theramdans wrote:

hai random mod
maaf kalau terlalu detail

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya. => klo yang Easy+Normal kenya susah klo harus dibikin Break, soalnya nanti combo terlalu dikit (ato emang ga apa2 ya?). Saya mikirnya ntar kurang etis klo mapnya aga panjang tapi combonya cuma dikit, gtu, klo yang Hard sama nsane emang udah ada tempat buat dijadiin Break sih, tapi diisi dlu, kan klo harus dihapus mah gampang tinggal delete
Kiai time 1 mulai di 01:22:131 => ok
Kiai time 2 mulai di 02:36:277 =>ok
Karena lagunya lumayan panjang mapsetnya lebih baik NORMAL HARD INSANE tanpa Easy, cuman Normalnya rada gampang dengan bintang dibawah 3 => saya pengen nyoba aja dlu bikin 4, percobaan pertama, tes kesanggupan

Distance snap banyak yang kacau dan tidak konsisten, cek Ai Mod (File>Open Ai Mod) lalu centang "Check distance snap" lalu perbaiki => ok

Easy

[General]
AR +1 atau +2, karena terlalu pelan => ok, kenya +1 aja deh
HP +1 => ok
OD +1 atau => ok
Distance snapping terlalu besar (kontradiksi dengan SV dan AR serta bpm yang pelan, tidak sinkron)
coba ganti distance snappingnya ke 1.2 => dijadiin 1.3 sma saya

00:19:692 - New Combo
00:27:497 - ^
00:39:204 - ^
00:41:155 (1) - spinner ini tidak cocok disini karena terlalu pendek dan jaraknya ke not selanjutnya hanya 1 beat (ini tidak boleh ada di diff Easy). Coba ganti dengan slider bolak balik atau jadikan break section aja , lumayan 4 beat.
00:47:009 - New Combo
00:50:423 - hilangkan New Combo, pindahin New Combonya ke (2) selanjutnya
00:54:814 - New Combo
00:58:228 (3,1) - geser dikit (1) ke kiri biar blanketnya pas dengan (3)
01:02:619 - New Combo
01:14:326 - ^
01:22:131 - kiai time mulai disini
01:26:033 - New Combo
01:29:936 - New Combo disini bukan di (1) sebelmnya
01:33:838 - New Combo
01:37:740 - ^
01:41:643 - ^
01:45:545 - sama kayak 01:29:936
01:47:497 (1) - sama kayak 00:41:155 (1)
02:01:155 - New Combo
02:03:106 (1) - sama kayak 00:41:155 (1)
02:08:960 - New Combo
02:10:911 (1) - sama kayak 00:41:155 (1)
sisa modnya kira2 sama sampai akhir soalnya lagunya kepanjangan ^^. Benerin aja distance snapnya ke 1.2, New Combo ikutin musik/gitarnya sama spinnernya jangan kependekan/ga pas dengan musik/not setelahnya kurang atau sama dgn 1 beat.

=> untuk beberapa perbaikan combo ada yang ngga disesuain sama saran disini, karena saya menyesuaikan dengan perubahan Chrod-nya (udah apal letak2 rubah chordnya sih ),klo bisa cek lagi ya

Normal

[General]
AR dan HP + 1
Diff ini kontradiksi banget ama Easy, karena CS lebih kecil SV lebih cepat tapi distance snapnya lebih kecil
Coba distance snap diseragamin ke 1.0 dan jangan bikin kaya 00:24:082 (1,2) karena distance terlalu jauh (jump)
Combo2 nya kepanjangan, coba dipendekin sesuai irama musik nya , biasanya new combo dipake setiap 2 stanza, tapi itu tergantung alur lagunya kayak gimana

=> ok, untuk normal distance-nya udah di snap di 1.0 dan combo udah di perpendek

Hard

SV di diff ini terlampau jauh terlalu cepat jika dibandingkan dgn diff normal (normal sv 1.0 hard sv 1.8) coba sv nya 1.4~1.6. Kalau 1.8 cocoknya dif Insane
Distance snap di bagian awal lagu terlalu kecil coba dibesarkan, karena ini diff hard distance boleh di ubah sedikit2 tapi harus konsisten dan polanya yang wajar dan masuk akal serta pas ama lagunya

00:19:448 (1) - slider kayak gini mending diganti pake circle aja => ngga diubah jadi spinner tapi yang slider pendeknya diubah jadi 2 hit circle aja
00:21:399 (5) - ^ => ^
00:27:253 (1) - ^ => ^
00:33:106 (1,2) - dua spinner kayak gni ga cocok => nah ini bingung kudu digimanain?

