1. add tags Kagerou Project
2. 02:40:497 - this should be snapped

1. 00:53:113 - same opinion wih Dance
2. 01:00:190 - useless green line, delete this plz~ (and yea check 01:59:266 - this out too)
3. 01:11:574 (3) - consider adding a whistle on start this feels nice and better to kepp consistence with next notes (02:10:651 (3) - fix here as well)
4. 02:50:036 - no hitsounds on this part? feels kinda empty :<

1. 00:27:266 (1) - delete NC for consistence
2. 00:33:266 (1) - i'd rather delete this and add notes 00:33:113 - here and 00:33:420 - here like this
3. 00:53:113 - same as Dance
4. 00:54:343 (2) - add NC here to let the players know that there is a change of rhythm
5. 01:00:037 (2) - well i think this guitar should should have been mapped out instead of being covered up by a slider try changing it? (and 01:58:959 (1,2) - here too)
   
   and here's the example

   

1. 00:10:343 (2,3) - same opinion with Dance diff
2. 00:38:959 (1) - this NC seems uselessm, how about deleting it o,o?
3. 00:53:113 (1) - same volume opinion with Dance diff~
4. 01:04:497 (2) - move this note next to (3) slider's side? plays better! (02:03:574 (2) - don't forget here!)
   
   i mean

   
5. 01:07:882 (1) - hmmmmmmmmmm i think this spacing may cause uncomfortable while playing because even you used kinda big jump at previous note this seems really iffy try reducing DS little (and since you did copy and paste on kiai time, fix it on 2nd kiai as well) + i found you used such this jump on 02:50:036 (1) - here too but this fits nicely with the music imo
   
   try this

   

1. try using tick rate 2 it fits really nicely with the rhythm
2. 00:10:651 (3) - this slider would be better if divided into 2 notes and stacked with the previous for the flow of the music (and also fix the hitsound too!)
   
   for example like this

   
   or at least something like this

   
3. 00:24:805 (1,2,3,4) - change this notes' placement for the better match with the music's flow? (oh and you need to change the next slider's blanket and distance as well)
   
   exmapleeeeeee

   
4. 00:29:728 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
5. 00:35:882 (1) - add a clap on start to have same hitsound with 01:34:959 (1) - this
6. 00:38:651 (3,4) - consider rotating this notes about 20~30°clockwise for better flow (and you had better fix other similar parts too)
7. 00:53:113 (1) - it would be better if you increase this voulume to 40%? current set feels a little bit low (and also 00:55:574 - here and all the part similar to this part)
8. 01:09:113 - if you used tick rate 2 it would be better to add hitsound on this slider tick instead of the start for the map's completeness (don't forget 03:04:190 - here and 02:08:036 (1) - here to add tick rate hitsound!)
9. 01:32:190 (5) - unless this non-clap note was purposed plz add a clap for consistence (and 01:32:805 (2,4) - on these start too)
10. 02:00:343 (5) - according to consistence,this whistle would better moved on 02:00:190 (3) - this note
11. 02:39:882 - 02:40:036 - since i can clearly hear the drum sounds, how about adding two notes here with anti-jump? feels great (oh and adding NC as well)
    
    here's the example

    
12. 02:58:805 (2) - consider changing like this for better feeling with the music

Garven wrote:

[General]
File size is too large. You'll probably have to re-encode the video.ok
Video offset: -125ok
Tick rate 2 fits this song besthaha....I think it too noise...
Dark blue against black is tough to see.oh...you are the first people to said this...so I may think to keep this blue Orz...I REALLY like it TAT

SPOILER

[Easy]
Add a spinner somewhere so that scores aren't stagnant.
00:53:113 (2,3) - Considering both of these are visible at the same time, I would not recommend having such close spacing for these.ok
01:00:497 (1,2) - Whoa there.ok
01:59:574 (1,2) - ^ok
01:18:651 (2,3,4,5) - Might be a bit too much for an Easy. The rhythm changes up quite a bit, and there isn't a need to follow every single note.ok
02:17:728 (2,3,4,5) - ^ok
02:40:497 - Set this delayed break back to default.ok
Seems a bit slider-heavy. 140 sliders, 47 circles. Yeah.
This honestly feels more like a Normal than an Easy.\:D/

[Normal]
The map itself is fine, but it's a really hard Normal difficulty...

[Hard]
OD +1 or 2ok
01:00:190 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - This progression is pretty confusing. You have a jump into the new combo, and th enext time you see a big gap like that, it's a much bigger rhythm gap as well. I recommend you change that first jump.ok
01:59:266 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^ok
02:23:574 (1) - This'd be awesome if it had some sharp edges in it to show some stressok

[Insane]
OD +1 or 2ok
01:02:959 (1) - Wrong rhythm. Doesn't fit with how you mapped it at 01:00:497 (1) - hmmmmm....I think this both work....and I enjoy this way...just litter bit procrastination
01:07:882 (1) - etc. There's a ton of these and they sound awful against the strong 1/2 beat of the song.same^
02:21:113 (1,2) - These are 1/2 rhythms.ok
02:23:574 (1) - Should end at 02:24:036 - ok
02:37:113 (1,2) - This is a biiiig jump compared to everything else.ok
02:38:343 (1,1,1,1) - Ack, please don't mix some with repeats and some without when compressed like this.ok
02:39:728 (7,1) - This doesn't feel like that great of a spot to have an anti jump of this magnitude. Maybe have it off-center like this to feel more balanced between the two triplesok

SPOILER

The extended sliders really make this map pretty bad. Stick to the music more so that it at least sounds correct.

Chewin wrote:

00:10:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - .. wtf is this? Please. Unreadable. I clicked "retry" 10 times and still can't get it.