1. Easy (1,6 stars, 114 notes)
2. Insane (4,15 stars, 438 notes)
3. Normal (2,22 stars, 189 notes)
4. Vass' Hard (3,55 stars, 372 notes)

Zurrrr wrote:

<- supporting

1. 00:11:985 (1) - I suggest you to add a hitfinish at the start of this slider. It sounds too empty without a finish. In the song, it can be heard a finish-like sound so why not adding it?
2. 00:17:235 (4) - To follow the guitar sound I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider.
3. 00:17:985 (1) - This is supposed to be an Easy. You can't change the SV like this in an Easy. You have to keep everything consistent so beginners don't get confused by weird SV velocities and changes of spacing due to it. Also, this SV makes the approach rate too slow. It doesn't feel good with the change of sv. Sv is too fast while the approach too slow. Just my opinion, though.
4. 00:19:110 (2) - You placed this note a bit oddly. It flows kinda meh. It's just a small detail, but it is important. You have to keep following a way with the cursor. For example, if the curve of this slider is oriented a tad up, then you place the next note over that way. Just to make the flow feel more naturally and stuff. It's a very small detail that can make your map much better if you try to apply it in all your patterns. Here's a screenshot so you can understand better what I'm trying to say:
   
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5. 00:23:985 (1) - Uhmm I think it feels better to place this note over here. Just a suggestion :>
   
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6. 00:38:985 (2) - Same thing about flow. The placement of this slider is very odd and makes worse the flow. Placing it over here would be much better imo:
   
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7. 00:40:485 (3) - ^ make the slider curves fit and feel good while playing. Forcing the player to move the cursor like this isn't intuitive. :<
8. 00:41:610 (4) - I highly recommend you to unstack this note. Stacking notes in Easy difficulties is too much. Stacking in Normal difficulties is okay, but in Easier difficulties it is not.
9. 00:43:110 (2) - ^ Same. And it doesn't even play good o3o don't force note's placement, even more if it's just to make symmetry. Same about 00:44:610 (4).
10. 00:44:985 (1) - More unintuitive placements but I'll stop pointing that out. Fix the rest by yourself. I only want to say that this slider gets covered up by the previous slider like this and that looks bad and unappealing :<
    
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11. 00:44:985 (1,2) - This will confuse beginners a lot. They'll think this slider ends at a white tick but it doesn't so they'll screw up their combo and get confused by this. You should end this slider at 00:47:235 and add a note at 00:47:610 or something else to avoid confuseness.
12. 01:17:985 (1) - Kinda nazi lol. Try moving this slider 1 grid down to avoid those both slider's borders get overlapped by each other.
13. 01:19:485 (1) - ^
14. 01:20:985 (2) - So many repeats.. it's a bad idea. Beginners will most likely think that this slider has 1 repeat like all of your previous sliders with repeat. They'll may get confused with this one so consider removing repeats, leaving only 1 and then fill the empty space with other slider.
15. 01:27:735 (1,2) - I'm not sure about this overlap. Overlaps are misleading for beginners, sometimes. I would rather try some other clear and easy-to-read pattern instead of this one.
    
    I'll finish this here. The rest of the map has the same problems being repeated over and over again. Some blankets that can be better, bad flow (already explained above) and some misleading/confusing patterns for beginners. Aim for easy-to-read patterns when mapping Easy difficulties. Don't mix 1/1 and 1/2. Try to keep a consistent and simple-to-understand rhythm.

1. 00:11:985 (1) - Perhaps add a hitfinish?
2. 00:12:547 (2) - ;_; more notes like in Beginner that flow badly. This note would flow much much better over here imo:
   
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3. 00:13:485 (1) - ^ This would be better like this imo. Flows more naturally:
   
