Irie Miyuki wrote:

Hi from qq pm Hi~

妈的又在01下面 拖人req真是天罚 233

recommend to fix
nazi

[General]
是我的设置问题么 Insane和其他diff combo color不一样?

[Hard]
00:01:196 (1,2,3) - 一个轻微强迫症患者看到ds不一样有点忍不住 Fixed
00:20:247 (5,1) - 是不是没叠好啊 Fixed
好下面是我真正想说的了
00:54:824 (1) - 从这里开始你就没再用过normal的sampleset 说实在的我略不解 因为kiai部分才该是音乐的重点 前面你都用了normal 为什么kiai听上去就这么没有打击感 听起来轻飘飘的呢/w\ 正是因为在副歌部分bgm所用的成分开始丰富起来为了衬托人声 你才更应该用音效来烘托节奏感呀( 好几个人这么说了，看来我得试试改了。。不过先看看，我看能改成吧，其实之前没有改的原因是这样，第一我很想用那种whistle，而这种whistle好像和Nhit不太搭，改的话我会首选把前边改成normal
01:08:583 (5,2) - 呃 叠一下? 饶了我吧0.01间距，我手残
01:10:348 (3) - ^ 神啊不知道这回叠好了没
01:12:464 (2,3) - 个人是觉得滑条部分挡着后面滑条尾不好看 寿司熊 完了我审美真的有问题
01:18:815 (1) - 这个还是用soft的sampleset听起来好些(?) 好

[lkx] 拉克修偶感风寒，代他改下咯~
00:05:076 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这几个用的是1.1x的ds 前后都是1.0x 统一一下? AImod 没说，我觉得就先不改了。。怕弄坏了美观
00:09:663 (6) - NC?
00:15:308 (5) - ^
00:16:014 (6) - DS
00:19:189 (2,4) - ^
00:20:953 (6) - ^ , 还有NC 哎呀NC不说了
00:24:834 (2) - ^
00:26:598 (4) - 1.07x
00:27:657 (5,6,7) - 做个blanket? 这地方也是不好改。。。容易overlap
00:47:414 (2) - DS
00:48:826 (3) - ^
。。。懒得指了 怎么说呢 感觉做的非常不精细。。毕竟是个Normal吧 DS换来换去 一组combo都排到10了orz 哎 也可能是我要求太多了orz
还有啊像这种00:08:252 (3,4,5,6) - 刚1/4(1/2)叠过又1/2(1/1)叠是不是不太好啊 我Normal都不敢这么用 以前被人说过 真心不敢一下子改这么多。。如果泡的时候真的挑这里那就只好改了
NC我也看了一遍，如果要改的话也是要全都在大白线上改，改动也是很大的，也是等泡挑
音效方面还是跟Hard说的一样 kiai部分轻飘飘的不舒服

[Easy]
没什么好说的啊 音效就不说了 其他的就是我觉得note边压着了不太好看O.O 这一下子说的太多惹。。改不过来就不改惹

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sorry不会摸E N 就是DT过了遍随便说两句orz 请务必不要降低好感度啊 好感度up！

smallboat wrote:

嗨，黃書，我先摸你的map，比較短。 谢谢啦~~

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.標籤不一致，檢查jyc's Insane diff少了一個。
2.ArtistUnicode 不一致 檢查jyc's Insane diff。
3.Combo color也不一致，stack leniency也是，check jyc diff.[/color] 这个目测不是unrankable
4.我想kiai前面應該能加幾條綠線 (黃書的diff)，像00:54:824 (1) 這個我覺得能稍微放大點音量之類的部分。 好，这里扩音量了~

[Easy] OK,比之前進步許多，繼續加油。 谢谢！

00:01:196 (1) - 我認為降到(30~40)音量是最好的，這邊調了50，聽到都是N的基本音效，
都被音樂蓋過了，我建議調低些。 好的

00:26:598 (3) - NC? Hmm.. 不倾向改
00:34:360 (6,1) - 我感覺這個跟00:12:486 (1,2) 是一樣音軌的，怎放不一樣的擺放呢? 後面也稍微檢查一下。 诶~不一定都要一样嘛。。后边也是有旋律进展的，比前边节奏密度稍微大一点应该问题不大~

