Natsume Chiaki - Hikarakuyo · forum

Pandiar

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-01-14T16:16:14+00:00

Hi~ from my Q XD
sorry to late

[General]
uncheck widescreensup

[Normal]
00:23:652 (4) - may better flow

00:32:766 (2) - ^
01:14:538 (1) - NC?
01:31:247 (3) - same as 00:23:652 (4)

[Hard]
00:44:158 ~ 00:46:437 - where is spinner?

[Insane]
00:07:038 - add note?
00:08:652 (5) - more jump? about x336 y240
00:44:158~00:46:816 - spinner time?

[Okayu's Extra]

looks fine

but NC is too random in Insane and Extra
maybe it is pointed out when BAT checked so take care
i think NC is fit in the white line or turn of the melody
but nice map ! shot star

good luck!

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-01-15T00:49:29+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
Hi~ from my Q XD
sorry to late

[General]
uncheck widescreensup fix

[Normal]
00:23:652 (4) - may better flow fix
SPOILER
00:32:766 (2) - ^ fix
01:14:538 (1) - NC? fix
01:31:247 (3) - same as 00:23:652 (4) fix

[Hard]
00:44:158 ~ 00:46:437 - where is spinner? fix in another way

[Insane]
00:07:038 - add note? no
00:08:652 (5) - more jump? about x336 y240 no
00:44:158~00:46:816 - spinner time? fix

but NC is too random in Insane and Extra
maybe it is pointed out when BAT checked so take care
i think NC is fit in the white line or turn of the melody
but nice map ! shot star

good luck!

thanks for mod and star~

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2014-01-15T08:26:10+00:00

基本上可以了说一些可以提高的地方:
排列上的话有不少细节可以提高比方说一部分flow 还有一部分摆法可以更美观一些顺便有一些梗略重复基本是一眼就能看出来这个东西在来回用了好几次虽然不是什么问题但是有很多方法可以让类似的梗用起来不会给人一模一样的感觉

hitsound其实我个人不是特别喜欢这种爆发感不够的finish 因为不是很容易听出来...不过也不是啥问题

因为没有啥个别的问题所以我就讲了点概念如果能启发你一下的话你可以试着改改如果你觉得不需要修改了的时候就告诉我一下

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-01-15T10:16:41+00:00

Nymph wrote:
基本上可以了说一些可以提高的地方:
排列上的话有不少细节可以提高比方说一部分flow 还有一部分摆法可以更美观一些顺便有一些梗略重复基本是一眼就能看出来这个东西在来回用了好几次虽然不是什么问题但是有很多方法可以让类似的梗用起来不会给人一模一样的感觉

hitsound其实我个人不是特别喜欢这种爆发感不够的finish 因为不是很容易听出来...不过也不是啥问题

因为没有啥个别的问题所以我就讲了点概念如果能启发你一下的话你可以试着改改如果你觉得不需要修改了的时候就告诉我一下

重复梗什么的你书的是哪个难度QwQ
总之太感谢惹!!!1! 妮妮窝爱妮<3

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-01-17T06:47:26+00:00

看来我来晚了>.>
都要泡了我就不摸了...
欠了你一个mod

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2014-01-17T06:51:25+00:00

作为第一个图算及格吧做下一张图的时候可以注意一下排版的美观还有细节的处理等等

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-01-17T07:25:12+00:00

妮妮 thank you very much ><

sammy711 wrote:
看来我来晚了>.>
都要泡了我就不摸了...
欠了你一个mod

猴下次开新坑找你摸图

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-01-17T10:07:00+00:00

看到文明先锋又泡了华语新人图

Insane当然还是有很多提升空间的
不过ENH都做得不错鼓励一下

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-01-17T10:24:18+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
看到文明先锋又泡了华语新人图

Insane当然还是有很多提升空间的
不过ENH都做得不错鼓励一下

哇感谢鼓励我会继续努力的>w<
文明先锋www

O k a y u_old

29 posts

Joined March 2013

O k a y u_old 2014-01-18T08:43:04+00:00

S o a p

00:50:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 你选中这一块看看【http://puu.sh/6i5PJ.jpg】，全都纠缠在一起，建议改得分散一点 fix
01:07:323 (6) - 这里我搞不懂为啥间距会变大，要跳也应该是01:07:608 (7) - 这里开始吧 fix

