mark 等我放假回来再摸
我就玩玩。。能rank就感天动地了T Tdazzulay wrote:
这是要转型麻婆的节奏啊。。。
号rinsukir wrote:
mark 等我放假回来再摸
Winek wrote:
From My modding queue!
Normal
00:00:125 (1,2,3,4) - Add normal clap at the end, maybe?sounds not bad
00:18:125 (6) - End of slider , Finishfix
00:25:048 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider, after the reversearrow^
00:33:355 (5) - Add finish^
00:40:740 (4) - Add finish at the start of slider^
00:44:894 (2) - Add finish at the endnice!
00:48:586 (2) - Add finish at reversarrow^
00:53:663 Add a circle there between the "hoofs"not hoofs Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ok it is hoofs , but i tried not to make it so difficult so no
01:36:125 (1) - Spinner must finish on the previous withe tick._.
Hard
Decrease approach rate to 6.well for this circle size i think AR7 is proper enough... keep this
00:00:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These two make one and only one combook
00:03:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^
00:25:048 (2,3) - Make a good distance between them (not distance snap!)well keep this
01:17:201 (4) - Add finish at the end after reversearrowok
01:36:125 (1) - Spinner must finish on previous white tickwait for more comments about this
Insane
General Rules talking about combos on Insane: 7-12. Try to follow it.ok, followed this rule i made some changes
00:48:125 (1) - Distance it from previous note for less confusion!well...that's a trick and i think it is ok anyway
Last spinner end on the previous white tick.red line is also fine keep this
That'S about all, hopes it help.
thank you for your modding laurier sanLaurier wrote:
mod4mod
Normal
00:08:894 (3) - use same form as 00:07:971 (2) - .ok00:10:740 (1) - finish on reversefix
00:20:432 (3,5) - make a curve ? It looks more beautiful np00:24:586 (1,2,3) - if you don't stack those notes. it will be more easier to beginners.made some changes there
00:30:586 (2) - make a curve 00:37:740 (2,3,4) - try this rhythm and follow vocal 00:51:817 (1,2) - center with symmetry ?ok 01:02:894 (1) - add finishfix
01:09:817 (1) - finish on endfix
Hard
00:07:047 (6,1,2) - try this rhythm umm the current one is better i think 00:11:894 (3) - make better blanket fix00:12:586 (4) - this overlap is not good imo please move awayok i change to another way
00:15:817 (4) - move this ok00:22:971 (2,3) - please follow vocal x_xx_x ok
00:27:817 (5) - make better blanket fix00:40:971 (4) - ^^
00:45:125 (2) - ^^
00:46:740 (4) - ^^
00:48:125 (3,4) - make a little curve ? ok01:02:432 (7) - stack on 01:03:355 (2) - ?yes fix this 01:35:894 - add note ok
Insane
00:01:971 (4) - it is better to use same form as 00:00:125 (1) - ok
00:05:663 (4) - ^ use same form as 00:03:817 (1) - ok
00:13:048 (4) - follow 00:12:586 (3) - 's line ?that's what i tried to do ;w; 00:23:548 (4) - remove clap
00:31:971 (3) - stack on 00:31:278 (7) - ?
That's it
thank you AvishayAvishay wrote:
Hey, M4M from my queue
[Normal]
00:28:740 (4) - Wouldn't this slider be too much confusing to beginners? sorry but i am not sure about this either...keep this and wait for more comments
[Hard]
00:01:048 (2,5) - I don't feel those circles are doing their job, they are not giving much to the map, I think it will be better without them.well their job is to help player to folow the rhythm,in normal diff i removed this two notes
00:23:317 (3) - This slider doesn't fit at all in his appearencewhyΣ( ° △ °|||)︴ it fit
01:15:355 (6,1) - They shouldn't stack, it doesn't fit that goodOK made some change there
00:56:663 (2) - Maybe make it the CTRL + G version of 00:54:586 (3) ?look nice
01:04:278 (4) - This doesn't feel like a proper place for the cirlce, try to make it flow more like that:color=#FF8080]like what?_?well it is proper for me[/color]
01:24:586 (1) - Don't stack it with the next slider, it doesn't fitkeep this cuz i think it is ok
01:24:817 (1) - NC starts here and not beforei just follow the vocal...maybe you need 25% playback
[Insane]
00:01:509 (3) - The placement is not that good, try moving it to x:248 y:56umm i think it is ok. keep this first
00:16:740 (8,9,10) - The spacing here is really wrong, no one could guess that there's no beat distance between them, the sliders are long and such spacing does not fit the place in the song, however 00:28:048 (2,3,4,5) - was great, also the parts that are like this in the kiai time fit well toonot really , i just follow the vocal and i feel this part palys well for me. this sapacing are not hard to read either. so i keep this sorry ;w;
00:23:202 (3,4,5) - Same ^^
Good luck!
