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Kuraki Mai - Secret of my heart

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Atrue
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Atrue
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月8日 at 0:47:41

Artist: Kuraki Mai
Title: Secret of my heart
Source: Detective Conan
Tags: lkx_Shore jyc-Binggan case closed meitantei konan ending 9 名探偵コナン
BPM: 85.03
Filesize: 2270kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.34 stars, 65 notes)
  2. Hard (4.69 stars, 160 notes)
  3. jyc's Insane (4.95 stars, 279 notes)
  4. Shore's Normal (3.79 stars, 119 notes)
Download: Kuraki Mai - Secret of my heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 For rank
Thanks For jyc-Binggan's Precise Timing Help
Normal by lkx_Shore
Insane by jyc-Binggan
Secret of my heart..
Last edited by Atrue , edited 29 times in total.
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
nm diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Secret Of My Heart.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Secret of my heart
TitleUnicode:Secret of my heart
Artist:Kuraki Mai
ArtistUnicode:Kuraki Mai
Creator:Atrue
Version:Normal
Source:
Tags:lkx_Shore
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"7e020a465e9247b5942b1a771ab50869.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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57640,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
68758,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
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TAIN
168 posts
Joined January 2012
TAIN
Hi ! :)

from my your Q. (m4m)

[General]

Please set point for a preview.

[Easy]

00:02:607 (3,4) - Better flow
00:04:018 (4) - NC
01:00:469 (1) - NC remove
01:11:759 (1) - NC remove
00:18:836 (2,4) - The same line.
↓
Here

00:23:776 (1,2) - ^
↓
Here

[Shore's Normal]

00:06:841 (1,2) - Overlap.
00:17:778 (9,1) - ^
00:19:718 (4,5) - ^
00:46:356 (1,2) - ^
00:49:531 (4,5,6) - Distance is not constant.
00:56:235 (8,9) - Overlap.
00:04:018 (4) - NC
00:09:663 (6) - ^
00:15:308 (5) - ^
00:20:953 (6) - ^
00:37:888 (4) - ^
00:43:533 (4) - ^
01:00:116 (5) - ^
01:11:406 (5) - ^

[Hard]



Solving.

00:03:136 (4,5,6,1) - Better flow
00:04:018 (1,3) - Overlap
00:08:781 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:46:885 (8,9) - 00:46:356 (7,8) - The distance
01:11:406 (2,3) - Blanket(Exactly)

[jyc's Insane]

Kiai time please set up.

00:27:657 (1,2,3) - △Shape.
00:54:824 (1,2) - More beautiful blanket.


GL ~ ;)
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Atrue

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Hi ! :) Hi~

from my your Q. (m4m)

[General]

Please set point for a preview. Sure.

[Easy]

00:02:607 (3,4) - Better flow Changed pattern here.
00:04:018 (4) - NC
01:00:469 (1) - NC remove
01:11:759 (1) - NC remove Fixed the NC mods
00:18:836 (2,4) - The same line. Fixed
↓
Here

00:23:776 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
↓
Here



[Hard]



Solving. Fixed

00:03:136 (4,5,6,1) - Better flow I think is fine..
00:04:018 (1,3) - Overlap Fixed
00:08:781 (4) - Ctrl+G Hmm.. Not that important for the direction here.
00:46:885 (8,9) - 00:46:356 (7,8) - The distance Fixed
01:11:406 (2,3) - Blanket(Exactly) Better for now?


GL ~ ;) Thanks~
Thanks for modding~ I'll mod your map recently.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time.
Uncheck Widescreen Support since there is no SB.
[Easy]
HP4 is same as Normal, so at least HP3 or less better.
Placement
00:52:001(1) I don't agree with thi stack, stack means " spacing changed", so for Easy diff, it is hard to read.
01:03:997(1) Delete NC here, you shouldn't spam NC on this diff, and it looks unnecessary.
01:15:287(1) ^
Rhythm
00:09:663(3) The 1/2 reverse doesn't fit to music I suppose, so to put simply, to follow 1/1/ rhythm better.
SPOILER
Hit Sound
00:34:360(6) Delete whistle on the end, and add finish better.
00:44:945(4) Add finish at end.
00:54:824(1,19 Again, The normal-whistle doesn't fit to music.
01:20:226(3)^
[Normal]
Some stacks look confusing for newbie since you make many 1/2 and 1/4 stack in closer timing, so the gap of approach rate may be hard to read.
Placement
00:06:841(1,2) It looks a bit ugly because of overlapped and not good flow. So change this to liner slider like this?
SPOILER
00:47:414(2) Move this note a bit upon better to hit easier.
[Hard]
Maybe you put NCs on the beginning of vocal, but it looks a bit odd. So put NCs on the long white line? It follows music properly.
Placement
00:02:607(3) The spacing looks a bit large compared with others, so you can change this spacing smaller better.
00:08:781(4) CTRL+G would be more nice flow, also you should change following notes.
00:33:302(5) Not bad, but the overlapped object on the end of slider would not be clear, so I suppose you can move this note. e.g.)
SPOILER

00:48:826(2) Again, the spacing would be confused. Move far away better.
01:06:114(1,2,3) This jump would not expect easier, and the balance of difficulty would break.So I suppose you can make this less jumping.
Rhythm
00:13:720(3) The end of slider is not followed any sound and you missed a drum sound at 00:14:073, so I just recommend this rhythm.
SPOILER
Hit Sound
00:35:066(2) Add finish here to emphasize instrumental.
[Insane]
I don't agree OD8 since the song is calm and not Expert diff. So OD7 better.
1/8 rhythm doesn't fit to music because of same reason, some triplets sounds really overmapped. But not forced to remap, just map as you hear better.
Placement
00:03:136(7,8,1) This note would make a confusing because of spacing, from (6) to (7) and (8) to (1) needs more spacing.
00:10:016(1) Again I suggest spacing, maybe move it to 288:280 to stack better.
00:11:427(5,6,1,2,3) It makes really odd since the flow gets in revrse, and it looks unreasonable, I just recommend you to replace these note.
00:37:712(2,3) This overlapped looks a bit ugly, so move (2) somewhere.
00:56:941(7) I suppose you can put this note like as you have already put in previous part. e.g.)
SPOILER
00:58:705(7) Just CTRL+G, and the flow would be more fine.
01:06:996(2,4) ^
Rhythm
00:46:532 Add a note here, I just hear soome instrumental.
00:57:911(4) Highly suggest to remove this note, it sounds really overmapped.
Hit Sound
00:17:954(2) Delete finish here, there is no simila sound.

