9930,383.946835443039,3,2,2,40,1,0
22181,377.946835443038,4,2,2,40,1,0
31251,370.399999999999,4,2,2,40,1,0
34189,374.6,4,2,2,80,1,0
40174,373.970807453416,4,2,2,80,1,0
46160,380.958490566039,4,2,2,80,1,0
52255,376.746835443037,4,2,2,80,1,0
58282,377.700000000001,4,2,2,80,1,0
64312,376.458490566038,4,2,2,80,1,0
70348,378.800000000001,4,2,2,80,1,0
76405,377.3,4,2,2,40,1,0
88478,376.058490566037,4,2,2,40,1,0
98984,369.099999999999,4,2,2,60,1,0
100456,375.6,4,2,2,80,1,0
106465,371.1,4,2,2,80,1,0
112429,379.500000000001,4,2,2,80,1,0
118501,377.700000000001,4,2,2,80,1,0
124544,379.200000000001,4,2,2,80,1,0
130611,375.7,4,2,2,80,1,0
136622,379.900000000001,4,2,2,80,1,0
142710,369.799999999999,4,2,2,80,1,0
148626,356.742857142857,4,2,2,80,1,0
160041,360.836363636363,4,2,2,80,1,1
165814,364.845783132531,4,2,2,80,1,1
171674,368.07037037037,4,2,2,80,1,1
183449,367.499999999998,4,2,2,40,1,0
195208,370.118159509203,4,2,2,40,1,0
201129,367.499999999998,4,2,2,40,1,0
206968,369.098159509203,4,2,2,40,1,0
218785,366.629585798819,4,2,2,40,1,0

NoYzE wrote:

[Easy]
00:34:750 (2) - Offbeat? It's easy :/ ► Fixed (it was my fault when fixing timing)
01:41:770 (2) - Same (there are others following i won't list) ► This one was made in purpose (notice both voice and drums falling in this red tick, which makes him stronger). All the others I found were fixed by making them match the voice.
I think it's ok but you may frustrate new players

Despite that, very nice.

[Normal]
Umm.... just... Awesome ► Thanks ^.^

[Hard]
01:16:030 (7) - Argh, hard to read, but it's fine for hard i guess. ► I agree (: and it was done in purpose (part of mapping style)
01:38:984 (1) - This one is tricky, because it has overlap, no distance spacings and switch from 1/4 to 1/8 ► Hm... Moved (1) to x:392 y:104, so it'll form blanket with previous slider. And add flow.
02:38:614 (1) - This one is much easier to read though it is basically the same ► It's just overlapping the previous 02:36:831 (5) - so kept it as currently it is.

[Insane]
I am looking forward for it to be finished, the start looks very nice

As always: If you like the parts, keep them, it's just my opinion
Ah and: The timing is awesome

Alarido wrote:

► Fixed (it was my fault when fixing timing)

Alarido wrote:

► This one was made in purpose (notice both voice and drums falling in this red tick, which makes him stronger).

Alarido wrote:

► I agree (: and it was done in purpose (part of mapping style)

Alarido wrote:

► Hm... Moved (1) to x:392 y:104, so it'll form blanket with previous slider. And add flow.

Alarido wrote:

► It's just overlapping the previous 02:36:831 (5) - so kept it as currently it is.

NoYzE wrote:

I'm very happy with the mapset now and i think this shouldn't have much problems to get ranked after some polish from more experienced modders
Keep up the good work!

NoYzE wrote:

Couldn't find anything wrong with Insane spacing or flow O_o
It's very smooth and cool to play i think

Your hit sounds are pretty cool too, using claps for the snare drum is very good

But i found some you might want to look into:

► In the next lines, Y means Added and N means Not added.