=> ok, untuk hard sebagian diikutin, tpi kenya aga susah juga klo harus ganti SV (orgnya malesan ), yah nanti lah digantiSV-nya klo niat

Insane

Insane nya sadis, AR HP dan OD terlalu besar, saran:
AR 8 HP 7 OD 7
Polanya secara keselurhan udah bagus, tapi ga aku mod full soalnya udah kepanjangan

=> ok, AR, HP dan OD udah diganti tapi 8 8 8, ngga 8 7 7
padahal klo pun kepanjangan juga ga apa2 biar bener nih mapnya

Saran

Pola map udah bagus
tapi distance snaping harus dipelajari lagi
dan hitsound, mapnya terlalu sepi tanpa hitsound + lagunya kalem bener
dan Break Time! Itu sangat penting

=> makasih sarannya, diusahain lah ditambahin hitsound-nya, soalnya masih aga bingung make hitsound yang cocok
Break Time udah ditambahin buat yang Hard sama Insane, yang Easy sama Normal ngga ditambahin (penjelasan diatas)

OSU! NEEDS MORE DEPAPEPE!

K4zuya K wrote:

theramdans wrote:

hai random mod
maaf kalau terlalu detail

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya. => klo yang Easy+Normal kenya susah klo harus dibikin Break, soalnya nanti combo terlalu dikit (ato emang ga apa2 ya?). Saya mikirnya ntar kurang etis klo mapnya aga panjang tapi combonya cuma dikit, gtu, klo yang Hard sama nsane emang udah ada tempat buat dijadiin Break sih, tapi diisi dlu, kan klo harus dihapus mah gampang tinggal delete

Sephibro wrote:

The offset is very early, this one is much better:

Offset: 202 I think it's too late/slow, especially in the beginning (intro) and reff part

don't forget to resnap all inherited timing points (green lines)
also check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) because some objects aren't correctly snapped


Good luck!

OK, all fixed, thanks

yurunneram wrote:

EASY

01:00:667 (3,4) - Turn these two into one beat sliders?

01:08:960 (3) - Spacing a bit uneven

02:10:911 (2) - You think maybe rotate anti clockwise abit so that the tail is same dist away from (1) as the head?

02:20:667 (1) - Blanket properly

eto... actually I don't do very well with instrumentals... well if it's short I'm okay but this is quite long and I get bored easily ehehe ^^")7 so gomene I'll stop here. just a lil thing: I dun believe in Aimod

dun give kudosu

5eania wrote:

[Easy]
03:28:730 (7) - copy to the 6

5eania wrote:

really sorry to be late. i'll shoot a star.

[General]
probably, Offset +14 changed to 185. +14 is not quite right in the reff part and ending ^^

[Easy]
03:28:730 (7) - copy to the 6 done

[Normal]
00:57:984 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap, and reduce 1 reverse. done
01:05:058 (4) - use 1/1 snap reverse slider. done
03:29:448 - need 1/2 slider. done
03:39:204 (1,2) - remove done
03:39:448 - 1/2 slider done

[Hard]
00:31:399 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest
Image Link done
00:38:228 (7) - looks better more under grid (like x:192 y:140) done
00:54:082 (3) - x:356 y:192 done
01:36:277 (1) - use rotate! (Ctrl + Shift + R) done
02:24:326 (1) - x:368 y:240 done
02:43:106 (7) - copy to the 6, and Ctrl + H,G done
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

