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kors k - smooooch [Osu|Taiko|OsuMania|CatchTheBeat]

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PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
Joined October 2010
PROGUY
Has the above post been applied to the set?
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Avena

PROGUY wrote:

Has the above post been applied to the set?
Yis sir.
ZHSteven
osu! Alumni
665 posts
Joined July 2009
ZHSteven
Will try to look at it tomorrow too late now(5:00 am here :o )

It will be nice if you can have 1 more normal mod before I check this
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
Joined October 2010
PROGUY

Priti wrote:

PROGUY wrote:

Has the above post been applied to the set?
Yis sir.
Piano'd. :)
Asphyxia
Beatmap Nominator
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
Remapped :3
ZHSteven
osu! Alumni
665 posts
Joined July 2009
ZHSteven
CTB checking comes
  1. 00:20:775 (8,1) - can create a bit movement here? to make this and 00:21:453 (8,1) - this similar distance
  2. 00:22:893 (1,2) - remove hyperdash. this part is not same hyper than previous, no need to hyperdash this.
  3. 00:24:588 - note here and 00:25:012 - delete this note
  4. 00:28:826 (3,4) - small movement here.
  5. 00:28:995 (4,1) - jump here
    1
  6. 00:29:504 (1,2,3,4) - off vocal suddenly... if it is your intention im fine with it, but still 00:29:673 (2) - im feeling like there is a heavy beat inside this slider. maybe you need to think more of the rhythm this part?
  7. 00:32:385 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion
    to create movment at previous 4 and 1, then do a small reverse jump to make it more unique.
  8. 00:37:978 (2,3,4) - reduce thsi jump, to remove the previous hyperdash.(just 2 grids on both side will be ok)
  9. 00:38:826 (6) - reduce the spacing inside this slider will be better.
    1
  10. 00:41:876 (1) - to 00:43:571 (5) - looks pretty nice in editor but very normal in actual play yard. next time I suggest just use 1 line to place stream, that will make life easier.

  11. 00:44:080 - 00:44:165 - note, and please 00:43:910 (7,1) - "jumper" this part.

  13. 00:45:266 (3,5) - stack nicely.
  14. 00:45:775 (6) - center of the jump
  15. 00:45:944 (1) - stack to (3) or (5) (i mean 00:45:605 (5) - ) to remove hyperdash 00:45:944 (1,2) -
  16. 00:46:622 (4,5,6,7,8) - and this..... i can see this pattern in most of the unrank maps, but i think need to discuss a bit about it. plays fun but looks really bad...
  17. 00:52:724 (6,7) - personally i dont like this hyperdash
  18. 00:53:402 (8) - ctrl+G
  19. 00:54:249 (2,4,6) - stack together better
  20. 00:54:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this series of pattern I think, 1,2 make them just jump(means you need to press shift half of the time to catch it), 3.4 make a big white jump, 5,6 make hyperdash. have a try.
    example (if it is not clear, 1,2 use x1.0, 3,4 use x1.4, 5,6 use x1.8)
  21. 00:55:097 (1) - this should be inside the previous increase jump to create better flow
  22. 00:59:165 (7) - i guess you need to use a stand stack jump here. just small jump+hyperdash not able to performing well here.

    i mean, do jump like this. but maybe you need to redesign the jump.

  23. 01:00:521 (1,1) - remove hyperdash. or you may want to reduce 1 reverse of the slider
  24. 01:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - i dont know exactly what you want here.. if you just want a calm slider please make the spacing consistant.
  25. 01:02:215 (1,2,3,4) - god sudden hyerdash.. think twice before use.
  26. 01:13:741 (1) - suggestion
    2 sliders to connect the slider and the note. dont know why you leave it blank here...
  27. 01:40:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dafaq this this pattern is really bad for a rank map. consider change it.
  28. 01:48:317 (1,2,1,2) - please only hyperdash the last 2 slider.

i cannot catch the point of some rhythm... you have some really weird blank and weird squeeze in this map, but whatever it sounds reasonable.



[spec]
I can hardly mod this diff because i really dont like hyperdash spam...but besides that the whole structure of this map is good.
I will try what I can then.