[Insane]
00:35:500 (3) - Snare ► Y
00:36:623 (6) - Snare ► Y
00:53:008 (3) - Pretty silent but i think there is one too at the slider end ► No.... (Maybe the noisy song making me almost-deaf to it ><)
01:02:625 (4) - Here the clap is at the end, while it should be at the start ► Swapped the ones.
01:08:076 (5) - Clap missing start and end(?) ► Y
01:09:017 (7) - Is there a snare? ► Y
01:09:958 (10) - There may be one too ► Y
01:16:030 (9) - Snare ► Y
01:50:918 (6) - Snare ► Y
01:51:474 (9) - Snare ► Y
02:02:278 (5) - Snare at the end too ► Y
02:03:222 (7) - Snare ► Y
02:07:198 (7) - Snare ► Y
02:08:904 (4) - Snare ► Y
02:14:368 (3) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:17:381 (2) - Snare ► Y
02:17:951 (3) - Snare ► Y
02:19:281 (6) - Snare ► Y
02:22:710 (1) - Snare ► Y
02:23:449 (2) - Snare (clap + finish) ► Y
02:24:189 (3) - "*" ► I didn't understood this "*".... What the asterisks say to me? (the same for all following "*")
02:24:928 (4) - "*"
02:26:408 (3) - "*"
02:27:147 (1) - "*"
02:27:887 (3) - "*"
02:28:626 (1) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:29:161 (2) - "*"
02:30:766 (6) - Snare ► Y
02:31:479 (1) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:32:015 (2) - "*"
02:33:620 (6) - Snare ► Y
02:34:333 (1) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:34:869 (2) - "*"
02:37:544 (2) - Snare ► Y
02:38:079 (4) - Snare ► Y
02:48:003 (5) - Snare ► Y
02:55:170 (2) - This slider is too long!(?) and the sliders after it timed too late to fit the rhythm(?) check it out ► As seen on previous parts, following the bg sounds along the middle beats.
03:04:000 (2) - rim in the middle ► I didn't understood what means "rim" in this context. It seems took the place of another word (clap, whistle, silence etc.). Silencing discarded because against the rules.
03:06:939 (2) - "*"
03:14:473 (7) - Snare ► Y
03:15:763 (2) - rim in the middle
03:15:763 (2) - "*"
03:26:273 (4) - Rim

Alarido wrote:

► I didn't understood this "*".... What the asterisks say to me? (the same for all following "*")

Oh, sorry it should just mean "the same as above".
So when i when i was writing "Snare (clap + finish)" and after "*" i just meant "the same" so an other "Snare (clap + finish)"


► I didn't understood what means "rim" in this context. It seems took the place of another word (clap, whistle, silence etc.). Silencing discarded because against the rules.

Sorry too if it was confusing, it's a drum technique where you don't hit the snaredrum with the stick, but lay your stick down on the snaredrum and just hit the edge (rim) of the snaredrum. It's known as "RimClick".
It's commonly used for quieter, softer parts, because it isn't so aggressive like a full snaredrum hit.

So, basically i just wanted to say to you: "There should be a clap/whistle" just like when i said "Snare".

Ghost Reaver wrote:

here, take my love
and change your bg, horrible quality ):

NoYzE wrote:

► I didn't understood this "*".... What the asterisks say to me? (the same for all following "*")

Oh, sorry it should just mean "the same as above".
So when i when i was writing "Snare (clap + finish)" and after "*" i just meant "the same" so an other "Snare (clap + finish)"

NoYzE wrote:

► I didn't understood what means "rim" in this context. It seems took the place of another word (clap, whistle, silence etc.). Silencing discarded because against the rules.

Sorry too if it was confusing, it's a drum technique where you don't hit the snaredrum with the stick, but lay your stick down on the snaredrum and just hit the edge (rim) of the snaredrum. It's known as "RimClick".
It's commonly used for quieter, softer parts, because it isn't so aggressive like a full snaredrum hit.

So, basically i just wanted to say to you: "There should be a clap/whistle" just like when i said "Snare".

NoYzE wrote:

(...)
► In the next lines, Y means Added and N means Not added.

[Insane]
(...)

