M4M. Sorry, I had many requests, so I wasn't able to mod it imidiatelly.
[ Kantan]
[ Futsuu]
[ Muzukashii]
[ Oni]
[ Inner Oni]
That's all, good luck TKSalt! ╭( ・ㅂ・)و 三☆
[ Kantan]
SPOILER
General
- Change HP / OD to level 3?
Notes
00:06:442 (6,7,8) - Suggesting to use the pattern you had at 00:01:079 (1,2) - .
00:22:531 (26) - D? After all your main beat is don.
00:33:928 (47) - Hm, deleting the note would be nice. It emphasizes 00:34:598 really good. Also overall pattern is long. Or delete 00:32:922 (45) - .
00:57:391 (13) - finisher?
01:36:944 (9,10) - Delete these notes? Having some break is good.
01:47:335 (28) - Recommending to move this note at 01:47:000.
Nice Kantan. The abekobe style in kiai is great.
- Change HP / OD to level 3?
Notes
00:06:442 (6,7,8) - Suggesting to use the pattern you had at 00:01:079 (1,2) - .
00:22:531 (26) - D? After all your main beat is don.
00:33:928 (47) - Hm, deleting the note would be nice. It emphasizes 00:34:598 really good. Also overall pattern is long. Or delete 00:32:922 (45) - .
00:57:391 (13) - finisher?
01:36:944 (9,10) - Delete these notes? Having some break is good.
01:47:335 (28) - Recommending to move this note at 01:47:000.
Nice Kantan. The abekobe style in kiai is great.
[ Futsuu]
SPOILER
General
- Change HP / OD to level 4 / 3 ?
Notes
00:06:442 - Adding a don is suggested by me. You have on all othe rmain ticks a don as well.
00:22:531 (43) - D ? Like in Kantan.
00:28:900 (57) - Suggesting to delete the note, making a bit easier. Doesn't sound bad as well.
00:39:626 (85) - ^
01:03:760 (133) - Delete this note. Doesn't fit well, even though it is vocal mapping. This is rather a part where you should use only don.
01:09:124 (148) - kat ?
01:10:799~01:42:978 - Delete some notes. The kiai has a constant 1/2 pattern without breaks. Pretty hard for a Futsuu. Could be considered as easy Muzukashii. Pattern constellation is easy of course.
01:18:509 - I think it would be better to have a slider here instead at 01:20:185. Though, I can imagine why you mapped it like this, so you can keep it if you really want to.
01:29:235 - ^ (here the pattern is also hard)
01:51:861 - Maybe move this note to 01:52:363. Not a must.
Futsuu is fine so far, but could be a bit easier.
- Change HP / OD to level 4 / 3 ?
Notes
00:06:442 - Adding a don is suggested by me. You have on all othe rmain ticks a don as well.
00:22:531 (43) - D ? Like in Kantan.
00:28:900 (57) - Suggesting to delete the note, making a bit easier. Doesn't sound bad as well.
00:39:626 (85) - ^
01:03:760 (133) - Delete this note. Doesn't fit well, even though it is vocal mapping. This is rather a part where you should use only don.
01:09:124 (148) - kat ?
01:10:799~01:42:978 - Delete some notes. The kiai has a constant 1/2 pattern without breaks. Pretty hard for a Futsuu. Could be considered as easy Muzukashii. Pattern constellation is easy of course.
01:18:509 - I think it would be better to have a slider here instead at 01:20:185. Though, I can imagine why you mapped it like this, so you can keep it if you really want to.
01:29:235 - ^ (here the pattern is also hard)
01:51:861 - Maybe move this note to 01:52:363. Not a must.
Futsuu is fine so far, but could be a bit easier.
[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
General
- 00:27:224 (77,78,79) - These patterns are harder as the ddk from Oni. Wanted just to mention it.
00:28:565 ^
Notes
00:17:503 (46) - delete this note? Maybe making the pattern a bit smaller is better.
00:27:224 (77,78,79) - I think d d k fits better. Beat is strong. Mapping to vocal is questionable here.