00:25:097 (5) - use a linear pattern will be better. reverse slider hyperdash is really a hard one.
00:31:029 (1,2,3,4) - i will prefer to do an increase here.
00:43:232 (1,2,3,4) - the whole hyerdash especially this i think you need to think twice.
00:58:826 (3,4) - again do a decrease better?
01:01:537 (3,4) - decrease more will be better...
01:03:571 (1,2) - remove hyperdash....
01:10:351 (1,2) - remove hyperdash
01:41:707 (2,3) - remove hyeprdash..
01:46:961 (1,2,3,4) - think twice before use

Sorry I think I am not able to apple it because spec's diff is really out of my hand.. dont know what do other mapper or modder think hyperdash spam map. so I will just leave it here.
Will contact Deif soon
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Avena
Applied most things, thanks for the mod~
Rappu
29 posts
Joined November 2011
Rappu
初Modですよろしくお願いします
TK'S Oni

00:03:402 (10) - 削除

00:05:097 (17) - 削除

00:02:046 (4) - 　d→k

00:06:114 (21) - 削除

00:08:826 (32) - 削除

00:10:521 (39) - 削除

00:14:588 (61) - 削除

00:20:860 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - kdddkkddk→ddd ddddd

00:30:436 (163,164) - 削除

00:30:860 - Add k

00:31:961 - Add d

少しでもお役に立てれば嬉しいです
頑張ってください
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
[General]
  1. Disable LetterboxInBreaks in both CTB diffs. You have no breaks there.
[Deluge]
  1. 00:01:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I wonder why didn't you add a slight dash for every NC there :p
  2. 00:15:690 (2,3,1) - Not really painful to read, but I'd rather avoid consecutive HDashes with different note lenghts (in this case 1/4-1/2 consecutive HDashes).
  3. 00:18:317 (2) - This note is really hard to catch, since you have a HDash and a strong direction change before. Put it closer to (1) please. You might do it with the previous (2) to keep the symmetry.
  4. 00:43:741 (4) - Terrible flow because of this note. The stream afterwards 00:43:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - is really painful to catch, and should be placed on the right side of the screen. You'll need to rearrange some notes, but it's gonna be worth it.
[Overdose]
  1. 00:14:928 (4,5) - Reduce the distance of those notes. After the HDash, it's a real pain in the ass.
  2. 00:46:453 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - What the heck is that? Rearrange that stream to something more simple and easier to read.
  3. 00:52:724 (6,7) - Invert the sliders horizontally, or at least put them closer. The pattern "> <" is a real pain to catch most of the times.
  4. 00:52:724 (6,7,8,1,2) - Add a NC on the 1st note, and remove it from the current (1).
  5. 01:00:521 (1,1) - That 1/8 HDash plays really bad. Better to move that 1/8 slider closer to the other one! A lil dash is acceptable though.
  6. 01:00:860 - The kiai has to start here, and not in the next red line, and finish at 01:02:215 - .
  7. 01:02:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - Probably my favourite part of this diff :3
  8. 01:10:182 (1,2,1) - I like also how you broke the stream here, to follow the melody. Good job!
  9. 01:13:741 (1) - Same as the stream has cool parts, this one is just plain boring. Try to do sth different there more dinamic, instead of a simple slider. Extend it at least until 01:14:249 - .
[]
You can call me back for a recheck when you take a look at this mod.
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Avena
Applied everything, thanks Dave~
Now gotta wait till Spectator replies to the mods ^^
Spectator
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,820 posts
Joined February 2011
Spectator
[Steven]
I can hardly mod this diff because i really dont like hyperdash spam...but besides that the whole structure of this map is good.
I will try what I can then.

00:25:097 (5) - use a linear pattern will be better. reverse slider hyperdash is really a hard one. fixed
00:31:029 (1,2,3,4) - i will prefer to do an increase here. fixed
00:43:232 (1,2,3,4) - the whole hyerdash especially this i think you need to think twice. I thought twice and found a better way, thank you
00:58:826 (3,4) - again do a decrease better? decreased
01:01:537 (3,4) - decrease more will be better... nope, sorry
01:03:571 (1,2) - remove hyperdash.... fixed
01:10:351 (1,2) - remove hyperdash fixed
01:41:707 (2,3) - remove hyeprdash..fixed
01:46:961 (1,2,3,4) - think twice before use ok

Sorry I think I am not able to apple it because spec's diff is really out of my hand.. dont know what do other mapper or modder think hyperdash spam map. so I will just leave it here.
Will contact Deif soon[/quote]

