Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[Normal]

00:19:800 (4) - I personally suggest moving this slider up and pointing it towards the note of the next combo fixed
like so (http://puu.sh/73wtT.jpg).

00:21:000 (2) - I also feel this slider can be adjusted in gradient so that the tail end stacks on the note like fixed
this (http://puu.sh/73wy9.jpg).

00:21:800 (3) - Maybe stack this too for continuity (http://puu.sh/73wFs.jpg). fixed

00:46:600 (2) - I recommend moving this along to the left a little to give the blanket a cleaner appearance (http://puu.sh/73wXQ.jpg). fixed

01:09:000 (3) - The head of this slider is overlapping over the body slightly, to give it a cleaner appearance and readability I would suggest moving the first point down a touch like this (http://puu.sh/73xda.jpg). fixed

01:28:200 (2) - I would suggest smoothing this sliders curve out a little as I felt it was a little too sharp in fixed
comparison with the other sliders (http://puu.sh/73xiq.jpg).

01:29:800 (4) - I would recommend doing the same with this as it will improve appearance and flow into the fixed
next slider better (http://puu.sh/73xlr.jpg).

02:35:000 (4,5) - I would move 5 up a little to make the triangle even and symmetrical and tuck 4 in a little too (http://puu.sh/73xzZ.jpg). fixed

[Hard]

00:18:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest evening the spacing out between the sides of the notes in this pattern as it looks fixed
more consistent (http://puu.sh/74AEv.jpg).

00:25:400 (3,4) - This one is more subtle than the others but I felt my alternative to preventing an overlap between 00:25:800 (4,3) works rather well. I made a blanket as a route around (http://puu.sh/74B4u.jpg). fixed

00:27:400 (3) - I feel you should flip this slider and space the notes accordingly to prevent any overlaps as I felt that an upwards arc slider was great for the high note but then she sings lower when we get to this slider. This is why I thought the song played and flowed
better with this alternative (http://puu.sh/74BdW.jpg). fixed

00:36:200 (1,2) - I recommend you use slider 1 as a template for slider 2 so your blanket looks more
symmetrical (http://puu.sh/74Bnc.jpg). fixed

00:40:600 (4,1) - I would suggest you make it so these 2 sliders blanket (http://puu.sh/74BDB.jpg). fixed

01:29:200 (2,2,3,1,2) - I personally feel that there are too many overlaps between these notes, I suggest this alternation to space
them out a little (http://puu.sh/74BU1.jpg). I arranged this pattern so it looks more symmetrical and even, flows better, maintains distance snap spacing AND doesn't overlap with any notes. Fig. 2: (http://puu.sh/74BWR.jpg). fixed

01:40:600 (2,3) - I felt you should alter slider 2's curve so that it blankets slider 3's head like so (http://puu.sh/74C1V.jpg). fixed

01:43:400 (1,4) - I moved this part slightly to the left a little so that slider 1's head stacks on the first slider of the mod underneath you are avoiding overlap and overall fixing that whole areas severe overlap issues (http://puu.sh/74CgZ.jpg). fixed

01:44:200 (4,5,6) - This pattern would look better if you altered slider 3's gradient so that it becomes square with the
other sliders (http://puu.sh/74Cin.jpg). fixed

01:45:000 (1) - I moved this slider down so that its tail stacked on the previous combo slider 4's head, voilá all overlap
issues here fixed (http://puu.sh/74Cmp.jpg). fixed

02:13:000 (2,3,4) - Few little suggestions here that I hope you will agree on. First I think you should move slider 3 up a little so slider 4 blankets its tail perfectly, and secondly I reckon you should move note 2 so it stacks on the end of slider 4. It looks a lot prettier, flows better and you are preventing an overlap (http://puu.sh/74Cyx.jpg). fixed

02:14:400 (5,6) - I recommend altering this curve of slider 6 so that it blankets the kink in slider 5 and looks
neater (http://puu.sh/74Ddi.jpg). fixed

02:28:200 (1,2,3,4,1) - I felt you should aim for something like this with this set of notes, first of all it seems to look neater without any overlaps, and the jump pattern you have ended up looking more square (http://puu.sh/74Dlk.jpg). fixed

02:30:400 (2) - I suggest packing this note in a bit tighter and moving it up so it blankets perfectly fixed
with the slider (http://puu.sh/74DoJ.jpg).

02:36:600 (2) - I feel the curve of this slider could blanket the next curve a little better (http://puu.sh/74DuC.jpg). fixed

02:37:400 (4,1) - Flipping slider 4 not only flows better, but also blankets the head of slider 1 (http://puu.sh/74DxE.jpg). fixed

[Insane]

00:32:400 (1) - This slider could definitely match the rumble in the beat by extending 1 more repeat but on 1/6 beat snap divisor formed a triangle but kept the slider the same
like this (http://puu.sh/74DNe.jpg). I would also suggest moving it closer to its combo to form a triangle (http://puu.sh/74DOJ.jpg). fixed

00:36:800 (5) - Absolutely no need for NC here as it stunts the players reading of the beat of the stream. If u remove the NC the player can see that the stack at the start of the stream is the last to beats of the last phrase therefore feel the rhythm of the stream better. fixed
Very important (http://puu.sh/74DXt.jpg).

00:52:000 (6) - I suggest moving this up a touch on grid level 4 to keep the spacing between the sliders fixed
consistent (http://puu.sh/74E5k.jpg).

01:09:000 (4) - The head of this slider is slightly overlapping the body, to prevent this, move the first point up a bit so you can see the rest of the body like this (http://puu.sh/74Ea1.jpg). changed slider shape

01:11:000 (7) - I highly recommend replacing this slider with my alternative suggestion repeating twice so that it fits that electronic beep sound
like this (http://puu.sh/74EhU.jpg). fixed

01:21:000 (2,1) - I suggest making the tail end of this slider get blanketed by the slider above it like this by moving
the last point up a little (http://puu.sh/74FtM.jpg). Another alternative is to alter the curve more acutely so that it flows directly into the
next note like so (http://puu.sh/74Fxs.jpg). I don't think there is time for a middle ground with this slider when there are so many possibilities. fixed

01:24:600 (2) - I really feel that this section flows better if you flipped the curve of this slider around, it flows out of 1 better and into 3 better that your last choice, not just that, you are making a stack instead of an overlap on note 5 of the last combo (http://puu.sh/74FJD.jpg). fixed

01:25:000 (3) - I feel you should alter the curve of this slider so that the tail is blanketed perfectly by the fixed
next slider (http://puu.sh/74FMs.jpg).

01:28:000 (1) - New combo here and then a new combo on the 3rd note of the stream for the same reason as the same stream at the start. Rhythm, readability and phrasing (http://puu.sh/74FVa.jpg). fixed

02:05:800 (1,2,3) - Avoid a confusing compound time stack here, instead I highly recommend using my alternative to make a symmetric triangle pattern ending on the slider (http://puu.sh/74G4J.jpg). fixed

02:09:000 (1) - New combo here mid-stream to accentuate the start of a new timing phrase. removed NC

02:33:400 (3,4) - If anything, I suggest switching these notes positions around, flowier, more challenging pattern. fixed

02:35:400 (9) - No need for NC as the combo covers 2 timing phrases anyway. fixed

02:35:800 (1) - Instead, start it here at the start of the new phrase. fixed

I wish I had mapped this map, time for a bubble methinks.

Raiku wrote:

Quick re-check just to polish everything off. NO KUDOSU FOR THIS POST

[Insane]

I feel OD8 is more appropriate for this diff. I think that a song like this should produce more variation in the leaderboards and I feel like OD7 will tend to have a lot of 99%+ accs. Its up to you. changed to OD8 for now. The song itself isn't as hard as I'd hoped it to be, maybe this will help.

