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[Weak]
Needs a full resnap.
00:43:029 (1) - Make it barely touch the note before it.
00:49:061 (1) - Line this up a bit better.
01:52:092 (1,2) - I'd avoid stacking a note on top of an endpoint in Easy.
[Strong]
00:51:071 (1) - Not really an intuitive jump.
02:01:088 (2) - Misaligned, move one grid left?
[Lethal]
00:45:066 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Triangles slightly misaligned, maybe turn off grid snap and rearrange?
01:43:098 (6,7,8) - Misaligned.
[Xtreme]
00:44:035 (1,2,3,4) - Make it into a better diamond?
01:07:050 (1,2,3,4) - Use the flip function to make these jumps into a perfect square.
01:25:006 (2) - Move up a few grids to line up with 1.
01:44:025 (16,17,18) - Make this the same as the previous triplets?
01:48:072 (1) - HOLD warning might be a bit late for this; becomes more of a "HAHA YOU DIDN'T HOLD NOW YOU'RE SCREWED" storyboard. XD
01:52:093 (1) - Line this up with 2, 3?
01:53:085 (4) - Unevenly spaced.
01:54:037 (6) - ^
Most of this is just for looks, I guess. Have a star for an awesome SB in general.
Needs a full resnap.
00:43:029 (1) - Make it barely touch the note before it.
00:49:061 (1) - Line this up a bit better.
01:52:092 (1,2) - I'd avoid stacking a note on top of an endpoint in Easy.
[Strong]
00:51:071 (1) - Not really an intuitive jump.
02:01:088 (2) - Misaligned, move one grid left?
[Lethal]
00:45:066 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Triangles slightly misaligned, maybe turn off grid snap and rearrange?
01:43:098 (6,7,8) - Misaligned.
[Xtreme]
00:44:035 (1,2,3,4) - Make it into a better diamond?
01:07:050 (1,2,3,4) - Use the flip function to make these jumps into a perfect square.
01:25:006 (2) - Move up a few grids to line up with 1.
01:44:025 (16,17,18) - Make this the same as the previous triplets?
01:48:072 (1) - HOLD warning might be a bit late for this; becomes more of a "HAHA YOU DIDN'T HOLD NOW YOU'RE SCREWED" storyboard. XD
01:52:093 (1) - Line this up with 2, 3?
01:53:085 (4) - Unevenly spaced.
01:54:037 (6) - ^
Most of this is just for looks, I guess. Have a star for an awesome SB in general.
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Weak]
It's ok
[Strong]
It's ok
[Lethal]
It's ok
[Xtreme]
I love it *w*
Nice map, starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Weak]
It's ok
[Strong]
It's ok
[Lethal]
It's ok
[Xtreme]
I love it *w*
Nice map, starred~
I really disliked this "song", but I really loved this map.
To make someone love a map of a song he dislikes...
...star!
To make someone love a map of a song he dislikes...
...star!
[Extreme]
At least lower overall difficulty a bit ._.
01:19:090 (2) - Add a Clap here
01:22:056 (2) - ^
01:27:090 (2) - ^
01:30:056 (2) - ^
01:33:023 (2) - ^
01:38:056 (2) - ^
[Lethal]
01:50:043 (4) - Spacing is off
I like it~
At least lower overall difficulty a bit ._.
01:19:090 (2) - Add a Clap here
01:22:056 (2) - ^
01:27:090 (2) - ^
01:30:056 (2) - ^
01:33:023 (2) - ^
01:38:056 (2) - ^
[Lethal]
01:50:043 (4) - Spacing is off
I like it~
Topic Starter
The main reason why it's so hard is that i want it to be shown as the hardest....(Stupid buggy star systemanimask wrote:
[Extreme]
At least lower overall difficulty a bit ._.
)I did lower it though and made the HP drain Higher instead.....
......wow..... 
[Weak]
00:23:29(3) - Move 1 grid down
00:50:13(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:19:23(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:37:23(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
[Strong]
00:34:87(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:06:45(1) - Move 1 grid right
02:01:88(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
[Lethal]
01:50:30(3,4,5) - Distance are different each notes. Consider these notes.
[Xtreme]
lol 1/4 hyper combos XD
Good map.
And another touhou... [Never mind]
I hope it will be ranked XD
Star this XD
00:23:29(3) - Move 1 grid down
00:50:13(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:19:23(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:37:23(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
[Strong]
00:34:87(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:06:45(1) - Move 1 grid right
02:01:88(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
[Lethal]
01:50:30(3,4,5) - Distance are different each notes. Consider these notes.