02:24:189 (3) - "*" ► Ok
02:24:928 (4) - "*" ► Ok
02:26:408 (3) - "*" ► Ok
02:27:147 (1) - "*" ► Ok
02:27:887 (3) - "*" ► Ok
02:28:626 (1) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:29:161 (2) - "*" ► Ok
02:30:766 (6) - Snare ► Y
02:31:479 (1) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:32:015 (2) - "*" ► Ok
02:33:620 (6) - Snare ► Y
02:34:333 (1) - Snare at the end ► Y
02:34:869 (2) - "*" ► Ok
03:04:000 (2) - rim in the middle ► Ok
03:06:939 (2) - "*" ► Ok
03:14:473 (7) - Snare ► Y
03:15:763 (2) - rim in the middle ► Ok
03:15:763 (2) - "*" ► Ok
03:26:273 (4) - Rim ► Ok

LucyS wrote:

Hii m4m
This song is amazing!
Here are some suggestions

Normal
00:45:409 - This slider start here ► Fixed and adjusted.
00:59:415 - try this:

SPOILER

► Liked the first suggestion, it fits better with the further patterns with no overlaps.

02:05:871 (3) - slider starting here and ending in the same place ► It's intentional and gives good flow.

Hard
01:01:681 - end this here, and put a circle here 01:01:870 - maybe ► Feels good c:
01:44:963 - circle here ► Instead, deleted previous circle at 01:44:775 (3) and placed a 1/2 slider in its place
02:57:563 -

SPOILER

► Feels amazing :3 Done !

Mashley wrote:

Not going to properly mod but just posted to say I enjoyed the map and wish you the best of luck getting it ranked.

However you should definitely change the background image, at the moment it's very blurry and ugly. Just find a System of a Down themed wallpaper. ► Ok.

Also on insane this pattern 01:39:353 (2,3,4,5,6) - is very unfair and will trip a lot of players up. You should change it or at least make the jumps smaller. ► Changed into an arc. A bit more Larto instead of star jumps

1. Love this music♥

Cosmolade wrote:

Hello o3o
M4M~

[General]

1. Love this music♥

[Easy]

Good~

- 01:50:918 (2) - Extend to white tick ► Done.
- 01:53:947 (3) - Move this to 01:53:567 -delete the reverse, and extend the slider to 01:54:326 -and add a circle in 01:54:706 - ? ► It can be editor's bug, but it pointed me other different notes, so I got confused... And from the beginning, I found the voice and drums fall with their whole energy on this red tick at 01:53:757, and also it's consistent with other parts, then kept.

[Normal]

Nice owo

- 00:57:717 (4) - Move to previous white tick (- 00:57:529 -) and extend to white tick ► done
- 00:59:603 (3) - Extend to red tick (- 01:00:737 -) ► done
- 01:09:394 (4) - Move to white tick, and end the slider in white tick ► Following the strong drum, not the weaker one. Kept.
- 01:51:474 (4) - ^ ► ^
- 01:57:931 (4) - Move to previous white tick, and end the slider in white tick ► done
- 02:03:599 (6) - Move to white tick, and end the slider in white tick ► Kepy by consistency and mainly stronger beats
- 03:48:867 (1) - End the slider in red tick ► done

[Hard]
Pretty hard, but avoid the sliders with +2 reverse, it's so confusing ► not so much ~.~ and thinking like a guitarrist when he/she makes his/her instrument screams across the youngers, because he/she does the same often with the guitar's strings.

- 00:31:251 (1,2) - ^ ► kept.
- 00:53:761 (4) - ^ ► kept.
- 00:57:717 (9) - Move to 00:57:529 -and add a reverse ► no >< it would make flow and spacing so bad ><
- 01:46:465 (1) - Avoid +2 reverse. ► kept.
- 01:47:949 (3) - ^ ► kept.
- 01:51:474 (6) - Move to white tik, - delete this note> 01:52:031 (7) -and add a circle in > 01:51:474 ► done
- 02:01:522 (1) - Avoid +2 reverse. ► kept.
- 02:03:599 (4) - Move to white tick, - delete this note> 02:04:166 (5) -and add a circle in > 02:03:599 ► done
- 02:15:682 (4) - Move to white tick, end the slider in red tick, and add a circle in> 02:15:682 ► kept, since it fits and matchs to the level too

[Insane]
AMAZING
Check AImod, some objects are not snapped :3 ► done

- 02:03:788 - Add a note? ► done

WOW, this Insane is so beautiful, Good Job

-----

Good luck with the map~ (*´•ω•)ノ(´•ω•`)

pkmnyab wrote:

[General]
From your M4M queue~

The preview point should be the exciting/powerful part of the song that makes people want to play it. That being said, I believe you should change the preview point to 00:34:214

BPM should be changed to 160. The BPM for most songs is a whole number and a multiple of 5.