嗯嗯感谢你的mod和评价 no_guNo_Gu wrote:
M4M
我这边又有import问题估计是artist+title略长.如果往后BAT不给过的话可以考虑把Artist换成Genshiken Cast我也觉的略长,不过有个日本人做了这个我是抄他的。。暂时先这样
没个video么好我去搞
没细查不过你这title大小写怎么弄的。。正常来说Ao ku Yurete Iru应该比较正常抄的
我觉得可以一直用S:C1。默认clap效果不是特别好。顺带S:C1加个无声sliderbody这样么0 0,嗯那就改成这样好了,但是全改成custom1的意见还是先保留。。
[Normal]
00:00:125 (1,2,3,4) - 头上加whislte结尾clap去掉感觉比较好好
00:17:201 (4) - 出的略多我尽量调整下
01:00:125 (2,3) - 有点overlap改了
01:35:894 - spinner这里开始比较合适好
01:39:586 - 加个5%绿线了解
[Hard]
Hard我比较推荐1个downbeat放1个NC
00:01:509 (3,6,3,6) - clap听起来不错
00:10:740 (1) - hard别放1/8了好吧
00:24:586 (1) - 可以离远点嗯
00:25:971 (4) - 稍微再修一修吧。。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1216894虽然我是乱拉的。。调整了下
01:01:971 (6,7) - 实在是不咋好看啊勉强吧。。先这样
01:35:894 (4) - finish 对
[Insane]
00:23:202 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1216899赞
00:41:663 (3,4,5,6) - 弄个好点的图形吧做了正方形
01:03:817 (4,1,2) - 感觉有点。。失误啊上次修改没修干净
Normal和Hard还都算可以把。Insane就没那么干净了。不过勉勉强强还OK吧
好谢谢你的摸rinsukir wrote:
sry for late.
[Normal]
排版不是很好看a(对啊怎么办QvQ教教我呀
00:12:125 (3) - 中间描点出界换了个方向
00:15:355 (1) - 描点出界好办
00:16:278 (2,4,6) - 2弯的4直的可能会好看点 6的弧度可以大一些改了一点,2复制了4
00:21:355 (4) - flow不是很好吧 后面好像还有一些 自己找找(normal居然有flowΣ( ° △ °|||)︴这个不懂
00:24:125 (4) - 遮折返箭头没问题吗..有问题
00:51:817 (1,2) -再扭的对称点啦你居然不服我的最高杰作
01:23:201 (4) - 跟vocal?太难了
01:24:586 (1) - 描点出界你说的队
[Hard]
hp和od高一点好
有些地方连续多个直滑条感觉有点怪 感觉直滑条和弯滑条结合在一起使用会好看点._.
