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Megurine Luka
卧槽就差我了

骚瑞拖进度了
Topic Starter
popner

Megurine Luka wrote:

卧槽就差我了

骚瑞拖进度了
别慌,我还有3个新番op要搞
Banana
hard的中文歌名,没打
路过 no kd
ieb

CodeBreaker Hao wrote:

求添加视频,不然没同步率 :)
最好还要带歌词
Megurine Luka
BounceBabe
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

It's good to hear other asian languages than japanese and korean. It's a good change c(:

General

- Unicode title and artist is not the same on every difficultie. Please check and fix this.

Easy

00:41:094 (3,4) - , 00:17:094 (2,3) - , 01:18:534 (2,3) - Spacing is 1,1x, 1,07x and 1,2x here, might be good to fix that for beginners so they don't get confused. It's only a slight change but still important.
00:10:374 (3) - This is slightly offscreen and needs to be higher placed. Please fix this so players play the whole slider start.
01:02:214 (1,2) - I don't know if stacking is a good idea for a beginner difficultie. Beginners have had to play only a row of elements so far and that's how it should be. Stacking might cause missclicking due to them not being able enough to read the time, when to click, proper. Unstack this to avoid that problem, on all stacks.
02:01:734 (4) - Beginners probably get confused by the contact of the part of the slider here 02:02:694 - - You should space it out there alittle more to avoid missunderstanding and its also visually more attractive imo.
02:13:734 (3) - Element is too high and touches the HP bar, please lower it so it doesn't touch it.
02:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's a long row of circles. It's not so easy to play for new players, they might come out of the rythm in the middle of the pattern and then get stuck and missclick circles. Maybe add a slider in the middle to give them more safety.
02:51:654 (4) - Shouldn't the NC be here? You comboing is 4 elements long this is 6.

Hard

00:25:494 (4) - , 01:42:774 (1) - , 03:16:614 (1) - The element is too high and touches the HP bar, lower it to avoid this mistake.
00:33:174 (5,1,2) - Nice placement of elements and it also fits. (:
01:03:894 (6,1) - , 01:11:814 (1) - , 02:09:174 (6,1) - I think that this little jump doesn't really fit. I can't find something in the song which would match this jump, except the NC, which is nonsense to use a jump on NC. A jump should be when the song allowes it the most.
01:31:014 - I actually expected a spinner here, for the reason it would just fit and its very empty here. Consider adding one.
01:47:694 - , 01:48:054 - Add a circle here for a transition between your previous vocal you mapped to and then beginning of the next one. Would fit very good.
01:52:134 (1) - This is too hidden to see this good. The previous slider hasnt faded out fully so you can see the next one good. You should move them apart so its better visible.
02:00:294 (2,3) - . 02:13:014 (4,1) - This slight spacing change is very unneeded and looks not good. Make normal spacing here.
02:01:734 (1) - , 02:19:014 (1) - NC is not needed, remove it. It also is not good and doesnt make sense to put 1 NC at the end of a pattern.
02:26:454 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - .... Well... that's self explanationable xD Reduce the combo please.
02:47:334 (4) - , 03:23:814 (4) - , 03:28:614 (2,4,6,8) - , 01:25:734 (2,4,6,8) - This is not 100% visible enough to notice it and play it good. You should shape it somehow different to make it more visible.
03:00:774 (4,5,1) - Consistant spacing would be better and would look better too.
02:58:854 (4,5,1) - Make a better triangle pattern, this playment from 4 to 5 is surely odd and doesnt play well.
03:20:454 (1,2) - You should make the placement how you had it on the last time, this is slightly confusing.

Nice and flowy difficultie (:

Insane

- Wait, why are the hitsounds different than the other diffs? Or is it just me.

00:08:214 (5,1) - I really don't like such placement when its the same as 00:07:494 (3,4,5) - this spacing. You should really make the spacing bigger here to avoid missunderstandings.
01:11:334 (5,1) - You map to the vocal and here imo, is no need and nothing to emphasize with this jump. Consider making normal spacing. It would also look better and give a better transition with 01:11:334 (5,1) - .
01:13:014 (5,6) - This little jump or spacing change is not need as well. It doesnt follow something big and looks weird. It looks slightly like a mistake happened. 01:13:014 (5,6,1) - Yes it works and is consistant with this pattern but it doesnt fit due to it not emphasizing something.
01:57:294 (6,7) - , 01:59:214 (6,7) - I don't understand such placement. This surely plays and looks very odd. I see no point in making such a weird placment. Stack it please.
02:21:894 (3) - jericho told me this is unrankable to slowdown sliders with this kind of way how you made it. I consider it as unrankable and suggest to find another slider.
02:23:814 (5,6) - Such tiny spacing changes can be avoided and are not needed. They look unattractive too. Use more of a symmetric kind of pattern ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071885 ) to fix the spacing. I really dont see a point of breaking it because of copy paste. You did this here too 02:50:214 (3,4,5) -
02:52:854 (6,1) - This is not stacked proper, please stack it.
03:44:933 (6) - Not snapped.
03:50:214 (1,2,3) - This is very unexpected this ending, due to you previous tripples and its the same spacing. Why don you make a triangle pattern or else to keep normal spacing or stack it. Just dont use the same spacing, this is really confusing.

