qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_
Sorry for taking so long

General

1. I'm not sure whether there being only easy and normal is rankable or not.But I think if there is a Hard, your map will be more interesting and worth challenging. sadly i suck at making hard diffs, waiting for a poor guest diff.

Easy

1. 00:35:872 (3,4) - Not very suitale.If you want to follow the vocal, you may use a half-beat slider to replace the current circle with shortening the after slider. nope it is fine like this
2. It's still not recommended to use sliders of variable speed(especially in Easy).But not big problem

Normal

1. 00:22:062 (4,2) - Stack them ? yes i did
2. 01:21:110 (1) - Lower the volume ? 60% makes the slider side sound a little noisy here.i especially mad it loud because i wanted player to understand why i put that slider there. And the slider-slide sound kind of goes well with the vocal, like a back vocal

Both two diffs are very nice ! I cant find out some problems

Good luck~

thanks for mod

Applied all mods, oh man those were from years ago.

Also i don't know why my map was in graveyard twice.

Oh boy

And a new page, new mods, new hope.

Maybe a new Hard guest diff ;__;

Hii, can I make Hard guest diff please?
I like the song so I want to see it ranked.

Kind of asked another person for a guest diff, if he won't answer back i will pm you.

Oh okay, I see.

Why'd you let this die, UM??

i am reviving but still it dies ;__;

Quick side note: Normal is quite complicated for a Normal. lol

Seems like you need a Hard. Would you mind collaborating?

Ahh, noticed this too late. i am working on a Hard diff (almost done), kind of training since i suck at making Harder diffs. But well, it goes good for now. And there is 1 insane on the way, i hate this ;_; (i will ask your help if i need something, thanks for the offer though)

Also, i do know Normal is complicated but since the song is pretty slow i especially wanted it to be complicated. Or else it would end up as a boring mapset with a slow boring song.

HAF MAH STAR

Finally finished the hard diff, made some changes and it is ready for mods.

Ello! o3o Random mod:


nice song Plan on making Insane?
Good luck on ranking!

(my lil'sis watches this anime like crazy, because of all those penguins, lol)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! o3o Random mod:

[Easy]
00:31:586 (2,3) - TRy switching their timing spots, I feel that the hit circle doesn't fit with the long hold on 'dou' in 'doushite'. makes sense, done <3

[Normal]
╱╱┏╮
╱╱┃┃
▉━╯┗━╮
▉┈┈┈┈┃
▉╮┈┈┈┃
╱╰━━━╯
thanks
[Hard]

1. AR -1 done

00:42:538 (6,7,8) - Try this doing something like this?
the arrangement you have now looks somewhat confusing done

nice song Plan on making Insane? That's what i wanted to do but i could only make a hard diff. And couldn't find a decent insane so probably it will stay like this
Good luck on ranking! Thank you!

(my lil'sis watches this anime like crazy, because of all those penguins, lol) Yeah i just finished it recently, it changed my life lol

Thanks for mod!

Damn it stop dying

don't let this go to graveyard again! osu! need more mawaru penguindrum! ;__;

Don't worry it won't die, seizon seennryaakuuuuu

A quick mod for the map that's about to get graveyarded! >.<


DO. NOT. GRAVEYARD.

Haha thank you so much, i am busy with exams and a fresh blog. When i am done with all (in 2 weeks) i will revive this and change some things in Normal diff (last part especially).

Thanks for mod!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

A quick mod for the map that's about to get graveyarded! >.<

[Easy]
Volume's a bit loud imo. Try decreasing the timing points with Normal: vol 65% --> 55%, 75% --> 60%, and 80% --> 70%

1. Or just, copy the volume of the timing points from your Normal diff into this diff as well.

00:04:919 (1) - Add a finish on the tail. done
00:33:491 (4) - move to x:264, y:220 and move 00:34:919 (2) - to x:340, y:160 so that they're not touching each other. it touches to other slider
00:36:110 (4) - Should start at 00:36:348 instead,for consistency. your objects appear to be spaced 1/1 apart. it follows vocal, "daro"
00:39:205 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:54:443 (1) - ^ done both
[Normal]
Adjsut the timnig ponits with vol 80% to 70%
00:03:967 (1,2,3,2) - Not a good format, as they're crowded together :S Consider re-mapping this small portion.
00:39:205 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:54:443 (1) - ^ done
01:11:824 (2) - Remove, and try this rhythm at 01:12:300 - 01:13:252

01:19:681 (2,3) - ^ Same as above. Remove these notes, and use the rhythm at 01:19:919 - 01:20:871 remapped
[Hard]
00:04:919 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:27:419 (4,5) - Remove these notes, it sounds over mapped since 00:27:300 (3) - already hits the long hold on the 'rare'in 'kimerarete'tara'
00:33:609 (6,7) - Remove, also over mapped here.
00:35:038 (6,7) - ^ 00:34:919 (5) - already hits the long hold on the 'ku' in 'mogaku' you are killing the fun. don't forget that this is a rhythm game and those triples go great with a rock song like this with drums and guitars
00:46:229- Add a note here for consistency, with 00:42:776 (7,8,1) - nope, both are different. one goes with triple-1-triple, other is just without triple
00:50:395 (6) - Remove, and add a reverse to 00:49:681 (5) - instead. done
01:11:586 - 01:13:252 Try this instead?
Sounds better imo.
How it can be arranged with 01:10:633 (2) -
01:26:229 (4) - Move to 01:26:109. This needs to be a triplet so that it's consistent with the previous rhythm which also has a triplet 01:23:967 (3,4,5) - . you should try paying attention to rock sounds more, guitar riff is not same there so the triplet doesn't sound the same with both

DO. NOT. GRAVEYARD.

Thanks for mod!

