Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost · forum

Tidek

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2013-11-19T00:26:49+00:00

Papysh wrote:
Hard
00:42:526 (7) - You can use slowdown here by control point nice idea, but instead of using control point, i will make close waves
00:44:421 (6,7) - (6) looks like it was too curved fixd
SPOILER
00:58:789 (2) - Add red sliderpoint instead of white or make it like this fixd
SPOILER
01:00:842 (1) - You can make it look better with (3) but its no needed at all ~ yup
02:15:368 (4,5,6,7,8) - This star isnt looking good for me maybe try to increase spacing by a little bit? moved 2 circles a little, hope it looks better now
03:26:105 (5) - Curve with red slider point fixd

Insane
00:44:421 (1) - make it look better a bit, same with the (2) fixd
SPOILER
You can make this slider look really nice with previous one by making something like this (u forgot to add timing line) fixd
SPOILER
01:00:842 (1) - Add 2 red sliderpoints like this same with Screen shot doesnt work :< (2)
SPOILER
[img]01:00:842%20(1)%20-[/img]
01:04:632 (5,6) - ^ Wah, too many curves, im not fan of this
SPOILER
01:05:895 (1,2) - the same
SPOILER
01:22:316 (6) - Curve it for better effect ;w; that actually looks good, fixd
SPOILER
01:33:684 (1) - Curve again xD nope here
SPOILER
Same with (2) if you can

GL

Thanks for slider curve mod : D

Zero__wind

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3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-11-21T14:26:52+00:00

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
Maybe set the preview point somewhere around 03:02:105 - ?

Death
I'm not really good at mdding crazy maps, I often listened and died
00:41:895 - maybe drum finish at points like this
00:46:474 (7,8,9,10,11) - I think you somehow need some whistles for streams like this
00:50:737 (1) - a finish seems missing
00:55:158 (2,3) - you may try exchanging their order, I think that would flow better
00:58:789 (7) - maybe put a circle here and start a 1/2 slider from 00:58:947 -
01:05:895 (4,5) - you may wanna make them further away from each other then you can avoid the small overlap between 01:06:842 (6) - and 01:05:895 (4,5) -
01:10:789 (8) - better replace the drum whistle with a soft finish? I really don't know how you did the hitsounding but referring to 01:03:211 (7) - , I think they should be consistent?
01:21:053 (2) - seems drum finish is greatly in need for this part
01:45:053 (1,2,3) - I think big distance usage would make this special rhythm be more easily read and you'd better add NC on 01:45:447 (4) - or 5 to express the rhythm is different (5/12)
02:07:000 (4) - may try CTRL+G
02:20:105 (6,1) - may avoid the small overlap
02:25:474 (8) - why is this not accelerated like 01:04:632 (1) - ? although yes this may be subjective
02:40:789 (2,3,4,5) - I love to hear the drum claps here, like 01:19:947 (1,2,3,4) -
03:08:421 (9) - why no any hitsound for this? finish ore drum whistle
03:20:737 (1) - prefer a finish here
03:24:605 (6) - maybe (388,184)
03:34:474 (9,10,11,12,13) - a bit sad that these notes are not at the right half of the screen, just thinking that would be a really interesting way to fit the music
03:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - this is real crazy

Insane
01:48:684 (4,5) - maybe too close to each other
02:13:632 (10) - It's better that you not touching the scoreboard with this, may head to the upleft
02:40:789 (8,9,10,11) - I like the drum claps better, in Death, not double finish
03:06:211 (7) - a NC is needed here to tell the difference between 03:05:737 (5,6,7) - cause 6 shares equal distance bttween 5 and 7 but the time gap is different
03:22:316 (1,2) - exchanging NC may work out better. cause a long time gap and short distance is between 1 and 2 actually I wanna do the same to 03:02:105 (1,2) - so I'd also advise that you add another NC on 03:02:421 (2) -
nothing reall more to say but something about hitsounds which I've already mentioned in Death. But hitsounding is something quite subjective thus I'm not gonna repeat them time and time again. It's like that if you wanna change something, like drum sound or whistles, you should do quite the same in all difficulties and in similar parts throughout the song. It's rather a task for yourself instead for any modders. Just hope the map could be further decorated

Hard
01:21:684 (2) - I think you should try the rhythm below ↓ which I think follows the percussion better

SPOILER

01:31:789 (2) - also for this, you may also try replacing this slider with a 1/1 slider which starts from 01:31:632 - . I think that's more intuitive
02:41:895 (9) - a NC is preferrable to hint the long time gap
03:10:947 (4) - better add a NC here to show that 03:10:947 (4,5,6,7) - are not 1/2 beats like the former
03:17:263 (9,1) - I suggest that you move the NC from 1 to 9 and add another NC on 03:18:526 (4) - to divide the different rhythm. 03:17:263 (9) - is actually a downbeat and 03:17:263 (9,1,2,3) - are 1/1 beats and intense 1/2 beats start from 03:18:526 (4) - and that's why I'd put a NC on 4
03:27:368 (10,1) - same point here. move the NC from 1 to 10 and add a NC on 03:28:632 (4) -
03:38:737 (1) - You did it right here

Kurokami's Normal
00:40:632 - you may wanna add some drum finish here, and also points like 00:41:895 - and so on
02:29:263 (1) - finish on head and maybe also finish at 02:29:105 -
03:02:105 (1) - sure to only use whistle on head? not finish
03:04:632 (1) - if whistle, then you should also add whistle to this?
03:20:263 (2) - the finish at end is to weird, cause it's off beat, better remove it
03:30:842 (2) - a really weird sudden single clap
03:33:368 (2) - well, also for this
03:42:526 - I think you should use a much lower volume for the last spinner, about 40% or so

Kin's Easy
This is a really decent diff, smart choice to use normal hitsound, and the zigzag sliders are nice fitting. Good job!

That's all
Good luck

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2013-11-23T01:07:41+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
Maybe set the preview point somewhere around 03:02:105 - ? nah

Death
I'm not really good at mdding crazy maps, I often listened and died
00:41:895 - maybe drum finish at points like this sounds nice, added here and in some similar points
00:46:474 (7,8,9,10,11) - I think you somehow need some whistles for streams like this added whistle on the end of these streams
00:50:737 (1) - a finish seems missing fixd
00:55:158 (2,3) - you may try exchanging their order, I think that would flow better nice, fixd
00:58:789 (7) - maybe put a circle here and start a 1/2 slider from 00:58:947 - it wont go with music then
01:05:895 (4,5) - you may wanna make them further away from each other then you can avoid the small overlap between 01:06:842 (6) - and 01:05:895 (4,5) - fixd
01:10:789 (8) - better replace the drum whistle with a soft finish? I really don't know how you did the hitsounding but referring to 01:03:211 (7) - , I think they should be consistent? right, my bad, fixd
01:21:053 (2) - seems drum finish is greatly in need for this part u are right, added
01:45:053 (1,2,3) - I think big distance usage would make this special rhythm be more easily read and you'd better add NC on 01:45:447 (4) - or 5 to express the rhythm is different (5/12) DS is enough there
02:07:000 (4) - may try CTRL+G nah
02:20:105 (6,1) - may avoid the small overlap fixd
02:25:474 (8) - why is this not accelerated like 01:04:632 (1) - ? although yes this may be subjective That part is more quiet than first part on beginning
02:40:789 (2,3,4,5) - I love to hear the drum claps here, like 01:19:947 (1,2,3,4) - fixd
03:08:421 (9) - why no any hitsound for this? finish ore drum whistle added
03:20:737 (1) - prefer a finish here added
03:24:605 (6) - maybe (388,184) fixd
03:34:474 (9,10,11,12,13) - a bit sad that these notes are not at the right half of the screen, just thinking that would be a really interesting way to fit the music fixd it
03:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - this is real crazy I hope ppl wont be angry for combo breaks at the end of music ;x

