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t+pazolite - Luv-Lab-Poison 22ate!

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Nharox
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Joined February 2008
Nharox
[Xtreme]

Eww, stop it with trying to make one of the hardest maps ever. :\ Probably the worst thing of osu's problem. Anyway, map is somewhat "okay" and I like the SB.

[Lethal]

00:32:771 (1-4) - A bit ugly, try to line them better up so each slider end ends on the same spot.
02:13:989 (1) - You can't see the SB because of the spinner. You might replace it with a slider or remove that part of the SB.

Rest is good and the map is playable. :)

[Strong]

Nothing except 02:13:989 (1) - Same as on [Lethal]

[Weak]

01:00:139 (1) until 01:07:508 (1) - I'd remove the combos and add new combos so the 3 notes are together.

02:13:972 (1) - Same as on [Lethal] and [Strong]
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
The thing with the spinner covering the SB is intended :P (It's only supposed to be seen on Xtreme)

Also Xtreme is a map that i kinda based of a the stepmania steps of this song (The easiest diff!!!... The highest diff has way more 1/4 than Xtreme) and i also trying to train myself to be better on making hard difficulties so i made a VERY hard one :P
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Weak]
No Problem

[Strong]
No Problem

[Lethal]
No Problem

[Xtreme]
No Problem

NO PROBLEM FOUND!!!!!!!!!
I love your song, star
Essien_old
21 posts
Joined November 2009
Essien_old
I didn't find any problems. Good job ^.^
star~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
xtreme:

00:33:082 (1) - whistle

strong:

00:25:092 (7) - should also be a whistle
00:43:003 (6) - clap

weak:

notes are not snapped
01:27:023 (1) - remove combo i guess

ahh.. this map is too.. crazy @_@"
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Heh~~

Nice

Hitsounds are pretty nice. I'm not that great with it to be honest, I don't know how I can suggest anything better. ~~
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
WOAHHH!!! what a nice song...but let's go modding:

Xtreme:
SPOILER
Overall: o.o i luv it!!, but i suggest better spacing, in some parts seems just randomly assigned circles in the screen...example: 00:18:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
00:22:024 (1,2,3,4) - Misalignment
00:43:056 (4,5) - messy, space it better, it's a little bit confussing :S
01:19:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - SEEMS that u're using multi Distance snapping, i recommend using 0.8x
01:22:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:28:073 (7) - Align with circle 6

other diffs. modding comming :)

STARRED!!
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Ok did all the stuff on Xtreme except for a improved beginning because i have no ideas how it should look like :P
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss

j35u5891221 wrote:

WOAHHH!!! what a nice song...but let's go modding:

Xtreme:
SPOILER
Overall: o.o i luv it!!, but i suggest better spacing, in some parts seems just randomly assigned circles in the screen...example: 00:18:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
00:22:024 (1,2,3,4) - Misalignment
00:43:056 (4,5) - messy, space it better, it's a little bit confussing :S
01:19:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - SEEMS that u're using multi Distance snapping, i recommend using 0.8x
01:22:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:28:073 (7) - Align with circle 6

other diffs. modding comming :)

STARRED!!
i continue with the other diffies...as i promised :)

Lethal:
SPOILER
Overall: I suggest increasing the "overall difficulty" 3 steps ahead (recommended), the map will be readable according to the music speed ;) (the circle ring will close faster)
00:49:061 (1) - would be better aligned with the previous slider
00:50:053 (6) - parallel from step 5

Nice job! :o
Strong:
SPOILER
00:31:071 (4) - Reverse Selection (?)
No more problems found :)

Weak:
SPOILER
Perfect! xDDD

P.S.: Thanks for the kudosu :)
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Ok :) I will give you kudosuon the first song (But kudosu is kudosu :D )
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Skin]
Red + Pinkple that burns your eyes sjgsdhgklsh
Remove one of those colours or something, my eyes hurt.

