1. Easy (2.24 stars, 94 notes)
2. Hard (4.91 stars, 288 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 355 notes)
4. Normal (4.23 stars, 148 notes)

Kihhou wrote:

Hello! Saw your post on the BPM/offset thread. You got the BPM right but your offset was wrong. Here's what i got:

Timing Point 1
Offset: 483
BPM: 170.000

You can check whether the beats are correctly timed by going towards the ending at a random time such as 01:28:012
Your first note should also be on the first timing boxie thingy at the top right of the timing tab unless you have pickup notes.

Good luck!

Marinska wrote:

00:20:614 - Object's end isn't snapped!
00:28:908 - ^
00:29:261 - ^
00:40:555 - ^
00:40:908 - ^
00:41:261 - ^
01:06:320 - here to,the object end isn't snapped
01:08:084 - ^

Marinska wrote:

01:27:482 - remove slider
add slider 01:26:953 to 01:27:482 .| > Like This
01:27:659 - add circle

Marinska wrote:

i think your Hard diff is not Hard.. it's look like Insane Diff..

1. lower the volumes for your timing points. 100% volume isnt rankable. maybe ~75% ish max is good.
2. turn off widescreen support if youre not using a storyboard
3. audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. try to get someone to help you with that >.< b/c i dont know how to get better audio. someone who modded my map gave me mine

1. imo sliders with more than one reverse that isnt a kick slider shouldnt be in easy, normal, or hard. its sometimes too confusing for people. you should probably wait for more people and see what they think but im just mentioning it.
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:03:306 (1) - finish at head
4. 00:06:130 (1) - finish at head
5. 00:08:953 (1,2,1) - finish at all heads
6. 00:51:130 (1) - finish
7. 01:08:247 (1) - remove NC

1. the below 3 are the same as the ones in insane
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:05:600 (4) - add NC to indicate long pause and not a jump if done, you may want to remove 00:04:718 (1)'s NC so that you dont have too many NCs in 1 place and remove 00:06:130 (1)'s NC for consistency.
4. 01:05:071 (5,6,7,1) - the fact that all of them stack and that therse more of a delay between 5 and 6 can be tricky
5. almost all the insane hitsounds can be applied to normal >.< bleh. i dont want to restate everything. i hope you get a general idea from it~

1. hmmm theres not many hitsounds. ill give a few
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:03:306 (1) - finish at head
4. 00:05:600 (4) - add NC to indicate long pause and not a jump if done, you may want to remove 00:04:718 (1)'s NC so that you dont have too many NCs in 1 place and remove 00:06:130 (1)'s NC for consistency.
5. 00:06:130 (1) - finish at head
6. 00:08:953 (1,3,5) - all finishes at heads!
7. 00:11:777 (1) - clap at head
8. 00:13:012 (1) - clap at head
9. 00:14:600 (8,1) - intentional jump?
10. 00:16:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clapclapclapclpacpalcaplcaplcaplcaplcap. like an applause
11. 00:18:306 (4) - recommend stacking this ontop of 00:18:130 (3) to follow music
12. 00:34:365 (1) - finish at head
13. 00:45:659 (1) - finish at head
14. 00:47:071 (1) - finish at head
15. 00:51:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle? (lowered volume)
16. 00:54:130 (1) - finish at head
17. 00:56:953 (1) - finish at head
18. 01:00:835 (7) - NC to indicate that it's not continuation of the same spaced beats
19. 01:19:453 (7,1,2) - this stack is confusing to read consider removing 01:19:453 (7)
20. 01:26:953 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream is waaaaaaay harder than the rest of the map! calm down with the DS man >.<

Kihhou wrote:

Hoy~!! M4M here~

[General]

1. lower the volumes for your timing points. 100% volume isnt rankable. maybe ~75% ish max is good. where does it say this? the wiki's ranking criteria doesn't have this anywhere. how would you globally lower the volume or make changes across difficulties?
2. turn off widescreen support if youre not using a storyboard done
3. audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. try to get someone to help you with that >.< b/c i dont know how to get better audio. someone who modded my map gave me mine i imported the file into audacity, exported it with 192 kbps, closed osu, and replaced the audio files. hopefully nothing bad happened, since i don't know how to swap audio files from within the osu editor.