00:29:400 (1) - I feel this flows better when flipped to curve from the previous and in to the next note, anti flow doesn't fit this part in my opinion (http://puu.sh/75w0G.jpg). fixed

00:37:000 (7) - NC here for the sake of phrasing the start of the next time bar. Makes the stream more manageable. fixed

01:19:800 (2) - Remove hitsounds from this slider, sounds more even and spaced and there's nothing climactic here to accentuate. Having the 2 sliders before and after it with the double whistle is just fine. fixed

01:28:200 (7) - New combo here for the start of the next time bar making the stream more manageable as before. fixed

01:40:600 (7) - Add a whistle to this slider to fit in with the rhythm you created before and after. fixed

01:44:400 (1) - I think this section flows a whole lot better when you flip this slider round as its following the movement pattern of the doubles if you follow my suggestion (http://puu.sh/75wZ9.jpg). Angling it exactly as I have means that the tail of the slider will stack on note 4 of the next combo preventing an overlap. fixed

01:59:400 (1,2) - I wouldn't start the NC on 1, I'd start it on 2 as it makes the rhythm alteration easier to manage. fixed

02:08:600 (8) - I suggest not even NC'ing here as its pretty much the end of that phase and I felt it was welcome to extend the combo to that point.
fixed
02:48:200 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Possibly have a finish/whistle sound on 6, 10 and 14? this is pretty cool, fixed

Thanks again~

Kibbleru wrote:

ok.
cant believe i forgot to mod this

[Kibbleru's Easy]
This diff sucks and whoever mapped this should just uninstall osu and never play/map again

done^

[Normal]
00:15:400 (3,1) - awkward flow heree~ fixed
00:21:000 (2) - why is there just a random clap here? There is no clap here, I think you mean on the (4). Anyways I removed it now
00:24:600 (2,3) - don't really agree with stacking this this was changed when I fixed the flow above
00:36:200 (1) - ctrl g? and also this? 00:37:000 (2) wow. Kibbleru does it again (fixed)
01:11:000 (7) - move middle joint up 2 squares (better blanket) fixed
01:29:000 (3,4) - why don't u just stack the ends o-o owo I could've sworn they were stacked last time, fixed
01:30:600 (1,2) - for these, i'd just copy one and use ctrl + hj fixed
02:33:000 (1,2) - oh god the flow here, i'd ctrl + g one of them
02:40:200 (3,4) - doesn't flow very well but idk how to fix


00:43:400 (3,5) - how bout a blanket hm most of these below should be fine, I blanketed them according to the approach circles~
02:32:200 (4,1) - ^
02:37:000 (2,4) - ^

01:24:200 (2,3) - blanket could use some work
02:17:000 (4,5) - ^
02:19:000 (2,3) - ^
imperfect blankets just bother me lol. you might want to look at some of ur blankets ya ok


[Hard]
well i noticed you have ur grid turned to level 1 honestly I don't even use grid snap half the time so idk why it's on 1 :O
00:14:400 (2,3) - in all honesty these kind of blankets bother me so much so i just gotta point them out lmao fixed this one
00:15:200 (4,1) - ^ but i mean they should be fine. its just me lol
00:27:400 (3,3) - why not stack?? ok fine
02:09:800 (3,2) - make this distance equal to 02:10:200 (4,1) fixed
02:14:400 (5) - the second half of the slider looks ugly lol. try to make it the start of (6) not sure what you mean, but I made the second half more curvy so it blankets the start of (5)
02:41:800 (7,1) - overlap looks kinda bad yea this part was a bit tricky to fix, I just ended up spacing the slider closer to my triangle thing to the left
02:42:600 (1,3) - yayy u copied my pattern! (i think) I think I fixed this according to one of the first few mods (so that would mean you copied ME >:O !!!)


-All Most of these require u to do a bunch of changes to the surroundings but imma list them anyways-
00:21:000 (3) - ctrl g? then fix up the rest? I think it feels sort of awkward ctrl+g :/
00:33:800 (5) - ^ think this is fine
00:33:800 (5) - ^ with 00:40:200 (3) this is ok
00:43:400 (3) - ^ most of these types of changes would work well if it wasn't a blanket
00:45:000 (7) - ^ fixed
00:51:800 (4) - ^ fixed
01:10:000 (2,3) - ^ ?
01:18:200 (3) - ^ fixed
01:36:200 (7) - ^ fixed
02:30:600 (3) - ^ fixed

00:22:600 (1,2) - DIS BLANKET! LOOOOOOOOOOOOL ok fixed
00:25:400 (3,4) - ^ it's fine since I used approach circle to blanket
01:22:800 (2,3) - ^ fixed


[Insane]
00:13:800 (1,2) - why this overlap because I said so (fixed)
00:14:600 (4,5) - ^ fixed
01:17:000 (4,1) - ^ fixed and shortened slider by one repeat
01:49:000 (1,2) - this one just almost touches fixed
02:48:000 (5,6) - ^ fixed

00:50:000 (2) - i suggest u copy 00:49:400 (7) and ctrl + hj00:49:400 (7) -
01:09:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this star pattern better, for mine, i'd disable grid snap and distance snap00:49:400 (7) -
01:36:200 (1) - usually when people make sliders like this, they somehow blanket 2 circles/sliders. so i don't really see a point of having one like thins unless you really like it I did this to match the vocal
01:54:200 (1,1) - stack? fixed
02:47:800 (4,14) - ^ fixed
01:55:400 (5,1) - fix up blanket a little bit fixed
02:45:400 (2) - ^ just move middle joint down 2 squares fixed
02:31:000 (1) - this is really curved, don't see the point for making it so curved. fixed

01:35:000 (1,2) - just copy one and ctrl hj? fixed
02:44:200 (5,6) - ^ fixed

01:06:800 (2,3) - awkward flow should be better now
01:08:600 (3,4) - ^ angled (3) upwards
02:34:200 (2) - ^i suggest ctrl + g changed (1) and (2) a bit

01:41:200 (2,3) - again. blankets like this :< fixed o.e

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi M4M from your Queue~

[Kibbleru's Easy]
Kibbleruuu, hi~
00:38:600 (4,1) - 00:36:200 (1) - Is It ok not to follow default Distance Spacing on Easy diff? maybe you can keep consistent use 1.0 instead
01:10:600 (5,1) - Same as above i think its fine because its not like it's a jump, but i will change if more ppl tell me so
01:43:000 (6) - Delete that? then pull the break time like this, before: -> after:
00:51:800 (4,5) - Same as above i don't really see the point in doing this, but i will if others tell me
01:53:400 - and 01:54:100 - Useless green lines, delete? k
01:57:800 (3,4) - Maybe not stack will be better on Easy diff k
02:02:600 (1,2,3,4) - That notes sound weird, why no use 1/1 slider instead seems fine for me Oo, also adds some variety
02:31:400 (3,4,5,1,2) - Maybe you can make these notes more symetry like this

SPOILER

eh i changed a bit

That's all

1. I'm not sure about this, but you'd better make the widescreen support thing consistent through all the diffs. Easy diff has that thing, but others don't. Perhaps add widescreen support on all your diffs?
2. Kind of nazi stuff, but that Yasuo-P - Electric Angel (pkmnyab).osb is useless. To reduce the file-size of your map, remove it. (Unless you're going to make storyboard.)

1. 00:12:200 (1,2,3) - Make these three notes' distance consistent to create an equilateral triangle? Current spacing between both (1,2) and (2,3) are around 1.5x, but the spacing between (3,1) is only 1.2x. Perhaps you'll need to move (3) to somewhere if you agree with me.
2. 00:20:200 (1,2) - I don't see any reason about using two different speeds between these two sliders. The music there are quite same, so using two different velocities would be really weird. Highly recommend you to remove the slow-down green line to make 00:20:200 (1) - goes with 1.0 speed.
3. 00:29:800 (2) - You should really add a new combo here to show up the slider is much slower than previous slider 00:29:400 (1) -. And then, to emphasize the higher slider velocity of 00:29:400 (1) -, you can make a jump between 00:29:000 (3,1,2) -, that would be more like a "speed-up" thing.
4. 00:35:300 (4) - I don't really like the stream around this note, or I mean, I don't really understand why you placed stream in where the music has 1/2 sound strongly. Better to remove this note to separate 00:35:200 (3,5) - because the vocals there don't really match to each other.
5. 00:41:000 (4) - I've seen your rule of adding new combos, you add new combos at every downbeat. So you will probably need to add a new combo here to follow your rule, so the combo things won't be that strange and messy.
   Since there are many issues about new combos, I'll just put them all in a box.
   
