Hi again ♥
00:30:430 (1,2) - Move them a little bit away from center to avoid overlapping with 00:31:810 (1).
01:48:706 (3,1) - Maybe these shouldn't be stacked. Stacks really don't go well in slow parts like this. The next stack works really well on the other hand, since it's on 1/4's.
01:55:948 (1) - This finish could also use whistle.
02:06:982 (1) - ^
02:27:672 (1) - There's a little nudge in the pattern - you could put the middle point in y:264 and end point in y:116 to make it look smoother.
04:09:741 (1) - Shorten it to 1/2. Musically there's no difference to the following sliders. Just like here 04:19:396 (1).
04:26:292 (1,2) - Unnecessary stack.
I hope that helps at least a little bit~
00:30:430 (1,2) - Move them a little bit away from center to avoid overlapping with 00:31:810 (1).
01:48:706 (3,1) - Maybe these shouldn't be stacked. Stacks really don't go well in slow parts like this. The next stack works really well on the other hand, since it's on 1/4's.
01:55:948 (1) - This finish could also use whistle.
02:06:982 (1) - ^
02:27:672 (1) - There's a little nudge in the pattern - you could put the middle point in y:264 and end point in y:116 to make it look smoother.
04:09:741 (1) - Shorten it to 1/2. Musically there's no difference to the following sliders. Just like here 04:19:396 (1).
04:26:292 (1,2) - Unnecessary stack.
I hope that helps at least a little bit~