Yoeri wrote:

Pretty fun map.

[Easy]
Uh lots of beziers but I guess that's because this map was made before the slider algorithm update. Might want to fix most of them. exactly, though i tried fixing them but i don't want to ruin the old mapset
00:05:872 (2,3) - Kinda begging for a blanket. well that's a short slider for it
00:35:872 (3,4) - Would sound better if it followed the vocals. Circle on 00:36:109 and start slider on 00:36:348. done
01:09:681 (1,1,1) - Get rid of the returns and just make really long sliders. Also soft sampleset would sound better.after the spinner it would be a one-hit-kill, plus the ending part. i dont want newbies to hate my map lol
01:27:776 (2,4) - Ugh this blanket. OLD STYLE MASTERRACE, fixed

[Normal]
AR 5 please. The map is pretty fast.
Same as the with Easy, the beziers can look pretty weird sometimes, especially if you're trying to blanket or create symmetry.
00:05:157 (2) - Looks a bit shrivelled. oh i totally forgot about that, before i changed those 1-2-3 at the beginning, they were creating a pattern together
00:05:872 (3,4) - For instance, this bezier makes the blanket look kind of bad.fixed
00:20:634 (2,3) - I'd get rid of the return because (3) being offbeat feels a bit weird.guitar solo + apple bucket
00:24:681 (4,5) - Not sure if you'd want to stack under a sliderend in a Normal. okay
00:43:014 (1) - Not centered properly. OLD STYLE BBY
00:56:348 (3,1) - ^
01:09:681 - Soft sampleset for this part.
01:13:490 (1) - Move the point in the curve more toward the middle of it or add an extra one to make it more round.
01:15:871 (2) - Turn around and resnap.
01:21:110 (1) - Same as the one before, add a point or move the current one further to the middle. i like its curvy and random shape
01:23:015 (1,2) - Put these slightly further from each other so that the slidertracks don't touch, or put (2) under or left from the end of (1) for better flow.
done all, well changed some shit myself
[Hard]
00:08:252 (5) - ctrl+g
00:11:109 (1) - ^ applied one, didnt apply another
00:13:490 (3,4) - Stack (4) under (3) or let them overlap. >2014
00:16:348 (1,3) - Make the curves a bit stronger. they are covering her hair
00:19:205 (4) - ctrl+g oh true
00:22:062 (1,2) - These are begging to be blanketed.
00:23:967 (4,5) - ^
00:31:109 (4,1) - ^ nope
00:33:014 (4,5,6,7) - Please don't stack the triple under the sliderend. It's confusing.
00:42:062 (3,4,5) - Move these closer together?
00:42:776 (7,8,1) - ^ well 1,30x
00:54:443 (1,2) - Uh, though the timing itself fits, the object don't very well. Turn (2) into two circles or end (1) at 00:55:157, put (2) at 00:55:395 and add a return to it.
00:58:252 (1,2) - ^
01:02:062 (1,2) - Same here. you could remove the return from (1), place a circle at 01:02:776 and (2) with an extra return after that. nope, it sounds fine in other mods as well, i am catching the guitar
01:09:681 - Same as other diffs, soft sampleset please.
01:11:824 (2,3) - If you're trying to follow the guitar, you'll need to use 1/3 beat snap devisor here. tried but so many people warned me about it ;_; but well, it sounds fine even in taiko so i think this is fine.
01:12:776 (3,1) - Asking for a blanket so badly.
01:15:633 (2,3) - Snap to 1/3.
01:19:443 (2,3) - ^ sadly no, i even tried 1/6 first though, i am fine with this rhythm now
01:30:633 (6) - New combo? true

No Dap wrote:

Hi, mod from modding Q

[Easy]
00:10:872 (3,4) 00:17:777 (2,3) - unify plox
00:23:967 (3,1) - remove curve
01:25:157 (3,4) 01:28:968 (3,4) - unify plox

[Normal]
00:07:062 (1,2) - shape them better
00:07:062 (1) - stack on 00:05:157 (2) -
00:10:396 (4,5) - blanket?
00:38:253 (3) - 1/2 slider?
01:12:062 (2) - x:255
01:20:157 (3) - move it somewhere else