   SPOILER

   00:40:200 (1) - remove new combo
   00:43:800 (1,2) - Swap new combos (see the downbeat)
   00:45:000 (1,3) - Swap new combos (same reason to ^)
   00:47:000 (1) - Remove new combo
   00:47:400 (5,1) - swap
   00:49:000 (3) - add new combo
   00:49:800 (1) - remove new combo
   00:50:600 (4) - add new combo
   All these points are just for following your new combos since it's a bit messy during the kiai time, perhaps you can re-do them by your self.
   There are some more issues about new combos at the second kiai (and the third), you should just check them all.)
6. 00:51:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Just a little suggestion, but you can increase the spacing between these objects because the slider velocity here is much faster than previous part. Take a look at the following example:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:24:600 (2,3) - The spacing between these two objects might be too little, perhaps to increase them?
8. 01:53:400 (2) - This speed up might be to sudden to the players, since the previous parts near this object are just slow. I'd like to suggest you to reduce the velocity of this slider if you really want to do speed-up.
9. 01:55:000 - The rhythm near here is a bit messy. First of all, I can hear a obviously clap-like sound at 01:55:000 - here, so it would be better to follow that sound by adding a reverse at 01:54:800 (3) -. The second thing, 01:55:100 (4) - is placed at the wrong beat. I think you want to follow the sound at 01:55:200 -, but you just make a little mistake, huh? So, move it 1/4 afterward.
10. 01:55:400 (5,1) - This might be a bit tricky and funny, but I won't suggest you to do that. The distance between 01:55:400 (5,1) - and 01:55:800 (1,2) - are the same, but the rhythm between them are just different. That would confuse the players because they'll think the rhythm between 01:55:400 (5,1) - is 1/4. It acts like 1/4, but actually it's only 1/2. So please, do something to this issue. My suggestion is to make 01:55:400 (5) - 1/4 longer (which ends at 01:55:700 -) and then the rhythm between them would be same.
11. 01:59:900 (1) - Starts at blue tick? No. Especially you were just leaving a little break before it, something starts at the blue tick might not be acceptable because it's hard to click while gameplaying. Add a 1/4 slider at 01:59:800 - and remove 01:59:900 (1) - might solve this issue.
12. 02:01:000 - Oh this. Please do not leave here as nothing. Both of us know the music here is kind of strong, and it shouldn't get ignored.
13. 02:13:800 (2,3,4) - Watch out the spacing things, it's not same among these three objects.
14. 02:21:800 - Add a note here and move the spinner 1/4 afterward? (Still end the spinner at the same time). I can hear a strong sound in the music here, and I think it should be emphasized by note, not only a spinner.
15. 02:48:200 (6) - I love that stream, but it must be too sudden to the players. Please add a new combo to remind the players that the stream-spacing increased here.
    After checking this diff, the main issues are the slider velocity changing. You change them really often, and sometimes it doesn't make any senses. I can't say all the sv changings are bad and not acceptable, but there are still many changes which are really awkward. This problem can be solved by looking for more mods I think.

Flask wrote:

Hello, mod request from my Queue o3o!
This song makes me remember my very very first guest diff. Nice song o/

[General]

1. I'm not sure about this, but you'd better make the widescreen support thing consistent through all the diffs. Easy diff has that thing, but others don't. Perhaps add widescreen support on all your diffs? added widescreen support on all diffs
2. Kind of nazi stuff, but that Yasuo-P - Electric Angel (pkmnyab).osb is useless. To reduce the file-size of your map, remove it. (Unless you're going to make storyboard.) deleted

[Insane]

1. 00:12:200 (1,2,3) - Make these three notes' distance consistent to create an equilateral triangle? Current spacing between both (1,2) and (2,3) are around 1.5x, but the spacing between (3,1) is only 1.2x. Perhaps you'll need to move (3) to somewhere if you agree with me. fixed, all 3 are 1.5x spacing
2. 00:20:200 (1,2) - I don't see any reason about using two different speeds between these two sliders. The music there are quite same, so using two different velocities would be really weird. Highly recommend you to remove the slow-down green line to make 00:20:200 (1) - goes with 1.0 speed.fixed, made 1.00x SV start at (1)
3. 00:29:800 (2) - You should really add a new combo here to show up the slider is much slower than previous slider 00:29:400 (1) -. And then, to emphasize the higher slider velocity of 00:29:400 (1) -, you can make a jump between 00:29:000 (3,1,2) -, that would be more like a "speed-up" thing.fixed
4. 00:35:300 (4) - I don't really like the stream around this note, or I mean, I don't really understand why you placed stream in where the music has 1/2 sound strongly. Better to remove this note to separate 00:35:200 (3,5) - because the vocals there don't really match to each other. fixed
5. 00:41:000 (4) - I've seen your rule of adding new combos, you add new combos at every downbeat. So you will probably need to add a new combo here to follow your rule, so the combo things won't be that strange and messy.
   Since there are many issues about new combos, I'll just put them all in a box.
   
   SPOILER

   00:40:200 (1) - remove new combo fixed all
   00:43:800 (1,2) - Swap new combos (see the downbeat)
   00:45:000 (1,3) - Swap new combos (same reason to ^)
   00:47:000 (1) - Remove new combo
   00:47:400 (5,1) - swap
   00:49:000 (3) - add new combo
   00:49:800 (1) - remove new combo
   00:50:600 (4) - add new combo
   All these points are just for following your new combos since it's a bit messy during the kiai time, perhaps you can re-do them by your self.
   There are some more issues about new combos at the second kiai (and the third), you should just check them all.)
6. 00:51:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Just a little suggestion, but you can increase the spacing between these objects because the slider velocity here is much faster than previous part. Take a look at the following example:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
7. 01:24:600 (2,3) - The spacing between these two objects might be too little, perhaps to increase them? fixed
8. 01:53:400 (2) - This speed up might be to sudden to the players, since the previous parts near this object are just slow. I'd like to suggest you to reduce the velocity of this slider if you really want to do speed-up. I removed the notes after the slider up until 01:54:000 (2) - and added more repeats to fix this
9. 01:55:000 - The rhythm near here is a bit messy. First of all, I can hear a obviously clap-like sound at 01:55:000 - here, so it would be better to follow that sound by adding a reverse at 01:54:800 (3) -. The second thing, 01:55:100 (4) - is placed at the wrong beat. I think you want to follow the sound at 01:55:200 -, but you just make a little mistake, huh? So, move it 1/4 afterward. fixed this part
10. 01:55:400 (5,1) - This might be a bit tricky and funny, but I won't suggest you to do that. The distance between 01:55:400 (5,1) - and 01:55:800 (1,2) - are the same, but the rhythm between them are just different. That would confuse the players because they'll think the rhythm between 01:55:400 (5,1) - is 1/4. It acts like 1/4, but actually it's only 1/2. So please, do something to this issue. My suggestion is to make 01:55:400 (5) - 1/4 longer (which ends at 01:55:700 -) and then the rhythm between them would be same. fixed
11. 01:59:900 (1) - Starts at blue tick? No. Especially you were just leaving a little break before it, something starts at the blue tick might not be acceptable because it's hard to click while gameplaying. Add a 1/4 slider at 01:59:800 - and remove 01:59:900 (1) - might solve this issue.
12. 02:01:000 - Oh this. Please do not leave here as nothing. Both of us know the music here is kind of strong, and it shouldn't get ignored. I replaced 3 notes with a slider, it should sound a lot better now
13. 02:13:800 (2,3,4) - Watch out the spacing things, it's not same among these three objects. fixed
14. 02:21:800 - Add a note here and move the spinner 1/4 afterward? (Still end the spinner at the same time). I can hear a strong sound in the music here, and I think it should be emphasized by note, not only a spinner. fixed
15. 02:48:200 (6) - I love that stream, but it must be too sudden to the players. Please add a new combo to remind the players that the stream-spacing increased here. fixed
    After checking this diff, the main issues are the slider velocity changing. You change them really often, and sometimes it doesn't make any senses. I can't say all the sv changings are bad and not acceptable, but there are still many changes which are really awkward. This problem can be solved by looking for more mods I think.