Very nice set, like it.
Topic Starter
popner

Megurine Luka wrote:

久等-0-

http://puu.sh/54eGH.osu
大哥好萌, updated

BounceBabe wrote:

SPOILER
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

It's good to hear other asian languages than japanese and korean. It's a good change c(:

General

- Unicode title and artist is not the same on every difficultie. Please check and fix this. Caused by a bug, fixed

Easy

00:41:094 (3,4) - , 00:17:094 (2,3) - , 01:18:534 (2,3) - Spacing is 1,1x, 1,07x and 1,2x here, might be good to fix that for beginners so they don't get confused. It's only a slight change but still important. same as Insane: 02:23:814 (5,6)
00:10:374 (3) - This is slightly offscreen and needs to be higher placed. Please fix this so players play the whole slider start. not offscreen for me in testplay: http://puu.sh/5OnPl.jpg
01:02:214 (1,2) - I don't know if stacking is a good idea for a beginner difficultie. Beginners have had to play only a row of elements so far and that's how it should be. Stacking might cause missclicking due to them not being able enough to read the time, when to click, proper. Unstack this to avoid that problem, on all stacks. When it's not mixing of 1/1 stacks and 1/2 stacks, it's fine.
02:01:734 (4) - Beginners probably get confused by the contact of the part of the slider here 02:02:694 - - You should space it out there alittle more to avoid missunderstanding and its also visually more attractive imo. ok
02:13:734 (3) - Element is too high and touches the HP bar, please lower it so it doesn't touch it. it doesn't touch the hp bar for me using default skin: http://puu.sh/5OnhV.jpg
02:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's a long row of circles. It's not so easy to play for new players, they might come out of the rythm in the middle of the pattern and then get stuck and missclick circles. Maybe add a slider in the middle to give them more safety. There is a long break after this pattern and I think the player will have time to recover from it. I don't have a good idea to turn some notes to slider too, for consistent reason.
02:51:654 (4) - Shouldn't the NC be here? You comboing is 4 elements long this is 6. It's actually NCs for every 2 big white ticks.

Insane

- Wait, why are the hitsounds different than the other diffs? Or is it just me.

00:08:214 (5,1) - I really don't like such placement when its the same as 00:07:494 (3,4,5) - this spacing. You should really make the spacing bigger here to avoid missunderstandings. Well I got may tester and it seems fine in reading this rhythm change
01:11:334 (5,1) - You map to the vocal and here imo, is no need and nothing to emphasize with this jump. Consider making normal spacing. It would also look better and give a better transition with 01:11:334 (5,1) - . Map to vocal, but when the vocal becomes monotonous, drums are in consideration.
01:13:014 (5,6) - This little jump or spacing change is not need as well. It doesnt follow something big and looks weird. It looks slightly like a mistake happened. 01:13:014 (5,6,1) - Yes it works and is consistant with this pattern but it doesnt fit due to it not emphasizing something. This is something that I called "transitional part" between two vocal sections and the spacing change will make the two sections separated clearly
01:57:294 (6,7) - , 01:59:214 (6,7) - I don't understand such placement. This surely plays and looks very odd. I see no point in making such a weird placment. Stack it please. I think this kind of patterns make the map different from one by a mapping program
02:21:894 (3) - jericho told me this is unrankable to slowdown sliders with this kind of way how you made it. I consider it as unrankable and suggest to find another slider. This has been used for years in ranked maps. The boarder shows the path clearly.
02:23:814 (5,6) - Such tiny spacing changes can be avoided and are not needed. They look unattractive too. Use more of a symmetric kind of pattern ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071885 ) to fix the spacing. I really dont see a point of breaking it because of copy paste. You did this here too 02:50:214 (3,4,5) - The real spacing of this kind of patterns during playing is not what it shows on the right upside. You can refer to t/86329
02:52:854 (6,1) - This is not stacked proper, please stack it. It is intentional because if they are stacked proper, 02:52:494 (3,4,5,6) - will not be in a straight line
03:44:933 (6) - Not snapped. Copying bug. fixed
03:50:214 (1,2,3) - This is very unexpected this ending, due to you previous tripples and its the same spacing. Why don you make a triangle pattern or else to keep normal spacing or stack it. Just dont use the same spacing, this is really confusing. There is NC here for anti-jump and it fits the music well, and causes no reading problem to testers. So I don't think it is fine