[Insane]
01:21:155 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. done
01:31:033 (2) - move to back 1/8 snap. i refer to chord voice, not melody one here, so no change here ^^
01:32:145 (1) - remove, and add circle to 01:32:145 - 01:32:389 done
01:39:706 ~ 01:41:657 - Suggest
Image Link done
02:35:315 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. (and you can choice ctrl + g) done, but not the ctrl+g
02:53:852 ~ 02:55:803 - Suggest
Image Link i don't think it's good, too close and cramped
03:21:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - increase spacing form away previous notes. Like this. done
03:29:950 (6,7,8) - 1/4 rever slider. want to try making something like talent shredder bass part, super tapping lol
03:30:559 (9) - remove i refer to drum sound for this part, so i think i don't need to remove this ^^
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

tellertheworld wrote:

My friend(VictorWong):

Offset should be 206 instead of 180.

theramdans wrote:

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya.

raheta_adi wrote:

bener tuh kata theramdans. map ini harus dikasi break. kenapa? karena ini mapset untuk rank, bukan approved. kalau seandainya ini approved sih engga masalah, itu udah biasa. contonya di map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32201 ga ada break sama sekali tapi itu bisa diterima, karena ini map approved.

Note : no kudosu for this post.

Guidelines wrote:

Use breaks where possible.

Momochikun wrote:

theramdans wrote:

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya.

raheta_adi wrote:

bener tuh kata theramdans. map ini harus dikasi break. kenapa? karena ini mapset untuk rank, bukan approved. kalau seandainya ini approved sih engga masalah, itu udah biasa. contonya di map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32201 ga ada break sama sekali tapi itu bisa diterima, karena ini map approved.

Note : no kudosu for this post.

Just passed by, because this guy post his map on Ely's queue.
And i totally disagree with this, yeah look at > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82612
This 4 minutes map got no break especially on Insane, and it got ranked. why ?
Because on the Ranking Criteria,

Guidelines wrote:

Use breaks where possible.

And this rule was belong in Guidelines, so it means if there're no possible part on the map that can be used as break. So it's not.
Also it was up to mapper that he/she want to use a break or not on the map. No modders / Bats may change it, if it still make sense on the map.
However, break were still recommended on beginner's diff like easy and normal.

Well, Good Luck for your very first map ~

makasih infonya (ato bisa disebut pembelaan? lol)

K4zuya K wrote:

5eania wrote:

really sorry to be late. i'll shoot a star.

[General]
probably, Offset +14 changed to 185. +14 is not quite right in the reff part and ending ^^

[Easy]
03:28:730 (7) - copy to the 6 done

[Normal]
00:57:984 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap, and reduce 1 reverse. done
01:05:058 (4) - use 1/1 snap reverse slider. done
03:29:448 - need 1/2 slider. done
03:39:204 (1,2) - remove done
03:39:448 - 1/2 slider done

[Hard]
00:31:399 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest
Image Link done
00:38:228 (7) - looks better more under grid (like x:192 y:140) done
00:54:082 (3) - x:356 y:192 done
01:36:277 (1) - use rotate! (Ctrl + Shift + R) done
02:24:326 (1) - x:368 y:240 done
02:43:106 (7) - copy to the 6, and Ctrl + H,G done
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

[Insane]
01:21:155 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. done
01:31:033 (2) - move to back 1/8 snap. i refer to chord and drum sound, not melody one here, so no change here ^^
01:32:145 (1) - remove, and add circle to 01:32:145 - 01:32:389 done
01:39:706 ~ 01:41:657 - Suggest
Image Link done
02:35:315 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. (and you can choice ctrl + g) done, but not the ctrl+g
02:53:852 ~ 02:55:803 - Suggest
Image Link i don't think it's good, too close and cramped
03:21:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - increase spacing form away previous notes. Like this. done
03:29:950 (6,7,8) - 1/4 rever slider. want to try making something like talent shredder bass part, super tapping lol
03:30:559 (9) - remove i refer to drum sound for this part, so i think i don't need to remove this ^^
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

ok, thank you so much for the modding and star

Setsurei wrote:

yo! walau di queue masih ada pending mods, screw my queue lol
I'm helping Indonesian mapper while I'm in the mood of modding this map
aku mod in indo aja biar jelas maksudnya, walau ada beberapa istilah yang masih pakai inggris

