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Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale (TV Size)

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Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
AWESOME,
From my queue

Easy
Fun to play, but a little fast, but yeah, try slowing it down. I'm also not a huge fan off al the sliders, I really dislike the 1 1/2 Repeats, sorry.

Normal
Also plays kind of fast, but it is normal, I accept it here. I kind of dislike the + 1 DS, please, use 1.0 or below, since it is not hard.

Hard
Great, Some sliders are a bit weird, like 42:976, but it plays fun

Insane
Can't say anything about it, too bad I can't stream above 145 -_-
Sure that the SV is okay, with 1,83?
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
from my queue as M4M sorry for late ;w;

[General]
  1. current offset feels little it wrong, try 2nd offset : 9541 (+6) and 3rd offset : 10181 (-9)
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:681 (1) - same opinion with Normal, try to arrange the claps
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:364 (1) - snap the end of spinner
  2. 00:14:124 (3) - add clap on the end of slider
  3. 00:15:763 (1) - missed clap as well
  4. 00:24:944 (2,3) - this pattern hears awkward comparing with the vocal, i have a rhythm suggestion about this
    example
  5. 01:21:009 (1) - delete NC, it doesn't needed
  6. 01:24:944 (1) - why don't you move last slider point to little bit upward for better flow? well it's nazi but try it or just move next note to right side
    examples
[pkhs's Hard]
  1. 00:16:900 (1) - delete NC for consistency
  2. 00:18:048 (5) - for better match with the rhythm, try moving this note to 00:17:883 - here and pulling the spinner by 1/4 beat forward as well (and adjustig the length too)
    example
  3. 00:40:681 (1) - consider arranging the claps to match with drum sound on this part
  4. 00:48:222 (1) - missed clap on the slider end
  5. 00:49:862 (3) - i think this clap is unnecessary, delete it?
  6. 01:27:567 (8) - it's totally unrankable according to the ranking criteria, all of hitsounds are audible enough, so you need to increase the volume (by 30% recommended)
  7. 01:00:681 (3,4) - how about shortening these sliders by 1/4? and add 2 repeats as well for better rhythm than current one, just like 00:09:535 (1,2) - these
  8. 01:26:255 (4) - hmm adding clap on the slider start instead of the end fits better with the song


[Insane]

  • hitsound suggestions
    it would be better if you add some missed claps even drum sounds are on the song

    00:10:845 (3) - you need to add more whistles for example on this slider end and there are many objects which have same problem like here, you'd better to fix them all
    00:30:517 (3) - try adding whistle here since you can hear the same sound on this slider start, you'd better to add it too (and this should be applied equally throughout the diff)
    00:39:862 (4) - it seems like you didn't add clap on the drum sound but since you added clap on next slider, i think you need to add clap on this note which has same drum sound with next slider as well. btw it'll be mch better if you add claps on other drum sounds too for example like 00:29:206 (3,4) - here
    00:41:501 (5) - same as above
    00:44:452 (2) - same clap suggestion with above
    00:46:747 (4) - yea add clap on here tooooo
    00:49:534 (6,7) - move the clap on (6) to next slider start
    00:50:189 (8) - add clap on the slider start
    01:26:255 (1) - try clap here
  1. check AIMod first
  2. 00:19:698 (1,2) - according to the music (especially on the vocal), reversing this rhythm fits better than current one or just use ctrl g feels nice as well
  3. 00:23:222 (5) - well this note doesn't make any sense imao,it's not really weird but there isn'y any audible sound for it :< just try deleting it. you can also find better feeling of the rhythm after delete this note if you reverse 00:23:140 (4,1) - this rhythm
  4. 00:24:534 - this is the place which needs a note to follow piano sound
  5. 00:25:763 (6) - you might have a mistake on placing whistle
  6. 00:43:632 (5) - i don't prefer to do nazi mod but you can improve this slider shape in better way
  7. 00:54:124 (3) - how about expanind this slider by 3/4? just do like previous slider, it feels little bit better
  8. 01:13:304 (7,8,9) - current pattern feels kinda breaking the flow imo, it plays little bit weird (at least to me) try another pattern like following image
    example
  9. 01:15:435 (6,7) - what about reversing the sliders each? (not rhythm but flow). Current sliders aren't bad but not good enough for me :<, result should be like this if you follow my suggestion
    example
  10. 01:21:337 (3,4,5,6) - another rhythmic issue here, i don't want to impose my style to the other people but i have better solution
    exmaple
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
From my queue~ :3
[General]
01:27:649 -Finish.
01:30:189 -Volume 30%
[Easy]
00:07:364 -Edit spinner and make it till 00:09:453
00:16:747 -No need for spinner but 00:18:058 needs a spinner. :3
01:06:255 -Move.
01:07:567 -^
[Normal]
00:11:173 -Move.
00:14:124 -^
00:18:222 -Edit spinner and move it backwards till 00:18:140 and then make it till 00:19:370
00:22:321 -Move.
00:25:435 -^
00:31:501 -^
00:32:812 -^
00:37:403 -^
00:47:239 -^
01:02:976 -^
01:09:042 -^
01:09:206 -^
01:26:255 -^
[pkhg's Hard]
01:00:681 - How about these sliders? :3
[Insane]
00:07:364 -Edit spinner and move it backwards till 00:07:269 and then make the spinner long till 00:08:693
00:18:222 -^ Move it backwards till 00:18:140 and then make it long till 00:19:370

Sorry for the late mod~ >.<''

GL~! c: Take a star. ^^
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue as M4M sorry for late ;w;

[General]
  1. current offset feels little it wrong, try 2nd offset : 9541 (+6) and 3rd offset : 10181 (-9)
sorry but I think the current offset is fine

[Easy]
  1. 00:40:681 (1) - same opinion with Normal, try to arrange the claps
Ok fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:364 (1) - snap the end of spinner
  2. 00:14:124 (3) - add clap on the end of slider
  3. 00:15:763 (1) - missed clap as well
  4. 00:24:944 (2,3) - this pattern hears awkward comparing with the vocal, i have a rhythm suggestion about this
    example
  5. 01:21:009 (1) - delete NC, it doesn't needed

    All mods fixed up to this point
  6. 01:24:944 (1) - why don't you move last slider point to little bit upward for better flow? well it's nazi but try it or just move next note to right side
    examples
sorry no change. I know you're trying to be helpful and I know that you are a good person and modder, but in my opinion, nazi mods are slightly redundant because they make such a small difference anyways


[pkhs's Hard]
  1. 00:16:900 (1) - delete NC for consistency
  2. 00:18:048 (5) - for better match with the rhythm, try moving this note to 00:17:883 - here and pulling the spinner by 1/4 beat forward as well (and adjustig the length too)
    example
  3. 00:40:681 (1) - consider arranging the claps to match with drum sound on this part
  4. 00:48:222 (1) - missed clap on the slider end
  5. 00:49:862 (3) - i think this clap is unnecessary, delete it?
  6. 01:27:567 (8) - it's totally unrankable according to the ranking criteria, all of hitsounds are audible enough, so you need to increase the volume (by 30% recommended)
  7. 01:00:681 (3,4) - how about shortening these sliders by 1/4? and add 2 repeats as well for better rhythm than current one, just like 00:09:535 (1,2) - these
  8. 01:26:255 (4) - hmm adding clap on the slider start instead of the end fits better with the song


[Insane]

  • hitsound suggestions
    it would be better if you add some missed claps even drum sounds are on the song

    00:10:845 (3) - you need to add more whistles for example on this slider end and there are many objects which have same problem like here, you'd better to fix them all
    00:30:517 (3) - try adding whistle here since you can hear the same sound on this slider start, you'd better to add it too (and this should be applied equally throughout the diff)
    00:39:862 (4) - it seems like you didn't add clap on the drum sound but since you added clap on next slider, i think you need to add clap on this note which has same drum sound with next slider as well. btw it'll be mch better if you add claps on other drum sounds too for example like 00:29:206 (3,4) - here
    00:41:501 (5) - same as above
    00:44:452 (2) - same clap suggestion with above
    00:46:747 (4) - yea add clap on here tooooo
    00:49:534 (6,7) - move the clap on (6) to next slider start
    00:50:189 (8) - add clap on the slider start
    01:26:255 (1) - try clap here
  1. check AIMod first
  2. 00:19:698 (1,2) - according to the music (especially on the vocal), reversing this rhythm fits better than current one or just use ctrl g feels nice as well
  3. 00:23:222 (5) - well this note doesn't make any sense imao,it's not really weird but there isn'y any audible sound for it :< just try deleting it. you can also find better feeling of the rhythm after delete this note if you reverse 00:23:140 (4,1) - this rhythm
  4. 00:24:534 - this is the place which needs a note to follow piano sound
  5. 00:25:763 (6) - you might have a mistake on placing whistle
  6. 00:43:632 (5) - i don't prefer to do nazi mod but you can improve this slider shape in better way
  7. 00:54:124 (3) - how about expanind this slider by 3/4? just do like previous slider, it feels little bit better
  8. 01:13:304 (7,8,9) - current pattern feels kinda breaking the flow imo, it plays little bit weird (at least to me) try another pattern like following image
    example
  9. 01:15:435 (6,7) - what about reversing the sliders each? (not rhythm but flow). Current sliders aren't bad but not good enough for me :<, result should be like this if you follow my suggestion
    example
  10. 01:21:337 (3,4,5,6) - another rhythmic issue here, i don't want to impose my style to the other people but i have better solution
    exmaple
I will check the Insane mods next time and do a separate reply then
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
from m4m :)

[General]
  1. BG size is not exactly 16:9. It should be 1366*768 instead.
  2. Uncheck all the "Widescreen Support" boxes to make it consistent.
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:649 (3) - I would prefer something like this which makes it more aesthetic.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:157 (8,1) - blanket them perfectly.
  3. 00:34:288 (6,7) - As a player, this flow is not comfortable imo. How about making it like this?
    SPOILER
  4. 01:03:960 (1,2) - ^
  5. Personally, I think the flow can be improved a bit.
[Hard]
  1. 00:44:288 (3,4) - I heard a loud sound at 00:44:452, 00:44:780 and 00:45:108, but silent at 00:44:616. Why don't you capture them?
  2. 00:48:222 (1,2) - prefect blanket please.
  3. 00:49:206 (2,3) - this flow is a bit weird imo. Instead I will make it like this:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:49:698 - Also here is a large drum sound here. Try catching it using a circle?
[Normal]
  1. Flow can be greatly improved in this difficulty. The shape of sliders can be copied and reused since you keep using sliders like these:
    Shapes of Sliders

    Examples of flow
    01:02:976 (3,4) - I would rather do it like this:

    Hope you understand what I mean by flow.
  2. 00:06:415 (3,4) - blanket perfectly so as to make the flow cleaner.
  3. 00:10:190 (1,2) - awkward flow imo.
  4. 00:14:124 (3) - head: (228,112); end: (180,68) for better flow.
  5. 00:21:009 (3,1) - perfect blanket.
  6. 00:29:862 (1,2) - flow.
  7. 00:31:173 - loud sound here, why not capture it?
  8. 00:32:157 (6) - I would NC here and remove NC of 00:32:976 (1) so as to make the combo number less.
  9. 00:35:927 - ^
  10. 00:37:567 (5) - I would just put a circle at 00:37:730 to capture the drum coz these three 00:35:108 (1,2,3) are following the drum instead of lyrics. It would be quite uncomfortable if you suddenly switch to follow lyrics in the same combo.
  11. 00:46:255 (2) - How about considering a blanket?
  12. 00:52:812 (4) - NC
  13. 01:03:960 (1,2) - blanket.
  14. 01:05:927 (4) - flow.
  15. 01:06:583 (1) - make it straight like 01:07:239 (2).
  16. For stuff about flow, I have skipped pretty much of them. I think you need to recheck them one by one.
[Easy]
  1. Same as normal, the flow seems awkward and uncomfortable. Therefore, recheck is suggested.
  2. Rhythm is fine for me.
So, let's all. Good luck for ranking. :)
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
HI~ M4M


General:
  1. 1365x768 your bg have a weird size D: is not a problem but will be better to have it in 1366x768

Insane:
  1. 00:02:618 (1) - missing whistle on the head
  2. 00:03:377 (3,4) - mmm you can improve this rhythm since the vocal at 00:03:757 need a click'able action since is an important beat in the song at this point also 00:03:947 (4) - this one don't have a big empathize with the music if you wanna give to the player a better feedback maybe try:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:05:276 (4,1,2,3) - you can blank all this stuff better use the aproach circle to make this better since the curve of the sliders dont blank perfectly the circles and is very noticeable
  4. 00:06:415 (3) - Is an insane diff this sliders are not fun to play imo also it end on a heavy beat try a more properly rhythm instead? some like will be better:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:07:364 (1) - the spinner sound alot better starting 1/4 early in 00:07:269
  6. 00:11:501 (1,2,3) - Use the same spacing between then your actually way is kinda hard to read properly some easy like move 00:11:993 (2) - x:168 y:136 will play alot better
  7. 00:12:812 (1,2,3,4) - look like a bad blanket i know maybe you have not the intenion to blank here but for that reason look like a mistake why dont blank them perfect intead your map will look alot better imo some like:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:13:304 (2,3,4) - stack this properly
  9. 00:14:452 (2,5) - I can hear cymbals there are finish in both slider heads sound prety nice try and listen maybe it work for you
  10. 00:16:747 (1) - missing finish in the head
  11. 00:17:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - nothing in the music here since this stream sound bad cuz is clearly not in the music since 1/2 repeat will work alot better here imo
  12. 00:18:222 (1) - same as 00:07:364
  13. 00:19:862 (2,3) - the upbeat sliders are not following the music here since you are leaving the strong beats as a tails I really recomend you to change the rhythm here for better empathize with the music some like:
    SPOILER
  14. 00:22:649 (3) - 1/2 repeat can fit alot better here since you are mainly following the vocals why you ignore the one at 00:22:812
  15. 00:23:796 (3,4) - this blanket can be a bit better use the aproach circle to make it better
  16. 00:26:911 (3,4) - same as above
  17. 00:28:550 (1) - missing finish on the head
  18. 00:31:009 (5,6) - smae with the sliders starting on upbeats they dont fit with the drums and for that reason that sliders dont play with the rhythm of the song maybe try another one instead just as suggestion:
    SPOILER
  19. 00:33:468 (3) - rotate this in -100 selection center will improve alot the flow with previous and next slider
  20. 00:35:599 (2,3,4) - use the same spacing between them
  21. 00:37:730 if you ask me will be alot better if you map this sound like you did on previous symilars
  22. 00:44:288 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between this some like moving 3 to x:129 y: 171 will be nice
  23. 01:00:026 (5,6,7) - stack this properly
  24. 01:01:993 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  25. 01:02:321 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  26. 01:03:304 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  27. 01:03:632 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  28. 01:03:140 (6,7,8) - you can do a better blank here use the aproach circle to make them better
  29. 01:04:452 (2,3) - this feel kinda forced when you play try to improve the flow here
  30. 01:05:271 (5) - missing finish on the head
  31. 01:13:468 (8,1) - stack this properly

Hard:
  1. 00:07:174 (5) - following your combo pattern this need to be NC too right? also the section in the music change here
  2. 00:16:911 (1,2) - kinda broken flow here maybe you can makethe conecction more natural here? since feel kinda forced to play right now imo
  3. 00:18:058 (5) - missing NC also add whistle on it fit alot with the music at this point
  4. 00:30:845 (4,5) - really nazi but you can blank this better thought
  5. 00:31:009 missing NC i suppose since you was using them every stanza
  6. 00:36:255 (4) - same as above
  7. 00:37:730 (7,1) - swap NC for consistency since this broke your pattern
  8. 00:39:042 (1,1) - stack them properly
  9. 00:40:353 (1) - missing finish on the head
  10. 00:46:583 (2,3,4,5,6) - nazi but this start pattern dont look o.o perfect try to make it with the tool instead will be alot better~
  11. 00:49:206 (2) - finishing sliders on heavy beats don't follow the song properly try to conver this one 00:49:206 (2) - in 2 circles for better empathize with the song
  12. 00:50:845 (1) - add finish on the head fit alot with the song
  13. 01:10:517 (1) - remove NC? in this section u was using them every 2 stanzas this one broke that pattern
  14. 01:27:567 missing NC here too~

Normal:
  1. OD and HP +1 (4) for better diff spread is also what fit better with the object density and the difficult of this map
  2. 00:03:377 (2) - ending sliders on heavy beats don't fit the song if you listen the measure at 00:04:136 is really important and deserve to be mapped as a circle or a slider head try a better rhythm here some like:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:896 (1,2) - same as above
  4. 00:15:108 (5) - same as the others ending sliders on stanzas is not cool for the rhythm since that important beats need a clickable action is where the empathize of the song is try:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:20:353 (2) - symilar as above maybe just conver this on 2 circles for better rhythm?
  6. 00:22:649 (3) - same as 00:15:108
  7. 00:24:288 (1) - ^
  8. 00:29:862 (1) - to soon after spinner for a normal diff my suggestion for this is remove the spinner and map that part properly instead
  9. 00:32:157 (6) - same as 00:15:108
  10. 00:35:763 (2,3,4) - use a properly distance here you was using 1.0 in all the mapset not sure why you reduce it to 1.0 here since not slowdown or stuff here also the music is continue better keep it consistent
  11. 00:37:567 (5) - following your every 2 measures pattern you are missing a NC here also remove NC from 00:39:042 (1) - too to keep your pattern consistent
  12. 00:39:698 (3) - same as 00:15:108 also missing finish in 00:40:353
  13. 00:55:763 (3) - same as above
  14. 01:04:616 (2) - ^

Easy:
  1. AR3 OD2 HP2 fit this diff best also for better spread between your diffs
  2. 00:15:108 (1) - same issue here ending sliders on the stronger beats of the song make a bad rhythm just conver this in 2 circles or change the position of 00:15:108 (1,2) - in the time line
    SPOILER
  3. 00:21:337 (3) - symilar as above
  4. 00:32:157 (4) - ^
  5. 00:40:026 (4) - ^
  6. 00:54:780 (3) - ^


mmm the diff are fine but since ending sliders on strong beats don't fit much with the song imo anyways GL :3
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
From My Queue~ :)
Sorry I'm late...


00:21:911 - add circle, follow piano??
00:24:534 - add circle??
01:07:567 (6) - reverse selection
01:08:222 (8) - ^
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this...I just hear 4 sound and 3 drum hits. del circle(2). (4). (6) better


pkhg's Hard
00:39:042 (1) - It's no any sound and voice on 00:39:370 , this is better:

00:42:157 - add circle
00:44:780 - ^
00:45:599 (1) - follow lyric... 00:45:927 - voice tart here
00:46:583 (2,3,4,5,6) - what do these circle follow?? Follow lyric better
00:49:698 - add circle
01:00:026 (1,2,3,4) - follow drum better


Normal
00:31:665 - voice is here, not 00:31:829 (5)
00:37:403 (4,5) - try this:

00:39:698 (3) - del this, replace a circle, and 00:40:026 add 1/1 slider
00:44:288 (3,4) - blanket this
00:51:993 (3) - I know you follow lyric, but slider start on white line
01:26:255 (1) - change a clircle

Un...Try make Normal diff have a good look, it is bad look now. :o


Easy
00:22:321 (4) - circle??
00:39:042 (3) - slider end on 00:39:534

same as Normal...bad look...but make better than Normal

Good luck :) and Sorry I'm late :(
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

IamKwaN wrote:

from m4m :)

[General]
  1. BG size is not exactly 16:9. It should be 1366*768 instead.
  2. Uncheck all the "Widescreen Support" boxes to make it consistent.
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:649 (3) - I would prefer something like this which makes it more aesthetic.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:157 (8,1) - blanket them perfectly.
  3. 00:34:288 (6,7) - As a player, this flow is not comfortable imo. How about making it like this?
    SPOILER
  4. 01:03:960 (1,2) - ^
  5. Personally, I think the flow can be improved a bit.
fixed all insane mods

[Hard]
  1. 00:44:288 (3,4) - I heard a loud sound at 00:44:452, 00:44:780 and 00:45:108, but silent at 00:44:616. Why don't you capture them?
  2. 00:48:222 (1,2) - prefect blanket please.
  3. 00:49:206 (2,3) - this flow is a bit weird imo. Instead I will make it like this:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:49:698 - Also here is a large drum sound here. Try catching it using a circle?
[Normal]
  1. Flow can be greatly improved in this difficulty. The shape of sliders can be copied and reused since you keep using sliders like these:
    Shapes of Sliders

    Examples of flow
    01:02:976 (3,4) - I would rather do it like this:

    Hope you understand what I mean by flow.
  2. 00:06:415 (3,4) - blanket perfectly so as to make the flow cleaner.
  3. 00:10:190 (1,2) - awkward flow imo.
  4. 00:14:124 (3) - head: (228,112); end: (180,68) for better flow.
  5. 00:21:009 (3,1) - perfect blanket.
  6. 00:29:862 (1,2) - flow.
  7. 00:31:173 - loud sound here, why not capture it?
  8. 00:32:157 (6) - I would NC here and remove NC of 00:32:976 (1) so as to make the combo number less.
  9. 00:35:927 - ^
  10. 00:37:567 (5) - I would just put a circle at 00:37:730 to capture the drum coz these three 00:35:108 (1,2,3) are following the drum instead of lyrics. It would be quite uncomfortable if you suddenly switch to follow lyrics in the same combo.
  11. 00:46:255 (2) - How about considering a blanket?
  12. 00:52:812 (4) - NC
  13. 01:03:960 (1,2) - blanket.
  14. 01:05:927 (4) - flow.
  15. 01:06:583 (1) - make it straight like 01:07:239 (2).
  16. For stuff about flow, I have skipped pretty much of them. I think you need to recheck them one by one.
I have fixed most of the mods but what I dont understand is what you mean by flow. all the notes are already easy enough to follow, and there is no jump at all. so I did not change any of your "flow" mods

[Easy]
  1. Same as normal, the flow seems awkward and uncomfortable. Therefore, recheck is suggested.
  2. Rhythm is fine for me.
Like i said, I dont see anything wrong with flow.