[Normal]

1. imo sliders with more than one reverse that isnt a kick slider shouldnt be in easy, normal, or hard. its sometimes too confusing for people. you should probably wait for more people and see what they think but im just mentioning it. what does this mean?
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:03:306 (1) - finish at head added hitsounds
4. 00:06:130 (1) - finish at head
5. 00:08:953 (1,2,1) - finish at all heads
6. 00:51:130 (1) - finish
7. 01:08:247 (1) - remove NC done

[Hard]

1. the below 3 are the same as the ones in insane
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC done
3. 00:05:600 (4) - add NC to indicate long pause and not a jump if done, you may want to remove 00:04:718 (1)'s NC so that you dont have too many NCs in 1 place and remove 00:06:130 (1)'s NC for consistency. done
4. 01:05:071 (5,6,7,1) - the fact that all of them stack and that therse more of a delay between 5 and 6 can be tricky i wanna keep it this way as one of the tests to separate the weaker players from the better ones who can overcome this for a full combo
5. almost all the insane hitsounds can be applied to normal >.< bleh. i dont want to restate everything. i hope you get a general idea from it~ i haven't started doing most of the hitsounds yet, will do that later

[Insane]

1. hmmm theres not many hitsounds. ill give a few
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC done
3. 00:03:306 (1) - finish at head added hitsounds
4. 00:05:600 (4) - add NC to indicate long pause and not a jump if done, you may want to remove 00:04:718 (1)'s NC so that you dont have too many NCs in 1 place and remove 00:06:130 (1)'s NC for consistency. done
5. 00:06:130 (1) - finish at head
6. 00:08:953 (1,3,5) - all finishes at heads!
7. 00:11:777 (1) - clap at head
8. 00:13:012 (1) - clap at head
9. 00:14:600 (8,1) - intentional jump? it doesn't look like much of a jump
10. 00:16:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clapclapclapclpacpalcaplcaplcaplcaplcap. like an applause
11. 00:18:306 (4) - recommend stacking this ontop of 00:18:130 (3) to follow music done
12. 00:34:365 (1) - finish at head
13. 00:45:659 (1) - finish at head
14. 00:47:071 (1) - finish at head
15. 00:51:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle? (lowered volume) added timing section with lower volume for this portion
16. 00:54:130 (1) - finish at head
17. 00:56:953 (1) - finish at head
18. 01:00:835 (7) - NC to indicate that it's not continuation of the same spaced beats done
19. 01:19:453 (7,1,2) - this stack is confusing to read consider removing 01:19:453 (7) done
20. 01:26:953 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream is waaaaaaay harder than the rest of the map! calm down with the DS man >.< lol, replaced it with a less spaced stream

Hope this helped! TSM sucks

Good luck :{O ~

xxdeathx wrote:

Kihhou wrote:

Hoy~!! M4M here~

[General]

1. lower the volumes for your timing points. 100% volume isnt rankable. maybe ~75% ish max is good. where does it say this? the wiki's ranking criteria doesn't have this anywhere. how would you globally lower the volume or make changes across difficulties? use shift click to highlight all the timing points and change them. or you can manually do it. this is what i was told in one of my mods. its pretty convincing evidence that no ranked maps have 100% volume.. atleast not any that i could find
2. turn off widescreen support if youre not using a storyboard done
3. audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. try to get someone to help you with that >.< b/c i dont know how to get better audio. someone who modded my map gave me mine i imported the file into audacity, exported it with 192 kbps, closed osu, and replaced the audio files. hopefully nothing bad happened, since i don't know how to swap audio files from within the osu editor.