Revived then

Form my modding queues.
Sorry I cannot mod anything in E/N/H mode.

Fine then ;____;

will this ever be ranked? ç__ç
(sad Himari is sad... )

luxoDeh wrote:

will this ever be ranked? ç__ç
(sad Himari is sad... )

Noone is paying attention and mod queues are hard to catch up ;__;

what is this I didn't even know you had this baby

wait for my modz(which is hopefully soon orz)

AnreFM wrote:

what is this I didn't even know you had this baby

wait for my modz(which is hopefully soon orz)

Even though i stalk you all the time ;_;

afaik you modded this before, not sure tho

Hullo There

8th map modded ou of 25.

Hope you won't mind me saving some space.
Your mod here


Colors represent difficulty. You might also want to reply me by answer in "Your Answer"
Oh and Btw, what do you mean by "doesn't make sense without video"? There's nothing wrong.
Btw i really like how you made the concept of this note 01:30:634 (1) at the exact moment of the apple.

Also, have a kudosu because trying to get rid of them you made a good job
If you ever need any map modded, feel free to send a request. I'm gonna start taking request for my next marathon \o/

Updated.

M4M from my queue~
I am noob mapper. and ingore it,when u not agree
[general]

1. none

[Easy]

1. 00:23:967 (3) - rhythm is different with 00:27:777 (4,5) - keep the same rhythm?
2. 01:29:205 (4) - slider shape looks bad try this?
   
   click

   

[Normal]

1. 00:12:538 (1,2,3) - why not keep same rhythm as 00:08:729 (1,2,3,4) - it may let new player confused
2. 00:40:515 (2) - hit point in blue tick? In fact,a circle at 00:40:633 - may be more suitable in normal diff
3. 00:44:324 (2) - ^
4. 00:48:133 (3) - ^
5. 00:55:753 (2) - ^
6. 00:59:562 (2) - ^
7. 01:06:348 (1) - end at 01:09:205 -
8. 00:51:110 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:157 (3) - whistle

[Hard]

1. 00:04:562 - add a circle stack with 3
2. 00:27:776 (1,2) - sliders too long in this diff, why not keep same rhythm as 00:23:967 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:44:324 (2) - keep same rhythm with 00:48:252 (6) -
4. 00:58:252 (1) - shift+ctrl+R 1
5. 01:24:919 - add circle?
6. 01:29:205 (4,5) - why not use three sliders here? and try this
   
   click

   

that's all,good luck~

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

M4M from my queue~
I am noob mapper. and ingore it,when u not agree
[general]

1. none

[Easy]

1. 00:23:967 (3) - rhythm is different with 00:27:777 (4,5) - keep the same rhythm? it was like that before lol, fixed
2. 01:29:205 (4) - slider shape looks bad try this? i had to do it like that because i want 1 to catch the apple ;_;
   
   click

   

[Normal]

1. 00:12:538 (1,2,3) - why not keep same rhythm as 00:08:729 (1,2,3,4) - it may let new player confused well if i do the same rhythm, this will get Harder. That's why it gets sometimes harder, sometimes easier
2. 00:40:515 (2) - hit point in blue tick? In fact,a circle at 00:40:633 - may be more suitable in normal diff
3. 00:44:324 (2) - ^
4. 00:48:133 (3) - ^
5. 00:55:753 (2) - ^
6. 00:59:562 (2) - ^
7. 01:06:348 (1) - end at 01:09:205 -
8. 00:51:110 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:157 (3) - whistle
   
   applied all, thank you!

[Hard]

1. 00:04:562 - add a circle stack with 3 nono, that will ruin the video
2. 00:27:776 (1,2) - sliders too long in this diff, why not keep same rhythm as 00:23:967 (4,5,6) - because i dont want to make it an insane diff
3. 00:44:324 (2) - keep same rhythm with 00:48:252 (6) - nah, vocal goes different there
4. 00:58:252 (1) - shift+ctrl+R 1 thanks!
5. 01:24:919 - add circle? nah its fine now
6. 01:29:205 (4,5) - why not use three sliders here? and try this that's what i thought first but as i said, i want to keep it as "Hard"
   
   click

   

that's all,good luck~

That was a great mod, thank you!

Pretty fun map.

[Easy]
Uh lots of beziers but I guess that's because this map was made before the slider algorithm update. Might want to fix most of them.
00:05:872 (2,3) - Kinda begging for a blanket.
00:35:872 (3,4) - Would sound better if it followed the vocals. Circle on 00:36:109 and start slider on 00:36:348.
01:09:681 (1,1,1) - Get rid of the returns and just make really long sliders. Also soft sampleset would sound better.
01:27:776 (2,4) - Ugh this blanket.

[Normal]
AR 5 please. The map is pretty fast.
Same as the with Easy, the beziers can look pretty weird sometimes, especially if you're trying to blanket or create symmetry.
00:05:157 (2) - Looks a bit shrivelled.
00:05:872 (3,4) - For instance, this bezier makes the blanket look kind of bad.
00:20:634 (2,3) - I'd get rid of the return because (3) being offbeat feels a bit weird.
00:24:681 (4,5) - Not sure if you'd want to stack under a sliderend in a Normal.
00:43:014 (1) - Not centered properly.
00:56:348 (3,1) - ^
01:09:681 - Soft sampleset for this part.
01:13:490 (1) - Move the point in the curve more toward the middle of it or add an extra one to make it more round.
01:15:871 (2) - Turn around and resnap.
01:21:110 (1) - Same as the one before, add a point or move the current one further to the middle.
01:23:015 (1,2) - Put these slightly further from each other so that the slidertracks don't touch, or put (2) under or left from the end of (1) for better flow.