[SB]
01:57:14 - The BG tilts a little here. Is this intentional?

[Weak]
No things.

[Strong]
Nazi 01:47:93 (4) - 1 grid up.
Nazi 02:13:72 (3) - 1 grid down?

[Lethal]
Nazi 00:50:40 (5,6) - 1 grid left?
01:48:72 (10) - I lol'd. Not an error. who........... = Hold, lol.

[X-FUCKING-TREME]
NOTHING FOUND, BUT THAT WAS MADNESS.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Fixed all the complains except for the skin (for now at least)
Also, can someone make a good Medicine Melancholy combo burst (There is way to little fanart and I'm pretty bad on cutting out pictures)
Also i want more suggestions on the skin :3 (Say if you think everything is awful or if you liked the recoloring too)
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
You need to add a scorebar-bg since you have the scorebar-colour skinned. Just use the default one, I guess.

Also, I got a comboburst for you. I wish Medicine got a little more love, too. Anyway, I didn't do a perfect job shopping this (not even going to bother with the darkened parts on top and bottom) but it's good enough to be a combo burst during gameplay which is what matters!

Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Thanks :D
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Very nice, *star

[Lethal]
This is only Hard, right?
01:00:066 (2,3,4,5,6) and similar streams - Ridiculous for a Hard
If it's an Insane and your Xtreme is Impossible, then it's OK.

[Xtreme]
02:13:098 (1) - WTF was that? :o
Xgor
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Xgor

Dusty wrote:

Very nice, *star

[Lethal]
This is only Hard, right?
01:00:066 (2,3,4,5,6) and similar streams - Ridiculous for a Hard
If it's an Insane and your Xtreme is Impossible, then it's OK.It's a kinda Insanish Hard but it's kinda like that on all diffs.
Well i think it's ok

[Xtreme]
02:13:098 (1) - WTF was that? :oWeeeeeeeeeeee!
Also i added a hitcircle :)
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Weak]
Add timing point - BPM 228.000 Offset 100,305ms

01:00:013 (1) - spacing. this is a new combo. but too close to previous slider.
01:32:056 (1) - too far from previous slider.
01:52:092 (1,2) - Don't stack 1 at 2's end. Is this diff for beginner? Hard to read. Also very confusing when don't use snaking slider.


[Strong]
Fine


[Lethal]
Fine


[Xtreme]
01:54:037 (6) - align with 7


star~★
What the fucking fast song! lol But so cool!
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Done :D
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Weak
00:59:982 (1,1) Spacing might confuse new players. The previous combo had a big jump, and these are right next to each other.

Strong
01:57:147 (1,2) - Sliders don't look so good.
02:07:673 (2) - Try making this symmetrical to (1)
Oh and I see that there are a lot of parts that are repeated.

Lethal
02:12:405 (3) - Slider design seems inappropriate and kind of ugly here.

Xtreme
I'm a little worried that the Timing section with 28.50 BPM would maybe be unrankable.
If you're planning to slow it down, maybe change the BPM to a fraction of the original BPM; 22.8 BPM?

02:13:984 (1) - I love this part :); Try making the slider more circular though.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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minyeob
Xtreme is crazy....... Seriously!
That's all
lol Are you going to make this ranked?
Xgor
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Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira
I was going to say that the first offset should be -1 from the original, but I think you won't even need to do that lol...
Xgor
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Xgor
Fixed the offset anyway :P
Soaprman
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Joined January 2008
Soaprman

Soaprman wrote:

You need to add a scorebar-bg since you have the scorebar-colour skinned. Just use the default one, I guess.
Still this. Otherwise, it looks ugly for people using other skins. :(

also...
Xtreme
00:36:019 (2) -
00:38:029 (2) -
00:40:040 (2) -
00:44:061 (2) -
00:46:071 (2) -
00:48:082 (2) - These all seem to have been messed up in a resnap accident. Move them 1/4 beat earlier.
Xgor
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Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
  • [Weak]
    Decrease countdown speed to Normal.
    01:04:034 (3) - 1 tick right.
  • [Strong]
    01:56:009 (4,1) - Spacing.
    02:13:098 (1) - End the spinner on white tick.
  • [Lethal]
    Enable countdown.
    01:48:072 (10) - This slow slider is really hard too see. Even warning isn't enough. I prefer place it somewhere else.
    02:13:098 (1) - End the spinner on white tick.
  • [Xtreme]
    Man, this difficulty is ridiculous, but it's really fun :D You've made a map only for lesjuh :(
    There's nothing to mod :P
Great.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Lethal
00:23:014 (1) - This jump worries a little... could you pleeeaaase move it a little closer to the previous note?

Xtreme
01:47:067 (1) - Shorten by 1/2. The player needs some time to lead into the hold slider.

Bah the storyboard spinning at the end is uglyyyyyyy
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Done every thing except for the SB thing
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :)

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- No Source? oxo Btw I don't know anything you can put as source so... whatever xD
- You can make the "invert flash" on 01:16:981 stronger, it is a bit soft to fit the music, imo xD

~Weak~
No problems. Well done!! :)

~Strong~
01:44:051 (1) - This mini jump is a bit confusing... The whole previous and next sections have the same spacing so this comes a bit out of nowhere o.o'.
01:57:014 (1) - That "bump" on the top of the slider looks a bit ugly oxo (so nazi sorry xD)

~Lethal~
01:48:072 (1) - Love this slider <3
No problems. Well done!! :)

~Xtreme~
- OMG this is so crazy xDD
00:31:006 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing.
00:36:098 (1,2,5) - ^
00:44:074 (3,4) - ^
00:46:084 (3,4,5) - ^
00:48:095 (3,4,5) - ^ (you seem to have the same problem in all this sections :/)
01:33:040 (3,4,5) - ^
01:51:008 (2) - Overlap this with (7) of the previous combo?
01:57:066 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try to leave the same space between sliders
01:59:077 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^, 6 is so off.
02:03:098 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^.


This song is so craaazy and funny!! xDDD Good map btw, Xtreme is too crazy for me x_x. *Star!*
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :)

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- No Source? oxo Btw I don't know anything you can put as source so... whatever xDI doubt stepmania is a great source :P
- You can make the "invert flash" on 01:16:981 stronger, it is a bit soft to fit the music, imo xDI just wanted to make a kind of glass scattering effect so i made it gray.

~Weak~
No problems. Well done!! :)

~Strong~
01:44:051 (1) - This mini jump is a bit confusing... The whole previous and next sections have the same spacing so this comes a bit out of nowhere o.o'.Oh, missed that
01:57:014 (1) - That "bump" on the top of the slider looks a bit ugly oxo (so nazi sorry xD)Fixed

~Lethal~
01:48:072 (1) - Love this slider <3
No problems. Well done!! :)

~Xtreme~
- OMG this is so crazy xDD
00:31:006 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing.Fixed all those stupid mistakes
00:36:098 (1,2,5) - ^
00:44:074 (3,4) - ^
00:46:084 (3,4,5) - ^
00:48:095 (3,4,5) - ^ (you seem to have the same problem in all this sections :/)
01:33:040 (3,4,5) - ^
01:51:008 (2) - Overlap this with (7) of the previous combo?[/color]
01:57:066 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try to leave the same space between slidersNah
01:59:077 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^, 6 is so off.
02:03:098 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^.


This song is so craaazy and funny!! xDDD Good map btw, Xtreme is too crazy for me x_x. *Star!*
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Ephemeral
Everything looks good.

Bubbled!
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
I want a second BAT to look on this map so i kudosu spammed it :D
RemmyX25
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RemmyX25
[Xtreme]
HP- Drain needs to be turned down. If the bar reaches the halfway point, even by SS'ing it, theres a problem.


