1. The difficulties are starting too soon, add 1000 of AudioLeadIn manually in every one.
2. Your BG is 1365x768 resize to 1366x768
3. Tick rate 2 fit this song best
4. Turn off widescreen support, you don't have SB

1. 153 bpm also you map this without big jumps, that's why AR9 feel wrong here, reduce the AR to 8 it fit better your map and bpm
2. HP8 is really evil, considering how slow is the map also the note density is low, I highly suggest you to reduce it to 7.
3. OD8 doesn't fit here for similar reasons as the others settings, reduce it to 7
4. 00:00:944 (1,2,3) - The distance from 1 to 2 is 1.30 and then you use 1.0 for (3), that doesn't make much sense try to be consistent with the distance in your patterns.
   
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5. 00:03:885 you should consider adding a circle here, since the vocal have a high pitch, is similar to the one at 00:03:689 (7) - , so no reason to ignore it.
6. 00:04:767 (3) - this circle is overmapped, there is nothing in the music, consider to remove it.
7. 00:04:963 Here is where the triplet should be.
8. 00:06:532 -, 00:06:728 -, you have some special reason to ignore the 3/4 rhythm here? you are mapping all the others beats there is not reason to ignore them, maybe you are doing this for simetry, but ignore the ¨rhythm¨ for ¨simetry¨ is never good IMO, try to map this part properly to the music.
9. 00:08:689 should be a circle here, is the same sound as the one at 00:08:591 -, and 00:08:787 -.
10. 00:12:708 -, 00:13:002 -, you need to map this parts, they're similar as the above.
11. 00:14:865 (1) - this slider doesn't fit the music here, this is acceptable for normal/easy diffs but in an Insane diff you should try to map the music how it is, my suggestion:
    
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12. 00:18:983 (6) - should be a triplet here since you map the one at 00:19:375 (7) - , try to be more consistent with your rhythm chooses
13. 00:19:571 (9) - Usually the sliders start with the strong beat, but this is not the case, since you are ending this slider on such important beat 00:19:767, for better rhythm try this:
    
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14. 00:25:944 should be a circle here, since you map the previous three 00:25:649 (7,8,9)
15. 00:29:179 same issue as 00:19:571
16. 00:38:591 same issue as 00:19:571
17. 00:40:845 - similar as the others you should add a circle here, since you are mapping all the others similar sounds like 00:40:747 (8,9,10) -
18. 00:42:316 (2) - this slider start in an almost inaudible beat and doesn't fit the song, try to change the rhythm to a one more suitable, my suggestion:
    
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19. 00:54:277 (1,2) - a slider will fit better the hold vocal there also do the same with 00:54:865 (3,4) -
20. 00:59:865 (7) - nothing in the music here, if you listen this part at 25% you'll notice the stream is starting in 00:59:963 (8) -
21. 01:00:453 should be a circle here the 3/4 rhythm sound in there too
22. 01:03:002 (7) - same wrong rhythm as 00:59:865
23. 01:03:591 same as 01:00:453
24. 01:06:728 here too, should be a circle here since you map the other ones with the same music in 01:06:434 (7,8,9) -
25. 01:14:473 (4,5,6) - this look nice but it play really bad IMO, since the transition between the sliders is not natural.
26. 01:16:140 same rhythm issue as 01:06:728 -, if you map 01:15:943 (7,8) - you should map this too 01:16:140
27. 01:22:414 same as above
28. 01:23:885 (4) - same as 00:19:571
29. 01:26:826 (3) - 01:23:885 (4) - same as 00:19:571
    
    Mmm you could work more on this, since your rhythms can be better, also the placement, some times you try to force simetry and end in bad transitions and bad rhythms over the map IMO

1. HP7 is really evil for a hard diff, considering how slow is the map also the note density is low, I highly suggest you to reduce it to 6.
2. 00:00:944 (1,2,3) - same as insane about the spacing
3. 00:02:512 this need a click'able action (circle or slider head) is a strong beat.
4. 00:02:904 (5) - the head of this slider is overmaped, check my suggestion on Insane diff.
5. 00:06:434 (3) - add a repeat in this slider, the 3/4 rhythm is continue here you can hear it clearly in 00:06:728 -, also your current way is inconsistent 00:06:434 (3,4) -
6. 00:09:571 (5,6) - same as above, you should add 1 more repeat to both sliders to be consisten with the music
7. 00:13:100 (4) - same ^
8. 00:14:865 (1) - same as insane but this a hard diff change the rhythm to:
   
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9. 00:18:591 (5) - two circles follow better the music instead of a slider
10. 00:22:120 (6,7) - for this one a 1/2 slider follow the music better, since the sound in (7) is really low compared to the one in (6) that's why
11. 00:31:532 (6,7) - exactly the same as above
12. 00:31:924 (8) - and yes like the others 1/4 repeat sliders this need 1 more repeat too
13. 00:35:061 (7) - ^
14. 00:37:414 (5) - two circles fit the music a lot better also the vocals.
15. 00:38:198 (7) - same as 00:31:924
16. 00:40:944 (6,7) - what are you following here? the correct rhythm should be:
    
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17. 00:42:316 same as insane, this slider start in a non existent beat
18. 00:52:904 (1,2) - Usually the sliders start with the strong beat, but this is not the case, since you are ending this sliders on such important beats, for better rhythm try this:
    
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19. 01:02:512 (5) - 2 circles will follow the music properly, since the slider doesn't represent the music correctly
20. 01:09:375 (7) - like the others one this need 1 more repeat.
21. 01:12:708 (4) - ^
22. 01:15:845 (8) - ^
    
    Pretty much what I say on insane diff

1. 00:00:944 (1,1,1,2,3) - combo spam is not really necessary, I suggest you to remove 00:01:532 (1) - and 00:02:120 (1) - , spam NC just make the HP drain going unbalanced across the diff
2. 00:06:238 (2,3,4) - well since hidden circles under slider body in a hard diff can be really hard to read, you are using a lot of this hidden patterns and they look nice, but probably you'll need more opinions about them
3. 00:06:532 -, 00:06:728 -, just wondering why did you ignore them? they have the same pitch as 00:06:238 (2,3,4) - 00:06:826 (6,7) -
4. 00:07:904 (3) - sorry for nazi stack this 00:07:904 (3) - with 00:09:179 (8) - properly
5. 00:08:787 (7) - missing NC, following your every measure pattern
6. 00:09:571 (9,10,11) - the distance here is inconsistent and can cause early/late clicks, try to rearrange the pattern maybe like:
   
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7. 00:18:002 (4) - this is offscreen, try to move it up some grids.
8. 00:18:983 (6,1) - I can't agree with this since (6) cover all the body of (1) and will be not comfortable to play, a easy solution can be this:
   
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9. 00:23:493 (2,5) - same as above
10. 00:25:257 (8,1) -
11. 00:41:336 (5) - probably you'll need to move the second point of the slider to make the reverse arrow visible, like:
    