Insane
01:48:684 (4,5) - maybe too close to each other fixd
02:13:632 (10) - It's better that you not touching the scoreboard with this, may head to the upleft fixd
02:40:789 (8,9,10,11) - I like the drum claps better, in Death, not double finish fixd
03:06:211 (7) - a NC is needed here to tell the difference between 03:05:737 (5,6,7) - cause 6 shares equal distance bttween 5 and 7 but the time gap is different
03:22:316 (1,2) - exchanging NC may work out better. cause a long time gap and short distance is between 1 and 2[/color] actually I wanna do the same to 03:02:105 (1,2) - so I'd also advise that you add another NC on 03:02:421 (2) - fixd
nothing reall more to say but something about hitsounds which I've already mentioned in Death. But hitsounding is something quite subjective thus I'm not gonna repeat them time and time again. It's like that if you wanna change something, like drum sound or whistles, you should do quite the same in all difficulties and in similar parts throughout the song. It's rather a task for yourself instead for any modders. Just hope the map could be further decorated

Hard
01:21:684 (2) - I think you should try the rhythm below ↓ which I think follows the percussion better i will stai with my rhythm , mainly because its impossible to fix cuz of spacing
SPOILER
01:31:789 (2) - also for this, you may also try replacing this slider with a 1/1 slider which starts from 01:31:632 - . I think that's more intuitive ^
02:41:895 (9) - a NC is preferrable to hint the long time gap fixd
03:10:947 (4) - better add a NC here to show that 03:10:947 (4,5,6,7) - are not 1/2 beats like the former fixd
03:17:263 (9,1) - I suggest that you move the NC from 1 to 9 and add another NC on 03:18:526 (4) - to divide the different rhythm. 03:17:263 (9) - is actually a downbeat and 03:17:263 (9,1,2,3) - are 1/1 beats and intense 1/2 beats start from 03:18:526 (4) - and that's why I'd put a NC on 4
03:27:368 (10,1) - same point here. move the NC from 1 to 10 and add a NC on 03:28:632 (4) - [/color] fixd
03:38:737 (1) - You did it right here

That's all
Good luck

Thanks for mod and thanks for looking at hit sounds : ) will fix hit sounds on insane and hard later cuz its late now ;_;

Kurokami

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4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2013-11-23T14:40:17+00:00

I won't quote it since I used everything. Thanks for the mod.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2013-11-25T04:05:10+00:00

Mod from my Queue

[General]
Tags:
I'm not to sure about some of your tags.
What is "rhythm" and "accuracy" for? Is it the album name or something? These are probably better off removed unless they actually mean something to the song.

Also, remove "Knives" as it is already in the Artist.

I'm assuming "Dark" and "Death" are relating to the type of music this is? (after playing, I realize the song is pretty much about death, though I'm not sure if it should still be used as a tag.. especially since you have a difficulty named 'Death' already.

Background:
It seems like you made this BG or something? If so, is it possible to upload a 1024x768 or 1366x768 version so it doesn't get so blown up?

Widescreen Support:
You should turn this off so you get the blue borders instead of a cut-off image like you currently have, or find someway to expand your storyboard to meet the 16:9 ratio instead of its current 4:3

Storyboard:
SB\Text1 | 33842 | Slow the scrolling speed quite a bit. It gives off a slow eerie feeling at the start, and it's definitely moving too fast. Even half of its speed would be amazing.
SB\Text2 | 38421 | Same idea as above.
SB\Text2 | 180063 | ^

Just generally slowing down the text scroll speed would be much better.

[Kin]

01:22:947 (4,1) - The (1) hits in an odd spot. Try making a circle where the (4) is and starting a slider on 01:23:579 - and end at 01:24:053 - Much like you did at 01:24:842 (2) -
Also note that you can apply this 1.5/1 slider idea plenty of times throughout the song up to 01:41:263 - . I'll leave that up to you if you decide to map it this way or not.
01:50:105 (1) - This is a strange spot to end the slider. The sound you end on is pretty low. Ending it 1/2 later on the louder noise might be better
03:03:684 (2) - Maybe remove this slider and try adding a circle just on 03:04:000 - because of how the 1/1 reverse slider previously was hitting the notes.
03:26:105 (1) - missing finish on the head of this slider?

[Kurokami]

00:52:000 (2,4) - Try blanketing the (4) around where the (2) is? You'll have to do a bit of adjusting if you do this. Otherwise, maybe try taking a different slider shape for the (4)
01:05:263 (4,1) - This might be better changed around as well. First of all, the reverse of (1) doesn't actually hit anything in the song, making this a dead note to reverse from. You could try something like this | http://puu.sh/5sx5S.jpg
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe add some whistles to (1) and (3)? this whole section feels a bit dead without anything.
01:49:474 (2) - hmm any reason not putting the third drum whistle? It would probably sound much better
01:50:737 (4) - you can remove the clap from the end of this slider as well. Kind of random
02:31:789 (1,2,3) - I don't really like how you decided to change the rhythm from how you had it at 02:26:421 (4,1) - I personally think something like this suits the song much better. The stronger the instrument, the more it should be followed if possible.

[Hard]
I had trouble trying to figure out exactly what you were following.. but I'll give this a shot.

01:01:789 (2) - This is mostly an idea. Try moving this back 1/2 onto the red tick, and then adding a circle at 01:01:947 -
02:12:053 (2,3) - Try blanketing the (2) around the (3) a bit more, like what you did at 02:13:316 (6,7) - (well almost, this could use a tiny nudge as well on the tail end)
02:30:053 - how about adding a circle here to catch the drum hit?
02:32:737 (2) - You can do the idea at 01:01:789 - here as well.

[Insane]
Skipping due to my playstyle, which isn't for maps like these. Same goes for Death.

[Death]

01:14:421 (6) - Rotate this 180° so it creates a bit of flow with the triplet you had earlier
02:41:737 (6,7) - stack the (6) on the (7)? You have bigger jumps already, so this won't hurt.

Mod wasn't that great.. Too many sounds in the music at once to know what you guys are mapping too exactly. So good luck.

Like the simple SB though, and the death at the very end

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2013-11-25T15:49:36+00:00

Thanks for the mod.