00:10:740 (1) - 音量小一点?特别给他一个我觉得比较蠢
00:11:201 (2) - 有点丑不会啊(我说我不会拉啊
00:34:740 (4) - 滑条尾压长白线不太好吧..还有blanket better 后面我不再提blanket改了,滑条那个还是先keep一下
00:42:355 (2) - 丑善
00:47:201 (1) - 为什么突然拉大间距..因为手滑
00:59:432 - 加个note?太密了
[Insane]
hp+1?目前这个没问题
ds拉大点可能会好玩一些 不过善良点也不是不好(我这是为了送
00:03:817 (1,4) - 丑饶了我吧我不会啊;w;
00:10:740 (4,5,6,7) - insane的串可以拉大点ds目前这个还好
00:17:086 (9) - 最好前后等间距有道理
00:49:278 (4) - 有点丑还行吧。。。
00:54:586 (4) - 跟vocal?原来试过,为了flow放弃了一个音
01:04:163 (1,2) - 太远了吧这个地方失误了。。。上次修改完后没搞好
01:04:740 - 漏音我是这么蠢的人么哼哼,理由见上
01:07:048 (3,4) - 有点丑别老说丑啊T T我也就这水品了
01:32:432 (1) - ^这不是和nike的标致一样挺帅的么>.>
滑条样式少的话我建议你多看点别人的图偷点梗好啊._.(
goodluck~
哇谢谢你的评价和mod Evil_Twilight :3Evil_Twilight wrote:
From my Queue
[General]看起来不错ヾ(´・ω・`)ノ
- Artist填歌手就行了,角色名不需要恩好的我删掉
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/72658 這歌就是填歌手名所以不用擔心- 不用個combo colour嗎哇谢谢你
我幫你簡單弄了一下
顏色我大多都會用跟BG相似的
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,179,255
Combo2 : 180,119,92
Combo3 : 206,255,206
Combo4 : 85,170,255
[Insane]
- 00:01:048 (2) - 如果要包住(1)的話就往左一點吧,00:00:125 (1) - 這個也拉的圓一些没想过包的问题呀,改了一下
- 00:01:971 (4) - 這裡就一小節用一個NC,看起來也乾淨一點是别人叫我这样改的呢。。。我原来就是那样的,先保留一下吧
- 00:05:663 (4) - 同上^
- 00:03:817 (1) - 這slider有點獵奇阿,試試用這樣唄 hao
- 00:09:355 (1) - 把00:07:509 (1,2) - 包的更好对
- 00:13:509 (5) - 往上移一點讓00:12:586 (3,4,5) - 變三角形? 善
- 00:15:355 (2) - 往左邊彎試試,疊到00:14:432 (8) - 不太好看改了下
- 00:26:894 (6) - 頭尾相反不了:3
- 00:28:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 這一串的話我會把00:28:048 (2,3,4) - 弄成三角形,00:28:740 (5) - 因為鼓聲從這裡開始所以我換成了note,00:29:663 (1) - 這個就複製00:30:125 (2) - 顛倒一下虽然是非常好的建议,但我做了一下感觉没有原来好打。。。个人还是备份了一下如果还有人提的话我就立刻改了
- 00:40:740 (1,2) - 音樂在這裡的音調都是往上升的,所以我覺得把slider改成往上會好點抱歉啊不觉得特别必要啊
- 00:48:817 (2) - 跟00:49:048 (3) - 一樣擺在凹陷的地方吧离滑条尾巴太近了我怕误导
- 00:54:586 (4) - 因為你這邊是跟著人聲的,把節奏改成這樣試試 嗯嗯
- 00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - 左移移到中間用成對稱的好看些好的
- 01:03:817 (4,5) - 這裡音調也是往上的,看你要不要改吧现在的蛮好
- 01:18:586 (5) - 頭尾相反,這樣好玩些感觉不错
- 01:32:432 (1) - 移到x:68 y:220弄成三角形,然後加個紅點吧,原本的有點藝術 滑条master!!教我滑条吧吧吧吧
- 01:33:817 (3) - 我會改成note和一個1/2的slider,這樣聽起來比較順不了吧现在的挺好
- 01:35:894 (3) - 右移弄個三角形原来的不是三角形么。。
[Hard]
- 00:01:048 (2,3) - 跟00:02:894 (5,6) - 一樣先上在下? 你後面也都是這樣排的没太大必要啊。。因为要改太多了所以没改_(:зゝ∠)_
- 00:06:817 (x) - 這裡加一顆note,音樂有酷炫的聲音虽然有声音但不是5,6跟的那个音啊呜呜
- 00:07:048 (8) - 這個改成3/4的slider接note,聽起來會比原本順貌似不错
- 00:17:663 (8) - 包住00:16:740 (6) - 的尾巴?好
- 00:20:432 (6) - 用成一個折返對我來好一點感觉不太必要
- 00:26:894 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊不適合用重疊,2移到4上面,3移到1會更適合ok
- 00:37:971 (4) - 左移兩格,擺得更好一點ok
- 00:43:278 (3,4,5) - 試試這樣放哇感觉不错呢
- 01:05:432 (3) - 換個節奏? 漏了鼓聲感覺怪怪的这个的话先保留看看
- 01:35:201 (3) - 換成三顆note試試,順時針擺一個躺著的菱形现在这样的话难度还好,换成note会不会有点难啊
[Normal]
- 00:01:971 (2) - 你是不是忘了加whistle对啊呜呜
- 00:03:817 (3) - 加個NC吧normal的话不必了
- 00:05:663 (4) - 跟前面一樣用對稱的?用了DS所以才会这样
- 00:13:971 (2,3,4) - 我覺得疊兩顆就行了,新手好像對重疊不是很在行再看看._.
