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Kuraki Mai - Secret of my heart

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wcx19911123
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Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
[Easy]
difficulty setting有点高，建议HD或者OD-1

[Shore's Normal]
00:36:124 (2,3) - they can blanket better
you used claps very well, but whsitles sound not that good in this diff imo. don't spam whistles or have no whistles in a long part, make them continuous then the hitsounds can be better

[Hard]
没啥大问题，不过改进空间还是蛮大的，排列可以多元化点，用点对称，blanket之类的，音效问题跟Normal有点像

[jyc's Insane]
00:33:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern is really confusing: 1. you used triangle shape, but the jump direction changed after 4th notes(if the direction changed after 3rd note, then it works much better) 2. the newcombo is changed after 5th notes.. not the 3rd(the edges number of the triangle) or the 4th(the note before jump direction changing) note. I suggest you to do the same things as 00:10:722 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , this part is much easier to read
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Easy]
[Shore's Normal]
00:36:124 (2,3) - they can blanket better
you used claps very well, but whsitles sound not that good in this diff imo. don't spam whistles or have no whistles in a long part, make them continuous then the hitsounds can be better Remove some whsitles,and make some blanket better
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Last edited by lkx_Shore , edited 1 time in total.
Atrue
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Topic Starter
Atrue

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Easy]
difficulty setting有点高，建议HD或者OD-1 ok，od-1

[Hard]
没啥大问题，不过改进空间还是蛮大的，排列可以多元化点，用点对称，blanket之类的，音效问题跟Normal有点像 即使这么说也是觉得音效要改也得大幅度改whistle。。对于我个人而言还是比较喜欢这种whistle的感觉，所以会考虑……排列方面其实我也是觉得可能还有提高空间，但是也是如果要改就要整体remap，可能会考虑
Thx for modding！
所以我能有张你的票么？ :)

Edit: binggan: fixed
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
From my test playing queue~

Replay : http://puu.sh/7lZxl.osr

You created very unique jump patterns that fit the song very well. I am fun with this so much. Good job!
There are some jumps that I feel uncomfortable though, for example 00:50:061 (6,7,8) - as the way taking off from 00:49:531 (5) - and landing a jump on 00:50:591 (9) - feel a bit uncomfortable. They fit music regardless but I would suggest you do this way.
SPOILER
Maybe adding NCs like I did on this screenshot is ok.
00:29:244 (6,1) - New combo wise for this stack feels not right. I would remove NC 00:29:421 (1) - and add NC on 00:29:774 (8) - instead. I look it at large scale for this map and I feel this new combo is a bit out of place.

Hard
00:15:308 (1,2,3,4) - this is strange. You use around 1.15x spacing on 00:13:191 (2,3,4) - and then you shift to 2.11 without any signs in music which I think it could be confusing to some people. I suggest you reduce them as you do in 00:13:720 (3,4) -

Shore's Normal
00:57:999 (1) - you may adjust spacing for this a bit to make it look like the others. => http://puu.sh/7lZTv.jpg
01:18:110 (3) - move right a bit to x:172 y:72

All great, you can call me for a bubble after these are adjusted.~
Atrue
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Atrue
@Frostmourne
I'll check your mod this night after my whole day class.. Thank you in advance!
lkx_Shore
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Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

Frostmourne wrote:

From my test playing queue~
Shore's Normal
00:57:999 (1) - you may adjust spacing for this a bit to make it look like the others. => http://puu.sh/7lZTv.jpg
01:18:110 (3) - move right a bit to x:172 y:72

All great, you can call me for a bubble after these are adjusted.~
all fix,thx for mod ^^

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200,312,58705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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357,149,61174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Atrue
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Frostmourne wrote:

From my test playing queue~ Hi~

Replay : http://puu.sh/7lZxl.osr Thx!

