Hi ,
M4M from my queue:
[General]
[Cold]
Placement/Aesthetic
Placement/Aesthetic
M4M from my queue:
[General]
- The snowflakes that appears on the right bottom of the map in the SB is barely visible since it is the same color at the background. You should try to make it a little bit darker.
- Why not keeping the logic of Frigid and Gelid by having a HPdrain rate equals to AR-1? So put the HPdrain rate to 2.
[Cold]
Placement/Aesthetic
- 00:39:299 (1,2) - Maybe you could put a CTRL+G on both slider then fix the spacing with 00:41:675 (3) in order to have an alternance of direction on the three sliders and not only the first two.
- 02:30:969 (3,1) - I think it will looks better if instead of using a third straight line in a row (pattern you already used a lot in this diff) you do a blanket by remplacing 02:30:969 (3) with the 180° rotated version of 02:32:157 (1).
- 03:11:360 (3,4) - You can see that the blanket is bad here. Move the end point of 03:11:954 (4) to x=300 y=204.
- 03:32:744 (1,2,3,4,1) - The flow is weird here because in all your map you play pretty smooth curve like for 03:32:744 (1,2,3,4) but then you have this pattern 03:33:932 (3,4,1) which force you to turn back and feels out of place compared to how you mapped the rest of your map.
- 03:39:871 (4) - hum.... This combo is a little bit long. I think you forgot a NC here.
- 01:31:570 (2) - Finish at the head.
- 01:36:322 (1) - ^ (You can clearly hear the cymbal in the song and you did it in Frigid)
- 03:56:503 (1) - Why not adding a whistle to the finish here because of the piano in addition of the cymbal sound in the music? And if you agree do it in all your diff.
- 00:17:618 (3) - Why don't you make it finish at 00:19:697 like the spinners in the other 2 diff? Btw, why didn't you put a spinner like in the other 2 diff? And you have other place like this in your map.
- 01:13:156 (4,5,6) - You should use this rythm instead:
Because the singer hold the note at 01:14:047 until 01:14:344 so a slider is needed here.
- 00:24:746 (5,1) - The blanket here is bad. Move the second slider point of 00:24:746 (5) 1 grid up.
- 01:11:077 (1,2) - Move 1 to x=400 y=68 then 2 to x=472 y=80 for a better overlap.
- 01:23:551 (2,3) - No need to lower the spacing here. I know the SV is lower but it's not until 01:24:145 so here the gap between 01:23:551 (2,3) should be the same as the one between 01:22:660 (1,2) even if it means that the spacing will be different because of the SV slowing down. (I don't know if my explication was clear enough. Sorry if it wasn't)
- 01:32:758 (5) - Move the 2nd and 4th slider point 1 grid up for a better blanket with 01:33:649 (1) while keeping it's symmetry.
- 01:24:145 (3) - Put a NC here in order to show the slowing down of the SV.
Placement/Aesthetic
- 00:11:975 (2,2) - You did a very good overlap for 00:10:787 (2,2) so why not doing the same here?
- 00:17:618 (3) - Move the end point 2 grid right for a better blanket.
- 00:10:490 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even if i understand all the NC you put here i wondered why you didn't do it for the Frigid diff since you used the same rythm?
- 00:19:994 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ (even if you could argue in this case that it's to show the jump but there isn't any at 00:10:490 (1,2,1,2,1,2))
- 00:46:427 (1) - Why is there a clap here? Put a finish like in your other diff. It fits better the music.
- 01:07:810 (2) - You forget a finish on it's head too.
- 01:26:818 (2) - Why Finish+Whistle? You only have a finish in the other diff.
- 01:36:322 (2) - Finish on the head.
- 02:08:100 (5) - End it with a whistle like the spinner in the ither diff.