Well, I looked other diffs, the most issues are still the slider velocity things. I won't point them out one by one, so I'm just going to mod Insane difficulty. Sorry for inconvenience :C
Good luck!

Oracle wrote:

late mod is late. don't kill me

General
fine.

Normal
00:17:000 (2) - stack this properly(244,188) fixed
00:21:000 (2) - remove this clap? sounds quite out of place fixed, I usually have a skin on so I didn't notice the clap sound here
00:33:800 (3,4,5) - extremely tricky due to low AR, better try another pattern. http://puu.sh/7hKo6.jpg fixed
00:50:600 (1) - add finish added
01:21:000 (2) - make it like this? http://puu.sh/7hKv5.jpg
01:35:799 (4,5,1) - avoid such stack.. fixed
I have no idea why you love to make tricky stack on lower diff. better avoid these stack in Easy/Normal ._.

Hard
00:15:400 (1,2,1) - fix this spacing hm I used distance snap but the new timing point for SV change changed the distance snap, anyways fixed
00:16:200 (1,2,1) - ^ fixed
01:08:200 (2) - remove the clap on slider end fixed
01:14:600 (2) - unsnapped slider end fixed
01:22:600 (1,2) - stack this properly(check the coordinate) fixed
01:23:800 (1,2) - use constance spacing? not a good choice of jump here fixed
01:26:000 (6) - NC fixed fixed
01:47:800 (3,4) - move them closer(use 1.3x) fixed
02:36:200 (3) - i suggest you remove NC removed NC at 02:35:800 (1,2) - instead so that Kiai time could start on NC
02:48:200 - add a note with finish here and shorten the spinner http://puu.sh/7hLrb.jpg fixed

Insane
slider velocity is a bit low imo, those 0.75x slow downs are unnecessary
00:16:500 (4,5) - better not stack this fixed
00:19:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ fixed
00:20:200 (1) - remove NC swapped NC with stream
00:24:400 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:32:400 (1) - remove NC fixed
too much NC spam..not gonna point out for more. generally you put NC for every long white tick and use extra NC for slider speed change/spacing change in stream.
01:15:600 (4) - I can't hear any 1/6 here. wrong snap? make it 1/4 and shorten 1 repeat feels good to me. fixed
01:53:900 - missing a note here I put a slider here instead
02:12:100 (8,9) - fix the spacing here fixed
02:12:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's good to have a gradually decreasing spacing of these 3 triples. cool :O
I suggest 0.9x 0.7x and 0.5x for them.
02:21:900 (1) - add finish fixed
02:48:000 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no,this plays bad. Reduce the spacing plz.I hate such combo breaker especially at the very end of the map.(yes this cause downvotes,trust me) xD ok I reduced spacing to 0.9x, I think it should be okay now~

you are improving amazingly fast! compare this insane to your nanahira diff and you'll find out how much you improved!
good luck then.

AJeyB wrote:

Hi, here's a little mod.

insane

00:34:200 (1) - delete new combo
00:37:000 (1) - ^ same
00:39:400 (1) - ^
00:50:600 (1) - ^
01:17:800 (1) - ^
01:21:800 (1) - ^
01:25:400 (1) - ^
01:28:200 (1) - ^maybe
01:29:800 (1) - ^
01:41:800 (1) - ^
01:43:200 (1,1) - ^
01:49:000 (1) - ^
02:14:400 (1) - ^
02:17:800 (1) - ^
02:36:200 (1) - ^
02:39:400 (1) - ^
02:47:400 (1) - ^

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

NORMAL
AR = 4 or 5 increased AR by 1
Maybe also turn higher HP and OD because you have an easy difficulty as well
01:37:000 (1) - kinda random new combo, i think you can make 01:37:000 (1,1) a combo and 01:38:600 (2,3,4) another combo fixed
01:41:000 (2,5) - slight overlapping due to the slow AR, i think if you change AR this will be fine also changed arrangement of notes

HARD
00:16:200 (1) - i notice there is a different speed but i dont think this needs to be a new combo, especially since it and the one before are so short made 00:13:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - one combo and made SV change a short combo with the next note
00:22:600 (1) - ^ same as above
01:29:000 (1,2) - I think this should be the same space apart as 01:30:200 (2,3) fixed
01:36:800 (8,1) - new combo at (8) instead of (1) hm I like it how the new combo is on a note that is emphasized by the vocal, I feel it matches the music strongly. Thanks for the suggestion though
01:49:800 (1,2) - should be closer since its a 1/4 time I leave it like this to match the vocal and to create a slow, dragging on feeling, which is broken up by the jump. I know it breaks distance snap, but I feel it matches the music and is more fun to play this way

INSANE
00:33:000 (1,2,3) - unsnapped notes! oops, thanks for pointing that out, I probably wouldn't have noticed that when editing the map xD I think this is from when I removed some SV changes and I forgot to re-snap the notes
01:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^ fixed as well

That's all! Great mapping and fun song even though Len's eyes are the wrong color
Best of luck

1. Ok from what i see and play, insane looks good as of now. However..
2. 01:26:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this portion was abit weird imo. because you were following the vocal on 01:25:400 (1) - and you went on following the music immediately and the triplet was sort of mashed up between the music and the vocals. I would suggest changing it into something like this
   From 01:27:400 (1) - onwards it was fine, as the music was getting louder and clearer.
3. 02:01:800 (1) - Why not shorten this slider and put more notes?
   
   
   Thats about everything for insane. Goodjob.

1. 02:33:600 (3) -
2. 02:48:400 (1) - i would just use a slider. lol.
   
   Nice flow Good hard diff.

1. OD+1 HP+1 AR+1?
   
   Good.

Clyine wrote:

Ill mod

[Insane]

1. Ok from what i see and play, insane looks good as of now. However..
2. 01:26:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this portion was abit weird imo. because you were following the vocal on 01:25:400 (1) - and you went on following the music immediately and the triplet was sort of mashed up between the music and the vocals. I would suggest changing it into something like this alright, fixed
   From 01:27:400 (1) - onwards it was fine, as the music was getting louder and clearer.
3. 02:01:800 (1) - Why not shorten this slider and put more notes? fixed
   
   
   Thats about everything for insane. Goodjob.

[Hard]

1. 02:33:600 (3) - done
2. 02:48:400 (1) - i would just use a slider. lol. got rid of (1)(2)(3) and just made a longer spinner instead, I feel that having a spinner emphasizes the end more than having a slider
   
   Nice flow Good hard diff.

[Normal]

1. OD+1 HP+1 AR+1? since this was also suggested before, I added this in. AR +1 change feels pretty good
   
   Good.

I'm not really fond of Easy difficulties so i won't mod it. but it looks pretty good to me.
Star star

Luckino wrote:

So yeah.. from my queue owo

This already has quite a lot of mods, so Idk if there's much I can find - anyway, if it's not helpful at all, you obviously should not give kd
o3o
All suggestions

Normal

SPOILER

00:17:000 (5) - NC? therefor NC on 00:18:600 (1) as I also suggest to swap 00:19:400 (3,4) these two and start the next NC on the big white tick at 00:20:200, where the riff starts again, so this should be emphasized in my opinion, also the slider before matches vocal then swapped 3,4 and added NC
00:26:600 (1,2) - create blanket here? the reason I didn't have a blanket here before was so I could stack 00:25:800 (5,2) - , but now I see that there is no point stacking them since it's barely noticeable. I made it a blanket now, fixed
00:42:600 (1,2) - there look weird imo, maybe do them equally fixed
01:08:200 (2) - start NC here and remove at 01:07:800 (1)? at least you did it like this before... fixed
01:14:600 (2) - ^ huh I don't see the reason for this small combofixed
01:32:600 (4) - that one is slightly scratching the health bar :/curved it away to the left a bit
01:38:600 (1) - remove NC? fixed
01:55:000 (1) - ^fixed

you mix combos somehow and I don't know for what reason, anyway, rest seems just fine haha yea idk what happened

I think this is it, idk if it helps at all; good luck!