[Hard]
00:11:109 (1,2) - blanket
00:11:586 (2,3,4,5) - why not use 1/4 sliders
00:23:490 (3) - crtl + g
00:26:109 (7) - delete
00:33:490 (5,6,7) - don't hide triples (especially on hard with 4.5 star) if there is an empty beat 00:33:371
00:33:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - make better flow
00:42:062 (3,4,5,7,8,1) - stacked triples
00:49:681 (5) - stack on 00:48:729 (1)
01:04:919 (3) - crtl + g
01:30:633 (6) - NC like other diffs

Hope my mod helped >~<

tutuhaha wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:300 (6) - move it and overlap with 1
00:23:967 (4) - nc？
00:33:490 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think is..too squeeze
00:41:586 (2) - move it to x160 y268
00:46:229 (x) - add note？
01:02:062 (1) - finish？
good rhythm

[Normal]
ar+1
01:02:062 (1,2,3) - ...try to use soft hitsound..

[Easy]
01:02:062 (1,2,3) - ...try to use soft hitsound..
no many things can said Orz..

1. You might want to add something in the creator's word that will tell players that the map is almost 2 years old or something, in case they didn't check the submitted date. So that they won't go rage on the map for it's style in the end :'))

1. Okay, due to the somewhat complicated structure of the song, some parts are a bit tricky to read for beginners - and no, I like how you used the rhythms, but let's make the diff. more beginner friendly :3
2. 00:17:777 (2,3) - The stacking on the diff should be made all consistent so that beginners won't fumble and click randomly owo For this one, this is the only 1/2 beat circle + slider that you didn't stack, unlike 00:10:872 (3,4) - and 01:28:968 (3,4) - , where you completely stack them. So yeah, I'd recommend to make the stacks the same here, either fully stacks this one or unstack the other two :3 though the latter sounds more troublesome and will requires you to remap a few part because of DS :b
3. 01:25:157 (3,4) - As in above :b
4. 00:35:872 (3,4,5) - Assuming you're still following the vocal here(you start following it since 00:22:538 (1) -), I feel it will be better if you keep following it to make less confusion for beginners ovo For this one, I don't really hear any vocal on 00:35:872 (3) -, rather the vocal actually started at 00:36:109 (4) -. I'd recommend to delete (3) to make the rhythm consistent with sticking to the vocal and not make beginners stumble :3 Or, if you prefer to keep (3) to make the rhythm still going(without pause), you can change (3) to a 1/2 slider, so that beginners will have less chance to combo break here because the slider will give enough time for beginners to react and understand the rhythm :3 Either way's fine for me, though consider changing this one owo
5. 01:03:967 (4) - How about making it symmetrical with 01:02:062 (1) -, since I don't think the current straight one fit with the music as it follows the vocal, and the curve on slider will emphasize it :3 So yeah, consider making em parallel like this http://puu.sh/6Pd8L.jpg As it will look neater and the flow are improved too :3
6. 00:10:872 (3,4) - The flow here.. is a bit restricted imo. I understand that due to the map style, this kind of flow is a bit unavoidable, but this one in particular flows a bit bad imo :< I'd recommend to make the slider going more upward than make it flow a bit to left-y like this http://puu.sh/6PeOc.jpg. That way, player won't have to bend the cursor to the left whlist going up which is a kinda uncomfortable move imo :'D I've also arranged the next patterns so that they are distance snapped, here they are owo
   

   284,220,10872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   284,220,11110,2,0,P|256:140|284:68,1,160,2|6,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,20,12538,6,0,P|400:20|440:44,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   484,120,13490,2,0,P|492:156|476:204,1,80,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   452,236,14205,2,0,P|404:260|372:324,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. Well, the main problem is actually just the map structures and patterns imo; mainly the beziers actually. Well if you decide to keep them it's okay, but considering the other diffs are not, you may want to keep the consistency here :'D So yeah, I'll left a few blanketings, patterns, etc for now owo

1. 00:08:491 (3) - This note is somewhat contrast with the other notes on this intro section imo You see, currently in the intro, you're following the guitar in the background, and avoiding making a complicated rhythm, like making gaps on 00:11:824 - and other parts where the guitar is also not present. I'd suggest to make the same gap here, as in my opinion, the slight pause will fit since not also it's still in the beginning of the song, it would also keep the consistency with the rhythm you're choosing here :3 So yeah, consider removing this one note here~
2. 00:23:967 (3,4,5) - As you're still following vocal from 00:22:538 (1) -, I don't really find the rhythm here quite fit imo :< I think it will suit the vocal more if you put the long slider on 00:24:919 -, where the vocal also has a long part unlike the current, and put the circle instead on 00:24:681 -. I think it will fit best with the rhythm here owo The rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/6TgMl.jpg~ and btw I've arranged the following notes to be in position with the DS applied to save your trouble if you like /o\
   