You can improve this mapset especiaaly flow and placement, but not bad. Good Luck!.
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Atrue

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M Thank you!
[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time. Fixed
Uncheck Widescreen Support since there is no SB. Fixed
[Easy]
HP4 is same as Normal, so at least HP3 or less better. Fixed
Placement
00:52:001(1) I don't agree with thi stack, stack means " spacing changed", so for Easy diff, it is hard to read. Fixed
01:03:997(1) Delete NC here, you shouldn't spam NC on this diff, and it looks unnecessary. Fixed
01:15:287(1) ^ Fixed
Rhythm
00:09:663(3) The 1/2 reverse doesn't fit to music I suppose, so to put simply, to follow 1/1/ rhythm better. Fixed
SPOILER
Hit Sound
00:34:360(6) Delete whistle on the end, and add finish better. Fixed
00:44:945(4) Add finish at end. Fixed
00:54:824(1,19 Again, The normal-whistle doesn't fit to music. Fixed
01:20:226(3)^ Fixed

[Hard]
Maybe you put NCs on the beginning of vocal, but it looks a bit odd. So put NCs on the long white line? It follows music properly. I'll have a try :)
Placement
00:02:607(3) The spacing looks a bit large compared with others, so you can change this spacing smaller better. Fixed
00:08:781(4) CTRL+G would be more nice flow, also you should change following notes. Fixed here. But some of following is not so necessary I think.
00:33:302(5) Not bad, but the overlapped object on the end of slider would not be clear, so I suppose you can move this note. e.g.) Fixed and great mod here!
SPOILER

00:48:826(2) Again, the spacing would be confused. Move far away better. Fixed and changed the pattern here
01:06:114(1,2,3) This jump would not expect easier, and the balance of difficulty would break.So I suppose you can make this less jumping. I'll hold my opinion for this time because I don't think it's really hard for players because the slider jump is not that hard and it's really hard to find a better pattern.
Rhythm
00:13:720(3) The end of slider is not followed any sound and you missed a drum sound at 00:14:073, so I just recommend this rhythm. Fixed
SPOILER
Hit Sound
00:35:066(2) Add finish here to emphasize instrumental. Fixed


You can improve this mapset especiaaly flow and placement, but not bad. Good Luck!. Thanks!
Thanks again for the high quality modding! Your map will be modded these days. :D
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
From your M4M queue~
[General]
Change BPM from 85.03 to 85

[Easy]
01:07:525 (3) - maybe slightly relocate slider so (1)(2) into (3) feels like a smooth, curved line:
SPOILER

[Normal]
01:08:760 - Kiai time ends and then starts again, even though in Easy and Hard it doesn't stop. Make sure it is the same.

[Hard]

00:02:607 (3) - it feels better if you have the slider point towards the bottom right instead of down

00:03:136 (4) - if you make the previous slider point that way, then this one should be towards the bottom left

00:59:763 (4,5,1) - I think it will look better if you put some space between them, so either use 1.2 or 1.3x distance spacing
01:02:586 (4,5,1) - ^
01:03:291 (1,2,3,4) - ^not sure you have enough room to do this though

01:08:231 (4,5) - try to have these point in slightly different directions to see if it feels/looks better
SPOILER

01:11:053 (4,5) - ^
01:13:876 (4,5) - ^
01:15:287 (2,3) - ^

01:14:581 (1) - space this out so it isn't difficult to read

[Insane]

00:03:136 (7) - beat spacing error, if you put it close to (6) even though the time between them is greater, it becomes difficult to read. Consider placing (7) somewhere away from (6), perhaps like this (you did this properly at 00:08:781 ):
SPOILER

00:18:484 (1,2,3) - the way you placed them is sort of weird, try to place them like this so it flows:
SPOILER

01:08:760 (5) - maybe this jump from (5) to (1) will be unexpected to some people

01:19:874 (1,2,3) - space them equal distance apart since the time between the notes is the same.

No Kiai mode for this difficulty?

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Have fun mapping! :)
gaten
130 posts
Joined January 2011
gaten
Hi~
From M4M

[General]

  • [Easy]
  1. AR 4 -> 3
  2. 00:15:308 (4) - why this is long slider?? i recommend 1 return slider and 1 circle
  3. 00:15:308 (4) - if you fix it, then you should NC
  4. 00:56:235 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 01:03:997 (1) - ^
  6. 01:15:287 (1) - ^
[Shore's Normal]
  1. 00:17:778 (9) - x:344 y:248 and
  2. 00:18:131 (1) - x:360 y:176
  3. 00:53:589 - you should add a clap sound with sliderslide
  4. 00:59:234 - ^
  5. 01:02:056 - ^
  6. 01:06:114 (1) - Remove NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:250 (4) - add a clap on slider end
  2. 00:31:185 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:31:891 (3) - NC
  4. 00:43:357 - add a circle
  5. 00:52:707 (8) - NC
  6. 01:04:702 (4,5,6,7) - Insane Jump!!! xD
  7. 01:06:114 (1,2,3) - mess Pattern and DS

[jyc's Insane]
  1. 00:01:548 (2,3) - ctrl+g
  2. 00:03:665 (1,2,3) - what the hell? not fit to jump, plz decrease DS
  3. 00:10:016 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:17:778 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:50:061 (5,6,7) - ^
  6. 00:03:665 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:04:018 (3) - NC
  8. 00:06:488 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:06:841 (3) - NC (hey, you should NC in long white tick plz T^T, i won't point out kinda this NC problem anymore)
  10. 00:18:572 (2) - not fit(overmapping), remove it
  11. 00:24:217 (2) - ^
  12. 00:42:740 (7) - ^
  13. 00:46:798 (2) - ^
  14. 01:15:111 (6) - Remove this circle
good luck~
Atrue
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Topic Starter
Atrue
pkmnyab

pkmnyab wrote:

From your M4M queue~
[General]
Change BPM from 85.03 to 85 Sorry but I think it is precise.

[Easy]
01:07:525 (3) - maybe slightly relocate slider so (1)(2) into (3) feels like a smooth, curved line: Fixed
SPOILER



[Hard]

00:02:607 (3) - it feels better if you have the slider point towards the bottom right instead of down Fixed

00:03:136 (4) - if you make the previous slider point that way, then this one should be towards the bottom left Fixed

00:59:763 (4,5,1) - I think it will look better if you put some space between them, so either use 1.2 or 1.3x distance spacing Fixed
01:02:586 (4,5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:03:291 (1,2,3,4) - ^not sure you have enough room to do this though Fixed

01:08:231 (4,5) - try to have these point in slightly different directions to see if it feels/looks better Hmm..I like parallel better..
SPOILER

01:11:053 (4,5) - ^
01:13:876 (4,5) - ^
01:15:287 (2,3) - ^ (^)

01:14:581 (1) - space this out so it isn't difficult to read I don't think it is really too hard to read..