[Hard]
00:08:252 (5) - ctrl+g
00:11:109 (1) - ^
00:13:490 (3,4) - Stack (4) under (3) or let them overlap.
00:16:348 (1,3) - Make the curves a bit stronger.
00:19:205 (4) - ctrl+g
00:22:062 (1,2) - These are begging to be blanketed.
00:23:967 (4,5) - ^
00:31:109 (4,1) - ^
00:33:014 (4,5,6,7) - Please don't stack the triple under the sliderend. It's confusing.
00:42:062 (3,4,5) - Move these closer together?
00:42:776 (7,8,1) - ^
00:54:443 (1,2) - Uh, though the timing itself fits, the object don't very well. Turn (2) into two circles or end (1) at 00:55:157, put (2) at 00:55:395 and add a return to it.
00:58:252 (1,2) - ^
01:02:062 (1,2) - Same here. you could remove the return from (1), place a circle at 01:02:776 and (2) with an extra return after that.
01:09:681 - Same as other diffs, soft sampleset please.
01:11:824 (2,3) - If you're trying to follow the guitar, you'll need to use 1/3 beat snap devisor here.
01:12:776 (3,1) - Asking for a blanket so badly.
01:15:633 (2,3) - Snap to 1/3.
01:19:443 (2,3) - ^
01:30:633 (6) - New combo?

Hi, mod from modding Q

[Easy]
00:10:872 (3,4) 00:17:777 (2,3) - unify plox
00:23:967 (3,1) - remove curve
01:25:157 (3,4) 01:28:968 (3,4) - unify plox

[Normal]
00:07:062 (1,2) - shape them better
00:07:062 (1) - stack on 00:05:157 (2) -
00:10:396 (4,5) - blanket?
00:38:253 (3) - 1/2 slider?
01:12:062 (2) - x:255
01:20:157 (3) - move it somewhere else

[Hard]
00:11:109 (1,2) - blanket
00:11:586 (2,3,4,5) - why not use 1/4 sliders
00:23:490 (3) - crtl + g
00:26:109 (7) - delete
00:33:490 (5,6,7) - don't hide triples (especially on hard with 4.5 star) if there is an empty beat 00:33:371
00:33:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - make better flow
00:42:062 (3,4,5,7,8,1) - stacked triples
00:49:681 (5) - stack on 00:48:729 (1)
01:04:919 (3) - crtl + g
01:30:633 (6) - NC like other diffs

Hope my mod helped >~<

[Hard]
00:12:300 (6) - move it and overlap with 1
00:23:967 (4) - nc？
00:33:490 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think is..too squeeze
00:41:586 (2) - move it to x160 y268
00:46:229 (x) - add note？
01:02:062 (1) - finish？
good rhythm

[Normal]
ar+1
01:02:062 (1,2,3) - ...try to use soft hitsound..

[Easy]
01:02:062 (1,2,3) - ...try to use soft hitsound..
no many things can said Orz..

Yoeri wrote:

Pretty fun map.

[Easy]
Uh lots of beziers but I guess that's because this map was made before the slider algorithm update. Might want to fix most of them. exactly, though i tried fixing them but i don't want to ruin the old mapset
00:05:872 (2,3) - Kinda begging for a blanket. well that's a short slider for it
00:35:872 (3,4) - Would sound better if it followed the vocals. Circle on 00:36:109 and start slider on 00:36:348. done
01:09:681 (1,1,1) - Get rid of the returns and just make really long sliders. Also soft sampleset would sound better.after the spinner it would be a one-hit-kill, plus the ending part. i dont want newbies to hate my map lol
01:27:776 (2,4) - Ugh this blanket. OLD STYLE MASTERRACE, fixed

[Normal]
AR 5 please. The map is pretty fast.
Same as the with Easy, the beziers can look pretty weird sometimes, especially if you're trying to blanket or create symmetry.
00:05:157 (2) - Looks a bit shrivelled. oh i totally forgot about that, before i changed those 1-2-3 at the beginning, they were creating a pattern together
00:05:872 (3,4) - For instance, this bezier makes the blanket look kind of bad.fixed
00:20:634 (2,3) - I'd get rid of the return because (3) being offbeat feels a bit weird.guitar solo + apple bucket
00:24:681 (4,5) - Not sure if you'd want to stack under a sliderend in a Normal. okay
00:43:014 (1) - Not centered properly. OLD STYLE BBY
00:56:348 (3,1) - ^
01:09:681 - Soft sampleset for this part.
01:13:490 (1) - Move the point in the curve more toward the middle of it or add an extra one to make it more round.
01:15:871 (2) - Turn around and resnap.
01:21:110 (1) - Same as the one before, add a point or move the current one further to the middle. i like its curvy and random shape
01:23:015 (1,2) - Put these slightly further from each other so that the slidertracks don't touch, or put (2) under or left from the end of (1) for better flow.
done all, well changed some shit myself
[Hard]
00:08:252 (5) - ctrl+g
00:11:109 (1) - ^ applied one, didnt apply another
00:13:490 (3,4) - Stack (4) under (3) or let them overlap. >2014
00:16:348 (1,3) - Make the curves a bit stronger. they are covering her hair
00:19:205 (4) - ctrl+g oh true
00:22:062 (1,2) - These are begging to be blanketed.
00:23:967 (4,5) - ^
00:31:109 (4,1) - ^ nope
00:33:014 (4,5,6,7) - Please don't stack the triple under the sliderend. It's confusing.
00:42:062 (3,4,5) - Move these closer together?
00:42:776 (7,8,1) - ^ well 1,30x
00:54:443 (1,2) - Uh, though the timing itself fits, the object don't very well. Turn (2) into two circles or end (1) at 00:55:157, put (2) at 00:55:395 and add a return to it.
00:58:252 (1,2) - ^
01:02:062 (1,2) - Same here. you could remove the return from (1), place a circle at 01:02:776 and (2) with an extra return after that. nope, it sounds fine in other mods as well, i am catching the guitar
01:09:681 - Same as other diffs, soft sampleset please.
01:11:824 (2,3) - If you're trying to follow the guitar, you'll need to use 1/3 beat snap devisor here. tried but so many people warned me about it ;_; but well, it sounds fine even in taiko so i think this is fine.
01:12:776 (3,1) - Asking for a blanket so badly.
01:15:633 (2,3) - Snap to 1/3.
01:19:443 (2,3) - ^ sadly no, i even tried 1/6 first though, i am fine with this rhythm now
01:30:633 (6) - New combo? true

thanks bu,per

No Dap wrote:

Hi, mod from modding Q

[Easy]
00:10:872 (3,4) 00:17:777 (2,3) - unify plox
00:23:967 (3,1) - remove curve
01:25:157 (3,4) 01:28:968 (3,4) - unify plox

[Normal]
00:07:062 (1,2) - shape them better
00:07:062 (1) - stack on 00:05:157 (2) -
00:10:396 (4,5) - blanket?
00:38:253 (3) - 1/2 slider?
01:12:062 (2) - x:255
01:20:157 (3) - move it somewhere else

[Hard]
00:11:109 (1,2) - blanket
00:11:586 (2,3,4,5) - why not use 1/4 sliders
00:23:490 (3) - crtl + g
00:26:109 (7) - delete
00:33:490 (5,6,7) - don't hide triples (especially on hard with 4.5 star) if there is an empty beat 00:33:371
00:33:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - make better flow
00:42:062 (3,4,5,7,8,1) - stacked triples
00:49:681 (5) - stack on 00:48:729 (1)
01:04:919 (3) - crtl + g
01:30:633 (6) - NC like other diffs

Hope my mod helped >~<

ahhh your mod was helpful but when i finished my reply, laptop froze. but know that applied most of all.

tutuhaha wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:300 (6) - move it and overlap with 1
00:23:967 (4) - nc？
00:33:490 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think is..too squeeze
00:41:586 (2) - move it to x160 y268
00:46:229 (x) - add note？
01:02:062 (1) - finish？
good rhythm

[Normal]
ar+1
01:02:062 (1,2,3) - ...try to use soft hitsound..

[Easy]
01:02:062 (1,2,3) - ...try to use soft hitsound..
no many things can said Orz..

fixed all, thanks!

Updated.

my useless mods are alwayz ignorable w/o any comment or reason
apply if you feel like it

OuO

[hard]
00:11:586 (2,3,4,5,6) - rather then one jump on 5-6, just make them all jumps
00:14:919 (2,3) - useless nazi but the spacing seems bit weird
00:29:681 (3) - change it to a single circle?
00:31:586 (1) - rhythm suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1319915
(I got no puush now, sry)

01:25:871 (2,3,4,5,6) - making them jump wont hurt
at least i think that way



[ez]

00:34:919 (2,3,4,5) - this area looks notably ugly imo





goodluck

^-^

Updated.

Hello

Hard:
http://puu.sh/6UduH.osr
fine (:

Good Luck!

Yay thanks <3

Happy Valentine<3

aand sorry for the lateness, can't do much these past days orz

Let's go



[General]

1. You might want to add something in the creator's word that will tell players that the map is almost 2 years old or something, in case they didn't check the submitted date. So that they won't go rage on the map for it's style in the end :'))

[Easy]

1. Okay, due to the somewhat complicated structure of the song, some parts are a bit tricky to read for beginners - and no, I like how you used the rhythms, but let's make the diff. more beginner friendly :3
2. 00:17:777 (2,3) - The stacking on the diff should be made all consistent so that beginners won't fumble and click randomly owo For this one, this is the only 1/2 beat circle + slider that you didn't stack, unlike 00:10:872 (3,4) - and 01:28:968 (3,4) - , where you completely stack them. So yeah, I'd recommend to make the stacks the same here, either fully stacks this one or unstack the other two :3 though the latter sounds more troublesome and will requires you to remap a few part because of DS :b
3. 01:25:157 (3,4) - As in above :b
4. 00:35:872 (3,4,5) - Assuming you're still following the vocal here(you start following it since 00:22:538 (1) -), I feel it will be better if you keep following it to make less confusion for beginners ovo For this one, I don't really hear any vocal on 00:35:872 (3) -, rather the vocal actually started at 00:36:109 (4) -. I'd recommend to delete (3) to make the rhythm consistent with sticking to the vocal and not make beginners stumble :3 Or, if you prefer to keep (3) to make the rhythm still going(without pause), you can change (3) to a 1/2 slider, so that beginners will have less chance to combo break here because the slider will give enough time for beginners to react and understand the rhythm :3 Either way's fine for me, though consider changing this one owo
5. 01:03:967 (4) - How about making it symmetrical with 01:02:062 (1) -, since I don't think the current straight one fit with the music as it follows the vocal, and the curve on slider will emphasize it :3 So yeah, consider making em parallel like this http://puu.sh/6Pd8L.jpg As it will look neater and the flow are improved too :3
6. 00:10:872 (3,4) - The flow here.. is a bit restricted imo. I understand that due to the map style, this kind of flow is a bit unavoidable, but this one in particular flows a bit bad imo :< I'd recommend to make the slider going more upward than make it flow a bit to left-y like this http://puu.sh/6PeOc.jpg. That way, player won't have to bend the cursor to the left whlist going up which is a kinda uncomfortable move imo :'D I've also arranged the next patterns so that they are distance snapped, here they are owo
   