[Hard] 有些還是沒疊好，就不提出了。 啊啊~

00:01:196 (1) - 同EZ建議改掉 好的~
00:15:308 (1,2,3) - 可以3個都複製貼上，這樣比較美觀。不瞒你说，这里我也是被吐槽过好多次也改过好多次了，复制粘贴也是会觉得不太好看，调整之后也是有点歪。。我也是有点蛋疼啊
00:22:364 (3) - 稍微移下面一點不就能成三角? Fixed
00:43:180 (7) - 同理 Fixed实话说这两个地方就挪了一点，真的是治好了我的颈椎病233
00:46:356 (1) - 怎麼沒加個finish呀這裡明明是重音還聽得很清楚。 Fixed
00:50:590 (3,4) - 對照一下，3中間的瞄點線歪了，你可以用複製貼上就不用移了。 饶了我吧虽然我是真的慢慢移了一下。。
00:52:707 (8) - 雖然前面也有這個情況藍線clap，個人感覺這個可以拉長到藍線(或改成 1/1，然後在 00:53:412 (9) 加1/2 我覺得也行) 其实这曲子蓝线clap有点多，如果每个都跟多少会有些重复，你觉得呢？虽然这里最后还是延长了滑条
00:54:824 (1,2,3,4) - 如同上面可複製貼上，真的不太好看。 改起来会比较麻烦，倾向于不改，还是能看的。。
00:59:763 (4) - (472|200)，我覺得這邊放遠點跳，建議改(下面那個也一樣)，你這放跳感覺還是沒表達出音樂，還是很擠。 唉最终还是决定不改了，因为这里虽然好改但是后边的地方确实没有太多空间
01:00:116 (5) - (380|304) ^
01:02:586 (4,5) - 4沒拉直，然後這兩個跟上面那兩個一樣， 稍微在放遠點，而5你可以用ctrl+g表達出另一個不同的flow。 ^
01:06:114 (1,2,3) - 這一段感覺可以跟百姐一樣做個變速。 (可能玩完他的圖之後覺得這邊不變速蠻奇怪的) 我之前做的那张这里是有变速的，但是个人还是觉得还是不变了吧。。变起来也是改不太好改而且会有点乱
01:08:231 (4) - (256|86) ^
01:08:583 (5) - 開頭疊01:09:642 (2) 尾 (之後像這種旋律我覺得都可以稍微跳一點可以試試) 不知道这回有没有叠好
01:17:404 (1,2,3,4) - 不如全選丟到(167|181)的位置，偏左下角不太有什麼特別處，注意14對稱和23對稱。 Fixed


[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked. Thank you!
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

1. 00:04:018 - There are no heavy-sounding instruments here, so the finish feels really out of place. I heavily suggest to remove it to keep the calm atmosphere of the song at this section.
2. 00:09:663 (3) - Since you're adding an NC every stanza, add an NC here too since these 00:06:841 (1,2,3,4) objects are currently two stanzas in length. It's simply to keep the consistency.
3. 00:12:486 (1) - Meanwhile, unlike 00:04:018, there is a cymbal here, but you don't have any finish to emphasize it. I suggest to add one now~
4. 00:26:598 (3,4,5) - Uh, the spacing here is slightly inconsistent (1.18x to 1.24x). Since you're mapping without grid snapping, it can be easily solved by moving (5) somewhere around (237,334) so the deviation from the default distance spacing used for this diff (1.2x) won't be too much. Not much of a problem; just giving some minor advices.
5. 00:53:412 (2,3,4,1) - It'd look better and flow nicer if you made them look like this. You should try this. ((2) is at (432,88), for reference.)
6. 01:00:116 - Remove the whistle here? The one at 00:59:763 is okay, I suppose, but this one doesn't really work. It just feels redundant.
7. 01:11:406 - ^