   280,248,23967,2,0,P|224:268|196:320,1,120
   140,360,24681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,316,24919,2,0,P|55:264|0:243,1,120
   136,192,25871,6,0,L|136:128,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   132,48,26824,2,0,P|76:68|48:120,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:35:395 (3,4) - I kinda don't agree with the rhythm here :< You see, the long 3/4 slider at 00:36:109 (4) - played a bit weird because it kinda leave the vocal at 00:36:348 - and thus making the pause transition to the next circle at 00:37:300 (1) - feel a bit weird imo :< So yeah, I'd recommend to arrange the rhythm here a bit! You can try making a circle at 00:36:348 - and then a 1/1 slider on 00:36:348 - to make the rhythm cover the vocal nicely! Or you can also try to put a circle on 00:36:824 - to make the rhythm less confusing since you have used this kind of rhythm and it matches with the background drum too :b Either way is good for me actually
4. 00:44:919 (3) - This one is kinda begging to be made a blanket imo, considering the blanket you did on 00:41:110 (3) - which particularly has a same rhythm with this one owo So yeah, you can try making the blanket like this http://puu.sh/6ThY3.jpg, and also you don't need to worry about the parallel slider on 00:45:396 (4) - since they went well together imo ovo http://puu.sh/6Ti2L.jpg
5. 00:58:253 (1,2,3) - umm these three looked a bit untidy, mostly because of the way (2) not went exactly under (1) slider's path and (3) is on the point between blanketing (1)'s tail or just not at all :< I really recommend to make the stuffs neater here as they are kinda hard to not be noticed during gameplay imo :< I've rearranged them to make the blanket consistent and of course with DS, see if you like them ovo
   

   260,284,59681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   116,276,60157,2,0,P|88:260|70:237,1,60
   72,168,60634,2,0,P|89:146|117:130,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   188,84,61586,1,2,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:48:252 (3,4,5) - hmm I find the stack on (3) diesn't go well with the rhythm imo You see, stacks are usually used on beat that's at least on a similar level, but it isn't really applied here and considering the way you used stacks before on this diff, this one is quite different and will confuse beginners imo :< so yeah, consider unstacking this one and arrange the pattern a bit! There aren't many notes here before the spinner on 00:51:110 (1) -, so no much work needed :b
7. Overall a nice Normal owo It has quite a variative rhythm and even though a few parts are a bit confusing for beginners, It's easy to get used to it. So Nice job here Miney! *v*

1. 00:13:967 (4) - I feel that the spacing here is a bit confusing imo You see, this note is spaced almost similarly like how you spaced a 1/2 notes, despite this being a 1/4; by 2-3 pixel. This can make player stumble here, also because of the sudden change of the rhythm too :< So yeah, consider spacing this slider nearer with 00:13:490 (3) - try to make them at least stacked - not fully of course, to make the readability better. it would be nice if you distanced them like you did on 00:31:586 (1,2) - which is also a 1/4 and it can be recognized better :3 So yeah, this one is rather big, consider fixing this!
2. 00:06:586 (4) - Consider ctlr + g here? :3 Ot will improve the flow here as the cursor movement is nice and the stacking here kinda ruin the flow too imo :< It will also create a nice flow combined with the 00:07:300 (1) - slider too :3
3. 00:08:729 (1) - Also the same as above, try ctrl g here to improve the play, as this one stands on the stanza and having a jump here could be nice owo
4. 00:14:681 (1) - eh what's with the antijump? owo I don't really find a good reason to put an antijump here as the pause is kinda sudden since you don't put any pause on the first sectioon :< So yeah, consider to space this normally, or you could add a note to fill the slight pause here :3

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

Erina wrote:

You already sang Ren'ai Circulation, so I guess you're done! Yay! I can share it publicly too, right?