Sorry to disappoint you Steven.. will be back with better map :(



[Deif]
  1. 00:01:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I wonder why didn't you add a slight dash for every NC there :p sorry T.T but I don't want..
  2. 00:15:690 (2,3,1) - Not really painful to read, but I'd rather avoid consecutive HDashes with different note lenghts (in this case 1/4-1/2 consecutive HDashes). fixed
  3. 00:18:317 (2) - This note is really hard to catch, since you have a HDash and a strong direction change before. Put it closer to (1) please. You might do it with the previous (2) to keep the symmetry. fixed
  4. 00:43:741 (4) - Terrible flow because of this note. The stream afterwards 00:43:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - is really painful to catch, and should be placed on the right side of the screen. You'll need to rearrange some notes, but it's gonna be worth it. I just placed 00:43:910 (1,2,3,4,5) on the right side of the screen, and It's much better now :), thank you

nerfed a lot
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Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Avena
Updated with Spec's changes, I'm ready for ya Deif~
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
There you go! (∩｀-´)⊃━☆ﾟ.*･｡ﾟ

Piano post: p/2774405
Sey
1,406 posts
Joined October 2010
Sey
Yay, good luck with your mapset.
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
1,380 posts
Joined July 2011
TKS

Rappu wrote:

初Modですよろしくお願いします
TK'S Oni

00:03:402 (10) - 削除 - 面白みがなくなるのでkept.

00:05:097 (17) - 削除 - ^

00:02:046 (4) - 　d→k - 00:03:571 の kkd より全体的に低いピッチなのでkddです。

00:06:114 (21) - 削除 - kept.

00:08:826 (32) - 削除 - ^

00:10:521 (39) - 削除 - ^

00:14:588 (61) - 削除 - そこを消すと00:11:876 (50) - も消さなければならないし、その必要を感じなかったのでそのまま！

00:20:860 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - kdddkkddk→ddd ddddd - changed to kkddkkkkd

00:30:436 (163,164) - 削除 - done.

00:30:860 - Add k - 次のbigの強調が薄れます。

00:31:961 - Add d - nope.

少しでもお役に立てれば嬉しいです
頑張ってください
thanks for mod!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... Oni%5D.rar
ZHSteven
osu! Alumni
665 posts
Joined July 2009
ZHSteven

Spectator wrote:

Sorry to disappoint you Steven.. will be back with better map :(
nono im not saying this is bad, just i cannot handle it :p
ursa
1,302 posts
Joined April 2010
ursa
I hope this one can be made in time ;w;

Note : *this one is strongly i recommended to change & it would be better if i explained with Irc mod X_X

Spec's Deluge

00:14:080 (1,2,3,1) - - move (3) a little closer to (1)http://puu.sh/6bM5P.jpg
*it because this 00:14:758 (1,2,3) - is a medium jump & chained with long jump on this part 00:15:436 (1)
making the (3) quite fare makes the pattern flow jump suddenly changes & harder to reflex to this part
00:43:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make the stream like this for nicer flow for this part http://puu.sh/6bM8J.jpg


Overdose

*01:40:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be better if it just like this http://puu.sh/6bM1z.jpg or make 01:41:029 (4,5,6) - reverse
the jumps are very trolling ;w;
Nwolf
2,604 posts
Joined September 2012
Nwolf
huh

[TK's Oni]

Map is good already, only one thing disturbing me, just a small suggestion:

00:01:199 (1,6,13) - Change to k, note's higher than everything else (--> (44))
and therefore 00:03:741 (12) - Change to d (--> (37))

[Cdh's Inner Oni]

00:37:639 (1) - Somehow this spinner breaks the flow the map has. Throw notes in here please.


Nice taikos you've got here, good luck^^

EDIT: Mod is way too short to kudo. I wouldn't care if you did though
Asagi Mutsuki
osu!trivium Champion
1,469 posts
Joined February 2013
Asagi Mutsuki

Nwolf wrote:

huh huh

[Cdh's Inner Oni]

00:37:639 (1) - Somehow this spinner breaks the flow the map has. Throw notes in here please. Whatever you say boss
Well thanks!

the code:
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TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
1,380 posts
Joined July 2011
TKS

Nwolf wrote:

huh

[TK's Oni]

Map is good already, only one thing disturbing me, just a small suggestion:

00:01:199 (1,6,13) - Change to k, note's higher than everything else (--> (44))
and therefore 00:03:741 (12) - Change to d (--> (37))

Nice taikos you've got here, good luck^^

EDIT: Mod is way too short to kudo. I wouldn't care if you did though
i kept the my diff.
i think current diff have good flow of the music.
but thanks for mod! :3c
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
Hi
Mod because I like the song :D

[Beginner]
Looks perfect !