[General]
for a first beatmap ini lumayan - my first map was a disaster
hitsoundnya sedikit sekali, aku point beberapa saja yang "jelas" (I suck on hitsounding lol) saya juga kurang begitu ngerti cara pake HS yang bener lol
hitsoundnya agak "ngulang" dari easy, aku cuma sebut sedikit saja
kalo pakai clap hitsoud di lagu ini, decrease volumenya ke 30-40%, kalo terlalu keras lagunya ketutupan suara clapnya
dan disini sebenernya banyak ugly flownya tapi malas sebut lol - too many straight sliders, usahakan pakai curve lebih sering

[Easy]
00:13:843 (4) - kasih hitsound finish+clap di ekor 00:15:306 - done
00:15:794 (1) - finish di kepala, clap di ekor done
00:17:745 (2) - clap di ekor done
00:19:697 (1,2) - imo normal whistle nya ga cocok sekali, karena ini instrumental kalem. ganti soft whistle? done
00:27:502 (1,2) - ^ done
diff easy kalo bisa jangan pakai beat 1/16.. beat 1/2 atau max 1/4 aja karena newbie ga bisa ngepasin time kapan dia harus hit
00:35:337 (1,2,3) - ini dibenarkan posisinya (00:35:306 (1) - 00:37:257 (2) - 00:38:233 (3) - ) justru klo dipasin ngga pas klo easy, ntah knapa. udah di coba sama saya dan emang ga pas klo di pasin di garis putih. lagi pula itu kan tetep pas satu ketukan (00:35:337 (1,2)) dan 2 ketukan (00:37:288 (2,3)) ^^
00:41:160 (2) - clap di ekor done
00:50:428 (1) - clap done
00:50:916 (2) - dibikin curve done
00:54:331 (2) - clap done
00:54:819 (3) - dibikin curve done
00:56:770 (5) - clap di ekor done
01:05:063 (2) - ^ done
01:17:502 (4) - snap ekornya dibenarkan (ga pas di garis putih) ini juga sama, klo dipasin ngga pas sound nya
01:18:691 (1,2,3) - ini melenceng juga, 1/16 jangan dipakai di Easy/Normal diff ^
01:22:136 (1) - finish di kepala done
01:24:819 (3,1) - flow cut, 01:26:038 (1) - dimiringkan saja seperti ini done

SPOILER

01:28:965 (3,1) - ini juga flow cut walau ga seberapa nampak, rubah jadi seperti ini? done

SPOILER

digaris biar jelas

ini flow sebelum ku rubah:


yang ini setelah ku rubah:

01:32:867 (2) - x 232 y 316 done
01:33:843 (1) - ekornya dinaikan done

SPOILER

01:53:356 (1,2) - sama seperti 00:19:697 (1,2) - done
02:10:916 (2) - clap di ekor done
02:18:721 (3) - ^ done
02:36:282 (2) - finish di kepala done
02:38:965 (4,1) - similar to 01:24:819 (3,1) - done
02:51:891 (4) - ^ done
03:48:477 (1) - finish done

[Normal]
00:13:843 (3,4) - ntar dikira newbie ekornya (4) jadi kepalanya, lebih baik dipindah saja
dempetan gini bikin bingung (except if this is Hard+) done
00:14:575 (4) - finish+clap di ekor done
00:15:794 (1) - finish done
00:16:526 (2) - why of all means ini garis lurus. tidak flowing dengan baik di 00:15:794 (1,2,3,1) - done
00:41:160 (1,1) - kalo bisa Easy / Normal diff kasih jarak 1 stanza kosong setelah spinner (mulainya disini setelah spinner 00:43:599 - ), agak susah buat newbie untuk click 00:43:111 (1) ok, untuk beberapa tempat bisa di ubah. tapi untuk beberapa yang lain ngga diubah soalnya udah spinnya bukan slider tapi hit circle dan klo itu diilangin jadi ngga enak ^^

similar matter

01:29:941 (1,1) -
01:51:404 (1,1) -
02:10:916 (1,1) -
02:44:087 (1,1) -
03:13:355 (1,1) -

