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Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size)

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Melophobia
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Melophobia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月17日 at 0:09:27

Artist: Ray
Title: ebb and flow (TV Size)
Source: 凪のあすから
Tags: Nagi no Asukara opening KSHR Laurier Irreversible Konei Kawada Mami
BPM: 106.02
Filesize: 9173kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.22 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Insane (2.98 stars, 192 notes)
  3. Irre & Konei's Hard (2.49 stars, 156 notes)
  4. KSHR's Normal (1.74 stars, 114 notes)
  5. Laurier's Hard (2.39 stars, 155 notes)
Download: Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size)
Download: Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size) (no video)
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12/9 New BG and hitsounds, please redownload once again!
Last edited by Melophobia , edited 50 times in total.
Kodora
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First!

/me hides
Melophobia
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WTFAST
Kodora
Kodora
\:D/
Raging Bull
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Raging Bull
2rd
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Best ebb and flow map so far, gj <3
Laurier
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Laurier
http://puu.sh/6VVpS.osu
ichiou kansei
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Raging Bull
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Raging Bull
KSHR AND MELOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
MiLu
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MiLu
Melophobia
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Melophobia
（誰こいつ）
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CakiP


団地妻
Melophobia
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Cute
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
speedrank

Chisaki > everyone
Melophobia
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Melophobia
I AGREE
Umi
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Umi

Frostmourne wrote:

speedrank

Chisaki > everyone
2 reality !
Last edited by Frostmourne , edited 1 time in total.
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
.... what? Only Insane was done like 15 mins ago and boom, suddenly a full mapset. Oh you guys >w<
Melophobia
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kd for irc mod! thank you!
spam
03:54 Asphyxia > can I throw couple of suggestions?
03:54 Asphyxia > 00:00:339 (1) - Making this a perfect blanket with 00:02:601 (2) - would be a lot nicer
03:54 Asphyxia > or atleast make the curve look like it's more blanketed
03:55 Asphyxia > personally that fits nicer
03:55 Asphyxia > spacing still should be consistent
03:55 Asphyxia > but you know
03:55 Asphyxia > that's just my opinion
03:56 Asphyxia > 00:16:173 (3,4) - heheheheh nazi, 0,04 ds error
03:56 Asphyxia > if you actually distance snap (4), you can see the difference
03:57 Asphyxia > 00:29:745 (3,4) -
03:57 Asphyxia > a bit nazi again, but some spacing issues
03:58 Asphyxia > 00:38:793 (3,4,1) - This part seems a bit dull consider you mapped it in the same corner like 00:34:269 (3,4) -
03:58 Asphyxia > you could mix it up a bit
03:59 Asphyxia > hmm
03:59 Asphyxia > lemme come up with something
04:01 Asphyxia > well honestly you could just move the objects a bit more down so it doesn't get mapped fully in the same corner
04:01 Asphyxia > http://puu.sh/6W3oC.jpg
04:01 Asphyxia > like that
04:01 Asphyxia > I can take a better screenshot if that isn't clear enough
04:03 Asphyxia > 01:09:330 (3,4) - Spacing errors
04:03 Asphyxia > 01:10:461 (1,2,3) - Some spacing errors here too
04:04 Asphyxia > 01:26:154 (1) - I'd start this spinner 1/4 later, you know, because beginners might not be able to catch that
04:04 Asphyxia > Well, the easy diff is nice, but if you CTRL + A
04:05 Asphyxia > you can see that you haven't really placed anything really in the center of the map
04:05 Asphyxia > mostly in the corners
04:05 Asphyxia > so redoing some parts can improve it a bit
04:05 Asphyxia > but if you want to
04:06 Asphyxia > but yeah, it was pretty nice
04:08 Asphyxia > i can do that
04:08 Asphyxia > lol
04:08 Asphyxia > well
04:08 Asphyxia > you choose
04:08 Asphyxia > ok<3
Fycho
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Fycho
ちさき and 美海<3
Melophobia
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wakaru
Laurier
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Laurier
sorosoro awa kana ?
Melophobia
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Waiting for KSHR
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Naisu desu!! Go! Go! Melo-chan :3
Andrea
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Andrea

-Umi- wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

speedrank

Chisaki > everyone
2 reality !
Can't agree more here.

