1. Thoughts (4,4 stars, 1177 notes)

Pasha_Khvan97 wrote:

Значит ты про эту карту говорила
Действительно хороша :3

Good Luck

Thank you

• Thoughts

1. 00:35:775 (6,1) - some extra flow here circular wise would be nice. the jump is good, but it could be put in other ways rather than jumping the way it is now.
2. 00:41:982 (2,3,4) - flow here again
3. 01:11:982 (1) - overmapped, no visible audio cue. drum starts on the note after. would consider removing
4. 01:21:292 (6) - and 01:22:672 (4,5,1) - bad overlap here with 6 and 4/5
5. 01:56:637 (3,4) - these 2 sliders aren't super pretty. suggest blanketing them?
6. 02:16:465 (1,2) - definitely opportunity for a blanket here on 1. I understand the emphasis on the switch and all as well, so up to you
7. 02:27:499 (5,6,1) - notes can be moved up a little, your curve into the slider isn't perfect
8. 02:46:982 (1) - think this may be unrankable. make sure that the middle is clearly visible
9. 02:48:361 (1) - same as above
10. 02:49:396 (3,4) - ctrl g 3, would be a nice touch
11. 03:54:396 (4,5,1) - your flow is off a little here. move 4/5 up from where they are
12. 04:15:775 (3,1) - this jump is really unexpected. consider moving 3 a little bit so it's easier to flow back over to 1
13. 04:16:551 (4,1) - slight flow issue here with 4 going into 1. move 4 a bit more to the left
14. 04:27:586 (5,1) - why not move 5 down? o.o
15. 04:45:603 (1,2,3) - 1/3 seem a bit close to each other
16. 05:14:223 (5,6,7,1) - little bit of flow issue, 5 curves into the first quarter of the slider and not 6. move 5 to the left a bit
    
    ahh I'm too tired to finish this the right way. it looks like a really good map, I hope this is enough. good luck! will be looking forward to playing it ranked
    

• 01:11:292 - Here I hear the distinct sound. Maybe try something like that? http://puu.sh/8jSoJ.jpg
  01:18:965 - might consider adding a circle here?
  
  and also

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  01:22:154 (3) - Maybe try something like that? http://puu.sh/8jSBX.jpg
  02:49:396 (3,4) - Maybe try something like here? 02:32:844 (3,4) and would make sliders smoother
  03:05:689 (2) - maybe remove it?
  05:45:689 (2) - ^
  05:56:723 (2) - ^
  06:07:758 (2) - ^
  06:18:792 (2) - ^
  06:29:827 (2) - ^
  04:17:327 (2) - Maybe try something like that? http://puu.sh/8jTdf.jpg
  05:14:223 (5) - Maybe to correct distance (88:180)?
  05:59:913 (4) - Maybe to correct distance (332:328)?
  06:01:120 (3) - ^
  00:57:844 - Here two circles are overlapped.
  
  And Resnap ALL notes. Some of them are not on the ticks.

1. thought: you can have a gradual decrement in hitsound volume (60%->55%->..->40%) for echo sounds like 00:38:706 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , on the first and third part wwwwww
2. 00:31:810 (1) - this repeat arrow overlapping the green slider doesn't look very good, moving 00:30:430 (1,2) - 3-4 grids aside will fix this
3. 00:42:154 (3) - this note feels unnecessary here
4. 01:35:603 (3,4) - ctrl+g wwww
5. 02:02:333 - replace the default clap plz..
6. 02:32:672 (2) - put this note in longer distance like it feels http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1539755 ww
7. 02:39:568 (2) - move this to x:216 y:12, blanket
8. 02:39:913 (4) - x:216 y:372
9. 02:49:568 (4) - missing distance http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1539768
10. 03:22:844 (1) - cool slider
11. crystalframe is quite surprising www
12. 04:46:982 (1,2,3,4) - increase some distance here?
13. 05:25:603 (1) - replace the default clap plz
14. 06:03:706 (2,3,4) - this pattern overlapped with sliders in weird place, i think this is not good.. try something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1539795
15. 06:06:465 (2) - move this down for 3 grids, blanket
16. 06:06:810 (4) - 3 grids up
17. 06:31:465 (3) - hmm maybe move the two sliders aside a little
18. 06:35:948 (1) - the music volume goes low after this point, so i suggest lower slider speeds