Have fun mapping! :) Have fun mapping! :)
gaten

gaten wrote:

Hi~ Hi~
From M4M

[General]

  • [Easy]
  1. AR 4 -> 3 Fixed
  2. 00:15:308 (4) - why this is long slider?? i recommend 1 return slider and 1 circle Fixed
  3. 00:15:308 (4) - if you fix it, then you should NC Fixed
  4. 00:56:235 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
  5. 01:03:997 (1) - ^ Fixed
  6. 01:15:287 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:250 (4) - add a clap on slider end Fixed
  2. 00:31:185 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
  3. 00:31:891 (3) - NC Fixed
  4. 00:43:357 - add a circle I don't think so..
  5. 00:52:707 (8) - NC ^
  6. 01:04:702 (4,5,6,7) - Insane Jump!!! xD Made them closer
  7. 01:06:114 (1,2,3) - mess Pattern and DS I think they are quite well...



good luck~ Thanks!
Thanks for modding!!! Your mod will be written recently. :)
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Hi ! :)

from my your Q. (m4m)

[Shore's Normal]

00:06:841 (1,2) - Overlap.
00:17:778 (9,1) - ^
00:19:718 (4,5) - ^ [color=#00FF00Change[/color]
00:46:356 (1,2) - ^ Change
00:49:531 (4,5,6) - Distance is not constant. fix
00:56:235 (8,9) - Overlap.
00:04:018 (4) - NC
00:09:663 (6) - ^
00:15:308 (5) - ^
00:20:953 (6) - ^
00:37:888 (4) - ^
00:43:533 (4) - ^
01:00:116 (5) - ^
01:11:406 (5) - ^
thx for mod

kajiyatta wrote:

[Normal]
Some stacks look confusing for newbie since you make many 1/2 and 1/4 stack in closer timing, so the gap of approach rate may be hard to read.
Placement
00:06:841(1,2) It looks a bit ugly because of overlapped and not good flow. So change this to liner slider like this? Good,fix
SPOILER
00:47:414(2) Move this note a bit upon better to hit easier. fix
.
thx u

pkmnyab wrote:

[Normal]
01:08:760 - Kiai time ends and then starts again, even though in Easy and Hard it doesn't stop. Make sure it is the same. ok,i will tell atrue about this

gaten wrote:

[Shore's Normal]
  1. 00:17:778 (9) - x:344 y:248 and fix
  2. 00:18:131 (1) - x:360 y:176 fix
  3. 00:53:589 - you should add a clap sound with sliderslide oh,let me think about this..
  4. 00:59:234 - ^
  5. 01:02:056 - ^
  6. 01:06:114 (1) - Remove NC fix
thx

nm diff
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Atrue
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Atrue
Updated lkx_Shore's Diff
EDIT：Also updated jyc-Bingggan's Diff
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
fixed some

我觉得这首歌速率加速120%以后比较好听..
Last edited by [CSGA]Ar3sgice , edited 2 times in total.
Atrue
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Atrue

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

fixed some
已拉黑
这儿可以求mod么
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Atrue wrote:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

fixed some
已拉黑
这儿可以求mod么
IC2还是BC

暮色森林也可以哦~ 群峦传说就不要了
Atrue
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Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Atrue

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Atrue wrote:

已拉黑
这儿可以求mod么
IC2还是BC

暮色森林也可以哦~ 群峦传说就不要了
集成电路IC2_百度文库
Kinomi
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Kinomi
和馒头进行了一点人生商谈