00:28:565 (82,83,84) - ^ (same for up coming once)
00:31:246 (93) - Could be deleted. I would prefer it.
00:41:972 (132) - ^
00:49:347 (155) - Maybe don. But you can keep the vocal mapping.
00:52:699 (165) - Since you map to vocal, deleting this note would be better. Sounds quiet nice and makes it a bit easier.
00:54:039 (170) - ^
00:56:386 - d k d? High pitch at the end.
01:18:173 (240,241,242) - Nah, don't use a 1/4 here. Doesn't fit to the vocal that well.
01:18:844~01:21:190 - Here you can use 1/4 (or a slider) e.g.: http://puu.sh/4Ayac.jpg - Would be important because the kiai in Oni has already many 1/4, so having some entrance into 1/4 pattern in the Muzukashii is recommendable.
01:28:984 (288) - Same as before. Doesn't fit well.
01:29:654 - Here you could add a don to have a ddd.
Muzukashii is so far nice. Some notes could be changed rather to beat based sounds, but let's don't be too strict. lol
Only kiai is a bit questionable to me. Having some breaks would be actually nice... but I won't force it this time.
- 00:27:224 (77,78,79) - These patterns are harder as the ddk from Oni. Wanted just to mention it.
00:28:565 ^
Notes
00:17:503 (46) - delete this note? Maybe making the pattern a bit smaller is better.
00:27:224 (77,78,79) - I think d d k fits better. Beat is strong. Mapping to vocal is questionable here.
00:28:565 (82,83,84) - ^ (same for up coming once)
00:31:246 (93) - Could be deleted. I would prefer it.
00:41:972 (132) - ^
00:49:347 (155) - Maybe don. But you can keep the vocal mapping.
00:52:699 (165) - Since you map to vocal, deleting this note would be better. Sounds quiet nice and makes it a bit easier.
00:54:039 (170) - ^
00:56:386 - d k d? High pitch at the end.
01:18:173 (240,241,242) - Nah, don't use a 1/4 here. Doesn't fit to the vocal that well.
01:18:844~01:21:190 - Here you can use 1/4 (or a slider) e.g.: http://puu.sh/4Ayac.jpg - Would be important because the kiai in Oni has already many 1/4, so having some entrance into 1/4 pattern in the Muzukashii is recommendable.
01:28:984 (288) - Same as before. Doesn't fit well.
01:29:654 - Here you could add a don to have a ddd.
Muzukashii is so far nice. Some notes could be changed rather to beat based sounds, but let's don't be too strict. lol
Only kiai is a bit questionable to me. Having some breaks would be actually nice... but I won't force it this time.
[ Oni]
SPOILER
General
Kiai's 1/4 should be reduced just a little, or made a bit easier. Muzukashii doesn't have so many 1/4 in it, so the spread might become a bit high.
- Change HP / OD to level 5 / 5 ? Muzukashii has 4 / 4. Jumping in Oni to 6/6 is questionable.
Notes
00:31:497 (117) - Not sure about this note. Maybe some other modders will say something about it.
{
00:43:145 (172) - kat
00:43:816 (177) - don
} I think this sounds better.
00:44:318 (179,180,181,182,183,184) - k d d k k d ?
00:57:391 (224) - D might be good. Not a must.
01:03:425 (236,237,238) - Not sure if this really fits good here. Vocal mapping okay, but afterwards not a single kat appears again. Sounds a bit weird.
01:12:140 (271) - kat for the vocal.
01:21:442 (336,337) - I think a K or D would fit better here.
01:22:866 (345) - Maybe kat ?
Oni is good. But a bit high spread to Muzukashii. Maybe you have an idea how to solve this. E.g. reducing 1/4 in Oni.
Kiai's 1/4 should be reduced just a little, or made a bit easier. Muzukashii doesn't have so many 1/4 in it, so the spread might become a bit high.
- Change HP / OD to level 5 / 5 ? Muzukashii has 4 / 4. Jumping in Oni to 6/6 is questionable.
