1. Hard (4.18 stars, 86 notes)
2. Normal (1.87 stars, 49 notes)

Album Image

1. hmmm good seems good. but offset still wrong

1. 00:17:182 (1) - Delete nc, because RhyThm not changing. considering add NC at Big white tick (it's named Stanza).
2. 00:21:797 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it
3. 00:39:929 (2,1) - Blanket Propely
4. 00:42:896 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it
5. 00:58:390 (4) - Flow is just not good from before.

1. CS4?? WTF
2. 00:19:489 (1) - little bit touched HP bar
   
   Image

   
3. 00:44:874 (3) - why not stack? it's more good. stack with 00:43:555 (1) ?
4. 00:54:764 (2) - Ctrl + G for consistency
5. 01:00:368 (4,5) - DAT JUMP good

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Hi~ Makasih udah M4M!

[General]

1. hmmm good seems good. but offset still wrong
   
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:17:182 (1) - Delete nc, because RhyThm not changing. considering add NC at Big white tick (it's named Stanza). i think no, because an easy/normal diff should have NC under 5, so i decide to divide 6 combos into two pieces of 3 combos
   2. 00:21:797 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it in this diff i use the distance snap 1.3, so it probably your play so you can't catch that beat
   3. 00:39:929 (2,1) - Blanket Propely not a blanket in the first place
   4. 00:42:896 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it i use the distance snap 1.3, so it probably your play so you can't catch that beat
   5. 00:58:390 (4) - Flow is just not good from before. the flow is fine imo
   [Hard]
   
   1. CS4?? WTF WHAT!?
   2. 00:19:489 (1) - little bit touched HP bar thanks for reminding, but i use default skin and it doesn't touch the HP bar
      
      Image

      
   3. 00:44:874 (3) - why not stack? it's more good. stack with 00:43:555 (1)? no, no reason to do so
   4. 00:54:764 (2) - Ctrl + G for consistency ok and i change the flow a bit
   5. 01:00:368 (4,5) - DAT JUMP good YES!?

huehuehue
Good luck~

1. offset is correct? I suggest 14150~14160
2. Tags suggetion
   PALETTE SOUNDS
3. You may remove "Display epliepsy warning". your SB is not too attacked eyes.

1. 01:01:687 (1,1,1,1) - this consecutive spinners are not good. it looks like negligence
2. 01:09:599 (1,1) - for beginner, it's too difficult because of too short time between spinner and note

1. 00:17:511 (2) - move to x:216 y:188 (stack correctly)
2. 00:31:028 (2) - I prefer to delete

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. offset is correct? I suggest 14150~14160 thanks. i change the offset into 14155
2. Tags suggetion
   PALETTE SOUNDS added. i know it was label records of raujika
3. You may remove "Display epliepsy warning". your SB is not too attacked eyes. i thought every SB should put on "Display epilepsy warning" lol, well if you say so, i'll remove that warning in my map

[Normal]

1. 01:01:687 (1,1,1,1) - this consecutive spinners are not good. it looks like negligence ok. changes into a single long spinner
2. 01:09:599 (1,1) - for beginner, it's too difficult because of too short time between spinner and note deleted

[Hard]

1. 00:17:511 (2) - move to x:216 y:188 (stack correctly) i hope now stack correctly
2. 00:31:028 (2) - I prefer to delete i guess no, you still can hear piano sound a bit if you hear carefully

That's a good taste of you to choose Naujika's sound thanks~
~Good Luck~

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\01.png",320,240
 F,0,1357,1687,0,1
 S,0,1357,72236,1.099097
 F,0,1687,14214,1
 F,0,14214,19489,1,0
 F,0,19489,,0
 F,0,59050,61687,0,1
 F,0,61687,,1
 F,0,61852,,0
 F,0,61852,72236,0,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Konachan.com - 90831 sample.jpg",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.625
 F,0,0,968,1
 F,0,968,1627,1,0
 F,0,61627,61792,0,1
 F,0,61792,77451,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 S,0,14154,,1.075
 F,0,14154,19429,0,1
 F,0,19429,58990,1
 F,0,58990,61792,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\03.png",436,322
 F,0,3605,6242,0,1
 F,0,6242,8880,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\02.png",478,372
 F,0,6242,8880,0,1
 F,0,8880,11517,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Setsurei wrote:

yo! what a simple SB and relaxing;