rinsukir

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136,176,46437,5,2,0:0:0:0:
140,184,46532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,46721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,46816,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,216,46911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,47006,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,232,47101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,47196,6,0,L|268:220,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,47576,2,0,L|418:28,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,56,47861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,56,47956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,144,48145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,164,48335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,204,48525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,48,48715,6,0,P|332:120|276:184,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,49095,2,0,L|268:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,100,49475,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,136,49664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,49854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,200,50044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,204,50234,6,0,P|156:224|132:272,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,180,50614,2,0,P|356:160|380:112,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,88,50994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,51183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,116,51373,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,272,51562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,88,51753,6,0,P|332:136|304:228,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,52133,2,0,L|308:300,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,52513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,280,52702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,100,52892,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,124,52987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,164,53082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,184,53177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,184,53272,6,0,L|336:272,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,168,53652,2,0,L|224:316,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,320,54032,2,0,P|88:300|40:324,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,140,54411,5,10,0:0:0:0:
132,320,54601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,176,54791,2,0,P|284:160|304:64,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,44,55171,2,0,L|480:108,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,196,55551,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,120,55740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,55930,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,324,56120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,204,56310,6,0,P|392:216|440:192,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,244,56690,2,0,P|156:268|104:257,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,128,57070,2,0,P|427:114|457:69,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,57449,2,0,P|70:71|30:35,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,57829,6,0,P|208:108|248:184,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,168,58209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,58399,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,256,58589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,58778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,120,58968,5,8,0:0:0:0:
212,160,59063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,188,59158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,228,59253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,59348,2,0,B|296:292|296:292|328:296|304:344,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,152,59728,6,0,P|368:164|420:144,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,60108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,60297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,88,60487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,60,60677,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,60,60772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,60,60867,2,0,P|176:112|164:160,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,304,61247,2,0,P|260:252|272:204,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,61532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,61627,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,76,61816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,61911,2,0,P|408:136|400:216,1,150
256,164,62386,6,0,P|208:180|152:168,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,248,62766,2,0,P|372:232|428:244,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,63145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,252,63335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,280,63430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,296,63525,2,0,P|136:304|100:340,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,312,63810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,312,63905,2,0,L|32:216,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,64190,6,0,P|88:152|168:116,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,164,64664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,64,64854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,65044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,152,65139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,180,65329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,65424,2,0,P|344:200|304:232,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,232,65804,2,0,P|172:228|212:196,2,100,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,132,66373,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,76,66563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,104,66753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,66848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,66943,2,0,P|292:152|312:200,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,184,67323,2,0,P|184:228|148:232,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,268,67608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,268,67702,2,0,L|248:336,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,67987,2,0,P|360:288|448:296,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,68462,5,2,0:0:0:0:
428,152,68557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,140,68652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,68747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,84,68842,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,80,68937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,60,69032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,72,69127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,68,69221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
164,100,69316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,112,69411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,100,69506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,132,69601,2,0,P|96:160|104:216,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,300,69981,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,300,70076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,300,70171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,300,70266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,70550,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,192,70645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,70740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,70835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,64,71120,5,6,0:0:0:0:
92,64,71215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,71310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,71405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,64,71500,5,6,0:0:0:0:
240,120,71690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,71785,2,0,P|208:192|236:256,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,64,72259,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,192,72449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,300,72639,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,120,72829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,72924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,73019,2,0,P|208:192|236:252,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,73399,2,0,L|232:348,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,300,73778,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,212,73968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,100,74158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,36,74348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,36,74443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,36,74538,2,0,P|244:88|272:132,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,132,74823,2,0,L|268:264,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,212,75297,6,0,P|132:180|84:176,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,104,75582,2,0,P|92:96|144:32,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,76057,5,2,0:0:0:0:
356,108,76247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,76437,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,221,76627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,76816,5,2,0:0:0:0:
392,92,77006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,77196,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,212,77386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,212,77481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,212,77576,2,0,P|108:252|96:304,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,77861,2,0,L|324:284,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,316,78335,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,172,78525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,316,78715,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,172,78905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,172,79000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,172,79095,2,0,P|256:160|224:120,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,79380,2,0,P|152:88|160:176,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,164,79854,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,244,80044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,308,80234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,236,80424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,236,80519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,236,80614,2,0,P|280:208|320:212,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,80899,2,0,P|368:156|360:76,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,81373,6,0,P|152:80|104:88,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,36,81658,2,0,P|24:104|88:164,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,264,82133,5,6,0:0:0:0:
88,240,82228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,82323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,232,82418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,82513,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,244,82608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,82702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,180,82797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,82892,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,124,82987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,83082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,108,83177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,76,83272,5,8,0:0:0:0:
424,112,83367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,136,83462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,172,83557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,204,83652,6,0,P|400:232|376:312,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,84032,2,0,L|244:272,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,120,84411,5,2,0:0:0:0:
180,300,84601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,84791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,260,84981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,85076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,85171,2,0,P|244:272|336:232,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,85551,2,0,L|420:180,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,85930,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,52,86120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,52,86310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,116,86500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,52,86690,6,0,P|284:104|264:156,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,196,86975,2,0,L|332:288,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,216,87449,6,0,P|436:172|484:156,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,72,87734,2,0,L|320:80,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,132,88209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,152,88399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,40,88589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,240,88778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,152,88968,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,192,89158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,240,89348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,212,89538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,264,89633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,89728,6,0,P|300:220|308:176,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,44,90108,2,0,P|212:100|204:144,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,220,90487,6,0,L|156:260,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,216,90867,2,0,L|292:176,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,91247,5,6,0:0:0:0:
140,256,91437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,216,91627,5,2,0:0:0:0:
48,220,91816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,104,92006,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,340,92196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,116,92386,5,2,0:0:0:0:
140,256,92576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,88,92766,5,6,0:0:0:0:
164,116,92861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,92956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,152,93051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,93145,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,136,93240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,152,93335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,152,93430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,184,93525,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,224,93620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,93715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,288,93810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,288,93905,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,316,94000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,94095,2,0,B|280:272|280:272|248:268|264:224,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95804,12,4,98842,0:0:0:0:

sorry最近模擬考完就是段考...快考高中了qwq
沒有寒假orz

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-01-18T09:18:05+00:00

O k a y u wrote:
sorry最近模擬考完就是段考...快考高中了qwq
沒有寒假orz

好可怕..我也快考高中惹还是有寒假o.o
已经泡惹上传会戳泡所以不能更新了抱歉/w\

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-01-21T03:11:13+00:00

我想说我好像在很久前看过这个图然后点了fav……（捂脸

据说给泡图射星是zz……喵~~

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-01-21T03:48:04+00:00

zengdaen wrote:
我想说我好像在很久前看过这个图然后点了fav……（捂脸

据说给泡图射星是zz……喵~~

zz就zz吧感谢射星><
我zz还以为有bat来check了

O k a y u_old

29 posts

Joined March 2013

O k a y u_old 2014-01-25T05:42:24+00:00

rinsukir wrote:
好可怕..我也快考高中惹还是有寒假o.o
已经泡惹上传会戳泡所以不能更新了抱歉/w\

恩沒關係:3
有寒假真好Orz...

Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2014-02-14T22:04:24+00:00

from PM request

[General]
the title romanisation is totally wrong... should be "Hikarakuyo" 0.0
hikarakuyo translates to "flying flowers falling leaves" so add that to tags
the combo colors on the easy diff are slightly different, fix that please
the kiai times are also slightly different... fix that too
soft-hitwhistle2.wav and soft-hitwhistle3.wav are both not needed, they are the default whistle sound. delete them from the folder
i could move the title text to the end of this spinner 00:38:082 (1) for you, looks nice

[Easy]
00:04:664 (3) - NC, music changes a little here and this combo is too long
00:08:462 (2) - why is there a random clap on the start of this slider? you don't put a clap anywhere else in this section, so use a whistle to be consistent
00:33:525 (2) - add whistles to this slider
00:35:044 (3) - should be an NC here
01:16:057 (3) - curve this slider like this, looks a lot better to me together with the next slider

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:07:702 (1) - remove the clap on this slider for same reason as easy diff
00:28:968 (1) - curve this slider like this, looks better together with the next slider

SPOILER

00:54:032 (2) - this red node slider seems out of place. make it a smooth curve
01:07:702 (4) - should be a whistle at the start of this slider

[Hard]
00:20:234 (3) - curve it up like this?

