OnosakiHito wrote:

Recheck time.

[ Muzukashii]

SPOILER

- Again, I recommend to move the kiai up to the end of the song.

00:15:721 (1) - Maybe delete this note to make the pattern a bit easier, due to the 5-plet stream. Would actually fit well here.
00:22:008 (1) - Consider changing this to a normal don. After all this finisher stands rather alone and doesn't function as "real" finisher here. I always suggest to user finishers at the end of a stanza or when emphasizing certain parts in a map.
00:45:002 (2) - Might be not bad to use a kat here since we have a higher pitch at this timeline. Not a must.
00:48:146 (3) - Probably would be the best to delete this note. You hadn't such pattern before, so it would be wise to keep this non-existence.
00:48:954 (2,1) - Not sure about these finishers. You may keep them if you want, but maybe use these notes as normal dons.
00:51:828~00:57:936 - Suggestion following pattern:

00:57:757 (1) - In general we try to avoid having notes that close to a sliderend, so it would be recommendable to delete it.
01:07:816~01:10:511 - Suggetsing this pattern:

{
01:15:541 (1,1) - K
01:15:721 (1) - move to 01:15:900
} This might sound better and fits to the up-coming finishers.
all fixed
Hm. Seems like I had some more things to add. maybe..

[ Oni]

SPOILER

- Again, I recommend to move the kiai up to the end of the song.
- Oni should be renamed to [Taiko Oni], also because custom names are nowadays not allowed.

00:50:661 (1) - Hm, probably better to use d here since it sounds a bit better but plays also more confortable.
00:52:457 (3) - Well, here kat would fit better due to the vocal. lol
00:53:535 (1) - Moving this to 00:52:996 would probably sound nicer to the vocal + changing 00:53:266 to kat for the background sound.
{
00:54:074 - don
00:54:793 (3) - move to 00:54:613
00:55:242~00:56:230 - http://puu.sh/5XoKk.jpg
} This migth sound better and look and plays more even.
{
01:19:134 (1) - kat
01:19:313 (1) - don
01:19:673 (3,1,1) - kkd
01:20:212 (2,3,4) - kkk
01:20:571 (1) - don
01:20:930 - kkd K
} It lacked a bit of structure, since the pattern didn't fit very will to the vocals, so I tried to help you with this. Would look like this: http://puu.sh/5XoVb.jpg

Previously I thought to give it a go in its current state, but I think it wouldn't hurt to give you some more suggestions and recommendations for further mapping.
As I said before, your map lacks a bit of structure. Many triplets are mapped off-beat or have not fitting pattern, for example these kkd / kdd patterns. The patterns do not applies for the users ear due to this. Next time try to use some less triplets, but more 1/2 which are combinated with them. In this way it will be easier for you to have an overview of your map.

Please find one last taiko modder, to ensure everything is fine, and recall me for the last check then. okay^3^/

mingmichael wrote:

taiko mods come as request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ kay~ :3

Notes Structure

☞ i saw that you almost followed all vocal sounds right? well, i have some suggestions to make the patterns better for vocals. for the suggestions you can see at the Notes box~

Notes

• change 00:20:751 - and 00:20:930 - to be kat don. i changed them to make a consistent pattern of o o o o o o o o that you used from 00:19:134 - until 00:20:930 - . btw don't worry, those notes will follow all vocals better too~

• change 00:27:757 - to be kat. the sound is still constant like 00:27:577 - (the instrument sound btw)

• change 00:33:505 - to be kat, to follow the vocal sound which is same too like 00:33:864 - ; 00:34:224 -

• remove this finisher at 00:49:313 - , just use a small note here. there's not any reasons to use it. there's not any strong pitch sounds or cymbal sounds at here

• how about just add a spinner from 00:55:960 - until 00:57:577 - . the additional notes at 00:55:960 (4,5,1) - aren't usefull and like a weird notes at there because they don't follow any sounds there. i changed to be spinner too to follow the long vocal sound from 00:55:960 - btw

• delete 01:02:248 - and change 01:01:888 - ; 01:02:068 - ; 01:02:607 - to be kats and add don at 01:01:709 - if you are confused, you can see this . i deleted and changed them to follow the vocal sounds that you followed for you patterns and i followed your kat patterns at the white strikes that you followed to follow vocals too. you can see at this again. almost all kats that you used are at the white strikes~