[SB Load]
nothing wrong here

[Images File]
rankable resolution size, nothing wrong

[.osb Code]
I'm not quite sure why the black BG suddenly stopped nearly at the back of the song, end result will be like a blink
and it's not suitable for this kind of song. better do a fading out bits by bits

the usage of SB/01.png can be removed, decreasing SB load and also the SB file
instead use Fade on the other images
by putting the original BG to a fade state, you can create a black BG out of it.

this code is a waste:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\01.png",320,240
 F,0,1357,1687,0,1
 S,0,1357,72236,1.099097
 F,0,1687,14214,1
 F,0,14214,19489,1,0
 F,0,19489,,0
 F,0,59050,61687,0,1
 F,0,61687,,1
 F,0,61852,,0
 F,0,61852,72236,0,1

Kiai pulse effect?
add these to the .osb, put it below the original 04.jpg block code

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1

by using loop, I can save 8x4 lines because it repeats again and again

this is how Loop works:
L,51078,8 >> 51078 starting point, 8 is how much you repeat the block code
after that, the parameter of each offset was decreased by 51078, for example you want to start an effect at 00:51:078 - 00:51:737 -
because it starts at 00:51:078 - the Loop value starts there, it will be 0 (51078 - 51078 = 0)
after that you need to decrease the value 51737 - 51078 = 659. result > F,0,0,659,1,0

oh right, pulsing is quite troublesome. don't forget to add epilepsy warning

this is what I did

this end result is similar to your SB
I snapped some of the starting point to the stanza to make it tidy

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Konachan.com - 90831 sample.jpg",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.625
 F,0,0,968,1
 F,0,968,1627,1,0
 F,0,61627,61792,0,1
 F,0,61792,77451,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 S,0,14154,,1.075
 F,0,14154,19429,0,1
 F,0,19429,58990,1
 F,0,58990,61792,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\03.png",436,322
 F,0,3605,6242,0,1
 F,0,6242,8880,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\02.png",478,372
 F,0,6242,8880,0,1
 F,0,8880,11517,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

that's all, good luck for ranked!
if you don't understand, don't hesitate to PM me in-game (:

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello (M4M)

[Normal]
Looks really good to me but the slider's tilt at 00:34:594 (2) seems unnecessary since you can't really tell if it's tilted or not no changes, i do it intentionaly

[Hard]
nothing to fix here to me

[General]
This is a really good beatmap and it's relaxing and love the SB thanks~
have a star (╯°□°）╯︵ !

BeatofIke wrote:

Timing Request!

BPM: 91.000 (correct)
Offset: 14,165 (+10)

Good luck with your map!

1. Remove "Lost Imagination" from the source, since it's the name of its album, not the source. The source field is used if the song comes from a media like video game, anime, etc.
2. Maybe you deserve a better combo colors which fit the background, try copy this one to every .osu file
   

   Combo1 : 255,128,0
   Combo2 : 128,0,255
   Combo3 : 0,128,255
   Combo4 : 251,45,45

1. 00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section
2. 00:14:164 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm sure it's better like this
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:17:132 (1) Any reason why put NC here?
4. 00:33:285 (1,2,3,4) Make it more symmetrical
5. 00:39:879 It's better to blanket it properly
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:835 (1,2) It's better for these sliders to have less bending
7. 00:47:132 (3) Make it curve, it's nicer to see
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:57:022 (3,4) How about this one? Gives a better flow imo
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:01:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2) Seems boring, why not variate it a little? (except you're too lazy to do so)