[Normal]

1. imo sliders with more than one reverse that isnt a kick slider shouldnt be in easy, normal, or hard. its sometimes too confusing for people. you should probably wait for more people and see what they think but im just mentioning it. what does this mean? so a single slider with more than one reverse arrow is confusing unless its one of those super fast ones that sound like a stream (a kick slider)
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:03:306 (1) - finish at head added hitsounds
4. 00:06:130 (1) - finish at head
5. 00:08:953 (1,2,1) - finish at all heads
6. 00:51:130 (1) - finish
7. 01:08:247 (1) - remove NC done

[Hard]

1. the below 3 are the same as the ones in insane
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC done
3. 00:05:600 (4) - add NC to indicate long pause and not a jump if done, you may want to remove 00:04:718 (1)'s NC so that you dont have too many NCs in 1 place and remove 00:06:130 (1)'s NC for consistency. done
4. 01:05:071 (5,6,7,1) - the fact that all of them stack and that therse more of a delay between 5 and 6 can be tricky i wanna keep it this way as one of the tests to separate the weaker players from the better ones who can overcome this for a full combo
5. almost all the insane hitsounds can be applied to normal >.< bleh. i dont want to restate everything. i hope you get a general idea from it~ i haven't started doing most of the hitsounds yet, will do that later

[Insane]

1. hmmm theres not many hitsounds. ill give a few
2. 00:02:953 (1) - remove NC done
3. 00:03:306 (1) - finish at head added hitsounds
4. 00:05:600 (4) - add NC to indicate long pause and not a jump if done, you may want to remove 00:04:718 (1)'s NC so that you dont have too many NCs in 1 place and remove 00:06:130 (1)'s NC for consistency. done
5. 00:06:130 (1) - finish at head
6. 00:08:953 (1,3,5) - all finishes at heads!
7. 00:11:777 (1) - clap at head
8. 00:13:012 (1) - clap at head
9. 00:14:600 (8,1) - intentional jump? it doesn't look like much of a jump
10. 00:16:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clapclapclapclpacpalcaplcaplcaplcaplcap. like an applause
11. 00:18:306 (4) - recommend stacking this ontop of 00:18:130 (3) to follow music done
12. 00:34:365 (1) - finish at head
13. 00:45:659 (1) - finish at head
14. 00:47:071 (1) - finish at head
15. 00:51:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle? (lowered volume) added timing section with lower volume for this portion
16. 00:54:130 (1) - finish at head
17. 00:56:953 (1) - finish at head
18. 01:00:835 (7) - NC to indicate that it's not continuation of the same spaced beats done
19. 01:19:453 (7,1,2) - this stack is confusing to read consider removing 01:19:453 (7) done
20. 01:26:953 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream is waaaaaaay harder than the rest of the map! calm down with the DS man >.< lol, replaced it with a less spaced stream

Hope this helped! TSM sucks

Good luck :{O ~

thanks for the mod. hitsounds are hard >.< i'm still working on an easy difficulty that i planned to finish after modding yours; i'd appreciate some feedback on that too when it's done.

kihhou wrote:

audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. try to get someone to help you with that >.< b/c i dont know how to get better audio. someone who modded my map gave me mine

Marinska wrote:

your mp3 is higher than 192kbps... please convert to 192kbps if you want to be ranked...

because it limits the bitrate is 192 kbps for ranked map...

1. I think the offset should be around 519 but you will change the mp3 soon so ignore this
2. I think the soft-samepleset is more fit, the normal-samepleset are too loud.
3. 100% is too loud for me, try to decrease it to 80% and decrease 80% to about 60-70%, it would sounds better.
4. try to use grid lv4 to map, it can help you to make more pattern.
5. please use a mute slider (soft-sliderslide)
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. change them to soft-samepleset and use clap or normal-sampleset (on the left) just on the every second white tick is better imo.
      example: 00:03:659 / 00:04:365 / 00:05:071 / 00:05:777 / 00:06:482 and go on.
   2. 00:14:600 (8) - add finish.
   3. 00:14:600 (8,1) - swap NC? if you nc follow the instrument here is more fit imo.
   4. if you make all of spacing balance would be nice too, except the jump that fit with music.
   [Hard]
   
   1. Hp-1 AR-1 (Hp 5, AR 7) to keep a gap between each diff more balance.
   2. change them to soft-samepleset and use clap or normal-sampleset (on the left) just on the every second white tick
   3. check the spacing
   [Normal]
   
   1. change them to soft-samepleset and use clap or normal-sampleset (on the left) just on the every second white tick
   2. 00:06:130 (1) - overlapped. please avoid it. and two reverse doesn't look good :X It would make the player confuse.
   3. 00:11:424 - add note.
   4. 00:14:600 (1) - add finish.
   5. 00:24:659 (2) - (( make it easier.
   6. 00:37:894 (2,3) - check the spacing, why they're too short if compare with the previous one.
   7. 01:01:188 (1,2,3) - stack like this is pretty confuse for beginner, please unstack.
   8. 01:27:306 (5) - remove NC
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:01:365 (2) - blanket?
   2. 00:54:130 (1) - hmm ugly shape imo :X please remake.