[Xtreme]
lol 1/4 hyper combos XD
Good map.
And another touhou... [Never mind]
I hope it will be ranked XD
Star this XD
[Weak]
00:59:008 (1,1) - these 2 notes dont match the spacing of any other note in the whole song and looks extremely odd, fix spacing
maybye think of making it all look a bit cleaner, atm there quite a few combo's what dont fully line up ect, so just have a look through the map and fix what you find
[Strong]
01:00:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - looooooooooooong repeating part, i got bored :/ very bored
some slider like the one at 01:57:014 (1) - seem a bit rough and could do with being more smooth
[Lethal]
01:43:019 (3,4,5) - srry nazi, these aint lined up with each other
[Xtreme]
........1.......finger.......streams >_>
00:26:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - after the first full pack of this, by the time i got here i was
1 bored of doing the same thing
2 really felt like not doing it again >_> just thought id let you kno that repeating the same thing like this again gets rather repetative
01:00:013 (1) - the pattern from here on may stop this map from getting ranked and kick it into the approved only side of thing, its just to blind to read at all without EXTREME slow down practice
01:29:006 (9,10,11,12) - this part goes all wobbly in placing, clean this up
01:57:066 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this pack of slider different spacing than the other 2 even though its the same pattern? it feel really odd
__________________
overall
not bad but your extreme feels to do the same thing too much, and theres a few things what i would not like to see in a ranked map, but if your going for approved its fine
staring for fun factor
00:59:008 (1,1) - these 2 notes dont match the spacing of any other note in the whole song and looks extremely odd, fix spacing
maybye think of making it all look a bit cleaner, atm there quite a few combo's what dont fully line up ect, so just have a look through the map and fix what you find
[Strong]
01:00:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - looooooooooooong repeating part, i got bored :/ very bored
some slider like the one at 01:57:014 (1) - seem a bit rough and could do with being more smooth
[Lethal]
01:43:019 (3,4,5) - srry nazi
, these aint lined up with each other[Xtreme]
........1.......finger.......streams >_>
00:26:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - after the first full pack of this, by the time i got here i was
1 bored of doing the same thing
2 really felt like not doing it again >_> just thought id let you kno that repeating the same thing like this again gets rather repetative
01:00:013 (1) - the pattern from here on may stop this map from getting ranked and kick it into the approved only side of thing, its just to blind to read at all without EXTREME slow down practice
01:29:006 (9,10,11,12) - this part goes all wobbly in placing, clean this up
01:57:066 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this pack of slider different spacing than the other 2 even though its the same pattern? it feel really odd
__________________
overall
not bad but your extreme feels to do the same thing too much, and theres a few things what i would not like to see in a ranked map, but if your going for approved its fine
staring for fun factor
Topic Starter
Did the stuff on Weak and Lethal (and some on Xtreme)
I don't think that the part you mentioning in Strong is repeating >.> (xenon standard is way worse and it still pretty fun)
Xtreme isn't meant to be easy but i still think it can be ranked (some other very hard difficulties has been ranked lately) and it's my first VERY hard difficulty but i still think it's ok and i won't change the two first things you mentioned....for now atleast...
I don't think that the part you mentioning in Strong is repeating >.> (xenon standard is way worse and it still pretty fun)
Xtreme isn't meant to be easy but i still think it can be ranked (some other very hard difficulties has been ranked lately) and it's my first VERY hard difficulty but i still think it's ok and i won't change the two first things you mentioned....for now atleast...
[Weak]
00:42:245 Make this slider better, like in the picture:
01:05:139 (3,1) Make a straight line
01:44:515 Finish also on the reverse arrow
02:12:393 Clap at the start+clap at the end
Some hitobjects are not snapped, please open the AImod (alt+shiftl+a on the editor)
[Strong]
00:33:034 Move 1 square up
00:34:087 Make this slider better
00:41:192 Stack with the previous (4) then align the (2) on the same line
00:53:298 claps or whistles on the slider
00:55:403 Add a whistle or a clap at the start
00:57:509 claps or whistles on the slider
01:25:236 (2,3,4) Add the whistle-rythm (= add whistles at the start)
01:35:902 whistle at the start
01:37:236 whistle
01:37:902 ^
01:48:199 add another repeat
[Lethal]
No problems.
[Xtreme]
No problems.
Nice map, starred.
