1. Easy (2,12 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (4,83 stars, 193 notes)
3. Normal (4,11 stars, 147 notes)
4. Roxkyuubi's Alchemy (4,96 stars, 196 notes)

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

My diff :3
[attachment=1:6314d]Nana Kitade - Kesenai Tsumi (TV Size) (Androws) [Roxkyuubi's Alchemy].osu[/attachment:6314d]

Your diff with a few edits, see what you like and what you don't ^^
[attachment=0:6314d]Nana Kitade - Kesenai Tsumi (TV Size) (Androws) [Normal (Edit)].osu[/attachment:6314d]

Yey! \o/

Ps.: Put a warning on the old topic

Leorda wrote:

Hola!

[Easy]
00:00:027 (1) - Move forward to white tick and short this spinner to 00:01:071 ok
00:07:337 (x) - Place note here ok

[Normal]
00:02:780 (1,1,1) - No new combo I don't understand what do you mean with tis? :S To make one combo only with those notes?
00:11:894 (3) - Move 4 grid right ok
[Roxkyuubi's Alchemy]
00:24:046 (2) - Move 2 grid up ok
00:30:881 (5) - Move 3 grid up ok

Nice map!
STAR

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
00:00:027 (spinner) -start it on 00:00:122 and end it on 00:01:261. ok
00:44:552 (2) - change this slider's shape, please. ok xD
00:46:451 (3) - new combo ok
01:02:400 (4) - new combo ok

Normal
00:12:273 (4,5) - whistle on 4th instead on 5th (remove the whistle on 5th) ok
00:18:349 (4,5) - ^ ok

Roxkyuubi's Alchemy
00:12:084 (6,7) - move them 1-2 squares up ok
01:16:640 (spinner) - set hitsounds's volume to 0 for this spinner ok

Hard... I see it's still a Work in Progress... ^^"

the modes you've already done are good for your 1st map! Just 3 last tips:

-Set a bookmark for all modes in 00:39:615
-Add Kiai time on all modes, just like on roxkyuubiforever's mode
-fix hitsound placing and complete Hard

After this, my star is yours ;3

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
Try to find a better audio, maybe you better download a raw episode and get the track from it >_<
Hitsounds are to loud! Reduce volume. I've replaced the old one with the high quality version that Armin gave me.

[Easy]
00:29:362 (5) 2/4 before. ok
01:16:451 (1) 2/4 after. ok

[Normal]
00:07:337 (x) It's a very stupid Break Time. Remove it and place something :3. done ^^
00:15:122 (x) Add a hitcircle here. ok
00:38:856 (4) 2/4 before. I think it sounds well where it is
00:45:691 (6,7) ^. The same
00:46:261 (x) Add a hitcircle here. It doesnt sound good there
00:46:640 (x) ^. ok
01:12:653 (5) 2/4 after. ok
01:17:408 (x) Add a hitcircle here. ok

[Hard]
00:04:868 (x) Another stupid Break Time.
This difficulty isn't complete. I'm working on it ^^

[Roxkyuubi's Alchemy] roxkyuubi will fix this diff ^^
00:04:868 (x) Why you used a Break Time? Is an Insane no?
01:09:995 (x) Add a hitcircle here.
01:10:375 (x) ^.

And that's all I can do for your map! Hope you will ask me again for other maps-modding. I'll leave the star when you fix the map.

Armin wrote:

I found a mp3 with a high quality.
Download it and then do a full submission

New offset: 1746

Adjust the beats, then repost in my queque.

Thank you so much! I have added the new mp3 and adjusted all the beats with the new offset

jericho2442 wrote:

SOFT mod is go

[Easy]
this whole maps combo's need splitting, a easy diff is meant to have small combo's not combos what reach 10+, also what combos there is dont make sence, this must be fixed if you want me to star :/ Fixed!
00:46:556 (1,2) - the way these 2 notes are behind the slider before is very ugly, move these away from under the slider ok
0:55:670 (1) - create this slider a bit better, the way it is right now is very ugly fixed
01:16:556 (1) - this note is horrid to play, it would be better to map a slider from 01:16:746 - to 01:17:125 - ok

[Normal]
00:48:075 (6) - new combo ok ^^

[Hard]
wip I'm working on it ^^

[Roxkyuubi's Alchemy] I think it sounds well, I recently changed the offset and adjusted all the beats, maybe you downloaded the map when it was bad timed, try to update it, please :S Anyways roxkyuubi is who is going to fix this diff. I'll tell him/her
.....something REALLY does not feel right with the timing on this map, infact it feel completely out, get a timing expert to help you, thus i cant really mod it when it sounds so out >_>

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e10's modding !!