P A N wrote:

hi

[General]

1. I think the offset should be around 519 but you will change the mp3 soon so ignore this is the mp3 on your side still higher than 192 kbps? i already converted it to a new file that is 192 kbps and replaced it in my folder but i can't figure out how to upload it
2. I think the soft-samepleset is more fit, the normal-samepleset are too loud. ok but which soft sampleset has the mute sliders that you mention later?
3. 100% is too loud for me, try to decrease it to 80% and decrease 80% to about 60-70%, it would sounds better. changed 80%s to 60% and 100% to 80%
4. try to use grid lv4 to map, it can help you to make more pattern. my next map will be tiny grid
5. please use a mute slider (soft-sliderslide) how do i do this? which sampleset has mute sliders?
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. change them to soft-samepleset and use clap or normal-sampleset (on the left) just on the every second white tick is better imo.
      example: 00:03:659 / 00:04:365 / 00:05:071 / 00:05:777 / 00:06:482 and go on. i don't understand what all of this means
   2. 00:14:600 (8) - add finish. done
   3. 00:14:600 (8,1) - swap NC? if you nc follow the instrument here is more fit imo. done, it also fits the ticks
   4. if you make all of spacing balance would be nice too, except the jump that fit with music. i tried to balance some but it's an insane so this rule can be relaxed
   [Hard]
   
   1. Hp-1 AR-1 (Hp 5, AR 7) to keep a gap between each diff more balance. done
   2. change them to soft-samepleset and use clap or normal-sampleset (on the left) just on the every second white tick what does this mean?
   3. check the spacing i checked the spacing and nothing seems out of place
   [Normal]
   
   1. change them to soft-samepleset and use clap or normal-sampleset (on the left) just on the every second white tick what does this mean?
   2. 00:06:130 (1) - overlapped. please avoid it. and two reverse doesn't look good :X It would make the player confuse. changed
   3. 00:11:424 - add note. changed
   4. 00:14:600 (1) - add finish. changed
   5. 00:24:659 (2) - (( make it easier. changed
   6. 00:37:894 (2,3) - check the spacing, why they're too short if compare with the previous one. what about the spacing is too short?
   7. 01:01:188 (1,2,3) - stack like this is pretty confuse for beginner, please unstack. moved 01:01:188 (1,2) to a separate location
   8. 01:27:306 (5) - remove NC what about 01:18:835 (1) and 01:24:659 (1) then? do i remove those NC too?
   [Easy]
   
   1. 00:01:365 (2) - blanket? what's blanket?
   2. 00:54:130 (1) - hmm ugly shape imo :X please remake. changed to a large curve slider

GL

1. offset use : 531
2. You should try to listen the rhythm and voice.
3. The hitsound volume around 50% ~ 60%. This map music is not loud.
4. Please choose the colours and tick the 'enable Custom Colours'.
   
5. Tag: strike witches, ending, ending theme, ed, Misato Fukuen, Saeko Chiba, Kaori Nazuka, Miyuki Sawashiro, Rie Tanaka, Mie Sonozaki, Sakura Nogawa, Chiwa Saito, Ami Koshimizu, Mai Kadowaki, Erika Nakai.
   Is not use comma in the tag.
   Tag: strike witches ending them Misato Fukuen Saeko Chiba Kaori Nazuka Miyuki Sawashiro Rie Tanaka Mie Sonozaki Sakura Nogawa Chiwa Saito Ami Koshimizu Mai Kadowaki Erika Nakai

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Gerenal]