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12. 00:43:885 (7,10) - same as 00:18:983
13. 00:49:179 (4,5,6) - try to use an equal spacing between them
14. 00:51:140 (10) - this should be NC following your comboing
15. 00:53:885 (4,5) - this rhythm sound wrong, try ctrl G you'll follow the music a lot better
16. 01:02:316 (6) - probably this will need NC for the antijump not 100% sure
17. 01:11:532 (7) - this extended slider sound nice, but not this 01:11:924 (8) - the music is clearly 1/2 there.
18. 01:12:708 (5,1) - you'll need to add more spacing here, actually look like 1/4 spacing and I'm sure will be really confuse to play.
19. 01:14:669 (6,8) - same as 00:18:983
20. 01:23:296 (3,6) - ^
21. 01:26:238 (1) - 01:26:826 (1) - Remove NC in both places same explain as 00:00:944
    
    Pretty nice diff but be sure to fix the questionable stuff :3 ♥

1. 00:05:649 (3,4) - if you're trying to do a blanket here, it can be better, but if is not a blanket ignore this~
2. 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - Fix the distance.
3. 00:08:787 (1) - remove NC, it broke your pattern of every 2 stanzas
4. 00:15:257 (1,2) - they are too close each other
5. 00:16:238 (2) - remove whistle? it doesn't sound good, if you really want to keep it maybe try a soft sample
6. 00:22:512 - sorry for nazi, but actually 00:21:140 (3,5) - they look too close, move 00:22:512 (5) - to x: 332 y:336
7. 00:26:630 (2) - remove clap? It doesn't follow your pattern.
8. 00:27:414 (3) - mmm this slider look nice but it doesn't follow the song properly, try this rhythm instead:
   
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9. 00:43:100 (3,4) - I feel this part empty, mainly because the vocal have a hold feeling, maybe try some slider with a nice shape there?
10. 00:45:845 (3,4) - this doesn't place natural the cursor movement from 3 to 4 feel really forced, maybe try to rearrange the slider so the movement can be natural?
11. 00:46:238 (4) - btw this slider sound better ending in 00:46:826 with the drum
12. 00:51:140 (1) - try to make this slider symmetrical, if you ctrl H you'll see.
13. 00:52:708 I'll be honest the spinner doesn't fit the song , this part can be mapped properly this a normal diff, so yeah anyways just as suggestion.
14. 01:06:042 (5,6) - a slider will sound better here since in 6 is not vocal that's why
15. 01:10:943 (3) - remove clap it broke the drum pattern, just keep it in the repeat.
16. 01:19:963 (2) - same as 00:16:238
    
    normal is good IMO

1. 00:02:904 the spinner should start in 00:02:708 with the vocals, don't be afraid of use 1/2 when it clearly fit the music
2. 00:07:610 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't follow the music properly, since the drums are probably the best option for an easy difficulty, try this instead:
   
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3. 00:10:747 (1,2) - exactly the same as above
4. 00:13:885 (1) - the spinner doesn't follow the song since it's not following nothing in the music like a long vocal or a stream, try to map this part properly is the same as the previous section, also the spinner deprives you of mapping the first stanza in 00:16:630
5. 00:18:002 Ignoring the cymbal in the music doesn't make much sense to me, try a better rhythm like:
   
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6. 00:22:120 you should add a circle here, the high pitch in the vocals deserve to be mapped
7. 00:28:198 (1) - remove NC, It's not necessary, just broke your combo pattern
8. 00:32:316 (4,1) - sorry for nazi, but this blanket can be better.
9. 00:38:591 you should add a circle here, the high pitch in the vocals deserve to be mapped also is a new stanza
10. 00:35:453 (4,1) - swap NC the stanza is in (4)
11. 00:38:591 a NC should be here if you follow my previous suggestion and remove it from 00:40:159 (1) -
12. 00:41:728 (3) - this should be NC following your pattern of every 2 stanzas
13. 00:44:081 (1) - remove NC same reason as above, btw you have a bad rhythm here try:
    
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14. 00:44:865 (2) - NC same reason as the others
15. 00:49:963 there is not reason to ignore this beat add a circle, the drum/ vocal, need to be mapped
16. 00:51:139 (1) - so much love, but IMO don't fit the music, a new verse in 00:52:708 if you really like it feel free to ignore me D:
17. 00:57:414 starting the chorus of the song in a spinner end doesn't fit the music in nothing, the chorus start deserve to be mapped with a circle or a slider head, I highly suggest you to remove the spinner and map that part properly.
18. 01:06:826 (1,2) - try to avoid the overlap, doesn't look nice
19. 01:09:963 (3) - missing NC following your pattern
20. 01:11:140 (2,3) - this is not acceptable for a easy diff you should unstack this. btw maybe you want to convert 01:11:140 (2) - in 2 circles, the sound at 01:11:532 have a high pitch.
21. 01:22:512 (1,2) - same as 01:06:826
22. 01:25:649 (1) - this slider shape is unrankable, use a normal shape instead
    
    you have some nice ideas, but yeah try to improve this diff a little

Inyuschan wrote:

Thanks for your mod, fixed some things in my diffs. ^^

Natsu wrote:

Hi in game request~

[Crystal's Hard]

1. 00:06:238 (2,3,4) - well since hidden circles under slider body in a hard diff can be really hard to read, you are using a lot of this hidden patterns and they look nice, but probably you'll need more opinions about them i'll think about this owo
2. 00:06:532 -, 00:06:728 -, just wondering why did you ignore them? they have the same pitch as 00:06:238 (2,3,4) - 00:06:826 (6,7) - i don't know how to fill this in
3. 00:09:571 (9,10,11) - the distance here is inconsistent and can cause early/late clicks, try to rearrange the pattern maybe like:
   
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   ? it looks the same ? o:
4. 00:18:983 (6,1) - I can't agree with this since (6) cover all the body of (1) and will be not comfortable to play, a easy solution can be this:
   
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   hmm, i'll see owo
5. 00:23:493 (2,5) - same as above ^
6. 00:25:257 (8,1) - ^
7. 00:43:885 (7,10) - same as 00:18:983 ^
8. 01:02:316 (6) - probably this will need NC for the antijump not 100% sure maybe owo
9. 01:14:669 (6,8) - same as 00:18:983 same as i repiled to that ~
10. 01:23:296 (3,6) - ^ ^
    
    everything else, fixed!
    
    Pretty nice diff but be sure to fix the questionable stuff :3 ♥ thank you ~ >w<

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316,260,30355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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316,260,30943,2,0,P|320:304|300:340,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,384,31336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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12,300,32022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,340,32120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,336,32316,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,280,32512,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,188,32708,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,188,33296,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,188,34277,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,92,34473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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436,284,35257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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180,344,35845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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156,304,38394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,320,38493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,200,39963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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104,108,58394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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84,260,59669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,292,60355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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288,292,61924,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,292,62316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,148,63296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,44,63493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Natsu wrote:

Inyuschan wrote:

Thanks for your mod, fixed some things in my diffs. ^^

can I know what do you apply and what not? I spent like 5 hours checking your map :c...

Natsu wrote:

Hi in game request~

[General]

1. The difficulties are starting too soon, add 1000 of AudioLeadIn manually in every one.
2. Your BG is 1365x768 resize to 1366x768
3. Tick rate 2 fit this song best
4. Turn off widescreen support, you don't have SB

Inyus, if you change any of the things above, please apply the changes over my diff once i post it here.