So, let's all. Good luck for ranking. :)
thanks for modding.
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
hey m4m action here

General:
clear

Insane:
00:27:567 (5) - inverse this one for better flow http://puu.sh/6wm2n.jpg
00:43:632 (5) - let's fix this slider a bit http://puu.sh/6wmc3.jpg
256,92,43632,2,0,B|236:132|256:192|256:192|276:252|256:292,1,205.875007853508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:45:599 (1) - move this 420:212 for better curve
00:58:222 (7) - better to keep DS equal between sliders 6 and 8 http://puu.sh/6wmif.jpg
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01:13:468 (8) - tricky spot, nothing bad tho
01:14:452 (3) - maybe smooth this http://puu.sh/6wmno.jpg
sweet diff

pkhg's Hard
00:21:665 (7) - touching hp bar
nothing more, awesome diff

Normal:
00:11:501 (4) - mb http://puu.sh/6wmEu.jpg
00:51:501 (2) - and here http://puu.sh/6wmIa.jpg
01:19:370 (5) - http://puu.sh/6wmLb.jpg

Easy:
all is good

Good Luck!

edit: checked this out again as you asked, nothing more (:
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
HelloSCV

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue as M4M sorry for late ;w;
[pkhs's Hard]
  1. 00:16:900 (1) - delete NC for consistency Removed
  2. 00:18:048 (5) - for better match with the rhythm, try moving this note to 00:17:883 - here and pulling the spinner by 1/4 beat forward as well (and adjustig the length too) Done
  3. 00:40:681 (1) - consider arranging the claps to match with drum sound on this part lazzy :3 i'll do later
  4. 00:48:222 (1) - missed clap on the slider end Added
  5. 00:49:862 (3) - i think this clap is unnecessary, delete it? Deleted
  6. 01:27:567 (8) - it's totally unrankable according to the ranking criteria, all of hitsounds are audible enough, so you need to increase the volume (by 30% recommended) Moved green line instead
  7. 01:00:681 (3,4) - how about shortening these sliders by 1/4? and add 2 repeats as well for better rhythm than current one, just like 00:09:535 (1,2) - these Donee
  8. 01:26:255 (4) - hmm adding clap on the slider start instead of the end fits better with the song yeah :D

Lapis Aoki

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue~ :3
[General]
[pkhg's Hard]
01:00:681 - How about these sliders? :3 Donee
Sorry for the late mod~ >.<''

GL~! c: Take a star. ^^


IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:

from m4m :)

[Hard]
  1. 00:44:288 (3,4) - I heard a loud sound at 00:44:452, 00:44:780 and 00:45:108, but silent at 00:44:616. Why don't you capture them? Why not?
  2. 00:48:222 (1,2) - prefect blanket please. Ok
  3. 00:49:206 (2,3) - this flow is a bit weird imo. Instead I will make it like this: No :P
    SPOILER
  4. 00:49:698 - Also here is a large drum sound here. Try catching it using a circle? No >:([/*:m]
So, let's all. Good luck for ranking. :)

Natsu

Natsu wrote:

HI~ M4M

Hard:
  1. 00:07:174 (5) - following your combo pattern this need to be NC too right? also the section in the music change here For me it's really useless
  2. 00:16:911 (1,2) - kinda broken flow here maybe you can makethe conecction more natural here? since feel kinda forced to play right now imo Ok
  3. 00:18:058 (5) - missing NC also add whistle on it fit alot with the music at this point It's already NCed and it have whistle too x.x
  4. 00:30:845 (4,5) - really nazi but you can blank this better thought Ok
  5. 00:31:009 missing NC i suppose since you was using them every stanza It don't need NC :3
  6. 00:36:255 (4) - same as above ^
  7. 00:37:730 (7,1) - swap NC for consistency since this broke your pattern lol it doesn't broke my pattern, i usually do it like that, look this 00:55:763 (4,1) -
  8. 00:39:042 (1,1) - stack them properly Ok
  9. 00:40:353 (1) - missing finish on the head Added
  10. 00:46:583 (2,3,4,5,6) - nazi but this start pattern dont look o.o perfect try to make it with the tool instead will be alot better~ Okk
  11. 00:49:206 (2) - finishing sliders on heavy beats don't follow the song properly try to conver this one 00:49:206 (2) - in 2 circles for better empathize with the song I'll remap that part later
  12. 00:50:845 (1) - add finish on the head fit alot with the song Ok
  13. 01:10:517 (1) - remove NC? in this section u was using them every 2 stanzas this one broke that pattern Nopee
  14. 01:27:567 missing NC here too~ Useless~~


m1223961117

m1223961117 wrote:

From My Queue~ :)
Sorry I'm late...
pkhg's Hard
00:39:042 (1) - It's no any sound and voice on 00:39:370 , this is better: But it's a nice pattern

00:42:157 - add circle I'll remap later
00:44:780 - ^
00:45:599 (1) - follow lyric... 00:45:927 - voice tart here
00:46:583 (2,3,4,5,6) - what do these circle follow?? Follow lyric better
00:49:698 - add circle
01:00:026 (1,2,3,4) - follow drum better Ok

Good luck :) and Sorry I'm late :(

Sieg

Sieg wrote:

hey m4m action here
pkhg's Hard
00:21:665 (7) - touching hp bar Fixedd
nothing more, awesome diff

Good Luck!

edit: checked this out again as you asked, nothing more (:

Thanks :D

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88,196,67239,2,0,P|88:236|64:268,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,67567,2,0,P|136:348|180:352,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,296,67894,2,0,L|248:148,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,68386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,68550,2,0,L|293:87,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,68878,2,0,P|184:88|136:80,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,124,69206,6,0,B|76:172|36:192|36:192|92:240,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,69698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,69862,2,0,P|180:184|144:184,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,307,70189,2,0,P|143:288|160:256,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,132,70517,6,0,P|284:84|364:96,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,71009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,220,71173,2,0,P|320:196|320:140,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,236,71665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,256,71829,6,0,L|120:280,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,168,72321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,168,72485,2,0,P|56:202|60:240,2,75,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,104,72976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,73140,2,0,P|200:112|272:48,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,36,73632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,20,73796,6,0,L|420:16,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,88,74124,2,0,P|432:124|436:172,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,204,74452,2,0,B|400:240|440:240|440:240|384:296,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,260,74944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,75108,2,0,P|208:232|168:248,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,312,75435,2,0,P|108:320|148:304,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,244,75763,2,0,L|92:84,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,44,76255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,76419,6,0,P|208:100|248:88,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,32,76747,2,0,P|308:60|316:100,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,77075,2,0,P|340:168|392:104,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,36,77567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,77730,2,0,P|468:104|464:144,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,78058,2,0,P|424:236|444:276,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,320,78386,6,0,B|344:308|312:328|312:328|280:348|240:336,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,78878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,79042,2,0,P|136:272|104:280,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,324,79370,2,0,P|40:288|52:236,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,204,79698,6,0,P|132:152|92:76,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,76,80189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,144,80353,2,0,L|212:116,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,80845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,81009,6,0,P|301:147|277:123,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,81337,2,0,P|416:224|460:236,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,81665,6,0,L|224:240,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,184,81993,2,0,L|164:200,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,160,82321,6,0,B|244:116|220:80|220:80|240:52|280:60,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,82812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,82976,2,0,P|340:140|380:136,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,83304,2,0,P|456:216|448:256,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,83632,2,0,L|256:320,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,84124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,84288,2,0,P|148:184|156:144,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,32,84616,2,0,P|220:72|212:112,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,180,84944,6,0,L|72:196,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,228,85763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,276,85927,2,0,P|368:284|420:264,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,86255,2,0,P|344:136|392:80,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,161,86747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,161,86911,2,0,P|455:164|420:152,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,87239,2,0,P|252:64|212:68,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,108,87567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87649,12,0,90189,0:0:0:0:
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

Sieg wrote:

hey m4m action here

General:
clear

Insane:
00:27:567 (5) - inverse this one for better flow http://puu.sh/6wm2n.jpg
00:43:632 (5) - let's fix this slider a bit http://puu.sh/6wmc3.jpg
256,92,43632,2,0,B|236:132|256:192|256:192|276:252|256:292,1,205.875007853508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:45:599 (1) - move this 420:212 for better curve
00:58:222 (7) - better to keep DS equal between sliders 6 and 8 http://puu.sh/6wmif.jpg
383,196,57730,2,0,P|432:136|416:24,1,183,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,58222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,58386,2,0,P|224:92|256:164,1,91.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:13:468 (8) - tricky spot, nothing bad tho
01:14:452 (3) - maybe smooth this http://puu.sh/6wmno.jpg
sweet diff

pkhg's Hard
00:21:665 (7) - touching hp bar
nothing more, awesome diff

Normal:
00:11:501 (4) - mb http://puu.sh/6wmEu.jpg
00:51:501 (2) - and here http://puu.sh/6wmIa.jpg
01:19:370 (5) - http://puu.sh/6wmLb.jpg

Easy:
all is good

Good Luck!

edit: checked this out again as you asked, nothing more (:
Thanks! Fixed all~

@pkhg updated
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
m4m

[General]
Your Easy has a too high star rating. A set of beatmap must has at least one difficulty no higher than 3.24 stars. Please consider some change.

[Insane]
I still except a better map, since you already have a ranked map. Suggest remap on arrangement. (hitsound is fine)
00:14:124 (1,2) - I don't like the flow. Suggestion:
SPOILER
00:15:435 (1,2,3) - the jump is too "modest". also flow can be improved.
00:16:747 (1) - rotate 15 degrees anti-clockwise. so does 00:17:403 (3) -
00:18:058 (5) - delete? should sound good. also make 00:18:222 (1) - start at 00:18:058 -
00:23:140 (4,5,1) - fmpov, the triple should be at 00:22:894 - . please consider a little.
00:24:534 - add a note I think. it's so obvious. (arrangement suggestion)
SPOILER
00:25:599 (5) - keeping 1.2x DS isn't a bad idea.
00:30:517 (3) - keep the distance with 00:29:862 (1) - , maybe move to x:328,y:224
00:35:108 (1,2) - please use ctrl+c, ctrl+v, and rotate to make a better context.
00:58:222 (7) - use the approach circle to make better blanket, e.g.:
SPOILER
kiai time: the jump is too "modest", as previous ones. Please refer to some of Laurier's, Fycho's or Melophobia's maps.

[Hard]
00:02:618 - change to S:C1 to avoid noisy sliderslide. also change volume to 30%.
some nitpicking:
00:51:337 (2) - 01:07:075 (2) - 01:22:812 (2) - due to autostack, they touch previous or following note in the gameplay, which spoils the blanket. please consider making some minor adjust. (e.g. move 00:51:337 (2,3) - 1 grid down and right)
really good diff.

