mod as requested *v*
okey dude here goes
fyi It will contain some mixed languagebecause my english sucks o3o
welp everything is nice and good, just need some neater pattern on easy, the rest of the diff is fine~
fyi aku lebih suka kiai yg pertama daripada kiai setelahnya o3oganti preview time kesana
btw kalo ada yg kurang jelas, please state owo
anyway, semoga cepet ranked yaw, Star'd! *o*b
okey dude here goes
fyi It will contain some mixed language
[Easy]
00:10:960 (1) - straight sliders just doesn't went really good with me(too boring imo), besides, the background music isn't too fit for a straight one; try this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018678
00:15:074 (3) - this slider strikes me between whether it's going to blanket the (2) circle or it's just going up. Welp no problem really, just doesn't really like the arrangements try this one ; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018691 : le move (3) to 136/192 and make the shape like it shown on the pic, that way it will blanket 00:16:445 (1) - and the placement is better~ btw by moving (3) to the coordinate i said, it will not mess the distance VERY much, so that it will be easier to do o3o
00:31:531 (2) - Try making it like this; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018705 as straight slider is good for this pattern, but it's getting too long for my liking ;_;
00:35:645 (1,2) - Try making these two like the one I showed in the beginning. The background music is not fit for straight slider ouo
00:41:131 (1) - try ending the spinner at 00:43:188 and drag the break to start at 00:43:874 - the feeling is really nice owo
01:03:074 (1,2) - mungkin dibuat gini aja ya bagusnya; 01:03:074 (1,2) - Dat overlap just doesn't do it for me o3o
02:11:645 (1,3) - why straight? ;_; make them curvy
02:28:102 (1,2) - Dat overlap.. try this shape instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018726
02:32:217 - turnthe kiai off here instead of earlier(for all diffs btw)
02:32:217 (3) - welp I want troll beginners too but this may be too hard for a Easy. I suggest just use the slider until 02:32:902 - the buzzing can be used as a good silence gap right?
02:33:588 - this big beat is not to be leaved as blank considering how powerful this beat is (not to mention this is the start of a kiai lol), add a circle here o3o
02:50:045 (1,2,3,4) - try this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018740 (welp I really don't like straight circles aligning orz)
03:11:988 (1) - lol aku kehabisan ide tapi ini bisa dibuat lebih bervariasi ketimbang 1 curve aja. Soalnya panjang beat yang diambil ;_;
00:10:960 (1) - straight sliders just doesn't went really good with me(too boring imo), besides, the background music isn't too fit for a straight one; try this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018678
00:15:074 (3) - this slider strikes me between whether it's going to blanket the (2) circle or it's just going up. Welp no problem really, just doesn't really like the arrangements try this one ; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018691 : le move (3) to 136/192 and make the shape like it shown on the pic, that way it will blanket 00:16:445 (1) - and the placement is better~ btw by moving (3) to the coordinate i said, it will not mess the distance VERY much, so that it will be easier to do o3o
00:31:531 (2) - Try making it like this; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018705 as straight slider is good for this pattern, but it's getting too long for my liking ;_;
00:35:645 (1,2) - Try making these two like the one I showed in the beginning. The background music is not fit for straight slider ouo
00:41:131 (1) - try ending the spinner at 00:43:188 and drag the break to start at 00:43:874 - the feeling is really nice owo
01:03:074 (1,2) - mungkin dibuat gini aja ya bagusnya; 01:03:074 (1,2) - Dat overlap just doesn't do it for me o3o
02:11:645 (1,3) - why straight? ;_; make them curvy
02:28:102 (1,2) - Dat overlap.. try this shape instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018726
02:32:217 - turnthe kiai off here instead of earlier(for all diffs btw)
02:32:217 (3) - welp I want troll beginners too but this may be too hard for a Easy. I suggest just use the slider until 02:32:902 - the buzzing can be used as a good silence gap right?
02:33:588 - this big beat is not to be leaved as blank considering how powerful this beat is (not to mention this is the start of a kiai lol), add a circle here o3o
02:50:045 (1,2,3,4) - try this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018740 (welp I really don't like straight circles aligning orz)
03:11:988 (1) - lol aku kehabisan ide tapi ini bisa dibuat lebih bervariasi ketimbang 1 curve aja. Soalnya panjang beat yang diambil ;_;
[Normal]
Coba sliderticknya 2 juga, agak aneh kalo diliat dari easynya o3o
00:17:817 (3,4) - Keep the straight-then-curvy slider pattern. Try this osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018762
00:41:131 (1) - same as easy~
00:55:360 (2,1) - lol blanket them better
02:15:417 (3,4) - Yang ini distack aja. Better play ouo
02:22:274 (1,2) - Swap NC lol, the new beat start at (2) instead of (1)
02:30:845 (1) - yep same as easy
02:53:988 (2) - that 2x repeat will make everyone stumble, not to mention it's in the of the song lol
Coba sliderticknya 2 juga, agak aneh kalo diliat dari easynya o3o
00:17:817 (3,4) - Keep the straight-then-curvy slider pattern. Try this osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018762
00:41:131 (1) - same as easy~
00:55:360 (2,1) - lol blanket them better
02:15:417 (3,4) - Yang ini distack aja. Better play ouo
02:22:274 (1,2) - Swap NC lol, the new beat start at (2) instead of (1)
02:30:845 (1) - yep same as easy
02:53:988 (2) - that 2x repeat will make everyone stumble, not to mention it's in the of the song lol
[Hard]
01:19:531 (1) - wat, this sudden jump after a slow slider really threw me off. The jump isn't really fit imo, try to DS this normally o3o
01:27:760 - will be very nice if you use 0.8 or 0.75 SV here then increase it back to 1.0 at 01:38:731 - you know ;_; but it will require too much effort to snap it back orz whydidievensaythisomg
02:21:417 (5,6,7) - Try to use anti-jump here as the music is really fit owo
01:19:531 (1) - wat, this sudden jump after a slow slider really threw me off. The jump isn't really fit imo, try to DS this normally o3o
01:27:760 - will be very nice if you use 0.8 or 0.75 SV here then increase it back to 1.0 at 01:38:731 - you know ;_; but it will require too much effort to snap it back orz whydidievensaythisomg
02:21:417 (5,6,7) - Try to use anti-jump here as the music is really fit owo
[Insane]
02:11:302 (8) - slidernya sampe di 02:11:474 - (di red ticknya aja) rhythmnya lebih bisa diambil kalo end di red tick owo btw SV boleh lebih dinaikin buat slidernya ini biar lebih panjangan lagi dikit ouo
02:45:931 (7) - NC? avoid too long combos
03:14:731 (1) - straight streams why. Is fine, really, but you can use a more curvy or zigzag line ;_;
02:11:302 (8) - slidernya sampe di 02:11:474 - (di red ticknya aja) rhythmnya lebih bisa diambil kalo end di red tick owo btw SV boleh lebih dinaikin buat slidernya ini biar lebih panjangan lagi dikit ouo
02:45:931 (7) - NC? avoid too long combos
03:14:731 (1) - straight streams why. Is fine, really, but you can use a more curvy or zigzag line ;_;
welp everything is nice and good, just need some neater pattern on easy, the rest of the diff is fine~
fyi aku lebih suka kiai yg pertama daripada kiai setelahnya o3o
btw kalo ada yg kurang jelas, please state owo
anyway, semoga cepet ranked yaw, Star'd! *o*b