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4. 00:40:485 (1) - Veeery unnecesary nc imo. The melody doesn't change in anything, plus having single (1) combos isn't good. Only if it really fits the music, which this isn't the case imo.
5. 00:56:047 (2) - This overlap doesn't flow good o.o Rather than this, I suggest you to place this slider properly aligned to the previous slider end.
6. 00:57:360 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion all of this stacking doesn't play good. It doesn't feel like the music.. I don't know how to explain. You were doing patterns all spreaded around and suddenly all of this stacking. It doesn't feel right.
7. 01:05:985 (1) - How about removing this finish? It sounds too redundant. I think it fits more the guitar sound if you leave these 2 notes without hitsounds.
8. 01:13:485 (1,2,3) - This stacking is a bit different from the other one because the melody changes a bit here, but still. You stacked only to make symmetry? it feels like a forced spacing. ;-;
   
   Same problems as in Beginner. Weird notes placement that makes the flow bad. Try to find the rest of the patterns with flow problems by yourself and try to fix them :c your map will be much better if you do this. Flow is more important than anything else.

• 
  Cool stuff here. I didn't find anything here. Just a little imperfect blanket at 02:16:110 (4). Not sure if it was done on purpose tho, but that's all. I didn't take a in-depth look, I must admit, but I really like this style for this kind of song.

1. 00:19:016 (3) - This note is completely unnecesary. It's just an overmaped triplet. Please consider removing it. There's no sound here so it's senseless :<
2. 01:05:985 (1) - Redundant hitifnish again o3o
3. 01:11:516 (4,1) - Isn't this jump a bit exaggerated? Just my opinion though. Perhaps reduce it a biiiit or something.
4. 01:13:672 (1,2) - Uhmm this is odd. Flows oddly too. How about this instead? Just a small suggestion!
   
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   Or simply this? This will make the pattern more linear though. I personally prefer that pattern ↑
   
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5. 01:23:141 (8,1) - Another exaggerated jump, but I'm sure of it this time. It's too much, and the way you placed (1) makes it too uncomfortable to click. Consider removing/reducing this jump and placing (1) in a better way :< more aligned to (8) would be good.
6. 02:08:985 (12) - Instead of adding nc at the next note, add it here and remove the another. Fits much more the melody imo.
7. 02:10:110 (4) - That normal hitwhistle sounds so random. So unfitting o.o why did you added it? I suggest you to remove it away.
8. 02:11:985 (1) - Another redundant hitfinish.
9. 02:13:485 (1) - ^ if you want to keep it, then reduce the volume a bit. It sounds tooooooo loud and noisy.
10. 02:17:235 (1) - Since this note follows a spinner, you should add a nc.
11. 02:40:110 (7,8,9,10) - This raped my ears. Sounds too noisy compared to the music.
    
    
    Good job. I really like it. Some parts have a weird flow but it's ok. I think some patterns fit perfectly with the melody. The style kinda reminds me Vass' difficulty.

Vass_Bass wrote:

