yo!
[ Nofool's Muzukashii]
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[ Nofool's Muzukashii]
- 00:14:917 (31) - => 00:15:254 - move here. and change to d. i think that you should be unified pattern like 00:09:018 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
- 00:31:603 (96,97,98) - sounds weird to me. i think that you should be used simple pattern. like this v
00:30:591 ~ 00:32:277 - 01:18:625 (318,319,320) - maybe change to d k(1/2)? sounds/plays good to me.
- 01:24:355 (347,348,349,350,351,352,353) - so hard to understand the rhythm on current pattern. i guess that you should follow the main melody.
e.g.
- 00:09:524 (5,6,7) - why kdd only here? you should put kd from 00:09:608 - in the same way as other part.
- 00:34:721 (129) - del. this sound is a bit over to me. i think that this pattern which is longer than KIAI is unnatural.
- 00:37:417 (147) - same as above.
- 01:25:114 (429) - => 01:24:945 - maybe move here? more fits the drum and guitar imo.
you can recall me for recheck.