Hmm I don't know about the fireworks at the end. The timing I mentioned to you, but it feels like there should be more kick to it. On the other hand, adding a strobe is very non-mario-esque.
The beatmap itself feels very rankable (well once you take a look at the stuff I mentioned in irc) but it almost feels like there's something missing. Maybe my expectations are skewed because you tend to go a step beyond your regular beatmapper and do more than simply map the song. It's still a bubble as far as I'm concerned but the fireworks feel anti-climactic? I know I suggested storyboarding them in earlier and the hitfinisher argument was brought up...I dunno.
bubble btw