[Normal]

1. 00:05:649 (3,4) - if you're trying to do a blanket here, it can be better, but if is not a blanket ignore this~
2. 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - Fix the distance.
3. 00:08:787 (1) - remove NC, it broke your pattern of every 2 stanzas
4. 00:15:257 (1,2) - they are too close each other
5. 00:16:238 (2) - remove whistle? it doesn't sound good, if you really want to keep it maybe try a soft sample
6. 00:22:512 - sorry for nazi, but actually 00:21:140 (3,5) - they look too close, move 00:22:512 (5) - to x: 332 y:336
7. 00:26:630 (2) - remove clap? It doesn't follow your pattern.
8. 00:27:414 (3) - mmm this slider look nice but it doesn't follow the song properly, try this rhythm instead:
   
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9. 00:43:100 (3,4) - I feel this part empty, mainly because the vocal have a hold feeling, maybe try some slider with a nice shape there?
10. 00:45:845 (3,4) - this doesn't place natural the cursor movement from 3 to 4 feel really forced, maybe try to rearrange the slider so the movement can be natural?
11. 00:46:238 (4) - btw this slider sound better ending in 00:46:826 with the drum
12. 00:51:140 (1) - try to make this slider symmetrical, if you ctrl H you'll see.
13. 00:52:708 I'll be honest the spinner doesn't fit the song , this part can be mapped properly this a normal diff, so yeah anyways just as suggestion.
14. 01:06:042 (5,6) - a slider will sound better here since in 6 is not vocal that's why
15. 01:10:943 (3) - remove clap it broke the drum pattern, just keep it in the repeat.
16. 01:19:963 (2) - same as 00:16:238
    
    normal is good IMO

Natsu wrote:

Inyuschan wrote:

Thanks for your mod, fixed some things in my diffs. ^^

can I know what do you apply and what not? I spent like 5 hours checking your map :c...

Natsu wrote:

Hi in game request~

[General]

1. The difficulties are starting too soon, add 1000 of AudioLeadIn manually in every one. Done.
2. Your BG is 1365x768 resize to 1366x768 I'll think about it, I don't know why this is a problem but whatever.
3. Tick rate 2 fit this song best Nope.
4. Turn off widescreen support, you don't have SB Right.

[Insane]

1. 153 bpm also you map this without big jumps, that's why AR9 feel wrong here, reduce the AR to 8 it fit better your map and bpm Baka Natsu, I already put AR 8. xD
2. HP8 is really evil, considering how slow is the map also the note density is low, I highly suggest you to reduce it to 7. Okay.
3. OD8 doesn't fit here for similar reasons as the others settings, reduce it to 7 Okay.
4. 00:00:944 (1,2,3) - The distance from 1 to 2 is 1.30 and then you use 1.0 for (3), that doesn't make much sense try to be consistent with the distance in your patterns. I don't see any problem here.
   
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5. 00:03:885 you should consider adding a circle here, since the vocal have a high pitch, is similar to the one at 00:03:689 (7) - , so no reason to ignore it. And no reason to add a note since I'm not following vocals~
6. 00:04:767 (3) - this circle is overmapped, there is nothing in the music, consider to remove it. Nothing? Sure? xD
7. 00:04:963 Here is where the triplet should be. I don't think so.
8. 00:06:532 -, 00:06:728 -, you have some special reason to ignore the 3/4 rhythm here? you are mapping all the others beats there is not reason to ignore them, maybe you are doing this for simetry, but ignore the ¨rhythm¨ for ¨simetry¨ is never good IMO, try to map this part properly to the music. Music has a high pitch at 00:06:826, that's why. I think this rhythm sounds good. It's an insane but it doesn't need to have so much streams. ^^
9. 00:08:689 should be a circle here, is the same sound as the one at 00:08:591 -, and 00:08:787 -. It would be overmapped. (My opinion)
10. 00:12:708 -, 00:13:002 -, you need to map this parts, they're similar as the above. I prefer this rhythm. ;D
11. 00:14:865 (1) - this slider doesn't fit the music here, this is acceptable for normal/easy diffs but in an Insane diff you should try to map the music how it is, my suggestion: Nope, sorry. xD
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:18:983 (6) - should be a triplet here since you map the one at 00:19:375 (7) - , try to be more consistent with your rhythm chooses A triplet? I don't hear anything at 00:19:081
13. 00:19:571 (9) - Usually the sliders start with the strong beat, but this is not the case, since you are ending this slider on such important beat 00:19:767, for better rhythm try this: I think it's good. ^^
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:25:944 should be a circle here, since you map the previous three 00:25:649 (7,8,9) Nope...
15. 00:29:179 same issue as 00:19:571 It's good in this way.
16. 00:38:591 same issue as 00:19:571 Nooope.
17. 00:40:845 - similar as the others you should add a circle here, since you are mapping all the others similar sounds like 00:40:747 (8,9,10) - Nope.
18. 00:42:316 (2) - this slider start in an almost inaudible beat and doesn't fit the song, try to change the rhythm to a one more suitable, my suggestion: It fits the vocal, like (1). ;D
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 00:54:277 (1,2) - a slider will fit better the hold vocal there also do the same with 00:54:865 (3,4) - I prefer what I have atm.
20. 00:59:865 (7) - nothing in the music here, if you listen this part at 25% you'll notice the stream is starting in 00:59:963 (8) - My ears don't say the same.
21. 01:00:453 should be a circle here the 3/4 rhythm sound in there too I don't consider it necessary.
22. 01:03:002 (7) - same wrong rhythm as 00:59:865 Same answer.
23. 01:03:591 same as 01:00:453 Same answer. xD
24. 01:06:728 here too, should be a circle here since you map the other ones with the same music in 01:06:434 (7,8,9) - I'll think about it.
25. 01:14:473 (4,5,6) - this look nice but it play really bad IMO, since the transition between the sliders is not natural. I think is playable and I like it.
26. 01:16:140 same rhythm issue as 01:06:728 -, if you map 01:15:943 (7,8) - you should map this too 01:16:140 I'll think about it.
27. 01:22:414 same as above ^
28. 01:23:885 (4) - same as 00:19:571 It doesn't need change.
29. 01:26:826 (3) - 01:23:885 (4) - same as 00:19:571 ^
    
    Mmm you could work more on this, since your rhythms can be better, also the placement, some times you try to force simetry and end in bad transitions and bad rhythms over the map IMO

[Hard]