1. 00:04:919 (1,2) - I have a little idea in mind here: what about moving this whole pattern a bit down to make it get on better with the next pattern 00:07:062 (3,4,1) - , thanks to the oval flow, without any blankets? I believe this can actually work quite smoother there, consideringthe oval flow there! Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   360,116,3967,2,0,P|400:116|436:132,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   380,212,4919,6,0,B|322:261|242:276,1,120,4|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   232,268,5872,2,0,B|184:260|127:211,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   96,120,7062,2,0,B|124:60|188:40,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   280,32,8253,1,6,0:0:0:0:
   272,128,8729,6,0,B|244:188|186:212,1,120,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   156,244,9681,2,0,B|213:276|274:262,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,224,10872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   324,192,11109,2,0,P|279:129|288:48,1,160,2|6,2:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
   376,16,12538,6,0,B|408:48|460:44,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:19:681 (5,1) - That sudden flow switch with this pattern here isn't really pleasant to play, I have to say... I would have liked instead just an arch pattern that could go well with the straight slider you have right there. It isn't really hard to make, though I think it works quite better there! Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   40,40,19205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   136,32,19681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   184,116,20157,6,0,B|240:172,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   336,172,21110,2,0,B|392:116,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,24,22062,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   264,16,22538,6,0,B|208:72,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   192,168,23490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   264,236,23967,2,0,B|348:144,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:39:205 (1,1,1) - Hmm, I kinda expected a whistle at the end of these sliders to emphatize in some way the singer's voice plus the synthesizer that is being played there and considering you have been using theme in the following patterns using them here wouldn't hurt as well
4. 00:48:729 (2,3) - Imho you should consider rearranging these sliders using a different curve to continue well 00:46:824 (1) - 's oval flow, as they can really work great with the curve "reversed" there (also with a straight slider)! It isn't a big deal, though I think it works pretty good there Here's an example of what I have done here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   40,288,46824,6,2,P|120:304|200:288,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   376,216,48729,2,0,P|416:212|468:224,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,284,50157,2,0,L|328:372,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:30:634 (1) - What about moving this at x:276 y:100? It could work pretty good to make a final blanket there that could end the pattern in a pretty cool to see and play way! Not a big deal, though

1. 00:07:062 (1) - What about adding a soft whistle to the end? I think it would work quite well there to follow the guitar chord, and it also kinda follows the other patterns even if there's a whistle on the red tick :3
2. 00:10:396 (4,5) - I would really flip the whole pattern there vertically and place it above 00:09:681 (3) - ... The actual pattern isn't bad, but flow-wise it can definitely be made quite smoother there. Also I don't like how 00:12:062 (6) - continues with pattern, so this can be easily solved thanks to this pattern here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   436,300,9681,2,0,B|408:324|380:300|380:300|356:324|328:300,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   264,272,10396,2,0,B|236:248|212:272|212:272|184:248|156:272,1,120
   84,280,11109,2,0,P|116:332|172:344,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   312,320,12062,1,6,0:0:0:0:
   384,192,12538,6,0,B|383:245|439:245|439:293,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:12:538 (1,2,3) - Just a 1/1 pattern here seems rather boring, considering how your patterns have been up to now... I would personally follow the same rhythm as the other patterns, by covering sounds like 00:14:205 - , 00:14:681 - and so going. You can use a pattern which consist of a 1/1 slider between two notes to easily solve the issue, as seen here:
   
4. 00:38:967 (x) - Imho a note here could work really well as transition to the next pattern following the drums in a pretty good way. Obviously a 1/4 slider would be too much for a normal there, so just adding a note here imho could work pretty good
5. 00:45:396 (4) - Not a big deal, though I'd structure this slider a bit more downwards instead of upwards. It is a really little thing, though I think it could work quite better with the following slider! Here's an example of what you can do here!
6. 00:57:776 (4) - Instead of putting this outside the two sliders' tracks, why don't you use this as a central note with the sliders blanketting it? I think it flows a lot better in this way, considering how the circular movement here works, instead of going outside the track. Here's an example of what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   264,72,54443,6,2,B|326:96|329:162,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   140,148,55871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   156,292,56348,2,0,P|252:348|356:288,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,184,57776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   356,80,58253,6,2,P|256:24|156:80,1,240,0|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,184,59681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   136,264,60157,2,0,P|108:248|90:225,1,60
   92,156,60634,2,0,P|109:134|137:118,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   200,60,61586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   316,140,62062,6,2,B|372:144|372:144|388:112|432:96,1,120,2|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:21:110 (1) - Please at least make this shorter by 1/1... It would follow in a really great way tthe vocals there! I really can't see any reason why making this slider end instead on a weak beat, while you can make it end right into the vocal part!
8. 01:29:205 (4) - Pretty much the same as above, except that you chould make it shorter by 1/2 and add a note at 01:29:919 - to follow all the guitar chords. The current slider here is a bit too simplified imho :p