1. 00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section
2. 00:16:143 (4,2) Stack properly
3. 00:19:439 You sure want to use 0.50x SV here? Personally, I think it really break the flow. Maybe 0.60x is enough
4. 00:28:011 (1,2,3) This makes a bad flow, spread them out
5. 00:56:033 (5,6) ctrl+g, try to make better flow
6. 00:58:340 (1) No, I don't think this slider fits the music, change it into a circle instead
7. 01:00:318 (4,5) Watch your jump, don't go too far in hard diff
8. 01:03:945 (3) ctrl+g and make (1) a bit further, you'll see why on the picture
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:582 (3) ctrl+g, makes better flow
   
   SPOILER

   

El SolarBeam wrote:

my mod as requested
(sorry I can't mod the hitsounding since I'm too noob on it) don't worry my hitsound prety good

[General]

Keeping thing fast and simple, it really seems like you orz. Well, but the positive point is at least the map has fewer mistakes, so let's see how it goes.

1. Remove "Lost Imagination" from the source, since it's the name of its album, not the source. The source field is used if the song comes from a media like video game, anime, etc. ok, since the guideline said so
2. Maybe you deserve a better combo colors which fit the background, try copy this one to every .osu file
   

   Combo1 : 255,128,0
   Combo2 : 128,0,255
   Combo3 : 0,128,255
   Combo4 : 251,45,45

   nice colours, but sorry too bright and unnatural

[Storyboard]

Um.. actually I cannot accept the fact that this storyboard has no concept at all. I understand some storyboarders are just putting up images they find fitting the theme (such SB from a video game, eroge, etc. which is an obvious source), but well, for the time being, I'll go with your SB's pace.
Let's see.. the first simple thing I want to point out is:
- Remove "SB/01.jpg" since you didn't use it at all deleted already, maybe you have that from previous version
- Remove the image "Konachan.com - 174128 aqua_hair boots braids hatsune_miku inoki landscape long_hair night scarf scenic sky snow stars tears vocaloid.jpg" since you had the one with proper size as "SB/04.jpg" deleted already, maybe you have that from previous version and already resize too
- This one isn't really necessary, but it's better to change the name "Konachan.com - 90831 sample" (the one that you use as the bg) into "background.jpg" ,then change the code in the .osb file: indeed not necessary


For the concept, I'll tell you in-game later since that's quite a long step to do. But simply put, this is the storyboarding concept that I thought of:
- Scene 1 : we see a girl sleeping calmly in the sleeping room, start from 00:14:164 until 00:29:329
- Transition 1 : we fly from the sleeping room into the sky, start from 00:29:329 until 00:29:989
- Scene 2 : we see a sky with some pulse effect, start from 00:29:989
- Transition 2 : we fall back to the sleeping room, start from 01:01:637 01:02:296
- Scene 3 : same as scene 1, start from 01:02:296 until 01:14:824
Simple thing, but it's necessary to make others understand the concept of the SB (especially a dynamic SB with some different images) how can you read my mind about the concept lol

Ah, one thing left. I think it's better to reduce some pulse on the kiai (unless you want to imitate StrangeProgram, I won't recommend this). Some of the pulse you should remove:
00:52:406
00:55:044
00:57:681
01:00:318
Why I mention those point? Because it's located on a smaller white tick (in design tab) and some of them located on the lower sound of the music. And last, the music gives a calm feeling, so it's not good to have too many pulse well i don't try to imitate anything, i need more effect on kiai time because it was the climax of the song but maybe i will try something diffrent then if you said so, thanks for noticing


[Normal]

1. 00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section ok, lower 10%
2. 00:14:164 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm sure it's better like this ok, a bit improve
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:17:132 (1) Any reason why put NC here? for consistency, in which there's no combo above 5 in this diff, so i cut 6 combos into two pieces of three combos
4. 00:33:285 (1,2,3,4) Make it more symmetrical ok, a bit improve
5. 00:39:879 It's better to blanket it properly i hope it's blanked well
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:835 (1,2) It's better for these sliders to have less bending no
7. 00:47:132 (3) Make it curve, it's nicer to see no
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:57:022 (3,4) How about this one? Gives a better flow imo no, it will changes the next flow
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:01:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2) Seems boring, why not variate it a little? (except you're too lazy to do so)you know me so well and no change

[Hard]