some fixes

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240,100,81360,2,0,P|336:104,1,70,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
280,184,81735,2,0,P|376:188,1,70,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
328,268,82110,2,0,P|424:272,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,308,82485,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,82578,12,0,83796,0:0:0
104,168,83985,6,2,P|152:156|216:164,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,168,84360,2,0,P|260:176|288:172,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,76,84735,2,0,P|364:88|332:112,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,232,85110,2,2,P|396:200|348:168,1,70,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
316,268,85485,2,2,P|288:304|316:392,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0
396,328,86047,2,2,P|232:328,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0
168,268,86610,1,2,0:0:0
80,212,86797,1,2,0:0:0
80,212,86985,6,2,P|68:164|88:104,1,105,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0
96,104,87360,2,0,P|16:100,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,128,87735,2,2,P|260:124,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,48,88110,2,2,P|190:51,1,70,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
336,88,88485,2,2,P|388:72|476:104,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0
452,200,89047,2,2,P|400:216|312:184,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,48,89610,1,8,0:3:0
84,188,89891,5,0,0:0:0
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164,252,90547,1,0,0:0:0
240,324,90735,2,2,P|284:324|320:328,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,360,91110,2,2,P|420:372|380:372,1,70,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
388,268,91485,2,2,P|360:232|388:136,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0
468,196,92047,2,2,P|492:52,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,76,92610,2,2,P|376:148,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,120,92985,6,2,P|220:104|164:128,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,128,93360,2,0,P|156:52,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,44,93735,2,2,P|59:113,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,212,94110,1,8,0:3:0
128,312,94297,1,0,0:0:0
200,236,94485,5,4,0:0:0
296,276,94672,1,8,3:0:0
304,280,94766,1,0,0:0:0
312,284,94860,1,0,0:0:0
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412,252,95610,1,0,0:0:0
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236,128,95985,5,4,0:0:0
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324,288,98141,1,0,0:0:0
324,288,98235,2,2,P|332:248|332:216,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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356,108,99172,1,2,2:0:0
420,52,99360,6,0,P|364:24|320:36,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,36,99735,2,0,P|232:36,1,70
144,68,100110,2,0,P|216:64|288:80,2,140
68,168,101141,1,0,0:0:0
68,168,101235,2,0,P|64:212|64:244,1,70
124,296,101610,2,0,P|184:280|264:308,1,140,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,220,102172,1,2,0:0:0
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368,308,102735,1,0,0:0:0
444,340,102922,1,0,0:0:0
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384,152,104141,1,0,0:0:0
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260,192,105360,1,4,0:0:0
160,328,105641,1,0,0:0:0
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60,244,107141,1,0,0:0:0
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132,112,107610,2,0,P|136:164,3,35
204,72,107985,5,4,0:0:0
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300,252,114547,2,0,P|232:264|164:228,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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120,28,116047,2,0,P|272:20,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,72,116610,2,0,P|312:104|304:140,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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128,92,118110,2,0,P|52:88,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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356,204,119891,1,2,0:0:0
359,188,119985,5,2,0:0:0
156,36,120360,1,2,0:0:0
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212,96,121110,2,0,P|292:104,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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396,24,126360,1,8,0:3:0
352,96,126547,2,0,P|344:160|368:244,1,140
424,288,127110,1,8,0:3:0
362,232,127297,1,0,0:0:0
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52,144,128610,2,0,P|44:180|52:220,1,70,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
140,120,128985,6,0,P|200:136|280:120,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0
324,52,129547,2,0,P|264:36|184:52,1,140
100,48,130110,1,8,0:3:0
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324,336,131610,2,0,P|416:328,1,70,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0
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180,196,133485,2,2,P|249:202,1,70
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208,160,135922,1,0,0:3:0
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332,72,138547,1,0,0:0:0
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324,104,143047,2,2,P|344:176|308:236,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,304,143610,1,8,0:3:0
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252,160,145110,1,8,0:3:0
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452,32,146610,1,2,0:0:0
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116,76,147547,1,0,0:0:0
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284,56,149891,5,0,0:0:0
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488,180,150547,1,0,0:0:0
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272,352,152610,2,2,P|196:348,1,70,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
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172,192,153547,1,0,0:0:0
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172,192,154110,2,2,P|168:112,1,70,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
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364,368,155610,1,4,2:0:0
464,216,155891,5,0,0:0:0
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440,96,156360,2,0,P|528:84,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,84,156735,2,2,P|248:72,1,70,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,148,157110,2,0,P|245:157,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,216,157485,2,2,P|276:208|180:228,1,140,0|4,0:0|2:0,0:0:0
132,336,158047,2,2,P|188:344|284:324,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,328,158610,1,4,2:0:0
216,136,158985,5,4,0:0:0
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340,52,159360,1,4,0:0:0
256,56,159547,1,0,0:0:0
260,204,159735,1,4,0:0:0
344,200,159922,1,0,0:0:0
384,128,160110,1,0,0:0:0
300,132,160297,1,0,0:0:0
300,132,160391,1,0,0:0:0
300,132,160485,1,6,0:0:0
300,132,160860,5,0,0:0:0
92,128,161047,1,2,0:0:0
92,128,161422,1,0,0:0:0
200,256,161609,1,6,0:0:0

and add kiai fountain on 00:23:985 -
:3

mellowminty wrote:

hell
yeah

medium:

SPOILER

00:23:047 (1) - this seems to come a bit too soon after the spinner, i'd either remove this note or shorten the spinner's length actually this is totally acceptable in a Normal (this is even more than a Normal... Normal+?). but yeah, this is fine both ways since they are 1/1 each.... even 1/1 away from the spinner, so quite easy to follow.
00:47:041 (1) - ^ actually same
hitsounds~~~ i noticed there are some already but a few more would be chill ( i dunno about hitsounds tho dont ask me about those i cant hitsound) yeah I might consider adding more, depending on whether they fit or not, though.

vass' light:

SPOILER

...

i have absolutely nothing to say. very solid mapset; well done vass~ excellent flow, superb use of hitsounds. the only flow disturbing patterns were for difficulty reasons, as i see it, and they're fine how they are. excellent much right, very flow!

advanced:

SPOILER

also absolutely excellent~ it's great. the streams were placed well, the timing is on point, the hitsounds are great. nicely done. thanks~ although I'd like to change a lot once I get to this again

there wasn't much to say, this mapset is very solid and quite well done. an excellent effort from both of you~ looking forward to seeing this ranked, since it definitely should be (and more blue stahli? hell ye)

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Go go Lizzy! <3

1. 00:50:610 (5) - Please move this circle to have a consistent spacing. It isn't following the spacing with the two previous sliders.
2. 01:29:610 (5) - Please move this circle to have a consistent spacing. It isn't following the spacing with the two previous sliders.
3. 02:08:985 (1,2,3) - I don't really like how these objects are placed, it makes an inconsistent spacing. Right now, only the end of the slider (1) and the beginning of the slider (2) are stacked, while the end of the slider (2) and the circle (3) aren't. It would be looking better if you keep a consistent spacing here.
4. 02:20:047 (6) - Spacing is not consistent with the two previous objects.
5. 02:35:047 (6) - I don't think this kind of jump is appropriate in a Medium difficulty. You should reconsider this combo.
6. 02:38:610 (5) - Please move this circle to have a consistent spacing. It isn't following the spacing with the two previous sliders.

1. 00:31:110 - If I hear the hitsounds on the previous combos, I feel like there is missing a drum-clap in here to keep the consistency.
2. 00:40:485 (5) - I suggest you to move this slider two grids down to make a well-done blanket with the previous slider. The spacing would still be consistency if you make the change.
3. 01:39:172 - This object is on a downbeat, which basically, you will mostly add a new combo to. Why did you add a new combo on the object after it if this object is part of the previous combo?

1. 00:13:672 (5,6,7) - It makes some kind of weird shape with the circle (6) which overlaps the object (3). I suggest you to reshape it that way: 00:13:672 (5,7) - to x472 y128 and 00:13:860 (6) - x388 y144.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:13:485 (1) - The end of the slider is not stacked on a 1/4 line! I suggest you to reshape this slider to make sure to lends to a 1/4 beat.
3. 01:13:110 (5,1) - I feel like these two sliders should be reshaped or reoriented to another side since right now, there's an anti-flow, which makes it unconfortable to play.
4. 01:29:047 (7) - AiMod suggest to move this slider since it goes out of the playfield.
5. 02:18:735 (3) - For a better flow, I feel that you should rotate your slider that way:
   
   Example

   

Gabe wrote:

Medium

1. 00:50:610 (5) - Please move this circle to have a consistent spacing. It isn't following the spacing with the two previous sliders. On purpose though. Helps greatly with aesthetics, so i'm not sure about this one.
2. 01:29:610 (5) - Please move this circle to have a consistent spacing. It isn't following the spacing with the two previous sliders. ok
3. 02:08:985 (1,2,3) - I don't really like how these objects are placed, it makes an inconsistent spacing. Right now, only the end of the slider (1) and the beginning of the slider (2) are stacked, while the end of the slider (2) and the circle (3) aren't. It would be looking better if you keep a consistent spacing here. alright
4. 02:20:047 (6) - Spacing is not consistent with the two previous objects. confused, but still tried something with these objects.
5. 02:35:047 (6) - I don't think this kind of jump is appropriate in a Medium difficulty. You should reconsider this combo. Yep
6. 02:38:610 (5) - Please move this circle to have a consistent spacing. It isn't following the spacing with the two previous sliders. yeea ok

Advanced

1. 00:13:672 (5,6,7) - It makes some kind of weird shape with the circle (6) which overlaps the object (3). I suggest you to reshape it that way: 00:13:672 (5,7) - to x472 y128 and 00:13:860 (6) - x388 y144. good idea!
   