00:46:526 (5) - clap done
00:54:331 (2) - ^ done
00:57:745 (1) - clap di ekor 00:58:233 - done
01:02:136 (7) - clap done
01:05:063 (4) - clap di ekor done
01:22:136 (3) - finish di kepala done
01:45:063 (1,3) - overlap, salah satu geser dikit done
01:45:550 (2,4) - ini juga done
02:59:453 (3,1) - flow cut done
03:20:672 (4,1,2) - flownya kurang luwes, ctrl+G terus pindah ke x 68 y 180 done

seperti ini

03:24:819 (5,1,2) - 03:24:819 (5) - jangan terlalu melengkung kedalam, flownya ga enak done
03:26:526 (2,3,4) - sesak sekali, 03:28:233 (3) - dibikin curve saja saya juga bingung harus dbikin gimana lol

[Hard]
00:52:380 (7,9) - lebih bagus lagi kalo (7) nya stack ekornya (9) persis done
01:22:136 (3,4) - overlap, kalo bisa head slidernya jangan ditutup (harus jelas) done
02:30:428 (7,8) - ^ done

[Insane]
objectnya banyak yang ga rapi ): tolong sebut dimana yang kurang rapihnya biar bisa dirapiin
03:21:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - aku ga yakin bisa FCin ini map lol namanya juga insane lol
03:25:550 (8,1) - this start is not good, pindah ke arah lawannya aja (pindah juga object berikutnya 03:26:282 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) ^
03:37:745 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - jangan mefet2, 03:37:136 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pindah agak dalam dikit done

feel free to PM me in-game - malas sebut disini
tambah kebawah tambah dikit modnya lol
anyway, good luck![/color]

1. Remove Depapepe from tag, because it's available in Artist.
2. Offset is wrong.183 is better

• 00:07:989 (1,2,3) - Hitsoundnya mana? ._.
  00:19:697 (1,2) - make it so curve.
  00:35:337 (1) - this slider must starts in 00:35:306
  00:37:288 (2,3) - fix the rhythm/beat tick
  00:44:575 (2,3) - I don't like this placement.
  01:00:184 (2,3) - blanket propely
  01:49:453 (1) - No DS alright here. fix it
  01:53:355 (1,2) - scary slider (hhhh really scary)
  02:24:575 (1) - last node is red
  Di lurusin slider yg ini
  
  Before

  
  After

  
  02:26:526 (2,3,4) - flow into here is bad
  03:03:315 - the break must start in 03:03:599
  03:46:526 (2) - lurusin slidernya

• 00:08:721 (2) - i don't like this slider with 90° slider.
  00:32:867 (4,5) - the rhythm looks weird you follow here.
  00:43:111 - add circle
  00:45:063 (2) - Kalau bikin jump jangan disini kak
  00:45:550 (3,4,5,1) - i don't really interessing in this flow
  01:10:428 (1) - stack

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

:? Hi :3

[General]

1. Remove Depapepe from tag, because it's available in Artist. changed
2. Offset is wrong.183 is better changed

[Easy]

• 00:07:989 (1,2,3) - Hitsoundnya mana? ._. ok added
  00:19:697 (1,2) - make it so curve. done
  00:35:337 (1) - this slider must starts in 00:35:306 done, ternyata klo offsetnya dibenerin jadi pas
  00:37:288 (2,3) - fix the rhythm/beat tick done
  00:44:575 (2,3) - I don't like this placement. udah diganti
  01:00:184 (2,3) - blanket propely done
  01:49:453 (1) - No DS alright here. fix it done
  01:53:355 (1,2) - scary slider (hhhh really scary) changed
  02:24:575 (1) - last node is red fixed (? dunno what you mean lol)
  Di lurusin slider yg ini ngga diubah, malah ditambahin miring
  
  Before

  
  After

  
  02:26:526 (2,3,4) - flow into here is bad this is why i don't make the last note straight
  SPOILER

  
  03:03:315 - the break must start in 03:03:599 done
  03:46:526 (2) - lurusin slidernya done

[Normal]