You created very unique jump patterns that fit the song very well. I am fun with this so much. Good job!
There are some jumps that I feel uncomfortable though, for example 00:50:061 (6,7,8) - as the way taking off from 00:49:531 (5) - and landing a jump on 00:50:591 (9) - feel a bit uncomfortable. They fit music regardless but I would suggest you do this way.
SPOILER
Maybe adding NCs like I did on this screenshot is ok.
00:29:244 (6,1) - New combo wise for this stack feels not right. I would remove NC 00:29:421 (1) - and add NC on 00:29:774 (8) - instead. I look it at large scale for this map and I feel this new combo is a bit out of place.

@jyc: Fixed all, thanks for mod!

Hard
00:15:308 (1,2,3,4) - this is strange. You use around 1.15x spacing on 00:13:191 (2,3,4) - and then you shift to 2.11 without any signs in music which I think it could be confusing to some people. I suggest you reduce them as you do in 00:13:720 (3,4) -

fixed,thanks for modding!

All great, you can call me for a bubble after these are adjusted.~
Thanks again for the mod! :)
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
Good luck for your first map!

Sorry for late response in pm.
dkun
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[General]
Am I late??! Sorry for forgetting about this map. :P
I do love the song/set, so good job on that!

Why not take Insane's custom combo colors throughout the set?
TR2 all diffs, maybe?

[jyc's Insane]
What if this followed the kiai sections of Hard rather than just shooting fountains three times for the sake of consistency?
Atrue
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Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck for your first map!

Sorry for late response in pm.
Thank you!
Atrue
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dkun wrote:

[General]
Am I late??! Sorry for forgetting about this map. :P
I do love the song/set, so good job on that!

Why not take Insane's custom combo colors throughout the set?
TR2 all diffs, maybe?

[jyc's Insane]
What if this followed the kiai sections of Hard rather than just shooting fountains three times for the sake of consistency?
Fixed all and Thank you!
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Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ
Atrue
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dkun wrote:

Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ
I love you~ Thanks!! :)
Lanturn
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omg.. Detective conan map (From Kuraki Mai) that actually uses a detective conan background!

Congrats on first!
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Lanturn wrote:

omg.. Detective conan map (From Kuraki Mai) that actually uses a detective conan background!

Congrats on first!
Thank you~ :)
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gratz！
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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

gratz！
谢啦
Maboyu
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恭喜RANK>W<
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AliomLoung wrote:

恭喜RANK>W<
谢谢萌鱼～
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恭喜黄书脱新，今后继续努力~
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Fycho wrote:

恭喜黄书脱新，今后继续努力~
谢谢老fycho的支持哈～+u+u :)
Xiaolin
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Gratz~ <3
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Lapis Aoki wrote:

Gratz~ <3
lol Thank you～
BeatofIke
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Congratulations for 1st ranked map! :D
Sapphiire_old_1
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Gratz !! :)
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@Ike @SoG Tava Thank you!
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dkun wrote:

Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ
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Oracle wrote:

dkun wrote:

Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ
:D
Awaken
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rank congratz
看来你是时候上狗了
bastien
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I love you thanks .
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bastien wrote:

I love you thanks .
Thank you~
@awaken 你要不撞我我估计还rank不了…不撞没动力
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Awaken wrote:

rank congratz
看来你是时候上狗了
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lkx_Shore wrote:

Awaken wrote:

rank congratz
看来你是时候上狗了
别闹
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Awaken wrote:

rank congratz
看来你是时候上狗了
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EmingK wrote:

Awaken wrote:

rank congratz
看来你是时候上狗了
你快rank啊
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Atrue wrote:

你快rank啊
想当年At还是我带进坑的呢
柑橘我这辈子没法rank图 sad
Atrue
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EmingK wrote:

Atrue wrote:

你快rank啊
想当年At还是我带进坑的呢
柑橘我这辈子没法rank图 sad
你图做起来比我好太多，rank起来肯定快啊
kamisamaaa
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kamisamaaa
黄书终于继神modder之后也变成神麻婆了
看来上狗不远了=L=
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史上1ST最快的泡RANK
Atrue
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kamisamaaa wrote:

黄书终于继神modder之后也变成神麻婆了
看来上狗不远了=L=
我是渣麻婆。。
@sjoy thanks~ 确实有点出乎我的意料
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