   284,220,10872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   284,220,11110,2,0,P|256:140|284:68,1,160,2|6,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,20,12538,6,0,P|400:20|440:44,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   484,120,13490,2,0,P|492:156|476:204,1,80,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   452,236,14205,2,0,P|404:260|372:324,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. Well, the main problem is actually just the map structures and patterns imo; mainly the beziers actually. Well if you decide to keep them it's okay, but considering the other diffs are not, you may want to keep the consistency here :'D So yeah, I'll left a few blanketings, patterns, etc for now owo

[Normal]

1. 00:08:491 (3) - This note is somewhat contrast with the other notes on this intro section imo You see, currently in the intro, you're following the guitar in the background, and avoiding making a complicated rhythm, like making gaps on 00:11:824 - and other parts where the guitar is also not present. I'd suggest to make the same gap here, as in my opinion, the slight pause will fit since not also it's still in the beginning of the song, it would also keep the consistency with the rhythm you're choosing here :3 So yeah, consider removing this one note here~
2. 00:23:967 (3,4,5) - As you're still following vocal from 00:22:538 (1) -, I don't really find the rhythm here quite fit imo :< I think it will suit the vocal more if you put the long slider on 00:24:919 -, where the vocal also has a long part unlike the current, and put the circle instead on 00:24:681 -. I think it will fit best with the rhythm here owo The rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/6TgMl.jpg~ and btw I've arranged the following notes to be in position with the DS applied to save your trouble if you like /o\
   

   280,248,23967,2,0,P|224:268|196:320,1,120
   140,360,24681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,316,24919,2,0,P|55:264|0:243,1,120
   136,192,25871,6,0,L|136:128,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   132,48,26824,2,0,P|76:68|48:120,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:35:395 (3,4) - I kinda don't agree with the rhythm here :< You see, the long 3/4 slider at 00:36:109 (4) - played a bit weird because it kinda leave the vocal at 00:36:348 - and thus making the pause transition to the next circle at 00:37:300 (1) - feel a bit weird imo :< So yeah, I'd recommend to arrange the rhythm here a bit! You can try making a circle at 00:36:348 - and then a 1/1 slider on 00:36:348 - to make the rhythm cover the vocal nicely! Or you can also try to put a circle on 00:36:824 - to make the rhythm less confusing since you have used this kind of rhythm and it matches with the background drum too :b Either way is good for me actually
4. 00:44:919 (3) - This one is kinda begging to be made a blanket imo, considering the blanket you did on 00:41:110 (3) - which particularly has a same rhythm with this one owo So yeah, you can try making the blanket like this http://puu.sh/6ThY3.jpg, and also you don't need to worry about the parallel slider on 00:45:396 (4) - since they went well together imo ovo http://puu.sh/6Ti2L.jpg
5. 00:58:253 (1,2,3) - umm these three looked a bit untidy, mostly because of the way (2) not went exactly under (1) slider's path and (3) is on the point between blanketing (1)'s tail or just not at all :< I really recommend to make the stuffs neater here as they are kinda hard to not be noticed during gameplay imo :< I've rearranged them to make the blanket consistent and of course with DS, see if you like them ovo
   

   260,284,59681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   116,276,60157,2,0,P|88:260|70:237,1,60
   72,168,60634,2,0,P|89:146|117:130,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   188,84,61586,1,2,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:48:252 (3,4,5) - hmm I find the stack on (3) diesn't go well with the rhythm imo You see, stacks are usually used on beat that's at least on a similar level, but it isn't really applied here and considering the way you used stacks before on this diff, this one is quite different and will confuse beginners imo :< so yeah, consider unstacking this one and arrange the pattern a bit! There aren't many notes here before the spinner on 00:51:110 (1) -, so no much work needed :b
7. Overall a nice Normal owo It has quite a variative rhythm and even though a few parts are a bit confusing for beginners, It's easy to get used to it. So Nice job here Miney! *v*

[Hard]

1. 00:13:967 (4) - I feel that the spacing here is a bit confusing imo You see, this note is spaced almost similarly like how you spaced a 1/2 notes, despite this being a 1/4; by 2-3 pixel. This can make player stumble here, also because of the sudden change of the rhythm too :< So yeah, consider spacing this slider nearer with 00:13:490 (3) - try to make them at least stacked - not fully of course, to make the readability better. it would be nice if you distanced them like you did on 00:31:586 (1,2) - which is also a 1/4 and it can be recognized better :3 So yeah, this one is rather big, consider fixing this!
2. 00:06:586 (4) - Consider ctlr + g here? :3 Ot will improve the flow here as the cursor movement is nice and the stacking here kinda ruin the flow too imo :< It will also create a nice flow combined with the 00:07:300 (1) - slider too :3
3. 00:08:729 (1) - Also the same as above, try ctrl g here to improve the play, as this one stands on the stanza and having a jump here could be nice owo
4. 00:14:681 (1) - eh what's with the antijump? owo I don't really find a good reason to put an antijump here as the pause is kinda sudden since you don't put any pause on the first sectioon :< So yeah, consider to space this normally, or you could add a note to fill the slight pause here :3

I still have a few things to say though most of them are quite small and the map's already good owob
Though if you decide to fix the beziers in Easy, I can do a through mod once again, or we can discuss things irc if you want! :3

Anyway, sorry for the short mod, haven't mod in quite a long time, hope it does help at some point><
Though overall, I think the map is pretty much ready, only a few things need to be tweaked and they'll be better *v*

good luck Miney~<3

i should apply your mod before Batofike and jonathan comes ><

i will update it on Sunday

Hi, UnderminE
Req from KwaN & yf's Modding Queue

Notice:

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1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