00:42:245 Make this slider better, like in the picture:
01:05:139 (3,1) Make a straight line
01:44:515 Finish also on the reverse arrow
02:12:393 Clap at the start+clap at the end
Some hitobjects are not snapped, please open the AImod (alt+shiftl+a on the editor)
[Strong]
00:33:034 Move 1 square up
00:34:087 Make this slider better
00:41:192 Stack with the previous (4) then align the (2) on the same line
00:53:298 claps or whistles on the slider
00:55:403 Add a whistle or a clap at the start
00:57:509 claps or whistles on the slider
01:25:236 (2,3,4) Add the whistle-rythm (= add whistles at the start)
01:35:902 whistle at the start
01:37:236 whistle
01:37:902 ^
01:48:199 add another repeat
[Lethal]
No problems.
[Xtreme]
No problems.
Nice map, starred.
[Xtreme]
Eww, stop it with trying to make one of the hardest maps ever. :\ Probably the worst thing of osu's problem. Anyway, map is somewhat "okay" and I like the SB.
[Lethal]
00:32:771 (1-4) - A bit ugly, try to line them better up so each slider end ends on the same spot.
02:13:989 (1) - You can't see the SB because of the spinner. You might replace it with a slider or remove that part of the SB.
Rest is good and the map is playable.
[Strong]
Nothing except 02:13:989 (1) - Same as on [Lethal]
[Weak]
01:00:139 (1) until 01:07:508 (1) - I'd remove the combos and add new combos so the 3 notes are together.
02:13:972 (1) - Same as on [Lethal] and [Strong]
Eww, stop it with trying to make one of the hardest maps ever. :\ Probably the worst thing of osu's problem. Anyway, map is somewhat "okay" and I like the SB.
[Lethal]
00:32:771 (1-4) - A bit ugly, try to line them better up so each slider end ends on the same spot.
02:13:989 (1) - You can't see the SB because of the spinner. You might replace it with a slider or remove that part of the SB.
Rest is good and the map is playable.
[Strong]
Nothing except 02:13:989 (1) - Same as on [Lethal]
[Weak]
01:00:139 (1) until 01:07:508 (1) - I'd remove the combos and add new combos so the 3 notes are together.
02:13:972 (1) - Same as on [Lethal] and [Strong]
Topic Starter
The thing with the spinner covering the SB is intended (It's only supposed to be seen on Xtreme)
Also Xtreme is a map that i kinda based of a the stepmania steps of this song (The easiest diff!!!... The highest diff has way more 1/4 than Xtreme) and i also trying to train myself to be better on making hard difficulties so i made a VERY hard one
(It's only supposed to be seen on Xtreme)Also Xtreme is a map that i kinda based of a the stepmania steps of this song (The easiest diff!!!... The highest diff has way more 1/4 than Xtreme) and i also trying to train myself to be better on making hard difficulties so i made a VERY hard one
[Weak]
No Problem
[Strong]
No Problem
[Lethal]
No Problem
[Xtreme]
No Problem
NO PROBLEM FOUND!!!!!!!!!
I love your song, star
No Problem
[Strong]
No Problem
[Lethal]
No Problem
[Xtreme]
No Problem
NO PROBLEM FOUND!!!!!!!!!
I love your song, star
I didn't find any problems. Good job ^.^
star~
star~
xtreme:
00:33:082 (1) - whistle
strong:
00:25:092 (7) - should also be a whistle
00:43:003 (6) - clap
weak:
notes are not snapped
01:27:023 (1) - remove combo i guess
ahh.. this map is too.. crazy @_@"
00:33:082 (1) - whistle
strong:
00:25:092 (7) - should also be a whistle
00:43:003 (6) - clap
weak:
notes are not snapped
01:27:023 (1) - remove combo i guess
ahh.. this map is too.. crazy @_@"
Heh~~
Nice
Hitsounds are pretty nice. I'm not that great with it to be honest, I don't know how I can suggest anything better. ~~
Nice
Hitsounds are pretty nice. I'm not that great with it to be honest, I don't know how I can suggest anything better. ~~
WOAHHH!!! what a nice song...but let's go modding:
Xtreme:
other diffs. modding comming
STARRED!!
Xtreme:
SPOILER
Overall: o.o i luv it!!, but i suggest better spacing, in some parts seems just randomly assigned circles in the screen...example: 00:18:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
00:22:024 (1,2,3,4) - Misalignment
00:43:056 (4,5) - messy, space it better, it's a little bit confussing :S
01:19:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - SEEMS that u're using multi Distance snapping, i recommend using 0.8x
01:22:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:28:073 (7) - Align with circle 6
00:22:024 (1,2,3,4) - Misalignment
00:43:056 (4,5) - messy, space it better, it's a little bit confussing :S
01:19:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - SEEMS that u're using multi Distance snapping, i recommend using 0.8x
01:22:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:28:073 (7) - Align with circle 6
other diffs. modding comming
STARRED!!