SPOILER
2014-02-02 21:45 Tsukuyomi: 馒头啊
2014-02-02 21:45 Tsukuyomi: 你给黄书的GD
2014-02-02 21:45 Tsukuyomi: 少漏点音啊
2014-02-02 21:46 jyc-Binggan: 没懂
2014-02-02 21:46 jyc-Binggan: 让我下满?
2014-02-02 21:47 Tsukuyomi: 有些空拍的地方很明显有声音啊
2014-02-02 21:47 jyc-Binggan: 我知道啊
2014-02-02 21:48 jyc-Binggan: 这曲子每一处都有音
2014-02-02 21:48 jyc-Binggan: 让我铺满?
2014-02-02 21:50 Tsukuyomi: 00:02:430
2014-02-02 21:50 Tsukuyomi: 00:02:430
2014-02-02 21:50 Tsukuyomi: 这个
2014-02-02 21:50 Tsukuyomi: 我是说这种地方
2014-02-02 21:51 jyc-Binggan: 我知道啊
2014-02-02 21:51 jyc-Binggan: 你觉得全填上note
2014-02-02 21:51 jyc-Binggan: 有意思吗
2014-02-02 21:53 Tsukuyomi: 这地方不放会坑爹的
2014-02-02 21:53 Tsukuyomi: 你后面不是空拍的挺好
2014-02-02 21:53 jyc-Binggan: 后面是哪里啊
2014-02-02 21:54 Tsukuyomi: 00:57:999
2014-02-02 21:55 jyc-Binggan: 你觉得前面哪里不好啊
2014-02-02 21:55 jyc-Binggan: 我看看
2014-02-02 21:56 Tsukuyomi: 00:04:900
2014-02-02 21:56 Tsukuyomi: 这儿
2014-02-02 21:56 Tsukuyomi: 00:05:253
2014-02-02 21:56 Tsukuyomi: 应该这里空吧
2014-02-02 21:57 jyc-Binggan: 啥
2014-02-02 21:57 jyc-Binggan: 00:05:253 -
2014-02-02 21:57 jyc-Binggan: 这里为什么空
2014-02-02 21:58 Tsukuyomi: 后面那个是downbeat啊
2014-02-02 21:58 jyc-Binggan: 啥叫downbeat
2014-02-02 21:58 Tsukuyomi: 重音
2014-02-02 21:59 Tsukuyomi: 第三根白线貌似叫次强
2014-02-02 21:59 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
2014-02-02 21:59 jyc-Binggan: 强弱次强弱
2014-02-02 21:59 Tsukuyomi: 对啊
2014-02-02 21:59 Tsukuyomi: 所以你次强前面空
2014-02-02 22:00 Tsukuyomi: 突出次强才对啊
2014-02-02 22:00 jyc-Binggan: 为啥要突出次强
2014-02-02 22:00 Tsukuyomi: 打着舒服啊
2014-02-02 22:01 jyc-Binggan: 没明白
2014-02-02 22:01 jyc-Binggan: 你的意思是我现在没突出次强吗
2014-02-02 22:02 jyc-Binggan: 这个曲子的重拍不是单纯的洞啪洞啪啊
2014-02-02 22:02 Tsukuyomi: 我也书不太清楚
2014-02-02 22:02 Tsukuyomi: 但是举得你停的地方有些比较蛋疼
2014-02-02 22:03 jyc-Binggan: 好好好
2014-02-02 22:03 jyc-Binggan: 把蛋疼的地方告诉我
2014-02-02 22:03 jyc-Binggan: 我研究一下
2014-02-02 22:04 Tsukuyomi: 00:02:430
2014-02-02 22:04 Tsukuyomi: 先这个
2014-02-02 22:04 Tsukuyomi: 滑条后面空着很难受
2014-02-02 22:04 Tsukuyomi: 因为滑条尾不按的
2014-02-02 22:04 jyc-Binggan: ok,加了这个我觉得可以
2014-02-02 22:06 Tsukuyomi: 00:05:076
2014-02-02 22:06 Tsukuyomi: 我觉得
2014-02-02 22:06 Tsukuyomi: 这个空着
2014-02-02 22:06 Tsukuyomi: 然后两边填上好一点
2014-02-02 22:07 Tsukuyomi: 00:07:899 (4) - 同理这个也是
2014-02-02 22:07 jyc-Binggan: 这个我不这么认为
2014-02-02 22:08 Tsukuyomi: 好
2014-02-02 22:08 Tsukuyomi: 我就找找然后你看着改吧
2014-02-02 22:08 jyc-Binggan: 你是个人习惯吗
2014-02-02 22:08 jyc-Binggan: 就是滑调后面要加note
2014-02-02 22:09 Tsukuyomi: 不是啊，我感觉从滑条尾巴开始数拍子
2014-02-02 22:09 Tsukuyomi: 后面那个note就不太好数
2014-02-02 22:09 Tsukuyomi: 像1/4滑条后面跟个note
2014-02-02 22:09 Tsukuyomi: 说是当单点打
2014-02-02 22:09 Tsukuyomi: 其实节奏还是有点不一样
2014-02-02 22:10 jyc-Binggan: 是啊
2014-02-02 22:10 jyc-Binggan: 所以我几乎不玩短话条
2014-02-02 22:10 jyc-Binggan: 打起来根本莫名
2014-02-02 22:11 Tsukuyomi: 00:10:722 (1) -
2014-02-02 22:11 jyc-Binggan: 这个怎么了
2014-02-02 22:11 Tsukuyomi: 还有这种感觉是map了没音的地方把前面有音的给空了啊
2014-02-02 22:12 jyc-Binggan: 不是啊
2014-02-02 22:12 jyc-Binggan: 这曲子全都有音
2014-02-02 22:13 Tsukuyomi: 虽然有个擦的声音但是不如前面一个响啊
2014-02-02 22:13 jyc-Binggan: 你仔细听,每个1/4线都有音
2014-02-02 22:13 jyc-Binggan: 没响就不跟了？
2014-02-02 22:14 jyc-Binggan: 我的想法是节奏又浅如深啊
2014-02-02 22:14 jyc-Binggan: 给一个过度
2014-02-02 22:15 jyc-Binggan: 00:10:722 - 这个地方有一个长音
2014-02-02 22:15 jyc-Binggan: 有点像小提琴的声音
2014-02-02 22:15 jyc-Binggan: 给人一个流动感
2014-02-02 22:15 Tsukuyomi: 这样啊。。
2014-02-02 22:15 jyc-Binggan: 我就下满了
2014-02-02 22:16 Tsukuyomi: 不过感觉打的时候都注意拍子在哪停了 。。
2014-02-02 22:16 Tsukuyomi: 没空听这个
2014-02-02 22:16 jyc-Binggan: 。。。
2014-02-02 22:17 Tsukuyomi: 我就是感觉别扭才跟你说;w;
2014-02-02 22:18 Tsukuyomi: 00:24:129 (1) -
2014-02-02 22:18 Tsukuyomi: 这个三连放在00:24:305
2014-02-02 22:18 Tsukuyomi: 起感觉好一点？
2014-02-02 22:19 Tsukuyomi: 现在给人感觉像是白线三连
2014-02-02 22:20 Tsukuyomi: 不太爽
2014-02-02 22:21 jyc-Binggan: 好，我看看
2014-02-02 22:21 jyc-Binggan: 这个好
2014-02-02 22:21 jyc-Binggan: good advice
2014-02-02 22:22 Tsukuyomi: 00:25:363
2014-02-02 22:22 Tsukuyomi: 然后这个就要加了啊
2014-02-02 22:22 Tsukuyomi: 连贯的节奏
2014-02-02 22:23 jyc-Binggan: 这个我不这么认为啊
2014-02-02 22:24 Tsukuyomi: 好吧
2014-02-02 22:24 jyc-Binggan: 我说下我的理由啊
2014-02-02 22:24 Tsukuyomi: 00:28:010 (3) -
2014-02-02 22:24 Tsukuyomi: 这个改成折返？