Overall, nicely done, but im on the fence about ranking this. Xtreme looks a lot like an Approval map :\

EDIT: bubble repair
m980
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m980
I'm not popping/ranking this. But I'd like to offer my feedback to this map.

Firstly.
[E] [I] [I] [I] (Beatmap Listing Difficulty Rating Spread)
I'm not a huge fan of just 1 [N] or [E] and a whole bunch of [I]. Doesn't offer as much to every player.

Next.
[Xtreme] is horribly overmapped. Filled with unnecessary streams and stacks. Maybe I don't like overmapped maps, but seriously.. wtf.

Just my feedback, as I couldn't find anything "technically" wrong, but I don't feel comfortable ranking this.
Xgor
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Xgor
I will keep it as it is..

I will not make standard normal for this map (~No ideas~)

And i like Xtreme as it is, but if enough BATs thinks that Xtreme isn't suitable for standard ranking I'll remove it from this map and let it maybe go for approval.

But no changes for now! (I'm also away from home so i can't fix anything for that matter)
whymeman
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whymeman
Sorry, but found an error in the process of modding.

For your background.png, you have a cluster of Move keyframes which needs to be fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1663

Also, the keyframe setup for Invert.png is not properly set up. You have the fade set from 01:16:981 to 02:15:597. Which this SB object is only used for less than 1 second... but also, make sure to check and adjust the keyframe use as well to make sure the SB objects are there where it is only needed.

And the fade between the effects of the SB isn't cleanly done. Please take more time to look into it.

I noticed [Lethal] And [Xtreme] are out of place in the difficulty levels? (Though the difficulty jump is quite harsh)..... But make sure to check into getting that SB fixed.
Xgor
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Xgor

whymeman wrote:

Sorry, but found an error in the process of modding.

For your background.png, you have a cluster of Move keyframes which needs to be fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1663

Also, the keyframe setup for Invert.png is not properly set up. You have the fade set from 01:16:981 to 02:15:597. Which this SB object is only used for less than 1 second... but also, make sure to check and adjust the keyframe use as well to make sure the SB objects are there where it is only needed.

And the fade between the effects of the SB isn't cleanly done. Please take more time to look into it.

I noticed [Lethal] And [Xtreme] are out of place in the difficulty levels? (Though the difficulty jump is quite harsh)..... But make sure to check into getting that SB fixed.
Fixed the cluster fuck with move and fixed with Lethal so Xtreme shows up as the hardest (It became that way due to that i lowed the HP drain on Xtreme :( )

The use of invert is intentional and i wont change that.
Crimmi
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Crimmi
Crimmi's Judgement <3 :P

Nothing Wrong Here Just Some Suggestions :) :

[Weak]
00:24:491(1) 3 tiny squares to the right under the purple (4)
00:35:128(2,3) align with (1)
01:56:341(3) align with (2)
[Strong]
No Errors... :)
[Lethal]
No Errors... :)
[Xtreme]
No Errors... :)

STARRED!!! :)
Xgor
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Xgor
Did everything exept for 00:24:491(1) which i think is better as it is
Gens
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Gens
Force default skin. There are many objects from the default skin (in a different color of course) that it might look weird using other skins...

Next, offsets are not the same between difficulties; more specifically, the third offset. Even if it's not needed to place notes, you need to make them the same on all difficulties (think about the osu! "throbber").

Also, the hitvolume is not the same for all difficulties. I DID notice it, and there should be no problem with fixing.

[Lethal]

00:35:928 (6) - The second repeat arrow is hidden by the score explosion from (4,5).

Don't know if this is a serious issue, but I'd prefer it to be fixed instead of left there.

[Xtreme]

00:53:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not stacked properly.

