:264 y:320
00:24:893 ^ x:276 y:292
Should Look like This - -
00:26:313 add a note
00:27:733 ^
00:30:751 ^
00:32:881 ^
00:35:011 ^
00:35:366 ^
00:35:721 ^
00:36:431 ^

1. 02:25:426 (3,4) - unbend 3 a little bit to blanket better
2. 03:00:751 (1) - vocal at tail is really strong and matches the next section with 03:01:461 (2,3,4) - . so emphasize it by replacing that slider with a 1/2 and a hitcircle at 03:01:106 - ? like what you did at 03:04:834 (3,4) -

1. 01:06:431 (5,6) - blanket a bit better
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2. 02:28:088 (4,5,6,7) - i think you misplaced these. for the entire kiai time, youve had slider heads follow the hi-hat but these sliders have the hi-hat sound on the tail. move them over to start at 02:27:911 - , adjust angles for flow from 02:27:733 (3) - , and add a hitcircle at 02:29:508 - to also follow vocals?
3. 02:30:218 (2,3,4) - same ^ maybe try this rhythm? would also follow vocals better imo
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:25:781 (5) - remove ? it isnt indicated in the music. the sound at hitcircle 4 is the same as 00:25:070 - 00:25:426 - so it wouldnt continue on to be a triplet. if having only one 1/4 slider go into a another slider is strange, you could replace the 1/4 slider with a triplet
2. 00:41:579 (1) - remove NC? pretty unnecessary and breaks the 1 measure NC's you have
3. 00:57:378 (6) - i think you misplaced this. the sound from the instrument hits at 00:57:556 - . theres nothing at 00:57:378 -
4. 01:12:644 (4,6) - it would flow a bit better if you ctrl-g these 2 imo. this would also make it so that you could use the direction change from going left <-- at 01:12:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - to going right at 01:13:177 (1,2,3) - an indication of the big change in the vocal
5. 01:27:023 (1) - move this a bit to the right so its more visible and to have spacing consistency with 01:25:958 (1,1,1) - ? in those 3, most of the head of the slider is visible
6. 02:03:591 (6,7) - blanket around slider 7's head better?
7. 02:06:786 (3) - the vocal at the tail is relatively strong compared to the head. emphasize the vocal more by turning this slider into a 1/2 slider and adding a hitcircle at 02:07:141 - ?
8. 02:32:704 (1) - ctrl-g this slider so that the really strong guitar at the head is more emphasized with the change in rotational flow instead of being similar to 02:31:284 (1,3,4) -. it will also lead the rotational flow of 02:34:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , which is also counterclockwise. if this is done, youll also have to ctrl-g 02:33:059 (2,1,2) - too individually.
9. 04:09:449 (1,2) - switch these two on the timeline? i believe it will flow better
10. 04:14:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - imo these jumps are too small for such a strong ending, especially after this jump 04:13:177 (1,2) - . make these further apart?

Kihhou wrote:

from your M4M queue!~ :O

[Normal]

1. 02:25:426 (3,4) - unbend 3 a little bit to blanket better ok
2. 03:00:751 (1) - vocal at tail is really strong and matches the next section with 03:01:461 (2,3,4) - . so emphasize it by replacing that slider with a 1/2 and a hitcircle at 03:01:106 - ? like what you did at 03:04:834 (3,4) you are reasonable but I think 1/1 slider is better fit with that beat because it doesn't have a beat on red tick so I prefer 1/1.

[Hard]

1. 01:06:431 (5,6) - blanket a bit better hmm I don't get that picture but I try to fix on my own.
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:28:088 (4,5,6,7) - i think you misplaced these. for the entire kiai time, youve had slider heads follow the hi-hat but these sliders have the hi-hat sound on the tail. move them over to start at 02:27:911 - , adjust angles for flow from 02:27:733 (3) - , and add a hitcircle at 02:29:508 - to also follow vocals? I think it's fine and about add a circle, this is hard diff so reverse instead of some circle is fine imo.
3. 02:30:218 (2,3,4) - same ^ maybe try this rhythm? would also follow vocals better imo three 1/2 slider is already fit with vocal imo.
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:25:781 (5) - remove ? it isnt indicated in the music. the sound at hitcircle 4 is the same as 00:25:070 - 00:25:426 - so it wouldnt continue on to be a triplet. if having only one 1/4 slider go into a another slider is strange, you could replace the 1/4 slider with a triplet ehh I think that's already fit.
2. 00:41:579 (1) - remove NC? pretty unnecessary and breaks the 1 measure NC's you have the combo will too long imo if I didn't add.
3. 00:57:378 (6) - i think you misplaced this. the sound from the instrument hits at 00:57:556 - . theres nothing at 00:57:378 - I think it has, listen carefully >_>
4. 01:12:644 (4,6) - it would flow a bit better if you ctrl-g these 2 imo. this would also make it so that you could use the direction change from going left <-- at 01:12:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - to going right at 01:13:177 (1,2,3) - an indication of the big change in the vocal I have tried it but I think mine is more flow ;w;
5. 01:27:023 (1) - move this a bit to the right so its more visible and to have spacing consistency with 01:25:958 (1,1,1) - ? in those 3, most of the head of the slider is visible it's already visible imo, many of tester didn't miss that slider also.
6. 02:03:591 (6,7) - blanket around slider 7's head better? omg ok
7. 02:06:786 (3) - the vocal at the tail is relatively strong compared to the head. emphasize the vocal more by turning this slider into a 1/2 slider and adding a hitcircle at 02:07:141 - ? ok
8. 02:32:704 (1) - ctrl-g this slider so that the really strong guitar at the head is more emphasized with the change in rotational flow instead of being similar to 02:31:284 (1,3,4) -. it will also lead the rotational flow of 02:34:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , which is also counterclockwise. if this is done, youll also have to ctrl-g 02:33:059 (2,1,2) - too individually. hmm I more like the current flow.
9. 04:09:449 (1,2) - switch these two on the timeline? i believe it will flow better hm I don't think so :/
10. 04:14:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - imo these jumps are too small for such a strong ending, especially after this jump 04:13:177 (1,2) - . make these further apart? u want huh? lol OK!

nice beatmap c: couldnt find much in hard and normal~

Number5 wrote:

From Queue.
Normal
00:00:750 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too loud, other diffs are too. ok
Hard
01:21:698 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe too hard? no it's ez
I'm so sorry I'm not able to mod Insane...