Also, good luck with this. :)
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Irre + Konei's Hard
osu file format v12

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We hope you like it!
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
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KSHR
はい・・

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Andrea, Irre: Don't poke me anymore, PLEASE!!


EDIT: Add Irreversible and Konei into Tags. kds please.
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Melophobia
sankyuuu!

moved to pending!
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
from in-game pm :3 Melo so ero o3o/

General:
  1. remove the widescreen support in all diffs, since you didn't use any widescreen sb in this map o3o/ so it's useless here
Easy:
  1. 00:17:021 (4) - move this slider's body downward like this? it'll make better at gameplay o.o/
    SPOILER
  2. 00:24:655 (2) - this slider kinda started at wrong place, if you listen carefully you'll notice that the melody started at 00:24:938 so i suggest you to reduce this slider by 1/2 and make it start there, see if you might like it o3o
  3. 00:39:641 (4) - well, i don't kinda like this kind of slider's on soft songs like this, so i suggest you to remove the red slider's points and make normal slider instead
  4. 00:43:317 (3) - well, for better play i suggest you to make this slider like this, it'll look much better also
    SPOILER
  5. 00:46:144 (1,3) - make them symmetric, atm the triangle looks kinda bad
  6. 01:02:827 (2,3) - this two notes at red point so it's might be confusing for some players so i suggest you to remove these notes and make them one 1/2 slider instead
  7. 01:20:923 (2,3) - ^

KSHR's Normal:
rise the OD by one so it'll balance with the other settings
  1. 00:01:470 (2) - add whistle to slider's revers, it'll follow the piano very well
  2. 00:03:732 (1) - ^ but at slider's end
  3. 00:05:994 (2) - ^
  4. 00:25:221 (1,2) - those note and slider kinda sounded weird to me so, how about making it like this instead:
Beside these, this diff is great atm :3


Irre & Konei's Hard:
  1. 00:16:455 (2) - move this note to x:256 y:316, so it'll make better star shape o.o
  2. 00:34:269 (1,2,3) - I think it'll be better for these notes to be a small jumps like this? (just ctrl+g the 2 and 3)
    SPOILER

Laurier's Hard:
  1. 00:12:497 (2) - this slider's blanket is kinda bad imo, so how about making it like this instead?
    SPOILER

    240,102,11649,6,0,P|203:107|159:98,2,80,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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    212,192,13345,2,0,P|252:256|214:322,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:36:248 (6) - remove clap and add finish instead, sounds a lot better
  3. 00:39:924 (1) - ^ but at slider's revers
  4. 01:09:330 (2) - remove this slider and add small stream instead? it'll play much better since this slider ends where there is no clap anyways o3o/

Insane:
  1. 00:33:420 (5) - this overlap is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this note under, 00:32:855 (3) - slider's start
  2. 00:37:662 (3) - stuck this perfectly under 00:36:531 (1) - slider's end

That's all i can find, it's great map overall and gogo fastrank <3
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier

Sekai-nyan wrote:

from in-game pm :3 Melo so ero o3o/




Laurier's Hard:
  1. 00:12:497 (2) - this slider's blanket is kinda bad imo, so how about making it like this instead?
    SPOILER

    240,102,11649,6,0,P|203:107|159:98,2,80,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    128,33,12497,2,0,P|90:104|136:166,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    212,192,13345,2,0,P|252:256|214:322,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:36:248 (6) - remove clap and add finish instead, sounds a lot better ok
  3. 00:39:924 (1) - ^ but at slider's revers ok
  4. 01:09:330 (2) - remove this slider and add small stream instead? it'll play much better since this slider ends where there is no clap anyways o3o/
remove clap and instead add finish on slider end
http://puu.sh/77tFj.osu
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Hi~

[Easy]
is this 0 AR real or accident? I've never seen someone use it, lol <- inexperienced mapper..
01:06:502 - this drum and vocal is being ignored and felt weird to me well it's Easy try this? http://puu.sh/77YEW.jpg
Since you already have some 1/2 beat, i don't think this will be a problem

[KSHR's Normal]
01:18:944 (4) - just make it a curve? because the slider before this is a smooth curve

[Hard collab]
00:25:221 (1,2) - I don't think this random jump fits here
00:47:841 (1) - did you mean to end it on the blue tick? I think it ends on white
00:57:737 (1,2,3) - mmm maybe reduce distance a bit? I know it's a slow song but this jump..