[Roxkyuubi's Alchemy] Nice !!
00:12:758 (7,start) Clap?
00:46:081 (9) Move to 00:46:176
00:51:397 (7) Move to 00:51:492
01:10:954 (1) Move to 01:10:859

[Hard]
It's non finish ?? (WIP)

[Normal]
00:15:227 (4-5) Spacing, Too far ~ ok
01:17:505 (?) Add a note ~ ok

You can be use more clap next time ~

[Easy]
00:08:581 (5) New combo ok ^^

[All]
The timing is having some problem.
Can you find someone to check it again ~ I have a new BPM (157'88) and new offset (1720) I've readjusted all the notes

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
On easy mode, the clap sound effects feel a little over-used. Right at the beginning, the first four beats fit fine, as they land on the off beats. With the two sliders afterward, the first should have the clap removed when the ball hits the return arrow, and the second one should only have a clap on the return arrow. And continuing the trend, the the 4 in the same combo as the initial sliders should have no clap, and the rest of the hits really shouldn't have the clap in at all. Fixed

For the next section, you may want to add claps on the second beat of each measure (the second white beat line after the tall ones). I recommend skipping the first measure if you choose to pursue this, though, as it will sound weird initially. So add claps at 00:12:732, 00:14:251, 00:15:770, 00:17:289, etc.

If you go this route, remember to keep the clap timings consistent. During the Kiai timing, the claps just sound weird compared to the previous section compared to my additions or the original line. Try to keep the same pattern going, and it'll sound great. I added claps on all the second beats of each four of them, I think that's what you meant. Anyway the new claps make it sounds better, thanks!

And just a personal thing, the very last slider for the "Darling" feels like it shouldn't bounce back. That last exhaled "gu" doesn't feel like it should be beat, so to speak. With that beat I was trying to make the slider a little bit longer, but I think you're right, that shouldnt be a beat. I think I will silence it and keep the slider

I was saddened that normal mode was missing all the claps in easy, so I felt that I should throw all that out (please add them in! It makes a huge difference). I added them too

[Normal]
As for normal, the beginning slide should end at 00:01:340 so you can go into the guitar hits with ease, and actually be with them instead of being a beat off. Just select all of those combos and use 'j' to slide the beat position over. I don't understand this :S I only get the spinner part.

After that first slider, the combo after that should be hit on 00:06:466, 00:06:846, and 00:07:226 to go with the music. It feels weird just hitting eighth notes there. Fixed

The slider at 00:15:390 is really far away for those fast notes compared to right afterward in the same combo (7 and 8). Fixed

The slider at 01:12:922 is a half-beat too early. Move it to 01:13:112 and halve the length.Fixed

And once again, the final hit on "gu" really doesn't feel like it should be beat, but that's me. I think that, in this case, I will quit the last circle.

I'll get to hard mode later. Kinda late. Need sleep. Hope this helps a bit!

[Edit] Er, hard mode not done yet. I've just made it, but I have to ask a mod to resurrect the map D:

Mafiamaster wrote:

Revived!

Senbon wrote:

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions.

[General]

You have two .osb's. Delete them and full submit. okay
Background image cannot exceed 1024x768 pixels. I'll reduce it
Set a preview time for all the difficulties. They must be at the same time. ok

[Easy]

00:07:416 (3) - Clap. added
00:09:314 (2) - Remove clap. done
00:10:074 (3) - Clap and finish don't sound good together.I removed the clap and kept the finish
00:22:606 (6) - New combo. ok
01:08:935 (2) - Delete. ok
01:09:125 (3) - Move back to where (2) was. done

You need to be consistent with your hit sounds. Have a defined beat in there to get rid of the parts with no hit sounds and eliminate the parts with too much hit sounds. Roxkyuubi's Alchemy shows it. I've to work with that, I don't know very well how to place hitsounds, I'll take a look at the roxkyuubi diff. Also, I was trying to follow the pattern that Garven gave me.

[Normal]

00:23:365 (8) - Sounds pretty bad. Rid the whistles, and I'm pretty sure you don't need a fast slider like that in a Normal. Doesn't sound too right. I made it slower
00:24:884 (1) - Remove new combo. ok
00:25:264 (1) - ^ ok
00:25:644 (1) - ^ ok
00:26:023 (1) - ^ ok
00:26:023 (5) - Add finish. done
01:17:479 (x) - Add note and silence like in Easy. done

Again with the consistency. Roxkyuubi's Alchemy shows it.

[Hard]

00:00:201 (x) - Spinner like the other difficulties? Added
00:10:833 (1) - Add finish. ok
00:11:213 (2) - Remove new combo and line up with (1), as well as the rest of the combo. done
00:12:922 (8) - New combo.done
00:13:871 (12) - Move forward to red tick. ok
00:21:276 (x) - Fill in the blanks. filled!
00:22:795 (4) - Move forward to white tick and add a note before and after it. (Specifically on the red ticks) done
00:25:074 (4) - New combo. done
00:46:530 (9) - New combo. done
01:03:808 (9) - Extend to white tick. done
01:05:137 (3) - Replace with hit circle.ok
01:11:593 (1) - Shorten to white tick.done
01:17:479 (x) - Add note and silence like in Easy.I made the last slider to come back.

