WyndII wrote:

Hi!
I have a suggestion:
Storyboard:
00:40:459 : Why not make your bg scroll till then end of kiai
then fade it out with white flashing

Ok, if didn't get (coz i cant explain it well D:)
also if you're gonna try it make a back up of your current osz or osb

I liked the storyboard but I'm not really sure. As I sayid, i'm think about using the opening video too so I'll think about that.
Thanks anyway

deadbeat wrote:

good map. love the skin *star for you*

Alice Margatroid wrote:

Azure
00:03:83 (1) - grid 3 and then make it closer. it's kinda natural here but will look nicer, tidy. Good
00:07:97 (2) - ^ ^
00:35:07 (3) - ^ then recheck spacing with the beats that comes after Ok ;D
00:43:35 (1) - ^ Don't see need to do it here ._.
Look like small detail not important, it's kinda it but... I always prefer neat maps. There's small problems like this that aren't the ones I mentioned but they are the most annoying I think, otherwise it would be too nazi to mention everything..

Noproblem on Rox's... D: you're getting better and better concerning mapping Roxxy~ :3 GOD! You don't know how good it's hearing that from you , Margy Thanks a lot for your mod ^^

WyndII wrote:

oh, i forgot that i downloaded the no video version.. lol sorry ^-^
and I hope this map is going to be ranked soon

satosid wrote:

good map

fartownik wrote:

[Insane]
00:07:035 (1) - Flip horizontal. More elegant.Ok~
00:07:097 (2) - ^ Ok~

Also, I think you should reduce the size of the combobursts as much as you can. I'm actually thinking about taking them off cuz they are too "happy" for this song >__<
Really good job. Thanks

Lissette wrote:

sorry im late >.> college..

Azure's Normal
00:00:073 to 00:13:055 - low the volume (4 ticks)
00:13:097 - low the volume (3 ticks)
00:27:021 - low the volume (2 ticks)
00:33:083 - low the volume (1 ticks)
00:40:045 - normal volume
if you do this, the volume will increase gradually, will sound nice, hope you like my suggestion ^^ I like your idea! Did it :]
00:57:084 (3) - remove? Ok~

Hard and Insane
same suggestion of the volume at the start ^^ Ok~

Nice song, nice map
Star!

Linox wrote:

Nice map!

*stars*

Metroid wrote:

SB - The Created by roxkyuubiforever image is hard to see fade away when the video starts, maybe add a shadow under it so it's visible against the video?

you can easily shave off some of that extra transparency off of that SB image also..

Azure's Normal - Needs a preview point.
Fine to me.

Hard - Needs a preview point.
Fine to me.

Insane - Needs a preview point.
Fine to me.

starred'

Mafiamaster wrote:

1. Change BPM to just 145.00 and resnap on all difficulties. The notes seem late at the moment. Did it!

Azure's Normal~

1. 00:40:454 (1) - Suggestion: Imo, a finish should go at the start of this slider. Also move the Kiai Time here instead of at the end of the spinner. Ok~
2. Add Azure_Kyte to the tags in this difficulty. Oh my god! I almost forgot about that! Thanks!

Hard~

1. 00:40:454 (1) - Same suggestion as Normal. Ok~
   Here's another idea: Maybe even have this note have a Normal Finish sound then switch back to your soft sound after it. If you like this idea, could you do the same for Normal and Insane? Sorry, I didn't really liked this idea >__<
2. 01:05:074 (3) - Check this slider if you changed the BPM to 145.00 1/2 speed checked. Everything fine! o>.

Insane~

1. 00:40:459 (1) - Same suggestion as Normal and Hard. Where the Kiai Time is now is definitely not in the same place as the other two difficulties. Ok~

This is my favorite difficulty~

I like the video... and the maps!!

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my diff, fixed how I'd like it to be.

please don't edit my diff without telling me in future... I'm sooo sorry! I didn't know that I should ask you! D: Don't worry, I won't do this anymore!

tehman wrote:

Star.