2014-02-02 22:24 Tsukuyomi: 好
2014-02-02 22:24 jyc-Binggan: 就是两段vocal是分开的啊
2014-02-02 22:25 Tsukuyomi: 。-。
2014-02-02 22:25 Tsukuyomi: 好。
2014-02-02 22:25 jyc-Binggan: 我前面之所以加三连
2014-02-02 22:25 jyc-Binggan: 是因为前面一个小节结束了，三连起一个过度
2014-02-02 22:25 jyc-Binggan: 你怎么看
2014-02-02 22:26 jyc-Binggan: 我知道白线起三连为何不爽了
2014-02-02 22:27 Tsukuyomi: 00:24:129 (1) -
2014-02-02 22:27 Tsukuyomi: 那你这个加clap才对？
2014-02-02 22:27 jyc-Binggan: 因为白线起三连，重音落在红线
2014-02-02 22:27 jyc-Binggan: 这个不是。。。
2014-02-02 22:27 jyc-Binggan: 你加一下试试
2014-02-02 22:27 jyc-Binggan: 维和感
2014-02-02 22:28 Tsukuyomi: 恩
2014-02-02 22:29 Tsukuyomi: 00:28:010 (3) -
2014-02-02 22:29 Tsukuyomi: 这改成折返啊
2014-02-02 22:29 Tsukuyomi: 和前面00:26:422 (4,5,6,7) -
2014-02-02 22:29 jyc-Binggan: 这个没有折返的感觉啊
2014-02-02 22:29 Tsukuyomi: 节奏照应下
2014-02-02 22:30 jyc-Binggan: 我看看
2014-02-02 22:31 jyc-Binggan: 我这个感觉是跟vocal走的
2014-02-02 22:31 Tsukuyomi: 好
2014-02-02 22:32 jyc-Binggan: voca
2014-02-02 22:32 jyc-Binggan: vocal开始我就进滑调
2014-02-02 22:32 Tsukuyomi: 00:35:419
2014-02-02 22:32 Tsukuyomi: 这儿加个note?
2014-02-02 22:34 Tsukuyomi: 00:57:911 (4,5) - 这边超猎奇
2014-02-02 22:34 jyc-Binggan: 我更倾向于在00:35:595 - 这加
2014-02-02 22:34 Tsukuyomi: 那我感觉后面的滑条该缩1/4..
2014-02-02 22:35 Tsukuyomi: 不过你好像是跟vocal
2014-02-02 22:35 jyc-Binggan: 是啊
2014-02-02 22:35 Tsukuyomi: 那个二连太猎奇了啊
2014-02-02 22:36 jyc-Binggan: 你听我解释一下啊
2014-02-02 22:36 jyc-Binggan: 这个二连你听这里歌词唱的是secret
2014-02-02 22:36 jyc-Binggan: 的前面部分
2014-02-02 22:36 jyc-Binggan: sec
2014-02-02 22:37 jyc-Binggan: 他发音不清啊
2014-02-02 22:37 jyc-Binggan: 我直接就下二连了
2014-02-02 22:37 Tsukuyomi: 。
2014-02-02 22:37 jyc-Binggan: 这个歌词只出现一次
2014-02-02 22:37 jyc-Binggan: 后面没有
2014-02-02 22:38 jyc-Binggan: 如果空拍又很怪
2014-02-02 22:41 Tsukuyomi: 01:08:054 (3,4,5) -
2014-02-02 22:41 Tsukuyomi: 这个你怎么想的
2014-02-02 22:43 jyc-Binggan: 跟vocal啊
2014-02-02 22:43 jyc-Binggan: 那个呐呐呐
2014-02-02 22:44 Tsukuyomi: 那你红线上怎么不放。。
2014-02-02 22:44 jyc-Binggan: 红线上没有呐啊。。。
2014-02-02 22:45 Tsukuyomi: 也是有点猎奇
2014-02-02 22:45 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得挺有意思的
2014-02-02 22:46 jyc-Binggan: 本来我还想搞点1/6
2014-02-02 22:46 jyc-Binggan: 想想是给别人做gd
2014-02-02 22:46 jyc-Binggan: 就别坑了
2014-02-02 22:46 Tsukuyomi: 。-。
2014-02-02 22:46 Tsukuyomi: 下点爽节奏不好吗
2014-02-02 22:46 jyc-Binggan: 那种图谁都能做啊
2014-02-02 22:46 jyc-Binggan: 多没意思
2014-02-02 22:47 Tsukuyomi: 咚恰 咚恰 咚咚丁
2014-02-02 22:47 jyc-Binggan: 而且做那种太简单了
2014-02-02 22:47 jyc-Binggan: 铺满谁都会啊
2014-02-02 22:48 Tsukuyomi: 我也是不太懂拉克丝
2014-02-02 22:48 Tsukuyomi: 空拍的地方看不懂
2014-02-02 22:48 Tsukuyomi: 。-。就这样吧
2014-02-02 22:48 jyc-Binggan: lks节奏好啊
2014-02-02 22:48 jyc-Binggan: 音效也厉害
2014-02-02 22:48 Tsukuyomi: 队
2014-02-02 22:49 Tsukuyomi: 不过有些节奏我柑橘奇怪而已。-。
2014-02-02 22:49 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得好啊
2014-02-02 22:49 jyc-Binggan: 100pa你怎么看
2014-02-02 22:49 Tsukuyomi: dio
2014-02-02 22:49 Tsukuyomi: 他不都是比较经典的节奏吗
2014-02-02 22:49 jyc-Binggan: 你看过他哪个图啊
2014-02-02 22:50 jyc-Binggan: 除了basara
2014-02-02 22:50 Tsukuyomi: 那个cu cu那个
2014-02-02 22:50 Tsukuyomi: 其他就没看了
2014-02-02 22:50 jyc-Binggan: 我看过他10多张
2014-02-02 22:50 jyc-Binggan: 他每一张都自创节奏
2014-02-02 22:51 jyc-Binggan: 有一些打起来就不爽
2014-02-02 22:51 Tsukuyomi: 这么屌
2014-02-02 22:51 jyc-Binggan: 他真是巨屌
2014-02-02 22:51 Tsukuyomi: 咦
2014-02-02 22:51 Tsukuyomi: 醋卡的图rerank了
2014-02-02 22:51 jyc-Binggan: 出卡都不玩了
2014-02-02 22:53 Tsukuyomi: 那是那些BAT自己看着差不多rank的
2014-02-02 22:53 Tsukuyomi: 有点搞笑
2014-02-02 22:53 jyc-Binggan: 哈哈哈
2014-02-02 22:53 jyc-Binggan: bat真是sb
2014-02-02 22:53 jyc-Binggan: 受不了
2014-02-02 22:53 jyc-Binggan: 啊，对了
2014-02-02 22:54 jyc-Binggan: 你要是想要kds，把对话保存了啊
2014-02-02 22:54 Tsukuyomi: 我一直自动保存的啊
2014-02-02 22:54 jyc-Binggan: 好
2014-02-02 22:54 Tsukuyomi: 对了刚才说的白线三连后面还有一个地方的我没说你看看要不要改吧
2014-02-02 22:55 jyc-Binggan: 哪啊
2014-02-02 22:56 Tsukuyomi: 00:46:710 (1,2,3) -
2014-02-02 22:56 Tsukuyomi: 这个
2014-02-02 22:57 Tsukuyomi: 其实我觉得白线三连有些组合节奏也爽
2014-02-02 22:57 Tsukuyomi: 但是单独来一个打起来就有点怪
2014-02-02 22:57 jyc-Binggan: 改了
2014-02-02 22:58 jyc-Binggan: 是啊
2014-02-02 22:58 jyc-Binggan: 多尝试一些组合
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
你好，qq群的req（本来想私聊，最后还是发帖算了）