1. HP7 is really evil for a hard diff, considering how slow is the map also the note density is low, I highly suggest you to reduce it to 6. Okay~
2. 00:00:944 (1,2,3) - same as insane about the spacing Well, same, I think it's good.
3. 00:02:512 this need a click'able action (circle or slider head) is a strong beat. It's good. B:
4. 00:02:904 (5) - the head of this slider is overmaped, check my suggestion on Insane diff. I don't think so. o.o
5. 00:06:434 (3) - add a repeat in this slider, the 3/4 rhythm is continue here you can hear it clearly in 00:06:728 -, also your current way is inconsistent 00:06:434 (3,4) - Sounds good.
6. 00:09:571 (5,6) - same as above, you should add 1 more repeat to both sliders to be consisten with the music It's not necessary, I think.
7. 00:13:100 (4) - same ^ ^
8. 00:14:865 (1) - same as insane but this a hard diff change the rhythm to: Nope.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:18:591 (5) - two circles follow better the music instead of a slider Yep.
10. 00:22:120 (6,7) - for this one a 1/2 slider follow the music better, since the sound in (7) is really low compared to the one in (6) that's why I see. :3
11. 00:31:532 (6,7) - exactly the same as above Not this time~
12. 00:31:924 (8) - and yes like the others 1/4 repeat sliders this need 1 more repeat too Nope.
13. 00:35:061 (7) - ^ Nope.
14. 00:37:414 (5) - two circles fit the music a lot better also the vocals. I don't feel the same.
15. 00:38:198 (7) - same as 00:31:924 Nope.
16. 00:40:944 (6,7) - what are you following here? the correct rhythm should be: I was following another rhythm. >_< But changed.
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 00:42:316 same as insane, this slider start in a non existent beat Vocals pls.
18. 00:52:904 (1,2) - Usually the sliders start with the strong beat, but this is not the case, since you are ending this sliders on such important beats, for better rhythm try this: It's good. o.o
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:02:512 (5) - 2 circles will follow the music properly, since the slider doesn't represent the music correctly ^
20. 01:09:375 (7) - like the others one this need 1 more repeat. I'll think about it.
21. 01:12:708 (4) - ^ Nope.
22. 01:15:845 (8) - ^ ^
    
    Pretty much what I say on insane diff

Natsu wrote:

Hi in game request~
[Easy]

1. 00:02:904 the spinner should start in 00:02:708 with the vocals, don't be afraid of use 1/2 when it clearly fit the music done
2. 00:07:610 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't follow the music properly, since the drums are probably the best option for an easy difficulty, try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:747 (1,2) - exactly the same as above La verdad, prefiero dejarlo como está ahora. La razón es que el sonido del teclado sobre sale más que ritmo de la batería, y para alguien que empieza, creo que es mas facil seguir los ritmos sobresalientes.
4. 00:13:885 (1) - the spinner doesn't follow the song since it's not following nothing in the music like a long vocal or a stream, try to map this part properly is the same as the previous section, also the spinner deprives you of mapping the first stanza in 00:16:630 OKay
5. 00:18:002 Ignoring the cymbal in the music doesn't make much sense to me, try a better rhythm like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Okay, hice otra cosa allí
6. 00:22:120 you should add a circle here, the high pitch in the vocals deserve to be mapped done
7. 00:28:198 (1) - remove NC, It's not necessary, just broke your combo pattern Prefiero no hacerlo. Allí hay un momento sin voces, donde siento que es apropiado separarlo con un nuevo combo. Al ser un lvl easy, solo hay un slider, pero siento que es claro que son secciones diferentes.
8. 00:32:316 (4,1) - sorry for nazi, but this blanket can be better. xDDDD
9. 00:38:591 you should add a circle here, the high pitch in the vocals deserve to be mapped also is a new stanza ugg, así si no. Si lo hago tendría que cambiar todo el patron, ya q poniendo un circulo, este se sobrepone encima de (3), y ahí si quedaría dificil de leer.
10. 00:35:453 (4,1) - swap NC the stanza is in (4) haaai
11. 00:38:591 a NC should be here if you follow my previous suggestion and remove it from 00:40:159 (1) - done
12. 00:41:728 (3) - this should be NC following your pattern of every 2 stanzas done
13. 00:44:081 (1) - remove NC same reason as above, btw you have a bad rhythm here try: =P
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:44:865 (2) - NC same reason as the others
15. 00:49:963 there is not reason to ignore this beat add a circle, the drum/ vocal, need to be mapped done
16. 00:51:139 (1) - so much love, but IMO don't fit the music, a new verse in 00:52:708 if you really like it feel free to ignore me D: i know, pero tuve que hacerlo así de largo, o el corazón quedaba demasiado pequeño xD
    /me ignores natsu (?)
17. 00:57:414 starting the chorus of the song in a spinner end doesn't fit the music in nothing, the chorus start deserve to be mapped with a circle or a slider head, I highly suggest you to remove the spinner and map that part properly. okay <_<
18. 01:06:826 (1,2) - try to avoid the overlap, doesn't look nice agg, bueno, ya me cansé que todos me digan eso, así que done :v ( xDD )
19. 01:09:963 (3) - missing NC following your pattern o.O, ok
20. 01:11:140 (2,3) - this is not acceptable for a easy diff you should unstack this. btw maybe you want to convert 01:11:140 (2) - in 2 circles, the sound at 01:11:532 have a high pitch. Lo siento, pero en este no te haré caso u.u La razón es que considero que aunque están sobrepuestos, hay el suficiente tiempo para prepararse y no equivocarse. Tambien, viendo que de antes se venía de varios sliders muy largos, creo que el jugador nub va a llegar un poco cansado a esta parte de la canción; el permitir que se quede quieto sin mover el mouse creo que es mejor.
21. 01:22:512 (1,2) - same as 01:06:826 done
22. 01:25:649 (1) - this slider shape is unrankable, use a normal shape instead Tuve que ir a preguntar en #modhelp... pero bueno, ya hice algo menos enredado.
    
    you have some nice ideas, but yeah try to improve this diff a little

I'll finish soon, need a break QAQ finally done :3 GL with this

Dariano wrote:

[Hanjamon's muzukashii]

Soy nuevo moddeando taiko, y pues, estas son sugerencias de acuerdo al ritmo de la canción y características generales que he visto en los mapas de taiko.
Puedes ignorar las que no te parezcan.
(Fíjate de el tiempo no del número de la nota, pues tal vez te puedas confundir con los números si agregas notas y las demás cambian de número.)


00:03:983 - Agregar una nota aquí seria estupendo, suena mucho mejor. No veo la necesidad de poner una nota ahi, pero si en 00:04:179
00:04:081 (13) - Esto suena mejor siendo clap. Es una muzukashii, no pienso añadir un ddk, al menos no por ahora.
00:06:042 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - Lo encuentro muy raro el patrón, y no concuerda con el que usaste anteriormente.
Podrías intentar algo como
no lo cambiare, no añadire un kddk, como ya he dicho es una Muzukashii
00:08:787 (40,44) - Yo las cambiaria por claps. No veo la necesidad de cambiarlos
00:13:688 (66) - Remove clap ok esta bien
00:16:336 - Agrega una nota roja. en la oni no añadi nada, asi que de momento no
00:16:434 (78,79) - Luego de agregar la nota roja, preciona CTRL + G en estos, para que cambien de posición. ^
Y finalmente remueve clap de este 00:16:826 (80) - queda bien
00:20:551 (99) - Agrega clap no lo cambiare por el momento, seria otro ddk
00:27:806 (132) - Agrega clap por el momento tampoco lo cambiare >.<
00:35:061 (169) - Agrega clap queda mejor con un finish D


Creo que eso es todo. Como estoy comenzando a moddear taiko, no intentaré la moddear la oni, pero si te ayudó y te gustó la forma en que moddié puedes hablarme in-game para hacer un IRC mod de la otra dificultad.

