Hi, because I have no time, my response is in spanish... sorry ._.
Updated diff: http://puu.sh/6TtN8.osuNatsu wrote:
Hi in game request~
[Easy]
- 00:02:904 the spinner should start in 00:02:708 with the vocals, don't be afraid of use 1/2 when it clearly fit the music done
- 00:07:610 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't follow the music properly, since the drums are probably the best option for an easy difficulty, try this instead:
- 00:10:747 (1,2) - exactly the same as above La verdad, prefiero dejarlo como está ahora. La razón es que el sonido del teclado sobre sale más que ritmo de la batería, y para alguien que empieza, creo que es mas facil seguir los ritmos sobresalientes.
- 00:13:885 (1) - the spinner doesn't follow the song since it's not following nothing in the music like a long vocal or a stream, try to map this part properly is the same as the previous section, also the spinner deprives you of mapping the first stanza in 00:16:630 OKay
- 00:18:002 Ignoring the cymbal in the music doesn't make much sense to me, try a better rhythm like:
Okay, hice otra cosa allí- 00:22:120 you should add a circle here, the high pitch in the vocals deserve to be mapped done
- 00:28:198 (1) - remove NC, It's not necessary, just broke your combo pattern Prefiero no hacerlo. Allí hay un momento sin voces, donde siento que es apropiado separarlo con un nuevo combo. Al ser un lvl easy, solo hay un slider, pero siento que es claro que son secciones diferentes.
- 00:32:316 (4,1) - sorry for nazi, but this blanket can be better. xDDDD
- 00:38:591 you should add a circle here, the high pitch in the vocals deserve to be mapped also is a new stanza ugg, así si no. Si lo hago tendría que cambiar todo el patron, ya q poniendo un circulo, este se sobrepone encima de (3), y ahí si quedaría dificil de leer.
- 00:35:453 (4,1) - swap NC the stanza is in (4) haaai
- 00:38:591 a NC should be here if you follow my previous suggestion and remove it from 00:40:159 (1) - done
- 00:41:728 (3) - this should be NC following your pattern of every 2 stanzas done
- 00:44:081 (1) - remove NC same reason as above, btw you have a bad rhythm here try: =P
- 00:44:865 (2) - NC same reason as the others
- 00:49:963 there is not reason to ignore this beat add a circle, the drum/ vocal, need to be mapped done
- 00:51:139 (1) - so much love, but IMO don't fit the music, a new verse in 00:52:708 if you really like it feel free to ignore me D: i know, pero tuve que hacerlo así de largo, o el corazón quedaba demasiado pequeño xD
/me ignores natsu (?)- 00:57:414 starting the chorus of the song in a spinner end doesn't fit the music in nothing, the chorus start deserve to be mapped with a circle or a slider head, I highly suggest you to remove the spinner and map that part properly. okay <_<
- 01:06:826 (1,2) - try to avoid the overlap, doesn't look nice agg, bueno, ya me cansé que todos me digan eso, así que done :v ( xDD )
- 01:09:963 (3) - missing NC following your pattern o.O, ok
- 01:11:140 (2,3) - this is not acceptable for a easy diff you should unstack this. btw maybe you want to convert 01:11:140 (2) - in 2 circles, the sound at 01:11:532 have a high pitch. Lo siento, pero en este no te haré caso u.u La razón es que considero que aunque están sobrepuestos, hay el suficiente tiempo para prepararse y no equivocarse. Tambien, viendo que de antes se venía de varios sliders muy largos, creo que el jugador nub va a llegar un poco cansado a esta parte de la canción; el permitir que se quede quieto sin mover el mouse creo que es mejor.
- 01:22:512 (1,2) - same as 01:06:826 done
- 01:25:649 (1) - this slider shape is unrankable, use a normal shape instead Tuve que ir a preguntar en #modhelp... pero bueno, ya hice algo menos enredado.
you have some nice ideas, but yeah try to improve this diff a littleI'll finish soon, need a break QAQfinally done :3 GL with this