SPOILER

00:24:411 (6) - NC here, this combo is too long and inconsistent
01:05:044 (1,2) - unstack (1), looks weird.
01:11:120 (1) - remove NC. it is inconsistent with 00:13:399 (3).
01:22:133 (7) - NC here again
01:29:728 (2) - curve this slider like this to blanket 01:28:968 (4), would look neat

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:58:209 (2) - missing a clap at the start of this slider
01:02:386 (1) - maybe curve this a little?
very creative diff

[Okayu's Extra]
why are the HP and OD setting lower than Insane...? please make them the same or higher..
00:13:019 (2) - clap at the start of this slider
00:52:133 (2,3) - ugly overlap

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-02-15T04:28:15+00:00

Low wrote:
from PM request

[General]
the title romanisation is totally wrong... should be "Hikarakuyo" 0.0 fix
hikarakuyo translates to "flying flowers falling leaves" so add that to tags fix
the combo colors on the easy diff are slightly different, fix that please fix
the kiai times are also slightly different... fix that too fix
soft-hitwhistle2.wav and soft-hitwhistle3.wav are both not needed, they are the default whistle sound. delete them from the folder fix
i could move the title text to the end of this spinner 00:38:082 (1) for you, looks nice ok!

[Easy]
00:04:664 (3) - NC, music changes a little here and this combo is too long fix
00:08:462 (2) - why is there a random clap on the start of this slider? you don't put a clap anywhere else in this section, so use a whistle to be consistent fix
00:33:525 (2) - add whistles to this slider fix
00:35:044 (3) - should be an NC here fix
01:16:057 (3) - curve this slider like this, looks a lot better to me together with the next slider fix
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:07:702 (1) - remove the clap on this slider for same reason as easy diff fix
00:28:968 (1) - curve this slider like this, looks better together with the next slider fix
SPOILER
00:54:032 (2) - this red node slider seems out of place. make it a smooth curve fix
01:07:702 (4) - should be a whistle at the start of this slider fix

[Hard]
00:20:234 (3) - curve it up like this? fix
SPOILER
00:24:411 (6) - NC here, this combo is too long and inconsistent fix
01:05:044 (1,2) - unstack (1), looks weird. fix
01:11:120 (1) - remove NC. it is inconsistent with 00:13:399 (3). fix
01:22:133 (7) - NC here again fix
01:29:728 (2) - curve this slider like this to blanket 01:28:968 (4), would look neat fix
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:58:209 (2) - missing a clap at the start of this slider fix
01:02:386 (1) - maybe curve this a little? fix
very creative diff

[Okayu's Extra]
(Okayu can't play osu so I help her to fix this.)
why are the HP and OD setting lower than Insane...? please make them the same or higher.. fix
00:13:019 (2) - clap at the start of this slider fix in another way
00:52:133 (2,3) - ugly overlap fix

thanks for mod~

Low

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Joined July 2011

Low 2014-02-15T16:40:09+00:00

one kiai in hard is off by 1 ms, doesn't matter though really. rebubbled for now due to many changes made

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-02-16T06:34:45+00:00

thank you Low :3

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2014-03-02T07:49:16+00:00

泡了这么久还不rank啊= =。。。Go

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-03T22:33:03+00:00

I guess fix the unsnapped timing section in Hard 01:23:651 like Low mentioned. Re-snap it to 01:23:652.
Also, your Preview Time is unsnapped for all difficulties. Re-snap it to 01:10:740 (71040).
Fix this and I'll rank!

Mei

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Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-03-04T16:05:58+00:00

瞎了送上门的rank，读书狗快回来改图

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-03-08T11:58:05+00:00

Sry for late reply../cry

BeatofIke wrote:
I guess fix the unsnapped timing section in Hard 01:23:651 like Low mentioned. Re-snap it to 01:23:652.
Also, your Preview Time is unsnapped for all difficulties. Re-snap it to 01:10:740 (71040).
Fix this and I'll rank!

EDIT: all fixed thank you~

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
泡了这么久还不rank啊= =。。。Go

泡了这么久终于有人回复感动/cry

Mei wrote:
瞎了送上门的rank，读书狗快回来改图

我住校摸不到电脑/cry 明天再说wuwu

Akabato

207 posts

Joined October 2013

Akabato 2014-03-08T16:30:36+00:00

看樣子快了，好啊，快rank rank!~

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-08T23:20:08+00:00

You forget to set the Preview time for ALL difficulties. You only did it on Hard difficulty.
Set the preview time to 01:10:740 (71040) in all difficulties.

The preview time must be the same for all difficulties!

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

rinsukir 2014-03-09T01:24:59+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
You forget to set the Preview time for ALL difficulties. You only did it on Hard difficulty.
Set the preview time to 01:10:740 (71040) in all difficulties.

The preview time must be the same for all difficulties!

ok, fixed~