[Karia's Standard]
00:36:792 - Mm , add a note ?
I think that's all !

[Zexous' Hyper]
Looks perfect too !

[Asphyxia's Another]
00:27:385 (2) - Is it in the rythm ? o:
Looks fine !:3

[Jenny's Extra]
Perfect too !!


Hi Priti and all Guest mappers !
Sorry if I haven't found a lot of mistakes but I find it perfect !
I think it's ready for bubble!
Hope this will be rank before end of January !
Good luck ! :D
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Secretpipe wrote:

[Karia's Standard]
00:36:792 - Mm , add a note ? Sorry. In this part, I want the same rhythm like 00:39:165 and 00:41:876.
I think that's all !


Hi Priti and all Guest mappers !
Sorry if I haven't found a lot of mistakes but I find it perfect !
I think it's ready for bubble!
Hope this will be rank before end of January !
Good luck ! :D
Thanks for modding~
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Beginner:

00:21:537 (2) - Add whistle? Also Mind NC?
00:39:165 (1) - I hear a symbol sound here. Add a Finish? Also check spacing.
00:52:724 (1) - Add Finish at the end?
01:06:283 - Useless timeline
01:21:876 (1) - Finish at the end.
01:23:910 (3,1,2) - Finish at the head.
01:33:402 (1,3) - ^
01:41:199 (2,1) - I don't think it was a good idea for inconsistent spacing here.
01:47:300 (2) - Start from 01:47:470 to fit the lyric better?

Karia's Standard:

00:44:249 (4) - 클랩 여기는 지우는게 어때요?
00:51:368 (1,2) - 휘슬은 (1) 끝에 넣고 (2)에서는 지우는게 어때요?
00:54:588 (2) - (118,160)이 (1,3) 가운데라서 더 보기 좋을듯요?
00:57:470 (2) - 클랩 대신 휘슬 어때요?
01:27:978 (1) - 시작에 힛사 있으면 좋을듯요
01:34:758 (3) - 시작에 피니시
01:45:605 (3) - 실질적인 피니시 소리는 음악상 01:45:436에 있어서 여기의 피니시는 좀 안어울린듯요
01:51:029 - 스핀 안넣으실 거면 끝의 타임라인들 다 지워주세요

Zexous' Hyper:

-- It's a nice difficulty, but I doubt if this can function as a [Hard] in this mapset.

00:49:504 - Add a note?
00:54:080 (1) - Add Finish.
01:15:775 - Useless Timeline.

Jenny's Extra:

-- ORZ Too hard lol Feels like you've reflected the song nicely.

00:01:537 (2,4,6) - Add Whistle?
00:02:893 (2,5,7) - ^? Music is changing, but keeping the same hitsound isn't that effective imo. Suggesting similar way til 00:11:877.
00:57:554 - Add note?
01:21:029 (5) - Add Whistle at the head. It feels a lack of hit sound in (4,5).
01:38:317 (7,1) - Umm You've got to consider seriously about this jump. Polygon is nice too, but I think you should at least place (7) to (204,153).

Asphyxia's Another:

00:30:012 (2) - Missing Clap.
00:51:368 (1,2,3,4) - I think a slider stream wasn't effective here, since it appears again at 00:54:080 with a better usage. Rather make that pattern as you've done at 00:45:944?
01:02:215 (1,2,3,4) - Mostly in this rhythm, I think 01:02:215 - 01:02:385 - 01:02:470 - 01:02:639 - are appropriate timing to place a note.

Good luck :3
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Avena

Sonnyc wrote:

Beginner:

00:21:537 (2) - Add whistle? Also Mind NC? Okie
00:39:165 (1) - I hear a symbol sound here. Add a Finish? Also check spacing. Oh woops, fixed and added~
00:52:724 (1) - Add Finish at the end? Okie
01:06:283 - Useless timeline Deleted
01:21:876 (1) - Finish at the end. Okie
01:23:910 (3,1,2) - Finish at the head. Okie
01:33:402 (1,3) - ^ Okie
01:41:199 (2,1) - I don't think it was a good idea for inconsistent spacing here. Oh woops, fixed.
01:47:300 (2) - Start from 01:47:470 to fit the lyric better? Nah, doesn't seem right to me.
Thank you for the mod~
Waiting for GDers.
Asphyxia
Beatmap Nominator
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia

Sonnyc wrote:

Asphyxia's Another:

00:30:012 (2) - Missing Clap.
00:51:368 (1,2,3,4) - I think a slider stream wasn't effective here, since it appears again at 00:54:080 with a better usage. Rather make that pattern as you've done at 00:45:944?
01:02:215 (1,2,3,4) - Mostly in this rhythm, I think 01:02:215 - 01:02:385 - 01:02:470 - 01:02:639 - are appropriate timing to place a note.