[Laurier's Hard]
00:26:069 (3,4) - blanket properly (if you meant to blanket thtem)
00:44:165 (3,4) - reduce distance?
00:47:841 (1) - 5% volume on the spinner end?
01:18:095 (2,3,4) - how about not stacking them so it's easier to play
01:26:012 (6) - delete NC? because all other diffs didn't put NC here

[Insane]
00:15:890 (4) - How about stacking on 00:14:476 (2) ?
00:44:165 (2,3) - doesn't look good, but it's not like i can come up with something better ;_;

I couldn't find much, sorry, but I tried.. :(

Too pro

Good luck! :)
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Irre Konei Hard
osu file format v12

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Version:Irre & Konei's Hard
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから opening KSHR Laurier Irreversible Konei
BeatmapID:373550
BeatmapSetID:150235

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Applied all, thanks guys (on my parts! This idea with CTRL + G was really cute Sekai!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
Video offset -20
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
Video looks great @6 MB :o

[Easy]
Felt good, though a little slider-heavy for my taste. Miiight be better with AR +1 (it'd help spots like 00:52:365 (1,2,3,4) - ), but I'll leave that to you.

[Normal]
00:09:952 (1) - Feels kinda soon after a spinner for a Normal. Especially compared to this set's Easy.
Pretty solid though.

[IK's Hard]
00:01:470 (4) - I'd silence the ticks during the intro for these 1.5 beat sliders.
00:17:021 (4,5,1) - This spacing transition is pretty confusing. I'd normalize it a bit (or get rid of the anti-jump)
00:21:545 (3,4) - After seeing this stack, it was weird having a normal stack at 00:22:393 (5,1) -
00:25:221 (1,2) - I'm not feeling this jump at all.
00:38:510 (4,6) - This overlap could be easily avoided
00:41:055 - To be honest, I really don't think this song needs a break in it.
00:45:579 (1,1,2,3,1) - These are all part of the same phrase. I'd keep the spacing similar.
00:48:689 - Make this tick audible
00:51:799 (2) - Aaaaaah whyyyyyyyy noooooooo it was a decent map until now. Look at Laurier's map to see how to apply something like this better. Right now it just kind of comes out with a lot of nothing to lead into it (I'm not counting that long slider 400 seconds before all the nothing in the map since it's long gone at this point)
The kiai is ... really stylistically different from the rest of the map. I guess that's okay, but it didn't quite settle with itself as a whole imo.

[L Hard]
00:12:497 (2,3) - Spacing feels too close
00:37:379 (2) - This stack kind of killed your momentum. A stack at 00:37:379 - and 00:37:662 - would make more sense.
00:39:924 (1) - Maybe do .75x SV? .5x feels a bit much
00:44:165 (3,4) - This is a pretty big jump compared to the rest of the map, and it's a pretty calm part of the bridge.
01:18:095 (2,3,4) - Stack like this so it looks nicer while playing.

[Insane]
I like this better with circle size 5
AR 7 also fits the pace of the map much better imo.
00:39:924 (1) - Kind of weird to have it at .5x.
Pretty solid.

Nice balanced set despite all the guest difficulties. Quite rare to see that. Collab needs a bit of work, but the rest of the maps are pretty much good to go.
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR

Sekai-nyan wrote:

KSHR's Normal:
rise the OD by one so it'll balance with the other settings yea, I agree. Rised the OD from 3 to 4~
  1. 00:01:470 (2) - add whistle to slider's revers, it'll follow the piano very well A
  2. 00:03:732 (1) - ^ but at slider's end d
  3. 00:05:994 (2) - ^ ded
  4. 00:25:221 (1,2) - those note and slider kinda sounded weird to me so, how about making it like this instead: Yea, an object at 00:25:786 - doesn't make sense considering the guitar sound is sustained from 00:25:503 - to 00:26:069 - . Fixed in your rhythm and my own pattern.
Beside these, this diff is great atm :3 :3

No Dap wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
01:18:944 (4) - just make it a curve? because the slider before this is a smooth curve "the slider before this" which you wrote means 01:18:095 (3) - , right? The synthesizer sound is sustained from 01:16:964 - and 01:18:095 - , but 01:18:944 - . That's why I didn't make it a curve like (1,3).