Karia wrote:

Hi, M4M

General

1. Delete the '.osb' file plz. done
2. Preview time is unsnapped. Re-snap to 38900 plz. resnapped to 39000
3. Check out the 'Widescreen Support' plz. unchecked
4. BG Size : Maybe 1152x648 1024x768? hm I'll see if I can do this without messing up the quality
5. Add the 'Soft-sliderside' for Easy diff? added

Normal

1. 00:33:800 (2) - Can't see the reverse-arrow cuz (1)'s hitskin. Rearrange plz. fixed
2. 01:44:200 (2,3) - How about this? fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
3. 02:10:600 (5) - NC for consistency.fixed
4. 02:17:000 (4) - ^fixed
5. 02:28:200 - How about end the Break Time at here?fixed, added spinner

Hard

1. 00:21:800 (5,6) - Swap them is better IMO. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:26:200 (5) - NC this or stack on (4) plz. Reading this time-gab is very hard because (2,3,4)'s DS are high them 1.0 stacked on (4)
3. 01:17:400 (1) - Delete NC and NC on 01:17:800 (2) - here. swapped NC
4. 01:50:600 (3) - not fit rhythm IMO. turned it into regular slider but didn't add note after
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:12:200 (5,1) - Swap the NC fixed
6. 02:13:800 (5) - NC fixed
7. 02:29:000 (5) - (288|284) for consistent DS. fixed
8. 02:31:400 (5) - How about straight slider like this? fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane

1. 00:32:400 (4) - 1/6 snap. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:51:800 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm. Fit with the music IMO. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:20:600 (1,2) - swap the NC fixed
4. 01:21:800 (4) - NC cuz 00:30:600 (1) - this has the NC. fixed
5. 01:25:400 (1) - remove the NC fixed
6. 01:43:200 (1) - Well, this need not NC IMO. fixed
7. 01:50:900 - add a note added note
8. 02:28:200 (1) - Delete spin and add the notes is better I think. Because Hard also has no spin here.
   Good diff :3 ok, mapped this part

Sorry for poor modding xD
GL~

1. tags suggetion:
   orebanana-P

1. 00:19:000 (2,3) - DS:1.0x is better for normal
2. 00:41:000 (3) - x:386 y:139
3. 00:47:400 (3) - stack on 00:49:800 (2) - (you cna do it because of DS1.0x~)
   

   284,204,47400,2,0,L|343:196,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:14:200 (5) - x:145 y:243
5. 01:15:800 (3,5,1) - stack isn't correct slightly
6. 01:23:400 (4) - x:212 y:147
7. 01:36:200 (4,1) - how about this for smoother cursor moving?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:44:000 (2) - I prefer the following
   
9. 01:54:200 (3,4) - I suggest to blanket for smoother cursor moving
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   364,196,114200,2,0,P|421:181|477:200,1,120
   420,306,115000,1,0,0:0:0:0:

10. 02:16:200 (2,3) - I prefer to exchange their position
11. 02:34:600 (3) - x:390 y:260
12. 02:35:400 (5) - x:208 y:181

1. 01:26:400 (3) - x:160 y:267 (blanket~)
2. 02:10:200 (4) - x:214 y:248
3. 02:11:400 (3) - x:308 y:119
4. 02:11:800 (4) - x:372 y:275
5. 02:28:400 (2,4) - how about exchanging their position?
6. 02:31:200 (4) - x:215 y:168
7. 02:31:400 (5) - x:287 y:226
8. 02:40:000 (2,4,6) - stack isn't correct slightly
9. 02:47:200 (5) - x:95 y:159

1. 00:13:800 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider in common with 00:14:600 (4) -
2. 00:18:800 (4) - x:175 y:81
3. 00:41:200 (2) - x:133 y:97
4. 00:43:400 (3,4) - I pefer the following
   
5. 00:51:800 (1,2) - how about making symmetric?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   195,258,51800,6,0,P|239:286|286:275,1,67.5000025749208
   341,286,52000,2,0,P|373:279|398:257,2,67.5000025749208

6. 01:11:800 (2) - x:229 y:115
7. 01:26:300 (3) - delete?
8. 02:00:100 (2) - I prefet 2 circles because of hard to find rhythm
9. 02:01:800 (1) - how about this ?
   
10. 02:36:000 (2) - x:268 y:184

1. 00:26:600- finish
2. 00:28:200 (3,1) - make DS 1.0x
3. 00:33:000- finish
4. 00:35:800- add a note
5. 00:38:600- finish
6. 00:52:200- ^
7. 01:29:000 (4,5) - difficult for beginner, imo. for example, how about this?
   
8. 01:37:000 (1,2,3,4) - conform DS to 1.0x
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   155,297,97000,6,0,P|159:239|202:198,1,120
   150,91,97800,2,0,P|208:95|249:138,1,120
   356,86,98600,2,0,P|352:144|309:185,1,120
   361,292,99400,2,2,P|303:288|262:245,1,120

9. 01:43:400- finish
10. 02:23:400 (1) - I suggest to move to x:256 y:192 for begenner because previous spinner is short relatively

RandomEffect wrote:

hello~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   orebanana-P added

[Normal]

1. 00:19:000 (2,3) - DS:1.0x is better for normal oops, not sure how that happened but I fixed it now
2. 00:41:000 (3) - x:386 y:139 fixed
3. 00:47:400 (3) - stack on 00:49:800 (2) - (you cna do it because of DS1.0x~) fixed
   

   284,204,47400,2,0,L|343:196,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:14:200 (5) - x:145 y:243 fixed
5. 01:15:800 (3,5,1) - stack isn't correct slightly fixed
6. 01:23:400 (4) - x:212 y:147 fixed
7. 01:36:200 (4,1) - how about this for smoother cursor moving? fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:44:000 (2) - I prefer the following fixed
   
9. 01:54:200 (3,4) - I suggest to blanket for smoother cursor moving fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   364,196,114200,2,0,P|421:181|477:200,1,120
   420,306,115000,1,0,0:0:0:0:

10. 02:16:200 (2,3) - I prefer to exchange their position fixed
11. 02:34:600 (3) - x:390 y:260 fixed
12. 02:35:400 (5) - x:208 y:181 fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:26:400 (3) - x:160 y:267 (blanket~) blanketed
2. 02:10:200 (4) - x:214 y:248 fixed
3. 02:11:400 (3) - x:308 y:119 fixed
4. 02:11:800 (4) - x:372 y:275 fixed
5. 02:28:400 (2,4) - how about exchanging their position? fixed
6. 02:31:200 (4) - x:215 y:168 fixed
7. 02:31:400 (5) - x:287 y:226 fixed
8. 02:40:000 (2,4,6) - stack isn't correct slightly fixed all
9. 02:47:200 (5) - x:95 y:159 fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:13:800 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider in common with 00:14:600 (4) - fixed
2. 00:18:800 (4) - x:175 y:81 fixed
3. 00:41:200 (2) - x:133 y:97 fixed
4. 00:43:400 (3,4) - I pefer the following this does sound better, fixed
   
5. 00:51:800 (1,2) - how about making symmetric? fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   195,258,51800,6,0,P|239:286|286:275,1,67.5000025749208
   341,286,52000,2,0,P|373:279|398:257,2,67.5000025749208

6. 01:11:800 (2) - x:229 y:115 fixed
7. 01:26:300 (3) - delete? deleted
8. 02:00:100 (2) - I prefet 2 circles because of hard to find rhythm sounds better now, fixed
9. 02:01:800 (1) - how about this ? this is a nice change, fixed
   
10. 02:36:000 (2) - x:268 y:184 fixed

That's my great favorite song and arrangement~
very, very good choice and mapping!!!
double star ~☆☆
~Good Luck~