- 01:35:201 (4) - 放一個1/2的折返slider吧对!
排版稍微亂了些
到乾淨整潔可能還需要點時間
繼續加油吧
共勉之
thank you for you modding Pandiar-san v(`・ω・´)vPandiar wrote:
happy new year :D
m4m !
[General]uncheckfix! but i keep widscreen support on
- countdowm
- widescreen support
- letterbox
[Insane]
00:11:201 (8) - NCok
00:11:894 (1) - remove NCok
00:11:663 (9) - how about this? or i think it is fun to use same form like 00:08:432 (3,4,5,6)it will be a hard work and current one is also fine so no change_(:зゝ∠)_
00:15:817 (3) - move x168 y120? blanket good, but try to make make triangle 00:15:817 (3,4,7)seems nice!
00:33:355 (1) - ctrl + h ? it is better flowsure
00:35:663 (2) - ctrl + gok
00:42:586 ~ 00:44:317 - i think stream is also goodthis one is also fine:3
00:45:817 (4) - too close.how about stack 00:46:048 (5)ok
00:51:817 (2) - how about this rhythm?[not bad but current one also fit
00:53:663 (8) - move about x256 y164?ok
00:55:278 (5) - more more up?x300 y120?made some other changes there
00:55:509 (1) - this rhyzhm is betteralthough i dont find any differences between current one...fixed it anyway
00:57:355 (1) - spinner is good, but i think it is better flow to 00:58:278's stream because Insane diffok
00:59:201 - how about this? i think it is fitsince vocal starts from red line._. anyway i made some change there
[Hard]
AR-1 ?keep this, i think ar7 for this is fine
OD-1 ?oh someone have asked me to +1 ;w;
00:07:509 (1) - how about this?oh this is someone's suggestion. i did same as you shows before
00:45:125 (2) - start 00:45:355?ummm... this one is ok but i think the currrent one is also fine
00:45:817 (3) - stack 00:46:048 (4)sorry no ._.
[Normal]
00:11:894 (2) - removeok
00:12:817 (3) - ^^
00:16:971 (3) - ^keep
00:17:894 (5) - ^keep since there has lyrics
00:28:740 (4) - maybe it confuse for beginner.try to change slider?ok
01:02:894 (1) - distance errorfix
i heard for the first time but i like song very much!yeah. i am happy to choose a song which everybody like it
and like your Insane XDthank you:3
goooood luck!!
谢谢你的mod和评价 rakuen-sanRakuen wrote:
( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
[Normal]
00:13:048 (1) - Remove NCok
00:14:894 (4) - Don't stack and and NCkeep this..
00:20:432 (3) - Replace this shape with 00:19:048 (1) - and rotate 135*ok
00:21:586 (5) - Make this Ctrl+G and stack 00:21:355 (4) - on 00:21:586 (5) - no
00:24:125 (4) - Avoid overlap with 00:25:048 (6) - fix
00:33:817 (1) - Change to straight slider like 00:34:740 (2) - ok
00:39:355 (1) - Jump?fix
00:44:894 (2) - Move this to X:192 Y:176, stack the tail of 00:45:817 (3) - to 00:43:971 (1) - fix
01:07:048 (2) - This is a little close to 01:05:663 (4) - , move away furtherok
01:10:740 (2) - Put on X:256 Y:132ok
01:14:432 (1,2) - 太多背向flow的note了,试试跟flow多点好的.-.