[Normal]
00:35:312 (2,3,4) - Move the slider forward one tick in time and add a circle before it to match the beat and the vocalist singing "waterfall" ► The singer starts to voice "waterfall" right at 00:35:500, so the slider should begin where it currently is ('dancing' at the slider while singer 'wa' (begin of slider) - 'ter' (at slider repeat) - 'fall' (at slider end) ... ) . No change.

SPOILER

01:11:484 (2,3) - try arranging it like this to match the vocal: ► Did something with further notes too.


01:44:212 (2,3) - I think this part sounds better if you arrange it like this: ► Nooo... it feels like Easy, and there are important beats to cover here. No changes.


01:50:918 (3,4) - sounds better to move and shorten (4) slider to match the guitar: ► It's focusing the beats consistently with other parts of the diff. No changes.


02:03:033 (5,6) - ^same as before ► Same as latter statement.


[Insane]
00:32:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe arrange it in a circle to make it look better like this: ► FEELS GOOD ♥

SPOILER

00:45:409 - The silence here is awkward, perhaps you can put a note here ► This 'silence' is important part of the feelings. But.... I added a jump here instead (by Gtrl-G'ing the (6,7) notes).

00:57:341 (9,10) - consider moving the slider forward one tick in time and placing (10) before the slider to match the guitar like this: ► No changes: this is a special match to this part.

If you really want to keep it the way it is, you can do it like this in some parts of the song and different in other parts. ► It's good take a moderate cup of consistency. However, sometimes, excessive amounts have worse side effects (like sugar, salt, exercises, work. We need a bit of carbohidrates to stay alive, but excessive dosages make us fat and may one source of diabetes).

01:09:394 (9,10) - ^same as before ► Added a note.
01:51:474 (9,10) - ^ ► No change
02:15:682 (7,8) - ^ ► No change

---

Anyways, have fun mapping!

Lobont wrote:

Don't let this die ffs. D:

Snaggletooth wrote:

I acctually wanted to mod this but.. This map is absolutly beautiful.. <3 I'd love to give you stars if I had any D:

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi Alarido~

Your beatmap is really good, but I found some minor grid symmetry issues.
[Easy]
01:34:494 (1) - this looks out of place to me but I can't seem to find a better way to place it without moving other things, so maybe it's ok. ► Hm... its head makes a triangle with 01:32:990 (2,3) - and its head is blanketed by 01:35:623 (2) - so kept (:
[Normal]
00:44:287 (2, 4) - move slider 4 up so it matches Y axis with slider 2 ► No symmetry intended here.... For symmetry, both sliders should be same visual size, that's not the case here (due to rhythm).
03:32:873 (1, 2) - when you reverse selection on slider 1, you can see that slider 1 is (x,308) and slider 2 is (x,307). ► Fixed !
[Hard]
00:40:921 (3, 6) - I do not see this pattern anywhere else in the song.. do you want to change it? ► Modified some patterns.
02:44:371 (4, 5) - when you reverse selection on slider 5, it is (x,235) and slider 4 is (x,236). ► Fixed !
03:14:106 (6, 7) - slider 7 = (x,286) when the reverse slider 6 = (x,287) ► Fixed too !
[Insane]
01:43:460 (1, 3) - slider 1 is (x,196) but slider 3 is (x,195) when reverse ► Fixed too !
02:31:439 (1, 2) - slider 2 is (x,242) but slider 1 is (x,243) when reverse ► Fixed too !
02:40:221 (1, 2) - here is also a difference of (x,y+-1) ► Fixed too !
02:51:991 (1, 2) - same as 02:40:221 (1, 2) - ► Fixed too !
02:54:618 (1, 2) - ^ ► Fixed too !
02:58:667 (1, 2) - ^ ► Fixed too !

Good luck.

Easy

• • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
  • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
  • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
  • 01:55:072 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

Normal

• • 01:51:497 (4) - Unsnapped slider.