Good luck :3
K fixed all, thanksie~

http://puu.sh/6mZE7.txt
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Sonnyc wrote:

Karia's Standard:

00:44:249 (4) - 클랩 여기는 지우는게 어때요? 음..넣은것도 뺀것도 다 좋게 들리네요,,이건 한번 생각해봐야겠어요 ㅎ
00:51:368 (1,2) - 휘슬은 (1) 끝에 넣고 (2)에서는 지우는게 어때요? 저한텐 좀 안맞는듯해요..죄송해요 ㅜ
00:54:588 (2) - (118,160)이 (1,3) 가운데라서 더 보기 좋을듯요? fixed
00:57:470 (2) - 클랩 대신 휘슬 어때요? fixed
01:27:978 (1) - 시작에 힛사 있으면 좋을듯요 added the finish
01:34:758 (3) - 시작에 피니시 fixed
01:45:605 (3) - 실질적인 피니시 소리는 음악상 01:45:436에 있어서 여기의 피니시는 좀 안어울린듯요 fixed
01:51:029 - 스핀 안넣으실 거면 끝의 타임라인들 다 지워주세요 fixed


Good luck :3
Thanks for modding~
- Melody
246 posts
Joined December 2012
- Melody
M4M ~ ♥


♥: Must fix
♥: Suggestion


Beginner ;

♥00:17:131 (1) - Move this to : x212 y108 , for better flow
♥00:25:605 (1) - That looks more better like this :
SPOILER
♥01:03:656 (1) - Cut this Spinner to : 01:05:944
♥01:26:622 (3) - Make it like this or another ? :
SPOILER
♥01:33:402 (1) - Move to : x232 y164 , for a better flow & make blanket with 01:34:419 (2)
♥01:48:317 (1) - Add Clap?


Karia's Standard ;

♥00:21:537 (1) - Move this to : x464 y160 , flows better
♥00:57:470 (2) - To : x416 y208


Asphyxia's Another

♥00:37:470 (4) - Maybe stack with 00:36:792 (2) ? :
SPOILER
♥00:43:063 (7) - Stack with 00:42:215 (4)
♥01:05:944 (7) - NC?
♥01:33:402 (1) - This looks more better imo :
SPOILER


Jenny's Extra

♥00:04:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These looks random, make a curve?
♥00:21:537 (1) - Make the sound a little bit lower? It sounds weird imo
♥01:04:249 (5) - Stack with 01:04:419 (6) - because it's only random anywhere
♥01:16:792 (8) - NC and stack with 01:17:131 (1) - Same reason above ^
♥01:27:809 (5) - Stack with 01:27:978 (1) - ^
♥01:21:537 (7) - NC


~That was it. Good Luck ~ ♥
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

- Melody wrote:

M4M ~ ♥


♥: Must fix
♥: Suggestion


Karia's Standard ;

♥00:21:537 (1) - Move this to : x464 y160 , flows better moved (3)'s tail.
♥00:57:470 (2) - To : x416 y208 fixed


~That was it. Good Luck ~ ♥
Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/6n2sn.txt
Asphyxia
Beatmap Nominator
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia

- Melody wrote:

M4M ~ ♥
:|
Asphyxia's Another

♥00:37:470 (4) - Maybe stack with 00:36:792 (2) ? :
SPOILER
That would be inconsistent with the other one so no >:
♥00:43:063 (7) - Stack with 00:42:215 (4) Ok
♥01:05:944 (7) - NC? Uhh, I kind of want to and kind of not want to add a NC there, if some other guy points it out, I will.
♥01:33:402 (1) - This looks more better imo :
SPOILER
It is like that already? o.o

edit; ohh you meant the shape of the slider, well I like how the 01:32:724 (5,1) - forms a beautiful shape so I'd rather not, thanks though!

~That was it. Good Luck ~ ♥
Thanks a lot for your mod!

http://puu.sh/6n4Fr.txt
Zexous
713 posts
Joined July 2012
Zexous

Sonnyc wrote:

Zexous' Hyper:

-- It's a nice difficulty, but I doubt if this can function as a [Hard] in this mapset. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by this?