Very nice set, like it.
Thx for mod!
BounceBabe

popner wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

blabla
I really laughed xD
Koiyuki
说好的不mod
SPOILER
才怪
等会回家后再来摸
其实是马克一下
Koiyuki


From your request

[General]
  1. 我看到了即喜羊羊之后第二个要被国人刷爆的歌曲,233333

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和前面一小段下一样的节奏吧我觉得
  2. 02:58:374 (2) - 建议拆成note,和前面保持一致,这里全都是1/1滑条有点单调了
  3. 03:12:774 (1,3) - 感觉没包好

[Luka's Normal]
  1. 01:06:054 (1,1) - 不太喜欢这两个spin,感觉还可以再做的……
  2. 01:43:494 (3) - 位置有点过高

[Xingye's Hard]

  • 你确定不用Yuko's Hard?不过Hard里面也能看到星爷的风格真是不好多书
  1. 其他diff前面都有做,我觉得也可以做一点。
  2. 01:31:014 - 总觉得空着比较奇怪,不过也无所谓,后面也一样
  3. 02:46:854 (3,4) - 我只是说说,因为实在太多这种了……发现也没啥好说的,JB
  4. 00:01:134 - 01:32:934 - 02:26:214 - 多余的绿线

[Insane]
  1. 02:53:094 (1) - 我觉得这个1移出来比较好-.-
  2. 03:38:454 (1) - 这个NC怎么回事
  3. 00:01:134 - 多于的绿线

没啥大问题
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
药不能停,听了几遍整个人都洗剪吹了
[Easy]
摸到这里我得吃药了。。
脱线到不行。。ez我实在是不想再听一遍了。。
放了一遍感觉没有啥硬性问题。。
[Luka's Normal]
00:17:334 (2) - 这里节奏。。我觉得应该跟vocal比较好,或者前边白线加note
00:23:814 (1,2) - flow似可商榷,要不要弯一弯前边那个滑条?
01:34:134 (3) - 跟前面第一点一样
01:37:974 (4) - 这前边为何也漏note?刻意为之的话也不是很推荐这样
凡是遇见杀马特必定空一拍。。这种设定其实我觉得有点不自然啊。。
01:37:974 (4) - 这里为何又要空vocal去跟节拍呢?
02:05:574 (3,4) - flow似乎比较硬
03:38:214 (4,5,6) - 这里跟vocal的话还是跟“洗剪吹”比较好


[Xingye's Hard]
00:51:414 (2) - 跳的似乎有点远
03:26:454 (6,1) - flow不顺


[Insane]
只是挑点刺。。
00:07:974 (4) - 这里是不是距离跟上个滑条有点远?而且flow感觉有点硬
00:48:054 (7,8,1) - flow不顺
00:51:894 (7,1) - 跳的无根据并且换flow也不是很适合
01:04:134 (1,2) - flow有点奇怪。。不过可以理解。。
01:28:614 (2,3,1) - 换flow我觉得同意,但是这里似乎间距也可以扩大一下进行区分
02:08:934 (7,1) - flow不顺畅
02:52:854 (6,1) - 叠的感觉没有那么浓吧
03:16:134 (7,1) - flow不顺畅并且没有很强的跳跃感




That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Megurine Luka
No change.

节奏的话我基本跟的鼓点-。-目前这样比较满意不想做改动

两个spin我会考虑。不过现在想的是前半部分不要太为难人所以就摆了spinner
Spy
hao
Kevin Hunter
没视频不欢乐啊 :D
Nymph
王師傅給我燙個頭啊
Koiyuki
tag里面加上“杀马特遇见洗剪吹”“五色石楠叶”“王师傅”“可乐”“芬达”“王老吉”(后面四个纯粹是瞎掰的)
gfcjyb
来顶
Spy
這首是翻唱的,不知道需不需要tag上原曲跟原團體?
如果需要的話,就加上SHINee Ring Ding Dong
Topic Starter
popner

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

tag里面加上“杀马特遇见洗剪吹”“五色石楠叶”“王师傅”“可乐”“芬达”“王老吉”(后面四个纯粹是瞎掰的)
杀马特遇见洗剪吹已经是title了,然后那个唱的人自称是“五色石南叶”。


[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

SPOILER


From your request

[General]
  1. 我看到了即喜羊羊之后第二个要被国人刷爆的歌曲,233333

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和前面一小段下一样的节奏吧我觉得
  2. 02:58:374 (2) - 建议拆成note,和前面保持一致,这里全都是1/1滑条有点单调了
  3. 03:12:774 (1,3) - 感觉没包好
这几个感觉没什么区别啊

[Insane]
  1. 02:53:094 (1) - 我觉得这个1移出来比较好-.- nope
  2. 03:38:454 (1) - 这个NC怎么回事 removed
  3. 00:01:134 - 多于的绿线 removed