Insane

• • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
  • 00:40:384 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
  • 00:40:570 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

240,164,195208,6,0,P|222:193|224:230,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,195763,2,0,P|217:54|183:39,2,67.5000025749208,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,196318,2,0,P|125:134|108:168,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,186,196688,2,0,P|165:223|177:259,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,219,197058,2,0,P|257:253|291:270,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,197428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,140,197613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,197798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,197983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,198168,6,0,P|186:41|196:-3,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,139,198724,2,0,P|139:123|114:84,2,67.5000025749208,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,199279,2,0,P|282:163|307:202,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,223,199649,2,0,P|252:257|241:303,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,263,200019,2,0,P|163:297|125:322,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,244,200389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,168,200574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,92,200759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,52,200944,1,0,0:0:0:0:

DexFrild wrote:

awww amazing song. And map too :3 Оne of my favorite (and first) songs by SOAD.

Here some problems with snapping:

Easy

• • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider. ► It seems unsnapped when you're positioned before the new timing red line, but after you cross that line, you'll see the note snapped as it must be. That's the reason AiMod don't detected it.
  • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider. ► ^
  • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider. ► ^
  • 01:55:072 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.

Normal

• • 01:51:497 (4) - Unsnapped slider. ► Fixed.

Insane

• • 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.
  • 00:40:384 (2) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.
  • 00:40:570 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

• 02:32:905 (4) - I expected to see it higher. (x:256 y:36) ► Moved to x:256 y:28 (also checked in gameplay for avoiding touch life bar, and found that it doesn't touches the life bar.).
• 03:15:208 (1,2) - Uncomfortable transition. I recommend to make like that:

SPOILER

Open Insane with notepad, find in --[HitObjects]-- section (almost very bottom) string with start 240,164,195208... And change your code to this. (Don't forget save your part. But this part more comfortable :3).

240,164,195208,6,0,P|222:193|224:230,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,195763,2,0,P|217:54|183:39,2,67.5000025749208,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,196318,2,0,P|125:134|108:168,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,186,196688,2,0,P|165:223|177:259,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,219,197058,2,0,P|257:253|291:270,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,197428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,140,197613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,197798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,197983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,198168,6,0,P|186:41|196:-3,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,139,198724,2,0,P|139:123|114:84,2,67.5000025749208,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,199279,2,0,P|282:163|307:202,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,223,199649,2,0,P|252:257|241:303,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,263,200019,2,0,P|163:297|125:322,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,244,200389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,168,200574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,92,200759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,52,200944,1,0,0:0:0:0:

►►► Thanks for the code c: feels better now (:

As I've said above, very good map! Good luck with ~

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, there's something weird in your video. Also, the OD on Easy and Normal should be reduced to make the timing changes and choppy rhythm a bit more playable.

Anyway, I'm here to shoot a couple of stars. Hope I'll be able to mod it when I finish with the maps from my queue! (if you don't mind, ofc).

WHOA SO MANY STAAAAAARZ ^O^

1. Man, don't lie to us, that's clearly NOT a heavy metal song, sounds more like alternative metal. (Wiki) Also, you may want to add Toxicity to the tqgs, it's the name of the album.
   Note: don't forget to add SOAD to the tags, I think you know why
2. Blue and purple colors are pretty similar, bring some vary, use more of them! See the box below for some example!
   
   colors

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 184,201,182
   Combo2 : 189,176,164
   Combo3 : 181,190,193
   Combo4 : 75,74,85
   Combo5 : 49,83,111
   Combo6 : 203,179,173

3. Please, reduce the sound of this spinner. It'd really fit with the music + it sounds kinda weird as it is.
   Note: oh, and maybe you should consider muting spinner-bonus.wav as well. I think it sounds a bit off and doesn't really fits with this song.