01:17:894 (1) - Remove this and NC 01:18:125 - ok
01:19:509 (3,4,5) - Hardest part, don't make slider head touch with next sliderchange a bit
01:25:048 - Finishok
01:34:509 (3) - Ctrl+Gok
[Hard]
00:12:817 (4) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:12:586 (3) - on the headsorry i just follow DS
00:13:971 (7) - CtrL+G^
00:15:586 (3,4) - Blanketok
00:15:355 (2) - 1.2x DS here but only 1.0x here 00:15:586 (3) - , make them samesure
00:17:432 (7) - Inconsistency DSfix
00:17:663 (8) - DS too close ^ok
00:20:432 (6,7,8) - Make them same shape, use 00:20:432 (6) - and rotate a biti am sure this is how i did
00:24:586 (1) - Move further and remove NCok
00:25:048 (2) - NC hereok
00:26:894 (1,2) - Swap timing place this is someone's suggestion... keep it
00:27:355 (3,4) - ^
00:29:663 - There should be a note herei am not going to make it too diofficult
00:39:125 - Add a note here stack on 00:38:432 (5) - no, current one is better
00:41:663 (1) - Remove NC, NC at 00:42:355 - or 00:43:509 - ok
00:47:201 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern becoz there's no vocal on 00:47:201 (1) - well actually there is ._.
00:48:125 (3) - NC here and remove NC at 00:49:509 (1) - ummm no
00:52:048 (1) - 1.0xDSsince there is an NC, i think it is ok there
01:03:125 (1,2) - This flow is strange, try Ctrl+G on 01:03:355 (2) - and unstack 01:03:125 (1) - by moving them to right bottom partok
01:13:971 (3) - NC hereok
01:32:201 - A note hereno
[Insane]
00:05:663 (1) - Don't NC hereok
00:16:740 (8) - NC here and remove NC at 00:17:663 (1) - ok
00:19:048 (5) - NC hereok
00:23:432 - Remove clapchanged in a different way
00:26:894 (6) - Ctrl+G and move further + NCcurrent one is ok i think...
00:27:817 (1) - Remove NCok
00:28:971 (6) - NC hereok
00:30:125 - Clapno
00:31:048 (6) - ^no
00:33:817 - Clapno
00:34:740 - ^no, all of them are a trick
00:44:432 (1) - Stack thisnot realy necessary since this is a trick too
00:47:663 (9) - ^^
00:49:855 (6) - Arrange this to straight line (hold shift and move)
00:53:432 (8,9) - Swap timing placeok
00:55:971 (2,1) - Don't stack on head of 00:55:509 (1) - , it's hard to readok
00:59:432 (1) - Flow break, try rotate 00:58:278 (1,2) - by 90* anti-clockwiseok
总结:排列摆放整齐就可以了,太乱玩起来会很怪
292,124,12586,1,12,0:0:0:0:
292,124,12817,2,0,L|201:164,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
220,239,13278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,239,13509,2,0,L|295:267,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
谢谢你的mod喵:3Eggache0 wrote:
From queue
[General]
美观上比第一张进步很多啊 基本就是细节问题了 好
[Normal]
01:16:740 (3,1) - 压上了 这里我倾向于不用做对称 毕竟player看不到 意义不大倒也不是对称。。。压上也是故意的
01:31:509 (3,1) - ^
[Hard]
00:12:586 (3,4,5,6) - 不错啊我直接用代码了try00:20:894 (7) - 弧度太大感觉没什么问题292,124,12586,1,12,0:0:0:0:
292,124,12817,2,0,L|201:164,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
220,239,13278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,239,13509,2,0,L|295:267,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:25:048 (2,3,4) - 这个antijump有点难读……稍微改了下。。。原来挺好的。。。mod了很多遍之后现在完全不一样了
00:26:894 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+G我改了下。。这地方老被人诟病改成原来的版本了
00:33:355 - 这里有个鼓啊 不放东西不知道行不行跟了人声。。。hard还是不想做的太紧
00:45:125 (2,3,4) - 虽然4是跟着ds的 看着还是不美观 挪开点 勉强吧。。
01:01:971 (8,9) - ^好
01:14:894 (3,4,5) - ……我也不知道哪不对劲 但就是不舒服.-.