[Hard]
00:04:443 (3) - remove finish, since there is no finish sound in the music. And it doesn't fit to add a normal finish here.
00:04:919 (1) - how about change to normal finish? I think it would be more suitable.
00:08:252 (5,1) - slightly close. since 1.3x is your regular distance.
00:14:205 (4) - may change to whistle. It's not suitable to add a soft finsh here
00:14:919 (2,3) - 1.3x. since it is a hard diff, it's not suitable to change distance in these notes.
00:28:729 (2) - too far
00:33:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks a little ugly(lol). you may try unstacking this
00:36:586 (3) - too far, and remove finish
00:42:776 (7,8,1) - doesn't look good. try 1.0x
00:44:324 (2) - for the first time, this rhythm confused me. you may change it to: 00:47:776 (3,4,5,6) -
01:12:776 (3) - delay 1/8 to fit the music, and change 01:11:883 (2) - to 1/6 rhythm
01:16:586 (3) - ^
01:19:502 (2,3) - ^
01:29:919 (5) - too far

[Normal]
00:04:443 (3) - the same issue
00:08:252 (2) - remove finish
00:12:062 (6) - ^
00:38:253 (3) - may be hard to normal diff. try to use a 1/2 slider
00:43:014 (1,2) - make a blanket
00:59:681 (2) - ^

[Easy]
00:11:110 (4) - remove finish

OK. That is all! If you feel content with this mod, please tell your friends about our Modding Queue!
Good Luck!

Updating soon

And updated, changed first post.

Claiming a mod post, I should start modding by tomorrow \:3/

Yaaay /o/

From my mod for voice queue!

Yay Mawaru Penguindrum!

I'm still pretty new at modding, so feel free to treat everything below as just suggestions. If you decide not to apply some of my mods, I'd really appreciate it if you would tell me why

[Hard]
00:13:967 (4) - Try to make this slider more symmetrical to 00:13:490 (3), I think it would look better
00:16:348 (1) - Consider putting a bit more curve into this slider, I think it looks better
00:18:014 (3) - If you followed the above suggestion ^, do the same to this slider for symmetry.
00:25:395 (3) - Consider making this look like 00:23:490 (3) except flipped horizontally
01:17:300 (1) - Consider moving this slider to the left a little to align with the previous slider

[Normal]
00:18:729 (5) - Move this up like one pixel, something about the original placement is bothering me but I don't know why.
00:44:919 (3,4) - This looks kind of weird, having a sharp-turn slider (is that what you call them) and a straight slider side by side
00:46:348 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:824 (2) - Add NC
01:05:872 (5) - Consider moving this note left to be between the previous sliders at 01:03:967 (3,4)

[Easy]
01:30:634 (1) - Maybe move this note to where this slider ended 01:27:776 (2)

Great map!

You already sang Ren'ai Circulation, so I guess you're done! Yay! I can share it publicly too, right?

Erina wrote:

You already sang Ren'ai Circulation, so I guess you're done! Yay! I can share it publicly too, right?

Feel free! i can sing another song for you later, for another map /o/

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Gonna apply the mod after kevincela's mod

Hi, Hitsounds thingies
https://www.mediafire.com/?hx26bg9lp2d526z
Tadaa, I hope you like it his way, I ONLY added hitsounds

[Easy]

1. 00:04:919 (1,2) - I have a little idea in mind here: what about moving this whole pattern a bit down to make it get on better with the next pattern 00:07:062 (3,4,1) - , thanks to the oval flow, without any blankets? I believe this can actually work quite smoother there, consideringthe oval flow there! Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   360,116,3967,2,0,P|400:116|436:132,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   380,212,4919,6,0,B|322:261|242:276,1,120,4|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   232,268,5872,2,0,B|184:260|127:211,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   96,120,7062,2,0,B|124:60|188:40,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   280,32,8253,1,6,0:0:0:0:
   272,128,8729,6,0,B|244:188|186:212,1,120,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
   156,244,9681,2,0,B|213:276|274:262,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,224,10872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   324,192,11109,2,0,P|279:129|288:48,1,160,2|6,2:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
   376,16,12538,6,0,B|408:48|460:44,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:19:681 (5,1) - That sudden flow switch with this pattern here isn't really pleasant to play, I have to say... I would have liked instead just an arch pattern that could go well with the straight slider you have right there. It isn't really hard to make, though I think it works quite better there! Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   40,40,19205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   136,32,19681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   184,116,20157,6,0,B|240:172,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   336,172,21110,2,0,B|392:116,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,24,22062,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   264,16,22538,6,0,B|208:72,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   192,168,23490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   264,236,23967,2,0,B|348:144,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:39:205 (1,1,1) - Hmm, I kinda expected a whistle at the end of these sliders to emphatize in some way the singer's voice plus the synthesizer that is being played there and considering you have been using theme in the following patterns using them here wouldn't hurt as well
4. 00:48:729 (2,3) - Imho you should consider rearranging these sliders using a different curve to continue well 00:46:824 (1) - 's oval flow, as they can really work great with the curve "reversed" there (also with a straight slider)! It isn't a big deal, though I think it works pretty good there Here's an example of what I have done here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   40,288,46824,6,2,P|120:304|200:288,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   376,216,48729,2,0,P|416:212|468:224,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,284,50157,2,0,L|328:372,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:30:634 (1) - What about moving this at x:276 y:100? It could work pretty good to make a final blanket there that could end the pattern in a pretty cool to see and play way! Not a big deal, though

[Normal]