1. Honestly, I feel like you have to reduce the OD here. You current OD is a bit too high because the song has some BPM changes and 3/2 beats which are rather hard for beginners. Reducing OD would make your map a bit friendlier towards beginners.
2. 00:35:687 (3,1) - I don't want to bother you with nazi stuff, but the flow feels kinda wrong here. It is catchable, but the transition gives an unpleasant feeling. I've tried to fix it for you, see if you like it!
   Note: 01:34:494 (1,2) - pretty much the same happens here. Though the diff is quite slow and it doesn't feel that bad, but if you have any better ideas, please go ahead and change it!
3. 01:38:984 (5) - and 02:28:626 (5) - please, consider adding a new combo here. You need it to emphasize the BPM vhanges and to follow music a bit better. It may look a bit confusing, but I'm sure that it's needed here to emphasize players about the BPM changes
4. 02:44:371 (2,3) - i kinda didn't like your rhythm here, it feels a bit complicated. Why don't you make it a bit more simple and follow vocals here? my example
   Note: 02:53:146 (2,3) and 02:56:090 (2,3) - the rhythm feels kinda repetitive, do the sae here, I guess. Or keep it this way to bring some vary and make your map a bit more interesting
5. 02:53:146 (2,3) - nazi - try to make a bblanket here example or use some simple flow here. Either way you choose it will improve the transition between (3) and (1), imo.
6. 03:19:279 (2) - just amazing. Love everything about this slider, it's sound, it's shape and the flow it gives! Great idea! ♥
   
   You never disappoint me, great diff!

1. Try to reduce OD, it may be a bit hard to deal with all these BPM changes, though they are minor, they're A LOT of them. Normal-players may be confused with such complicated timing.
2. 01:38:984 (5) - pretty much the same as on Easy diff, I'd emphasize such BPM changes with new combos, it fits with the music + it makes the BPM/offset changes a bit more understandable
3. 01:51:474 (4,1) - the transition feels kinda awkward here. It is catchable, but well, the flow isn't really good, imo. Maybe it's just me, that'd be great to get some more opinions on this part, tho
4. 03:48:683 (2,1) - you have no taiko/o!m specific iffs, so players will play standard diffs in their modes. This pattern becomes unacceptable and too hard in o!m and really unreadable in taiko. Please, try to avoid such stuff when it's possible, place spnners to existing beats!
   
   Everything is pretty nice. Good job with the diff!

1. 00:40:921 (3) - I'd use NCs to mphasize such slowdowns. Those, who play hard diffs are probably not used to sudden slowdowns, so it may confuse them a bit.
2. 01:15:651 (6,7) - this would flow much better if you change it's direction, I think.
3. 01:46:465 (1) - not a fan of such sliders, they may fit, but it's kinda unpleasant when the second reverse-arrow apears. If I were you, I'd replace such sliders with something like this
   Note: same applies for all similar sliders, ofc. Oh, and probably you should get more opinions about such things. It may be just me ><
4. 02:45:814 (1,2) - just a little overlap which looks a bit out of style, so I'd recommend you to fix it. It'll also improve your flow!
   
   Well mapped, that's exactly what I love!

1. I would reduce the OD here as well. So many BPM changes and OD8 may be TOO hard and probably won't be a pleasant experience. Anyway, get more opinions about this one.
   
   Perfecto! Personally, I'd add some more jumps to loud drum beats, but it's not a big deal. I loved the diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, not-so-random mod because you're awesome.

[General]

1. Man, don't lie to us, that's clearly NOT a heavy metal song, sounds more like alternative metal. (Wiki) Also, you may want to add Toxicity to the tqgs, it's the name of the album. ► Done.
   Note: don't forget to add SOAD to the tags, I think you know why ► Good
2. Blue and purple colors are pretty similar, bring some vary, use more of them! See the box below for some example!
   
   colors

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 184,201,182
   Combo2 : 189,176,164
   Combo3 : 181,190,193
   Combo4 : 75,74,85
   Combo5 : 49,83,111
   Combo6 : 203,179,173

   ►►► Good colors c: Copied
3. Please, reduce the sound of this spinner. It'd really fit with the music + it sounds kinda weird as it is.
   Note: oh, and maybe you should consider muting spinner-bonus.wav as well. I think it sounds a bit off and doesn't really fits with this song. ► Doing it.

