Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Consider changing the background colour to black. What?! What is wrong with the current one? I wont even consider changing it to plain black.. It would look horrible
You might want an Easy. Im kinda lazy and Im currently supposed to make an easy to whole lot of my maps. Dunno if it'll ever happen here

[Normal]

00:44:026 (2) - Adjust this a bit to line up properly with 3, 4, 5. Thanks
00:46:027 (2) - ^ ^
00:48:080 (2) - Turn off grid snap to nicely line this up with 1. Oh yeah.. That nice addition wasnt in the edit mode when I made this map. Fixed
01:43:027 (1) - Replace this with a reversed copy of 2. Vertically or horizontally reversed? I did both.
01:58:091 (2,3,4,1) - Looks weird, slightly off being a straight line. Curved it more.

[Hard]

00:37:045 (4,5,6,7) - Didn't think these sounded/played very well.
00:42:099 (5,6) - Quite surprising, lol. (also for these you could turn off grid snap and align them better) I had a BAT confirm these sliders and he said they are okay. Aligned better though.
00:54:060 (5,6,7,8) - Not the greatest part. Also, slant them a bit more so that 1-2-5 and 5-7-9 become nicer triangles? Dont know what you mean by slant and dictionary didnt help either. But it looks like a good triangle now
02:14:004 (3) - Move this around a bit so that the endpoint lines up better with the stack. Fixed. Again.
02:18:033 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit weird; either adjust them so that 1 can fall on the endpoint of 3, or just don't put it horizontal like that. Adjusted so that the sliders end would be as far from the 1 as the 1 is from 2.
02:37:075 (4,5,6,7) - Still don't really like this pattern. Well, I love it
02:40:027 (1) - Maybe replace this slider and the area around it with a few notes; it's slightly hard to predict when it'll fall. fall?

[ignore's Insane]

01:37:098 (11) - Note sounds a bit weird by itself, maybe add 1 or 2 notes after it. (on the 1/4s) Ignore told me not to change the combo number 666. So this is a no-no
02:06:098 (4,6) - A bit misaligned, intentional? Intentional
02:16:069 (9,10,11,12) - Curve this a bit smoother? Fixed
02:28:067 (1,2,3) - Spacing's off by a bit, turn off grid snap and respace the 2. Done
02:29:043 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:30:018 (9,1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:31:044 (5,6,7) - ^ ^

Nice overall, star~

EEeee wrote:

Overall
In all diffs, make the last spinner end on the next white tick, sounds better imo.

Normal
01:27:089 (6) - make this look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795
add finish to the very last slider, and probably change it to a soft sound (like ignore's Insane) Done


Hard
nothing :P
do the same thing to the very last spinner

ignore's Insane
nothing :P

*star,
nice song selection

arken1015 wrote:

[Normal]
00:39:19(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up and left? Done
00:58:38(2) - [Suggestion] How about move a little right? Done
02:28:67(1) - [Suggestion] How about move a little left? Cant do it. It goes either too left or too up or too much down. My mouse is sensitive
02:30:69(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right? I moved the next combo a little bit left instead.

[Hard]
01:24:90(5,6,7,8,9) - [Suggestion] How about make same (5,6,8) and (7,9)??? No
02:38:25(7,8,9) - Distance seems different... Fixed

[ignore's Insane]
01:15:53(9,10) - [Suggestion] How about move 3 grid left and 2 grid up? [Nazi?] Makes sense but I'll leave it as it is
01:22:59(2) - [Suggestion] How about make (2)'s end to cover (4) Done
01:32:43(2,3,4) - Move 1 grid left Done
02:00:17(7) - Move 1 grid up Makes sense
02:33:21(4) - Move 2 grid down Makes sense

Good map :3
I hope that will be ranked soon :3

Here's my star XD

whymeman wrote:

[Hard]

00:58:000 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stack looks really wacky in playmode. Make sure to look into this. Changed so that the stack begins under the previous slider's ending in the playmode

[ignore's Insane]

The only issue I noticed was that the darkred combo color really fades into the map which is not neat. Please make sure to look into this. Color changed o/ Should be no problem now.