01:18:125 (2) - 第三个锚点左5grid
强迫症病人你好
[Insane]
Irc moded
01:16:278 (7) - stack to 8ok
好谢谢yomi酱的mod和评价 :3Tsukuyomi wrote:
排列,细节美观问题以后要注意
我觉得你可以用我那个across the destiny里的clap4来代替默认clap试试,不好听就直接全用SC1算了默认clap很违和么那么多人提。。。。你的那个我试了试感觉没那么好啊。。clap的事我再想想
Normal
00:15:355 (1) - 00:16:278 (2) - 尾部whistle
00:19:048 (1) - ^
00:20:432 (1) - 头whistle
00:25:048 (6) - ^
00:30:586 (2) - ^
00:33:817 (1) - 尾whistle
00:44:894 (2) - 没必要finish,可以用whistle代替
00:48:586 (2) - ^
00:51:817 (1,2) - 头尾都点上whistle
这几个音效是跟人声比较重的地方,你自己觉得加着好就加不好就不加
00:46:740 (4) - 间距
01:07:048 (2) - 尾whistle
01:07:740 (4) - 头whistle
01:22:278 (2) - whistle
01:23:201 (4) - 头whistle
这些音效是因为你节奏漏clap所以用来补音效空缺
01:30:586 (2) - 这个和前面的1同时出现的时候不好看,最好改一下,不要靠太近没想到什么特别好的方法。。。
有类似最好也改一下
其他的全改了
Hard
NC一条长白线一次就行我调整下
00:06:586 (5,1,2,3) - 头尾靠太紧,这种地方排的时候就要注意了,无意义的重叠,挤在一起很影响美观没办法按照ds来的。。。
00:07:509 (7,1) - 这样下打着奇怪好
节奏换一下比较好
00:10:740 (1) - NC干嘛我也不知道,可能是别人摸得
00:33:355 空着干嘛没音
00:37:278 (2) - 被前面的滑条压到了一点,这种要避免,没啥意义,insane里hard里这种地方都改一改好
01:03:355 (2) - 没叠好fix
01:11:201 (3) - 没包好^
01:13:509 (2) - clap去掉^
Insane
有些滑条有点丑下次不乱拉了。。。
一开始加点音效,像hardnormal一样ok
00:14:432 (9) - 这里放1/8啊为啥都说这个。。我觉得1/6也挺好还没那么吵,效果差不多
00:43:509 (3,4) - 可以用drum的finish强化ok
00:47:432 加个note好点
00:51:125 这也是没有音的地方我还是想尽量空着,再看看别人怎么说
00:53:894 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个间距看起来random,再看前面的00:52:048 (3,4) - ,1/4的间距大大小小的,统一一下,比如分开的1/4都用1.6,重叠的都0.9这样,hard里面好像也有这种问题这里是有点随便了,我改下
如何不让排列看起来random,注意一下圈和圈之前的距离
包括滑条头尾都要考虑进去。
怎么跳圈和圈之间的距离基本都是这样,滑条身体之间的距离,最好也有一定的量,也不是说处处要做到,但是按这种思路摆,看起来比较整齐,也比随便找个地方下物件要有条理得多也容易想好
打着是可以了,就是insane看着有点不好看。
还有我看你insane里whistle挺多hard里怎么美丽,照insane那么下多好。insane我都是乱糊的。。。自己都不知道怎么加的
唉有点懒逼不说太多了就这样吧
thank you Vicho <3333 I am to lazy to find a video _(:зゝ∠)_ and this really helpsVicho wrote:
Hey! I just found this and I like the mapser :3 also there's something to change in general... the title should be "Aoku Yureteiru (TV Size)"
Also if you want you can use this video http://puu.sh/6kSrW.rar !