Buen mapa, Bye

1. delete TV Size in the title. because of rule.

1. 00:15:649 (2) - end here 00:16:042. it's better.
2. 00:16:630 (3,1) - and swap NC
3. 00:19:767 (4,1) - swap NC
4. 00:28:198 (1) - whistle on end of slider
5. 00:29:179 (1) - end on 00:29:767
6. 00:30:159 - and add a circle note.
7. 00:30:747 (2) - start on 00:30:551. don't change end time.
8. 00:35:454 (1) - finish?
9. 00:55:845 (3) - whistle and finish
10. 00:56:630 (4) - finish on end of slider
11. 00:58:983 (3) - blanket
12. 01:02:120 (3) - 1 grid up 2nd slider point
13. 01:06:826 (1) - finish on head of slider
14. 01:22:512 (1) - ^

1. 00:16:630 (1) - finish on head of slider
2. 00:18:591 (5) - clap on head of slider
3. 00:27:414 (3) - clap on head of slider, too
4. 00:28:394 (4) - remove finish and whistle on head and trunk of slider.
5. 00:30:551 (3) - adding clap on head of slider is not bad..
6. 00:49:375 (3) - clap on end of slider
7. 00:52:708 (1) - start on 00:52:904. Vocal start on here
8. 00:57:022 - try add a circle note
9. 01:06:434 (6) - clap
10. 01:07:414 (2) - clap on end of slider
11. 01:12:316 (5) - remove clap
12. 01:13:100 (1) - drum sound is little strange. change additions drum to auto

1. 00:00:944 (1,3) - add whistle
2. 00:02:316 (4) - remove whistle
3. 00:21:140 (5) - NC
4. 00:31:532 (8) - remove clap
5. 00:46:630 (7) - NC
6. 00:56:630 (4) - finish on end of slider
7. 00:59:375 (7) - whistle?
8. 01:05:061 (6) - NC

1. 00:03:689 (8) - finish on head of slider
2. 00:10:355 (1) - ^
3. 00:14:865 (1) - finish on end of slider
4. 00:16:042 (2) - this too. add finish
5. 00:19:375 (8) - whistle
6. 00:24:081 (3,5,8) - ^
7. 00:29:179 (1) - finish on head of slider
8. 00:35:159 (8) - move to 00:35:355. and stack (8,9) on 00:35:453 (1)
9. 00:40:159 (1,2,4,6) - try adding whistle. (In these slider, add it on head.)
10. 00:41:728 (1) - finish on head of slider
11. 00:50:747 (7) - finish on end of slider
12. 00:55:845 (1,2) - whistle on head of slider
13. 00:59:375 (5) - clap on head of slider
14. 01:00:159 (10) - clap
15. 01:18:787 (7,8) - whistle as S:C1
16. 01:28:394 (4) - Ctrl+G?

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1. 00:02:904 (6) - k
2. 00:04:669 (18,19) - swap
3. 00:16:826 (97) - d
4. 00:17:414 (101,102) - swap
5. 00:19:767 (113) - D
6. 00:22:904 (130) - ^
7. 00:28:787 (161,179) - k
8. 01:28:590 (523) - d

TaMul wrote:

Sorry for LATE m4m!

[General]

1. delete TV Size in the title. because of rule.

Then why there are some new ranked maps that has "TV Size" on the title? xDU

[Insane]

1. 00:03:689 (8) - finish on head of slider I don't consider it necessary. ><
2. 00:10:355 (1) - ^ Yep. <3
3. 00:14:865 (1) - finish on end of slider Okay. o3o
4. 00:16:042 (2) - this too. add finish ^
5. 00:19:375 (8) - whistle Right.
6. 00:24:081 (3,5,8) - ^ ^
7. 00:29:179 (1) - finish on head of slider ^
8. 00:35:159 (8) - move to 00:35:355. and stack (8,9) on 00:35:453 (1) I'm not sure about this, I'll think about it. >_<
9. 00:40:159 (1,2,4,6) - try adding whistle. (In these slider, add it on head.) Added finish on (1) and (2). Nothing on (4) and (6). ><
10. 00:41:728 (1) - finish on head of slider Of course~
11. 00:50:747 (7) - finish on end of slider ^
12. 00:55:845 (1,2) - whistle on head of slider Better finish~
13. 00:59:375 (5) - clap on head of slider Yep. :3
14. 01:00:159 (10) - clap ^
15. 01:18:787 (7,8) - whistle as S:C1 Clap on (8)~
16. 01:28:394 (4) - Ctrl+G?

Nope, sorry. I don't feel like that would be better~ o3o

TaMul wrote:

[EruJazz's Easy]

1. 00:15:649 (2) - end here 00:16:042. it's better. mm... sorry, but nope. I think the slider so long is easier to follow.
2. 00:16:630 (3,1) - and swap NC done
3. 00:19:767 (4,1) - swap NC mm.. nope, distance is not 1.0x, so that combo is better as it is.
4. 00:28:198 (1) - whistle on end of slider done
5. 00:29:179 (1) - end on 00:29:767 emm... why? As it is, does not sound bad, maybe your suggestion does sound better, but it's a bit complicated for the Easy diff. This part helps the player to rest. I must think of new players.
6. 00:30:159 - and add a circle note. ^
7. 00:30:747 (2) - start on 00:30:551. don't change end time. ohh, now you understand. Sorry, I'm not following the voice out of kiai.
8. 00:35:454 (1) - finish? mm... no, the music is not as intense there
9. 00:55:845 (3) - whistle and finish mm.. added normal finish
10. 00:56:630 (4) - finish on end of slider this is better: http://puu.sh/7jjcP.png
11. 00:58:983 (3) - blanket fix
12. 01:02:120 (3) - 1 grid up 2nd slider point pls... this is very nazi xD but ok
13. 01:06:826 (1) - finish on head of slider oh, fix, Thx
14. 01:22:512 (1) - ^ fix

Raisa12 wrote:

#modrequest

As ErunamoJAZZ, Inyuschan Zeroarg speak Spanish and mod it to them in Spanish ... yey!

[ EruJazz's Easy ]

-00:07:610 hasta 00:09:179 me senti algo incomoda en esta parte, porque no probar esto? El patron es sencillo de seguir. La razón que tengo para dejarlo, es el sonido entre 00:07:610 (1,2) - , los nubs aun no tienen un sentido del ritmo demasdiado desarrollado, y se dejan llevar fácilmente por los sonidos más fuertes. No hallé otra forma de plasmar el sonido sin que quedara dificil.


-00:27:022 envés de poner un circulo aqui , porque mejor no hacer esto? done, aunque tuve que cambiar el patron, lo chekeas y me dices que te parece.