• change 01:04:044 - to be don. i changed it to follow the low vocal sound. the vocal gets lower and lower and ends at 01:04:044 - (the lowest i mean). and there's not any reasons to use finisher too. the finisher sound appears at 01:04:403 - , not at 01:04:044 - too

• move 01:06:379 - to 01:06:739 - . i moved it to follow the vocal sound again. the vocal sound comes at 01:06:739 - but you ignore it by not give any notes there

• don at 01:11:769 - . to followed o o o o too btw

• kat at 01:13:745 - . the vocal becomes stronger at here than 01:13:385 - . and you use kat at 01:13:385 - . if you used don at 01:13:745 - , automatically the vocal becomes lower because of don

• remove the finisher at 01:15:900 - . there's not any reason to use it again btw. the finisher and strong pitch sounds just appear at 01:15:541 - ; 01:16:619 - ; 01:18:056 -

• delete 01:16:439 - and change 01:16:260 - to be don. there's not any vocals again at 01:16:439 - , and don at 01:16:260 - is for the low vocal like 01:15:900 -

• i am not agree with the finishers at the middle of 1/2 notes like 01:19:852 - ; 01:20:571 - ; 01:21:290 - . there's not any functions of finishers if you put at there. and then, it'll increase the difficulty of this muzukashii diff to for the finishers at the middle of 1/2 like you used. i suggest you change to normal kats

all fixed :X
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okay that's all from me
goodluck all guyyssss~!

/me throws something ~★ omg thanks!! Σ(ﾟдﾟlll)

mingmichael wrote:

you didn't change anything from my mods ._.
owh sorry, you haven't uploaded them yet lol

1. 00:10:331 (4) - Change 00:10:504 - to custom hitsounds 1, and add a finish to the repeat.
2. 01:08:535 (4) - I have no clue why I told you to use 1/2 here... Anyhow, try something like this? http://puu.sh/6cyRC.jpg
3. 01:11:589 (8) - finish on head

1. 00:45:361 (1,2) - Add finishon start of both, as well as on end of (2)

1. 00:51:110 (1) - Add a new combo (it doesn't have one even though it is a (1) note.)
2. 01:18:415 (1) - Finish on end.

1. 00:15:182 (4) - Finish on start and end.
2. 00:19:493 (1,2) - Finish on end of both.
3. 00:57:936 - Consider adding a note here like in Normal.
4. 01:21:290 (1) - Add a new combo on this spinner.
5. 01:24:703 (1) - The note at 01:25:242 - is stronger than 01:24:703 - , so imo, starting the spinner here works better.

CXu wrote:

Recheck. so no kds.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:331 (4) - Change 00:10:504 - to custom hitsounds 1, and add a finish to the repeat.
2. 01:08:535 (4) - I have no clue why I told you to use 1/2 here... Anyhow, try something like this? http://puu.sh/6cyRC.jpg like!
3. 01:11:589 (8) - finish on head

[Hard]

1. 00:45:361 (1,2) - Add finishon start of both, as well as on end of (2)

[Normal]

1. 00:51:110 (1) - Add a new combo (it doesn't have one even though it is a (1) note.)
2. 01:18:415 (1) - Finish on end.

[Easy]

1. 00:15:182 (4) - Finish on start and end.
2. 00:19:493 (1,2) - Finish on end of both.
3. 00:57:936 - Consider adding a note here like in Normal.
4. 01:21:290 (1) - Add a new combo on this spinner.
5. 01:24:703 (1) - The note at 01:25:242 - is stronger than 01:24:703 - , so imo, starting the spinner here works better.

I won't go too much into it here, but just for future maps, it might be a good idea to keep hitsounds consistent between all the difficulties. this has solved the hitsound. change all the same difficulty.
(gotta wonder why I didn't pay attention to this last time...) Anyhow, that's it for now, so call me back when you're done~

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

드디어... 때가 온것인가...

미리 랭크 ㅊㅊ

CXu wrote:

Blub.

ykcarrot wrote:

펜딩맵 1등이시네요. 부럽...(?)

UnderminE wrote:

rank already

HelloSCV wrote:

did irc mod, it's time to rank!

Sonnyc wrote:

Ar9라서 od8도 나쁘진 않았을듯.

Sonnyc wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

Ar9라서 od8도 나쁘진 않았을듯.

어후 연타

이말 취소

OnosakiHito wrote:

My, my. Finally it is ranked. Congratulation!
Well deserved.

ykcarrot wrote:

펜딩맵 수석 졸업 축하!