Difficulty

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 121474
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Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami Kin
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440,112,209895,6,0,P|384:80|328:80,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,320,211158,2,0,P|360:344|304:328,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,352,211789,2,0,P|144:312|136:256,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,212421,6,0,P|128:136|72:156,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,200,213368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,80,213684,2,0,P|360:88|400:128,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,244,214316,2,0,P|388:296|332:316,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,312,214947,22,0,P|128:344|40:328,2,180,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,216211,2,0,P|64:224|24:176,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,217158,1,2,3:0:0:0:
136,152,217474,6,0,P|96:120|80:56,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,32,218105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,218421,1,2,3:0:0:0:
368,192,218737,2,0,L|408:144,2,60,2|2|2,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,219368,2,0,L|208:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,220000,6,0,P|312:344|392:312,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,248,221263,2,0,L|72:288,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,221737,2,0,P|240:168|320:204,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222526,12,0,225053,0:0:0:0:

SB (Write over everything in the .osb.)

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG.png",320,240
 S,0,0,267023,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text1.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,0,32263,32737,0,1
  S,1,32263,35421,0.65
  F,0,34947,35421,1,0
 M,0,32263,35421,420,200,420,160
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text2.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,0,38421,38895,0,1
  S,1,38421,39684,0.65
  F,0,39211,39684,1,0
 M,0,38421,39684,420,300,380,300
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,1,81053,81684,0,0.6
  S,1,81053,101263,1
  F,1,100632,101263,0.6,0
 L,0,1
  F,1,111368,112000,0,1
  S,1,111368,121474,1
  F,1,121474,,1,0
 L,0,1
  F,1,161895,162526,0,1
  S,1,161895,222526,1
  F,1,222526,,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text2.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,0,178632,179263,0,1
  S,1,178632,180842,0.8
  F,0,180211,180842,1,0
 M,0,178632,180842,320,150,320,200
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\break.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,1,101579,,0,1
  S,1,101579,111368,1
  F,1,111289,111368,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\crows.jpg",320,240
 L,0,1
  S,1,180842,223158,1
  F,1,181789,182105,0,1
  F,1,222526,223158,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\crowsglow.png",320,240
 L,182105,64
  F,1,0,316,1,0
  S,1,0,316,1
  F,0,316,632,0
 M,0,182737,222526,320,240
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2013-11-30T09:01:51+00:00

Since Kin wont be able to check out mods for long time, I will take care for it.

Lanturn wrote:
Mod from my Queue

[General]
Tags:
I'm not to sure about some of your tags.
What is "rhythm" and "accuracy" for? Is it the album name or something? These are probably better off removed unless they actually mean something to the song.

Also, remove "Knives" as it is already in the Artist.

I'm assuming "Dark" and "Death" are relating to the type of music this is? (after playing, I realize the song is pretty much about death, though I'm not sure if it should still be used as a tag.. especially since you have a difficulty named 'Death' already.

A lot of maps have weird things in tags, so i dont really see problem here.

Background:
It seems like you made this BG or something? If so, is it possible to upload a 1024x768 or 1366x768 version so it doesn't get so blown up? No, i didnt make that BG. Resolution of BG is rankable (i cant find BG with better resolution anyway)

[Kin]
01:22:947 (4,1) - The (1) hits in an odd spot. Try making a circle where the (4) is and starting a slider on 01:23:579 - and end at 01:24:053 - Much like you did at 01:24:842 (2) - fixd
Also note that you can apply this 1.5/1 slider idea plenty of times throughout the song up to 01:41:263 - . I'll leave that up to you if you decide to map it this way or not.
01:50:105 (1) - This is a strange spot to end the slider. The sound you end on is pretty low. Ending it 1/2 later on the louder noise might be better fixd
03:03:684 (2) - Maybe remove this slider and try adding a circle just on 03:04:000 - because of how the 1/1 reverse slider previously was hitting the notes.
03:26:105 (1) - missing finish on the head of this slider? added
[Hard]
I had trouble trying to figure out exactly what you were following.. but I'll give this a shot.

01:01:789 (2) - This is mostly an idea. Try moving this back 1/2 onto the red tick, and then adding a circle at 01:01:947 - will stay with my rhythm
02:12:053 (2,3) - Try blanketing the (2) around the (3) a bit more, like what you did at 02:13:316 (6,7) - (well almost, this could use a tiny nudge as well on the tail end) fixd
02:30:053 - how about adding a circle here to catch the drum hit? looks good, added
02:32:737 (2) - You can do the idea at 01:01:789 - here as well. ^
[Insane]
Skipping due to my playstyle, which isn't for maps like these. Same goes for Death.

[Death]
01:14:421 (6) - Rotate this 180° so it creates a bit of flow with the triplet you had earlier fixd
02:41:737 (6,7) - stack the (6) on the (7)? You have bigger jumps already, so this won't hurt. nah, it looks fine as it is now
Mod wasn't that great.. Too many sounds in the music at once to know what you guys are mapping too exactly. So good luck.

Like the simple SB though, and the death at the very end

Thanks

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

AllStar12 2013-12-22T02:11:01+00:00

Mod Request Queue! Sorry I took so long to look over your work; lets see here:
Note:(Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes)
(Some will always be misplaced by 1 on either x or y axis due to stack latency but I recommend just doing them anyways)
(Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds)

Guide to coding

[General]

• For some reason it showed that you had LetterBox warnings under AiMod before but now it seems to be gone and no warnings at all. Just to be sure, check the AiMod again.
• Due to a recent rule that was added about custom difficulty names, you need to change the Death Difficulty name to Extra. If you want to be sure about it, contact a BAT member.

[Kin's Easy]

SPOILER

03:02:105 - Have the inherited point's volume lowered to 80%
00:52:632 (3) - move it to 00:52:947?
00:54:526 (2) - Blanketed a bit better by using an imaginary slider and completely overlapping it. Here's a picture of it and the code:
Picture and Code
```
280,112,54526,2,0,B|261:74|278:35|278:35|232:4,2,120,4|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:07:789 (3) - Blanketed a bit better with the previous slider's head. Here's the code:
```
224,112,67789,2,0,B|184:141|180:186|192:216|192:216|164:264,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
```
01:14:737 (2) - Rotated this to -40 degrees and use the y axis to have the slider be symmetrical. After that I rotated back to 38 degree with the same position and have it a 1.00x distance snap. Here's a picture of it and the code:
Picture and the Code
```
192,60,74737,2,0,B|243:34|243:34|271:49|303:48|303:48|311:79|332:103|332:103|319:159,1,240,4|4,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
```
02:06:526 (1) - Blanked a bit better with the previous sliders's tail. Here's the code:
```
436,128,126526,6,0,P|424:72|363:35,2,120,4|4|0,0:2|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:02:105 (1) - Blanketed a bit better by using an imaginary slider and completely overlapping it. Here's a picture of it and the code:
Picture and the Code
```
228,184,182105,6,0,B|165:153|180:86|180:86|132:52,2,160,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
```
03:22:316 (1) - Blanketed somewhat better with the previous slider tail. Here's the code:
```
144,108,202316,6,0,B|122:66|74:58|42:72|42:72|4:36,2,160,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
```
03:40:000 (1) - Since Tidek ended at 03:42:526 on the hard difficulty, have the spinner end at 03:42:526.