1. Easy's Tag is different with others
2. 01:16:200 (1,1) - note comes out when spinning beginners can confused better fix this
3. 02:21:800 (1,1) - ^

1. 00:35:400 (4,1) - make these two's shape same will be clear
2. 00:49:000 (1,2) - umm.. i think this two's shape is little different right?
3. 01:43:000 (6) - move this to 236, 120 is better pattern maybe
4. 02:42:600 (1,2) - same reason as first one

1. 00:30:200 (2,3) - make same shape
2. 00:30:600 (3,1) - i don't recommend overlapping like this better change pattern
3. 00:37:400 (4) - how about move to 256, 204
4. 00:45:000 (7,1) - swap NC
5. 00:51:800 (4) - how about move to 332, 204
6. 01:17:400 (5) - straight one will be better
7. 02:12:200 (1,2,3) - make distance same
8. 02:41:800 (7,1) - same reason as 2nd one
9. 02:47:000 (4,5) - feels little empty. i recommend this beat
   SPOILER

   

Neta wrote:

Hello~ from my modding Queue

[Normal]

1. 00:35:400 (4,1) - make these two's shape same will be clear fixed
2. 00:49:000 (1,2) - umm.. i think this two's shape is little different right? made same shape
3. 01:43:000 (6) - move this to 236, 120 is better pattern maybe fixed
4. 02:42:600 (1,2) - same reason as first one I think it's better like this since the vocal is stronger on the second slider

[Hard]

1. 00:30:200 (2,3) - make same shape fixed
2. 00:30:600 (3,1) - i don't recommend overlapping like this better change pattern I think this is fine
3. 00:37:400 (4) - how about move to 256, 204 moved down a bit
4. 00:45:000 (7,1) - swap NC Ifeel that vocal is stronger on (1), so I will keep the NC there
5. 00:51:800 (4) - how about move to 332, 204 fixed
6. 01:17:400 (5) - straight one will be better fixed
7. 02:12:200 (1,2,3) - make distance same fixed
8. 02:41:800 (7,1) - same reason as 2nd one fixed
9. 02:47:000 (4,5) - feels little empty. i recommend this beat fixed
   SPOILER

   

GOOD LUCK~

zorefire wrote:

From Modding queue
[Easy]
00:39:400 (1) - too far away fixed
01:43:800 - why break could have still went on but it also feels like a break should be there I don't know alright I'll see if I can get Kibbleru to map this part
02:23:400 (1,2) 02:26:600 (1,2) - I feel like these could have been closer too far for easy It might look really far away but it's 1.0x distance snap. I have to keep spacing consistent so I can't make them closer
[Normal]
01:14:200 (5) - New combo could have went here but I think I know what you where trying to do
[Hard]

osu

like that? just a suggestion

the transition between the two sliders isn't smooth this way
[Insane]
00:31:000 (3) - Straighten out a little bit

osu

suggestion

done
Good map good luck ranking!

Sniqht wrote:

Hi ^^ M4M

[Normal]

00:16:800 - A note here added note
00:37:000 (2) - http://puu.sh/7LyHt.jpg fixed
01:33:800 (1,3) - Stack? stacked
01:43:400 (1) - So deep curve, maybe soften like this http://puu.sh/7LyQl.jpg drag the next slider to the left it so kinda blankets it? fixed
02:14:400 (2,3) - Looks ugly a bit >.< fixed
The rest looks

[Hard]

00:16:600 - 00:16:800 - Clap I'm actually doing a complete hitsound re-do for the whole mapset right now ouo
00:22:600 (1) - 00:23:200 (1) - Clap
00:27:400 - Clap or whistle for these beats?
00:46:600 (3) - Drag this up a bit so head and tail wont touch each other fixed
00:51:800 (4) - x:357 y:211fixed
01:22:600 (1,2,3) - Stack? hm I think it's better if I unstack all of them
01:37:800 (3) - Ctrl + G? this is intentional to match the vocal dragging out

[Insane]

Suddenly hitsound changes, lol \o/

00:35:400 (4) - Ctrl H+J+G again fixed
00:39:400 (1,2,4,5) - Use same distance for these 2 patterns imo, one has jump for 2 and other doesn't have jump for 5 fixed
00:51:200 (1,2) - Pretty confusing, it look me a while to notice that 2 there lol fixed
00:52:200 (11) - NC fixed
01:19:400 (1) - Ctrl H+J this fixed in my own way
01:19:400 (1) - Same whistle suggestion i did before for this part
01:19:400 (1) - Normal whistle for that weird sound
02:21:000 (4,5) - Blanket this better imo didn't want it as a full blanket, but I fixed it up a bit
02:36:200 - Your rythm style changes here, is it collab or what? It suddenly sounded different than other 2 kiais, but well it's nice to have some variety in the rhythms
02:49:000 (9) - NC and finish fixed

Good lucks

Sniqht wrote:

Hi ^^ M4M

[Kibbleru's Easy]

00:25:000 (4,1) - Would look better if they didn't touch fixed if i don't say anything
00:23:000 - Whistle
00:24:200 (3,4) - Maybe blanket these i cant blanket it without it overlapping with (1)
00:33:000 (1,2) - Ugly shape after those perfect curved sliders imo
00:47:400 (3,1) - Looks uuuglyy sorry ._.
00:52:200 (5) - NC here
01:05:000 (1,3) - Blanket these?
01:43:000 (5) - Maybe NC here
01:56:600 - 02:02:600 - 02:05:800 - 02:06:600 - Maybe normal whistle on slider-slide? To catch the sound behind
02:35:000 (5,2) - Stack?
02:41:000 (3) - Ctrl + H and Ctrl + J like this http://puu.sh/7LyAa.jpg
02:47:400 (4,5) - Blanket this better ><

Good lucks

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Kagamine Rin & LenElectricAngel .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39000
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12207,13807,13899,32607,65007,71407,77807,84207,90607,103407,116207,129007,143407,148207,149800,156207,162507,169007
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Angel
TitleUnicode:えれくとりっく・えんじぇぅ
Artist:Giga-P
ArtistUnicode:ギガP
Creator:pkmnyab
Version:Kibbleru's Easy
Source:
Tags:Kagamine Rin Len Vocaloid Kibbleru Yasuo-P Orebanana-P
BeatmapID:367011
BeatmapSetID:146794

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,52400,63560
2,103600,114760
2,129200,139560
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1000,400,4,2,1,70,1,0
10600,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
12600,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
39400,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
52200,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
90600,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
103400,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
156200,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
169000,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 252,116,101
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 252,209,65
Combo4 : 236,57,53