• 00:08:721 (2) - i don't like this slider with 90° slider. changed
  00:32:867 (4,5) - the rhythm looks weird you follow here. changed
  00:43:111 - add circle ignored (he said i can ignore this)
  00:45:063 (2) - Kalau bikin jump jangan disini kak changed
  00:45:550 (3,4,5,1) - i don't really interessing in this flow changed
  01:10:428 (1) - stack changed

Just easy and normal xD
Good luck~~

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello (from M4M)

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:21:158 (1) - add clap done
00:23:109 (2) - ^ done
00:25:061 (2) - ^ done
00:27:012 (4) - ^ done
00:28:963 (1) - ^ done
00:30:914 (2) - ^ done
00:47:987 (2) - make your slider bend straight (unless it's suppose to do that) i don't really understand what you mean here, can you explain with example?
00:56:768 (3) - put it at x:268 y: 136 done
01:06:524 (1) - put it at x:412 y: 172 done
01:39:695 (1) - move to x:76 y:112 done
02:16:768 (2) - make the slider bend straight same with 00:47:987 (2) -
02:53:841 (1) - move to x:64 y:276 done
02:55:792 (3) - move to x:308 y:52 done
03:11:402 (1) - take off NC i think it fits better before i remove the NC. I use NC because the guitar chord changes here
03:27:012 (5) - NC done
03:29:939 (1) - take off NC done
03:30:914 (2) - NC done
03:41:646 (3,4,5) - move to x:404 y: 312 done
add some more hitsounds ok, i've added some new HSs

[Normal]
00:13:841 (3) - move to x:356 y:140 done
00:15:291 (4) - move to x:488 y:228 done
00:39:207 (3) - x:432 y:164 done
00:40:670 (4) - x:284 y:64 done
00:41:158 - move to spinner to 00:43:109 nope. for normal after spinner the space should be 1 stanza and this is 1 stanza (from Guidlines)
01:17:500 (3) - move to x:128 y:196 done
01:48:719 (3) - move to x:280 y:344 done
02:10:914 - move the spinner to 02:12:865 same as 00:41:158 -
02:44:085 - move the spinner to 02:46:524 same as 00:41:158 -
add hitsounds ok, added some HSs

[Hard]
AR -1 i won't change this. it's pretty normal for hard to have this AR
00:23:353 (1,2) - x:152 y:152 done
00:25:061 (4) - x:336 y:260 done
00:38:475 (8,9,10) - big jumps for hard it's not that jumpy i think
Nothing else to say here except that some jumps are a bit far for hard and again add hitsounds i'm not that good with HSs. still new to mapping

[Insane]
AR -1
Thats about it except once again hitsounds teach me how to be good with adding HSs

Really like this map i'm definitely keeping this map

sjoy wrote:

Hi from my queue
[Easy]
00:35:304 (1) - whis done
00:39:207 (1) - ^ done
00:43:109 (1) - ^ done
00:50:914 (2) - ^ done
00:58:719 (1) -^ done
01:02:622 (1) - ^ done
01:06:524 (1) - ^ done
03:18:231 (2) - move to 404,312 for the same spacing done
[Normal]
you can add whis with the same asEasy diff done
02:18:231 (2) - move to 88,104 for the same spacing done
01:48:719 (3) - add the fin on the end done
03:03:353 (1) - ^ done
03:28:231 (3) - change it 1/2+1/1 slider done
03:40:182 (2) - move to 03:40:061 done
03:40:426 add a note done
[Hard]
00:39:207 (11) - NC done
00:47:987 (10) - ^ done
01:22:134 (3) - add fin done
01:47:256 (10) - too much returning done
02:36:280 (3) - add fin done
03:03:597 (1) - ^ done
03:46:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - so far jumping in the hard diff nope, this is not that hard.i've seen something more harder than this in hard
[Insane]
00:15:792 (1) - add fin done
00:23:597 (2) - ^ done
01:22:134 (3) - ^ done
02:36:280 (3) - ^ done
in fact ,you need work more time on the hitsound haha,i'm suck with HSs, still can't decide where to put HS, can you teach me?
you can add 24clap or whis on the downbeat
good luck~

aonkub555 wrote:

Hi from m4m , sorry for late

Grid snap (Shift)

easy diff

00:44:573 (2,3) try to place this will be flow better http://puu.sh/5OsGg done
00:46:036 (1,2) similar -^ place this http://puu.sh/5OsNV done
00:50:914 (2) add finish at head slider done
01:16:280 (3,4) can be symmetry better by copy 01:17:500 instead of 01:17:500 - http://puu.sh/5Ot3g done
01:37:743 add finish at head done
02:51:890-^ done

Normal

00:10:670 use GS what is GS? Game shark? lol
00:50:914 remove clap at tail done

hard
01:22:134 add finish at head slider done
02:36:280 -^ done
03:16:402 maybe change slider to be this it so fun http://puu.sh/5OtZ4 nope, i won't change this, just want to make the same pattern with 03:21:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

insane

01:22:134 add finish at head slider done
01:49:451 -^ done
01:49:451 -^ done....... wait, what?
02:36:280 -^ done

that's all~ good map

1. 00:19:695 (1,2) - may bit overlap? Try Wave Slider?
2. 00:29:451 (2) - Maybe... reduce reverse -1 because nuubies hard to catch the spinner xD
3. 00:35:304 - this greenline add volume value to 50%
4. 00:41:158 (2) - terlalu bengkok disini. so move the last point/pattern to 292,328
5. 00:43:109 (1) - well, blanket nicer
6. 00:46:036 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:47:012 (2) - Add NC. because NC in small white tick is lol and rhythm not changing
8. 00:50:914 (2,3) - lel very overlap. please blanket nicer for avoid the overlap.
9. 01:00:670 (3) - maybe flow/same arrow by 00:58:719 (1) is not good. How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:02:622 (1,1) - maybe ignore the stack? ummm
11. 01:16:280 (3,4) - from the (3) to (4) so far/maked jump. so Use DS here
12. 01:53:353 (1,2) - same suggestion like 00:19:695 (1,2)
13. 02:31:890 (3) - maybe you try this rhythm? it's so fast from (3) to (spinner)
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 02:50:426 (3) - delete NC and Add NC at 02:51:889 (1)
15. Done~

1. 00:42:622 (1) - you put finish here? hhhh it's fit anything? it's a drum not a bass
2. 00:59:451 (3) - Last point/pattern is red D: and you should make it curve
3. 01:34:573 (5) - maybe the pattern make this slider too curve
   
   make this

   
4. 01:37:256 (3,1) - stack
5. 01:41:646 (5,1) - maybe ^
6. 01:51:402 (1) - spinner in here could not enough imo here
7. 02:05:061 (1) - more curve
8. 02:10:426 (4) - make this symmetrical?
9. 02:16:768 (1) - lol
10. 02:20:670 (1,2,3,4) - (pake indonesia) jalannya gak alami D: jadi harus bikin yg curve-curve gitu
    
    kayak gini

    
11. ok

Groumiezi wrote:

Walaaaa.... Normal kok easy xD modding dipertanyakan dari deno/kamu terus harus digimanain dong? tambahin apanya? object? AR/C- nya ditambahin?

Maybe Offset is 210... try it. good NO, it's really-really off

[Easy]

1. 00:19:695 (1,2) - may bit overlap? Try Wave Slider? i change it to this
2. 00:29:451 (2) - Maybe... reduce reverse -1 because nuubies hard to catch the spinner xD ok, but added 1 circle
3. 00:35:304 - this greenline add volume value to 50% done
4. 00:41:158 (2) - terlalu bengkok disini. so move the last point/pattern to 292,328 done
5. 00:43:109 (1) - well, blanket nicer i didn't mean to blanket this from the beginning, but well~, blanketed this
6. 00:46:036 (1) - Remove NC done
7. 00:47:012 (2) - Add NC. because NC in small white tick is lol and rhythm not changing done
8. 00:50:914 (2,3) - lel very overlap. please blanket nicer for avoid the overlap done
9. 01:00:670 (3) - maybe flow/same arrow by 00:58:719 (1) is not good. How about this? done
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:02:622 (1,1) - maybe ignore the stack? ummm nope, i think it's better like this, but i remove the grid snap so the stack is properly made
11. 01:16:280 (3,4) - from the (3) to (4) so far/maked jump. so Use DS here eeeehhh~, since when did this slider move there? i don't remember moving this slider
12. 01:53:353 (1,2) - same suggestion like 00:19:695 (1,2) same slider like this
13. 02:31:890 (3) - maybe you try this rhythm? it's so fast from (3) to (spinner) done
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 02:50:426 (3) - delete NC and Add NC at 02:51:889 (1) done
15. Done~

