Hei from my queue
[General]
i think your volume is unrankable
[The Prologue]
- 00:11:815 - this should add note for cymbal sound, you know where end of this hold note
- 00:24:148 - until 00:31:815 - i really recommended moving all beat position to 1/1 because it may be confused for beginner player, usually they still enjoyable with 1/1
- 00:23:981 - add note
- 00:31:981 - this pattern supposed to be like this, they must be reverse every 2 note, first beat second beat you may want to re-arrange by your own creation because this is just example
- 00:56:981 - add note, well i think just for make little beat. if you do this then do similar issue
- 01:49:315 - drum sound, add note
- 02:04:750 (124750|1) - move to 1st
[The Beginning]
- 00:11:815 - this are same reason like previous difficult
- 00:43:981 - add note
- 00:54:648 - add note
- 00:55:981 (55981|6) - this should be shorted to 00:56:148 - , because the trance sound only reach until that. then fix other similar issue
- 01:15:065 (75065|2) - move to 7th , 01:15:148 (75148|3) - move to 5th, you will see the separated pattern
- 01:16:398 (76398|5,76481|4) - this same as above
- 01:17:981 (77981|6,78148|5,78315|6,78481|5) - and this move to left hand, this somehow like working only 1 hand, do this for similar isue
- 01:57:898 (117898|6,118065|4,118231|2,118398|0) - what happen with this beat placement, is they been placed properly ?
[The Middle]
- 00:11:815 - same reason like above
- 00:34:148 (34148|3) - well i think delete this, it was non-sense hold note unless you put from 00:33:648 -
- 00:43:981 - 00:54:648 - add note
- 01:01:398 (61398|1) - 01:01:898 (61898|5) - 01:02:398 (62398|1,62565|3,62731|5) - remove this, doesn't have any beat that you're followed
- 01:03:231 (63231|2) - 01:03:731 (63731|4,63898|0) - 01:58:731 (118731|5,118898|6,119065|5,119231|6) - same as above, and do this for similar issue
- 01:58:731 (118731|5,118898|6,119065|5,119231|6) - this need to removed, i think you're following drum sound and then from 01:59:315 - they're sounded in 1/4
[The End]
- 00:33:981 (33981|5,34023|4,34065|1,34106|2,34148|5,34190|4,34231|1,34273|2,34315|5,34356|4,34398|1,34440|2,34481|5,34523|4,34565|1,34606|2) - you need to think about this pattern style, i prefer like this
- 00:37:294 (37294|3,37315|2) - this placed right according the sound, but i think you no need to make this kind pattern because it may making player didn't well to press it.
- 00:56:065 (56065|6,56231|6,56565|6,56731|6) - need to delete this kind pattern, i don't hear any beat like that.. instead put them into hold note to make it better, except this one 00:59:981 (59981|6,60065|6,60148|6,60231|6,60398|6,60481|6) - they're placed properly according to the sound. then you need to delete note which placed like that
[The Epilogue]
- 00:06:627 (6627|1,6648|0) - again, this kind pattern
- 00:31:981 - damn that pattern..... well i don't know how to deal with this, 1/2 note with 3 note and double note
there's some issue which same like previous difficult, you may know that. so i'll write simple
[General]
i think your volume is unrankable
[The Prologue]
- 00:11:815 - this should add note for cymbal sound, you know where end of this hold note
- 00:24:148 - until 00:31:815 - i really recommended moving all beat position to 1/1 because it may be confused for beginner player, usually they still enjoyable with 1/1
- 00:23:981 - add note
- 00:31:981 - this pattern supposed to be like this, they must be reverse every 2 note, first beat second beat you may want to re-arrange by your own creation because this is just example
- 00:56:981 - add note, well i think just for make little beat. if you do this then do similar issue
- 01:49:315 - drum sound, add note
- 02:04:750 (124750|1) - move to 1st
[The Beginning]
- 00:11:815 - this are same reason like previous difficult
- 00:43:981 - add note
- 00:54:648 - add note
- 00:55:981 (55981|6) - this should be shorted to 00:56:148 - , because the trance sound only reach until that. then fix other similar issue
- 01:15:065 (75065|2) - move to 7th , 01:15:148 (75148|3) - move to 5th, you will see the separated pattern
- 01:16:398 (76398|5,76481|4) - this same as above
- 01:17:981 (77981|6,78148|5,78315|6,78481|5) - and this move to left hand, this somehow like working only 1 hand, do this for similar isue
- 01:57:898 (117898|6,118065|4,118231|2,118398|0) - what happen with this beat placement, is they been placed properly ?
[The Middle]
- 00:11:815 - same reason like above
- 00:34:148 (34148|3) - well i think delete this, it was non-sense hold note unless you put from 00:33:648 -
- 00:43:981 - 00:54:648 - add note
- 01:01:398 (61398|1) - 01:01:898 (61898|5) - 01:02:398 (62398|1,62565|3,62731|5) - remove this, doesn't have any beat that you're followed
- 01:03:231 (63231|2) - 01:03:731 (63731|4,63898|0) - 01:58:731 (118731|5,118898|6,119065|5,119231|6) - same as above, and do this for similar issue
- 01:58:731 (118731|5,118898|6,119065|5,119231|6) - this need to removed, i think you're following drum sound and then from 01:59:315 - they're sounded in 1/4
[The End]
- 00:33:981 (33981|5,34023|4,34065|1,34106|2,34148|5,34190|4,34231|1,34273|2,34315|5,34356|4,34398|1,34440|2,34481|5,34523|4,34565|1,34606|2) - you need to think about this pattern style, i prefer like this
- 00:37:294 (37294|3,37315|2) - this placed right according the sound, but i think you no need to make this kind pattern because it may making player didn't well to press it.
- 00:56:065 (56065|6,56231|6,56565|6,56731|6) - need to delete this kind pattern, i don't hear any beat like that.. instead put them into hold note to make it better, except this one 00:59:981 (59981|6,60065|6,60148|6,60231|6,60398|6,60481|6) - they're placed properly according to the sound. then you need to delete note which placed like that
[The Epilogue]
- 00:06:627 (6627|1,6648|0) - again, this kind pattern
- 00:31:981 - damn that pattern..... well i don't know how to deal with this, 1/2 note with 3 note and double note
there's some issue which same like previous difficult, you may know that. so i'll write simple