Topic Starter
Ok did all the stuff on Xtreme except for a improved beginning because i have no ideas how it should look like
i continue with the other diffies...as i promisedj35u5891221 wrote:
WOAHHH!!! what a nice song...but let's go modding:
Xtreme:SPOILEROverall: o.o i luv it!!, but i suggest better spacing, in some parts seems just randomly assigned circles in the screen...example: 00:18:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
00:22:024 (1,2,3,4) - Misalignment
00:43:056 (4,5) - messy, space it better, it's a little bit confussing :S
01:19:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - SEEMS that u're using multi Distance snapping, i recommend using 0.8x
01:22:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:28:073 (7) - Align with circle 6
other diffs. modding comming
STARRED!!
Lethal:
SPOILER
Strong:Overall: I suggest increasing the "overall difficulty" 3 steps ahead (recommended), the map will be readable according to the music speed (the circle ring will close faster)
00:49:061 (1) - would be better aligned with the previous slider
00:50:053 (6) - parallel from step 5
Nice job!
(the circle ring will close faster)00:49:061 (1) - would be better aligned with the previous slider
00:50:053 (6) - parallel from step 5
Nice job!
SPOILER
00:31:071 (4) - Reverse Selection (?)
No more problems found
No more problems found
Weak:
SPOILER
Perfect! xDDD
P.S.: Thanks for the kudosu
Topic Starter
Ok I will give you kudosuon the first song (But kudosu is kudosu 
)
I will give you kudosuon the first song (But kudosu is kudosu )[Skin]
Red + Pinkple that burns your eyes sjgsdhgklsh
Remove one of those colours or something, my eyes hurt.
[SB]
01:57:14 - The BG tilts a little here. Is this intentional?
[Weak]
No things.
[Strong]
Nazi 01:47:93 (4) - 1 grid up.
Nazi 02:13:72 (3) - 1 grid down?
[Lethal]
Nazi 00:50:40 (5,6) - 1 grid left?
01:48:72 (10) - I lol'd. Not an error. who........... = Hold, lol.
[X-FUCKING-TREME]
NOTHING FOUND, BUT THAT WAS MADNESS.
Red + Pinkple that burns your eyes sjgsdhgklsh
Remove one of those colours or something, my eyes hurt.
[SB]
01:57:14 - The BG tilts a little here. Is this intentional?
[Weak]
No things.
[Strong]
Nazi 01:47:93 (4) - 1 grid up.
Nazi 02:13:72 (3) - 1 grid down?
[Lethal]
Nazi 00:50:40 (5,6) - 1 grid left?
01:48:72 (10) - I lol'd. Not an error. who........... = Hold, lol.
[X-FUCKING-TREME]
NOTHING FOUND, BUT THAT WAS MADNESS.
Topic Starter
Fixed all the complains except for the skin (for now at least)
Also, can someone make a good Medicine Melancholy combo burst (There is way to little fanart and I'm pretty bad on cutting out pictures)
Also i want more suggestions on the skin :3 (Say if you think everything is awful or if you liked the recoloring too)
Also, can someone make a good Medicine Melancholy combo burst (There is way to little fanart and I'm pretty bad on cutting out pictures)
Also i want more suggestions on the skin :3 (Say if you think everything is awful or if you liked the recoloring too)
You need to add a scorebar-bg since you have the scorebar-colour skinned. Just use the default one, I guess.
Also, I got a comboburst for you. I wish Medicine got a little more love, too. Anyway, I didn't do a perfect job shopping this (not even going to bother with the darkened parts on top and bottom) but it's good enough to be a combo burst during gameplay which is what matters!
Also, I got a comboburst for you. I wish Medicine got a little more love, too. Anyway, I didn't do a perfect job shopping this (not even going to bother with the darkened parts on top and bottom) but it's good enough to be a combo burst during gameplay which is what matters!
Topic Starter
Thanks
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Very nice, *star
[Lethal]
This is only Hard, right?
01:00:066 (2,3,4,5,6) and similar streams - Ridiculous for a Hard
If it's an Insane and your Xtreme is Impossible, then it's OK.
[Xtreme]
02:13:098 (1) - WTF was that?
[Lethal]
This is only Hard, right?
01:00:066 (2,3,4,5,6) and similar streams - Ridiculous for a Hard
If it's an Insane and your Xtreme is Impossible, then it's OK.
[Xtreme]
02:13:098 (1) - WTF was that?
Topic Starter
Also i added a hitcircleDusty wrote:
Very nice, *star
[Lethal]
This is only Hard, right?