[Normal]
00:14:124 (3) - the reverse arrow is overlapped by 00:12:485 (6) - 's hit300. please adjust, e.g.:
SPOILER
00:35:763 (2,3) - blanket
00:37:730 (2,3) - ^
00:44:288 (3,4) - ^
01:10:517 (3) - looks strange, I think it's better to curve less, like:
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:22:321 (4,1) - distance inconsistency

Good luck~
Spring Roll
230 posts
Joined April 2013
Spring Roll
hello,mod from m4m ~

Easy

  1. this diff is more like a Normal,i think an easy diff should have less than 3 stars,try to remove some notes like00:03:757 (2,4) -
  2. 00:53:468 (1,2) - can blanket better
  3. 00:04:136 (3) - use the same shape as 00:05:655 (1) - and Ctrl+H
  4. 00:32:812 (1) - try this
    pic
  5. add a clap hitsound with the slidertick ,like01:02:976 - 01:05:599 - 01:06:911 - and so on

Normal

  1. normal dif is also a little hard for it have 4.5 stars.
  2. 00:06:415 (3,4) - can blanket better
  3. 00:21:009 (3,1) - ^
  4. 00:44:288 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:40:353 - i dont think change the slider velocity is a good idea in a normal diff

Hard

  1. for its only a 158BPM song ,ithink ar7 is more suitableoh sorry its 183 BPM,but i still think ar7 is more suitable
  2. 00:16:911 (5,6) - not stack perfectly
  3. 00:50:845 (1,2) - overlap in gameplay mode,looks not so good
  4. 01:00:681 (3,4) - add clap on every hit
  5. 00:42:976 (1) - looks not nice ,i think you should change the shape
  6. 00:45:271 (5,1) - blanket

Insane

  1. 00:06:415 (5) - Ctrl+G
  2. 00:17:730 (1) - try this
    pic
  3. 00:20:189 (3) - Ctrl+G
  4. 00:31:009 (5) -
    pic
  5. 00:48:714 (2) - feels not good when i play ,i prefer to put it on (232.288)
  6. 00:56:583 (3) - try Ctrl+G

GL,hope this helps
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika
Note: I will only mention the mods that I did not change, assume the unmentioned ones have been applied

Flower wrote:

m4m

[General]
Your Easy has a too high star rating. A set of beatmap must has at least one difficulty no higher than 3.24 stars. Please consider some change.

Fixed, Easy is now 3 stars only, no higher than that

[Insane]
I still except a better map, since you already have a ranked map. Suggest remap on arrangement. (hitsound is fine)
00:14:124 (1,2) - I don't like the flow. Suggestion:
SPOILER
00:15:435 (1,2,3) - the jump is too "modest". also flow can be improved. I dont like "big" jumps, I make maps that are easy to follow, not jumpy all over the place (even when a jump is necessary)
00:16:747 (1) - rotate 15 degrees anti-clockwise. so does 00:17:403 (3) -
00:18:058 (5) - delete? should sound good. also make 00:18:222 (1) - start at 00:18:058 -
00:23:140 (4,5,1) - fmpov, the triple should be at 00:22:894 - . please consider a little. I disagree with this
00:24:534 - add a note I think. it's so obvious. (arrangement suggestion)
SPOILER
00:25:599 (5) - keeping 1.2x DS isn't a bad idea. dont understand this
00:30:517 (3) - keep the distance with 00:29:862 (1) - , maybe move to x:328,y:224 Moved to different location instead
00:35:108 (1,2) - please use ctrl+c, ctrl+v, and rotate to make a better context. Nah, Ill stick to this
00:58:222 (7) - use the approach circle to make better blanket, e.g.:
SPOILER
kiai time: the jump is too "modest", as previous ones. Please refer to some of Laurier's, Fycho's or Melophobia's maps. Refer to what I said about making "modest" jumps earlier

[Hard]
00:02:618 - change to S:C1 to avoid noisy sliderslide. also change volume to 30%.
some nitpicking:
00:51:337 (2) - 01:07:075 (2) - 01:22:812 (2) - due to autostack, they touch previous or following note in the gameplay, which spoils the blanket. please consider making some minor adjust. (e.g. move 00:51:337 (2,3) - 1 grid down and right)
really good diff.

[Normal]
00:14:124 (3) - the reverse arrow is overlapped by 00:12:485 (6) - 's hit300. please adjust, e.g.:
SPOILER
00:35:763 (2,3) - blanket
00:37:730 (2,3) - ^
00:44:288 (3,4) - ^ I think its blanketed well enough
01:10:517 (3) - looks strange, I think it's better to curve less, like:
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:22:321 (4,1) - distance inconsistency

Good luck~

Thanks for mod! You are really helpful
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
From my m4m queue.

[General]

  1. About BG, Your BG Size is 1365x768. As Ranking Criteria, BG Size is 1024x768(4:3), 1366x768(16:9). So I suggest that you decrease BG size to 1366x768
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

[Easy]
How about Slidertick sound? Like here 00:10:517 as clap sound.

  1. 00:07:364 (1) - So close next note. It may hard for Easy Player. This spinner end here 00:10:190 (1)
  2. 00:28:550 (3) - NC
  3. 00:42:976 (1,2) - add clap on end of slider. It is more better.
  4. 00:53:468 (1) - blanket
[Normal]

  1. 00:04:896 (1) - remove whistle on first of slider.
  2. 00:06:415 (3) - remove whistle sound? but i think this whistle sound is not bad than 00:04:896 (1)
  3. 00:07:364 (1) - Clap
  4. 00:15:435 (1) - remove clap
  5. 00:17:403 (4,5) - remove (4) note and make one repeat (5) note.
  6. 00:18:222 (1) - Finish is more better than Clap. Or remove clap.
  7. 00:24:288 (1) - remove NC
  8. 00:25:271 (3) - NC
  9. 00:39:206 (2) - Drum-Clap on first of slider and Drum-Finish on end of slider.
  10. 00:40:681 (1,2,3) - Clap Hitsound is strange. Remove clap on (1), End of (2), first of (3).
  11. 00:44:288 (3) - remove clap on first of slider
  12. 00:47:239 (4) - remove clap and
  13. 00:46:747 (3) - add clap on end of slider
  14. 01:05:927 (5) - Overlapping make confuse to Newbie Player.
  15. 01:10:517 (3) - NC?
[Pkhg's Hard]

  1. 00:02:618 ~ 00:09:548 - How about volume 40%? 00:07:269 (1)'s end sound is little loud. :o
  2. 00:16:911 (5) - NC?
  3. 00:17:075 (6) - check Blanket
  4. 00:18:058 (1) - finish
  5. 00:21:993 (1) - blanket
  6. 00:24:616 (1) - If you add finish on the spinner, adding finish on (1) is good.
  7. 00:29:370 (1,2) - recommend that Drum-Clap hitsound on 00:29:370 (1) and Drum-Finish hitsound on 00:29:534 (2).
  8. 00:29:862 (1) - Finish sound is better..but it may not your style.. :?
  9. 00:31:009 (5) - blanket
  10. 00:37:730 (7,1) - NC on (7) than (1)
  11. 00:39:042 (1) - how about drum hitsound?
  12. 01:07:894 (5) - NC?
  13. 01:08:550 (7) - curve slider is better
  14. 01:16:747 (2) - blanket check! xD
[Insane]

  1. 00:05:276 (2,3,5) - forgot whistle?
  2. 00:36:419 (1) - remove finish
  3. 00:46:747 (4) - clap on end of slider
  4. 01:11:501 (2) - end here 01:11:665
  5. 01:18:386 (1) - remove finish
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Gush

3/25 map to mod \o/ I'm getting to something

[Easy]
Also, you have many opporitunity to blanket.
00:11:173 - I just don't understand why you don't add a note here, like the other parts 00:11:501 (3,4) . If oyu don,t want for wathever reason, you should maybe expend the slider to this place.
00:27:239 (1) - Remove the whistle, orelse we hear double, coming from the original sound.
00:53:140 (4) - Nazi but this have not correct distance snap :>
00:53:468 (1,2) - Could be better balnket.
01:09:534 (2) - Is it an error? sound better as an 1/1

[Normal]
00:12:485 (6) - A 1/2 slider maybe? Would sound a bit like 00:11:173 (3,4)
01:20:026 (1,3) - Same y axis? Maybe?
Seems rather find, you know.

[Hard]
00:20:517 (4) - Would feels better as one 1/2 slider and a circle after due to downbeat.
00:40:353 (1) - You could improve this form, as a simple curves
00:42:976 (1) - Same here, and i'm not sure really player enjoy these. Bats or more willing to mods with pretty forms

[Insane]
00:05:276 (2) - Why isn't there any whistle, and here : 00:05:655 (3) as well 00:06:415 (5) ? Would fits better.
00:23:140 (4,5,1) - I think it's overmap. We dont ever hear the (5)
00:49:698 (7,8) - The clap would feel more at (8)
01:19:698 (1,2,3,4) - I think the (2, 3) could be 1/4 with (1), not (4). It would fit the music best.

Overall is really good. *star* Good luck!
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

Flower wrote:

m4m

[Hard]
00:02:618 - change to S:C1 to avoid noisy sliderslide. also change volume to 30%. Ok
some nitpicking:
00:51:337 (2) - 01:07:075 (2) - 01:22:812 (2) - due to autostack, they touch previous or following note in the gameplay, which spoils the blanket. please consider making some minor adjust. (e.g. move 00:51:337 (2,3) - 1 grid down and right) Fixed all :D
really good diff.

Good luck~

Spring Roll wrote:

hello,mod from m4m ~

Hard

  1. for its only a 158BPM song ,ithink ar7 is more suitableoh sorry its 183 BPM,but i still think ar7 is more suitable AR7 is perfect for my diff x.x
  2. 00:16:911 (5,6) - not stack perfectly Fixed
  3. 00:50:845 (1,2) - overlap in gameplay mode,looks not so good Fixed :/
  4. 01:00:681 (3,4) - add clap on every hit Added only on (4)
  5. 00:42:976 (1) - looks not nice ,i think you should change the shape I'll remap later
  6. 00:45:271 (5,1) - blanket

GL,hope this helps

TaMul wrote:

From my m4m queue.

