from my queue as M4M sorry for late ;w;
[General]
[Insane]
[General]
- current offset feels little it wrong, try 2nd offset : 9541 (+6) and 3rd offset : 10181 (-9)
- 00:40:681 (1) - same opinion with Normal, try to arrange the claps
- 00:07:364 (1) - snap the end of spinner
- 00:14:124 (3) - add clap on the end of slider
- 00:15:763 (1) - missed clap as well
- 00:24:944 (2,3) - this pattern hears awkward comparing with the vocal, i have a rhythm suggestion about this
- 01:21:009 (1) - delete NC, it doesn't needed
- 01:24:944 (1) - why don't you move last slider point to little bit upward for better flow? well it's nazi but try it or just move next note to right side
- 00:16:900 (1) - delete NC for consistency
- 00:18:048 (5) - for better match with the rhythm, try moving this note to 00:17:883 - here and pulling the spinner by 1/4 beat forward as well (and adjustig the length too)
- 00:40:681 (1) - consider arranging the claps to match with drum sound on this part
- 00:48:222 (1) - missed clap on the slider end
- 00:49:862 (3) - i think this clap is unnecessary, delete it?
- 01:27:567 (8) - it's totally unrankable according to the ranking criteria, all of hitsounds are audible enough, so you need to increase the volume (by 30% recommended)
- 01:00:681 (3,4) - how about shortening these sliders by 1/4? and add 2 repeats as well for better rhythm than current one, just like 00:09:535 (1,2) - these
- 01:26:255 (4) - hmm adding clap on the slider start instead of the end fits better with the song
[Insane]
- hitsound suggestionsit would be better if you add some missed claps even drum sounds are on the song
00:10:845 (3) - you need to add more whistles for example on this slider end and there are many objects which have same problem like here, you'd better to fix them all
00:30:517 (3) - try adding whistle here since you can hear the same sound on this slider start, you'd better to add it too (and this should be applied equally throughout the diff)
00:39:862 (4) - it seems like you didn't add clap on the drum sound but since you added clap on next slider, i think you need to add clap on this note which has same drum sound with next slider as well. btw it'll be mch better if you add claps on other drum sounds too for example like 00:29:206 (3,4) - here
00:41:501 (5) - same as above
00:44:452 (2) - same clap suggestion with above
00:46:747 (4) - yea add clap on here tooooo
00:49:534 (6,7) - move the clap on (6) to next slider start
00:50:189 (8) - add clap on the slider start
01:26:255 (1) - try clap here
- check AIMod first
- 00:19:698 (1,2) - according to the music (especially on the vocal), reversing this rhythm fits better than current one or just use ctrl g feels nice as well
- 00:23:222 (5) - well this note doesn't make any sense imao,it's not really weird but there isn'y any audible sound for it :< just try deleting it. you can also find better feeling of the rhythm after delete this note if you reverse 00:23:140 (4,1) - this rhythm
- 00:24:534 - this is the place which needs a note to follow piano sound
- 00:25:763 (6) - you might have a mistake on placing whistle
- 00:43:632 (5) - i don't prefer to do nazi mod but you can improve this slider shape in better way
- 00:54:124 (3) - how about expanind this slider by 3/4? just do like previous slider, it feels little bit better
- 01:13:304 (7,8,9) - current pattern feels kinda breaking the flow imo, it plays little bit weird (at least to me) try another pattern like following image
- 01:15:435 (6,7) - what about reversing the sliders each? (not rhythm but flow). Current sliders aren't bad but not good enough for me :<, result should be like this if you follow my suggestion
- 01:21:337 (3,4,5,6) - another rhythmic issue here, i don't want to impose my style to the other people but i have better solution