[HitObjects]
256,192,10600,12,4,12200,0:0:0:0:
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284,216,15000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,275,15400,2,0,P|404:217|391:160,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,216,16600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,248,17000,6,0,P|112:232|64:188,2,120
284,216,18200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,18600,2,0,B|460:148|516:188,2,120
276,192,19800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,20200,6,0,L|176:136,1,120
264,52,21000,2,0,P|348:40|392:64,1,120
420,164,21800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,164,22200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,22600,2,0,P|256:281|315:279,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,184,23400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,23800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,156,24200,2,0,B|220:152|220:152|192:164|168:148|168:148|140:160|116:152,1,120
16,204,25000,2,0,P|44:268|108:296,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,268,25800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,28,26600,6,0,P|113:87|109:207,1,240,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,156,27800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,28200,2,2,P|328:232|204:284,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,60,29800,6,0,P|216:44|288:64,2,120
212,160,31000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,276,31400,2,0,P|120:240|96:192,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,76,33000,6,0,B|348:108|392:108|392:108|412:136,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,252,33800,2,0,B|348:272|322:308|322:308|288:312,1,120
176,280,34600,2,0,B|164:224|175:159,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,48,35400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,148,35800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,36200,6,0,P|392:124|364:56,1,120
252,60,37000,2,0,L|176:60,2,60
216,176,37800,2,0,L|160:282,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,39400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
424,368,39800,2,0,P|360:336|328:272,1,120
288,188,40600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,41000,2,0,B|157:151|157:151|75:158|41:222|38:266,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,352,42200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,42600,6,0,P|254:225|261:177,1,120
380,180,43400,2,0,P|388:268|420:304,1,120
496,212,44200,2,0,P|488:124|344:64,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,45800,6,0,L|116:316,2,120
256,132,47000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,47400,2,2,P|376:12|440:36,2,120
256,132,48600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,252,49000,6,0,P|348:216|376:96,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,50200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,56,50600,2,0,P|204:24|292:20,2,120
128,168,51800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,52200,5,4,0:0:0:0:
424,48,65000,6,0,L|328:140,1,120
228,80,65800,2,0,P|180:100|144:180,1,120
260,196,66600,2,2,P|324:232|388:220,2,120
52,68,68200,6,0,P|64:208|144:248,1,240
156,128,69400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,69800,2,0,P|332:48|384:68,1,120
452,144,70600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,368,71400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,260,71800,2,0,P|380:192|332:164,1,120
292,276,72600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,244,73000,2,0,P|152:120|240:44,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,192,74600,6,0,P|348:156|292:152,1,120
416,92,75400,2,0,P|448:108|480:134,2,60,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,68,76200,2,0,P|252:92|228:164,1,120
300,244,77000,2,0,P|228:264|168:260,1,120
116,164,77800,6,0,P|68:120|60:60,2,120
236,156,79000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,160,79400,2,2,P|400:198|413:255,2,120
240,192,80600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,300,81000,6,0,P|148:268|124:188,1,120
160,92,81800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,32,82200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,0,82600,2,0,P|364:112|248:160,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,308,84200,6,0,P|412:260|357:224,1,120
304,124,85000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,85400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,330,85800,2,0,P|129:285|116:228,2,120
280,288,87000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,87400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,184,87800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,292,88200,2,0,L|500:348,2,60
348,288,89000,2,0,L|284:240,1,60
176,120,89800,2,0,P|128:188|128:248,1,120
16,176,90600,6,0,P|8:92|32:44,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,28,91400,2,0,P|228:40|260:64,1,120
344,128,92200,2,2,P|396:160|464:156,2,120
224,144,93400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,93800,6,0,P|160:244|216:256,1,120
312,212,94600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,160,95000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,52,95400,2,0,B|416:28|360:56|360:56|284:96|236:64,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,276,97000,6,0,P|144:208|192:184,1,120
200,68,97800,2,0,P|264:92|292:140,1,120
408,148,98600,2,0,P|384:216|336:240,1,120
324,356,99400,2,0,P|272:336|232:284,1,120
212,168,100200,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,100600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,64,101000,2,0,P|264:72|304:108,1,120
208,180,101800,2,2,L|296:272,2,120
96,132,103000,6,0,P|92:200|120:252,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,116200,5,4,0:0:0:0:
364,196,116600,2,0,P|416:168|464:112,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,117800,2,0,P|204:164|176:228,1,120
204,332,118600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,292,119400,6,0,L|496:164,1,120
436,76,120200,2,0,L|387:185,1,120
304,272,121000,2,2,L|308:336,2,60
204,208,121800,2,2,L|144:252,2,60
252,96,122600,6,0,P|308:56|368:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,4,123400,2,0,P|471:63|453:120,1,120
436,240,124200,2,0,P|384:216|342:169,1,120
252,92,125000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,125400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,232,125800,6,0,P|124:312|160:340,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,336,126600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,236,127000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,328,127400,2,0,P|385:128|216:238,1,480,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141000,12,0,142600,0:0:0:0:
352,168,143400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,80,144200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,312,145000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,348,145400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,264,145800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,28,146600,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,60,147400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,148200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,336,148600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,280,149000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,128,149800,6,0,P|452:88|420:36,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,48,150600,2,0,P|312:116|292:172,1,120
192,104,151400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,20,151800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,152200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,64,153000,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,180,153400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,153800,2,0,P|412:284|396:340,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,284,154600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,240,155000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,360,155400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,160,156200,6,0,P|144:136|184:108,1,120
180,240,157000,2,0,P|248:288|268:336,1,120
320,212,157800,2,0,P|312:156|336:92,1,120
428,172,158600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,76,159000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,40,159400,6,0,P|200:204|232:288,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,284,160600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,172,161000,2,2,P|97:125|117:69,2,120
100,284,162200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,317,162600,6,0,L|280:216,1,120
400,220,163400,2,0,L|336:321,1,120
280,216,164200,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,164600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,156,165000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,224,165400,6,0,P|268:292|272:328,1,120
152,336,166200,2,0,P|84:268|80:232,1,120
80,128,167000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,167400,2,0,P|268:88|316:104,1,120
428,80,168200,2,0,P|396:184|260:208,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

FlawlessTea wrote:

Hi there. noob mod

[Normal]
00:23:000 (6,1) - blanket can be better looks fine to me, maybe I changed it earlier, not sure
00:27:401 (2,4) - stack properly ? fixed

[Hard]
00:30:200 (2,3) - make these the same slider? rotated 180 degrees fixed
01:05:000 - hitsounds? nevermind
02:36:600 (2,3) - (subtle) 2 should be made smoother to be parallel with 3 fixed
02:41:800 (7) - smoother wave ? http://puu.sh/7LOfP.jpg fixed
02:45:800 (1) - make blanket with 02:45:600 (8) ? fixed

[Insane]
00:13:400 (4,1) - blanket fixed
00:18:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - star pattern can be made cleaner: http://puu.sh/7LQ6a.jpg fixed

SPOILER

264,308,18200,5,0,0:0:0:0:
177,106,18400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,318,18600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,174,18800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,194,19000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,308,19200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,106,19400,2,0,L|261:106,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:32:600 (8,2) - stack? not sure if this was intentional also 02:33:200 (2,5) should blanket fixed

good luck ~

EDIT: oh, didn't realize there was GD and Kibbleru didn't apply the previous mod yet. sorry sorry ;w; there is one overlapped mod at 00:47:400 which was probably already fixed

Teru21 wrote:

Don't kudosu this ;; I already get from the previous one

so yay ;; I come again for recheck .w.)/ do I sound like a bat? =A= ;; I'm not ;; I'll just take a look at the hitsound again anw I miss some stuff on last irc mod ;; I thought you were a BAT and you came to save me \o/

[General]
02:29:800 - this part should be kiai ._. hmm ok
the white combo color ;A; I kind of never like to use real white combo color which is 255/255/255 ;; try.. this one .w.)b https://www.dropbox.com/s/cmg6pqhmvxnv0 ... .11.16.png almost white. but its actually cream >w< well this looks better than white

[Insane]
woops I lied ;; I come here to mod you liar :'(
00:24:400 - add whistle to the first 2 notes (slider head with a reverse) :3 give a sweet sound done
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the stream. it'll be more viable if you break the stream. 00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,1) - try to reangle this to 30degree and place it with the same distance like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465164 I move the (2) abit so you can see there is polygonal pattern with (2,3,4) done
00:28:200 (1) - stack to 00:27:200 (2) - ? tidierdone
00:28:600 (2) - copy paste from 00:28:200 (1) - and ctrl+h and ctrl+j . to make it tidier and accurate reflection. done
00:29:000 (3,4) - ^ done
00:29:400 (4,1) - this suppose to reflect perfectly. done
00:33:000 - add finish here done
00:34:200 - you miss the whistle here added
00:36:500 (2,3) - maybe unstack this? ;; play better I guess
-reffrain-
some Normal sampleset with soft addition are missing ;; check again .w. ;; also the whistle pattern was (W W WWW) means first-third white tick , first-second-third white tick.