01:00:066 (2,3,4,5,6) and similar streams - Ridiculous for a Hard
If it's an Insane and your Xtreme is Impossible, then it's OK.It's a kinda Insanish Hard but it's kinda like that on all diffs.
Well i think it's ok
[Xtreme]
02:13:098 (1) - WTF was that?
[Weak]
Add timing point - BPM 228.000 Offset 100,305ms
01:00:013 (1) - spacing. this is a new combo. but too close to previous slider.
01:32:056 (1) - too far from previous slider.
01:52:092 (1,2) - Don't stack 1 at 2's end. Is this diff for beginner? Hard to read. Also very confusing when don't use snaking slider.
[Strong]
Fine
[Lethal]
Fine
[Xtreme]
01:54:037 (6) - align with 7
star~★
What the fucking fast song! lol But so cool!
Add timing point - BPM 228.000 Offset 100,305ms
01:00:013 (1) - spacing. this is a new combo. but too close to previous slider.
01:32:056 (1) - too far from previous slider.
01:52:092 (1,2) - Don't stack 1 at 2's end. Is this diff for beginner? Hard to read. Also very confusing when don't use snaking slider.
[Strong]
Fine
[Lethal]
Fine
[Xtreme]
01:54:037 (6) - align with 7
star~★
What the fucking fast song! lol But so cool!
Topic Starter
Done
Weak
00:59:982 (1,1) Spacing might confuse new players. The previous combo had a big jump, and these are right next to each other.
Strong
01:57:147 (1,2) - Sliders don't look so good.
02:07:673 (2) - Try making this symmetrical to (1)
Oh and I see that there are a lot of parts that are repeated.
Lethal
02:12:405 (3) - Slider design seems inappropriate and kind of ugly here.
Xtreme
I'm a little worried that the Timing section with 28.50 BPM would maybe be unrankable.
If you're planning to slow it down, maybe change the BPM to a fraction of the original BPM; 22.8 BPM?
02:13:984 (1) - I love this part; Try making the slider more circular though.
00:59:982 (1,1) Spacing might confuse new players. The previous combo had a big jump, and these are right next to each other.
Strong
01:57:147 (1,2) - Sliders don't look so good.
02:07:673 (2) - Try making this symmetrical to (1)
Oh and I see that there are a lot of parts that are repeated.
Lethal
02:12:405 (3) - Slider design seems inappropriate and kind of ugly here.
Xtreme
I'm a little worried that the Timing section with 28.50 BPM would maybe be unrankable.
If you're planning to slow it down, maybe change the BPM to a fraction of the original BPM; 22.8 BPM?
02:13:984 (1) - I love this part
; Try making the slider more circular though.Xtreme is crazy....... Seriously!
That's all
lol Are you going to make this ranked?
That's all
lol Are you going to make this ranked?
Topic Starter
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I was going to say that the first offset should be -1 from the original, but I think you won't even need to do that lol...
Topic Starter
Fixed the offset anyway
Still this. Otherwise, it looks ugly for people using other skins.Soaprman wrote:
You need to add a scorebar-bg since you have the scorebar-colour skinned. Just use the default one, I guess.
also...
Xtreme
00:36:019 (2) -
00:38:029 (2) -
00:40:040 (2) -
00:44:061 (2) -
00:46:071 (2) -
00:48:082 (2) - These all seem to have been messed up in a resnap accident. Move them 1/4 beat earlier.
Topic Starter
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- [Weak]
Decrease countdown speed to Normal.
01:04:034 (3) - 1 tick right.
- [Strong]
01:56:009 (4,1) - Spacing.
02:13:098 (1) - End the spinner on white tick.
- [Lethal]
Enable countdown.
01:48:072 (10) - This slow slider is really hard too see. Even warning isn't enough. I prefer place it somewhere else.
02:13:098 (1) - End the spinner on white tick.
- [Xtreme]
Man, this difficulty is ridiculous, but it's really fun You've made a map only for lesjuh
There's nothing to mod
Lethal
00:23:014 (1) - This jump worries a little... could you pleeeaaase move it a little closer to the previous note?
Xtreme
01:47:067 (1) - Shorten by 1/2. The player needs some time to lead into the hold slider.
Bah the storyboard spinning at the end is uglyyyyyyy
00:23:014 (1) - This jump worries a little... could you pleeeaaase move it a little closer to the previous note?
Xtreme
01:47:067 (1) - Shorten by 1/2. The player needs some time to lead into the hold slider.
Bah the storyboard spinning at the end is uglyyyyyyy