没啥大问题

Atrue wrote:

SPOILER
[Insane]
只是挑点刺。。
00:07:974 (4) - 这里是不是距离跟上个滑条有点远?而且flow感觉有点硬
00:48:054 (7,8,1) - flow不顺
00:51:894 (7,1) - 跳的无根据并且换flow也不是很适合
01:04:134 (1,2) - flow有点奇怪。。不过可以理解。。
01:28:614 (2,3,1) - 换flow我觉得同意,但是这里似乎间距也可以扩大一下进行区分
02:08:934 (7,1) - flow不顺畅
02:52:854 (6,1) - 叠的感觉没有那么浓吧
03:16:134 (7,1) - flow不顺畅并且没有很强的跳跃感
感觉都没什么问题啊,新vocal或者重音的时候断一下flow基本都是故意的




That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Thx for mod!
Topic Starter
popner

Spy wrote:

這首是翻唱的,不知道需不需要tag上原曲跟原團體?
如果需要的話,就加上SHINEE Ring Ding Dong
Thx. Added.
-Teina-
這首歌真的沒問題嗎?
雖然我近乎聽不明普通話...

Form我的modding queues的mod
[Insane]
open
00:04:134 (5) - X:242 Y:287
00:27:414 (8) - X:200 Y:289
01:00:774 (1) - X:305 Y:327
01:15:174 (7) - X:390 Y:95
02:21:414 (2) - X:196 Y:254
02:53:094 (1) - 這裡是想重疊與否?

不要給我KD
只簡單地看了一次
沒有從整體角度入手

其實真的不太受得了這種音樂>_<

祝你成功~
ts8zs
[Insane]
01:01:014 (2,3) - 朝下
01:51:414 (7,8) - slider
03:26:934 (1,2,3,4) - move to 326,264
03:50:574 (2) - move to 228,268
[Hard]
00:31:734 (2) - 包1?
01:31:014 - 加两听加多宝
03:33:894 - ^
01:41:574 (3) - 12点中间加个白点柔和下
03:44:454 (3) - ^
02:47:334 (4) - remove clap
剩下俩难度看不出来啥了……这种慢图不容易出问题吧
source或者tag加上bilibili douga就更好了XD
Nymph
[General]
bilibili能不能進tag?

creator word放B站link啊 炫酷拽霸天的彈幕版 順便放上revenge的


[Insane]
其實我很建議跟著音樂加那個红线悶鼓 24clap还是感觉略单薄了

00:19:014 (6,7,8) - 像这种我个人感觉换成2个slider可能更好一些 (就算是用2note也不要一直用嘛 后面也可以变一下的

03:33:894 (1) - 这里不跟vocal多好 跟那个三连打的滴滴音

其实看开头那会hitsound那么新奇 我还以为这个insane不是普通向送分24clap insane了 给我做个extra多好

低難度沒什麽好講的

順便誰做個第二版的revenge啊 感覺只好放假自己動手了
Topic Starter
popner

Nymph wrote:

[General]
bilibili能不能進tag?

creator word放B站link啊 炫酷拽霸天的彈幕版 順便放上revenge的 added tag


[Insane]
其實我很建議跟著音樂加那個红线悶鼓 24clap还是感觉略单薄了

00:19:014 (6,7,8) - 像这种我个人感觉换成2个slider可能更好一些 (就算是用2note也不要一直用嘛 后面也可以变一下的 没有什么好的方案啊,结构又动不了

03:33:894 (1) - 这里不跟vocal多好 跟那个三连打的滴滴音 感觉变化有点突然

其实看开头那会hitsound那么新奇 我还以为这个insane不是普通向送分24clap insane了 给我做个extra多好

低難度沒什麽好講的

順便誰做個第二版的revenge啊 感覺只好放假自己動手了

Thx for mod!
Kyouren
Bubble this, plz><
Beige
RingDingDong..??? LoL
gxytcgxytc
总之先房
Nymph
ok bubbled.
Ibuki Suika
尿了泡了
Scorpiour
泡泡你节操彻底没了
Kayano
尿了
Awaken

OniJAM wrote:

尿了
Megurine Luka
我操吓cry
Kyouren
Gratzz!! Megurine Luka, Amamiya Yuko, and popner!!^^
pw384

Scorpiour wrote:

泡泡你节操彻底没了
alacat
wa congrats :lol:
gxytcgxytc

gxytcgxytc wrote:

总之先房
Skystar
要求unrank改diff名!!!!!!!!!!111111111

Request for an unranking for changing the diff name !!!!!!!!!!111111111
Snowy Dream
泡泡送上新年好礼
DenoisoGoiso

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

要求unrank改diff名!!!!!!!!!!111111111

Request for an unranking for changing the diff name !!!!!!!!!!111111111
Request for an delete this post for request a diff name change !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111111

omg congrats ^^
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