1. 00:07:062 (1) - What about adding a soft whistle to the end? I think it would work quite well there to follow the guitar chord, and it also kinda follows the other patterns even if there's a whistle on the red tick :3
2. 00:10:396 (4,5) - I would really flip the whole pattern there vertically and place it above 00:09:681 (3) - ... The actual pattern isn't bad, but flow-wise it can definitely be made quite smoother there. Also I don't like how 00:12:062 (6) - continues with pattern, so this can be easily solved thanks to this pattern here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   436,300,9681,2,0,B|408:324|380:300|380:300|356:324|328:300,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   264,272,10396,2,0,B|236:248|212:272|212:272|184:248|156:272,1,120
   84,280,11109,2,0,P|116:332|172:344,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   312,320,12062,1,6,0:0:0:0:
   384,192,12538,6,0,B|383:245|439:245|439:293,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:12:538 (1,2,3) - Just a 1/1 pattern here seems rather boring, considering how your patterns have been up to now... I would personally follow the same rhythm as the other patterns, by covering sounds like 00:14:205 - , 00:14:681 - and so going. You can use a pattern which consist of a 1/1 slider between two notes to easily solve the issue, as seen here:
   
4. 00:38:967 (x) - Imho a note here could work really well as transition to the next pattern following the drums in a pretty good way. Obviously a 1/4 slider would be too much for a normal there, so just adding a note here imho could work pretty good
5. 00:45:396 (4) - Not a big deal, though I'd structure this slider a bit more downwards instead of upwards. It is a really little thing, though I think it could work quite better with the following slider! Here's an example of what you can do here!
6. 00:57:776 (4) - Instead of putting this outside the two sliders' tracks, why don't you use this as a central note with the sliders blanketting it? I think it flows a lot better in this way, considering how the circular movement here works, instead of going outside the track. Here's an example of what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   264,72,54443,6,2,B|326:96|329:162,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   140,148,55871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   156,292,56348,2,0,P|252:348|356:288,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,184,57776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   356,80,58253,6,2,P|256:24|156:80,1,240,0|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,184,59681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   136,264,60157,2,0,P|108:248|90:225,1,60
   92,156,60634,2,0,P|109:134|137:118,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   200,60,61586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   316,140,62062,6,2,B|372:144|372:144|388:112|432:96,1,120,2|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:21:110 (1) - Please at least make this shorter by 1/1... It would follow in a really great way tthe vocals there! I really can't see any reason why making this slider end instead on a weak beat, while you can make it end right into the vocal part!
8. 01:29:205 (4) - Pretty much the same as above, except that you chould make it shorter by 1/2 and add a note at 01:29:919 - to follow all the guitar chords. The current slider here is a bit too simplified imho :p

[Hard]

1. 00:09:205 (2) - What would you think about about a CTRL+G here?? Not a really big thing, though I like how opposed sliders work there, also leaving a pretty nice jump with the following slider 00:09:681 (3) -
2. 00:23:490 (3) - If I have to be honest I would see this slider quite better instead as a straight slider which is opposed to 00:23:967 (1) - with its end placed on 00:22:062 (1) - 's start... I really like how in this way the slider plays, and I think it also makes a really better jump with the next slider. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   264,300,23490,2,0,L|338:308,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:33:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I did not really like that much how this pattern was structured... I was thinking instead about a diamond and triangular jump which end straight on 00:35:395 (1) - , with the spacing made gradually higher. I personallly think it is quite better in this way! Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   228,104,33967,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   324,124,34205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   296,32,34443,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   260,196,34681,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   384,48,34919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   384,48,35038,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   384,48,35157,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:35:871 (2) - I would really see better this slider shortened instead by 1/2 by adding a note at 00:36:348 - , as a 1/1 slider only here isn't really great to follow all the instruments that are being played here properly... I like the pattern in this way quite more :3
5. 01:24:919 (x) - You should really consider adding a note there, seeing how the whole pattern here stops abruptly... At the current state it really feels like a a note is needed there, and I would highly suggest you to add one into this spot, to make the whole pattern continue without any stops there!
6. 01:29:205 (4) - I would really replace this with a 1/2 pattern (maybe a 1/2 slider + note at 01:29:681 - ?) as it feels really too much simplified in this way... I like quite more this pattern in this way >_<

And that's it! Quite simple yet really well made map, call me back when you're done fixing

Almost there, you.

i think that's all, i love you for all those suggestions <3 hope i didn't miss anything, thanks!

applied almost everything (besides apple in easy ) from Erina's mod as well it was really helpful, thanks!

and updated!

Thanks Faust, for map elements as well

Wow! Finally! Good luck

No Dap wrote:

Wow! Finally! Good luck

You stalker Thanks <3

Hell yes

Your video is about 240ms late, by the way.

Just took notice after looking at it in-game.

Hmm changing the video will affect all mapset though, since i calculated everything according to that.

Do i have to change it?

Well, I made sure mine was correctly synced. And you're using my files so..

Just edit the OSU. file, simple. The bubble will technically 'break' but it remains valid. No problems (unless you screw the code up, which is..unlikely)

in the end *pop*



Well i am not in hurry. Time to wait for kevin's return.

Kudos to Faust since i used his files + he helped me with the offset on irc

You forgot to apply the video offsets to the rest of the difficulties, though.

- 01:11:824 (2,3) - These are in 1/3, same with - 01:15:633 (2,3) - & - 01:19:443 (2,3) -

No need for kd. But I'm surprised no one noticed these..

Faust wrote:

You forgot to apply the video offsets to the rest of the difficulties, though. ah i was too tired last night, my bad. Fixed them all now

- 01:11:824 (2,3) - These are in 1/3, same with - 01:15:633 (2,3) - & - 01:19:443 (2,3) -

No need for kd. But I'm surprised no one noticed these..

Actually only 3s are 1/6 there. i did those after getting 2 mods about it like a week ago. i think it should be no problem having 1/6 in Hard? if it is unrankable, i can change them back to 1/4 though.

Edit: Well those notes are fine in both ways, changed them anyway.

And finally, updated. i think there should be no problems now.

Uh yeah, 1/6. My bad.

