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Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste
General :
> some of nazi. offset of red tick should be 725 here since the music is starting at that time. and then add red line again in 01:08:097 - since the metronome of music is reset here.
> AiMod said there is a Tag Conflict between Normal and Hard diff
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Guide
Bold = Unrankable/must be fixedRed = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste
General :
> some of nazi. offset of red tick should be 725 here since the music is starting at that time. and then add red line again in 01:08:097 - since the metronome of music is reset here.
> AiMod said there is a Tag Conflict between Normal and Hard diff
Normal
- 00:16:996 (2) - tbh i heard cymbal sound here. well since you using drum in this time. add finish on head too to make the sound louder?
- 00:16:996 (2,2) - nazi but could be better blanket for neater pattern here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284123
- 00:21:064 (2) - extend this slider to 00:22:081 - , i guess it's a mistake here since the previous of rhythm example 00:16:996 (2,2) - end'ed in red tick :p (and overmapped)
- 00:25:132 (2) - same as 00:16:996 (2) -
- 00:23:098 (2) - intentional of spacing 1,31x? i prefer to keep consistency here since this diff is the easier diff after all
- 00:25:895 (3) - how about extend this slider to 00:26:149 - ? let give a little break for newbie since i saw 00:24:624 - until 00:29:200 - using 1/2 space from one slider to other slider maybe too hard for newbie player imo
- 00:27:929 (3) - if you fixed from above. try to extend it 00:28:183 - too for following vocal better and for consistency with above
- 00:31:234 (1) - hmm should to move this spinner to 00:31:488 - and end in 00:33:268 - . following music lot of better than following drum here
- 00:40:895 - imo sounds of clap on head and tail are a little bit loud here. how about use 50% here and back to use 60% from 00:41:403 -
- for 00:42:166 - 00:44:200 - 00:45:217 - etc that have similar sound with them. i think default clap won't fit with the music here. feel a little weird for me. how about use custom clap like http://puu.sh/6zPfn.wav ?
- 00:54:878 - the sound of this time is really loud here. a loud of drum sound. since less of hitsound here. how about use finish but volume around 45%? feel really empty here imo
- 00:55:641 (1) - well same as above. loud of music that need a hitsound to emphasize it. hmm how about whistle same as you did in 00:53:607 - ?
- 00:57:674 - imo sound of this time is louder than 00:57:166 - so try to emphasize that sound 00:57:674 - and map 00:56:657 - this time since mostly following vocal to map this diff so i would suggest you to use http://puu.sh/6zPFK.jpg this rhythm instead (p:s 00:56:657 - start in this time)
- 01:01:996 (1,2) - some of newbie might confusing if they see a circle in red tick which not as 1/1 space here. i would suggest to change them become slider as 00:57:929 (1) -
- 01:06:318 (1,2,3) - a quite hard pattern for Normal (Easiest) diff here. change them become like http://puu.sh/6zQ2e.jpg instead
- 01:31:996 (3,4) - since this diff is the easiest diff. i would to use 1/2 slider instead since newbie is newbie after all. sometimes confusing with 1/2 circles
- 01:36:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - totally Hard for Easiest diff. use easier rhythm like http://puu.sh/6zQQw.jpg pls
- 01:40:386 (1) - should be use default finish since the music is quite loud and have a cymbal sound
- 01:41:149 - same as previous (00:42:166 -)
- 01:42:420 - better if you remove this whistle since it seems like as intentional but the sound of the music is same as 01:43:437 - (which haven't whistle to emphasize the sound)
- 02:00:979 (1,2) - same as 01:31:996 (3,4) -
- 02:05:302 (1,2,3) - same as 01:06:318 (1,2,3) -
- 02:22:081 (2,3) - rhtyhm could be simple here for better follow by newbie. http://puu.sh/6zS6r.jpg (do it in 01:23:098 (2,3) - too)
- 02:30:979 (3,4) - same as 01:31:996 (3,4) -
- 02:53:352 (2,1) - nazi, move them to 180,68 for better symmetrical?
- 03:03:520 - unsnapped as aimod said
- Well from kiai 03:48:522 - until end. Please avoid about many of 1/2 space which more than 2 objects since it's quite hard for Normal especially 04:19:539 (1,2,3,4,1) - . obviously need remap about rhythm in this part
Hard
- 00:31:234 (1) - same as Normal. after move the spin, 00:31:234 - add note here
- 00:54:878 - try to add a hitsound (maybe S:C3 clap that i gave you in Normal) to emphasize it. Totally feel empty here
- 01:02:759 (2) - add whistle on head since the music and power of vocal are similar with 01:00:725 (3) -
- 01:07:081 (4,5,6,7) - imo since the pattern is same with 01:06:318 (1,2,3) - , it isn't make any sense. we can't see the different of music but the music is obviously different. so change (4,5,6,7) become 1/2 sliders like http://puu.sh/6zYJ9.jpg
- 01:16:234 (1,3) - nazi, i prefer to see this sliders symmetric each other for neater pattern
- 01:59:708 (3) - add whistle on head if you fixed from 01:02:759 (2) -
- 02:06:064 (4,5,6,7) - same as 01:07:081 (4,5,6,7) -
- 02:23:098 (6) - flow could be better imo. try to move 144,168 so you can do a natural flow here
- 02:43:691 - aa add note here. obviously need to map even just drum sound. it's like the last of kiai time music tbh
- 02:59:963 (1) - add finish on head. obviously because i heard a cymbal sound here
- 03:04:030 (1) - imo custom finish (like soft finish tbh) doesn't fit with the cymbal sound that appear in this time. you need to emphasize it with default finish
- 03:08:098 - same as above (this cymbal louder than above tbh so need to fix this)
- 03:12:166 - same as above
- 03:24:115 - same as above
- 03:58:183 (5,1) - jump of this pattern, imo flow between them could be better here. i feel a little bit forced to reach the (1)'s head here. so try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1285075 instead for solution?
- Okay rhythm seems fine here. but i would say to add more jump. this diff lacking of jump imo especially from 00:16:488 - until 01:38:861 -
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Edit : don't worry yukichan. i'm preparing chinese new year in my country too www