Again with the consistency. Roxkyuubi's Alchemy shows it. Also, some of your notes aren't vocally snapped correctly and you leave some blanks with no notes here and there that throws it off. Thanks for the recommendations, I'll try to fix that

[ Roxkyuubi's Alchemy] Roxkyuubi will mod this diff

00:38:175 (1) - Add finish.
01:16:719 (1) - Shorten to red tick.

Astom wrote:

Hi :3

-Usa el mismo kiai time en tus diff. Hecho

Em no veo nada malo con la cancion =o, deverias conseguir mod de algun mat para que te afine algun detalle q no aya visto.

Esop, StaR ;3

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Difficulty spread is currently [E][H][I]. Because of new ranking rules, this difficulty spread is unrankable. Turn [H] (which is your Normal diff) into a [N], and it should be fine.
- Video offset in [Roxkyuubi's Alchemy] is different from the other diffs. Fixed
- I think it's better if you start Kiai Time@00:41:213 instead ok

Easy:

Normal Mod~
01:08:935 (2) - Add another return on this slider done

Normal:
- Normal... it feels more like Hard IMO I reduced its difficulty

Hard, roxkyuubi's Alchemy:
- These two diffs... both their max scores are too similar (only 30,000 points difference)
Here's what I suggest:

- Hard: Increase Circle Size by 1, Decrease Overall Difficulty by 1 I decreased the overall diff by 1 but I kept the same circle size because max score doesnt change and I don't like very small circles D:
- roxkyuubi's Alchemy: Increase HP Drain Rate + Overall Difficulty by 1 I kept the same HP drain rate and increased the overall diff.

This will increase the point gap between the two diffs.

Kecco wrote:

•Roxkyuubi's Alchemy•
00:04:757 (1) - Bad jump.

•Androws• What diff are you talking about? D:
00:03:998 (1) - Bad jump.
00:22:226 (1) - ^
00:29:441 - Add in here a hitcircle with clap? It's just a suggestion, anyway it's more catchy.
00:33:998 (6) - Add a clap.
01:07:795 (1,2) - Fix their position.

All is ok for other diffs~
Nice song~
Good map~
Star~!

H-boy wrote:

Easy
00:26:023 (x) - add note with finish hitsound imo Added

Normal

it's fine,but if you wanna reduce star rating..
i have some suggestions Yes I wanted to, and you helped me a lot, thanks

HP Drain Rate +2 left
Overall Difficult + 3 left

00:01:720(x) - add note done
00:02:099(1) - use a slider end at 00:02:289 and +1 repeat to replace 3 notes (Start:clap End:whistle) done
00:02:859(1) - ^(End:whistle) done
00:03:618(1) - ^(Start:clap End:whistle) done
00:04:568(2) - del note done
00:04:757(1) - use a slider end at 00:05:137 to repalce 3 notes(Start:whistle End:clap) done
00:05:327(2) - add whistle at end done
00:05:897(3) - del note done
00:06:087(4) - add whistle done
00:12:352(4) - del note
00:13:112(6) - use a slider end at 00:13:871 done
00:14:251(x) - add note done
00:14:821(2) - del note done
00:15:390(4) - use a slider end at 00:15:770(add whistle at the begin) done
00:16:720(7) - move to right white line or del it done
00:18:428(4) - del note
00:19:188(6) - use a slider end at 00:19:947 to replace 2 notes done
00:23:175(7) - del note done
00:23:365(7) - use a slider end at 00:23:745 and add whistle at the begin done
00:24:884(2) - use a circle and add clap to repalce slider done
00:25:644(4) - ^ done
00:27:542(4) - del note done
00:27:732(x) - add note done
00:30:011(2) - del note done
00:30:390(4) - move to right white line done
00:30:770(5) - del slider I removed the old but added a new one on 00:30:960 without return
00:30:960(x) - add note with whistle done
00:31:340(x) - add note done
00:32:099(3) - use a circle done
00:32:479(x) - add note with whistle done
00:35:897(1) - use a slider end at 00:36:276 to replace 3 notes done
00:37:795(1) - use a slider end at 00:37:985 to replace 2 notes done
00:46:530(1) - use a slider end at 00:46:720 to replace 2 notes done
00:46:909(3) - use a slider end at 00:47:099 to replace 2 notes done
00:48:049(1) - use a slider end at 00:48:238 to replace 2 notes done
00:48:428(3) - use a slider end at 00:48:618 to replace 2 notes (neednt add whistle at the begin) done
00:56:403(3) - use a slider end at 00:56:783 to replace 2 notes (End:clap) done
00:56:976(5) - use a slider end at 00:57:352 to replace 2 notes (End:whistle) done
01:03:988(5) - use a slider end at 01:05:378(Start:whistle) I think it's not necessary

Hard
00:26:023(x) - add note with finish Added

Roxkyuubi's Alchemy
Nice~

Starrr~