Good luck~
/me hug 会长Katsura wrote:
Seems to be rankable, good luck on this map
谢谢sharlo你的mod(`・ω・)Sharlo wrote:
Hi From your PM.[Hard]
我觉得Hard摆得还不错但是节奏跟得不是很好 很多人声没有跟到因为insane主要是跟人声,所以hard就选择性的下了
00:37:278 (2) - 告诉我这个1/4是为何……改了ヾ(´・ω・`)ノ
00:38:432 (5,6,7) -做等边三角形可以吗【强迫症去死咦我是用create polygon来做的啊。。。
00:40:971 (4) - Ctrl+G 后面小跳不要紧好
[Insane]
00:07:509 (1,1) - 没包好居然给你发现了
00:13:048 (5) - 考虑(与00:11:894 (2) - 的头部重叠)ok
这样的话00:13:048 (5,6) - 有点跳 需要调整一下00:13:509 (6) - 的位置
00:26:432 (6) - 觉得可以移到x:272 y:28 更顺手的样子w好啊
00:27:817 (1) - NC?ok
00:28:048 (2,3,4,5) - 纯属觉得摆得不好看 要说改进的话 让slider之间的间距看起来差不多一样【什么?你说我改完后看起来没差?【。什么?改完之后看起来没差 :3
00:43:509 (3,4) - Finish太吵惹……考虑降低音量 ≤30%ok
00:53:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种梗的读图+切指绝壁坑死我的反应啊……不考虑换成circle吗【。我到是觉得颇为有趣w
01:06:125 (5) - Ctrl+Gok
不知道你这个图是准备找BAT了还是还在求mod中反正我还是mod了因为为了要蹭一个M4M……【。没有啊还在找mod。。。只是最近生病没怎么打理了。。。所以恭喜你赚了1kd wwwww
Map Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/139045
请不要客气!!!【滚
hoshisorakiseki wrote:
你好
from pm(不建议群发pm)原来大家介意这个的么。。。下次不会了._.
全局:
没有发现问题
难度:Insane
好善良的insane难度...送一个replay吧:http://puu.sh/6Il4Q.osr
00:10:740 (4,5,6,7,1) - 堆叠起来会显得有点别扭,不过可以忽略嘛你这样说我也没想到什么能解决的方案,先keep好了
其他的都没什么问题
难度:Hard
replay:http://puu.sh/6InOd.osr
00:07:048 (6,7) - 对于hard难度来说,不推荐使用遮挡fix
01:30:355 (3,4) - 修一下blanket这是按照ds来的啊,很难做blanket了
难度:Normal
replay:http://puu.sh/6Iowy.osr
没有发现什么问题
没找到什么大问题,就送一分+testplay吧,加油谢谢你
我的map见签名,可以skip我这周还要上课,晚一点回去帮你摸
谢谢hoshisorakiseki 和 Kamio Misuzu的 modKamio Misuzu wrote:
[General]
奇形怪状的滑条比较多0.0、、、虽然不影响手感,或者说这种滑条有时候会玩起来更合适,但是确实很影响美观度的;w;
Hard难度的做法有点像normal。强制把节奏按拍子划分。虽然没什么问题,但是一模一样的速度从头到尾还是莫名的奇怪。偶尔跟跟vocal也不错啊因为insane跟了vocal,hard还是强制性的往简单做了所以就没有太注重节奏了
[Insane]
00:03:817 (1,4) - 稍微调整一下姿势,像随手拉的,比较丑...这已经是改过得了。。。原来的更丑,暂时没有什么idea
00:16:740 (1,2,3) - 远了低bpm下感觉这个跳没什么问题啊。。不过加了nc来辅助了
00:28:509 (4) - 这一块儿的节奏按我的感觉应该是把它删掉,然后00:28:278 (3) - 拉长至00:28:509 - 没必要啊。。
00:36:355 (3) - 删掉ok
00:39:701 (3) - 比较违和,删掉吧ok
00:51:355 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9) - 这一块儿节奏放慢听一下,这样应该会更好一些这样会漏鼓啊。。
00:55:509 (1) - ctrl+gok
01:03:701 (3) - 删掉改
01:27:817 (3,4,5,6,7) - 对比一下01:30:125 (4,5,6,7,1) - 间距反差有点大。。嗯考虑会改掉吧
[Hard]
00:07:740 (1,2,3) - 红线起手的滑条很别扭,稍微改一下吧还好吧我觉得没什么问题。。。
[Normal]
没啥
OK,以上。主要还是注意排版的美观问题~Good Luck~
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嗯谢谢Soap你的modS o a p wrote:
妈呀 怎么回事 我昨天写这么大段mod跑哪去了?没po出去卧槽?w
[Insane]
00:05:663 (4) - 这个滑条可以调得更好看滑调什么的我没什么idea啊=A=之后有了idea肯定会改掉
00:07:394 - 漏音恩做了些修改
00:26:432 (4,6) - 对齐虽然不知道什么叫对齐。。不过做了写修改
00:29:663 (1) - 也许这样http://puu.sh/6KtMZ.jpgok
00:51:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 突然跟人声是闹哪样因为这一段人声做起来有意思啊,不过通篇大部分都是跟人声
01:24:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 别在下方盘旋这也没什么问题吧。。
美丽美丽 之前摸的没了我就调几个重要的说了吧 别的dif问题都不大 大概_(:з」∠)_
Thank you for your modding and star randomeffect-sanRandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[General][Normal]
- I suggest to add AudioLeadin: 1000~2000sure
[Hard]
- 00:31:509- finish?ok
[Insane]
- 00:29:201 (8) - I prefer the following patternok
00:40:971 (4,5,6) - I got uncomfortable feeling for smoother cursor moving. for example, how about this?seems nice採用\:D/SPOILER448,331,40971,2,0,P|426:364|392:384,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,214,41432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,41663,2,0,L|512:180,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,294,42355,6,0,B|239:270|239:342|95:274,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:almost good!