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:952 (1) - Feels kinda soon after a spinner for a Normal. Especially compared to this set's Easy. Okay~, fixed by starting from 00:10:518 - like Melo did in the Easy difficulty!
Pretty solid though. yay!
Thanks for modding!


To Melo: Generalの内容（widescreen, tick, video offset）に関してはいじってないので、それだけお願いしまっす
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:ebb and flow (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ebb and flow (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Melophobia
Version:KSHR's Normal
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから opening KSHR Laurier Irreversible Konei
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BeatmapSetID:150235

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Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,128
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SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Lead-Inを1000くらい入れてみませんか？　最近のRanked map見ると入ってないのもありますが、プレイヤー側としては入れてもらった方がストレスなくプレイできます。
  2. tagに作詞を担当している"川田まみ kawada mami"を追加してみてはどうでしょう？ osu!では割と知られていて検索使う人も多いと思うので。
  3. 全てのdiffのWidescreen-supportのチェックを外しましょう。

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:890 (4) - 個人的には3にスタックさせるよりも、スペーシングがまとまって見えるこのあたりに配置させる方が好みです。プレイ画面では3のスライダーとの重なりはほとんど気にならないので。
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:634 (4,5,6) - 6から1へジャンプさせるのではなく、1のスライダーに入りやすいように流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  3. 01:01:130 (8) - ここはfinish外してwhislteのみの方が曲に合ってていいかもです。
  4. 01:04:240 (3) - 曲調に変化も見られないので特に理由もなければ2grid右に移動させてspacingを統一させた方が良いです。
  5. 01:25:730 (7,8) - Ctrl+Gの流れの方が叩きやすいと思います。

[Laurier's Hard]
  1. 00:44:165 (3,4) - Hardにしてはスペーシングが近いようで遠いような気がしました。もう少し近づけたほうがいいかなと思いました。
  2. 00:54:061 (3) - 終端のfinish要らないような？　曲にはそれに近い音が聞こえないので・・
  3. 01:12:440 (4) - 始端にadd whislte?
  4. 01:18:944 (4) - 終端部分のhitsoundを削除？　曲に合ってないです。

[Irre & Konei's Hard]
  1. 00:01:470 (4) - Add whistle to slider end?
  2. 00:04:156 (4,5) - Add whistle
  3. 00:11:649 (1,2,3) - I recommend you make a consistent the spacing here. like this?
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    171,257,11649,6,0,P|128:256|84:276,1,79,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:28:614 (3) - I don't like the slider with a big curve. so I suggest change to a small curve the slider.
    SPOILER
  5. 00:38:510 (4) - Stack 00:35:965 (5) - here? Should be able to make a more beautifully triangle.
    SPOILER
  6. 00:51:799 (2) - This part is really quiet so remove to whistle?
  7. 00:54:061 (4) - Add finish to slider end?
  8. 01:01:413 (1) - Looks like a straight slider this one. I recommend you bend it a little more.
    SPOILER
  9. 01:03:392 (1) - ^
  10. 01:09:047 (3) - Add finish
  11. 01:15:833 (2) - try to use a copy of the slider. Looks good more than current one.
    SPOILER
  12. 01:24:033 - Hear a big sound here. so want to a something. Try this rhythm.

    SPOILER
[KSHR's Normal]
  1. 00:26:634 (3) - リピートにWhislteを追加
  2. 00:31:441 (3) - ここも始端にS:C3のwhistleを追加
  3. 00:35:965 - ^
  4. 00:39:358 - ^
  5. 01:11:309 (2) - こっちにも裏でシンバルの音が聞こえるので始端にデフォのsoft-finishが欲しいなと思いました。

[alacat's Easy]
  1. AR+1or2してNormalとのバランスをとりましょう。
  2. 00:24:372 (2) - Sliderの終わりは00:25:221 - ここにしてfinishの音拾ったほうがリズムもとりやすいです。
  3. 01:02:827 (2,3) - バスの位置に合わせて置いているのはわかるんですが、初心者には読みづらいリズムだと思うので、1/2スライダーのリピートを使用してみてはどうでしょうか？ 歌詞もフォローできる形となり、非常に読みやすくなると思います。