SPOILER

01:05:800 (3) - idk what you are thinking about. but this doesnt look right. delete the 4th point of the slider point (simply click your slider and right click at a point to delete them) ;; shall look better now http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465196 (I move the 5th slider point <after delete the 4th point> / 6th slider point <before delete the 4th point> abit so it'll look more symmetric~) done
01:07:400 (4) - you may want to try this out http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465206 :3 wiggwie wigglewiggle
01:09:000 (4) - symmetric more (third slider point move to left 2 ~ 3 grid) :3 sorry being too nazi done
01:11:000 - forgot to tell you lower the volume a bit ;; will give people kind of heart attack wwwww 50% is fine :3 LOL okok
01:11:400 - add finish ;----; done
01:19:400 (1) - ctrl+G ;; flow better. http://i.cubeupload.com/loCyuF.jpg done
01:20:600 (4) - ctrl+> and x412 y156..? and ctrl+G this 01:21:000 (1) - ;; move and symmetric a bit ;; and I think it'll flow better fixed in own way
01:23:800 (5) - I somehow find this missplace.. doesn't look too good... if you could find some way to make it look greater... moved it up more
01:43:400 - add finish. normal or soft. both great done
01:46:600 (1,2) - try to mirror this. on irc ;; I asked you to reflect it. but It'll still be even better if you mirror it. something like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465226 done
01:49:800 (1) - stack properly with 01:49:000 (5) - done
01:56:200 - add finish. normal or soft. both great. also I can't really find the clap sound here. place it on the second and fourth white tick :OO ;;; done
02:01:800 (1) - try to. make this linear or curved in the other way. because of the beeping sound made it straight
02:02:600 (1) - ^ and make a lil angle at the slider's tail. done
02:09:000 - add finish. normal or soft. both great done
02:15:000 (7) - resnap. end it at the 1/4 tick done, but I think you told me to end it on a 1/6 tick or something in IRC i forgot xD
02:21:400 (5) - maybe -30degree and re-place it again ._. ;; because this 02:20:600 (3,4) - -30degree ;; sorry again for the naziness done
02:29:800 - still add clap at the fourth tick. to make it different from the second part of the last refrain ( 02:36:200 - ) ;; don't put whistle on the first part of the last refrain. :3 there ;; difference XD done \o/

[Hard]
AR+1 ;; too much note on the screen if its AR7 ;w; done, but maybe it will be too hard for hard difficulty
00:12:200 (1) - it'll be better if you just use 3 circles :3 ;; spinner doesn't give any sound effect that fit the drum ;___; XD done
00:17:000 (1) - stack to 00:16:000 (6) - to make it tidier done
00:26:200 (1) - NC? for anti jump well there is already another NC right after if I put a NC here, it might look weird :S
00:30:600 - missing clap hitsound done
00:32:600 (5,1) - try to symmetric this ;A; ok ;w;
00:35:400 (3,1) - stack pls. done
00:36:200 (1,3,4) - try to create polygonal pattern well...00:36:600 (2,4) - kind of blanket each other with the slider bodies I guess, and I already stacked the thing before so I think it should be fine .w.''
00:37:900 (1) - why no one complain about this. it suppose to be ended 00:38:600 - ;; your hitsound follows the drum after all. add clap too haha I think nobody complained because otherwise the spinner would be a little short, but I guess that's fine as long as it matches music (the spinner isn't that short anyways)
00:39:400 - add finish done
00:42:600 (1,3) - doesn't look great to me. try to symmetric it properly done
00:49:800 (3,4) - the sudden 1/4 ;; I miss this part ;-----; how about 1/1 slider with 1/2 circle? ;; follows the vocal I think this is fine
00:51:800 - clap hitsound? done
01:11:000 - same as insane. done
01:11:400 - finish too. err ;; change the other too that I mention on insane. done
01:22:200 (4,5,1,2) - I can't really understand this pattern. fixed it a bit (stacked (4,5) and placed (1) in line with (2)
01:26:400 (6,8,9) - polygonal pls. fixed
01:30:200 (2,3) - addition drum and add whistle done
01:46:600 (1,2) - this looks gorgeous actually. try to make the spacing closer. and people can see the pattern and feel the slur(in music world means umm ;; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slur_(music) *runs*) I play piano so I know what this means! >8D
01:49:800 (1,2) - curve this a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit done
01:55:400 - triplet. 01:55:800 - triplet. 01:56:200 - circle? :OO done
02:09:000 - the epicness part ;; I kind of feel it'll be great if you can make antijumps in this part. something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465300 ;; just suggestion tho hmm when I think of something cool later I'll add it in
02:29:800 (1,2,3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465309 ;A; ;A; ok
02:34:200 (5,1,2) - polygonal ;A; fix spacing after that done

[Normal]
00:12:200 (1) - umm ;; same as the other diff ;; avoid using spinner here. just try a circle with 1/1 slider ;; done
00:23:400 (1) - nazi ;; 1 grid down ;; symmetric ;w; done
00:32:600 (5) - stack on top of (1) ? to make the viable better done
00:37:800 (1) - same as hard. if you think its too short. then use slider instead of spinner. made 1/1 repeat slider
00:49:800 (2) - put this on the top part ;; or upper part ;; just don't stack it with 00:48:200 (4) - done
01:07:400 (5,6) - change this into 3/4 slider. (6)'s rhythm is out of place. it won't be hard if you turn this into 3/4 slider. because you click the slider head instead of the tail right. :3 done
01:19:400 (3,4,5,1) - it'll look better if you do the (5,1)'s spacing same as (3,4) done
01:38:600 (3,4,5) - polygon..... ?
01:41:000 (3,5) - symmetric.......... ok I made it a triangle
01:48:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - ;; do (3,4)'s spacing same as (1,2)'s. just flip here and there. (3,4,5) polygon or make it square. done
02:15:000 (3) - tilt it a bit. :3 perfect vertical doesn't really looks great at all. there;; is what I usually called art. XD done
02:28:200 (1) - -1/2 beat. :O follow the bgm. it's like this because otherwise spinner would be too short
02:34:600 (3,4,5,6,1) - y u no star or pentagon I need to keep it 1.0x distance snap ;_;
~uhh there are stuff i don't wanna mention ;; or you would think that I ask you to remap ;____; now I am genuinely concerned that there is something wrong with this difficulty ;w;

Thats it .w.)/

GoodLuck~ .w.)/ take my star ;; I can see the potential already ww X')

sheela901 wrote:

Hey, M4M request.

[Normal]
00:42:600 (1) - Add a point to x:184 y:296 so it could be a curve slider? alright, fixed
00:49:800 (2) - It could have the same slider pattern as 00:49:000 (1) . Copy-paste it, and flip it vertically and horizontally, and Ctrl+G, and move it to x:264 y:188. fixed
01:37:000 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this pattern can be in a normal difficulty. Try to play with 01:37:800 (2) .

SPOILER

rearranged (2)
01:41:800 (4) - Add a new combo. fixed

[Hard]
00:37:900 (1) - In the AiBat, it says that the length of this spinner is less 750 ms. Convert it into a slider. I like the spinner here to transition into kiai time. Instead I shortened 00:37:400 (4) - and extended the spinner, then moved it back to 00:37:400 (4) - . Spinner is a bit longer now.
01:05:800 (3) - This is nazi, but move the last point to x:184 y:128, so it could make a perfect blanket. changed
01:22:800 (2) - Add a point to x:188 y:160, so it could have a better flow. fixed

[Insane]
00:26:266 (2,3,5) - I feel that these notes don't land on a beat of the music, which is called overmapped hm I'm not quite sure how I feel about this...I'll keep this in mind and see what other people think about this section then take action accordingly, thanks for the heads-up
00:34:800 (1) - Move this to x:492 y:216. It confuse the players. fixed in own way
01:06:400 (4) - Move this to x:408 y:344. alright
02:04:600 (2) - Move it to x:212 y:220, or to another place. moved it to the right a little, I like the placement as of now as the jump between (2) and (3) matches the music pretty well in my opinion

So, that's it. Good Luck on ranking this map. Feel free to ask me questions.

moshiri wrote:

Title : えれくとりっく・えんじぇる the last character in the title should actually be ぅ

[Normal]
01:29:800 (4) - I think this slider protruded, may bring it near to center. I see what you mean, I moved 01:29:000 (3,4) - down a bit, it should be ok now

(๓´罒`๓)