Notes
00:31:497 (117) - Not sure about this note. Maybe some other modders will say something about it.
{
00:43:145 (172) - kat
00:43:816 (177) - don
} I think this sounds better.
00:44:318 (179,180,181,182,183,184) - k d d k k d ?
00:57:391 (224) - D might be good. Not a must.
01:03:425 (236,237,238) - Not sure if this really fits good here. Vocal mapping okay, but afterwards not a single kat appears again. Sounds a bit weird.
01:12:140 (271) - kat for the vocal.
01:21:442 (336,337) - I think a K or D would fit better here.
01:22:866 (345) - Maybe kat ?
Oni is good. But a bit high spread to Muzukashii. Maybe you have an idea how to solve this. E.g. reducing 1/4 in Oni.
[ Inner Oni]
SPOILER
General
- Change HP / OD to level 6 / 6 ?
Notes
00:57:391 (282) - finisher ?
01:00:073 - Consider making this to don because the beat is still strong here.
01:03:425 (294,295,296) - Same as in Oni.
01:14:738 (355) - Should be deleted. the vocal is not stretched.
01:13:984~01:15:157 - How about this: http://puu.sh/4Ayv2.jpg ? Nice alternate, the two kats at 01:13:816 sound nice and pattern fit to vocal as well.
01:15:324 - This note can be deleted.
01:17:000 - Changing to kat sounds good I think.
01:18:509 - I would rather prefer a slider here. Sometimes the usage of many notes can become boring or something like that. A slider / spinner makes it more interesting. Not a must if you don't want.
01:24:207 - This as don would be awesome. 01:21:861~01:24:375 - the usage of don would be great and kat emphasizes it self really nice! You could do this in some other patterns as well. More don instead of kat.
01:26:470 - Recommending to change to don. Current pattern is vague. Also deleting note at 01:26:134 might be also good. The vocal is not stretched.
01:28:900~01:29:403 - kdk d d Seems to be good. the "d d" is a good contrast to the "k k" at 01:29:905.
01:29:235 - Same thing with the slider.
01:31:497 - Probably better to delete this note. Pattern is really odd, but and fits as kdk better to the vocal in my opinion.
Inner is actually quiet nice. But reducing some notes wouldn't hurt if you ask me. You have many long paterns e.g. 5-plets which are actually just triplets or shorter. In general my suggestion is to have a long pattern only when the vocal is stretched.
- Change HP / OD to level 6 / 6 ?
Notes
00:57:391 (282) - finisher ?
01:00:073 - Consider making this to don because the beat is still strong here.
01:03:425 (294,295,296) - Same as in Oni.
01:14:738 (355) - Should be deleted. the vocal is not stretched.
01:13:984~01:15:157 - How about this: http://puu.sh/4Ayv2.jpg ? Nice alternate, the two kats at 01:13:816 sound nice and pattern fit to vocal as well.
01:15:324 - This note can be deleted.
01:17:000 - Changing to kat sounds good I think.
01:18:509 - I would rather prefer a slider here. Sometimes the usage of many notes can become boring or something like that. A slider / spinner makes it more interesting. Not a must if you don't want.
01:24:207 - This as don would be awesome. 01:21:861~01:24:375 - the usage of don would be great and kat emphasizes it self really nice! You could do this in some other patterns as well. More don instead of kat.
01:26:470 - Recommending to change to don. Current pattern is vague. Also deleting note at 01:26:134 might be also good. The vocal is not stretched.
01:28:900~01:29:403 - kdk d d Seems to be good. the "d d" is a good contrast to the "k k" at 01:29:905.
01:29:235 - Same thing with the slider.
01:31:497 - Probably better to delete this note. Pattern is really odd, but and fits as kdk better to the vocal in my opinion.
Inner is actually quiet nice. But reducing some notes wouldn't hurt if you ask me. You have many long paterns e.g. 5-plets which are actually just triplets or shorter. In general my suggestion is to have a long pattern only when the vocal is stretched.
That's all, good luck TKSalt! ╭( ・ㅂ・)و 三☆