   Example

   
2. 01:13:485 (1) - The end of the slider is not stacked on a 1/4 line! I suggest you to reshape this slider to make sure to lends to a 1/4 beat. wow wouldn't have noticed this... thank you!
3. 01:13:110 (5,1) - I feel like these two sliders should be reshaped or reoriented to another side since right now, there's an anti-flow, which makes it unconfortable to play. yea sorta
4. 01:29:047 (7) - AiMod suggest to move this slider since it goes out of the playfield. it somehow does, yeah
5. 02:18:735 (3) - For a better flow, I feel that you should rotate your slider that way:
   
   Example

   

Good map! Here's a star c:

D33d wrote:

I know you want them to sound like LC whistles

D33d wrote:

I decided to mod Advanced on its own for now, 'cause I don't want to be modding right until I have to head out for a late-evening, two-hour rehearsal. I hope this is useful to you.

[General]

That beige colour blends with the background a fair bit. Make it more of a gold colour or something. kk

The hitsounds in general seem a bit quiet and they sound especially lost when the groove springs to life. Try raising them by 20% across the board. Probably going to say no to this one. The whistles are already really loud as is, will consider this more thoroughly.

[Advanced]

AIMod crap: 00:45:358 (8) - and 02:35:420 (6) - are unsnapped, so jiggle them on the timeline. Editor's a piece of crap. should be snapped now

Couple of blanketing opportunities here as well, so I'll point out a couple to get my point across. Consider this as separate from the actual mod itself.

00:11:985 (1,2) - and 00:44:422 (7) - Look for any other patterns like these. They're close enough that you might as well blanket them. I'm not suggesting that you force loads of blankets throughout the map, 'cause that'd get boring rather quickly. Already using too many blankets. Everything that's meant to be a blanket is one. :p

00:19:110 (3) - I'd split this into circles or something, or at least place a clickable moment on the downbeat. You could also remove the repeat and follow the slider with another 1/2 slider at 00:19:485 - since you've got those weak offbeats. Well it sure doesn't hurt to have the downbeat emphasized here, so I'll give it two 1/2 sliders.

00:20:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern doesn't feel like it's quite emphasising things satisfyingly--again, partially because 00:22:297 (7) - isn't emphasising the downbeat. You could try using 1/2 sliders in different places, such as turning the circle at 00:21:547 (4) - into one and working from there. I'd also like to hear some creative use of claps, as it'd create a nice clave feel. Iiiis... this right? *changes*

00:23:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't have a problem with this per se, but it still feels a bit startling when the intro's so slow, especially when there's not really a tangible build into the stream. It also feels overmapped--as it's the start of the song, I'd use either stacks or simply break up the stream by removing 00:23:516 (4,8) - No dice removing (4,8). Maybe I could change the shape of the stream to something more straight, but could use some ideas that might do well here.

00:28:485 (5) - New combo. Make the rotations consistent elsewhere as well. There's no new combo because the pitch of both bass and instrumental stay the same. 00:33:547 (2,3,4) - Well I can't make these new combos, but in essence they follow the same basics.

00:29:985 (1,2) - Where does this relate to the music? I really think you should lose the overextensions, as they don't suit the pulse of the music until later. I don't know if it's the combination of drums and instruments that make me perceive a sound here or if it's my speakers. But it just feels like it belongs here, plus it intensifies the jump from (2) to (3).

00:37:485 (1,2) - I would appreciate your cutters a lot more if the slider's head overlapped the track fully. It'd also be overlapping the tick properly, which would look much, much better. Doesn't really change much, but weeeell there you go.

00:40:110 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stop's quite a nice moment, so I'd try and use more stops like this in a similar manner.Thanks, but sometimes, I just have problems with re-using a technique that would feel nice if I don't know when using it again would be best.