  4. 01:20:923 (2,3) - ^と同じです。
nice mapset!!
Good luck :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
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[KSHR's Normal]
  1. 00:00:339 (1) - add whistle. (head) 他diffにはついてるけどどうしましょう(?)
  2. 00:01:470 (2) - add whistle 00:02:318 - here. いれたほうが合いそう(?) 00:03:732 (1) - こっちにはついてるし・・・
  3. 00:38:793 (1) - remove whistle. (head) whistleぽい音入ってないのでfinish単体でいれたほうがfitすると思います。
    ↑を修正した場合のみですが、00:38:227 (3) - ここの頭のwhistleを後に持ってくるとよりよくなる(?)かもしれないです。
  4. 00:39:641 (2) - remove whistle. 変わりにfinishを入れると合うと思います。少なくともwhistleの音はないかも・・・。
  5. 00:54:910 (1) - add whistle. 歌詞もあるのでwhistleいれても合うかも(?)
  6. 00:59:434 (1) - ^
  7. 01:13:006 (1) - ^
[Irre & Konei's Hard]
  1. 00:13:911 (1) - remove whistle. (head)
  2. 00:16:455 (2) - remove whistle.
  3. 00:24:655 (4) - add whistle (head)
  4. 00:34:552 (2) - remove whistle.
  5. 00:38:510 (4,5,6) - More better rhythm,follow with melody like this.
  6. 00:41:196 - not use green line (?)
  7. 00:47:841 (1) - It is preferable to extend try my suggestion.
  8. 01:12:440 (1) - add whistle (last)
  9. 01:13:571 (3) - add whistle (head)
  10. 01:24:033 - add note.
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:283 (2) - できれば 00:19:424 - ここもフォローしたほうがいいかも(?)

役に立たなかった場合はNo kdsでお願いします~

Easy Laurier's Hardの指摘点はありません looks goodです!!
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR

Guy wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
  1. 00:26:634 (3) - リピートにWhislteを追加 こってり忘れてました
  2. 00:31:441 (3) - ここも始端にS:C3のwhistleを追加 ^
  3. 00:35:965 - ^ ^
  4. 00:39:358 - ^ ^
  5. 01:11:309 (2) - こっちにも裏でシンバルの音が聞こえるので始端にデフォのsoft-finishが欲しいなと思いました。もう一回聞いてみるとバスドラのカスタムfinishよりそっちのが良さそうだね　fixed

alacat's Easy

Satellite wrote:

[KSHR's Normal]
  1. 00:00:339 (1) - add whistle. (head) 他diffにはついてるけどどうしましょう(?) ついか～
  2. 00:01:470 (2) - add whistle 00:02:318 - here. いれたほうが合いそう(?) 00:03:732 (1) - こっちにはついてるし・・・ せかいのもっどですでに！
  3. 00:38:793 (1) - remove whistle. (head) whistleぽい音入ってないのでfinish単体でいれたほうがfitすると思います。
    ↑を修正した場合のみですが、00:38:227 (3) - ここの頭のwhistleを後に持ってくるとよりよくなる(?)かもしれないです。 nice, ではあるんだけどここの(1,2)ではギターフォローのwhistleをつけたかったからこのままで。ただ、その前の(3)の頭のwhistleは個人的にもパターンを窮屈にさせてるなぁって思ってたから、いっそのこと削除しちゃいました　多分気になったのってこの窮屈な感じだよね？
  4. 00:39:641 (2) - remove whistle. 変わりにfinishを入れると合うと思います。少なくともwhistleの音はないかも・・・。 これのいっこ上で説明したとおり！
  5. 00:54:910 (1) - add whistle. 歌詞もあるのでwhistleいれても合うかも(?) ふぃっくすとぅ！
  6. 00:59:434 (1) - ^ ＾
  7. 01:13:006 (1) - ^ ^
thanks, Gays!


SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13062,27483,41055,52365
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:ebb and flow (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ebb and flow (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Melophobia
Version:KSHR's Normal
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから opening KSHR Laurier Irreversible Konei
BeatmapID:370919
BeatmapSetID:150235

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"nagi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Melophobia
Sekai-nyan

Sekai-nyan wrote:

from in-game pm :3 Melo so pro o3o/ Fixed for you.
General:
  1. remove the widescreen support in all diffs, since you didn't use any widescreen sb in this map o3o/ so it's useless here Alrighty.
Easy:
  1. 00:17:021 (4) - move this slider's body downward like this? it'll make better at gameplay o.o/ Nice idea!
    SPOILER
  2. 00:24:655 (2) - this slider kinda started at wrong place, if you listen carefully you'll notice that the melody started at 00:24:938 so i suggest you to reduce this slider by 1/2 and make it start there, see if you might like it o3o You're right.
  3. 00:39:641 (4) - well, i don't kinda like this kind of slider's on soft songs like this, so i suggest you to remove the red slider's points and make normal slider instead I wanted to make something different here, since the melody is also somewhat different.
  4. 00:43:317 (3) - well, for better play i suggest you to make this slider like this, it'll look much better also The current one flows better imo. Your suggested pattern is kinda common in my maps so it also helps provide some variety.
    SPOILER
  5. 00:46:144 (1,3) - make them symmetric, atm the triangle looks kinda bad Symmetrical is meh.. I caanot come up with something better for now.
  6. 01:02:827 (2,3) - this two notes at red point so it's might be confusing for some players so i suggest you to remove these notes and make them one 1/2 slider instead Fixed.
  7. 01:20:923 (2,3) - ^ ^
Insane:
  1. 00:33:420 (5) - this overlap is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this note under, 00:32:855 (3) - slider's start I find it sexy. :< Stacking (3) would make it way too close and doesn't play good honestly.
  2. 00:37:662 (3) - stuck this perfectly under 00:36:531 (1) - slider's end Okie.

That's all i can find, it's great map overall and gogo fastrank <3
Thank you so much! <3

No Dap

No Dap wrote:

Hi~ Hi. :>

[Easy]
is this 0 AR real or accident? I've never seen someone use it, lol <- inexperienced mapper.. I always map easier difficulties with low AR to make sure they look neat LOL Rised to 3.
01:06:502 - this drum and vocal is being ignored and felt weird to me well it's Easy try this? http://puu.sh/77YEW.jpg This difficulty is based on bass-drum so i think it's fine as it is; There's too many vocals being ignored and I cannot follow them all. It's currently well-balanced imo.
Since you already have some 1/2 beat, i don't think this will be a problem

[Insane]
00:15:890 (4) - How about stacking on 00:14:476 (2) ? Indeed that jump was originally kinda too much, but stacking on (2) is way too close in my eyes. So I fixed in my own way. It's surely much better now. :3
00:44:165 (2,3) - doesn't look good, but it's not like i can come up with something better ;_; Actually I really like the way it looks. ;_;

I couldn't find much, sorry, but I tried.. :(

Too pro

Good luck! :)
Thank you so much!

Garven

Garven wrote:

[General]
Video offset -20 Sure.
Tick rate 2 fits this song best Agreed.
Video looks great @6 MB :o Blame Andrea. :<

[Easy]
Felt good, though a little slider-heavy for my taste. Miiight be better with AR +1 (it'd help spots like 00:52:365 (1,2,3,4) - ), but I'll leave that to you. This difficulty is based on bass-drum sound on red-ticks so probably it'd be too difficult if there's many circles. That's why I wanted to make the minimal use of circle. Raised AR to 3.

[Insane]
I like this better with circle size 5 This difficulty is designed for CS4 and I don't think 5 would fit in with my mapping style.
AR 7 also fits the pace of the map much better imo. It makes some random jumps look worse. Even with double-time AR8 plays better in my eyes.
00:39:924 (1) - Kind of weird to have it at .5x. I've been unable to come up with something better than this. But somehow I like the way it looks. :<
Pretty solid.