[Pkhg's Hard]

  1. 00:02:618 ~ 00:09:548 - How about volume 40%? 00:07:269 (1)'s end sound is little loud. :o Reduced to 30%
  2. 00:16:911 (5) - NC? Useless?
  3. 00:17:075 (6) - check Blanket It's already perfect :P
  4. 00:18:058 (1) - finish Too loud D:
  5. 00:21:993 (1) - blanket Fixed
  6. 00:24:616 (1) - If you add finish on the spinner, adding finish on (1) is good. Loud :P
  7. 00:29:370 (1,2) - recommend that Drum-Clap hitsound on 00:29:370 (1) and Drum-Finish hitsound on 00:29:534 (2). Whistle is better :P
  8. 00:29:862 (1) - Finish sound is better..but it may not your style.. :? Added :D
  9. 00:31:009 (5) - blanket What should i fix? x.x
  10. 00:37:730 (7,1) - NC on (7) than (1) I prefer it on (1)
  11. 00:39:042 (1) - how about drum hitsound? No :P
  12. 01:07:894 (5) - NC? Nope
  13. 01:08:550 (7) - curve slider is better Nopee :P
  14. 01:16:747 (2) - blanket check! xD With (1) or (3) x.x

Winek wrote:

Gush

[Hard]
00:20:517 (4) - Would feels better as one 1/2 slider and a circle after due to downbeat. I'm trying to follow vocals :3
00:40:353 (1) - You could improve this form, as a simple curves
00:42:976 (1) - Same here, and i'm not sure really player enjoy these. Bats or more willing to mods with pretty forms I'll remap later :/

Overall is really good. *star* Good luck!
Thanks :D

Update desuu~~
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:W:Wonder tale (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:ritsu-tanaika
Version:pkhg's Hard
Source:Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru
Tags:oreshura ending ed ai-chan masuzu moe waifu pkhg
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

Winek wrote:

Gush

3/25 map to mod \o/ I'm getting to something

[Easy]
Also, you have many opporitunity to blanket.
00:11:173 - I just don't understand why you don't add a note here, like the other parts 00:11:501 (3,4) . If oyu don,t want for wathever reason, you should maybe expend the slider to this place.
00:27:239 (1) - Remove the whistle, orelse we hear double, coming from the original sound.
00:53:140 (4) - Nazi but this have not correct distance snap :>
00:53:468 (1,2) - Could be better balnket.
01:09:534 (2) - Is it an error? sound better as an 1/1

Fixed all mods for Easy except 1:09:534 (2), I believe the 1/2 bounceback slider is appropriate

[Normal]
00:12:485 (6) - A 1/2 slider maybe? Would sound a bit like 00:11:173 (3,4)
01:20:026 (1,3) - Same y axis? Maybe?
Seems rather find, you know.

all Normal mods fixed

[Hard]
00:20:517 (4) - Would feels better as one 1/2 slider and a circle after due to downbeat.
00:40:353 (1) - You could improve this form, as a simple curves
00:42:976 (1) - Same here, and i'm not sure really player enjoy these. Bats or more willing to mods with pretty forms

[Insane]
00:05:276 (2) - Why isn't there any whistle, and here : 00:05:655 (3) as well 00:06:415 (5) ? Would fits better. ok
00:23:140 (4,5,1) - I think it's overmap. We dont ever hear the (5) I disagree so no change here
00:49:698 (7,8) - The clap would feel more at (8) I disagree, the red tick after that requires a clap
01:19:698 (1,2,3,4) - I think the (2, 3) could be 1/4 with (1), not (4). It would fit the music best. changed this

Overall is really good. *star* Good luck!
Thanks for mod!

@pkhg Updated
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hi M4M~

[General]
Maybe you should add finish in every white big tick, start from the begining kiai time until the end of the song, to give your map more color on hitsounding, since the song is upbeat and cheerful


[Easy]
00:05:655 (1) - Delete Nc?
00:15:435 (1) - Change whistle into finish? because It has same music background with the slider head It self
00:19:370 - Lower the volume here to 50%, It's too loud to hear if you use 60%
00:22:649 (1) - 00:27:239 (1) - Delete NC?
00:56:419 (4,1) - Add NC on (4), delete NC on (1)
00:30:599 (2) - Change shape into curve for better flow
SPOILER
00:40:026 (4) - Move to x:324 y:348, It'll makes thuis 00:40:026 (4,2) - not too close

[Normal]
The spacing is large, maybe you can reduce a bit, a Normal with 4.5 stars seems hard XD
00:20:026 (1,3) - Make them symetric
00:26:255 (5) - Make It curve
SPOILER
00:30:189 - Add a circle? you miss the drum sound here
00:39:862 (3) - Use this rhythm instead if you follow the drum sound, It can looks like this
SPOILER
00:43:960 (2) - Delete?
00:44:288 (3,4) - Blanket better
00:51:501 (2,3) - Inconsistent DS
Too many motes in red tick make this diff so hard

[Hard]
00:42:976 (1) - Blanket better, or you can make the slider looks like this
SPOILER
00:51:337 (2,3) - Stack perfectly will be better
00:55:271 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) then use this rhythm instead
01:07:075 (2,3) - Stack perfectly
01:26:255 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe that part can be change into stream

[Insane]
00:16:419 (4,5) - Stack perfectly with this slider 00:17:075 (2) - tail
00:25:763 (6,7,2) - Maybe can change shape into this
SPOILER
01:12:485 (5) - Make it curve
SPOILER

That's all :)
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[Easy]
00:15:108 (4) - Add finish
00:21:993 (1,2) - Swap timing spots. That way, the long slider will hie the long hold on the 'ke', and the half slider on 00:22:976 will hit the 'tai' in sasayakitai.
01:18:386 (3) - Remove finish, it isn't needed here.
01:21:665 (2) - Add finish on the tail?

[Normal]
00:15:108 (5) - Add finish?
00:15:435 (1) - Flip vertically, so it doesn't repeat the same curve style as 00:14:616 (4) - (since this flow is starting to get really repetitive).
00:20:026 (1,2,3) - It'd look more visually appealing if you created a symmetrical form here:

125,130,20026,2,0,P|131:192|184:228,1,130
256,352,20681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
00:27:239 - 00:29:862 New rhythm suggestion:

Mainly because 00:28:386 (1) - Might not be a good spot for a spinner.
01:07:894 (3) - Flip vertically, so that it can partially blanket 01:07:239 (2) -

[Hard]
00:18:058 (1) - Add finish.
00:27:075 (1,2) - Please swap timing spots. That way, the long slider will hit the long hold on the 'to' here on 00:27:075.
00:39:534 (2,3) - Try using drum-claps on all the notes here owo
00:57:075 (4) - Make it a curved slider, so it creates a composite figure with 00:56:747 (3) - , against 00:55:763 (4,1) - .
01:11:173 (3) - Finish on the tail?

[Insane]
00:25:763 (6) - Remove whistle on the head, it pretty much breaks the hitsound pattern.
00:28:550 (1) - Add finish on the head?

Nice mapset :P Good luck!
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[Easy]
00:15:108 (4) - Add finish added
00:21:993 (1,2) - Swap timing spots. That way, the long slider will hie the long hold on the 'ke', and the half slider on 00:22:976 will hit the 'tai' in sasayakitai. Nah, i dont think its right because the rhythm feels weird if I follow yours (especially after the 2nd long slider)
01:18:386 (3) - Remove finish, it isn't needed here. ok
01:21:665 (2) - Add finish on the tail? nah, not necessary

[Normal]
00:15:108 (5) - Add finish? added
00:15:435 (1) - Flip vertically, so it doesn't repeat the same curve style as 00:14:616 (4) - (since this flow is starting to get really repetitive).
00:20:026 (1,2,3) - It'd look more visually appealing if you created a symmetrical form here:

fixed (did not use your code but used a form of symmetry
125,130,20026,2,0,P|131:192|184:228,1,130
256,352,20681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
00:27:239 - 00:29:862 New rhythm suggestion:

Mainly because 00:28:386 (1) - Might not be a good spot for a spinner. no, I disagree
01:07:894 (3) - Flip vertically, so that it can partially blanket 01:07:239 (2) - Ill keep it this way, because flipping this vertically may make the pattern with 01:07:894 (3,4) - look a bit strange

[Hard]
00:18:058 (1) - Add finish.
00:27:075 (1,2) - Please swap timing spots. That way, the long slider will hit the long hold on the 'to' here on 00:27:075.
00:39:534 (2,3) - Try using drum-claps on all the notes here owo
00:57:075 (4) - Make it a curved slider, so it creates a composite figure with 00:56:747 (3) - , against 00:55:763 (4,1) - .
01:11:173 (3) - Finish on the tail?

[Insane]
00:25:763 (6) - Remove whistle on the head, it pretty much breaks the hitsound pattern.
00:28:550 (1) - Add finish on the head?

fixed all insane

Nice mapset :P Good luck!
thanks for mod!
WingSilent
2,982 posts
Joined August 2012
WingSilent
Hello, mod from my queue. :)
GeneralThere's a hole into the kiai, this isn't good, just let it continue, the song allow it, 01:10:517 (3,1) -

Easy

00:14:124 (3,1) - Make theses sliders symetrical
This diff looks good. (Not that i'm a lazy modder but i didn't find anything to change, because of the ammount of mods you have)

Normal

00:25:271 (3) - you could put this slider into that position for a better flow : http://puu.sh/76zgc.jpg
Sorry, i didn't find much on this diff, too much mods done already

Insane

00:11:501 (1) - This looks weird, do a better wave
00:16:747 (1) - Ctrl+G ?
00:17:075 (2) - ^
00:17:403 (3) - ^
00:35:599 (2) - ^
00:36:091 (3) - (208,24) ?
01:04:616 (3) - Ctrl+G ?
01:04:944 (4) - ^
01:05:271 (5) - ^
01:06:255 (2) - ^
01:25:599 (3) - maybe make a curve to do a blanket with the next slider ?

Very nice map!
That was hard to find things to improve, but i'm fine into insane so.. okay! :)

Good luck for ranking.
You're on the good way.
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

Lumina wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue. :)
GeneralThere's a hole into the kiai, this isn't good, just let it continue, the song allow it, 01:10:517 (3,1) - Fixed this except Hard difficulty, wait till pkhg sees the mods

Easy

00:14:124 (3,1) - Make theses sliders symetrical fixed
This diff looks good. (Not that i'm a lazy modder but i didn't find anything to change, because of the ammount of mods you have)

Normal

00:25:271 (3) - you could put this slider into that position for a better flow : http://puu.sh/76zgc.jpg
Sorry, i didn't find much on this diff, too much mods done already
fixed

Insane

00:11:501 (1) - This looks weird, do a better wave
00:16:747 (1) - Ctrl+G ?
00:17:075 (2) - ^
00:17:403 (3) - ^
00:35:599 (2) - ^
00:36:091 (3) - (208,24) ?
01:04:616 (3) - Ctrl+G ?
01:04:944 (4) - ^
01:05:271 (5) - ^
01:06:255 (2) - ^
01:25:599 (3) - maybe make a curve to do a blanket with the next slider ?

Rejected all mods for Insane except 01:04:616 (3). Sorry, but I think a lot of those ctrl G's actually ruin the flow more.

Very nice map!
That was hard to find things to improve, but i'm fine into insane so.. okay! :)

Good luck for ranking.
You're on the good way.
Thanks for mod!
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
Mako Sakata

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi M4M~

[General]
Maybe you should add finish in every white big tick, start from the begining kiai time until the end of the song, to give your map more color on hitsounding, since the song is upbeat and cheerful

[Hard]
00:42:976 (1) - Blanket better, or you can make the slider looks like this i remaped that part :P
SPOILER
00:51:337 (2,3) - Stack perfectly will be better but that will ruin the blanket D:
00:55:271 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) then use this rhythm instead i prefer keeping it
01:07:075 (2,3) - Stack perfectly if i stack it the note will be too closer to (1) so :P (
01:26:255 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe that part can be change into stream Too hard >.<

That's all :)

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿

[Hard]
00:18:058 (1) - Add finish. ok
00:27:075 (1,2) - Please swap timing spots. That way, the long slider will hit the long hold on the 'to' here on 00:27:075. i don't understand this sorry >.<
00:39:534 (2,3) - Try using drum-claps on all the notes here owo nopee :P
00:57:075 (4) - Make it a curved slider, so it creates a composite figure with 00:56:747 (3) - , against 00:55:763 (4,1) - . i prefer keeping my "lol blanket"
01:11:173 (3) - Finish on the tail? no
Nice mapset :P Good luck!