I don't see the update on these sections on the latest :C

Faust wrote:

Uh yeah, 1/6. My bad.

I don't see the update on these sections on the latest :C

Eh, i made sure to change them to 1/4 again. Now that i open the game, it said "local beatmap database seems corrupt" or something like that. Must be it.

They look fine on my editor: http://puu.sh/73wE8.jpg

Well re-updated just in case then.

Hmm, I think you are misunderstanding something here..?

I was saying that the 3 points I highlighted are to be snapped to 1/6 timing, not that they were not supposed to be. The previous version at that time was snapped to 1/4 in any case (which was why I pointed it out)

Yeah my brain has stopped working since my grandparents decided to stay at my place.

Uuh, in the end should i snap them to 1/6 (first slider 1/4 and second 1/6) or leave them like this (both 1/4) or both 1/6? Because i changed those sliders maybe a hundred times already, everyone says something different so yeah i trust you most now.

The sections I mentioned are all in 1/6 and I can bet my butt they are.

Reference:

First slider is at - 01:11:903 -
And the second one starts at - 01:12:856 -

Same goes for the rest.

is it okay now

No.

Just pay closer attention to detail towards the screenshot reference I posted and you'll see why.
You only shifted the beggining of the slider to snap on 1/6, while the rest aren't since these are repeats.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i did that with 2nd slider but 1st. Totally forgot about repeats, goddamnit.

Now it feels like map needs much further modding, after noticing my lack of knowledge about these things.

Updating at 5:25am, i don't even know anymore ;______;

well well lets see (i actually came from Sakuya's Fanfic queue but w/e xD)

[General]
hard diff's kiai time end is unsnapped by 1ms; snap it to 01:30:633

[Easy]
00:42:538 (3) - a small inconsistency in spacing here
01:17:300 (1) - i think it would be better if you made the sharp turn correspond with the vocals on the second tick, something like this: 01:30:634 (1) - i see what you did there

[Normal]
00:03:967 (1) - make this combo pink, so that 01:30:634 (1) will be pink to fit with your intentions better
00:35:395 (3,4,5) - hmm i would arrange this so it gives off a more smooth flow: 00:46:824 (2) - NC here instead of 00:46:348 (1)
01:23:015 (1,2) - the blanketing here can be improved a bit more ><

[Hard]
00:37:300 (1,2) - there is actually a more interesting rhythm going on here, would be great if you can capture it: 00:48:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange this to flow like this is cooler imo: 01:11:903 (2,3) - the snapping i can confirm is 1/6 (or 1/3 in this context), but make sure you readjust the spacing here to reflect that
01:15:713 (2,3) - ^
01:19:522 (2,3) - ^
01:30:633 (1) - whatever you do just make sure this is pink xD

this is actually cooler than i thought, great usage of slider slide sounds! But since there were snapping changes i will need kevincela to rebubble this before i can rank it

jonathanlfj wrote:

well well lets see (i actually came from Sakuya's Fanfic queue but w/e xD) six faced chocolate-kun!

[General]
hard diff's kiai time end is unsnapped by 1ms; snap it to 01:30:633 done

[Easy]
00:42:538 (3) - a small inconsistency in spacing here hmm, done
01:17:300 (1) - i think it would be better if you made the sharp turn correspond with the vocals on the second tick, something like this:

SPOILER

hai hai
01:30:634 (1) - i see what you did there he he he (it was actually Faust's idea)

[Normal]
00:03:967 (1) - make this combo pink, so that 01:30:634 (1) will be pink to fit with your intentions better great idea, fixed
00:35:395 (3,4,5) - hmm i would arrange this so it gives off a more smooth flow:

SPOILER

done, i think
00:46:824 (2) - NC here instead of 00:46:348 (1)
01:23:015 (1,2) - the blanketing here can be improved a bit more >< i would love to but distancesnap doesnt let me ;_; hmm how is it now? ;_; if you managed to improve it, could you please send me the code of it? i really couldn't make it

[Hard]
00:37:300 (1,2) - there is actually a more interesting rhythm going on here, would be great if you can capture it:

SPOILER

did it and made a pattern like this, dunno if it looks fine

00:48:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange this to flow like this is cooler imo:

SPOILER

looks great
01:11:903 (2,3) - the snapping i can confirm is 1/6 (or 1/3 in this context), but make sure you readjust the spacing here to reflect that
01:15:713 (2,3) - ^
01:19:522 (2,3) - ^ all are around 1,30x now didn't change 01:21:109 (1) - though, it looks ugly if i readjust its spacing ;_;
01:30:633 (1) - whatever you do just make sure this is pink xD changed first combo to blue and ta-dah!

this is actually cooler than i thought, great usage of slider slide sounds! But since there were snapping changes i will need kevincela to rebubble this before i can rank it

Thanks! o7 Gotta go find kevincela now

Who will get the 100th post i wonder!

Me

So before rebubbling you asked me to find a way to make the blanketting on 01:23:015 (1) - better in the Normal diff, so I made this. See if it works!

Call me back once you've fixed it

Done!

Updated now ~

Rebubbled!

Yayy bubbled



Now waiting for Jonathannn

zenbu zenbu zen- wait
hehe hehe he- no
im in the wrong place am i

Ranked~

Grats ~

this map is fabulous max


Finally congratz!!
I see the survival strategy finally succeded :3

osu need more mawaru penguindrum!!!

lol congraz~

I am at class at the moment and when I saw my map on Highest user rating I was like "OH WHAT"

Thanks <3

jonathanlfj wrote:

zenbu zenbu zen- wait
hehe hehe he- no
im in the wrong place am i

Ranked~

lol I was the same

grats bby <3

congratz:D/

Whew, finally ranked without a problem

Thanks everyone!

wow didn't even realize this was ranked!! congratz~~~