1. offset use : 531 done
2. You should try to listen the rhythm and voice.
3. The hitsound volume around 50% ~ 60%. This map music is not loud.
4. Please choose the colours and tick the 'enable Custom Colours'.
   took a while to change
5. Tag: strike witches, ending, ending theme, ed, Misato Fukuen, Saeko Chiba, Kaori Nazuka, Miyuki Sawashiro, Rie Tanaka, Mie Sonozaki, Sakura Nogawa, Chiwa Saito, Ami Koshimizu, Mai Kadowaki, Erika Nakai.
   Is not use comma in the tag.
   Tag: strike witches ending them Misato Fukuen Saeko Chiba Kaori Nazuka Miyuki Sawashiro Rie Tanaka Mie Sonozaki Sakura Nogawa Chiwa Saito Ami Koshimizu Mai Kadowaki Erika Nakai done

Insane

1. 00:01:413 (2) - remove
2. 00:01:589 (3) - remove
3. 00:01:766 - circle here why does it go like this?
   
4. 01:01:060 - add note done
5. 01:15:619 (8) - overmapped. removed
6. 01:27:001 (8) - NC
7. 01:27:089 (1) - remove NC i'm keeping my NC's on the first beat of the instrument
8. 01:28:589 (3) - NC done
9. 01:29:119 (5) - NC done

Hard

1. 00:00:531 (1,2,3) - same at Insane? please change it. aren't there instruments there?
2. 00:12:707 (4) - pull away the distance with 00:13:060 (1) - .You space at 00:12:883 - but 00:12:530 (3,4,1) - distance is like to belance. balanced
3. 00:42:354 - add notegood idea

Normal

1. 00:00:531 (1,2) - same at Hard and Insane? Chnage it. changed to slider this time
   
2. 00:03:001 (3) - circle here. It is not fast here, you should not use 2/4 sllider here. changed
3. 00:18:530 - add note
4. 00:33:883 - 2/4 slider here.
5. 01:07:060 - 2/4 slider here. tried 2/4 sliders in these places and they don't sound right =/
6. 01:19:589 (1,2,3) - nice mapping~ thanks
7. 01:21:178 (4) - rebound slider slider here↓
8. 01:21:707 - add note ↓ this will be too hard
9. 01:21:883 (1) - slider end at 01:22:413 -↓ done
   

Easy

1. 00:00:531 (1,2) - same at Normal, Hard and Insane.
2. 00:03:354 (1) - remove NC removed 00:03:001 (3) nc instead
3. 00:04:766 (1) - ^
4. 00:06:178 (2) - NC
5. 00:17:472 (1) - Do not change DS in the easy diffs. what is DS?
6. 00:25:589 (2) - ^
7. 00:28:060 (2) - ^
8. 00:34:413 (1) - ^
9. 00:55:413 (2) - slider end at 00:55:942 - done
10. 00:56:648 - add note done
11. 00:57:354 - add note done
12. 01:05:119 - add note done

xxdeathx wrote:

:lol:

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Gerenal]

1. offset use : 531 done
2. You should try to listen the rhythm and voice.
3. The hitsound volume around 50% ~ 60%. This map music is not loud.
4. Please choose the colours and tick the 'enable Custom Colours'.
   took a while to change
5. Tag: strike witches, ending, ending theme, ed, Misato Fukuen, Saeko Chiba, Kaori Nazuka, Miyuki Sawashiro, Rie Tanaka, Mie Sonozaki, Sakura Nogawa, Chiwa Saito, Ami Koshimizu, Mai Kadowaki, Erika Nakai.
   Is not use comma in the tag.
   Tag: strike witches ending them Misato Fukuen Saeko Chiba Kaori Nazuka Miyuki Sawashiro Rie Tanaka Mie Sonozaki Sakura Nogawa Chiwa Saito Ami Koshimizu Mai Kadowaki Erika Nakai done

Insane

1. 00:01:413 (2) - remove
2. 00:01:589 (3) - remove
3. 00:01:766 - circle here why does it go like this? I think you should follow the loudly voice.
   