That's it, I guess. Call me back and I'll proto-bubble it so it gets more attention.
Xgor
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Ok, i think i fixed everything now Gens :)
Gens
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Gens
You went offline before I could tell you this:

  1. [Xtreme] - 01:48:709 (1) - This silly object needs to be resnapped.
  2. Hitvolume still isn't the same on all difficulties... Go to Song Setup -> Audio and make the "Sample Volume" the same on all difficulties.
  3. 00:53:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Still not stacked properly... the beats aren't exactly under the tail of the slider.
Still a couple things to fix.
Xgor
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Xgor

Gens wrote:

You went offline before I could tell you this:

  1. [Xtreme] - 01:48:709 (1) - This silly object needs to be resnapped.
  2. Hitvolume still isn't the same on all difficulties... Go to Song Setup -> Audio and make the "Sample Volume" the same on all difficulties.
  3. 00:53:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Still not stacked properly... the beats aren't exactly under the tail of the slider.
Still a couple things to fix.
Resnapping and stacking fix done, but the hit-volume IS the same on all difficulty :/
Gens
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Gens
BLARGH everytime I want to pubble this a new error comes out
this should be the last one

The second section has a BPM of "179.998" instead of "180" flat. Please fix it and resnap all notes.

OH, also the scorebar-bg is exactly the same as the default's, and since you forced default skin... it became useless.

and I finally see the hitvolume the same... I was pretty sure I had latest version, but oh well. =/
Xgor
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Gens wrote:

BLARGH everytime I want to pubble this a new error comes out
this should be the last one

The second section has a BPM of "179.998" instead of "180" flat. Please fix it and resnap all notes.

OH, also the scorebar-bg is exactly the same as the default's, and since you forced default skin... it became useless.

and I finally see the hitvolume the same... I was pretty sure I had latest version, but oh well. =/
The second BPM IS 179.998 <.<
And deleted the scorebar-bg.
Gens
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Gens
...it seems really weird to me to have that BPM (and I can't notice much difference between those two), but I just read awp's post. I guess it's alright if you want to keep it.

And I just noticed hitsounds are a bit messy for some people, but it's alright for me. Hopefully you won't get your pubble popped for that.

AFTER DOING A FULL RECHECK OF EVERYTHING (and clearing up some minor things in IRC), this is now Proto-bubbled.

P.S. Sorry for the delay... 3 mod posts. I need to get better at modding.
whymeman
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whymeman
1. Offset: 139ms BPM: 228.00
2. Offset: 68,561ms BPM: Inhereted (0.5x)
3. Offset: 79,236ms BPM: 179.998
4. Offset: 99,236ms BPM: 228.00
5. Offset: 100,305ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 108,709ms BPM: 28.50
7. Offset: 109,761ms BPM: 228.00
8. Offset: 117,143ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) I started to get around 8 ~ 10 ms (average) off. Make sure to double check into this since the use of extra offsets can destroy the flow of the beats if not carefully used.

Also, at 7. Offset: 109,761ms BPM: 228.00, The note sounds like it hits just a few ms too early. Double check into that as well.
Xgor
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Xgor
The timing sounds spot on foe me...

But if you have have a better offset please give me them
I doubt that Offset: 79,236ms BPM: 179.998 is wrong though... I got it from awp :P
whymeman
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whymeman
For the 2nd offset. I added 4ms and was able to work smoothly at 0 ms late/early hits. That should be all that is needed.

Edit: Just noticed the comboburst was too large. The maximum allowed width is 500px but the current amount is 536px. Have that fixed as well then i'll bubble. Sorry about that.
Xgor
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Xgor
Fixed
Edit: Both
whymeman
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whymeman
Alright then. Bubbled.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Ephemeral
Looks fine to me.

Xtreme is a bit borderline approval, but really now - it's not as if your handing 12 million to them on a platter or anything. It should be okay.

Ranked!
SilentWings_old
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Joined June 2009
SilentWings_old
I'm proud to have beaten this (even though my score didn't beat the half timers).
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
so hard T_T
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
I love it to play Xtreme on Taiko!
Cihyaa
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(ｂ^o^)ｂ
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