Platter
Note : ok, at last i can properly mod your map well , also when i check again your diff , i found something interesting.
after i player the platter diff , i realized the jump range is kinda short, i mean if you see this
Pici see the circles & the slider on your platter diff will never touch the red line on the pic.
but it doesn't matter for the platter diff btw XD .
ok, on the main mod, the only thing i want say to your diff ( especially the platter ) are kinda lack of kick effect pattern.
that's all i want to say about your platter diff & back to mod 8)
I hate using borders in Platters, so yeah, it's pretty much my mapping style ><00:07:051 (2,3,1,2) - Just suggestion , try this pattern if you like 8)
*pic I really prefer my pattern here because I want to keep it symmetrical. And I think it fits well enough with the rhythm, so sorry 00:09:630 (1,2,3) - (just optional if you apply the above) Ctrl+G this part to make it jumpy with the mod above
I did CTRL + G though I didn't apply the suggestion above. I like what you suggested anyway.00:11:036 (3) - make the slider curved to the left (for kick effect on 00:11:505 (4) )
Fixed00:24:161 (3) - *lazy slider (imo) for me i think i'll do like this for kick effect
*Pic It should look better now.00:37:051 (3,1) - imo , this distance is kinda high. try this one to make it nicer
*pic Reduced it a bit00:47:130 (1) - *another lazy slider m :>
Yes but I want to keep it here because this is the last calm part before the next Kiai starts.00:50:880 (1) - why slider ;w;
Created a stream instead.00:53:692 (3) - nah , ctrl+g (this one is better)
ok00:56:036 (1,2) - move 00:56:036 (1) a bit to left & ctrl+G 00:56:270 (2)
Fixed01:00:020 (2) - *rotate 90' ( make the position same like 00:59:083 (1) )
Done01:04:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo, when entering this part , the distance kinda raised two times than the previous pattern.
Uhm, yes, the distance is raised on purpose to create some surprisement here01:45:255 (2) - why slider ;w; [2]
^01:47:598 (2) - ctrl+G ?
Ok01:49:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - the chain jump is nice , but i think there's some part that have high distance so , try to move 01:50:645 (2) to x = 336
Done I guess01:52:755 (1,2) - make it curved like this pic :>
*pic Done01:57:208 (2,3) - i think it would be nicer if you just using repeated slider here
Yes you are right
Salad
00:11:036 (1,2,3,4) - Try this pattern
*Pic (Just a suggestion)
Mh nah, I want to keep this triplet-movement here00:13:848 (4,5,6,1,2) - this patter's flow kinda rusty , try this pattern (suggestion)
*pic Fixed00:20:880 (1) - i think you should use circle istead of slider here
Why? It follow the beat well imo.00:24:161 (4) - i think you should make it curved to the right
ok00:30:723 (2,3) - needs to be more curved \:D/
*pic ok00:39:161 (2) - move the posistion a bit to left to keep the jumpy flow on the pattern
I created a bit more movement here00:47:130 (1,2,1,2) - I think you should make it into slider instead of circle on this part
Fixed01:41:505 (1) - make this slider's position stack with 01:40:567 (3). (if you apply this , move the 01:42:442 (2) - slider to x = 440)
Yes perfect 01:51:817 (2,3,1,2,3) - the pattern's flow feels strange to me. if you want to change the pattern , this is my suggestion
Pic I hope it looks better now.~Cup
00:17:012 (1) - the spinner feels earlier . i think you should move it into 00:17:130
Normally mapped on the vocal here but I changed it because some others mentioned it, too. Should feel better in all diffs now.00:39:630 (1,2,1,2) - try to make the slider position like
this ,
Fixed00:57:911 (4,5) - simplify the beat
*pic Done01:06:817 (1,2,3,1) - make it more distance like this
Pic Done 01:34:005 (1) - move it a bit to left
ok01:49:005 (1,2,3) - give the pattern some distance like
this done