Paulo8624 wrote:

[Azure's Normal]
00:07:035 (1,2) - Make 2 end in 08:385 and add a repeat. I don't think so. I like it the way it is, and it's not breaking any guidelines. Changed the first slider a bit though.
00:09:083 (1) - This whole spinner should be silent. Done
00:31:097 (1) - End this slider at 00:32:592 and add a note in 00:32:079. Nah
01:10:086 (3) - Remove the finish from the end of this slider. Done
01:14:017 (4) - ^ Done

Azure_Kyte wrote:

possibly consider making a difficulty specific "difficulty by Azure_Kyte" at the beginning of my diff?

Paulo8624 wrote:

New skin:

http://www.mediafire.com/?g0mjtvnnak0

Good luck with your map \o

S i R i R u wrote:

oops . I'm alredy to DL ~

but forgot to shoot ☆ﾉﾉ until I'm saw your name ^^' //

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Set preview point. Did it~

[Azure's Normal]

it's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~

Tanmak wrote:

Wow~~ Clannad~! I like Clannad,
and this beatmap is awesome, too~



[General]
Suggestion -> Note color is similar:pink and pink, skyblue and skyblue.
So I suggest that change order: pink-skyblue-pink-skyblue?

Starred~~

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize opening, please.) Ow, Ok ^^
File Size: 11,3MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 145,00 - Offset: 735 (Remember to resnap all notes.) Ok~

[Difficulties]

[Azure's Normal]

00:00:073 (1,2) - Unexpected jump. And too hard for the most easier difficulty.
00:07:035 (6) - New combo.
00:28:066 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:31:097 (1) - ^
00:47:007 (5) - New combo.
01:01:035 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

Custom clap volume is too high. Consider to reduce the volume.Really? Ok, then ._.

No major problems found.

[Insane]

Same as "Hard" about custom clap volume. Ok~

01:18:031 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Azure's Normal]

00:00:073 (1,2) - Unexpected jump. And too hard for the most easier difficulty. Whoops, Fixed
00:07:035 (6) - New combo. Fixed
00:28:066 (1) - Remove new combo. Changed
00:31:097 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:47:007 (5) - New combo. Changed
01:01:035 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Probably want to capitalize TV. Ok~
It's recommended that you convert video to .avi. I think flv is better =/
Add Azure_Kyte to all tags. All? O_O Ok >_>

Set background colour to white. Done~

I'd recommend darkening the first hitcolour a smidge, and swapping hitcolours 3 and 4; 2 and 3 look too similar, especialyl when you can only see the rims. Ok~

[Azure's Normal]

The opening storyboard text looks a bit ugly, capitalize Diff, and use the same font as the Created by RoxKyuubi? Sorry, i like the way that is now ;_;

[Hard]

Cool.

[Insane]

00:25:035 - Shift this timing section earlier. I don't really see why, but ok ^^
00:26:018 - Probably can remove this break. Actually, I like to use those breaks on Insanes, to not waste time waiting for the rest of the hitcircles =/
00:44:059 (4) - Turn off grid snap and shift this to make a nicer triangle with 5,6? Actually, it get's better with grid snap turned on. Did it~

Star~

whymeman wrote:

Looking great so far and found no oddities. Bubbled.

Cyclone wrote:

I'm being picky.

-5 ms Fixed offset, timing sections and bookmarks
Get rid of the applause.wav. It doesn't transition quite right, and it certainly doesn't need to be 40 seconds long. Ok
In comboburst-2.png, there's something visible off to the right of her head. You should get rid of that. You are right o.o Fixed~

Ephemeral wrote:

Bubble repair.

peppy wrote:

Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobursts.

peppy also wrote wrote:

Backgrounds/Images should be at a maximum 1024x768 pixels, though 800x600 recommended. Certain SB elements excepted. Combobursts should not be wider than 500px. No images should contain unnecessary transparency.