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Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
you can check my mapset for alternative tags, such as nadeko, medusa and the show name written in japanese
also i think the soource should be "Monogatari Season 2" to keep consistent with the ranked mapset
[Easy]
00:08:264 (2) - need a NC here since it is after a spinner
00:16:029 (1) - try a drum clap on the end here, sounds nice imo
00:28:735 (2) - spacing with the previous slider is a bit inconsistent here
00:57:323 (1) - would be cool if you can avoid the partial overlap with 00:58:382 (3), something like this: 01:16:382 (2) - try a drum clap on the repeat here
01:25:205 (1,2,3) - maybe try to center this for a symmetry effect:
[Sonico's Normal]
00:01:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - position this so 00:03:360 (4) is located center screen gives a nice effect in the intro
00:21:676 (4,5,6) - having consecutive notes placed like this is actually quite confusing under this AR; either do a stack on 00:21:676 (4,5) or swap it for a 1/2 slider
00:33:500 (5) - did you forget a NC here? combo is quite long compared to others in this section
01:04:382 (3) - you sure you want to stack it like this? its quite difficult to recognize under this approach rate (00:59:441 (3) on the other hand is fine since there is a clearly visible slider track to follow)
01:22:382 (1) - shouldnt this be a clap? i dont hear a finish in the music here
[Sekai's Hard]
00:05:136 (5) - why not make a W shape by stacking this with 00:01:940 (2)?
00:26:617 (6) - NC should be on this slider judging from the vocal verse
00:33:852 (1,2,3,4) - you can make this combo cleaner by moving 00:34:205 (3) slightly down
00:43:911 (2,4) - the overlap here can be easily avoided if you rotate 00:43:558 (1,2,3) clockwise by 20 degrees or so; also it is more natural to start at 00:43:735 instead of 00:43:558, considering how the music sounds here
00:57:147 (3,4,5) - i would delete the middle circle here to get rid of this triplet, mostly because there are no 1/4s in the music, and stack leniency results in an unpleasing pattern
01:05:617 - add a note here to catch the vocals
01:08:441 (1,2,3) - if you applied 00:57:147 (3,4,5), do it to this for consistency
01:19:382 (5) - blanket properly around 01:19:205 (4)
01:24:147 (4) - missing a finish on start?
01:25:735 - also maybe a note here
it seems you were mostly mapping to the background rhythm, since a majority of the vocal emphasis were skipped over via blanks or long sliders. For a song like this i would advise you to map to the vocals due to their dominance in the music (maybe next time...)
[Insane]
00:01:230 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Garven will be mad at you (combo spam *cough*)
00:16:382 (6) - a drum clap on the start sounds nice
00:18:676 (1) - whistle start? i hear the loud piano sound here
00:28:558 - add a note here to capture the vocals, combined with 00:28:735 (1,2) it plays surprisingly well
00:41:264 (2,3,4) - try a more challenging pattern here instead of stack: 00:53:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could use some whistles here to represent the violin e.g. whistle on the white ticks (try whistle patterns on the streams in the kiai as well, sounds pretty nice to me)
01:13:735 (2,3) - try do a stack here to mirror the stack at 01:12:323 (2,3)
01:26:000 - add a spinner here and end it at 01:29:794 like Normal to cover the outro would be cool (add it on Easy as well, if you wish)
Thats what i've got, rank this soon or else nadeko is gonna hunt you down ><
oh yeah here is a star :3
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
you can check my mapset for alternative tags, such as nadeko, medusa and the show name written in japanese
also i think the soource should be "Monogatari Season 2" to keep consistent with the ranked mapset
[Easy]
00:08:264 (2) - need a NC here since it is after a spinner
00:16:029 (1) - try a drum clap on the end here, sounds nice imo
00:28:735 (2) - spacing with the previous slider is a bit inconsistent here
00:57:323 (1) - would be cool if you can avoid the partial overlap with 00:58:382 (3), something like this: 01:16:382 (2) - try a drum clap on the repeat here
01:25:205 (1,2,3) - maybe try to center this for a symmetry effect:
[Sonico's Normal]
00:01:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - position this so 00:03:360 (4) is located center screen gives a nice effect in the intro
00:21:676 (4,5,6) - having consecutive notes placed like this is actually quite confusing under this AR; either do a stack on 00:21:676 (4,5) or swap it for a 1/2 slider
00:33:500 (5) - did you forget a NC here? combo is quite long compared to others in this section
01:04:382 (3) - you sure you want to stack it like this? its quite difficult to recognize under this approach rate (00:59:441 (3) on the other hand is fine since there is a clearly visible slider track to follow)
01:22:382 (1) - shouldnt this be a clap? i dont hear a finish in the music here
[Sekai's Hard]
00:05:136 (5) - why not make a W shape by stacking this with 00:01:940 (2)?
00:26:617 (6) - NC should be on this slider judging from the vocal verse
00:33:852 (1,2,3,4) - you can make this combo cleaner by moving 00:34:205 (3) slightly down
00:43:911 (2,4) - the overlap here can be easily avoided if you rotate 00:43:558 (1,2,3) clockwise by 20 degrees or so; also it is more natural to start at 00:43:735 instead of 00:43:558, considering how the music sounds here
00:57:147 (3,4,5) - i would delete the middle circle here to get rid of this triplet, mostly because there are no 1/4s in the music, and stack leniency results in an unpleasing pattern
01:05:617 - add a note here to catch the vocals
01:08:441 (1,2,3) - if you applied 00:57:147 (3,4,5), do it to this for consistency
01:19:382 (5) - blanket properly around 01:19:205 (4)
01:24:147 (4) - missing a finish on start?
01:25:735 - also maybe a note here
it seems you were mostly mapping to the background rhythm, since a majority of the vocal emphasis were skipped over via blanks or long sliders. For a song like this i would advise you to map to the vocals due to their dominance in the music (maybe next time...)
[Insane]
00:01:230 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Garven will be mad at you (combo spam *cough*)
00:16:382 (6) - a drum clap on the start sounds nice
00:18:676 (1) - whistle start? i hear the loud piano sound here
00:28:558 - add a note here to capture the vocals, combined with 00:28:735 (1,2) it plays surprisingly well
00:41:264 (2,3,4) - try a more challenging pattern here instead of stack: 00:53:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could use some whistles here to represent the violin e.g. whistle on the white ticks (try whistle patterns on the streams in the kiai as well, sounds pretty nice to me)
01:13:735 (2,3) - try do a stack here to mirror the stack at 01:12:323 (2,3)
01:26:000 - add a spinner here and end it at 01:29:794 like Normal to cover the outro would be cool (add it on Easy as well, if you wish)
Thats what i've got, rank this soon or else nadeko is gonna hunt you down ><
oh yeah here is a star :3
Keep the clap patterns consistent pls, and dun put them everywhere as it doesn't match the song.