1. 00:17:778 (9,1) - This looks slightly unappealing to me, considering (9) only overlaps half of (1)'s center part of the body, and it isn't even that centered. Maybe you can just place them normally, like how you arrange 00:13:544 (3,4,5) and many other things. Also, I believe (9) will be better if it's emphasized with a whistle since the instrument there sounds pretty similar.
2. 00:20:953 (6) - I believe you can make a nice-looking blanket pattern at 00:20:600 (5,6) by moving this slider to (368,136).
3. 00:23:776 (1,2) - The spacing here is 1.1x, btw. It's slightly inconsistent with the default DS (1.0x) that you're using here.
4. 00:29:421 - What about using the Drum finish instead of the Soft one? It follows the instrument here more accurately, IMO.
5. 00:41:769 (2) - And you can make the blanket here better by moving the node on the tail to (64,72).
6. 01:08:231 - Might as well add a finish here to emphasize the end of the vocals too, considering Mai sings one syllable of the lyrics every one beat (and emphasized them pretty deeply)? It would be a nice chance to accentuate the vocal.

1. 00:02:254 (2,3) - For a better flow, maybe consider moving (2) to around (395,190) and (3) to around (448,290)?
2. 00:16:014 - I'd reuse the clap to be used for another custom sample's soft-sliderslide, then use it here so the instrument here will be properly hitsounded. It's just awkward to leave it unmapped/unhitsounded. (Applies to all similar cases.)
3. 00:18:836 (2,3,4) - Uh, why is the spacing for 1/4s ~1.1x here, while 00:09:663 (1,2,3) uses ~0.7x? The inconsistency irks me. I think it's something that should be made consistent so this map can be better design-wise.
4. 00:30:127 (2,3,1) - Stack them to make them look neater? Or is there any reason for making them unstacked?
5. 00:52:001 (5) - I'm sure enough you place NCs every stanza here, so add an NC here too for the sake of consistency?
6. 00:58:352 - I think the whistle here is redundant, since there are whistles at 00:57:999 and 00:58:705 already, and there is a clap here. Remove that whistle? (Yes, applies to similar parts.)
7. 01:04:702 (4,5,6,7) - Compared to the spacing you've been using throughout the diff, the jumps here are too big, thus they might come off as unexpected. It's also a bit too hard for a Hard diff in general, anyway. Try to tone it down to ~1.6-1.8x.
8. 01:06:114 (1,2,3) - Are you sure they won't be unreadable for typical Hard players? Because I personally think so. TBH, though, I'm not 100% sure; try getting some opinions about this.