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68,200,41009,2,0,L|80:320,1,112.500004291535,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,80,42976,6,0,L|480:192,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
From in-game request~
Insane

  • General
  1. 00:02:618 - to 00:07:174 - I think the rhythm should be more slowly. (節奏可能太快) 我隨便整整 This is casual.↓↓
  2. 00:19:698 - to 00:29:862 - ^
  3. AIMOD


    Compose
  4. 00:14:780 (3) - you can try to delete it. It outstanding the 00:14:124 (1,2) - (你在跟的吉他聲?,全部都在1/2拍子好似不太好)
  5. 00:19:698 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm. I feel that it is surprising now. (00:19:862 - 同 00:20:353 - 係同節奏? 所以我整2個圈)
  6. 00:31:665 (7,8) -
  7. 01:04:452 (2) - not flow? you can try to blanket it with 01:04:616 (3) -
  8. 01:22:321 (1) - This is no problem now. But if the slider move right ,it may be easily to click it.


Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
hi! :)

[Insane]
00:29:042 (2) - here is soundless, you should be delete this note
00:29:206 (2) - delete whistle beginning from beginning and add whistle to end
00:45:353 (6) - delete this note
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why stream :(
01:26:992 (10) - delete this note

[pkhg's Hard]
00:40:353 (1,2,3) - move to 00:39:042 (1) - 's 2nd note?
01:27:239 (7,8) - make a jump like 01:26:911 (6,7) -

[Normal]
00:44:288 (3) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/7a4jq.jpg
00:47:567 (5) - http://puu.sh/7a4nO.jpg
01:27:239 (3) - remove whistle from end, I think unfit

[Easy]
00:28:550 (1) - end at 00:29:616, 00:29:862 - add circle
01:06:583 (1,2) - maybe looks good pattern http://puu.sh/7a4UF.jpg

good luck~
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
From my modding queue~
Hello!

[Easy]
00:04:896 (2,1) - doesn't flow well here, the (2) leads downwards, not towards (1). To fix this, you can curve (2) towards (1) more
SPOILER
This way the two sliders can be played in one fluid motion

00:17:075 (1) - perhaps you can move this to the next white tick to give the player more time to react to the spinner in easy difficulty. If you move it, make sure it still ends in the same spot~

00:22:649 (1) - move this down a bit to match (2)

00:21:993 (3) - perhaps you can make the head and tail vertically parallel so it is symmetrical
SPOILER

00:45:271 (3) - to make the flow better, you can move this down a bit so that the shape of (2) leads into this note smoothly

01:18:386 (3) - this feels better as a curved slider to match the vocal, maybe something like this:
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:14:124 (3,4) - this overlap does not look so nice...hm maybe try curving (3) to make flow better
SPOILER

00:22:649 (3) - move this a little to the left so it leads straight into (3)

00:32:812 (2,3) - try stacking these instead,
I think it looks better this way and it flows better.
Same thing over here 00:39:042 (1,2) -

00:49:534 (3) - move it to the right a bit and make it less curved to make the flow a smooth, curve line:
SPOILER

01:02:976 (3,4) - this part could look better, maybe try curving (3) downwards?
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:21:009 (5,6) - make sure you stack these properly. Same here 00:21:829 (8,1) -

00:42:321 (3,4,1) - this part doesn't flow well, maybe you can switch move (4) to where (1) is and stack (1) under the tail of (3), this flows better:
SPOILER

00:51:337 (2,3) - stack these properly~
01:07:075 (2,3) - ^here too
01:22:976 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:20:189 (3,7) - you can try stacking them

00:25:271 (4) - curve it more towards the next (5) so it's smoother when it goes (2)(3)(4)
SPOILER

00:57:730 (6,7,8) - make sure you do proper beat spacing! The space between each of these notes has to be the same since they are one the same distance apart on the timeline~ Also you can improve the flow by moving (7) higher up so it's above (6) and (8).

01:25:927 (4,1) - transition from these two notes feels sort of forced...try moving the start of the stream more to the left or angle (4) differently

Nice song! Have fun mapping!
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

tellertheworld wrote:

From in-game request~
Insane

  • General
  1. 00:02:618 - to 00:07:174 - I think the rhythm should be more slowly. (節奏可能太快) 我隨便整整 This is casual.↓↓


    Nah, this is Insane so probably the pace should still be relatively fast
  2. 00:19:698 - to 00:29:862 - ^
  3. AIMOD


    Compose
  4. 00:14:780 (3) - you can try to delete it. It outstanding the 00:14:124 (1,2) - (你在跟的吉他聲?,全部都在1/2拍子好似不太好) fixed
  5. 00:19:698 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm. I feel that it is surprising now. (00:19:862 - 同 00:20:353 - 係同節奏? 所以我整2個圈)
    prefer to stick with my rhythm
  6. 00:31:665 (7,8) -
  7. 01:04:452 (2) - not flow? you can try to blanket it with 01:04:616 (3) -
  8. 01:22:321 (1) - This is no problem now. But if the slider move right ,it may be easily to click it.
    Not a major problem, so I chose not to fix it

Thanks!
UnitedWeSin
889 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hi! :)

[General]
  1. I can't find any places where you're using S:C2 or S:C3. If you aren't using those sample files, then you need to remove them from the song folder.
  2. Disable widescreen storyboard support in Easy/Normal/Hard since you aren't using a storyboard.
  3. Your preview time is unsnapped. I think you want to snap it to 01:01:337.
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:364 (1) - Since the music is so soft here I think you should reduce the volume of the spinner by quite a bit. Otherwise the spinner sound overpowers the music. Consider even silencing it to 5%.
  2. 00:09:535 - I think 20% is to low here, I don't get any feed back from the stream. Imo you should try 30 or 40% instead.
  3. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  4. 00:15:435 (1,2,3) - Why not place these in symmetry along with 00:16:419 (4,5)?
    Example
  5. 00:18:058 (1) - Same idea as 00:07:364 (1). For this one I think you should go 5% for the whole spinner, the 40% at 00:18:222 is sooo loud imo.
  6. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 - I found it awkward that the SV wasn't reduced in this section since it is the softest part of the song.
  7. 00:24:944 (2,3,4) - Feels like you really forced the stack with the 4 since spacing is reduced so much. Try not to force stacking too much like this I think it really hinders the flow. Maybe you can try something else here.
  8. 00:28:222 (7) - The clap seems a bit loud here, want to try a whistle instead?
  9. 00:28:386 - Did you use default soft sample set here on purpose? You're getting the sliderslide sound here.
  10. 00:29:042 (2) - I suggest to remove the whistle from the repeat since it really stands out from the music here.
  11. 00:33:796 (4) - I feel this slider can have better flow if you flip it over like this. It's a more natural line from the previous slider imo. Try it:
    Example
  12. 00:38:386 (8) - I think it could be more smooth if you move this one to the right a bit. Try it around (500,228).
  13. 00:44:452 (2) - Missed a clap I believe.
  14. 00:51:993 (4) - I'd prefer to remove the whistle from the end since it stands out from the music. The reason is that in the music, whistles happen on the onbeats (whiteticks).
  15. 00:55:271 (2) - I think a whistle on the end will sound better than the clap. Try it.
  16. 01:01:993 (3,4,7,8) - Some snapping issues, be sure to fix them.
  17. 01:03:632 (8) - Consider to rotate it more vertically to reduce the jump to the 1. I think it will feel more uniform with the jumps in this section.
    Example
  18. 01:03:960 (1,4) - How about this sort of blanket instead?
    Example

    It might look nicer when the overlap is more even.
  19. 01:07:894 (7,1) - Consider to switch these NC's to match the vocals and to be consistent with 01:18:386 (1).
  20. 01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - As Muya said, there really isn't anything in the music to support a long stream so it feels overmapped. I recommend trying something else.
  21. 01:21:501 (4) - I felt if you stack this slider on the 3 it will feel better to play than the large jump because there is a weak beat on the 4.
    Example
    Other than that, if you'd like to try changing the rhythm here, I felt this could be better: http://puu.sh/7cjL9.png
  22. 01:26:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about reduce the volume for the stream and add some claps or make it normal sample set. It will fit nicely with the music.
  23. 01:28:878 - I think you should use 15% volume for the spinner like the easier diffs.
Cool^^. I see some nice ideas. A problem I think you have is that sometimes you force stacking objects on previous ones and it can hinder your flow and ruin patterns. For example 01:07:239 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) in this section spacing has become pretty inconsistent because you force stacking, but it doesn't play bad. Another example at 00:38:386 (8) I thought flow could have been better but you stacked the 8 on the slider that had already vanished. Just something to work on. :)

[pkhg's Hard]
  1. 00:07:269 (1) - Maybe you can try a whistle on the spinner.
  2. 00:09:535 - Same as Insane, I felt that 40% or so would be better to give the stream some volume.
  3. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  4. 00:18:058 (1) - I think maybe a finish is more fitting than the whistle.
  5. 00:51:337 (2) - I feel it's better placed at (456,208).
  6. 00:56:747 (3) - Missed a whistle on the head?
  7. 01:11:665 (4) - Remove the whistle? It sounds a bit loud here.
  8. 01:26:911 (6) - Missed a clap on the head?
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:136 (3,1) - Spacing error I suppose.
  2. 00:07:364 (1) - Consider to reduce the volume like Insane.
  3. 00:09:535 - Probably 40% is better.
  4. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  5. 00:16:091 (2,3,4) - Try to make it 1.1x spacing. No need to force the stack with 4-1.
  6. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 - Again I was surprised that the SV wasn't reduced here considering you did reduce it at 00:40:353.
  7. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 -Maybe you want to use 40% volume in this section?
  8. 00:28:550 - It will fit the music more closely if you add a circle here and start the spinner at 00:28:714 when the music starts holding.
    Example

    But then again, spinner isn't necessarily fitting here since the music cuts out. Maybe you'd prefer a slider like Easy, or a short break is even fitting.
  9. 00:37:730 (2) - If you add a finish here it will follow in pattern with the finishes at 00:35:108 and 00:36:419. But you don't use these finishes in the other diffs so maybe you'd like to try something else.
  10. 00:40:681 (1) - Remove clap? Seems extra here.
  11. 00:49:206 (2) - ^ It's not fitting with the music.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:795 - Consider to add a note here here. I think it would fill the gap nicely and fit with vocals/piano.
  2. 00:07:174 (1) - Same as Insane, consider to reduce the spinner volume.
  3. 00:09:535 - Probably 40% is better.
  4. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  5. 00:16:911 (1) - Imo it fits the music better if you end this spinner at 00:18:058 when the music stop and then add a slider at 00:19:370. That way the player does not continue spinning even though the music has undergone a huge change at 00:18:058 which can often feel very strange.
  6. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 -Maybe you want to use 40% volume in this section?
  7. 00:46:583 (2,3,4) - Clap is more fitting on the 3. I suggest remove the one from the end of the 2 and the 4 and add it to the 3. You can then add whistles to 2 or 4 as you see fit.
  8. 00:48:222 (1,2) - Move clap from the end of the 1 to the 2 will be better imo.
  9. 01:14:452 (1) - Missed a finish on the head according to your pattern.
  10. 01:18:386 (3) - ^
  11. 01:27:567 - Maybe 15% volume is best.
Well it definitely not a bad mapset so far. I feel more modding is a good thing though.
I really hope this mod can help you. :D
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika
ALL MODS WITHOUT COMMENT, ASSUME THEY ARE FOLLOWED

