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marina - Towa yori Towa ni

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Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
*Rolls on Garven~

[Expert]
02:14:300 (6) - I feel like this slider should start 1/2 later, adding a note here 02:14:300 -
Meanie diff

[Cilvery's Insane]
00:37:700 (5,6,7) - I dont think the triplet fits here,feels overmapped. Actually this whole section 00:36:350 - until 00:45:650 - feels overmapped to me. It would be cool to start this section with less notes and then adding more notes gradually, to make something like a smooth transition. (Like Expert diff)
01:16:850 (3) - Would play better if you reverse this Ctrl+G
01:46:250 (1) - The end of this slider should land on prev red tick (1/2)

[Kite's Insane]
00:50:750 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Decrease the volume of these a bit, like on Expert and Cilvery's Insane.
01:34:775 (6,7,8,9,10) - Without the stream would sound an play better
01:34:850 (7) - Shouldn't this note be part of the soft timing section (the green line is not snapped on it, so it has normal sound)
01:55:550 (1) - The change of velocity is kinda sudden, try using x1.25 instead
02:04:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing from 1 to 2, doesn't make sense at all to me if we compared to the rest of the stream.

[Melo's Hard]
00:54:950 (3) - This should land on the red tick
00:27:350 (1) - sounds better if you move it 1/2 earlier

[KSHR's Normal]
01:49:850 (6) - I feel like something is missing around here, try making that note into a 1/2 slider (http://puu.sh/7yxbH.jpg)

[Easy]
00:57:650 (3) - sounds better if you move it 1/2 earlier
01:00:050 (1) - same

Happy face http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1425760
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR

Lissette wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
01:49:850 (6) - I feel like something is missing around here, try making that note into a 1/2 slider (http://puu.sh/7yxbH.jpg)
Agree. But the vocal ends at around 01:50:150 - (also there is the drum sound there too.), made the 1/2 slider instead of the note.
Plus, since the drum sound at 01:50:750 - is lower than the previous one at 01:50:150 - , add the green line to reduce the volume to 50% there.
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Title:Towa yori Towa ni
TitleUnicode:永久より永遠に
Artist:marina
ArtistUnicode:marina
Creator:Garven
Version:KSHR's Normal
Source:少女神域∽少女天獄 -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-
Tags:Kite KSHR Cilvery Melophobia TKSalt Shoujo Shiniki Tengoku
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368,248,119150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Garven
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Lissette wrote:

*Rolls on Garven~

x_x

[Expert]
02:14:300 (6) - I feel like this slider should start 1/2 later, adding a note here 02:14:300 -
That entire section is pretty much guitar-focused since there wasn't any vocal to follow at the start. If I turn and emphasize the vocals in the middle of it, I fear that would be more disruptive changing the voice compared to moving emphasis to the vocals. It also leads to the instrumental focus of the finale of the map
Ice cream girl

[Easy]
00:57:650 (3) - sounds better if you move it 1/2 earlier
01:00:050 (1) - same
In the original design, they were in that spot, but I felt that kind of rhythm change wasn't easily communicated with the sliders and spacing at that point. I kept it to the larger gap that is much easier to spot visually and since the rhythm is led in with that same visual, it should be easier to read.

Happy face http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1425760

Cleft lip face https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1428532
Thanks for checking!

Edit:

Kite's updated.

"took on the mods
didnt apply most of the suggestions they had though"
Pururut
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wow
marina :D
Melophobia
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Sorry but no change I like my own rhythm better.
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Lissette wrote:

[Cilvery's Insane]
00:37:700 (5,6,7) - I dont think the triplet fits here,feels overmapped. Actually this whole section 00:36:350 - until 00:45:650 - feels overmapped to me. It would be cool to start this section with less notes and then adding more notes gradually, to make something like a smooth transition. (Like Expert diff)
01:16:850 (3) - Would play better if you reverse this Ctrl+G
01:46:250 (1) - The end of this slider should land on prev red tick (1/2) fixed
thanks for mod :3
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Lissette
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After lil IRC mod~

Bubbled~
BeatofIke
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You have a silenced drum-sliderslide and drum-slidertick. I believe that's unrankable (unless that changed)! o.o

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
Garven
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It's only done in short instances (such as converting the tick rate to 1 to fit the time signature change). It's allowed.
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Okay then. Ranked~
Garven
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Dayum you work fast. Thanks!
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Gentleman Garven gratz!
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congrats Garven sensei!
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litoluna wrote:

congrats Garven sensei!
GugUCorn
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lol
congratz! TKS!,Garven! :D :D
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ha ha ha
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o god the spacing
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Jaitonat wrote:

o god the spacing
Oh god the aspect ratio on your avatar
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orbital gun

Garven wrote:

Jaitonat wrote:

o god the spacing
Oh god the aspect ratio on your avatar
oh god the oh god
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Fuck yeah~ :3
Satellite
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KSHR wrote:

Fuck yeah~ :3
Seph
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hey like, i remember when u sent this to me unsubmitted

now its ranked wtf grats bby u kno i lub dis
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gratz
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yay, congratulations \o/
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8-) nce
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Fuck yeah がーべん
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Natsu wrote:

litoluna wrote:

congrats Garven sensei!
Teach me how to work fast
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Good job Garven! :)
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おめでとぅお！Where's your new avatar :o
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TKSalt wrote:

Fuck yeah がーべん
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Gratz
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Gratz~
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oh wow that was fast xD congrats Garven! :3
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dat od10

graz 8-)
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KSHR wrote:

Fuck yeah~ :3
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Thanks everyone! This was fun to make - hope you enjoy it!

Also kudos to KSHR, Melophobia, Cilvery, Kite, and TKSalt for their guest maps along with NewRulerNA for providing the video! I couldn'ta done it without you~
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Are you sure 01:24:050 - section is timed right? There sounds like a lot of objects snapped to nothing.
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Lach wrote:

Are you sure 01:24:050 - section is timed right? There sounds like a lot of objects snapped to nothing.


:P Seems not
Lach
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Nothing to do with signature. The vocals and whatever instrument that is, are way later than the ticks.
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garven ojisan congratz:D
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