1. Any reason why is the kiai time here different compared to the other diffs?
2. 00:03:136 (7) - I prefer to see this note getting stacked below 00:02:783 (6). The jump at 00:03:136 (7,8) that results from the stacking would fit the song and the diff will be slightly more fun to play. I think you should try it first.
3. 00:11:251 (4,5,6) - I actually expected the triangle to get larger starting from here instead of 00:11:780 (1,2,3,4); that would make the map more intense and fun to play (again).
4. 00:20:600 (1,2) - Something like this will make the pattern look tidier, IMO.
5. 00:24:305 (2,3,4) - Select them all and move to (125,264)? This is so they'll be placed perfectly in the center of the 00:24:658 (5,6,7) triangle. It'll make the map better in terms of the design.
6. 00:26:775 - There is nothing that resembles the clap here, and it just feels off compared to the song's rhythm, so I suggest to remove it.
7. 00:33:831 (4,5,1) - Make the triangle look like this? They'll be more readable (the current one feels really clustered and difficult to read), and they'll flow along and compliment 00:33:302 (1,2,3) very well. (This is just an estimation for the pattern; try to make it look as good as possible.)
8. 00:37:713 (2) - It touches 00:37:889 (3) a lot and thus makes the design here a little weird. I personally suggest to stack it above (3)'s head.
9. 00:38:418 (4,5) - Make them look like this if possible; same reason as 00:20:600 (1,2).
10. 00:57:911 (4) - There is nothing here and I don't see what is this circle supposed to follow anyway, so remove it? It'd make the play here far more comfortable.
11. 01:08:407 (4,5) - Move them 1/4 beats earlier (so 01:08:407 (4) will be at 01:08:231 and (5) will be at 01:08:583)? They'll follow the instruments far more accurately than how are they now, looking at the fact that you're only mapping the weaker sounds on the blue ticks instead of the stronger ones on the white and red tick. It'd really confuse the players, you know, especially with the rhythm pattern that you've built until now.
12. 01:11:759 (5) - I'd say to NC this to indicate that 01:11:759 (5,6,7,8,9) is a whole new pattern. The jumps here will me more sightreadable that way, IMO.
13. 01:14:405 (4,5,6) - Similar to 00:37:713 (2). Try to do this instead (the slider is (5), (4) is stacked above (5)'s head, and (6) is stacked below (5)'s tail, in case you're confused)? You might need to rearrange the patterns starting from 01:15:287, though.
14. 01:19:874 (1,2,1) - Try to make a 2.5x jump here so it'll be similar to 00:22:364 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) (a shape followed by a 3-note jump with an equal spacing between the three notes). It's always nice to have some consistencies like this here, I think.

Hinsvar wrote:

Secret of my heaaart~

Thanks for picking the right song. Oh thanks!

Time to mod! Let's go

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

1. 00:04:018 - There are no heavy-sounding instruments here, so the finish feels really out of place. I heavily suggest to remove it to keep the calm atmosphere of the song at this section. Oh I for got that. Fixed.
2. 00:09:663 (3) - Since you're adding an NC every stanza, add an NC here too since these 00:06:841 (1,2,3,4) objects are currently two stanzas in length. It's simply to keep the consistency. Fixed
3. 00:12:486 (1) - Meanwhile, unlike 00:04:018, there is a cymbal here, but you don't have any finish to emphasize it. I suggest to add one now~ Fixed
4. 00:26:598 (3,4,5) - Uh, the spacing here is slightly inconsistent (1.18x to 1.24x). Since you're mapping without grid snapping, it can be easily solved by moving (5) somewhere around (237,334) so the deviation from the default distance spacing used for this diff (1.2x) won't be too much. Not much of a problem; just giving some minor advices. Fixed
5. 00:53:412 (2,3,4,1) - It'd look better and flow nicer if you made them look like this. You should try this. ((2) is at (432,88), for reference.)
6. 01:00:116 - Remove the whistle here? The one at 00:59:763 is okay, I suppose, but this one doesn't really work. It just feels redundant. Let me try to give a reason. The first part of lyric is se'cret'of'my'heart, each syllable have 1/2. I stressed the 1,3 syllable. Then is u'ta'ga'a with each 1/4, I think this is quite related with the previous part. So I add this whistle.
7. 01:11:406 - ^ ^

>Hard

1. 00:02:254 (2,3) - For a better flow, maybe consider moving (2) to around (395,190) and (3) to around (448,290)? Fixed
2. 00:16:014 - I'd reuse the clap to be used for another custom sample's soft-sliderslide, then use it here so the instrument here will be properly hitsounded. It's just awkward to leave it unmapped/unhitsounded. (Applies to all similar cases.) I've tried to use sliderslide but the effect is not so good so I will abandon it unless it is "really" need to be fixed.
3. 00:18:836 (2,3,4) - Uh, why is the spacing for 1/4s ~1.1x here, while 00:09:663 (1,2,3) uses ~0.7x? The inconsistency irks me. I think it's something that should be made consistent so this map can be better design-wise. Yes, fixed.
4. 00:30:127 (2,3,1) - Stack them to make them look neater? Or is there any reason for making them unstacked? Made abig change for a better look
5. 00:52:001 (5) - I'm sure enough you place NCs every stanza here, so add an NC here too for the sake of consistency? Yes
6. 00:58:352 - I think the whistle here is redundant, since there are whistles at 00:57:999 and 00:58:705 already, and there is a clap here. Remove that whistle? (Yes, applies to similar parts.) Yes, since so many people told me that, I applied this. But still, for me I love the whistle.
7. 01:04:702 (4,5,6,7) - Compared to the spacing you've been using throughout the diff, the jumps here are too big, thus they might come off as unexpected. It's also a bit too hard for a Hard diff in general, anyway. Try to tone it down to ~1.6-1.8x. Fixed
8. 01:06:114 (1,2,3) - Are you sure they won't be unreadable for typical Hard players? Because I personally think so. TBH, though, I'm not 100% sure; try getting some opinions about this. Changing here could not be so easy..