1. 00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section ok, lower 10%
2. 00:16:143 (4,2) Stack properly ok
3. 00:19:439 You sure want to use 0.50x SV here? Personally, I think it really break the flow. Maybe 0.60x is enough yes, it's not really a problem here, since sv 0.5 and 0.6 are not that much diffrent
4. 00:28:011 (1,2,3) This makes a bad flow, spread them out no, i put some anti jumps for variation and it's located in same rhythm with the song
5. 00:56:033 (5,6) ctrl+g, try to make better flow no
6. 00:58:340 (1) No, I don't think this slider fits the music, change it into a circle instead no
7. 01:00:318 (4,5) Watch your jump, don't go too far in hard diff ok, reduce
8. 01:03:945 (3) ctrl+g and make (1) a bit further, you'll see why on the picture ok
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:582 (3) ctrl+g, makes better flow no
   
   SPOILER

   

good luck, pm me in-game if you have any question~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,227,145
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 206,157,255
Combo4 : 255,149,202

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hii najis lol
PM request~

[General]
If you looking for a custom colors, maybe you can try mine, here: wow looks nice my dear

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,227,145
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 206,157,255
Combo4 : 255,149,202

But the brown color (combo4) doesn't seems fit with the blue stars background, so I sugest you to use combo1, combo2, and combo3 on blue stars background then add combo4 while the background change again into brown sleeping girl, It's looks good and fit the background. ok added, thanks for the detail lol

01:12:186 until 01:14:824 I think you need gradually lower the sound 5% at this point 01:13:505 - (15%) then 01:14:164 - (10%) and then 01:14:824 - (5%) because the song seems fade away ok

[Normal]
Move up this slider 00:34:604 (2) - a bit, 2 grids maybe almost out of screen imo i think it's not out of screen, but ok

[Hard]
01:10:208 (1) - Why not same rhythm as 01:07:571 (1,2,3) - I think It should have same rhythm no, i prefer a long slider rather than that

I don't know about SBing or something like that, but you did a great work nice background and concept.
Good map, good SB, and good luck~ thank you!
And stars

aonkub555 wrote:

hi from m4m but i can't mod this just give u star ^ ^

Oriance wrote:

Yo owo m4m.

General

For your storyboard.. Please change it to the current timing (on the lines), itll be ugly looking if you leave it.

fixed, i forgot to re-snaped the SB to the current timing, thanks for reminding

Normal
00:26:692 (4) - Should put this slider over 00:24:055 (2), It could look better ok, much better now
00:29:329 (2) - Whistle here to be consistent with the bell tune thing on 00:28:670 (1) what i'm hear, it's better not to whistle that one
00:37:241 (4) - Remove Finish ok
00:39:879 (2) - Same as 00:29:329 (2) what i'm hear, it's better not to whistle that one
00:50:428 (2) - ^ ^
00:53:395 (2) - Maybe make a blanket like this? ok, it's looks nice

00:58:340 (4) - I do not like how that looks try this? nah, i like a straight slider

01:00:978 (2) - Whistle here like 00:50:428 (2) what i'm hear, it's better not to whistle that one

Hard
00:14:824 (2) - You could blanket this a little better nah, it's not really necessary
00:18:780 (4) - ^ ^
00:22:077 (5) - Whistle on head, since you did that on Normal diff ok
00:37:241 (3) - Turn off Finish on head ok

00:45:154 (4) - Should have a whistle here for the bell. You can use this for the others like for ex. 00:34:604 (4) etc.etc.
Same thing for the whistles thing on normal difficulty. nah, it doesn't sounds right in my ears

Thats all, I hope this helps. Good Luck (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ

1. 00:14:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is technically right, but the usage of sliders and circles here doesn't reflect how are the instruments played here correctly. This works better, IMO, and will cause less repetitiveness.
2. 00:25:373 (3) - What about removing this slider and only adding a circle at 00:26:033, stacked below 00:24:055 (2)'s tail, to emphasize the instrument there? The instrument at 00:25:373 is too weak to be mapped with a slider's head. Players might feel awkward while hitting it.
3. 00:39:879 (2,1) - It's just a matter of preference, TBH, but placing them like this will make them follow the pitch of the instruments more accurately. Explanation: The instrument at 00:39:219 (1) has a higher pitch than 00:39:879 (2). Placing (2) lower than (1) will reflect the decrease of the pitch nicely.
4. 00:58:340 (4) - This one's kinda optional, but it might increase the fun in this diff a lot. Shape the slider like this (with the head at (124,140), the middle node at (104,196), and the tail at (52,232)) to improve the flow here?
5. 01:01:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you can be a little more creative here. Maybe make some unique shapes with the slider, and don't just place the circles in the center of the map. Try moving them somewhere else too. Again, it will make this map feel less repetitive, and thus more refreshing and fun to play.

1. 00:14:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The sliders here... They look randomly placed, if I have to be honest orz. You can try to make some patterns out of them. They currently look pretty messed up.
2. 00:20:099 - Remove the whistle here...
3. 00:20:758 - ...then add one here...
4. 00:21:417 - ...and then remove the whistle here? The instrument is stronger at 00:20:758, and is very faint at 00:20:099 and 00:21:417. Your current hitsound pattern is incorrect according to these instruments, and makes the section weird to play.
5. 00:21:747 (3,4,5) - Try placing them like this to create a pattern with a nice flow. Oh, and remove the whistle on (4), then add whistles at (3) and (5)'s head. They're following the instrument better.
6. 00:24:055 (1) - Split this slider into a circle followed by a 1/1 slider one beat after the circle? Like this? This follows how the instruments here are played better.
7. 00:32:296 (4) - Add a whistle here? It'll emphasize the instrument here nicely.
8. 00:34:604 (4) - ^
9. 00:37:241 - ^
10. 00:40:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, you might want to rearrange these notes into a neat pattern, since they look messy.
11. 00:47:791 (3,1,2) - Is it just me, or is the spacing for the anti-jumps here inconsistent to the previous ones (like 00:26:033 (2,1,2,3) and 00:39:219 (1,2))? I recommend to make the spacing same visually, not just making the DS/distance spacing value consistent, since you used different slider velocities throughout the diff.
12. 00:51:088 - 01:01:637 - The jumps in this kiai time are extreme for a Hard diff, especially 01:00:318 (4,5). Try reducing the distance between jumps, please.
13. 00:55:703 (4) - Try to add a whistle here? Same reason as 00:32:296 (4).

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; taking an additional map from the Indonesian Modding Team queue because I feel like it.

Anggep aja Inggris di sini buat formalitas `` /slapped /me slaps Hinsvar

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Normal

1. 00:14:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is technically right, but the usage of sliders and circles here doesn't reflect how are the instruments played here correctly. This works better, IMO, and will cause less repetitiveness. ok, i fixed that my own
2. 00:25:373 (3) - What about removing this slider and only adding a circle at 00:26:033, stacked below 00:24:055 (2)'s tail, to emphasize the instrument there? The instrument at 00:25:373 is too weak to be mapped with a slider's head. Players might feel awkward while hitting it. it's a bit off for me to do that, since i follow the bell sound and i find myself not to awkward if i put a slider instead a circle
3. 00:39:879 (2,1) - It's just a matter of preference, TBH, but placing them like this will make them follow the pitch of the instruments more accurately. Explanation: The instrument at 00:39:219 (1) has a higher pitch than 00:39:879 (2). Placing (2) lower than (1) will reflect the decrease of the pitch nicely. ok, nice explaination
4. 00:58:340 (4) - This one's kinda optional, but it might increase the fun in this diff a lot. Shape the slider like this (with the head at (124,140), the middle node at (104,196), and the tail at (52,232)) to improve the flow here? i geuss no, i love a straight one
5. 01:01:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you can be a little more creative here. Maybe make some unique shapes with the slider, and don't just place the circles in the center of the map. Try moving them somewhere else too. Again, it will make this map feel less repetitive, and thus more refreshing and fun to play. ok fine, gonna change it not to repetitive, two modders already mention it