- 00:18:009 (2,3) - x:399 y:225 (stack correctly)ok
- 01:15:240 (5,6) - avoid overlaphard to avoid it since i blanket it
nice mapping~☆
~Good Luck~
啧啧,uccuRyuuka Toki wrote:
我出现了(你是谁啊?!)由于触盘没带回家,就没玩过osu了,也就忘了你的mod了,红豆泥sorry。。。
我仔细研究了半个小时,结论是我完全给不出任何建议。。。
因为你的技术比我高太多了
给不了MOD真是对不起了
射2星,加油,祝早日rank
谢谢Hollow Wings你的指导Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur reqInsane
- 00:11:894 (2,3) - blanket perfectfix
- 01:15:240 (5,6) - 像这种overlap一点点的我是不太推荐,要么多叠一点要么分开改了一下滑条的形状
- 01:23:894 (9) - 搞成逆时针似乎比较顺手ok
- 其他没啥,不过,,,似乎略显单调?有些地方可以再弄好玩点啊orz呜呜技术不足啊
Hard
- 00:20:894 (7,8) - blanket perfect不太好改啊。。。改了之后ds就被破坏了,先保留
- 00:28:278 (6) - 头上还是加上clap吧我好像加了啊。。。
- 00:29:201 (8) - 可以换成折返2次+note对
- 01:33:355 (4,5) - blanket?ok
挺好的Normal
- 00:07:971 (2,3) - blanket?fix
- 01:19:509 (2,3,4) - 这里似乎可以再排均匀点稍微调了一下orz
- 01:35:894 这里加个beat,转盘后移ok
good luck
Thank you Ami for your mod ~~Ami wrote:
Hello from my queue.
[General] Why no Easy diff? O:normal is easy enough and i am bad on making shape for long sliders @@
offset 133 maybe?125 sounds better for me -.-
[Normal] 01:29:201 (1,2) - looks a bit ugly.my fault, anyway i don't have any idea baout how to fix it so just keep it there ;_;
[Hard] 00:07:740 (1,2) - why on red ticks? It sounds so much better if it is on a white tick :3well i just have different opion @@
00:12:817 (4) - ^fix
00:23:432 (3) - ^nope
00:29:894 (2,5) - ^this one seems fine
00:52:048 (1) - ^seems fine either
01:03:355 (2) - Stack it perfectly with 01:02:432 (9) - , disable grid snapfix
01:08:663 (2) - maybe http://puu.sh/6SvgX.jpg ?current one is also ok
01:22:278 (3) - slider end 2 ticks down and this white point in the middle 1 to make a perfect blanked with 01:21:817 (2) - how you find there exist a blanket.... fix
01:27:355 (9) - stack it perfectlyok
01:30:355 (3,4) - sounds better on white tickno
[Insane] 00:11:894 (2) - sounds better on white tick. :3ok
00:13:509 (6) - Stack it perfectly with 00:13:048 (5) - np
00:17:086 (3,4) - looks ugly, maybe http://puu.sh/6SvM9.jpg ?fix
00:49:278 (4) - at first, this slider looks a bit ugly. and it sounds bad too on red tick http://puu.sh/6SvSA.jpg ?make some change on shape
00:53:201 (7) - Make it 1 grid down .3.ok .3.
01:21:586 (2) - Stack it perfectly with 01:20:894 (7) - fix
Nazi Mod
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