Nice balanced set despite all the guest difficulties. Quite rare to see that. Collab needs a bit of work, but the rest of the maps are pretty much good to go. Irre and KSHR did great work here. ;D Thank you for modding. <3

Guy

Guy wrote:

Hi! hihi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Lead-Inを1000くらい入れてみませんか？　最近のRanked map見ると入ってないのもありますが、プレイヤー側としては入れてもらった方がストレスなくプレイできます。 確かに、ゆっくりな曲なのでLead-in入れたほうが合いますね！Fixed.
  2. tagに作詞を担当している"川田まみ kawada mami"を追加してみてはどうでしょう？ osu!では割と知られていて検索使う人も多いと思うので。おっけー
  3. 全てのdiffのWidescreen-supportのチェックを外しましょう。おけおけー

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:890 (4) - 個人的には3にスタックさせるよりも、スペーシングがまとまって見えるこのあたりに配置させる方が好みです。プレイ画面では3のスライダーとの重なりはほとんど気にならないので。Good idea!
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:634 (4,5,6) - 6から1へジャンプさせるのではなく、1のスライダーに入りやすいように流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？ 普通の三角形だとなんか退屈（この難易度三角形ばっかりなので・・）な気がするのでこのままで行こうと思います。今のままでも流れはそんなに悪くないかなって思います。
    SPOILER
  3. 01:01:130 (8) - ここはfinish外してwhislteのみの方が曲に合ってていいかもです。Nice catch! 外し忘れてました..
  4. 01:04:240 (3) - 曲調に変化も見られないので特に理由もなければ2grid右に移動させてspacingを統一させた方が良いです。Oh.. fixed.
  5. 01:25:730 (7,8) - Ctrl+Gの流れの方が叩きやすいと思います。はあくちゃん

[alacat's Easy]
  1. AR+1or2してNormalとのバランスをとりましょう。 3にしました～
  2. 00:24:372 (2) - Sliderの終わりは00:25:221 - ここにしてfinishの音拾ったほうがリズムもとりやすいです。 単発置く形で修正しました！強調される部分なので1/2使っても問題ないっていう判断です
  3. 01:02:827 (2,3) - バスの位置に合わせて置いているのはわかるんですが、初心者には読みづらいリズムだと思うので、1/2スライダーのリピートを使用してみてはどうでしょうか？ 歌詞もフォローできる形となり、非常に読みやすくなると思います。最低難易度で1/2とか短いスライダーは出来れば使いたくない＆この難易度では一切使ってないので、1/1のスライダーに置き換えました　音取りは変わってないけど100はでなくなるのでこれでOKだと思います。

  4. 01:20:923 (2,3) - ^と同じです。^
nice mapset!! Nice mod! :>
Good luck :) Thank you so much!

Satellite

Satellite wrote:

:3 :3

[Insane]
  1. 00:19:283 (2) - できれば 00:19:424 - ここもフォローしたほうがいいかも(?) 置いてみたけどあんまり違いがわからない＆特に拾うような音もない感じなのでNoで！

役に立たなかった場合はNo kdsでお願いします~

Easy Laurier's Hardの指摘点はありません looks goodです!! Thanks for modding. :3

Thanks all guys. :3
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
heya~In game pm.


[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Missing video in KSHR’s Normal
  2. add collab to tags? Since hard diff is collab

[Insane]
  1. 00:39:924 (1) –How about chaning this to a 1/4 reverse and a circle at00:40:489 -?
  2. 00:41:903 (2) –add whistle at sliderend since you added at00:44:165 (2) –
Pretty nice Insane.

[Laurier’s Hard]
  1. 00:11:649 (1) –I think adding whistle at 00:11:649 –and 00:12:214 – not 00:11:931 – will be better, like00:16:173 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:12:497 (2) –how about adding whistle at sliderhead? Sound better imo
  3. 00:27:765 (2) –remove this circle since there is no beat and 00:27:483 –this is a heavy beat. If you want to keep the circle please remove the whistle in it, sounds kinda weird
  4. 00:47:841 (1) – the spinner need to be reduced volume. Please use 5% volume at00:47:841 (1) – like insane diff.
  5. 01:03:392 (4) –add a finish? Since this is a “kick drum” in music
  6. 01:12:440 (4) –add finish or whistle at sliderhead like00:54:344 –or insane diff, sound cool
  7. 01:20:357 (3) –adding a whistle will be better imo