WhiteAries wrote:

hi :3

[Normal]
00:23:650 (3) - (Suggestion) how about this? http://puu.sh/9zkHU ok
01:01:816 (5) - move to (425,194) hmm I didn't plan to make it symmetry but fixed anyway lol
01:05:366 (2,3) - It's ok. but i recommend to change this to slider. there's reason.. but i'cant explain(my poor english;w;) just it's more fit i think the note before slider was follow the vocal :X
02:14:420 (2) - need to start at 02:14:597 i think you following drumbeat. but this part have impact in vocal sound. so i think this part need to follow the vocal sound I want to keep the note spacing 1/2 for easier to catch the beat.
02:29:686 (6) - slider shape. last point at (268,292) didn't plan to make it symmetry there.
02:30:218 (7) - (226,316) if you fix 02:29:686 (6) move this :3
03:20:988 (4) - slider shape. middle point at (420,32) last point at (372,48) ^
03:19:568 (1) - slider shape. middle point at (381,234) last point at (424,253) ^
03:22:053 (1) - i don't know you aimed for this leaning slider.. fix it if you want horizontally, <middle point (164,168) last point (116,148)>
03:44:597 (5) - slider shape. middle point at (232,188) last point at (276,168)
03:45:130 (1) - move to (314,135) if you fix slider :3

[Hard]
00:01:950 (4) - i think it's better to more leaning this slider beacuse of steak with 00:01:150 (2) and seems very unnatural (but it's okey those part(00:04:350 (3), 00:08:350 (6)) it's ok imo.
00:50:455 (1) - better to remove NC and add at 00:50:633 (2) it's ok imo, it's NC pattern.
01:08:029 , 01:08:739 , 01:09:449 - i think you don't have to blank this beat. this is a light-hard so I will keep it. btw I blank it like this on other map and it can rank so..
01:18:147 (6) - how about change this to slider? nope, want to blant the beat on next 1/2.
01:37:319 (1) - maybe remove this? because you ignored this beat in another part(like 01:30:928 (2,3,4)) it just suggestion :3 ignore it if you don't like hmm I want to make each part different beat so it not too boring.
02:18:857 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same suggestion at 01:08:029 same either

[Insane]
00:01:150 (1) - slider shape. middle point at (381,355) last point at (456,333) hmm nope :X
01:21:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - just make this reverse slider and note is better i think :3.. no, I really love them.
01:35:455 (2,3) - i think this pattern is good. just some reading problem whan i play. increase distance is good i think :3 I will think about it, the beat is not stronger so I can't make the bigger spacing.

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hello P A N, I just try this map m4m

[General]

■ This map osu song folder two BG.png and BG.jpg. Please you use one image in the map sure

[Normal]

■ 00:09:550 Can you remove this note? I received something that feels unnatural also this point don't hear special sound hm nice.
■ 00:56:136 ~ 01:03:236 Uh.. this part sound a little down for 40~50%? because this part so quiet
■ 01:30:928 (1) This slider end clap a little awkward imo, well I think add this slider end point in whistle don't add any hitsound instead.
■ 01:34:834 (3) This slider repeat point add finish. ok
■ 02:05:366 (1,2,3,4) The note part hitsounds sound a little unsuitable. You can add sampleset drum sound here. will think about it, looks for more opinion :3
■ 02:08:917 (1,2,3) ^ Same ^ same
■ 02:36:609 (3) You missing this note finish sound. ok
■ 04:02:881 (1) This slider end point the same part for 01:30:928 (1) fixed
■ 04:06:076 (6) This slider repeat point the same add finish ok

[Hard]

■ 00:41:224 (3,4) The rhythm is wrong! This rhythm is completely different rhythm. You try this rhythm here. you are right, fixed XD

SPOILER

■ 00:50:455 (1) This is note a little move x:160 y:188 is good pentagon imo. y:168 instead.
■ 01:19:568 (3,4) I just suggestion this note flow Ctrl+G here hmm ok.
■ 01:46:905 (7,8,9) Can you try this notes pattern? I'm a little feelling emphasize here. wow, just wow.

SPOILER

[Insane]

■ Nothing to say. I guess this map good but You just try a little improve pattern flow

Good luck

captin1 wrote:

song is dark and powerful, and you have a happy swimsuit picture as bg. doesn't fit imo, but meh

• [General]
  Maybe change the yellow color to some darker, as looks very bright because of the color, and even a yellow rim.

• [Insane]

1. 00:57:372 (6) - remove this circle.
2. 00:58:260 (1) - ^
3. 01:00:035 (5) - ^ and 01:00:212 (6) - start, where the circle was
4. 01:37:135 (5) - Reverse Selection maybe?
5. 03:43:171 (3) - ^
6. 03:44:059 (3) - ^
7. 02:45:834 (6) - move into place (4)