全局：
先将atrist改为“倉木麻衣”吧
hitsound有点大，可以就改小一点吧。另外更倾向于使用soft音效，这首歌感觉不适合使用normal音效
tag加上“名探偵コナン”
title不知道要不要加“(TV Size)”，不过好像也没有什么影响

难度：Hard
kiai可以参考一下拉克修的
00:03:665 (5,6,1) - 这三个堆叠起来就变成右下到slider方向了，下面还有一些相似的，比如00:14:955 (5,6,1)
00:14:250 (4,5) - 修一下blanket
00:15:308 (1,2,3) - 这三个slider做成一样的吧，直接复制粘贴也行
00:20:953 (1,2) - 好像没有对好，将00:21:659 (2)移动到(336,248)好一点

难度：jyc's Insane
kiai timing差评
基本没什么问题

难度：Shore's Normal
基本没有什么问题

难度：Easy
00:09:663 (3,4,1) - 前面的slider换成两个note，后面slider末变成slider头，然后在提及的最后一个这里结束
00:32:949 (5) - 开头延迟到00:33:202，结尾位置不变
00:34:360 (6) - 缩短一半+往返，这里有点漏音
00:44:945 (4,1) - 修一下blanket
01:20:226 (3) - w+f音效？

写的不多，加油
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Atrue

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

你好，qq群的req（本来想私聊，最后还是发帖算了） Hi~

全局：
先将atrist改为“倉木麻衣”吧 Fixed
hitsound有点大，可以就改小一点吧。另外更倾向于使用soft音效，这首歌感觉不适合使用normal音效 不好改而且没太有大碍
tag加上“名探偵コナン” Fixed
title不知道要不要加“(TV Size)”，不过好像也没有什么影响 这个是不可以加的

难度：Hard
kiai可以参考一下拉克修的 一段kiai也可以吧
00:03:665 (5,6,1) - 这三个堆叠起来就变成右下到slider方向了，下面还有一些相似的，比如00:14:955 (5,6,1) 改了pattern
00:14:250 (4,5) - 修一下blanket Fixed
00:15:308 (1,2,3) - 这三个slider做成一样的吧，直接复制粘贴也行 改了pattern
00:20:953 (1,2) - 好像没有对好，将00:21:659 (2)移动到(336,248)好一点 Stack 了另外的东西，总之看上去不是很乱也就差不多了。。

难度：jyc's Insane
kiai timing差评
基本没什么问题

难度：Shore's Normal
基本没有什么问题

难度：Easy
00:09:663 (3,4,1) - 前面的slider换成两个note，后面slider末变成slider头，然后在提及的最后一个这里结束 没改，虽然有些道理但是排版上会牵扯太多
00:32:949 (5) - 开头延迟到00:33:202，结尾位置不变 红线起滑条这样会略微妨碍读图，尽量减少
00:34:360 (6) - 缩短一半+往返，这里有点漏音 再看看，这里改了的话这小段的梗和跟的音轨是全部变化的
00:44:945 (4,1) - 修一下blanket 这里没有用blanket，整洁度还可以，并且如果用blanket的话会出现overlap
01:20:226 (3) - w+f音效？ 去掉了whistle

写的不多，加油 谢谢~加油！
Thanks for modding！ :)
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello (:

http://puu.sh/6IAon.osr
SPOILER
great hard, just 1 thing
00:15:308 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/6IAsc.jpg align them in better way, blankets or something

http://puu.sh/6IAoA.osr
SPOILER
this jumps... are awesome (:
but low AR is kinda bad for this type of jumps imo, consider to make AR9

Good Luck!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Atrue

Sieg wrote:

Hello (:

http://puu.sh/6IAon.osr
SPOILER
great hard, just 1 thing
00:15:308 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/6IAsc.jpg align them in better way, blankets or something

http://puu.sh/6IAoA.osr
SPOILER
this jumps... are awesome (:
but low AR is kinda bad for this type of jumps imo, consider to make AR9

Good Luck!
Thanks for your testplay and advice～
Edit: Fixed that advice in Hard~ Thanks again.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
说好的mod (heart)


  1. Red: Be unrankable
  2. Blue: Be important
  3. Black: Suggestions
[Insane]
00:03:665 (1,2,3) - 换成等距能美观些
00:05:959 (7) - 这个note 联系前后的话摆在00:05:429 (5) - 的下方为好,以形成更好的flow,比现在一条直线好 具体哪里你自己看吧
00:06:488 (1,2,3) - 正三角
00:05:959 (7,3) - 最好也能注意下这两者看上去的距离 为了美观
00:11:251 (4,2) - ^
00:11:604 (6,3) - ^
00:15:308 (3,5) - 叠好
00:14:250 (4,5,6) - 弧线 或者是正三角
00:17:778 (1,2,3) - 等距 再把2的finish去掉
00:25:363 - 我觉得这里需要map些什么
00:28:010 (3,5) - 这种情况还是包好为好
00:30:832 - 我觉得应该map
00:35:066 (7,1) - 这种情况应该再远点 或者再近点做成梗
01:07:701 (2,3,4,5) - 觉得这里适当填满更适合kiai的气氛 况且现在蓝线上的节奏有些不太好 因为音乐本身也没有怎么突出这个节奏
01:15:993 (5,6) - 拉条修修
01:19:521 (5,1) - 嗯..太近, 或者01:19:697 - 加上节奏

总的来说 空的节奏太多 能感受到你是故意而为 但是有些用的不太妥当 望注意一下这一条改一些空掉的节奏 特别是在音乐波澜的地方更加不能空

[Hard]
00:13:720 (3,4) - 有些丑 摆摆好 对称之类的
00:14:250 (4,5) - 有点近
00:15:308 (1,2,3,4) - 看上面一条↑,那里是1/4 这里是1/2 但距离又一样..改下吧 即使要做成梗这样也不合适的
00:33:655 (4) - 拉条中间配点音效? 用sliderslide. 这条可以无视
00:27:657 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这段怎么跟起vocal来了?前面后面都是跟音乐的啊
00:43:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 这种问题有一种的方法是统一一段跟歌词 统一一段跟音乐 建议前者放在前面 ; 还有一种是全部用一种.个人倾向音乐
00:52:001 (5) - nc
01:04:702 (4,5,6,7) - 太远了
01:06:114 (1,2,3) - ^ 想想,可以做成一样美观的梗
01:08:936 (1,2) - 别叠,这里附近都没有叠的部分 顺便在1上加finish
01:15:993 (4,5,6,7) - 太远啦
01:17:404 (1,2) - 这俩有点歪, 歪着头看就能看出来了
01:18:110 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]
00:04:018 (4) - nc? 这个随便
00:09:663 (6) - nc 这个推荐
00:15:308 (5) - ^
00:20:953 (6) - ^
00:26:598 (4) - ^
00:32:596 (4) - 这里附近NC
00:43:533 (4) - nc
00:49:531 (4) - ^
nc我不查了 接下去的你根据上面的想法改吧 总之是normal的一串combo不能太大

00:59:057 (4,6) - 碰在一起咯
除了NC没什么好说..