Suggestions

None

Test play for Kin's Easy Difficulty
Result
Comments: ] Appropriate slider velocity, HD,CS,AR, and OD, flow of the notes and distance snap. Just a bit of polishing and I believe it should be good to go.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal (2%)

[Kurokami's Normal]

SPOILER

Lower the timing point's volume to 70%.
Lower the first inherited point's volume to 80%.
00:43:158 (1,2,3) - Copied and used it as a imaginary slider from 00:41:895 (3) and rotated it 180 degrees. Then I had Slider 1 completely mimic the path of the imaginary slider and overlap it completely. Since the distance snap for the slider and the circle note had altered I re-positioned circle note 2 and 3. Here's a picture and code for it:
Picture and Code
```
136,200,43158,6,0,P|122:116|196:27,2,180,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,140,44421,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,207,44737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:05:263 (4) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
220,44,65263,2,0,P|157:83|133:132,1,120,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:51:211 - Add notes till 01:51:368 since the creator ended at 01:51:368
02:01:474 (1) - Blanketed a bit better with the next slider's head. Here's the code:
```
320,192,121474,6,0,P|403:165|447:72,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:04:000 (1) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
64,208,124000,6,0,P|103:269|153:294,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:10:316 (3) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
388,296,130316,2,0,P|408:240|398:178,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:21:684 (1) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
368,96,141684,22,0,P|294:22|211:24,2,180,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:36:842 (1) - Fixed where it would be curving along with the previous slider which will look better. Here's the code:
```
96,200,156842,6,0,P|39:137|23:18,2,180
```
03:17:263 (1) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
172,224,197263,6,0,P|83:197|41:115,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:21:053 (4) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
228,280,201053,2,8,P|150:358|68:353,2,180,2|2|4,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:29:895 (1) - Blanketed a bit better with the circle note. Here's the code:
```
440,112,209895,6,0,P|377:75|319:77,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:40:000 (1) - Since Tidek ended at 03:42:526 on the hard difficulty, have the spinner end at 03:42:526.

Suggestions
Use a bit more inherited points just to play around with the volume of the music?
Set the slider velocity down by 10?

Test play for Kurokami's Normal Difficulty
Result
Comments: Nothing much to say here since it has appropriate slider velocity, HD,CS,AR, and OD, flow of the notes and distance snap. Maybe play around with the volume by adding in more inherited points but if not then it's just polishing it and that's it.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Normal ~ Hard (5%)

[Insane]

SPOILER

02:10:316 (6,7,8) - Have this spread out a bit more between the notes.

Suggestions
03:16:158 (9) - Ctrl + G?
03:19:789 (1) - Ctrl + G as well as 03:20:263 (3) ?
Give it a bit more small cross jumps?

Test play for Insane Difficulty
Result
Comments: Nothing much to say which it has appropriate slider velocity, HD,CS,AR, and OD. Some reason I can say that I didn't encounter any major problem in this difficulty. Even though my result was not as great, it's because of other small factors that didn't have to do with the difficulty.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

[Death]

SPOILER

00:45:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part felt a bit off for me, you can still decide to keep it or consider doing something with the circle notes to make it have more of a flow to it. Here's my suggestion if you want to accept it or not; it's a jump that I believe felt better.
Explanation on how I done it, Pictures and Code for it
Explanation
Long story short, after mixing and changing around with the circle notes, I re-positioned circle note 1~5 to a new location. Then I copy and pasted circle notes 1, 3, 6, flipped it horizontally, adjusted the scale down to 0.730x and had it replace the circle notes for 2, 4 , 5 as well as rotating it by around 13~. Finally I reverse selected notes 1~5 to make it something like the pictures I had provided for you to see. As you can see it's a jumping sequence instead of the original which I believe this is better and smoother. The code is also provided below.
```
91,114,45526,5,4,3:3:0:0:
85,321,45684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,225,45842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,38,46000,1,4,3:3:0:0:
39,194,46158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,320,46316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
```
00:59:737 (3) - Re-position it to x: 419 y: 267
01:04:632 (1) - The speed for this long repeated slider seems a bit too fast for it. Have it like what you did here 02:25:474 (8) ?
01:15:842 (6,7,1) - Have the distance snap between these from 0.46x down to 0.35x or 0.40x?
01:34:158 (9) - Re-position it to x: 246 y: 260 s it'll have the same y axis and reflective towards the notes at 01:33:211 (3) .
01:48:842 (6,7,8,9) - The part felt a bit weird for me since the distance snap immediately decreases to 1.00x so maybe have that as a short jump? Maybe it's because 01:48:053 (1,2) threw me off and gave me 100s for the rest.
01:50:974 (3,1,1) - Felt a bit weird to have circle note 1 to be overlapped by the slider, which would probably make people think it's a 1/4. You can keep it or you can consider changing it's position or mess around with those 3 notes. Here's an idea from me that you could try if you want to:
Picture and Code
```
318,151,110974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,151,111053,6,0,P|256:121|190:155,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,111368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4) - Could keep it the way it is but to be sure about this, have the space between them shorten by a bit?
03:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes for here.

Suggestions
01:16:474 (2) - Ctrl + G ?
02:02:421 (4,5,6) - replace those circle notes with 02:02:737 (7,8,9) by copy/paste and then Ctrl + H
02:17:105 (4) - Ctrl + G ?
Give it a bit more cross jumps?

Test play for Death Difficulty
Result
3 Attempts

Comments: Appropriate HD,CS,AR, and OD. The slider velocity seem to be the same as insane though I doubt it's a problem. Can say for sure if you're going for a flow map; was quite challenging as I played it several times to beat it. Not good with having to deal with many stacks and streams because I'm bad at it but it's manageable. I believe there are more things that can be changed to make it even better but I haven't encountered them all.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Expert

If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2013-12-22T08:06:44+00:00

I changed almost everything except SV. It will ruins many pattern done til now and I'm too lazy to go and adjust them again. And 1,2x isn't that high, still acceptable for a normal.
Thanks for the mod. :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 121474
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami Kin
BeatmapID:310894
BeatmapSetID:117450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,111568,120154
2,162095,180785
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
211,315.789473684211,4,2,0,70,1,0
182105,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
222526,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 128,64,64
Combo4 : 0,64,128

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256,184,41263,2,0,L|256:248,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,184,41895,2,0,P|392:240|376:304,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,42526,2,0,L|156:320,1,120
120,208,43158,6,0,P|116:120|176:52,2,180,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,44421,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,208,44737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,324,45053,2,0,P|256:344|200:324,1,120
140,224,45684,6,0,B|80:260|80:260|28:268,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46632,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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zorefire

429 posts

Joined October 2012

zorefire 2013-12-26T06:13:45+00:00

From modding queue
[Storyboard]
Please use fade that transaction in storyboard is nasty :c 02:01:474 -> 02:41:895 yay c:
01:21:053 Why does it fade and stop midway?

[Easy]

Perfecto.
[Kurokami's Normal]
First off that velocity speed too fast

!
Nothing wrong with the mapping i see no flaws except that slider speed.
[Hard]

[Death]

Very nice

! no futher mods needed on that one.
[Insane]

Gluck ranking. My mod was mostly opinions sorry was nothing too mod :c, really good map.

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2013-12-27T01:07:25+00:00

Thanks for mods, I will check all later, dont have too much time now ;x

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-12-28T12:42:26+00:00

From my queue of Normal Mod

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]

BG is 640*480, no better one?
I recommend to make Easy, Normal and Hard end at the same time as Insane, Death.