00:40:485 (4,8) - The flow into the orbital sliders feels a bit sketchy. You could just rotate them or something, or otherwise rethink the pattern because... ...they're actually completely fine to play, but moving on...

00:41:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This doesn't feel like it's following the riff adequately. I'd play around with ideas to try and strengthen it. As I mentioned in IRC, try more (longer) circle patterns. Tried something with sliders.... xD

00:47:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Actually, this stream also feels overmapped. You could get a lot more bang for the buck if you has triples with jumps between them. Maybe some kind of back-and-forth jump action into the following combo. I get your idea, but the stream is appropriately spaced and still not too fast. It also covers the drums in the background, while triples miss out on that last (but silent) drum hit.

00:52:485 (5,6) - I'm gonna mention this overextension again just to get the point across. Since you have some stacked offbeats, there's nothing to prevent you from using this kind of pattern for those instead. I'm afraid they've become a gimmick in this diff already. :/ I'd like you to suggest me a pattern you would use instead. Maybe the entire "chorus"?

00:59:985 (1) - I'd remove the NC. Back in the day, I used to isolate circles in this manner, but it doesn't convey a sense of finality when there are two successive combofinishes. Let's say I had mapped that break: the new combo here would definitely be a must. The combo before this actually ends on a beat where the entire track goes silent (where the track ends) for half a second. The new combo here is to indicate that a new rhythm is introduced at this part of the song. Plus, not having it here would make it less distinguishable from the actual previous combo and it would keep the followpoints (!!!)... those are super-ugly there. >>

01:11:046 (1) - I'd remove this, because it's only a pickup into the fill. Feels confusing and unnecessary to me, when the emphasis actually begins on the drum fill. I'd make 01:11:235 (2) - a stack for effect as well, since the map began with something a lot more extreme. It's there because there is actually a cymbal sound there. Also, a mere stack of three objects doesn't feel right there. All it does is it caves the movement in and keeps the player waiting while the song is already going again.

01:13:485 (1) - You could use an overextension here--you know, where it'd actually match the music. Yes, why not.

01:14:235 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this follow the lead line. It'd feel more engaging. waaat, explain further pls

01:17:235 (1) - I'd split this into circles for effect--do some flow trickery to put the emphasis in the right place. Roger.

01:21:360 (2) - Wrong emphasis again. Move the slider 1/2 later and stack a circle on top of it. Keep the resulting jump. Sorry gotta say no... this time, it's just my own gimmick.

01:22:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is definitely overmapped. I probably should've just said "don't overmap so much" at the start. Is it really? well too bad the integrity is perfect; nobody actually noticed.... ssshhhh, keep it a secret.

01:39:547 (3,4,5,6,7) - Special mention goes to this, because it'd feel more satisfying with a 1/4 stack on an offbeat slider, while fitting the music better. I mean, you do that shortly after anyway. Just noticed that would do quite well there too. yeah ok

01:52:485 (1) - I'd either remove this spinner or end it on the beat, as it currently feels redundant. Same for the other spinner, I guess. Nope, it doesn't hurt anyone. And neither does the other. They feel actually playable.

02:26:985 (1,3) - If you can remove this overlap, then that'd be great. OK.

02:28:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This might feel better as all-circles. Not all of it, but I can definitely transform a part of it into circles.

02:40:110 (4) - You should really turn this into a stream. It's the end of the song and you'll want the intensity. Well ok.

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Ow.

I may have skipped over a few things or repeated too many similar points, but the map felt solid enough as a whole. However, I think that most of the above would help it a lot. Also, again: more circles. Will consider that in my next map haha xD this one's too late.

Vass_Bass wrote:

LC whistles, pls
what are you talkin' about

edit: make AR = 8 in my diff, please

Lizzy wrote:

Let's say I had mapped that break: the new combo here would definitely be a must. The combo before this actually ends on a beat where the entire track goes silent (where the track ends) for half a second. The new combo here is to indicate that a new rhythm is introduced at this part of the song. Plus, not having it here would make it less distinguishable from the actual previous combo and it would keep the followpoints (!!!)... those are super-ugly there. >>

Lizzy wrote:

i've tried everything and still can't get anyone to check it