1. 00:09:205 (2) - What would you think about about a CTRL+G here?? Not a really big thing, though I like how opposed sliders work there, also leaving a pretty nice jump with the following slider 00:09:681 (3) -
2. 00:23:490 (3) - If I have to be honest I would see this slider quite better instead as a straight slider which is opposed to 00:23:967 (1) - with its end placed on 00:22:062 (1) - 's start... I really like how in this way the slider plays, and I think it also makes a really better jump with the next slider. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   264,300,23490,2,0,L|338:308,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:33:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I did not really like that much how this pattern was structured... I was thinking instead about a diamond and triangular jump which end straight on 00:35:395 (1) - , with the spacing made gradually higher. I personallly think it is quite better in this way! Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   228,104,33967,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   324,124,34205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   296,32,34443,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   260,196,34681,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   384,48,34919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   384,48,35038,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   384,48,35157,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:35:871 (2) - I would really see better this slider shortened instead by 1/2 by adding a note at 00:36:348 - , as a 1/1 slider only here isn't really great to follow all the instruments that are being played here properly... I like the pattern in this way quite more :3
5. 01:24:919 (x) - You should really consider adding a note there, seeing how the whole pattern here stops abruptly... At the current state it really feels like a a note is needed there, and I would highly suggest you to add one into this spot, to make the whole pattern continue without any stops there!
6. 01:29:205 (4) - I would really replace this with a 1/2 pattern (maybe a 1/2 slider + note at 01:29:681 - ?) as it feels really too much simplified in this way... I like quite more this pattern in this way >_<

No Dap wrote:

Wow! Finally! Good luck

Faust wrote:

You forgot to apply the video offsets to the rest of the difficulties, though. ah i was too tired last night, my bad. Fixed them all now

- 01:11:824 (2,3) - These are in 1/3, same with - 01:15:633 (2,3) - & - 01:19:443 (2,3) -

No need for kd. But I'm surprised no one noticed these..

Faust wrote:

Uh yeah, 1/6. My bad.

I don't see the update on these sections on the latest :C

jonathanlfj wrote:

well well lets see (i actually came from Sakuya's Fanfic queue but w/e xD) six faced chocolate-kun!

[General]
hard diff's kiai time end is unsnapped by 1ms; snap it to 01:30:633 done

[Easy]
00:42:538 (3) - a small inconsistency in spacing here hmm, done
01:17:300 (1) - i think it would be better if you made the sharp turn correspond with the vocals on the second tick, something like this:

SPOILER

hai hai
01:30:634 (1) - i see what you did there he he he (it was actually Faust's idea)

[Normal]
00:03:967 (1) - make this combo pink, so that 01:30:634 (1) will be pink to fit with your intentions better great idea, fixed
00:35:395 (3,4,5) - hmm i would arrange this so it gives off a more smooth flow:

SPOILER

done, i think
00:46:824 (2) - NC here instead of 00:46:348 (1)
01:23:015 (1,2) - the blanketing here can be improved a bit more >< i would love to but distancesnap doesnt let me ;_; hmm how is it now? ;_; if you managed to improve it, could you please send me the code of it? i really couldn't make it

[Hard]
00:37:300 (1,2) - there is actually a more interesting rhythm going on here, would be great if you can capture it:

SPOILER

did it and made a pattern like this, dunno if it looks fine

00:48:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange this to flow like this is cooler imo:

SPOILER

looks great
01:11:903 (2,3) - the snapping i can confirm is 1/6 (or 1/3 in this context), but make sure you readjust the spacing here to reflect that
01:15:713 (2,3) - ^
01:19:522 (2,3) - ^ all are around 1,30x now didn't change 01:21:109 (1) - though, it looks ugly if i readjust its spacing ;_;
01:30:633 (1) - whatever you do just make sure this is pink xD changed first combo to blue and ta-dah!

this is actually cooler than i thought, great usage of slider slide sounds! But since there were snapping changes i will need kevincela to rebubble this before i can rank it

Who will get the 100th post i wonder!

jonathanlfj wrote:

zenbu zenbu zen- wait
hehe hehe he- no
im in the wrong place am i

Ranked~