[Easy]

00:41:895 (2) - stack will make new players confused., also new players can't compare 00:50:421 (2,1) - and 00:52:632 (3,1) - , I recommend you to change these patterns in Easy.
Others are nice.

[Normal]

02:34:158 (5) - move down to x:184, y:332 is better imo.

[Hard]

00:59:421 (3) - why not symmetrical with 2?
01:40:868 (6,7) - ctrl+g?
01:45:053 (3) - the repeat is not snapped.

[Insane]

HP6 is better imo, compare with Death.
00:41:895 (9) - NC?
01:45:053 (9,10) - Unsnap sliders
01:51:368 (4) - finish

[Death]

01:45:184 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:01:474 (2) - NC

That's all.
I can hardly mod a map like this because the mapping style is like 2 years ago...
but also makes a good job.
Good luck.

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2013-12-29T20:14:05+00:00

AllStar12 wrote:
Mod Request Queue! Sorry I took so long to look over your work; lets see here:
Note:(Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes)
(Some will always be misplaced by 1 on either x or y axis due to stack latency but I recommend just doing them anyways)
(Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds)

Guide to coding

[General]
• For some reason it showed that you had LetterBox warnings under AiMod before but now it seems to be gone and no warnings at all. Just to be sure, check the AiMod again.
• Due to a recent rule that was added about custom difficulty names, you need to change the Death Difficulty name to Extra. If you want to be sure about it, contact a BAT member. fixd

[Insane]
SPOILER
02:10:316 (6,7,8) - Have this spread out a bit more between the notes. fixd a little

Suggestions
03:16:158 (9) - Ctrl + G? fixd
03:19:789 (1) - Ctrl + G as well as 03:20:263 (3) ? fixd
Give it a bit more small cross jumps?

Test play for Insane Difficulty
Result
Comments: Nothing much to say which it has appropriate slider velocity, HD,CS,AR, and OD. Some reason I can say that I didn't encounter any major problem in this difficulty. Even though my result was not as great, it's because of other small factors that didn't have to do with the difficulty.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

[Death]
SPOILER
00:45:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part felt a bit off for me, you can still decide to keep it or consider doing something with the circle notes to make it have more of a flow to it. Here's my suggestion if you want to accept it or not; it's a jump that I believe felt better.
Explanation on how I done it, Pictures and Code for it
Explanation
Long story short, after mixing and changing around with the circle notes, I re-positioned circle note 1~5 to a new location. Then I copy and pasted circle notes 1, 3, 6, flipped it horizontally, adjusted the scale down to 0.730x and had it replace the circle notes for 2, 4 , 5 as well as rotating it by around 13~. Finally I reverse selected notes 1~5 to make it something like the pictures I had provided for you to see. As you can see it's a jumping sequence instead of the original which I believe this is better and smoother. The code is also provided below. fixd
91,114,45526,5,4,3:3:0:0:
85,321,45684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,225,45842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,38,46000,1,4,3:3:0:0:
39,194,46158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,320,46316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
00:59:737 (3) - Re-position it to x: 419 y: 267 fixd
01:04:632 (1) - The speed for this long repeated slider seems a bit too fast for it. Have it like what you did here 02:25:474 (8) ? removed that speed up
01:15:842 (6,7,1) - Have the distance snap between these from 0.46x down to 0.35x or 0.40x? I used that DS whole time, no need to change it
01:34:158 (9) - Re-position it to x: 246 y: 260 s it'll have the same y axis and reflective towards the notes at 01:33:211 (3) . fixd
01:48:842 (6,7,8,9) - The part felt a bit weird for me since the distance snap immediately decreases to 1.00x so maybe have that as a short jump? Maybe it's because 01:48:053 (1,2) threw me off and gave me 100s for the rest. fixd that pattern a little
01:50:974 (3,1,1) - Felt a bit weird to have circle note 1 to be overlapped by the slider, which would probably make people think it's a 1/4. You can keep it or you can consider changing it's position or mess around with those 3 notes. Here's an idea from me that you could try if you want to: I will stay with my pattern, but fixed that overlap
Picture and Code
318,151,110974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,151,111053,6,0,P|256:121|190:155,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,111368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4) - Could keep it the way it is but to be sure about this, have the space between them shorten by a bit?
03:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes for here. i will stay with both patterns, because its end of the song

Suggestions
01:16:474 (2) - Ctrl + G ? ok
02:02:421 (4,5,6) - replace those circle notes with 02:02:737 (7,8,9) by copy/paste and then Ctrl + H fixd
02:17:105 (4) - Ctrl + G ? fixd
Give it a bit more cross jumps?

Test play for Death Difficulty
Result
3 Attempts

Comments: Appropriate HD,CS,AR, and OD. The slider velocity seem to be the same as insane though I doubt it's a problem. Can say for sure if you're going for a flow map; was quite challenging as I played it several times to beat it. Not good with having to deal with many stacks and streams because I'm bad at it but it's manageable. I believe there are more things that can be changed to make it even better but I haven't encountered them all.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Expert
If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of Normal Mod

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]
BG is 640*480, no better one? I cant get the same bg with better resolution, but bg size is rankable
I recommend to make Easy, Normal and Hard end at the same time as Insane, Death. Can be hard because of sliders speed

[Hard]
00:59:421 (3) - why not symmetrical with 2? fixd
01:40:868 (6,7) - ctrl+g? Player will have problems to read these 3/2 and 1/2 after that
01:45:053 (3) - the repeat is not snapped.its 1/12

[Insane]
HP6 is better imo, compare with Death. There is almost the same amount of notes (just replaced by repeats) so i dont need to use it
00:41:895 (9) - NC? no need
01:45:053 (9,10) - Unsnap sliders its 1/12
01:51:368 (4) - finish
fixd

[Death]
01:45:184 (2) - Unsnapped circle. its 1/12
02:01:474 (2) - NC
no need

That's all.
I can hardly mod a map like this because the mapping style is like 2 years ago...
but also makes a good job.
Good luck.

Thanks for mods : )

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2013-12-30T07:38:16+00:00

Changed the mentioned part a bit because the second slider was a bit lower, but I won't move that circle lower since its looks better like this.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 121474
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 40632
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami Kin
BeatmapID:310894
BeatmapSetID:117450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,111568,120154
2,162095,180785
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo3 : 128,64,64
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zorefire wrote:
From modding queue
[Storyboard]
Please use fade that transaction in storyboard is nasty :c 02:01:474 -> 02:41:895 yay c: I can, but its supposed to appearing suddenly, although if someone else mention this, I will add a fade-in since there is a nice place to do it. :3
01:21:053 Why does it fade and stop midway? Because its not fadding, just darkening a bit.