>Hard

1. 00:14:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The sliders here... They look randomly placed, if I have to be honest orz. You can try to make some patterns out of them. They currently look pretty messed up. ok, fixed into a better pattern and flow
2. 00:20:099 - Remove the whistle here... ok
3. 00:20:758 - ...then add one here... ok
4. 00:21:417 - ...and then remove the whistle here? The instrument is stronger at 00:20:758, and is very faint at 00:20:099 and 00:21:417. Your current hitsound pattern is incorrect according to these instruments, and makes the section weird to play. ok
5. 00:21:747 (3,4,5) - Try placing them like this to create a pattern with a nice flow. Oh, and remove the whistle on (4), then add whistles at (3) and (5)'s head. They're following the instrument better. ok, done
6. 00:24:055 (1) - Split this slider into a circle followed by a 1/1 slider one beat after the circle? Like this? This follows how the instruments here are played better. [/color] ok
7. 00:32:296 (4) - Add a whistle here? It'll emphasize the instrument here nicely. [/color] ok
8. 00:34:604 (4) - ^ [/color] ok
9. 00:37:241 - ^ [/color] ok
10. 00:40:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, you might want to rearrange these notes into a neat pattern, since they look messy. haha ok, fixed into a better pattern and flow
11. 00:47:791 (3,1,2) - Is it just me, or is the spacing for the anti-jumps here inconsistent to the previous ones (like 00:26:033 (2,1,2,3) and 00:39:219 (1,2))? I recommend to make the spacing same visually, not just making the DS/distance spacing value consistent, since you used different slider velocities throughout the diff. yes you right, better same visually rather than same DS, ok fixed
12. 00:51:088 - 01:01:637 - The jumps in this kiai time are extreme for a Hard diff, especially 01:00:318 (4,5). Try reducing the distance between jumps, please. please forgive me lol, reduce distance on kiai time done
13. 00:55:703 (4) - Try to add a whistle here? Same reason as 00:32:296 (4). ok

Not much to say lol

Good luck on the way

KevinKang wrote:

i just saw the map in a modding queue, and i like it._.（forgive my poor english><）
the map is good and 2 suggestions
i think the circle size in normal can be reduced to 3,better for the new players to enjoy the map CS 3 is too big for me imo, and this map will played well in CS 4 especially on Normal diff
01:01:637 i think this time need to make a transition between the 2 pictures（the fade effect,i think you know）i know and it was already done, but maybe i add a short one

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod queue o/
Sorry for late reply, internet issues X_X don't worry, thanks for your time

NO KD!

Storyboard check

Made some extra storyboard: ok added snow effect

- Supposed to be stars, that's why it's named star.png, changed my mind and made it look like snow instead :3
- Put the star.png in the SB folder : https://www.dropbox.com/s/ttrk08pq7nc4hof/Star.png
- Put the code on top of //Storyboard Sound Samples

Code

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- There is too much pulsing at the kiai time, reduce it by half ok reduced

- The pulse when it is main BG is fading out does not fade out fixed
-- The last pulse has higher opacity than the main BG fixed

- The last 01:01:802 picture appears too abruptly, create a very long pulse, around 2 bars that scales bigger and fades out re-scaled fixed

- Just a suggestion, make the 2nd picture fade completely at 01:14:824 so that when the spinner ends the BG can't be seen fixed

Good luck!

HabiHolic wrote:

[Normal]

00:35:923 (3) - NC Here Rhythm flow please i think it's not necesary to do, since i follow this 00:23:395 (1,2,3,4) - instead, for keep consistency on NCing, so if i NC here 00:35:923 (3) - will broke the consistency
00:47:132 (3) - Suggests slider look https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1206548 ok fixed, it seems everyone love a curve on that one lol

[Hard]

00:43:835 - add whistle no need to do
00:51:747 (2,3) - In my opinion, I think the gap is too wide you think so? i have reduced it once, but well i reduced again this jump by 0.5, i hope no more compalaint on this lol
00:58:999 (2,3) - ^ ^

First map? yes!
look good map~
Good luck