1. I think add mute sliderslide sounds better. I think it's a bit annoying
2. what about add whistle SC:1 on 00:28:534 (3) head and 00:29:913 (3) , 00:32:672 (2) and other note that have similar sound like this?
3. 00:33:189 (1) - I saw you follow the piano sound so what about change this slider into 1/2 like you did on 00:55:258 (1)
4. 00:37:672 (5) - mind to move 1 grid right for more blanket?
5. 00:52:327 (6) - what about spread into two circle? don't have piano sound here so I think two circles are better.
6. 01:02:154 (1,2,3,4) - mind to blanket them better?
7. 01:04:396 - I want you to add note here or change 01:04:223 (2) to be 1/2 slider and ctrl+g on (3) :X it will more fit with music and play more comfortable imo.
8. 01:26:292 (3) - add whistle?
9. what about make a jump on 01:50:258 (4)
10. 01:58:620 (7) - remove note? ((( sounds weird.
11. 02:08:361 (5,1) - hmm swap NC? the combo will too short.
12. 02:49:568 (4) - make like this instead? http://puu.sh/8kX5s.jpg also make the tail perfect stack with next (2). it's more comfortable to play imo. the current one they are too close to each other.
13. 03:16:982 (3,4,5,6) - move 2 to perfect stack with the previous 3 and redo the spacing for make next 1 still keep spacing balance. the current one is too short.
14. 04:19:223 (5) - use triple instead? don't have the piano sound and for the beginning of next part and cymbal.
15. 04:36:120 (1) - if you want to NC follow the pattern, remove this NC and add on 04:36:637 (5) instead, more fit with pattern.
16. 05:08:017 (1) - ehh why NC? :X
17. 05:27:672 (3) - hmmm clap on tail in reverse slider.. maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8kXPf.jpg or other pattern :X
18. 06:15:086 (4) - mind to perfect blanket? D:
19. 06:20:086 (3) - move tail a bit up for more blanket.
20. 06:29:827 (2,3) - maybe unstack? I'm afraid hidden mod player will miss this part and rage and votedown!!! meh jk
21. 06:46:637 (4) - change to 5 stream notes? player may misunderstand that it have one reverse and miss for the fc.

1. 00:41:465 (1)- Move it at x=352 y= 192 to keep same spacing with previous circles.
2. 01:35:603 (3,4)- Maybe you should swap their position too keep a better flow.
3. 02:27:672 (1)- I don't like how it look, like the curve you created with circles is broken by the beginning of the slider. You should try to adjust it.
4. 02:49:396 (3)- ctrl+G ?
5. 03:17:327 (1)- Move it at x=288 y=308 to keep same spacing.
6. 03:46:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- I don't really like this . My suggestions : http://puu.sh/8ooki/340cb02d1e.jpg (AR0 to see all)
7. 04:27:586 (5)- Move at x=324 y=72 ?
8. 05:34:223 (6)- Move at x=360 y=296 to make it like previous triplet.

Secretpipe wrote:

Shooted 2 stars /O/

FireFoxZX wrote:

Notice

In a title the "o" in "of" should not be capitalized please fix promply

[Thoughts]
General
Fine~ (
Placement
02:53:361 (2,3,4,1) - Flow is really not that good. Consider Ctrl+G 3,4 to avoid the sharp turn of the note 4 to slider 1. Example:

SPOILER

1. Yep should be Elements of Thought (Original Mix)
2. maybe add the album in tags?: Influential Past
3. https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/influential-past-ep/id533508024

Atrue wrote:

The maximum size of SB image is 800x600, Please check your SB image size. Some of them are a little bigger.( and your BGGlow.png crystalframe.png is way too big)