Cydros

104 posts

Joined January 2013

Cydros 2014-01-03T23:40:49+00:00

Cool map ranked pls
Graveyard pls

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2014-01-03T23:54:33+00:00

Cydros wrote:
Cool map ranked pls
Graveyard pls

lol'd

Jemmmmy

526 posts

Joined September 2012

Jemmmmy 2014-01-07T08:39:04+00:00

extra

00:51:447 (6) - little bit out of the straight stream
00:55:158 (2,3) - a little overlap. suggest separate them
01:10:947 (1,2,3) -

01:13:000 (3) - why not keep the stream consistently
01:26:421 (2,5) -

01:28:316 (6,8) - little overlap
01:34:947 (2,5) - ^
01:45:053 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm change,use 1/6

01:46:868 - add a note
02:04:789 (3) -

02:34:316 (1) -

03:14:026 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -

the shape of some slider still can be improved, also you can increase the distance in the beginning

insane

01:21:526 (2,3,4,5,6) -

01:22:789 (7,8,9,10,11,12) -

01:47:105 (6,7) -

03:08:421 (1) -

03:26:579 (9,10,11) -

Hard

AR=8
01:44:737 (2) - start at the white line

it's good but little bit massy, suggest to focus on improve slider shape and the distance control

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2014-01-07T17:56:26+00:00

Jemmmmy wrote:
extra
00:51:447 (6) - little bit out of the straight stream fixd
00:55:158 (2,3) - a little overlap. suggest separate them fixd
01:10:947 (1,2,3) - fixd
01:13:000 (3) - why not keep the stream consistently changed slider into stream
01:26:421 (2,5) - fixd
01:28:316 (6,8) - little overlap done
01:34:947 (2,5) - ^ fixd
01:45:053 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm change,use 1/6 how many times i have to say that these beats are on 1/12 tick ;_;
01:46:868 - add a note it will be difficult and very hard to read after that
02:04:789 (3) - No need to do things like this
02:34:316 (1) - fixd
03:14:026 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - fixd
the shape of some slider still can be improved, also you can increase the distance in the beginning

insane
01:21:526 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:22:789 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - fixd
01:47:105 (6,7) - fixd
03:08:421 (1) - fixd a little
03:26:579 (9,10,11) - fixd

Hard
AR=8 No need atm when there are no 1/4 at all
01:44:737 (2) - start at the white line its 3/4 so its fine

it's good but little bit massy, suggest to focus on improve slider shape and the distance control

Thanks, will mod your map soon. Im really tired ;/

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-01-09T17:34:02+00:00

Hello, from my modding queue ~

Kin's Easy

03:12:526 (1) - Finish not needed

Kurodani's Normal

IMO I think hitsounds are poor, maybe change them ?

Hard

03:17:263 (1,2) - Distance Snap ?
03:40:000 (1,2,3) - Some hitsounds here ?

Insane

00:47:421 (7) - Blanket better with 6
01:25:000 (5,6,7) - Distance Snap ?

I'm sorry for this very short mod, you see if I deserve a kudosu or not =/

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2014-01-10T09:26:14+00:00

Kenterz9 wrote:
Hello, from my modding queue ~

Hard
03:17:263 (1,2) - Distance Snap ? fixd a little
03:40:000 (1,2,3) - Some hitsounds here ? added

Insane
00:47:421 (7) - Blanket better with 6 fixd a little (moved red point one grid up)
01:25:000 (5,6,7) - Distance Snap ? its good atm

I'm sorry for this very short mod, you see if I deserve a kudosu or not =/ every mod is good ;p

Thanks

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-01-12T20:06:16+00:00

Kenterz9 wrote:
Kin's Easy
03:12:526 (1) - Finish not needed
we can hear lil cymbal sound

also no change for me sry <_<

Trust

1,240 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-01-25T05:18:13+00:00

hi

[General]

Although I'm no expert with storyboarding I noticed while testing this that some parts exceed a 5.0x load which as mentioned under guidelines on the Ranking Criteria page, is not recommended. Again, not an expert with this so I can't be sure whether or not it's really an issue.
[Kin's Easy]

00:40:632 (1) - I suggest you move this slider to the right to avoid the slight touching caused by stack leniency in gameplay. It would make things look cleaner:

Example

Currently as you play, it looks like this (notice how the stacked note appears to touch the slider):

If you do something like this, the awkward touching can be avoided:

00:52:632 (3,1) - This stack is inconsistent with how you decided to handle stacks throughout this diff as if you look, almost all of the stacks have 1/1 between the objects, and in this case there is 2/1. I would unstack these notes to avoid making beginner players accidentally hit too early.
00:53:263 (1) - Rotate this slider by -4° using the selection centre as your origin to get a proper blanket with 00:52:947 (3).
01:36:526 (1,2,3,4) - This would fit way more nicely with the music if you shifted this entire combo 1/2 earlier to get it starting at the beginning of the stanza cause I was definitely expecting to hit something on 01:36:211 considering how you started the previous two combos on the strong downbeats and didn't for this one.
01:37:474 - If you followed the previous suggestion it would be very fitting to add a note here
01:41:263 - ^
01:44:737 (4,1,2,3,1) - Some of these are questionable sliders for an Easy since how the anchors appear to manipulate slider velocity just barely (which is unrankable to a degree I believe). I'm not going to say remove them outright but BATs may question them.
03:14:737 (1,2) - This one is most likely unrankable.
03:21:053 (2,1) - Can fix the blanket a little here. It's easy to notice while playing that the tail and head pinch together more closely.
03:40:000 (1) - End the spinner on 03:42:526. Every other diff in the mapset either ends or breaks here so consistency would be nice.

Not much else to say. Nice designs.
[Kurokami's Normal]

00:42:526 (4) - Finish on tail sounds good.
00:50:737 - It's kind of strange how you pick up on using whistles much more frequently at this point even though there isn't much noticeable change in the music. Consider adding more whistles up to here.
01:10:947 (1,2,3) - Certainly nice can blanket nicely around (2) I would think.
01:15:053 (3) - This rhythm doesn't fit very well because you continue to play to the beat even though the crashing sounds are most prominent in the music right now. In particular the reverse on the white tick just feels strange. I would remove the reverse on 01:14:105 (2) so you can start 01:14:737 (3) on the strong downbeat and extend it to reverse on the red tick to fit the sounds in the BGM more nicely. Try it out. Essentially a similar rhythm as 01:19:789 (3).

Example

01:15:053 (3) - The finish on the tail isn't emphasizing anything, I would remove it.
01:18:842 (2) - Whistle on the head would sound nice here as you had two in a row with 01:17:579 (4,5) and it sounds a bit empty to just have a whistle on the reverse after hearing the 2 consecutive whistles.
01:26:737 (3) - It would feel more intuitive to have this slider start on either 01:26:105 or 01:26:421 as the way you began this combo isn't consistent with how you'd previously been following the music for this section. A simple fix would be to swap (2) and (3) on the timeline:

Example

If you want to avoid circle spam:

01:27:684 (4) - Whistle here is nice, and repeats something like you did for 01:25:158 (4).
01:28:316 (6,1) - The blanket between these two isn't clean.
01:46:316 (1) - The drum sampleset on this slider is fine but that clap on the tail just sounds very random and doesn't fit at all imo, I would remove it. Also since you used a drum sampleset here, wouldn't it also make sense to have it on 01:43:789 (1)?
02:04:000 (1) - Whistle on the tail
02:04:632 (2) - Remove whistle
02:07:789 (2) - Whistle
01:47:579 (3) - Finish on the head.

As previous modders mentioned, the hitsounding is inconsistent and could use some more attention. Hopefully the few suggestions I left will be helpful. The difficulty itself is quite nice, especially during the kiai. At the very least I hope you use the suggestion highlighted in blue.