-01:12:316 (3) pienso que apilar aqui seria un poquito confuso , especialmente para los principiantes La respuesta a esto está eun un mod más arriba(uno de Natsu, creo)

-01:16:238 lo mismo de lo primero que dije ok, aunque más bn esto: http://puu.sh/7AIIp.jpg

SPOILER

soy tan noob en mod que eso fue lo único que pude encontrar No te preocupes, fue de ayuda

I hope they serve something

Bye ~

TaMul wrote:

Sorry for LATE m4m!
[Oni]

k - kat
d - dong
K - big kat
D - big dong

1. 00:02:904 (6) - k ok
2. 00:04:669 (18,19) - swap for me it's ok, no change
3. 00:16:826 (97) - d
4. 00:17:414 (101,102) - swap no change
5. 00:19:767 (113) - D ^
6. 00:22:904 (130) - ^ ^
7. 00:28:787 (161,179) - k ^
8. 01:28:590 (523) - d ok

Muzu diff is little hard. make more easily! changed things ^^
because of my short taiko mod experience i can't mod anymore..

Manuxz Sixx wrote:

Hola Antes que nada, siéntanse libres de ignorar mi mod si no les sirve ~w~ No soy muy bueno en esto y recién comienzo xD

General: Les recomiendo que tengan cuidado con sus circles y slidders se salgan del campo del map (mas que todo no es por darte mas trabajo, si no que algun BAT te puede dar complicaciones). Una vez me lo dijeron así que para que lo tengan en cuenta nada más D: Vi muchos de esos en todas las diffs, por eso.

EruJazz's Easy
00:02:708 (1) - Ese spin no es muy difícil para los nuevos? Como sea podrías ponerlo en el tick más adelante. No hay spin que sea facil para los nuevos xD, pero no, no lo cambiaré, ya que va con la canción. Y si lo corro, el tiempo dde reacción entre el final del spinner y el slider siguiente queda muy dificil para los nuevos
00:22:904 (1) - Ese slider se veo algo raro XD Dale una mejor forma. si, ultimamente también lo pensé, un slider tan recto no va con una canción tan melosa
00:19:767 (5) - NC. nope
00:24:277 (2) - ^
00:28:198 (1) - Podrías hacer un blanket ahí. lel, ya hay uno xD
00:32:316 (4) - NC.
00:51:139 (1) - Si esa es la forma que querias darle bien, pero estaría mejor la de un corazón perfecto no? QwQ Creo no se uwu este corazón ya esperfercto :3
00:54:865 (1) - NC?
00:55:845 (3) - Podrías sacer ese circle y hacer un slider con reverse hasta 00:56:630 (4) - y colocar un circle en 00:56:630 (4) - Nope,, ya se que suena bien, pero pienso que queda demasiado intenso xD
01:11:924 (3) - No sería bueno hacer un slider ahí? o3o Lo probé, pero, eso le sube las estrellas al lvl. También pienso que dejarle un repito al jugador no va mal.

No se si mucho les sirva de acá XD Pero lo intente, soy nuevo en esto ;w;
Suerte con el mapa se ve muy lindo :3

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256,268,32316,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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136,248,33885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,296,34277,2,0,P|53:210|123:159,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,148,35454,5,0,0:0:0:0:
301,148,35845,2,0,P|384:160|421:242,1,180
330,236,37022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,226,37414,2,0,P|283:313|362:320,1,180
348,152,38983,6,0,P|307:75|222:61,1,180
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260,284,40944,2,2,P|228:312|180:336,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,192,44081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,328,44865,6,0,P|448:192|376:56,1,315,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,300,48002,6,0,P|400:336|440:176,1,315,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,50159,2,0,P|280:148|260:196,1,90
219,323,51139,6,2,B|76:196|112:12|228:56|252:156|252:156|292:72|416:120|372:256|260:288,1,720,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:2:0:0:
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120,160,55845,1,4,0:1:0:0:
269,270,56630,2,0,P|225:268|188:244,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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364,256,61728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,184,66042,1,4,0:0:0:0:
398,64,66826,6,0,P|438:192|398:320,1,270,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87610,12,0,88591,0:0:0:0:

Manuxz Sixx wrote:

Crystal's Hard
00:15:257 (1,2,3) - you can separate more this circles.
00:37:022 (1) - remove NC.
00:51:140 (1) - remove NC.
00:51:238 (1) - Move ths spin a 00:51:336 (1) -
00:54:375 (1) - Move this spin a 00:54:473 (1) -

1. Revisa el Aimod porque tienes algunas inconsistencias con los tags en las diff Taiko.
2. Tu BG debe ser 1366x768 y no 1365x768.
3. Creo que no era necesario poner el Playfield Background de color negro o.o no estoy seguro si debes regresarlo a como estaba antes o puedes dejarlo así, tendrías que averiguar porque no estoy seguro xD.

1. 00:02:512 (2,1) - Es una easy por lo que hacer esto no es muy recomendable, deberías cambiarlo a algo mucho más sencillo, podrías intentar borrar ese spiner y circle y en su lugar colocar un slider lo cual sería mucho perooo muchoooo mejor, tal vez en una diff Normal puedas poner esto pero en una Easy no por favor.
2. 00:07:610 (1,2) - Estos 2 sliders suenan realmente mal ;__; es porque el primer slider (1) termina en un tick rojo y el otro slider (2) comienza en un tick rojo. En las Easys lo más común es usar el ritmo de los tick blancos ya que es un ritmo fácil de seguir para los principiantes, obviamente también puedes usar los tick rojos pero es cuando realmente la música lo requiere peroooo en este caso, la música no pide que pongas estos sliders en los tick rojos D:! (Creo que ya sabías eso de los ticks blancos en easys) Así que sería mejor cambiar el ritmo en esta parte.
3. 00:10:747 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:14:473 (1,2) - Nuevamente se escucha algo raro aquí, y es nuevamente por los ticks rojos que usaste, lo mejor en esta parte sería tal vez un spiner y un slider largoo para que no se escuche así ;c. Lo que podrías hacer aquí sería: primero este circle 00:13:493 (4) - deberías convertirlo en un slider que empiece aquí y termine en 00:13:885 - y agregas una repetición, luego empiezas el spiner aquí 00:14:669 - y lo terminas aquí 00:16:238 - , por último deberías eliminar este circle 00:16:630 (1) - para que el spiner no este tan cerca al siguiente objeto y listo! tendrás un mejor ritmo :3
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:17:022 (1,2) - Lo mismo que te dije en 00:07:610 -
6. 00:19:767 (4,1) - Hay un gran espacio vacio entre estos 2 objetos lo cual se siente raro porque es una parte perfectamente mapeable, además 00:21:140 (1) - empieza otra vez en un tick rojo y se escucha mal, debería empezar aquí 00:20:944 - y lo que te decía hace un rato de la parte vacia, para arreglar eso deberías darle una repetición al slider de 00:19:767 (4) - y con esto se solucionará :b
7. 00:22:904 (1,2) - Esto está bien para mí ;3 usaste bien en esta parte los ticks rojos yay~ de esta manera no hay ningún problema (sólo quería comentarlo lol)
8. 00:30:355 - Agrega un círculo, se oye muy vacio y encajaría muy bien.
9. 00:31:532 (4,2) - Me da la impresión de que no se ven muy bien aquí, porque (2) es cubierto por (4) y para mí se ve algo extraño, podrías hacer algo como lo hiciste en 00:35:845 (2,4) - ya que así se ve mucho mejor imo.
10. 00:38:591 - Lo mismo que en 00:30:355 - .
11. 00:50:159 (2,1) - Aquí (1) es opacado porque (2) está literalmente encima de él >:c no sé que podriamos hacer para solucionar esto pero tal vez a ti se te ocurra algo haha también no siento que debería estar ese "corazón" ahí porque hay ritmo para mapear en esta parte y además que luego haces que 00:54:865 (1) - siga en un tick rojo lo cual es difícil de seguir para un principiante pero bueno, si se me viene algo a la mente para arreglar esto yo te aviso owo.
12. 00:55:845 (2,3) - Reemplaza todo esto simplemente por un slider, será mejor para seguir el ritmo.
13. 01:00:159 - , 01:03:296 - y 01:06:434 - Más espacios vacios >:c hay algunas maneras de que esto no pase como por ejemplo colocar slider un poco largos uwu.
14. 01:11:140 (2,3) - Noooo, esto es difícil de leer para un principiante, te aseguro que el noob o bien no se dará cuenta de (3) porque está detrás de (2) o también apretará antes de tiempo porque esta en 2/1 y el principante pensará que sigue en un ritmo de 1/1 ;__; es decir, mueve a 01:12:316 (3) - hacia otro lugar por favorrr D: aunque también podrías mapear esta pequeña parte porque hay mucho ritmo que seguir, no sé porque simplemente pusiste un circle.
15. 01:15:845 - y 01:18:983 - Creo que ya sabes que diré xd
16. 01:22:512 (1,2) - Esto es algo que ya habías hecho anteriormente aquí 01:06:826 (1,2) - , así que para tener algo de variedad en tu diff, podrías hacer otra cosa (cambiar la forma de los sliders solamente) y también de la manera que está ahora se ve algo raro cuando empieza 01:25:649 (1) - así que si cambias la forma de los sliders también asegura que se vea bien junto con ese slider, así matarás 2 pajaros de un solo tiro xd.
17. 01:27:610 (1) - Es un spiner muy pequeño y difícil de hacer para principiantes, mejor pero muchooo mejoor sería un slider.
    
