P o M u T a wrote:

no kds
[Hard]
01:03:307 (1) - add finish slider head.
01:18:545 (1) - ^
02:19:497 (1) - ^
02:49:973 (1) - ^

[Normal]
02:19:497 (1) - remove clap slider head. instead finish.
02:49:021 (1) - remove clap here. really loud imo.

Kazey wrote:

P o M u T a wrote:

no kds
[Hard]
01:03:307 (1) - add finish slider head.
01:18:545 (1) - ^
02:19:497 (1) - ^
02:49:973 (1) - ^

[Normal]
02:19:497 (1) - remove clap slider head. instead finish.
02:49:021 (1) - remove clap here. really loud imo.

Hey! Don't worry, I'll mod your map dude, you're in my modding queue =3(I'm just busy atm)
By the way, thank you for this mod!

Raiku wrote:

Just another Raiku post!

[Hard]

As a general rule of thumb, I feel all your new combos should start on the downbeat. Really?

00:28:783 (2,3,1) - There are a few instances such as this pattern here where I felt the slider end and the following notes could level out and form a line with the intent of improving the flow a little more (http://puu.sh/6ZsFJ.jpg). Notice how I moved the slider after to the right a little to form a flow out of the combo. Sure, right, fixed!

00:34:735 (4) - I feel this should be a new combo up to the last slider since it is a new vocal section. ^

00:45:449 (4,6) - Avoid this overlap. This can be overcome by implementing what I suggest here: (00:44:497 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/6ZsOx.jpg) and here (00:46:402 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/6ZsQH.jpg). Note: I moved 4 and 5 down 1 space on grid level 2, and moved 6 and 7 up 2 spaces. ^

01:24:735 (5,6,7) - I made this triple more linear, how do you feel about this (http://puu.sh/6ZsWG.jpg). 1 grid up ftw!

02:32:354 (4,2) - I avoided this overlap by moving 2 to the right a touch and adjusted the next combos line accordingly (http://puu.sh/6Zt3m.jpg). Fixed!

Funky song dude, love the map and good luck! Thank you for this mod bro!

1. Disable the "Lettebox during breaks" because not used in most map.

1. 00:03:307 (5) - Hmm...not bad, but try out the form like this? Appearance and flow is also good.
   
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2. 00:21:402 (5,1) - Swap the new combo.
3. 00:22:354 (2,3) - Change to the slider instead of the two circles. Slider are fitting to the song than the circle.
4. 00:24:259 (5,6) - try this rhythm?
   
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5. 01:49:021 (1) - Move to x:236 y:28 for blanket.
6. 02:12:354 (7,1) - Swap the new combo.
7. 02:25:688 (3) - Move to x:256 y:88 in order to put on a straight line.
8. 02:26:640 (5) - new combo here.

1. 00:02:830 (4) - Appearance is bad, so move to x:328.
2. 00:58:783 (4) - Spacing is narrow.
3. 00:59:736 (6) - new combo here

1. 00:17:592 (1,2,3,4) - The slider curve 3 is the only sexy curved slider there, owo but you might of been using the old editor way of making blankets but just pointing this out
2. 00:23:307 (4) - You should make it face to the other side, it looks very crammed if you make it face left where the next notes will show up, maybe something like this : http://puu.sh/70mMC.jpg and yeah leave the position of the note the same
3. 00:29:497 (1) - You see this doesn't align correctly in the y-axis you need to make it to 192 like notes 3 and 5 00:30:450 (3,4,5) - (Your trying to make a symmetrical pattern here right?)
4. 00:48:069 (1) - I don't see any reason to make this straight, maybe you can curve it up?
5. 01:04:735 (2,3) - Maybe next time you don't do things like this again orz, its fine but makes your map really unclean D: having the next note touching the previous note in someway
6. 01:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern symmetrical to like how you did 00:29:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - right now its very unsymmetrical and I assume your trying to do the same thing here as there?
7. 01:47:116 (3,4,5,6) - A Great place to do stacking if you wanted to!
8. 02:00:926 (1,2,3) - More alignment issues, make sure 1 aligns with 3!
9. 02:19:021 (3) - Move this down more, to prevent overlapping with 02:20:449 (2) - please. Right now, it's really close to that it doesn't look nice like said before!
10. 02:25:688 (3) - I don't know if this is intentional but its not correctly centered to the grid, might want to fix it to make it look a little more clean I guess orz
11. 02:31:402 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks boring when you repeat it again and again, how about you try this? http://puu.sh/70v4B.jpg it would work loads better.
12. 02:56:164 (3,4,5) - If your going do symmetry like this, you might as well maybe sure they are centered to the grid , move this whole thing more to the left for that to happen.
13. 02:58:545 (1) - Fix the spacing of this note if you change the above.