A little tired now. If you would like Tidek you can catch me in-game for testplays on your other diffs and I'd be happy to give you some input.
Best of luck~

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-01-25T07:23:42+00:00

Just to answer your SB mod, no its not a problem. It can go higher than 5x but not recommended. The main problem with this, even if you just add a little effect it goes up to 3x so it isn't hard to reach 5x. And you probably noticed the SB itself isn't that bad, kinda similar to some nightcore one.

About the difficulty mod. I used everything you mentioned altough I had some hard time while i changed things. I hope everything looks good (or not). :3 Thanks for the mod.

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,111568,120154
2,162095,180785
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
211,315.789473684211,4,2,0,70,1,0
121474,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
182105,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
222526,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 128,64,64
Combo4 : 0,64,128

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Kin

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Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-02-04T21:13:22+00:00

Trust wrote:
[Kin's Easy]

00:40:632 (1) - I suggest you move this slider to the right to avoid the slight touching caused by stack leniency in gameplay. It would make things look cleaner: fix'd
Example
Currently as you play, it looks like this (notice how the stacked note appears to touch the slider):

If you do something like this, the awkward touching can be avoided:

00:52:632 (3,1) - This stack is inconsistent with how you decided to handle stacks throughout this diff as if you look, almost all of the stacks have 1/1 between the objects, and in this case there is 2/1. I would unstack these notes to avoid making beginner players accidentally hit too early. fix'd
00:53:263 (1) - Rotate this slider by -4° using the selection centre as your origin to get a proper blanket with 00:52:947 (3). lil change was made, also it change a bit there
01:36:526 (1,2,3,4) - This would fit way more nicely with the music if you shifted this entire combo 1/2 earlier to get it starting at the beginning of the stanza cause I was definitely expecting to hit something on 01:36:211 considering how you started the previous two combos on the strong downbeats and didn't for this one. I changed a bit, maybe fix'd
01:37:474 - If you followed the previous suggestion it would be very fitting to add a note here ^
01:41:263 - ^ ^
01:44:737 (4,1,2,3,1) - Some of these are questionable sliders for an Easy since how the anchors appear to manipulate slider velocity just barely (which is unrankable to a degree I believe). I'm not going to say remove them outright but BATs may question them. Well I'll what they say
03:14:737 (1,2) - This one is most likely unrankable. a bit change, will be questionnable like other one
03:21:053 (2,1) - Can fix the blanket a little here. It's easy to notice while playing that the tail and head pinch together more closely. fix'd
03:40:000 (1) - End the spinner on 03:42:526. Every other diff in the mapset either ends or breaks here so consistency would be nice. Since I follow strong cymbal sound, I prefer let it

Not much else to say. Nice designs. thanks !

Thanks for mod ~

i'm late orz
http://puu.sh/6K42e.osu

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2014-02-04T23:55:20+00:00

I need BAT ;(

Kurokami

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4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-02-05T06:33:23+00:00

Thats true. But you probably need m4m with one of them. But its easy to find BAT for a standard only mapset.For Taiko its almost impossible. \o/

Kin

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Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-02-05T13:42:34+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Taiko its almost impossible. \o/

afkafkafkafkafkafkafkafkafkafkafk
I don't know how to catch tBAT

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-02-15T07:08:54+00:00

give me my chocolate back

!!

General
- The actual length and drain time difference was relatively large, with about 65-70% of the song as drain time. The cutoff is actually 80% in order to use the whole mp3. This was more problematic in Insane & Extra mainly because of the last 5 notes. I understand you're highly against deleting those and I think the idea is really cool! Like how it represents a heart pulse dying out. But I wanna ask you to reconsider again because of that rule and how a player might feel sitting through the break intervals.

- Highly recommend you get a larger bg. I think it'd enhance the quality of map overall, even if it's subtle

- cool SB xD! A little thing that bothered me was the sudden appearance of the crack at 01:41:579 (1) - . Perhaps you could find a better transition, like a couple flashes of the crack before it?

- In Kin's Easy, the kiai time is supposed to end at 03:42:526 - like the other diffs

- Hard seems to be missing a combo color. Please keep the combo colors consistent here.

Kin's Easy
01:23:579 (1) - Try adding a repeat

SPOILER

Beginners could get thrown off by the non-downbeat ending of the sliders imo. Plus the bgm synth seems to continue on anyways
01:50:105 (1) - i think a Soft sample set on the tail would sound nice with the hissing sound here

Kurokami's Normal
00:53:263 (1) - Finish on head. i think I hear a small cymbal in the bgm =v=
00:54:842 (3) - Finish on tail? similar feeling as 00:42:526 (4) -
00:59:895 (3,4) - Consider this rhythm instead:

SPOILER

The single note seemed to following something really subtle while the 1/4 rhythm of the music is pretty strong here.
01:03:368 (1) - Finish on head instead? Before, you put finishes on cymbals parts like these i think. I suggest you double check for hitsound consistency
01:05:895 (1) - Finishes on head and reverse, similar reason as above
01:10:947 (1) - ^ on head
01:43:789 (1,2,3) - hmm a pinwheel?

SPOILER

02:06:526 (1) - minor but it'd be nice to fix this with the new slider formula. Also Finish on head
02:15:368 (4) - Delete (5) and add a repeat:

SPOILER

the single (5) was following almost silence. If you were to keep this, it'd be snapped to 1/6 but I think you'd wanna avoid that if possible with easier diffs
02:40:632 (3,4) - again, these are supposed to be snapped to 1/6. Though it'd be nice if you could combine them somehow...

Hard
00:42:526 (7) - this struggle slider is a bit sketchy with its slider path visibility. I suggest you stretch this out to be safe
01:35:421 (4,5) - hmm the current rhythm may be confusing since the 1/4 rhythm in the music is pretty strong here. Try something like this

SPOILER

01:45:053 (3) - unsnapped repeat, I'd just remake it if i were you xD
03:35:579 (3,5) - you can actually swap these

SPOILER

fits the bgm much better imo~

Extra
00:57:053 (7) - NC perhaps
01:45:184 (2) - Unsnapped
very challenging indeed

Insane
01:35:105 (5,6,7) - Like mentioned in Hard, I suggest to create a rhythm that follows the 1/4 in the bgm here
01:45:053 (9) -unsnapped slider end
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could make a neater waterfall of blankets

SPOILER

Sweet map

Some things that kept me from moving further were the drain time issue and some hitsound consistency orz =v= But other than that, it's definitely getting there

Good luck and get this ranked!