    Para una futura ocación usa como referencia el SV de la diff Normal para poder hacer la Easy, ya que la Normal tiene 1.0 se SV mientras que la tuya tiene 0.9, no esta mal pero bueno, deberías considerarlo para la proxima vez. (Las Easys por lo general son de SV = 0.8)

1. 00:19:767 (1) - *Nazi* un poco más curva tal vez sería más agradable :b.
2. 01:08:394 (3,4,5,6) - Aquí sería algo bueno usar la simetría, me refiero a mover todo un poco más hacia la izquierda para que sea simetrico como un espejo asdfg no sé si me entiendas lol.
   
   No puse muchas cosas porque aún no fixeas mods anteriores y no quiero repetir algunas cosas que ya te habían dicho xd

[Yue] wrote:

Hello!
M4M from my queue~

General:

1. Revisa el Aimod porque tienes algunas inconsistencias con los tags en las diff Taiko.
2. Tu BG debe ser 1366x768 y no 1365x768.
3. Creo que no era necesario poner el Playfield Background de color negro o.o no estoy seguro si debes regresarlo a como estaba antes o puedes dejarlo así, tendrías que averiguar porque no estoy seguro xD.

EruJazz's Easy:

1. 00:02:512 (2,1) - Es una easy por lo que hacer esto no es muy recomendable, deberías cambiarlo a algo mucho más sencillo, podrías intentar borrar ese spiner y circle y en su lugar colocar un slider lo cual sería mucho perooo muchoooo mejor, tal vez en una diff Normal puedas poner esto pero en una Easy no por favor.
   
   respuesta por irc

   17:52 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/364784 SAKURA*TRICK - Won(*3*)Chu KissMe! (TV Size) [EruJazz's Easy]]
   17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: yue, me pones a cambiar el patron del inicio D:
   17:53 [Yue]: o.o?
   17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/7Xq9S.png
   17:53 [Yue]: ah
   17:53 [Yue]: no entendiste lo que quise decir? owo
   17:54 ErunamoJAZZ: si lo entendí, pero hasta cierto punto, no estoy de acuerdo
   17:54 ErunamoJAZZ: u.u
   17:54 [Yue]: si no estás de acuerdo, entonces no lo hagas xD
   17:54 ErunamoJAZZ: ese es el problema
   17:54 [Yue]: pero te aseguro que más mods te dirán algo parecido
   17:54 [Yue]: xd
   17:54 ErunamoJAZZ: es una especie de encrusijada moral
   17:55 [Yue]: lolwut
   17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: porque, por un lado me gusta aplicar las sugerencias que me dan cuando tienen sentido..
   17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: y aunque la tuya tiene todo el sentido del mundo
   17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: creoque el el spiner al principio no es tan complicado
   17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: o en otras palabras, que es aceptable para un easy
   17:56 [Yue]: no lo es para ti, lo es para los principiantes :b
   17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: mi defensa en la sigiente
   17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: (xD)
   17:57 [Yue]: owo
   17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: los spiners son dificiles para los noobs
   17:57 [Yue]: pero deberías postear lo que me dices
   17:57 [Yue]: y no cambiar eso owo
   17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: pero en el mapa solo etngo dos, este del inicio, el del final
   17:58 ErunamoJAZZ: es verdad que a la primer vez que jueguen el mapa, van a sorprenderse un poco
   17:58 [Yue]: lo que tengo en contre de tu spiner
   17:58 [Yue]: es que, dura muy poco
   17:58 [Yue]: un poco más de 1 seg.
   17:58 [Yue]: crees que un principiante podra dar una vuelta completa a ese spiner D:?
   17:58 ErunamoJAZZ: lel, el problema es que no da hacerlo más largo, queda raro
   17:59 [Yue]: yo creo que apenas llegaran a un 50 o 100
   17:59 ErunamoJAZZ: si
   17:59 [Yue]: por eso te dije
   17:59 [Yue]: que un slider
   17:59 [Yue]: es la mejor opción ;c
   17:59 ErunamoJAZZ: la primer vez, pero creo que es parte del reto..
   18:00 [Yue]: conozco gente que piensa igual que tú, es más
   18:00 ErunamoJAZZ: si te fijas lo dificil que es la dif de Zero... va a pasar un buen tiempo para que puedan jugarlo
   18:00 [Yue]: yo también pienso lo mismo o3o
   18:00 [Yue]: pero las malditas reglas dicen que el mapa debe ser bla y bla y bla
   18:00 ErunamoJAZZ: f*** police
   18:00 [Yue]: todo debe leerse en un primer play, no al segundo o al tercero
   18:00 [Yue]: debe ser al primero D:
   18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
   18:01 [Yue]: son reglas estupidas verdad?
   18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: comprendo el punto
   18:01 [Yue]: me joden muchas reglas ewe
   18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: yep, aveces lo son
   18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, esta vez seguiré mi instinto
   18:02 [Yue]: xd
   18:02 [Yue]: como gustes o3o
   18:02 [Yue]: espero que no sedas como otras personas
   18:02 [Yue]: que tuvieron que cambiar algo que les gusta
   18:02 [Yue]: por las malditas reglas
   18:02 ErunamoJAZZ: ajjajaja
   18:02 ErunamoJAZZ: yo soy terco
   18:02 ErunamoJAZZ: creo que solo por eso sigo mapeando
   18:02 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
   18:03 [Yue]: yo tuve que cambiar muchas cosas en una gd sólo para que causarle problemas al creador del mapa
   18:03 [Yue]: fue tan fustrante... jo
   18:03 [Yue]: pero bueno, suerte owo
   18:03 ErunamoJAZZ: oye... puedo responder solo lo que no aplicaré?
   18:04 [Yue]: claro
   18:04 ErunamoJAZZ: tengo ocmo 3 mopds más por aplicar..
   18:04 [Yue]: hazlo a tu manera
   18:04 ErunamoJAZZ: ^^
2. 00:07:610 (1,2) - Estos 2 sliders suenan realmente mal ;__; es porque el primer slider (1) termina en un tick rojo y el otro slider (2) comienza en un tick rojo. En las Easys lo más común es usar el ritmo de los tick blancos ya que es un ritmo fácil de seguir para los principiantes, obviamente también puedes usar los tick rojos pero es cuando realmente la música lo requiere peroooo en este caso, la música no pide que pongas estos sliders en los tick rojos D:! (Creo que ya sabías eso de los ticks blancos en easys) Así que sería mejor cambiar el ritmo en esta parte.
3. 00:10:747 (1,2) - ^ Creo que lo he respondido decenas de veces XD Decidí no seguir los tick blancos porque me pareció más natural seguir el piano ya que este resalta más. Además, de haberlo hecho todo como lo sugieres quedaría mucho spam de sliders chiquitos (como si no hubieran ya suficientes xD) y el largo de estos sliders es facil de seguir.
4. 00:14:473 (1,2) - Nuevamente se escucha algo raro aquí, y es nuevamente por los ticks rojos que usaste, lo mejor en esta parte sería tal vez un spiner y un slider largoo para que no se escuche así ;c. Lo que podrías hacer aquí sería: primero este circle 00:13:493 (4) - deberías convertirlo en un slider que empiece aquí y termine en 00:13:885 - y agregas una repetición, luego empiezas el spiner aquí 00:14:669 - y lo terminas aquí 00:16:238 - , por último deberías eliminar este circle 00:16:630 (1) - para que el spiner no este tan cerca al siguiente objeto y listo! tendrás un mejor ritmo :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   D: puedes creer que antes tenía un spinner y... natsu me dijo que lo quitara?... xDDDDDDDD
   