Well, that's it.

Good luck on the way Thanks for your useful modding!

smallboat wrote:

[Shore's Normal] 如樓上所說有些combo真的蠻長..沒啥問題._.神mapper。

00:07:899 (2,8) - 或許能加個whistle能補充一點效果。 嗯。。对于我来说柑橘加或不加区别不是太大
00:09:663 (6) - 這邊是唱出的音怎麼不NC 我感觉他是跟的鼓声，这里的人声好像跟的不太多，况且他是两根大白线一个nc，如果要改就是要全改。。
00:15:308 (5) - ^
00:20:953 (6) - ^
00:26:598 (4) - ^
00:43:533 (4) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

>Shore's Normal

1. 00:17:778 (9,1) - This looks slightly unappealing to me, considering (9) only overlaps half of (1)'s center part of the body, and it isn't even that centered. Maybe you can just place them normally, like how you arrange 00:13:544 (3,4,5) and many other things. Also, I believe (9) will be better if it's emphasized with a whistle since the instrument there sounds pretty similar. I don't think so... In fact someone have mentioned it and I found he didn't fix it in the previous mod, so maybe he don't want to fix the overlap.. As for the whistle, I think the whistle is on the red tick even it is relatively stressed. So adding whistle may be abrupt.
2. 00:20:953 (6) - I believe you can make a nice-looking blanket pattern at 00:20:600 (5,6) by moving this slider to (368,136). Fixed in another way.
3. 00:23:776 (1,2) - The spacing here is 1.1x, btw. It's slightly inconsistent with the default DS (1.0x) that you're using here. Okay.. I think. After all, AImod said nothing about distance.
4. 00:29:421 - What about using the Drum finish instead of the Soft one? It follows the instrument here more accurately, IMO. In fact if I use it, it will be the only drumfinish in the diff.. I don't like the feeling.
5. 00:41:769 (2) - And you can make the blanket here better by moving the node on the tail to (64,72). = = In my opinion the blanket is good..
6. 01:08:231 - Might as well add a finish here to emphasize the end of the vocals too, considering Mai sings one syllable of the lyrics every one beat (and emphasized them pretty deeply)? It would be a nice chance to accentuate the vocal. So sorrry but here I think no finish is better.. Too much finish is noisy..

ts8zs wrote:

Random,If you want,plz give me a ticket mu可以随时找我mod，只要我手里有闲
别局限于柯南当背景……选个萌妹子多好 滚来滚去……~(～o￣▽￣)～o 。。。滚来滚去……o～(＿△＿o～) ~。。。 如果你能找着更好的我会乐意接受的~
啊关于timing是饼干拉克修和我一块商量了一个晚上才最终确定的，所以不打算改啦
[Hard]
慢图槽点真的满少的…… 猴
[Normal]
01:19:874 (6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345759 拉克修说不了
[Easy]
...none
算了 作为short mod给你找张新背景？ 我觉得现在bg还可以，不过可以试试来找找啊~有时间的话，我觉得现在bg质量稍微堪忧，如果还能找到更合适的就好啦

