yo \o/ I'm back from holidays, my mod skills became really shitty, so sorry. Sorry for my shitty english too
00:00:288 (1,2) - I'm make a perfect blanket here
00:13:859 (2) - Try ctrl+g, I think it flows better, and fix the blanket
00:22:192 (3,4) - This doesn't look really neat either...
00:33:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - It isn't really noticeable but the spacing is irregular here... Fix it! The same happens in some other parts of the map, for example 00:08:859 (3,4,5,6,1) - BATs shouldn't annoy you because the map is playable but try to adjust it!
00:41:240 (1) - Maybe a ctrl+g could work well here
01:05:764 (2) - Delete this slider and replace with note + 1/2 slider. You started it on a red tick and it sounds really weird to my ears
01:13:383 (5) - The same...
01:15:287 (2,3) - Here too
01:31:478 (1,2,3) - Delete NC and put it on (3)!
01:31:716 - From here to 02:02:192 you should put some hitsounds on the second and fourth tick, I suggest claps ^^
01:36:954 (4,1) - Bad-looking overlap...
01:39:335 (1,3,5) - I think these are supposed to be stacked...
02:06:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to re-arrange these notes and give them an hexagonal shape (use the "Create poygon circles" function to help you!)
02:08:859 (2) - Make it curved, I don't like it, it's too straight to me...
02:13:383 (1) - Whistle on this?
02:27:906 (5) - Oh, I've just noticed it... You should end this slider in 02:28:264 - The rhythm is really good in my opinion and you will avoid to use a stupid 1/2 rhythm
02:31:240 (5) - Clap on the beginning
02:50:764 (2,3) - This blanket is not really neat...
03:18:383 - Like I said in the 01:31:716 - part about the hitsounds
03:24:097 (1) - Oh, split this into 4 notes or two sliders... Slider with two repeats are boring!
03:38:144 (2,3) - Blanket
03:57:668 (1,2) - ^
04:17:906 (3) - Clap in the beginning
04:18:382 (1,1) - Remove NC from the second note... You didn't put a NC before in the similar part of the song
04:28:859 (1,3) - Uh, I don't like this overlap
04:57:430 (1) - Finish in the beginning
05:10:287 (4) - Clap in the beginning
05:20:287 - Keep going with the claps until this part... Why did you stop using them?
06:22:668 (6) - You know what to do here
07:21:716 (1,2) - These should be stacked, I suppose? o.o
07:39:335 (1,2) - I suggest a pattern like this! (copy-paste the first slider)
08:06:954 (3) - Unstack these notes, I think you can create something better and more funny!
08:34:573 (1,2) - Overlap...
08:39:811 (6) - Derp
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Well, the rhythm is good! I just thing you should adjust the spacing a bit and also improve some patterns, get more mods!
If you want I will check this map again and make a better mod because this one sucks, sorry
00:00:288 (1,2) - I'm make a perfect blanket here
00:13:859 (2) - Try ctrl+g, I think it flows better, and fix the blanket
00:22:192 (3,4) - This doesn't look really neat either...
00:33:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - It isn't really noticeable but the spacing is irregular here... Fix it! The same happens in some other parts of the map, for example 00:08:859 (3,4,5,6,1) - BATs shouldn't annoy you because the map is playable but try to adjust it!
00:41:240 (1) - Maybe a ctrl+g could work well here
01:05:764 (2) - Delete this slider and replace with note + 1/2 slider. You started it on a red tick and it sounds really weird to my ears
01:13:383 (5) - The same...
01:15:287 (2,3) - Here too
01:31:478 (1,2,3) - Delete NC and put it on (3)!
01:31:716 - From here to 02:02:192 you should put some hitsounds on the second and fourth tick, I suggest claps ^^
01:36:954 (4,1) - Bad-looking overlap...
01:39:335 (1,3,5) - I think these are supposed to be stacked...
02:06:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to re-arrange these notes and give them an hexagonal shape (use the "Create poygon circles" function to help you!)
02:08:859 (2) - Make it curved, I don't like it, it's too straight to me...
02:13:383 (1) - Whistle on this?
02:27:906 (5) - Oh, I've just noticed it... You should end this slider in 02:28:264 - The rhythm is really good in my opinion and you will avoid to use a stupid 1/2 rhythm
02:31:240 (5) - Clap on the beginning
02:50:764 (2,3) - This blanket is not really neat...
03:18:383 - Like I said in the 01:31:716 - part about the hitsounds
03:24:097 (1) - Oh, split this into 4 notes or two sliders... Slider with two repeats are boring!
03:38:144 (2,3) - Blanket
03:57:668 (1,2) - ^
04:17:906 (3) - Clap in the beginning
04:18:382 (1,1) - Remove NC from the second note... You didn't put a NC before in the similar part of the song
04:28:859 (1,3) - Uh, I don't like this overlap
04:57:430 (1) - Finish in the beginning
05:10:287 (4) - Clap in the beginning
05:20:287 - Keep going with the claps until this part... Why did you stop using them?
06:22:668 (6) - You know what to do here
07:21:716 (1,2) - These should be stacked, I suppose? o.o
07:39:335 (1,2) - I suggest a pattern like this! (copy-paste the first slider)
08:06:954 (3) - Unstack these notes, I think you can create something better and more funny!
08:34:573 (1,2) - Overlap...
08:39:811 (6) - Derp
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Well, the rhythm is good! I just thing you should adjust the spacing a bit and also improve some patterns, get more mods!
If you want I will check this map again and make a better mod because this one sucks, sorry