~Easy~
- 00:55:112 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like much how this pattern looks, I'd try something like this instead for better looking and flow.
- 01:30:939 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you could try to avoid this small overlap here, it doesn't look so good to me.
- 01:35:880 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
- 01:37:468 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 01:38:527 (3) - New combo.
- 01:40:292 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 01:42:409 (4) - New combo.
- 00:08:523 (1) - This new combo here feels not necessary, I'd remove it.
- 01:40:821 (4) - I don't know why but this slider has a really weird shape if you ask me, I'm sure you can make it much better than this.
- 01:42:409 (1,2,3) - This triple all of a sudden after a break feels way too hard to play, change these 3 circles into a slider with repeat instead.
- 01:47:351 (1) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
- Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
- 01:03:556 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped.
- 01:23:174 (5,6) - Add a finish at the begin on (5) and add a clap at the begin of (6), it seems like you missed to hitsound these two.
- 01:52:998 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing of this pattern consistent, it looks somehow bad rhythm now.
- 00:42:759 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing is inconsistent here, please fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
- 00:50:700 (4,5,6) - ^
- 01:04:083 (1) - This slider doesn't follow anything and it's also silenced so it's completely unrankable.
- 01:05:969 (4,5) - Something went wrong with the snapping here, make sure to fix it.
- 01:08:703 (6) - This sliderend sounds weird to me, but it might be just me.
- 01:29:880 (8) - Remove the clap from this sliderstart and add it on the previous sliderend on (7).
- 01:37:468 (5,6) - Really bad anti-jump, it ruins the flow of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
- 01:38:174 (7) - This stack could be improved if you disable the grid snap.