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi! :)

[General]
  1. I can't find any places where you're using S:C2 or S:C3. If you aren't using those sample files, then you need to remove them from the song folder. Yeah, Ill remove them next time. sorry, forgot to to do after updating
  2. Disable widescreen storyboard support in Easy/Normal/Hard since you aren't using a storyboard. fixed this
  3. Your preview time is unsnapped. I think you want to snap it to 01:01:337.
I dont really understand this part so maybe discuss about it next time
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:364 (1) - Since the music is so soft here I think you should reduce the volume of the spinner by quite a bit. Otherwise the spinner sound overpowers the music. Consider even silencing it to 5%.
  2. 00:09:535 - I think 20% is to low here, I don't get any feed back from the stream. Imo you should try 30 or 40% instead.
  3. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  4. 00:15:435 (1,2,3) - Why not place these in symmetry along with 00:16:419 (4,5)?
    Example
  5. 00:18:058 (1) - Same idea as 00:07:364 (1). For this one I think you should go 5% for the whole spinner, the 40% at 00:18:222 is sooo loud imo. changed to 5% at spinner, but 50% at the end of the spinner to make the "Finish" more evident
  6. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 - I found it awkward that the SV wasn't reduced in this section since it is the softest part of the song. Nah I dont think this part needs to be reduced
  7. 00:24:944 (2,3,4) - Feels like you really forced the stack with the 4 since spacing is reduced so much. Try not to force stacking too much like this I think it really hinders the flow. Maybe you can try something else here. Made new pattern, tried not to force stack
  8. 00:28:222 (7) - The clap seems a bit loud here, want to try a whistle instead?
  9. 00:28:386 - Did you use default soft sample set here on purpose? You're getting the sliderslide sound here.
  10. 00:29:042 (2) - I suggest to remove the whistle from the repeat since it really stands out from the music here.
  11. 00:33:796 (4) - I feel this slider can have better flow if you flip it over like this. It's a more natural line from the previous slider imo. Try it:
    Example
  12. 00:38:386 (8) - I think it could be more smooth if you move this one to the right a bit. Try it around (500,228). Did (492,228) instead
  13. 00:44:452 (2) - Missed a clap I believe.
  14. 00:51:993 (4) - I'd prefer to remove the whistle from the end since it stands out from the music. The reason is that in the music, whistles happen on the onbeats (whiteticks).
  15. 00:55:271 (2) - I think a whistle on the end will sound better than the clap. Try it.
  16. 01:01:993 (3,4,7,8) - Some snapping issues, be sure to fix them.
  17. 01:03:632 (8) - Consider to rotate it more vertically to reduce the jump to the 1. I think it will feel more uniform with the jumps in this section.
    Example
  18. 01:03:960 (1,4) - How about this sort of blanket instead?
    Example

    It might look nicer when the overlap is more even.
  19. 01:07:894 (7,1) - Consider to switch these NC's to match the vocals and to be consistent with 01:18:386 (1).
  20. 01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - As Muya said, there really isn't anything in the music to support a long stream so it feels overmapped. I recommend trying something else. Made a simple 1/2 triangle pattern
  21. 01:21:501 (4) - I felt if you stack this slider on the 3 it will feel better to play than the large jump because there is a weak beat on the 4.
    Example
    Other than that, if you'd like to try changing the rhythm here, I felt this could be better: http://puu.sh/7cjL9.png
  22. 01:26:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about reduce the volume for the stream and add some claps or make it normal sample set. It will fit nicely with the music.
  23. 01:28:878 - I think you should use 15% volume for the spinner like the easier diffs.
Cool^^. I see some nice ideas. A problem I think you have is that sometimes you force stacking objects on previous ones and it can hinder your flow and ruin patterns. For example 01:07:239 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) in this section spacing has become pretty inconsistent because you force stacking, but it doesn't play bad. Another example at 00:38:386 (8) I thought flow could have been better but you stacked the 8 on the slider that had already vanished. Just something to work on. :)

[pkhg's Hard]
  1. 00:07:269 (1) - Maybe you can try a whistle on the spinner.
  2. 00:09:535 - Same as Insane, I felt that 40% or so would be better to give the stream some volume.
  3. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  4. 00:18:058 (1) - I think maybe a finish is more fitting than the whistle.
  5. 00:51:337 (2) - I feel it's better placed at (456,208).
  6. 00:56:747 (3) - Missed a whistle on the head?
  7. 01:11:665 (4) - Remove the whistle? It sounds a bit loud here.
  8. 01:26:911 (6) - Missed a clap on the head?
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:136 (3,1) - Spacing error I suppose.
  2. 00:07:364 (1) - Consider to reduce the volume like Insane.
  3. 00:09:535 - Probably 40% is better.
  4. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  5. 00:16:091 (2,3,4) - Try to make it 1.1x spacing. No need to force the stack with 4-1.
  6. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 - Again I was surprised that the SV wasn't reduced here considering you did reduce it at 00:40:353. Nah this part isnt necessary imo
  7. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 -Maybe you want to use 40% volume in this section?
  8. 00:28:550 - It will fit the music more closely if you add a circle here and start the spinner at 00:28:714 when the music starts holding.
    Example

    But then again, spinner isn't necessarily fitting here since the music cuts out. Maybe you'd prefer a slider like Easy, or a short break is even fitting.
  9. 00:37:730 (2) - If you add a finish here it will follow in pattern with the finishes at 00:35:108 and 00:36:419. But you don't use these finishes in the other diffs so maybe you'd like to try something else.
  10. 00:40:681 (1) - Remove clap? Seems extra here.
  11. 00:49:206 (2) - ^ It's not fitting with the music.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:795 - Consider to add a note here here. I think it would fill the gap nicely and fit with vocals/piano.
  2. 00:07:174 (1) - Same as Insane, consider to reduce the spinner volume.
  3. 00:09:535 - Probably 40% is better.
  4. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud.
  5. 00:16:911 (1) - Imo it fits the music better if you end this spinner at 00:18:058 when the music stop and then add a slider at 00:19:370. That way the player does not continue spinning even though the music has undergone a huge change at 00:18:058 which can often feel very strange. Nah I disagree because the spinner is too fast for Easy diff
  6. 00:19:698 to 00:29:862 -Maybe you want to use 40% volume in this section?
  7. 00:46:583 (2,3,4) - Clap is more fitting on the 3. I suggest remove the one from the end of the 2 and the 4 and add it to the 3. You can then add whistles to 2 or 4 as you see fit.
  8. 00:48:222 (1,2) - Move clap from the end of the 1 to the 2 will be better imo.
  9. 01:14:452 (1) - Missed a finish on the head according to your pattern.
  10. 01:18:386 (3) - ^
  11. 01:27:567 - Maybe 15% volume is best.
Well it definitely not a bad mapset so far. I feel more modding is a good thing though.
I really hope this mod can help you. :D
Thanks for mod, it was really helpful! Care to recheck in future?
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
Muya

Muya wrote:

hi! :)
[pkhg's Hard]
00:40:353 (1,2,3) - move to 00:39:042 (1) - 's 2nd note? I don't understand this x.x
01:27:239 (7,8) - make a jump like 01:26:911 (6,7) - I don't wanna add a jump here~
good luck~

pkmnyab

pkmnyab wrote:

From my modding queue~
Hello!
[Hard]
00:21:009 (5,6) - make sure you stack these properly. Same here 00:21:829 (8,1) -

00:42:321 (3,4,1) - this part doesn't flow well, maybe you can switch move (4) to where (1) is and stack (1) under the tail of (3), this flows better:
SPOILER
I don't like stacks under sliders tail >w<l

00:51:337 (2,3) - stack these properly~
01:07:075 (2,3) - ^here too
01:22:976 (3) - ^
I don't stack these notes because that will ruin my blankets
Nice song! Have fun mapping!

UnitedWeSin

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi! :)

[General]
  1. I can't find any places where you're using S:C2 or S:C3. If you aren't using those sample files, then you need to remove them from the song folder.
  2. Disable widescreen storyboard support in Easy/Normal/Hard since you aren't using a storyboard.
  3. Your preview time is unsnapped. I think you want to snap it to 01:01:337.
All fixed ^

[pkhg's Hard]
  1. 00:07:269 (1) - Maybe you can try a whistle on the spinner. Sure!
  2. 00:09:535 - Same as Insane, I felt that 40% or so would be better to give the stream some volume. ok
  3. 00:10:190 - Imo 60% volume is more fitting since this section is quite loud. ok
  4. 00:18:058 (1) - I think maybe a finish is more fitting than the whistle. Ok, changed volume to 40%
  5. 00:51:337 (2) - I feel it's better placed at (456,208).It doesn't look nice :/
  6. 00:56:747 (3) - Missed a whistle on the head? Added
  7. 01:11:665 (4) - Remove the whistle? It sounds a bit loud here. ok
  8. 01:26:911 (6) - Missed a clap on the head? Added

Well it definitely not a bad mapset so far. I feel more modding is a good thing though.
I really hope this mod can help you. :D

Thanks ^^

Update~~
osu file format v12

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captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
hi
adding to the wave of mods lol

[General]
  1. Background is 1365x768 instead of 1366 width lol, fix if you want
  2. pkhg didn't remove the kiai burst like you did, so might want discuss if you want it consistent or not
[Easy]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
  1. 00:04:896 (2) - i agree with pkmnyab here, looks a bit odd as is
  2. 00:10:190 (1) - add a nc here, it's bugged
  3. 00:15:435 (1) - if you shift this two grids left it keeps symmetry around 4 like you did earlier
  4. 00:21:993 (3) - if you're going to do patterns like this, you should try and make them as precise as you can, so that your map looks overall more professional and neat. rotating this 6 will make it look much nicer, remember to fix spacing around it after
  5. 00:23:960 (2) - same here, but -6 this time
  6. 00:31:829 (3) - I feel like this should be flipped, will flow much better in and out of the notes around it
  7. 00:35:108 (1) - try curving the first half of this slider more, so that it looks the same on both ends
  8. 00:39:042 (3) - I get that you're trying to simplify the rhythm here, but this just doesn't fit very well, so try ending 1/2 earlier and then making it a repeat slider, will work well with the drum. will need some rearranging to do though, so up to you
  9. 00:45:271 (3,1,2) - you should try and make this into an even triangle, will look much nicer
  10. 00:49:534 (3) - since facing either direction with this slider would be odd flow one way or another, try going for the middle. it works out nicely imo
    SPOILER
  11. 00:54:780 (3) - you can use editor tools like copy and ctrl+h flip to make sure that this is symmetrical, because right now it's not :(
  12. 01:00:026 (2) - try x112 y140, so that the circle is connected on both ends
  13. 01:17:075 (1) - perhaps you could blanket the head of 01:15:108 (2) - ? just an idea
A lot of things in this diff that I think if you just went through your own diff and made sure they were as neat as possible, it would make this look much nicer overall. sliders that don't connect to the notes around or symmetry that isn't exact, things like that