1. The claps are noisy here D: but I think your at this point its better to mod the issues with hitsounds rather than redo them LOL
2. 00:07:116 (4,5,6,7,8) - Rhythm can be simplified D:, best bet would be to reverse 4 and use a triplet like this : http://puu.sh/70vqr.jpg It's a weird way to start the song, when people are just getting sense of the rhythm
3. 00:21:640 (6) - I don't recommend using such long slider for a hard , it doesn't mix well with the triplets and weird blue tick rhythms you use, probably decrease to red tick and add a circle to the white tick?
4. 00:22:592 (8,9,10) - If you want to do rhythms like this you must add a circle at 00:24:378 - to match with that.
5. 00:36:164 (1) - Ermm, kinda random slider placement >.> , maybe try this? well you need to move the next note too, here's how the whole thing looks like : http://puu.sh/70vK2.jpg that's seems good to me!
6. 00:36:640 (2) - Oh and you might want to add the new combo here instead and remove at 00:36:164 (1) -
7. 00:58:188 (2) - I don't think the note here fits well, it sounds noisy and doesn't even fit anything even with the clap sound off and the clap sound just awful there.
8. 01:00:449 (7) - Why face up? make it face more down( so it doesn't touch the hp bar D:) like this : http://puu.sh/70vWZ.jpg
9. 01:20:092 - Add a note here to keep the triplets flowing well throughout the kiai (you added them sparingly across the kiai anyway)
10. 01:30:569 - ^
11. 01:55:569 - ^
12. 02:06:045 - ^ same you have to add triplets for this kiai too if you did for the first
13. 02:09:378 - ^
14. 02:56:759 - ^
15. 01:54:735 (2) - Not an issue but might want to align with 01:54:259 (5) - in the y-axis

Gamu wrote:

Hello

M4M Request from you

[General]

1. Disable the "Lettebox during breaks" because not used in most map. Right, fixed!

[Normal]

1. 00:03:307 (5) - Hmm...not bad, but try out the form like this? Appearance and flow is also good.
   
   image

   
   Sure!
2. 00:21:402 (5,1) - Swap the new combo. Ok!
3. 00:22:354 (2,3) - Change to the slider instead of the two circles. Slider are fitting to the song than the circle. ^
4. 00:24:259 (5,6) - try this rhythm? ^
   
   image

   
5. 01:49:021 (1) - Move to x:236 y:28 for blanket. nazi! oh wait?!
6. 02:12:354 (7,1) - Swap the new combo. ^
7. 02:25:688 (3) - Move to x:256 y:88 in order to put on a straight line. ^
8. 02:26:640 (5) - new combo here.

^

[Hard]

1. 00:02:830 (4) - Appearance is bad, so move to x:328. Fixed!
2. 00:58:783 (4) - Spacing is narrow. ^
3. 00:59:736 (6) - new combo here ^

sorry for very short mod..
Hitsound is not good orz, but i can help it for you :3
In other words, I able to add hitsound for you! If you need help, please call me

Tari wrote:

Let's see.