00:49:504 - Add a note? Ok?
00:54:080 (1) - Add Finish. Done.
01:15:775 - Useless Timeline. Sorry, I was lazy and didn't fix all the TS from the version I carried over from :D Fixed.
Thanks for modding.
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
:3

http://puu.sh/6nTvF.txt
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

- AIMod reports a bunch of errors about inconsistent letterbox in breaks.
- What are all the .wav files in the song folder for? I see that Pew's HD uses Voice_06.wav in the SB, but are the other ones necessary?
- Wish there was a Muzu on the Taiko set. D: Got demolished by TK's Oni when I tried it. T_T

[Beginner]

00:23:910 - I think you should add a note here to maintain continuity, since 00:24:249 (2) - doesn't land on the red tick that the music does.
01:17:809 - Hitsounds are a bit too soft in this section; it's a bit hard to hear the hitnormals.
01:27:978 (1,2) - Shape 2 to blanket 01:30:351 (1) - a bit better, and adjust 1 to match?

[Karia's Standard]

00:14:080 (4) - The last beat is a pretty strong beat; consider removing the repeat and using a note there instead.
00:34:080 (1,2,3) - This combo should either drop the beat on the head of 2 to be consistent with 00:39:165.

There were a couple of long sections of just 1/1 beats that were a bit boring, but otherwise fine. The gap between this and Hyper is pretty harsh though.

[Zexous's Hyper]

00:12:046 (1) - You and Asphyxia should decide whether you want breaks between the note clusters here or not, just to keep it consistent.
00:20:182 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Feel a bit loud.
00:26:622 - This gap is a bit awkward, add a note here? Alternatively: http://puu.sh/6qy78.jpg
00:54:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this section would work better as 3 doublets (instead of 2 triplets)
01:15:775 - End the break here to be consistent with the other diffs? A spinner would work too.
01:17:131 (1) - These notes are a bit quiet.
01:25:266 (1) - I think it would be cool if you slowly made these louder here, since soft 45% is a lot softer than normal 55%, so you have a bit of room to make up.
01:35:436 (4) - This could blanket 01:34:927 (2) - better.

The difficulty gap between this and Standard is pretty harsh; Standard uses 1/2 rarely, while this contains some very tricky 1/4 patterns.

[Asphyxia's Another]

00:12:046 (1) - See note on Zexous's Hyper.
00:20:182 (1) - The volume is quite low before this note, and is quite high on this note and after.
00:26:961 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is a bit awkward. Try something like this? http://puu.sh/6qyEb.jpg
00:51:368 (1,2,3) - Doublets here to be consistent with earlier?
00:57:724 (7) - 1/4 later, to match vocals and be consistent with 01:00:521 (7) - ?
01:15:775 (1,2) - I'd expect these to be slower, not faster. T_T
01:27:300 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Keep the volume here consistent, or at least roughly so. Inaudible notes are unrankable, and streams with inconsistent hitsounding are very awkward to play.
01:38:063 (3) - I think it would play better like this: http://puu.sh/6qyZU.jpg

[Jenny's Extra]

00:26:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The 1/4th jump followed by a 1/6th stack is super tricky. I'd recommend shortening 1 by 1/4, and then using the same pattern as 00:24:927 (4) - for a 3-note 1/6th stack, if you want to keep the 1/6ths. Not too sure about them in general, but I certainly can't stream 270 BPM, even in bursts. xD
01:48:148 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This I think would work much better as a straight stream than this; most players will have to go to editor to figure out the rhythm here, I think, since it's quite difficult to read.

This was...difficult. xD I'm sure some players'll enjoy it though.

[Mapset]

In general, I think the set has a lot of consistency issues between the diffs. The diffs themselves are fine for the most part, but the differences between difficulties are just so major. I think a consensus should be reached on at least the technical points, such as:

- where the map begins (on the red line, 00:11:707, or 00:12:046?)
- where the breaks should go, if any.
- whether the map should end on a spinner like Another/Extra, a spinner like Beginner, or no spinner at all.

The other major issue is the difficulty jump between Hyper and Standard. I think both diffs can be adjusted a bit to close that gap off better.