4. 01:01:060 - add note done
5. 01:15:619 (8) - overmapped. removed
6. 01:27:001 (8) - NC
7. 01:27:089 (1) - remove NC i'm keeping my NC's on the first beat of the instrument
8. 01:28:589 (3) - NC done
9. 01:29:119 (5) - NC done

Hard

1. 00:00:531 (1,2,3) - same at Insane? please change it. aren't there instruments there?
2. 00:12:707 (4) - pull away the distance with 00:13:060 (1) - .You space at 00:12:883 - but 00:12:530 (3,4,1) - distance is like to belance. balanced
3. 00:42:354 - add notegood idea

Normal

1. 00:00:531 (1,2) - same at Hard and Insane? Chnage it. changed to slider this time
   
2. 00:03:001 (3) - circle here. It is not fast here, you should not use 2/4 sllider here. changed
3. 00:18:530 - add note
4. 00:33:883 - 2/4 slider here.
5. 01:07:060 - 2/4 slider here. tried 2/4 sliders in these places and they don't sound right =/
6. 01:19:589 (1,2,3) - nice mapping~ thanks
7. 01:21:178 (4) - rebound slider slider here↓
8. 01:21:707 - add note ↓ this will be too hard
9. 01:21:883 (1) - slider end at 01:22:413 -↓ done
   

Easy

1. 00:00:531 (1,2) - same at Normal, Hard and Insane.
2. 00:03:354 (1) - remove NC removed 00:03:001 (3) nc instead
3. 00:04:766 (1) - ^
4. 00:06:178 (2) - NC
5. 00:17:472 (1) - Do not change DS in the easy diffs. what is DS? Distance snap
6. 00:25:589 (2) - ^
7. 00:28:060 (2) - ^
8. 00:34:413 (1) - ^
9. 00:55:413 (2) - slider end at 00:55:942 - done
10. 00:56:648 - add note done
11. 00:57:354 - add note done
12. 01:05:119 - add note done

Main Black wrote:

Hello m4m quest
I not good English..

[Easy]

00:14:825 (1,2,3) - beat change done

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01:12:530 (2) - 4/4 time signature to align the slider thanks, i can't believe i missed this

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[Normal]

00:06:177 (1) - add head finish
00:07:413 (1) - ^
00:09:001 (1) - remove tail finish and finish
00:17:472 (1) - add head finish
00:18:707 (1) - ^
00:23:118 (1) - add finish
00:28:766 (1) - ^
00:30:001 (1) - umm.. I think add finish..but you can determine
00:38:648 (3) - add all whistle
01:19:589 (1,3) - add head finish
01:21:883 (1) - add tail finish
01:23:471 (3) - add head finish
01:25:413 (1) - add tail finish
01:26:295 (3) - add head finish
01:28:060 (1,2) - ^

thanks for hitsounds, i'm really bad with them

[Hard]

00:17:471 (1) - add head finish
00:18:707 (1) - ^
00:38:824 (2) - add whistle
01:19:413 (1) - add tail finish
01:20:648 (5) - add finish
01:22:413 (1) - add head finish
01:23:471 (3) - ^
01:25:236 (1) - add finish
01:26:295 (5) - ^

01:27:001 (8) - 01:21:177 (7,8,1,2,3) in front of Gently the same oh i get it

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01:28:060 (1) - add finish
01:28:589 (3) - ^

[Insane]

00:17:472 (1) - add head finish
00:18:707 (2) - ^
00:38:825 (2) - add whistle
00:39:178 (4) - add head&tail whistle and add whistle
00:39:707 (5) - add head finish
00:49:942 (2) - add head whistle
00:50:472 (4) - ^
00:50:825 (5) - add whistle
00:51:001 (6) - add head whistle
01:19:589 (1) - add finish
01:20:648 (5) - ^
01:22:413 (1) - add head finish
01:23:472 (3) - add finish
01:26:295 (5) - ^
01:28:060 (1) - ^
01:28:589 (1) - ^
01:29:119 (1) - remove tail finish

Good luck!

Tari wrote:

As promised.

Mod here.