[ Irre & Konei's Hard]
  1. 00:05:145 (1) –add whistle at reverse arrow and remove whistle whistle at00:05:145–like 00:00:339 (1,2) and 00:02:883 (1,2) –, since 00:05:428 – pitch is higher than00:05:145 –
  2. 00:16:455 (2) –how about removing the whistle , the continuous whistles sound a little weird for me
  3. 00:19:283 (2) –missing finish at sliderend
  4. 00:38:510 (4) –I suggest you cut this to 1/2 slider like 00:20:414 (4,1) -. Since there is a clear drum at00:38:793 – and this is a heavy beat, you can add finish at here. If you say you followed the vocal, but 00:37:662 –this vocal you didn’t follow, a quick shift between tracks will be bad
  5. 00:47:841 (1) –slider end at 00:50:103 -?since vocal there.
  6. 00:54:061 (4) –missing finish at sliderend since you added at 01:12:440 (1) -
  7. 00:59:716 (4) –how about adding a finish at sliderend, sound good imo.
  8. 01:09:047 (3) –set sampleset as normal please, drum in music is the similar with 01:08:482 (1) -
  9. 01:20:075 (2) –add finish at sliderend, sound cool.
  10. 01:24:033 –I highly recommend you add a circle here, since there is a strong cymbal in music

[KSHR’s Normal]
  1. Please add video
  2. 00:17:586 (2) –missing whistle at sliderend
  3. 00:26:634 (3) –missing whistle at reverse arrow
  4. 00:31:441 (3) –missing hitsound at sliderhead, why did you only add it at 00:13:345 -00:22:393 -?
  5. 00:35:683 (3) –slideredn^
  6. 00:35:683 (3,1) –this overlap looks weird, do you like this?
    SPOILER
  7. 00:38:793 (1) –missing hitsound at sliderend
  8. 00:45:013 (4) –why not keep the hitsound same as 00:42:751 (3) –?Adding a whistle at00:42:751 – sounds very nice imo
  9. 00:55:475 (3) –add finish at sliderhead , it seems that you missed it since you added at01:13:571 –
  10. 01:06:785 (2) –how about adding a finish at sliderhead? Sounds good imo, 01:24:881 (2)-this the same
  11. 01:11:309 –there is cymbal in music so default finish fits here better

[Easy]
  1. AR0 is weird imo, how about AR2?
  2. 00:34:269 (3,4) –why not add some finishs like00:16:173 (3,4) –

Good luck.
Melophobia
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Topic Starter
Melophobia
Fixed everything you mentioned on my difficulties, it's kinda short but really helpful! Thank you. <3
KSHR
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Joined July 2010
KSHR

Fycho wrote:

[General]
  1. Missing video in KSHR’s Normal my bad...
[notice][KSHR’s Normal]
  1. Please add video why did you point this out 2 times! don't blame me that much, Fycho! Orz
  2. 00:17:586 (2) –missing whistle at sliderend already fixed in other mods!
  3. 00:26:634 (3) –missing whistle at reverse arrow maybe same as above~
  4. 00:31:441 (3) –missing hitsound at sliderhead, why did you only add it at 00:13:345 -00:22:393 -? ...^
  5. 00:35:683 (3) –slideredn^ .....^
  6. 00:35:683 (3,1) –this overlap looks weird, do you like this? Fixed by rearranging 00:35:683 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2) -
    SPOILER
  7. 00:38:793 (1) –missing hitsound at sliderend already fixed in other mods!
  8. 00:45:013 (4) –why not keep the hitsound same as 00:42:751 (3) –?Adding a whistle at00:42:751 – sounds very nice imo yea, you're right~ added!
  9. 00:55:475 (3) –add finish at sliderhead , it seems that you missed it since you added at01:13:571 – ^
  10. 01:06:785 (2) –how about adding a finish at sliderhead? Sounds good imo, 01:24:881 (2)-this the same　alre..
  11. 01:11:309 –there is cymbal in music so default finish fits here better ^
thanks~!


SPOILER
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PreviewTime: 50103
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SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:ebb and flow (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ebb and flow (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Melophobia
Version:KSHR's Normal
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから opening KSHR Laurier Irreversible Konei
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Fycho
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Fycho

KSHR wrote:

why did you point this out 2 times! don't blame me that much, Fycho! Orz[/color]
大事なことなので2度言いました =//=

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