The styles are quite refreshing to play though. Lemme know once you've corrected these issues.
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Avena

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

- AIMod reports a bunch of errors about inconsistent letterbox in breaks. That's due to the fact that Mania and Taiko aren't allowed to have letterbox and in CtB the letterbox doesn't really fit well due to the ryuuta.
- What are all the .wav files in the song folder for? I see that Pew's HD uses Voice_06.wav in the SB, but are the other ones necessary? I am not sure how he did it, but he set each sample to a note by the file name, take a look at the .osu of his diff.
- Wish there was a Muzu on the Taiko set. D: Got demolished by TK's Oni when I tried it. T_T There used to be one made by Shiro but I removed it after talking to some people who have Taiko knowledge that is better than mine, I will try to see if these were a mistake and if I should put it back.

[Beginner]

00:23:910 - I think you should add a note here to maintain continuity, since 00:24:249 (2) - doesn't land on the red tick that the music does. Fixed
01:17:809 - Hitsounds are a bit too soft in this section; it's a bit hard to hear the hitnormals. Increased the volume.
01:27:978 (1,2) - Shape 2 to blanket 01:30:351 (1) - a bit better, and adjust 1 to match? Reshaped a bit so it covers it better.
Thank you for the mod~
Also, a note to Zexous when he sees this (didn't manage to get him ingame)
Try to have some parts a bit easier to read and try to have a tad bit less 1/4 (Both between sliders and small streams) so it scales better with Standard. Also add a spinner from 01:49:715 - to 01:53:741 - to be consistent with Asphyxia's and Jenny's diffs
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Asphyxia
Beatmap Nominator
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia

Kytoxid wrote:

[Asphyxia's Another]

00:12:046 (1) - See note on Zexous's Hyper. Well, I removed the breaks from my diff.
00:20:182 (1) - The volume is quite low before this note, and is quite high on this note and after. Seems perfectly ok for me though..
00:26:961 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is a bit awkward. Try something like this? http://puu.sh/6qyEb.jpg Agreed.
00:51:368 (1,2,3) - Doublets here to be consistent with earlier? Sure!
00:57:724 (7) - 1/4 later, to match vocals and be consistent with 01:00:521 (7) - ? Yeah done.
01:15:775 (1,2) - I'd expect these to be slower, not faster. T_T Lool well, I think it fits here somehow and I like it. I'll consider slowing them down if someone else says so, but for now I'll leave them as they are.
01:27:300 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Keep the volume here consistent, or at least roughly so. Inaudible notes are unrankable, and streams with inconsistent hitsounding are very awkward to play. I raised the volume up, it should be fine now (5% -> 50%)
01:38:063 (3) - I think it would play better like this: http://puu.sh/6qyZU.jpg Yeah, agreed.
Thanks a lot Kyto for your mod! 8-)
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Kytoxid wrote:

[Karia's Standard]

00:14:080 (4) - The last beat is a pretty strong beat; consider removing the repeat and using a note there instead.
00:34:080 (1,2,3) - This combo should either drop the beat on the head of 2 to be consistent with 00:39:165.

All fixed

There were a couple of long sections of just 1/1 beats that were a bit boring, but otherwise fine. The gap between this and Hyper is pretty harsh though. Made a bit harder my diff.


The other major issue is the difficulty jump between Hyper and Standard. I think both diffs can be adjusted a bit to close that gap off better.

The styles are quite refreshing to play though. Lemme know once you've corrected these issues.
Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/6qHvM.txt
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Jenny

Kytoxid wrote:

[Jenny's Extra]

00:26:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The 1/4th jump followed by a 1/6th stack is super tricky. I'd recommend shortening 1 by 1/4, and then using the same pattern as 00:24:927 (4) - for a 3-note 1/6th stack, if you want to keep the 1/6ths. Not too sure about them in general, but I certainly can't stream 270 BPM, even in bursts. xD - that's not streaming though, that's four notes and is basically played as two 1/6-doublets in a row rather than as a "stream"; I find it fairly doable and intuitive from all the testplayers I have seen (and it's not like this diff was meant for everyone, because then it wouldn't be this hard; not expecting anyone that is not at least ~rank 1500 to be able to do this properly, so that's not really a concern to me here)
01:48:148 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This I think would work much better as a straight stream than this; most players will have to go to editor to figure out the rhythm here, I think, since it's quite difficult to read. - as with previous, I have not had seen the target audience having difficulties with reading this; executing, maybe - reading, no, so I'll likely keep it

This was...difficult. xD I'm sure some players'll enjoy it though. - that's why it's an Extra
or smth
taiko_maniac1811
1,060 posts
Joined December 2010
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as req by Priti :3
and sorry for late mod .w."