5. 00:17:022 (1,2) - Lo mismo que te dije en 00:07:610 -
6. 00:19:767 (4,1) - Hay un gran espacio vacio entre estos 2 objetos lo cual se siente raro porque es una parte perfectamente mapeable, además 00:21:140 (1) - empieza otra vez en un tick rojo y se escucha mal, debería empezar aquí 00:20:944 - y lo que te decía hace un rato de la parte vacia, para arreglar eso deberías darle una repetición al slider de 00:19:767 (4) - y con esto se solucionará :b Es que no va con el sonido que voy siguiendo... El problema con esta canción es que es facil pegarse de muchos de los sonidos que tiene, pero preferí seguir el de las trompetas aquí.
7. 00:22:904 (1,2) - Esto está bien para mí ;3 usaste bien en esta parte los ticks rojos yay~ de esta manera no hay ningún problema (sólo quería comentarlo lol) Gracias n.n
8. 00:30:355 - Agrega un círculo, se oye muy vacio y encajaría muy bien. Eso rompería mi regla de los descansos (?). Ya lo sé, pero, no sé, prefiero dejarlo... o si inyus lo quiere, pues lo pongo.
9. 00:31:532 (4,2) - Me da la impresión de que no se ven muy bien aquí, porque (2) es cubierto por (4) y para mí se ve algo extraño, podrías hacer algo como lo hiciste en 00:35:845 (2,4) - ya que así se ve mucho mejor imo. so mainstream nahh, me gusta así, le da cierto toque *-*.
10. 00:38:591 - Lo mismo que en 00:30:355 - . idem, lo que diga inyus :3
11. 00:50:159 (2,1) - Aquí (1) es opacado porque (2) está literalmente encima de él >:c no sé que podriamos hacer para solucionar esto pero tal vez a ti se te ocurra algo haha también no siento que debería estar ese "corazón" ahí porque hay ritmo para mapear en esta parte y además que luego haces que 00:54:865 (1) - siga en un tick rojo lo cual es difícil de seguir para un principiante pero bueno, si se me viene algo a la mente para arreglar esto yo te aviso owo. es un problema a cual la unica solución que le hallé fue esa xD, lo del corazón... no ;_;
12. 00:55:845 (2,3) - Reemplaza todo esto simplemente por un slider, será mejor para seguir el ritmo. OKAY!!, :3 http://puu.sh/7XtnM.jpg
13. 01:00:159 - , 01:03:296 - y 01:06:434 - Más espacios vacios >:c hay algunas maneras de que esto no pase como por ejemplo colocar slider un poco largos uwu. nu
14. 01:11:140 (2,3) - Noooo, esto es difícil de leer para un principiante, te aseguro que el noob o bien no se dará cuenta de (3) porque está detrás de (2) o también apretará antes de tiempo porque esta en 2/1 y el principante pensará que sigue en un ritmo de 1/1 ;__; es decir, mueve a 01:12:316 (3) - hacia otro lugar por favorrr D: aunque también podrías mapear esta pequeña parte porque hay mucho ritmo que seguir, no sé porque simplemente pusiste un circle.
    Oks, todos odian este patron u.u, pero ok, realmente no eres el uncio que lo ha dicho, y hasta cierto puento tienes razón. Aunque yo también tengo mis razones para dejarlo (expuestas en practicamente todos los mods que me han hecho xD), voy quitarlo para hacer un patron aun más enredado de leer. Quizás así todos sean más felices :3 (?) xD
15. 01:15:845 - y 01:18:983 - Creo que ya sabes que diré xd xD
16. 01:22:512 (1,2) - Esto es algo que ya habías hecho anteriormente aquí 01:06:826 (1,2) - , así que para tener algo de variedad en tu diff, podrías hacer otra cosa (cambiar la forma de los sliders solamente) y también de la manera que está ahora se ve algo raro cuando empieza 01:25:649 (1) - así que si cambias la forma de los sliders también asegura que se vea bien junto con ese slider, así matarás 2 pajaros de un solo tiro xd. jaja, oksy, estoy deacuerdo, ya hice sliders más bonitos, aunque tuve que cambiar un poco el patron anterio, pero creo que quedó mejor :3
17. 01:27:610 (1) - Es un spiner muy pequeño y difícil de hacer para principiantes, mejor pero muchooo mejoor sería un slider. Nop
    
    Para una futura ocación usa como referencia el SV de la diff Normal para poder hacer la Easy, ya que la Normal tiene 1.0 se SV mientras que la tuya tiene 0.9, no esta mal pero bueno, deberías considerarlo para la proxima vez. (Las Easys por lo general son de SV = 0.8) xD /me anota

bbj0920 wrote:

http://puu.sh/7WDAm.osu
For people think Hanjamon's diff is easy.
/o/ 桜Trick