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Easy]
[Shore's Normal]
00:36:124 (2,3) - they can blanket better
you used claps very well, but whsitles sound not that good in this diff imo. don't spam whistles or have no whistles in a long part, make them continuous then the hitsounds can be better Remove some whsitles,and make some blanket better

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 57646
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

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Title:Secret of my heart
TitleUnicode:Secret of my heart
Artist:Kuraki Mai
ArtistUnicode:倉木麻衣
Creator:Atrue
Version:Shore's Normal
Source:Detective Conan
Tags:lkx_Shore jyc-Binggan case closed meitantei konan ending 9 名探偵コナン
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BeatmapSetID:138321

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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wcx19911123 wrote:

[Easy]
difficulty setting有点高，建议HD或者OD-1 ok，od-1

[Hard]
没啥大问题，不过改进空间还是蛮大的，排列可以多元化点，用点对称，blanket之类的，音效问题跟Normal有点像 即使这么说也是觉得音效要改也得大幅度改whistle。。对于我个人而言还是比较喜欢这种whistle的感觉，所以会考虑……排列方面其实我也是觉得可能还有提高空间，但是也是如果要改就要整体remap，可能会考虑

所以我能有张你的票么？

Frostmourne wrote:

From my test playing queue~
Shore's Normal
00:57:999 (1) - you may adjust spacing for this a bit to make it look like the others. => http://puu.sh/7lZTv.jpg
01:18:110 (3) - move right a bit to x:172 y:72

All great, you can call me for a bubble after these are adjusted.~

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296,296,70348,2,0,P|248:280|152:312,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,320,71406,2,0,P|80:280|104:248,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,200,72112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,72464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,120,72817,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,120,73170,2,0,P|328:128|392:88,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,74229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,74581,6,0,L|416:240,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,304,75287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,328,75640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,75993,2,0,L|168:280,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,76698,2,0,P|88:240|104:208,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,77404,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,128,77757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,72,78110,1,12,0:0:0:0:
112,120,78462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,176,78815,2,0,B|192:208|240:200|240:200|240:240|272:264,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,79874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,80226,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Frostmourne wrote:

From my test playing queue~ Hi~

Replay : http://puu.sh/7lZxl.osr Thx!

You created very unique jump patterns that fit the song very well. I am fun with this so much. Good job!
There are some jumps that I feel uncomfortable though, for example 00:50:061 (6,7,8) - as the way taking off from 00:49:531 (5) - and landing a jump on 00:50:591 (9) - feel a bit uncomfortable. They fit music regardless but I would suggest you do this way.

SPOILER

Maybe adding NCs like I did on this screenshot is ok.
00:29:244 (6,1) - New combo wise for this stack feels not right. I would remove NC 00:29:421 (1) - and add NC on 00:29:774 (8) - instead. I look it at large scale for this map and I feel this new combo is a bit out of place.

@jyc: Fixed all, thanks for mod!

Hard
00:15:308 (1,2,3,4) - this is strange. You use around 1.15x spacing on 00:13:191 (2,3,4) - and then you shift to 2.11 without any signs in music which I think it could be confusing to some people. I suggest you reduce them as you do in 00:13:720 (3,4) -

fixed,thanks for modding!

All great, you can call me for a bubble after these are adjusted.~

Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck for your first map!

Sorry for late response in pm.

dkun wrote:

[General]
Am I late??! Sorry for forgetting about this map.
I do love the song/set, so good job on that!

Why not take Insane's custom combo colors throughout the set?
TR2 all diffs, maybe?

[jyc's Insane]
What if this followed the kiai sections of Hard rather than just shooting fountains three times for the sake of consistency?

dkun wrote:

Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ

Lanturn wrote:

omg.. Detective conan map (From Kuraki Mai) that actually uses a detective conan background!

Congrats on first!

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

gratz！

AliomLoung wrote:

恭喜RANK>W<

Fycho wrote:

恭喜黄书脱新，今后继续努力~

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Gratz~ <3

dkun wrote:

Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