[Easy]

1. Honestly, I feel like you have to reduce the OD here. You current OD is a bit too high because the song has some BPM changes and 3/2 beats which are rather hard for beginners. Reducing OD would make your map a bit friendlier towards beginners. ► So I'd applied now the OD scheme of 1-3-5-7 for E-N-H-I respectively.
2. 00:35:687 (3,1) - I don't want to bother you with nazi stuff, but the flow feels kinda wrong here. It is catchable, but the transition gives an unpleasant feeling. I've tried to fix it for you, see if you like it! ► Tried something like because of further patterns. Modified some of them tho...
   Note: 01:34:494 (1,2) - pretty much the same happens here. Though the diff is quite slow and it doesn't feel that bad, but if you have any better ideas, please go ahead and change it!
3. 01:38:984 (5) - and 02:28:626 (5) - please, consider adding a new combo here. You need it to emphasize the BPM vhanges and to follow music a bit better. It may look a bit confusing, but I'm sure that it's needed here to emphasize players about the BPM changes ► Good
4. 02:44:371 (2,3) - i kinda didn't like your rhythm here, it feels a bit complicated. Why don't you make it a bit more simple and follow vocals here? my example ► Redesigned them.
   Note: 02:53:146 (2,3) and 02:56:090 (2,3) - the rhythm feels kinda repetitive, do the sae here, I guess. Or keep it this way to bring some vary and make your map a bit more interesting
5. 02:53:146 (2,3) - nazi - try to make a bblanket here example or use some simple flow here. Either way you choose it will improve the transition between (3) and (1), imo. ► Redesigned both (2,3) pairs of the symmetry.
6. 03:19:279 (2) - just amazing. Love everything about this slider, it's sound, it's shape and the flow it gives! Great idea! ♥ ► <3
   
   You never disappoint me, great diff!

[Normal]

1. Try to reduce OD, it may be a bit hard to deal with all these BPM changes, though they are minor, they're A LOT of them. Normal-players may be confused with such complicated timing. ► So I'd applied now the OD scheme of 1-3-5-7 for E-N-H-I respectively.
2. 01:38:984 (5) - pretty much the same as on Easy diff, I'd emphasize such BPM changes with new combos, it fits with the music + it makes the BPM/offset changes a bit more understandable ► Done.
3. 01:51:474 (4,1) - the transition feels kinda awkward here. It is catchable, but well, the flow isn't really good, imo. Maybe it's just me, that'd be great to get some more opinions on this part, tho ► Hm... kept it as it's jonathanlfj's influence (from some certain map I don't remember now ><)
4. 03:48:683 (2,1) - you have no taiko/o!m specific iffs, so players will play standard diffs in their modes. This pattern becomes unacceptable and too hard in o!m and really unreadable in taiko. Please, try to avoid such stuff when it's possible, place spnners to existing beats! ► At least at easier diffs, sure (:
   
   Everything is pretty nice. Good job with the diff!

[Hard]

1. 00:40:921 (3) - I'd use NCs to mphasize such slowdowns. Those, who play hard diffs are probably not used to sudden slowdowns, so it may confuse them a bit. ► Well... too many slowings with too many NCs... if some BAT suggest it, I'll do, but it feels not too suitable to have such ?NC span? -- because I usually place NC for each 1 or 2 stanzas, except if the song itself feels requesting for more (e.g., real BPM changes -- marked by red lines)
2. 01:15:651 (6,7) - this would flow much better if you change it's direction, I think. ► Redesigned this part a bit.
3. 01:46:465 (1) - not a fan of such sliders, they may fit, but it's kinda unpleasant when the second reverse-arrow apears. If I were you, I'd replace such sliders with something like this ► This was made mostly for add variety (or too many 1/2 ones in same style) and, also, for lack of space. I would try stacked 1/2 sliders (like these ones here), but unfortunately, they're unrankable. But when the rules change about slider stacking, I'll feel more free to change it (:
   Note: same applies for all similar sliders, ofc. Oh, and probably you should get more opinions about such things. It may be just me ><
4. 02:45:814 (1,2) - just a little overlap which looks a bit out of style, so I'd recommend you to fix it. It'll also improve your flow!
   
   Well mapped, that's exactly what I love!

[Insane]

1. I would reduce the OD here as well. So many BPM changes and OD8 may be TOO hard and probably won't be a pleasant experience. Anyway, get more opinions about this one. ► So I'd applied now the OD scheme of 1-3-5-7 for E-N-H-I respectively.
   
   Perfecto! Personally, I'd add some more jumps to loud drum beats, but it's not a big deal. I loved the diff.

Great mapset! Have some star(s)!

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Best of luck!