Mod
  • [TK'S Oni]
  1. 00:23:741 (125) - d? kat is a bit too loud here imo .w.
  2. 00:29:165 (162) - ^
  3. 01:28:826 (500) - ^

    can't find anything else here .w."
  • [Cdh's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:13:487 (71) - move this to 00:13:656 flows better here imo
  2. 00:18:910 (113) - move this to 00:19:080 ^
  3. 00:25:944 (179) - k? don here plays weird for me .w."
  4. 00:30:012 (213,214) - k d? flows better
  5. 00:33:910 (241) - why no kat .w.? kat plays better here imo
  6. 00:37:809 (274,275) - make a kdd or kkd triplet here? follows music better
  7. 00:59:080 (110,111) - dk? flows better imo
  8. 01:20:266 (231) - move this to 01:20:690 and,
    01:20:860 (235) - move this to 01:21:029 if above is done. Plays better imo
  9. 01:31:876 (62,63) - k d? flows better imo
  10. 01:37:809 (113) - d pls .w. follows drum better

That's all from me
good luck :3
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
1,380 posts
Joined July 2011
TKS

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as req by Priti :3
and sorry for late mod .w."

Mod
  • [TK'S Oni]
  1. 00:23:741 (125) - d? kat is a bit too loud here imo .w. - fixed.
  2. 00:29:165 (162) - ^ - ^
  3. 01:28:826 (500) - ^ - keep it. i dont have the big reason, but i want the few change for 2ndKIAI.

    can't find anything else here .w."


That's all from me
good luck :3
thanks for mod!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... Oni%5D.rar
Asagi Mutsuki
osu!trivium Champion
1,469 posts
Joined February 2013
Asagi Mutsuki
Removed lines=changed hue

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as req by Priti :3
and sorry for late mod .w."

mod
  • [Cdh's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:30:012 (213,214) - k d? flows better zz but i wanted to d k d k all the 1/2 in this part XD
  2. 00:37:809 (274,275) - make a kdd or kkd triplet here? follows music better This part imo doesn't have 1/4, I can't see how it fits the music better orz
  3. 01:37:809 (113) - d pls .w. follows drum better Listen closely, I'm following the melody line kk

That's all from me
good luck :3
Thanks for mod! tl;dr changed most of the stuff
Mismagius
9,239 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
irc mod
00:01 Blue Dragon: anyways
00:01 Priti: sweeg
00:01 Blue Dragon: 00:12:046 (1) - why doesnt this have a finish
00:01 Blue Dragon: and i mean both ends
00:01 Priti: hitsounds were exported so i derped hard
00:01 Blue Dragon: 00:14:758 (1) - ^
00:01 Blue Dragon: but not in the repeat here
00:02 Priti: 00:17:470 (1) - finish on head?
00:02 Blue Dragon: yeah
00:02 Blue Dragon: 00:33:063 (3) - maybe make the point non-red so the map gets some curve sexiness
00:02 Blue Dragon: 00:35:266 (3,4,5,6,7) - the low AR made this a bit confusing for me so it'll probably trick Advanced players, but dunno how you can fix
00:03 Priti: removed it and adjusted the slider
00:03 Blue Dragon: 00:41:029 (2) - http://puu.sh/6x2lM.png do this for great justice
00:03 Blue Dragon: and for great flow
00:04 Priti: 1 sec
00:04 Priti: fixing the triangles somehow
00:04 Blue Dragon: 00:43:232 (1) - this NC isn't really necessary even though there's a big white tick
00:04 Blue Dragon: okay
00:04 Blue Dragon: i'l lwait
00:06 Priti: removed and fixed
00:06 Blue Dragon: kk
00:06 Priti: 01:03:232 (4) - added a whistle
00:06 Priti: justsaying
00:07 Blue Dragon: okay
00:08 Blue Dragon: good diff in general
00:08 Blue Dragon: awesome flow
00:09 Blue Dragon: 01:21:707 (2,3,4,5) - you can replace the entire pattern
00:09 Blue Dragon: so (2) stacks with (5)
00:09 Blue Dragon: and my eyes don't hurt
00:09 Priti: i actually like these overlaps
00:09 Blue Dragon: :(
00:09 Blue Dragon: nice usage of repeat sliders
00:10 Blue Dragon: really liked this
00:10 Blue Dragon: well found nothing else
00:10 Blue Dragon: that's a gg for you
00:10 Priti: huh
00:10 Priti: I did something properly?
00:10 Priti: :D
00:10 Blue Dragon: yeah
00:10 Blue Dragon: i liked this
00:10 Blue Dragon: awesome flow
00:10 Priti: :D

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