[Normal]

1. 00:17:592 (1,2,3,4) - The slider curve 3 is the only sexy curved slider there, owo but you might of been using the old editor way of making blankets but just pointing this out Ok, fixed!
2. 00:23:307 (4) - You should make it face to the other side, it looks very crammed if you make it face left where the next notes will show up, maybe something like this : http://puu.sh/70mMC.jpg and yeah leave the position of the note the same ^
3. 00:29:497 (1) - You see this doesn't align correctly in the y-axis you need to make it to 192 like notes 3 and 5 00:30:450 (3,4,5) - (Your trying to make a symmetrical pattern here right?) Changed pattern.
4. 00:48:069 (1) - I don't see any reason to make this straight, maybe you can curve it up? Why not
5. 01:04:735 (2,3) - Maybe next time you don't do things like this again orz, its fine but makes your map really unclean D: having the next note touching the previous note in someway Yeah, k
6. 01:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern symmetrical to like how you did 00:29:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - right now its very unsymmetrical and I assume your trying to do the same thing here as there? ^
7. 01:47:116 (3,4,5,6) - A Great place to do stacking if you wanted to! Stacked!
8. 02:00:926 (1,2,3) - More alignment issues, make sure 1 aligns with 3! Already
9. 02:19:021 (3) - Move this down more, to prevent overlapping with 02:20:449 (2) - please. Right now, it's really close to that it doesn't look nice like said before! Ok, fixed!
10. 02:25:688 (3) - I don't know if this is intentional but its not correctly centered to the grid, might want to fix it to make it look a little more clean I guess orz nazi stuff fixed!
11. 02:31:402 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks boring when you repeat it again and again, how about you try this? http://puu.sh/70v4B.jpg it would work loads better. ^
12. 02:56:164 (3,4,5) - If your going do symmetry like this, you might as well maybe sure they are centered to the grid , move this whole thing more to the left for that to happen. ^
13. 02:58:545 (1) - Fix the spacing of this note if you change the above. ^

[Hard]

1. The claps are noisy here D: but I think your at this point its better to mod the issues with hitsounds rather than redo them LOL XD
2. 00:07:116 (4,5,6,7,8) - Rhythm can be simplified D:, best bet would be to reverse 4 and use a triplet like this : http://puu.sh/70vqr.jpg It's a weird way to start the song, when people are just getting sense of the rhythm Yeah, understood, but I pref this actual pattern bro
3. 00:21:640 (6) - I don't recommend using such long slider for a hard , it doesn't mix well with the triplets and weird blue tick rhythms you use, probably decrease to red tick and add a circle to the white tick? ^
4. 00:22:592 (8,9,10) - If you want to do rhythms like this you must add a circle at 00:24:378 - to match with that. Fixed!
5. 00:36:164 (1) - Ermm, kinda random slider placement >.> , maybe try this? well you need to move the next note too, here's how the whole thing looks like : http://puu.sh/70vK2.jpg that's seems good to me! ^
6. 00:36:640 (2) - Oh and you might want to add the new combo here instead and remove at 00:36:164 (1) - ^
7. 00:58:188 (2) - I don't think the note here fits well, it sounds noisy and doesn't even fit anything even with the clap sound off and the clap sound just awful there. Deleted!
8. 01:00:449 (7) - Why face up? make it face more down( so it doesn't touch the hp bar D:) like this : http://puu.sh/70vWZ.jpg Pattern changed!
9. 01:20:092 - Add a note here to keep the triplets flowing well throughout the kiai (you added them sparingly across the kiai anyway) Right,
10. 01:30:569 - ^ ^
11. 01:55:569 - ^ ^
12. 02:06:045 - ^ same you have to add triplets for this kiai too if you did for the first ^
13. 02:09:378 - ^ ^
14. 02:56:759 - ^ ^
15. 01:54:735 (2) - Not an issue but might want to align with 01:54:259 (5) - in the y-axis ^

Alarido wrote:

Congratz For the Ranking!!!!

Edit: a possible, subjective, little, missing thing here at Normal diff, noticed at ~25s while playing.