Hi, as requested
wow so many mods 0.0
Unrankable issuesHighly recommend to fixCommon sugestions
GeneralSource inconsistent between diffsI suggest that you rename your soft-hitwhistle file to drum-hitnormal, in this way, you could use both that bass sound and the default sof whistles to decorate the SC:1 parts
Hard00:38:030 (8) - is this whistle intentional?
00:57:718 (1,1) - I think these NCs are unneccessary, better remove them
01:02:405 (4) - I suppose you would need a whistle here? according to your hitsound pattern for previous phrases
01:07:874 (2) - a drum finish would fit its end much better, as there is a kick drum at that point, not a snare drum01:08:343 (1) - I recommend to move this further to the right, it's quite close to 01:07:561 (1,2) - and might mislead some players thinking that it was at 01:08:186 - . and also, it would emphasise the heavy beat better if you put it further away
01:20:218 (2,3) - not a good rhythm here, considering that you're always following the vocal, better use only a circle at 01:20:218 - and start a 1/1 slider from 01:20:530 -
01:47:561 - I think adding a beat here would form a better rhythm
02:06:780 (3,4,5,6) - these stacks are weird to me, I prefer to stack 02:07:093 (4,5) - instead cause they share the same drum
02:13:343 (1) - same as the first part,
better move further away from the former slider, the spacing for this point is even worse. 02:12:874 (2) - shares almost the same distance between the former and the latter slider, while the time gap is different
02:15:218 (4,5,6) - rhythm not fitting vocal, better try the same thing as what I've mentioned at 01:20:218 (2,3) -
02:25:218 (4,5) - ^ and also for the later similar cases
02:29:905 (5) - may CTRL+G
02:30:530 (6,1) - better replace them with one 1/1 slider =.= I think as long as the sliders are parallel with each other, it won't break your pattern
02:32:718 (4,1) - this is a muuuuuch better distance usage than 01:08:343 (1) - and 02:13:343 (1) -
02:53:030 (8) - replace the whistle with clap would make it fit the music better and emphasise better03:02:718 (6,1) - , 03:04:905 (1,2) - plz compare your rhythm pattern between similar vocal phrases and you'll find the problem, I suppose they should really be formed with same rhythm cause the vocal is just correspoinding to each other
03:38:030 (4) - would you try to replace this whistle with clap to form a more powerful hitsounding pattern?
04:09:593 (3) - I prefer to switch the flow from clockwise to anti-clockwise from this point, cause your flow keeps running clockwise for too long 04:01:468 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - . stacks are nice point for switching flow, try something like the pic below, and you'll know how to fix the later notes, it's easy to understand I think
04:32:405 (7) - missing whistle?
04:38:030 (3,4) - I know you're trying to keep a pattern here but I really think it's not good enough for the end, plz use a bigger distance to emphasise better, see the pic below, 2.0x distance between 3 and 4
most problem for this diff is the rhythm for the chorus part, try not switch your rhythm too cassualy between vocal and drums, that really does no good
NormalHP3 AR4 OD3 for basic difficulty setting, after all this is a Normal diff, not a Easyyou can try to use tick rate 2 and then you could add more drum sounds using your custom tick sound
nothing wrong here
That's all
Good luck