[Easy]
01:07:525 (3) - 越界太严重了啊
01:11:053 (2) - ^

没啥好说 就是个人感觉00:08:428 - 这种蓝线的节奏可以少量用短滑条 现在这样太令人瞌睡(也许现在有点晚??

嗯..good luck啦
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
bg800*600的略可怜 看看能不能换个质量高点儿的

jyc's Insane
00:17:954 (2) - 感觉两个finish有点多 这里normal就好 和00:23:599 (2) - 对比
00:21:659 (4) - 不是很确定 尾巴normal？
00:24:129 (1,2,3) - 不太喜欢这三连 打起来听起来都挺奇怪的
00:25:187 (8,1) - 不是一个很好的空拍 因为中间00:25:363 - 有一声clap被你忽略掉了 建议换一种摆法让节奏连续 或者把它们拉开 不要叠
00:33:831 (4,1) - 这里中间有漏了鼓 不过感觉没有上面那个那么别扭
00:34:889 (5,6,7) - 蓝线三连比上面那种红线起的感觉要好多了
00:36:831 (3) - whistle换normal更合适
00:38:770 (5) - 放在左边感觉略牵强 因为前面的00:37:889 (3,4) - 明显是顺时针的flow 指向右边的区域的 就是打着不太顺
00:46:710 (1,2,3) - 同00:24:129 (1,2,3) - 还是建议换个摆法 别这么起三连
00:49:003 (3) - 这个节奏是很奇怪的 首先从人声上考虑 “shi”的音是从00:48:826 - 这里就起了的所以如果你想用3来跟人声明显是错位的 那么既然前面的2让你这个3没法跟着人声走的话那你不要把00:49:179 - 这里长白线的重音放在滑条中间 这一拍是比较重要的 建议是在00:49:002 - 补个circle然后从00:49:179 - 起一个1/4 slider
00:58:705 (7) - 尾巴应该normal的 有明显的鼓 然后00:59:057 (8) - 的头上应该whistle 尾巴上是normal才和音乐比较贴合 你弄反了
01:01:527 (8,9) - ^
01:05:408 (6) - 头上换clap？
01:06:290 (2) - 可以whistle
01:06:996 (2) - normal去掉更合适 这里完全没有鼓
01:09:642 (3,5) - 感觉略难看

Hard
因为你前面段落整体都用的normal音效 为了听起来不会太吵 建议把音量降个10或者15
00:09:310 (5) - 莫名离前面有点近呢
00:22:364 (3) - 感觉CTRL+G会顺一些不过后面需要相应做调整了 （4挪到原点和2blanket 正好也和前后等距）
SPOILER
00:42:122 (5,6,7) - 建议间距大一些 5的头和6的头还有7之间这个间距 毕竟打的时候也不会移动到滑条尾部的
咦 为什么kiai却变成了soft……实在是很奇怪 我觉得你00:54:824 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个用soft倒是没啥问题 不过到了kiai 应该继续用normal啊 像前面的大段落一样 不然很奇怪啊明明kiai应该是相对更强的段落 却没有前面的段落的鼓声多 相当不能理解
01:03:291 (1) - 头上可以finish
01:08:936 (1) - 头上finish没了
01:08:936 (1,2) - 别挨着好看些
01:17:404 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么2和3之间宽一些？我幻觉？放均匀了多好……既然都摆成这样了

Shore's Normal
00:09:310 (5,6) - 不建议叠 因为前面00:08:252 (3,4) - 这里刚叠过1/4 这里又叠1/2 对于新人误导性会比较强 按间距拉开就是了
00:22:364 (8) - 感觉尾巴whistle不是很必要 连着有点多了
00:29:068 (8) - 同00:09:310 (5) - 还有后面00:34:713 (8) - 等等
00:51:295 (8,1) - 别让它们碰着
00:57:999 (1,2,3,4) - whistle 加太多了……真心 我觉得00:57:999 (1,2) - 这俩whistle还有00:59:057 (4) - 尾巴上的whistle都去掉好些
后面各种一串whistle的 听着真心不舒服
01:14:229 (10) - 倒是这里可以加个whistle感觉不错 人声比较强

Easy
00:18:131 (1) - 间距太大 把00:15:308 (1,2) - 逆时针转一点小角度再摆回附近可破
音效还是觉得kiai用soft很奇怪
没了

That's all
Good luck
Atrue
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Atrue
yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:

说好的mod (heart) 谢谢~


  1. Red: Be unrankable
  2. Blue: Be important
  3. Black: Suggestions

[Hard]
00:13:720 (3,4) - 有些丑 摆摆好 对称之类的 Fixed
00:14:250 (4,5) - 有点近 Fixed
00:15:308 (1,2,3,4) - 看上面一条↑,那里是1/4 这里是1/2 但距离又一样..改下吧 即使要做成梗这样也不合适的 虽说这样，但是如果后边的用1/4间距就会叠在一起
00:33:655 (4) - 拉条中间配点音效? 用sliderslide. 这条可以无视 不好掌握
00:27:657 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这段怎么跟起vocal来了?前面后面都是跟音乐的啊 其实是前边也兼顾了音乐，后边这段稍微转变了一下偏重于vocal，其实这曲子我觉得如果全跟鼓点会有很多鼓点跟不及
00:43:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 这种问题有一种的方法是统一一段跟歌词 统一一段跟音乐 建议前者放在前面 ; 还有一种是全部用一种.个人倾向音乐 ↑
00:52:001 (5) - nc Fixed
01:04:702 (4,5,6,7) - 太远了 还是想来一点跳的，bpm又不高这个没有想得那么难
01:06:114 (1,2,3) - ^ 想想,可以做成一样美观的梗 但愿不是我的审美出了问题
01:08:936 (1,2) - 别叠,这里附近都没有叠的部分 顺便在1上加finish Fixed
01:15:993 (4,5,6,7) - 太远啦 ↑
01:17:404 (1,2) - 这俩有点歪, 歪着头看就能看出来了 用grid量了一下觉得是有点歪，不过如果打的时候不歪着头也是看不大出来吧= =改起来我这手一抖就更歪了
01:18:110 (3,4) - ^ ↑