Hitsounding
  1. 00:45:599 (1) - remove the whistle from the repeat, imo it sounds a bit odd with this many bass notes in a row
  2. 01:15:108 (2) - add a whistle on the start, for consistency
[Normal]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
  1. 00:02:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'd like to suggest this rhythm, I think it matches the vocal much more than what you have
    SPOILER
  2. 00:14:124 (3,4,5) - try connecting the notes and then making a more structured pattern out of them, like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:16:747 (3,4) - is this decrease in spacing intentional? even if it is I don't think it's needed, should space like the rest of the section
  4. 00:22:321 (2,3) - I think this 1/2 rhythm here would work better if moved it to where the vocal does 1/2, 00:22:812 -
  5. 00:24:288 (1) - something that is good to try and avoid doing is putting the main beat of a phrase on the end of a slider like you did here, might want to swap 00:23:960 (5,1) -
  6. 00:30:517 (1) - consider moving this upwards or to the right a bit so you don't have to make it quite so curved
  7. 00:35:108 (1,2,3) - if you copy one of these sliders and then rotate 120 degrees for each of the next sliders this pattern will look much nicer
  8. 00:41:665 (3) - it would be nice if you did a rhythm here that caught the snare on the red tick like you did at 00:46:255 (2,3,4) -
  9. 00:47:567 (5,1) - blanket could be improved a lot here, also the amount of curve on 5 doesn't look that great imo
  10. 00:49:534 (3) - try raising the tail so that the repeat arrow is pointing directly right, looks neater
  11. 00:53:796 (3,1) - why not make these the same slider?
  12. 00:55:271 (2,2) - same as ^
  13. 01:00:681 (5,1) - flow between these notes looks pretty odd, the way that the end of 5 doesn't connect with the start of 1 seems odd to me
  14. 01:02:976 (3) - try moving the endpoint to x252 y132, will lead into 4 better
  15. 01:06:583 (1) - should make this directly vertical to match 01:07:239 (2) -
  16. 01:13:796 (1) - change this to just a circle to keep same rhythm as first half of the kiai, since the two 1/2 sliders in a row can be tricky. I could point out more spots where your rhythm just seems to be random instead of following what you had previously, but you can rework those parts on your own.
  17. 01:20:681 (3) - move 1 grid right so that it's symmetrical with 1
  18. 01:26:255 (1) - try something like this, will look nicer imo
    SPOILER
Hitsounding
  1. 00:14:124 (3) - missed clap on the end
[pkhg's Hard]
I grabbed your latest .osu from your post so this is up to date :3
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
  1. 00:21:009 (5,6) - I see what you were going for here, but imo it doesn't look right in play :< try putting them both on x113 y257, I think it looks just a bit more natural
  2. 01:18:386 (1) - I think you should increase the spacing just a little here, since the vocal is so strong
  3. 01:22:321 (1) - here as well, you could do this by dropping the end of 2
  4. 01:24:944 (1) - aand here too, but just suggestions
Hitsounding
  1. 00:04:896 (1) - remove whistle from the tail? i think putting more stress on the head of 2 will be better, since these two notes lead into that one
  2. 00:10:681 (2) - this is the only note that you use this bass drum sound on in this section, so either remove this one or add more later on
  3. 00:10:763 - is this green line necessary? i don't think it is
  4. 00:40:353 - perhaps you could add the bass sound on each of the first white ticks in the section, to be like 00:42:976 (1) -
  5. 01:02:649 (5) - 01:06:583 (1) - 01:07:894 (5) - 01:10:517 (1) - you should add the bass sound on these spots too, to be like the second half of the kiai
  6. 01:22:321 - imo you should keep the volume at the same as the kiai, 80%, since this section is still just as loud musically
very nice diff, just double check your hitsounds so that they're how you want them

[Insane]
doublecheck aimod, some unsnapped stuff
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
  1. 00:09:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a death trap because of the silence before and the changing offset :( consider changing the first four to a repeat slider just so that it's easier to get good accuracy on this
  2. 00:25:271 (4,6) - make these the same slider? it's very noticeable in play
  3. 00:29:042 (2) - this slider doesn't start on anything D: might be a good idea to just reduce the repeat
  4. 00:32:157 (8) - try dragging the end to x312 y320, looks nicer and plays smoother to 1
  5. 00:34:944 (8) - would look nicer at x376 y288 to even out the spacing, there's other spots like this too so check them out
  6. 01:00:026 (5) - a slider curved this much looks out of placed compared to most of the rest of yours in the map, might want to adjust (you could blanket 00:59:862 (4) - if you wanted)
  7. 01:03:140 (6,8) - intentionally unstacked?
  8. 01:19:698 (1,2) - would look nicer as the same slider flipped
  9. 01:20:353 (3,4) - try to arrange so they look something like this, looks nicer
    SPOILER
Hitsounding
  1. 00:02:618 (1,2,1,2) - I think you should switch the hitsounding here, so that the whistles are on the heads of 1, not 2, to go with the vocal
  2. 00:16:091 (3) - remove clap from the end? doesn't really match anything in the music
  3. 00:19:698 - your use of the bass sound is really inconsistent in this part, you should either put it on every downbeat or make sure that there's a repeating pattern with them
  4. 00:39:534 (3) - try a drum clap on the head, sounds nice
  5. 00:39:862 (4) - add a whistle?
  6. 00:45:271 (5) - imo either remove the clap or turn it into a drum clap, the snare sound isn't in the music here
  7. 01:04:616 (3) - missed a whistle?
  8. 01:10:680 (2) - missed a whistle? I'd say the same about the part after but you have a 3/4 slider there ;;
the higher diffs are both just about there, but the normal and easy just need a lot of cleaning up to make sure the patterns are all clear and neat

good luck!
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Modding this map soon. Stay Tuned! :3
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika

BeatofIke wrote:

Modding this map soon. Stay Tuned! :3
<3
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

captin1 wrote:

hi
adding to the wave of mods lol

[General]
  1. Background is 1365x768 instead of 1366 width lol, fix if you want
  2. pkhg didn't remove the kiai burst like you did, so might want discuss if you want it consistent or not
Ritsu-chan plz don't change things on my diff without asking me >.<
I'll keep that kiai burst, i love it <3

[pkhg's Hard]
I grabbed your latest .osu from your post so this is up to date :3
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
  1. 00:21:009 (5,6) - I see what you were going for here, but imo it doesn't look right in play :< try putting them both on x113 y257, I think it looks just a bit more natural Moved a bit, but i don't wanna stack them
  2. 01:18:386 (1) - I think you should increase the spacing just a little here, since the vocal is so strong
  3. 01:22:321 (1) - here as well, you could do this by dropping the end of 2
  4. 01:24:944 (1) - aand here too, but just suggestions
Rejected all of them :P blankets have a higher priority for me >.<

Hitsounding
  1. 00:04:896 (1) - remove whistle from the tail? i think putting more stress on the head of 2 will be better, since these two notes lead into that one Added a whistle on head of (1) instead, I'll keep that one on the tail
  2. 00:10:681 (2) - this is the only note that you use this bass drum sound on in this section, so either remove this one or add more later on ok
  3. 00:10:763 - is this green line necessary? i don't think it is Deleted
  4. 00:40:353 - perhaps you could add the bass sound on each of the first white ticks in the section, to be like 00:42:976 (1) - ok
  5. 01:02:649 (5) - 01:06:583 (1) - 01:07:894 (5) - 01:10:517 (1) - you should add the bass sound on these spots too, to be like the second half of the kiaiok
  6. 01:22:321 - imo you should keep the volume at the same as the kiai, 80%, since this section is still just as loud musicallyok
very nice diff, just double check your hitsounds so that they're how you want them
good luck!
Update >.o
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108,328,67567,2,0,P|136:348|180:352,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,296,67894,2,0,L|248:148,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,68386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,68550,2,0,L|293:87,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,68878,2,0,P|184:88|136:80,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,124,69206,6,0,B|76:172|36:192|36:192|92:240,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,69698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,69862,2,0,P|180:184|144:184,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,307,70189,2,0,P|143:288|160:256,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,132,70517,6,0,P|284:84|364:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,71009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,220,71173,2,0,P|320:196|320:140,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,236,71665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,71829,6,0,L|120:280,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,168,72321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,168,72485,2,0,P|56:202|60:240,2,75,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,104,72976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,73140,2,0,P|200:112|272:48,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,36,73632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,20,73796,6,0,L|420:16,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,88,74124,2,0,P|432:124|436:172,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,204,74452,2,0,B|400:240|440:240|440:240|384:296,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,260,74944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,75108,2,0,P|208:232|168:248,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,312,75435,2,0,P|108:320|148:304,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,244,75763,2,0,L|92:84,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,44,76255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,76419,6,0,P|208:100|248:88,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,32,76747,2,0,P|308:60|315:102,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,158,77075,2,0,P|340:170|392:106,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,36,77567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,77730,2,0,P|468:104|464:144,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,78058,2,0,P|424:236|444:276,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,320,78386,6,0,B|344:308|312:328|312:328|280:348|240:336,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,78878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,79042,2,0,P|136:272|104:280,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,324,79370,2,0,P|40:288|52:236,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,204,79698,6,0,P|132:152|92:76,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,76,80189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,144,80353,2,0,L|212:116,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,80845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,81009,6,0,P|301:147|277:123,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,81337,2,0,P|416:224|460:236,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,81665,6,0,L|224:240,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,184,81993,2,0,L|164:200,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,160,82321,6,0,B|244:116|220:80|220:80|240:52|280:60,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,82812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,82976,2,0,P|345:139|384:129,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,312,83632,2,0,L|256:320,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,224,84288,2,0,P|148:184|156:144,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,276,85927,2,0,P|368:284|420:264,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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492,161,86747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,161,86911,2,0,P|455:164|420:152,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,87239,2,0,P|252:64|212:68,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87649,12,0,90189,0:0:0:0:
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
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ritsu-tanaika
@pkhg On my computer your current diff still has the kiai burst, so I dont really know what happened, but I fixed it to double check

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pkhg
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pkhg

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

@pkhg On my computer your current diff still has the kiai burst, so I dont really know what happened, but I fixed it to double check

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lol you didn't read my previous post , that's intentional, plz don't remove it D:
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
[General]
  1. Your preview time is inconsistent for all difficulties. Try setting the Preview Time at the start of the kiai section (61337).
  2. The 1st offset is slightly late. Try 2604 (-14). Be sure to re-snap all notes and timing sections afterwards.
[Insane]
  1. I recommend AR8 for this difficulty. AR9 felt way too fast imo.
  2. 00:17:812 (2) - Remove this note. Nothing is audible here.
  3. 00:28:550 (1) - Add a soft-finish at the head of this slider. It goes well with the soft cymbals.
  4. 00:29:042 (2) - I would remove this slider, since there's nothing audible here. If suggested, you could add a timing section at 00:28:550 (1) to slow the slider down by 0.5x and make this slider more circular. Also, remove the timing section at 00:29:206 (2) since you won't be needing that if you suggest this. Here is an example of what I mean:
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  5. 01:00:026 (5,6,7) - The mini stream at the end of this slider felt really awkward to me. Try re-adjusting the pattern like this:
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Easy, Normal, and Hard difficultly are good to go. Please get more mods in Insane difficulty!
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ritsu-tanaika
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Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
ritsu-tanaika
I'll give you KD for now, but in your opinion, whats the most appropriate preview time to make them?
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Try 61337 for Preview Time!
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