• change 00:23:445 - to be don and change 00:23:625 - to be kat, to make a consistent pattern for "kick" sound. from 00:22:367 - until 00:24:343 - , you used dons for the kick sounds. for the examples at 00:22:727 - ; and 00:24:164 - . but, you used one kat for kick sound at 00:23:445 - . so, to avoid that inconsistent pattern, i change it to be don
• from 00:29:553 - until 00:30:990 - , please see
this. the triplet dons that i changed is for the constant vocal sounds, you can hear it carefully. and kats there are for the vocals too, but they are higher than the triplet dons at there
• upss wrong kat. 00:39:613 - change to be kat and 00:39:793 - change to be don. i changed them all to follow the vocal sounds like 00:40:152 - . and the vocal appears at 00:39:613 - , not at 00:39:793 -
• change 00:41:230 - to be don, so the 5-plets will be
ooooo. uncomfortable 5-plets that you used before which is
ooooo. why don't you use a simple plets?
• change 00:42:397 - and 00:42:487 - to be kat don. the reason is same like above too ^
• change 00:44:104 - to be don for the constant triplet sound there
• change 00:45:541 - to be don. the reason is same like 2 mods above ^
• change 00:46:619 (2,1,2,1,1,1) - to be
ooo ooo. just make a simple triplet, but comfortable to hear
• remove finisher at 00:51:110 - . there's not any finisher sounds at here, and it looks weird if you use finisher for the place which doesn't have any finsiher sounds or strong sounds which support the song. it's different like 00:51:469 - that the finisher sound comes at here
• change 00:57:757 - and 00:57:846 - to be dons and change 00:57:936 - to be kat. the last part gives like an accent sound at 00:57:936 - , and it's much better with kat than don. and i changed two notes before 00:57:936 - to be dons then. but don't worry, it's fit and good to hear
• change 01:00:990 - to be kat, because the pitch sound (vocal) has a same pitch like 01:00:810 - . i think it's not same, but higher pitch sound. much better with kat than don
• change 01:03:236 - to be kat and 01:03:505 - to be don. just make a simple triplet that i have said before, but good to hear~
• change 01:05:661 (2,1,1) - to be
ooo and 01:06:020 - don. they will follow the vocal sounds (01:05:840 - is the highest than 01:05:481 (1,2,1,1,1) - btw, you can hear carefully)
• kat at 01:07:457 - to keep the constant pitch sound like 01:07:278 - . i think it's not constant pitch sound, but at 01:07:457 - has more stronger pitch sound than 01:07:278 - . much better use kat then at 01:07:457 -
• kat too at 01:09:613 - to emphasize the don sound at 01:09:793 - . much better to use a different note
• don at 01:10:062 - , so it'll be
ooo triplet, to make a consistent triplet with a same pitch sound like 01:11:409 (1,2,3) - which is
ooo triplet too << they have a same vocal sounds btw
• and change 01:11:769 - to be don too. the reason is same like above too ^ . 01:11:769 - has a same pitch sound like 01:10:331 -
• btw, i didn't change 01:11:230 - to be don because the pitch sound (vocal) is different like 01:09:793 - . 01:11:230 - has a higher pitch than 01:09:793 -
• kat at 01:13:565 -