[Easy]
01:07:525 (3) - 越界太严重了啊
01:11:053 (2) - ^ 其实这两个地方我test过，应该是不碰血条的，不过还是略微修了下

没啥好说 就是个人感觉00:08:428 - 这种蓝线的节奏可以少量用短滑条 现在这样太令人瞌睡(也许现在有点晚?? 不敢弄这惹~

嗯..good luck啦 +u+u 谢谢~

Zero__wind

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
bg800*600的略可怜 看看能不能换个质量高点儿的 好我尽量找找，不过也只能尽量了~

Hard
因为你前面段落整体都用的normal音效 为了听起来不会太吵 建议把音量降个10或者15 Great!正愁音效问题
00:09:310 (5) - 莫名离前面有点近呢 修改了pattern
00:22:364 (3) - 感觉CTRL+G会顺一些不过后面需要相应做调整了 （4挪到原点和2blanket 正好也和前后等距） 第一会显得3有些歪，第二2,3之间距离确实有些大了，不太想突然跳成这样
SPOILER
00:42:122 (5,6,7) - 建议间距大一些 5的头和6的头还有7之间这个间距 毕竟打的时候也不会移动到滑条尾部的 Fixed
咦 为什么kiai却变成了soft……实在是很奇怪 我觉得你00:54:824 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个用soft倒是没啥问题 不过到了kiai 应该继续用normal啊 像前面的大段落一样 不然很奇怪啊明明kiai应该是相对更强的段落 却没有前面的段落的鼓声多 相当不能理解 两条原因，第一我感觉前边那段重鼓点后边kiai重旋律，听上去是这样的，kiai里面有一种很重的底音，如果全都弄成normal就会觉得比较吵；第二如果后边那个whistle我挺想用的，但是它和normal不搭配
01:03:291 (1) - 头上可以finish Fixed
01:08:936 (1) - 头上finish没了 Fixed
01:08:936 (1,2) - 别挨着好看些 Fixed
01:17:404 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么2和3之间宽一些？我幻觉？放均匀了多好……既然都摆成这样了 Fixed


Easy
00:18:131 (1) - 间距太大 把00:15:308 (1,2) - 逆时针转一点小角度再摆回附近可破 Fixed
音效还是觉得kiai用soft很奇怪 Hard里面解释过惹~
没了

That's all
Good luck 谢谢~~
Thanks for your modding! :)
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
Hi from qq pm

妈的又在01下面 拖人req真是天罚

recommend to fix
nazi

[General]
是我的设置问题么 Insane和其他diff combo color不一样?

[jyc]
Stack Leniency拉到7呸 拉高点儿吧 3有点略低 我也不知道SL不一样是不是unrank
00:09:663 (3,1) - 拉开点儿吧 不是我说 这连着5pc我都当1/3按的
00:11:427 (5,6) - ctrl+g一下? 尤其是在SL3下看得累死 用鼠标打不过去 我又接上板子打了2pc才看懂orz, 顺便 00:10:722 (1,2,3) - 这个三角形不是正三角形
00:11:780 (1,2,3,4) - 还是间距大的非常突然 我到最后都没反应过来 到后来也懒得打SS了
00:24:129 (1,2,3) - 这个正常来说的话还是白线起的三连吧 感觉不合曲 打起来有点别扭(
00:44:593 (6,2) - 出2的时候6还没消失 反正是看着略别扭 要不2跟6中间拉开点儿跟1 2的ds一样 要不blanket一下吧 美观点
00:46:710 (1,2,3) - 同上边三连说的那个
00:51:296 (1,2) - 象征性地稍微blanket一下? 也是好看点
00:47:944 (9) - 觉得这个circle删了比较好 而且上面有clap我也是非常不能理解..
01:14:405 (4,5) - 遮挡一下觉得怪怪的.. 哎..
01:20:226 (3) - 加个NC? 如果拉开ds是为了强调finish的话还是加个nc好读些?

真是老式滑条算法的忠实粉丝o.o

[Hard]
00:01:196 (1,2,3) - 一个轻微强迫症患者看到ds不一样有点忍不住
00:20:247 (5,1) - 是不是没叠好啊
好下面是我真正想说的了
00:54:824 (1) - 从这里开始你就没再用过normal的sampleset 说实在的我略不解 因为kiai部分才该是音乐的重点 前面你都用了normal 为什么kiai听上去就这么没有打击感 听起来轻飘飘的呢/w\ 正是因为在副歌部分bgm所用的成分开始丰富起来为了衬托人声 你才更应该用音效来烘托节奏感呀(
01:08:583 (5,2) - 呃 叠一下?
01:10:348 (3) - ^
01:12:464 (2,3) - 个人是觉得滑条部分挡着后面滑条尾不好看 寿司熊
01:18:815 (1) - 这个还是用soft的sampleset听起来好些(?)

[lkx]
00:05:076 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这几个用的是1.1x的ds 前后都是1.0x 统一一下?
00:09:663 (6) - NC?
00:15:308 (5) - ^
00:16:014 (6) - DS
00:19:189 (2,4) - ^
00:20:953 (6) - ^ , 还有NC 哎呀NC不说了
00:24:834 (2) - ^
00:26:598 (4) - 1.07x
00:27:657 (5,6,7) - 做个blanket?
00:47:414 (2) - DS
00:48:826 (3) - ^
。。。懒得指了 怎么说呢 感觉做的非常不精细。。毕竟是个Normal吧 DS换来换去 一组combo都排到10了orz 哎 也可能是我要求太多了orz
还有啊像这种00:08:252 (3,4,5,6) - 刚1/4(1/2)叠过又1/2(1/1)叠是不是不太好啊 我Normal都不敢这么用 以前被人说过
音效方面还是跟Hard说的一样 kiai部分轻飘飘的不舒服

[Easy]
没什么好说的啊 音效就不说了 其他的就是我觉得note边压着了不太好看O.O

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sorry不会摸E N 就是DT过了遍随便说两句orz 请务必不要降低好感度啊
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