[Easy]

1. 00:01:766 (2) - No need to do a short slider like this, you don't need any complex rhythms here and only need to show the important beats. That being said, you need to just add a circle to the red tick, that'll be fine and simple for the players to play. The beat there is just really obvious.
2. 00:03:354 (1) - You don't need to do 2 reverses here, it can be confusing for beginners to play! Keep that in mind for your next maps, Players don't have enough reaction time because they only look at the cursor thus only the reverse arrow themselves, and so they have a slow reaction time, I think it's best to remove it and add a circle to replace the extra reverse.
3. 00:14:825 (1,2,3) - How about you try this rhythm here? : http://puu.sh/898gL.jpg It's awkward and confusing to play (in new players perspective) to play it because they are use to following the same time-space meaning only the white ticks and constantly changing from mapping to white back to red is confusing, try to keep notes starting at white tick's next time, oh btw for slider 3 you can choose to end it in red tick if you prefer.
4. 00:20:472 (1,2,3) - Again, try this : http://puu.sh/898A1.jpg Same reason as above.
5. 00:23:119 (1) - Try to keep slider's relatively simple, new players can't follow the slider ball correctly if you do weird shapes like this, and if you decide to do such weird shapes, its for emphasis. Probably should change the shape.
6. 00:28:766 (1) - ^
7. 00:11:825 (1) - Use finish instead of clap?
8. 00:34:413 (1) - Spacing, its way too close. Use DS and distance it farther against.
9. 00:34:413 (1) - Your mapping from here improved alot at least from the previous , why can't you map like this in the beginning? LOL
10. 00:38:648 (3) - Curve it less, beginners can follow it easier that way.
11. 00:50:825 (3) - Remove the slider and add a circle to just the red tick, and move the spinner to the previous tick now.
12. 01:21:178 (4) - ^ but no spinner here.
13. 00:57:707 (5) - Reverse the slider please.
14. 00:59:119 (1,2) - Another note for creating easy diffs, don't create stacks. players rely on DS and stacking totally throws them off.
15. 01:12:178 (1) - ^
16. 01:09:530 (3) - Extend the slider to the white tick?
17. 00:54:178 (1) - The start of the kiai should have a finish, add a finish here.
18. 01:22:413 (2) - Again with the multiple reverses.
    Double check your DS(Distance Snap) please.

is mapping to the white ticks really more important than mapping to rhythm of the vocals?

[Normal]

1. 00:06:883 (2) - Check your spacing (DS) Distance Snap
2. 00:11:471 (3) - ^
3. 00:13:942 (2) - ^
4. 00:18:530 (3) - ^ Wooooooah, 1.85x spacing omg that's a new record!
5. 00:24:354 (1) - ^
6. 00:25:589 (3) - ^
7. 00:28:766 (1) - ^
8. 00:30:001 (1) - ^
9. 00:37:236 (1) - ^
10. 01:07:589 (1) - ^
11. 01:22:942 (2) - ^
12. 01:21:883 (1) - ^
13. 01:29:118 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. The design of this diff is so messed up, I guess I'd rather build/fix your current map already rather than change it drastically.
2. 00:08:118 (3,4) - Ctrl+G these note's please they flow better that way.
3. 00:50:824 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:27:177 (1) - It's fine, but you need to make the spacing farther it's way too close and its uncomfortable to play and you need to lay down on the stacks.
5. 00:33:530 (1) - Split it into two sliders instead?
6. 01:11:119 (3,4) - Remove the circle and reverse 3? the movement to 4 feels really awkward and the reverse on the slider plays and follows vocals alot better.
7. 01:27:001 (8) - ? Why end this slider at the blue tick? a previous mod told me to do it like this to compensate for the song's voice which is off by 1/4 beat

[Insane]

1. 00:00:531 (1,2) - Why do easier rhythm here than on the other diffs, you didn't do a slider for note 2 here but for the rest idea, the harder diffs are suppose to have harder rhythms. doesn't make sense to me. a previous mod had me remove the circle+slider that was originally here. i'll reinstate it.
2. 00:16:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What, this is way overmapped, and the clap sounds are so annoying and quite obvious it is overmapped, hitsounds should accompany and blend in well with the music. Please consider removing some circles.
3. 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ i disagree with this one, since if you listen closely those 5 circles are mapped on the music's drums hitting 5 times
4. 00:40:060 (1) - Make it straight? don't understand why the slider is facing down a bit? to make the jump easier, imo it doesn't really change much. try this : http://puu.sh/89alK.jpg
5. 00:57:001 (1,2) - Maybe curve it for variety? http://puu.sh/89aoT.jpg

Map needs much work yeah.