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-02-15T09:06:15+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
- cool SB xD! A little thing that bothered me was the sudden appearance of the crack at 01:41:579 (1) - . Perhaps you could find a better transition, like a couple flashes of the crack before it? I think I can do it because of the music. There is a nice few sec to add it. :3 Tho it will take some time. :3

Kurokami's Normal
00:53:263 (1) - Finish on head. i think I hear a small cymbal in the bgm =v= k
00:54:842 (3) - Finish on tail? similar feeling as 00:42:526 (4) - k
00:59:895 (3,4) - Consider this rhythm instead: k
SPOILER
The single note seemed to following something really subtle while the 1/4 rhythm of the music is pretty strong here.
01:03:368 (1) - Finish on head instead? Before, you put finishes on cymbals parts like these i think. I suggest you double check for hitsound consistency Done, and checked the whole map again. I hope everything is covered now. :3
01:05:895 (1) - Finishes on head and reverse, similar reason as above k
01:10:947 (1) - ^ on head k
01:43:789 (1,2,3) - hmm a pinwheel? Yay, new pattern. :3 Thanks for showing it. \o/
SPOILER
02:06:526 (1) - minor but it'd be nice to fix this with the new slider formula. Also Finish on head I'm not sure if its better now. But I added the HS and also added one to the repeat.
02:15:368 (4) - Delete (5) and add a repeat: k
SPOILER
the single (5) was following almost silence. If you were to keep this, it'd be snapped to 1/6 but I think you'd wanna avoid that if possible with easier diffs
02:40:632 (3,4) - again, these are supposed to be snapped to 1/6. Though it'd be nice if you could combine them somehow... k

Thanks for your mod. It helped a lot. :3 Tho the diff itself is still a bit hard. q.q

SPOILER

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96,104,98421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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64,240,99211,2,0,P|104:328|184:344,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,100000,2,0,P|348:312|408:288,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,80,101263,21,6,0:0:0:0:
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216,176,102526,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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356,368,104421,2,0,P|396:312|400:260,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,176,123684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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172,260,129053,6,0,B|116:276|116:276|52:276,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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392,64,150526,2,0,P|384:168|348:236,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,96,151789,6,0,P|260:160|220:192,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,152421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,164,159368,6,0,P|428:112|408:52,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,160316,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,124,160632,2,0,P|136:224|208:316,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,300,161579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,216,161895,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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404,116,188105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,272,195368,2,0,L|404:320,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,312,208316,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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352,192,209579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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200,32,218105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,218421,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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248,192,219368,2,0,L|208:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,220000,6,0,P|312:344|392:312,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221263,12,0,222526,0:0:0:0:

Tidek

1,571 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Tidek 2014-02-16T19:40:20+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
give me my chocolate back !!

Here is your Chocolate <3

SPOILER

LunarSakuya wrote:
General
- The actual length and drain time difference was relatively large, with about 65-70% of the song as drain time. The cutoff is actually 80% in order to use the whole mp3. This was more problematic in Insane & Extra mainly because of the last 5 notes. I understand you're highly against deleting those and I think the idea is really cool! Like how it represents a heart pulse dying out. But I wanna ask you to reconsider again because of that rule and how a player might feel sitting through the break intervals. The main problem between song lenght and draining time is beginning of the song which has 40sec! But its skipable so without beginning its 3:37 song lenght vs 2:51 draining time. Places without notes are reasonable because I cant put any notes here cuz there is no music at all (only long synchs), I think we can make exception here because I mapped every place which is mappable.

- Highly recommend you get a larger bg. I think it'd enhance the quality of map overall, even if it's subtle I really want larger BG, but its impossible to find the same larger one, mainly because that BG is made by some1 who made simfile (stepmania map) for that song and larger version is impossible to find (unless some1 will made similar bg for me).

- In Kin's Easy, the kiai time is supposed to end at 03:42:526 - like the other diffs

- Hard seems to be missing a combo color. Please keep the combo colors consistent here. I used red combo colours for slider speed ups on insane and extra diff (if its necessary, i will add red combo colour to hard diff)

Hard
00:42:526 (7) - this struggle slider is a bit sketchy with its slider path visibility. I suggest you stretch this out to be safe fixd
01:35:421 (4,5) - hmm the current rhythm may be confusing since the 1/4 rhythm in the music is pretty strong here. Try something like this fixd
SPOILER
01:45:053 (3) - unsnapped repeat, I'd just remake it if i were you xD Its 1/12!!! I know its very rarely to use that rhythm, but there FOR SURE is 1/12 rhythm!!!
03:35:579 (3,5) - you can actually swap these
SPOILER
fits the bgm much better imo~ fixd

Extra
00:57:053 (7) - NC perhaps fixd
01:45:184 (2) - Unsnapped look hard
very challenging indeed

Insane
01:35:105 (5,6,7) - Like mentioned in Hard, I suggest to create a rhythm that follows the 1/4 in the bgm here Hmm, actually im following 1/4 rhythm there, but I changed spacing a little to make it more readable
01:45:053 (9) -unsnapped slider end look hard :<
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could make a neater waterfall of blankets looks great! fixd!
SPOILER

Sweet map
Some things that kept me from moving further were the drain time issue and some hitsound consistency orz =v= But other than that, it's definitely getting there Good luck and get this ranked!

Thank u very much <3 I will try to catch you in game, because I have some questions ;_;

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-02-22T08:24:52+00:00

Yes, my internet loaded it. \o/

I almost forgot to change it. q.q Here is changed sb. Paste this to the .osb file in the song's folder.

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG.png",320,240
 S,0,0,267023,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text1.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,0,32263,32737,0,1
  S,1,32263,35421,0.65
  F,0,34947,35421,1,0
 M,0,32263,35421,420,200,420,160
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text2.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,0,38421,38895,0,1
  S,1,38421,39684,0.65
  F,0,39211,39684,1,0
 M,0,38421,39684,420,300,380,300
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,1,81053,81684,0,0.6
  S,1,81053,101263,1
  F,1,100632,101263,0.6,0
 L,0,1
  F,1,111368,112000,0,1
  S,1,111368,121474,1
  F,1,121474,,1,0
 L,0,1
  F,1,161895,162526,0,1
  S,1,161895,222526,1
  F,1,222526,,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text2.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,0,178632,179263,0,1
  S,1,178632,180842,0.8
  F,0,180211,180842,1,0
 M,0,178632,180842,320,150,320,200
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\break.png",320,240
 L,0,1
  F,1,101287,0,1
  S,1,101287,101445,1
  F,1,101445,101524,1,0
 L,101603,2
  F,1,0,79,1,0
  S,1,0,79,1
  F,0,79,158,0
 L,0,1
  F,1,101919,,0,1
  S,1,101919,111368,1
  F,1,111289,111368,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\crows.jpg",320,240
 L,0,1
  S,1,180842,223158,1
  F,1,181789,182105,0,1
  F,1,222526,223158,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\crowsglow.png",320,240
 L,182105,64
  F,1,0,316,1,0
  S,1,0,316,1
  F,0,316,632,0
 M,0,182737,222526,320,240
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-02-24T19:51:18+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
give me my chocolate back !!

General

- In Kin's Easy, the kiai time is supposed to end at 03:42:526 - like the other diffs fix'd

Kin's Easy
01:23:579 (1) - Try adding a repeat
SPOILER
Beginners could get thrown off by the non-downbeat ending of the sliders imo. Plus the bgm synth seems to continue on anyways Fix'd
01:50:105 (1) - i think a Soft sample set on the tail would sound nice with the hissing sound here sound cool, fix'd

!

Thanks for mod \o

Also Tidek poke me when you see I'm late >_<

update : http://puu.sh/794fZ.osu

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Kurokami 2014-03-11T07:24:55+00:00

http://puu.sh/7r8a1.zip

Took me some time to post it but finnaly done. \o/ Write over everything and you should be fine.

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