Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.
It's good to hear other asian languages than japanese and korean. It's a good change c(:
General- Unicode title and artist is not the same on every difficultie. Please check and fix this.
Easy00:41:094 (3,4) - , 00:17:094 (2,3) - , 01:18:534 (2,3) - Spacing is 1,1x, 1,07x and 1,2x here, might be good to fix that for beginners so they don't get confused. It's only a slight change but still important.
00:10:374 (3) - This is slightly offscreen and needs to be higher placed. Please fix this so players play the whole slider start.
01:02:214 (1,2) - I don't know if stacking is a good idea for a beginner difficultie. Beginners have had to play only a row of elements so far and that's how it should be. Stacking might cause missclicking due to them not being able enough to read the time, when to click, proper. Unstack this to avoid that problem, on all stacks.
02:01:734 (4) - Beginners probably get confused by the contact of the part of the slider here 02:02:694 - - You should space it out there alittle more to avoid missunderstanding and its also visually more attractive imo.
02:13:734 (3) - Element is too high and touches the HP bar, please lower it so it doesn't touch it.
02:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's a long row of circles. It's not so easy to play for new players, they might come out of the rythm in the middle of the pattern and then get stuck and missclick circles. Maybe add a slider in the middle to give them more safety.
02:51:654 (4) - Shouldn't the NC be here? You comboing is 4 elements long this is 6.
Hard00:25:494 (4) - , 01:42:774 (1) - , 03:16:614 (1) - The element is too high and touches the HP bar, lower it to avoid this mistake.
00:33:174 (5,1,2) - Nice placement of elements and it also fits. (:
01:03:894 (6,1) - , 01:11:814 (1) - , 02:09:174 (6,1) - I think that this little jump doesn't really fit. I can't find something in the song which would match this jump, except the NC, which is nonsense to use a jump on NC. A jump should be when the song allowes it the most.
01:31:014 - I actually expected a spinner here, for the reason it would just fit and its very empty here. Consider adding one.
01:47:694 - , 01:48:054 - Add a circle here for a transition between your previous vocal you mapped to and then beginning of the next one. Would fit very good.
01:52:134 (1) - This is too hidden to see this good. The previous slider hasnt faded out fully so you can see the next one good. You should move them apart so its better visible.
02:00:294 (2,3) - . 02:13:014 (4,1) - This slight spacing change is very unneeded and looks not good. Make normal spacing here.
02:01:734 (1) - , 02:19:014 (1) - NC is not needed, remove it. It also is not good and doesnt make sense to put 1 NC at the end of a pattern.
02:26:454 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - .... Well... that's self explanationable xD Reduce the combo please.
02:47:334 (4) - , 03:23:814 (4) - , 03:28:614 (2,4,6,8) - , 01:25:734 (2,4,6,8) - This is not 100% visible enough to notice it and play it good. You should shape it somehow different to make it more visible.
03:00:774 (4,5,1) - Consistant spacing would be better and would look better too.
02:58:854 (4,5,1) - Make a better triangle pattern, this playment from 4 to 5 is surely odd and doesnt play well.
03:20:454 (1,2) - You should make the placement how you had it on the last time, this is slightly confusing.
Nice and flowy difficultie (:
Insane- Wait, why are the hitsounds different than the other diffs? Or is it just me.
00:08:214 (5,1) - I really don't like such placement when its the same as 00:07:494 (3,4,5) - this spacing. You should really make the spacing bigger here to avoid missunderstandings.
01:11:334 (5,1) - You map to the vocal and here imo, is no need and nothing to emphasize with this jump. Consider making normal spacing. It would also look better and give a better transition with 01:11:334 (5,1) - .
01:13:014 (5,6) - This little jump or spacing change is not need as well. It doesnt follow something big and looks weird. It looks slightly like a mistake happened. 01:13:014 (5,6,1) - Yes it works and is consistant with this pattern but it doesnt fit due to it not emphasizing something.
01:57:294 (6,7) - , 01:59:214 (6,7) - I don't understand such placement. This surely plays and looks very odd. I see no point in making such a weird placment. Stack it please.
02:21:894 (3) - jericho told me this is unrankable to slowdown sliders with this kind of way how you made it. I consider it as unrankable and suggest to find another slider.
02:23:814 (5,6) - Such tiny spacing changes can be avoided and are not needed. They look unattractive too. Use more of a symmetric kind of pattern (
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071885 ) to fix the spacing. I really dont see a point of breaking it because of copy paste. You did this here too 02:50:214 (3,4,5) -
02:52:854 (6,1) - This is not stacked proper, please stack it.
03:44:933 (6) - Not snapped.
03:50:214 (1,2,3) - This is very unexpected this ending, due to you previous tripples and its the same spacing. Why don you make a triangle pattern or else to keep normal spacing or stack it. Just dont use the same spacing, this is really confusing.
Very nice set, like it.