[Normal]

1. 00:42:622 (1) - you put finish here? hhhh it's fit anything? it's a drum not a bass maybe you mean the spinner before not the slider right?
2. 00:59:451 (3) - Last point/pattern is red D: and you should make it curve done
3. 01:34:573 (5) - maybe the pattern make this slider too curve done
   
   make this

   
4. 01:37:256 (3,1) - stack done
5. 01:41:646 (5,1) - maybe ^ nope, it's too far if you want to pile this up to 5
6. 01:51:402 (1) - spinner in here could not enough imo here i don't think so, it's enough to get 2000 here
7. 02:05:061 (1) - more curve done
8. 02:10:426 (4) - make this symmetrical? what do you mean? it's just straight short slider
9. 02:16:768 (1) - lol lol, i laugh too when i see this, dunno why i make something like this and no one (including me) noticed this before
10. 02:20:670 (1,2,3,4) - (pake indonesia) jalannya gak alami D: jadi harus bikin yg curve-curve gitu done
    
    kayak gini

    
11. ok

hhh good luck :3

sjoy wrote:

Hi from my queue
[Easy]
00:35:304 (1) - whis
00:39:207 (1) - ^
00:43:109 (1) - ^
00:50:914 (2) - ^
00:58:719 (1) -^
01:02:622 (1) - ^
01:06:524 (1) - ^

1. 00:27:500 (1,2) - Make (2) a 3/2 slider like (1) is. All those reverses don't fit at all.
2. 00:38:232 (3) - for stuff like this, it's actually better to remain on the 3/2 pattern you were going. This hits the second key note of the guitar, and players will most likely play to the first one. | Move this back 1/2 to 00:37:987 - | Maybe add a note at 00:38:719 - as well.
3. 00:46:036 (1) - because this is introducing a new gap to players, it might be better to lead into this one with a slider from (3)
4. 00:46:524 - because you already use quite a few 1/1s in your song, how about adding a circle here? | This captures the drum hit well, and would be good to use claps with.
5. 00:50:426 (1,2,3) - The (2) doesn't blanket well at all into the (3), plus the end of it is really really close to being hidden under the HP bar. | Try to give the (2) a bit more breathing room. | Maybe setting up something like this: http://puu.sh/5UFut.jpg | or just redoing this section all together.
6. 00:52:865 (4,1,2) - would fit better as 3/2 gaps instead of 1/1
7. 01:00:670 (3) - Try this as a 3/1 slider (3 white long) | http://puu.sh/5UFCk.jpg | You should adjust the positioning for this as well anyways. It would be better if this could flow into (1) instead of ending straight downwards, and ending near where the previous slider ended.
8. 01:12:378 (3) - instead of using the extra reverse, how about 2 1/1 sliders?
9. 01:18:689 (1,2,3) - unsanpped to 1/1? | These need to be fixed and moved to the white bar. They hit too early themselves 1/16 or whatever it is back.
10. 01:35:304 (2) - angle this a bit more to the right so it flows into (1) better.| http://puu.sh/5UGAg.jpg | this is how it currently looks, so it could use a small nudge. (bit nazi, but all helps I guess)
11. 01:41:646 (3) - move the middle node to x372 y260 for a slightly better blanket.
12. 02:05:061 (1) - move this so it flows more into (2) | Also, you have the soft whistle hitting this slider.
13. 02:07:988 (3) - move this back 1/2 | and have a note at 02:08:475 - Like my other suggestions. combine one or both of them into a slider as well if you want.
14. 02:08:963 (1) - try approaching the (2) from above | http://puu.sh/5UG5r.jpg | otherwise make the tail end of (1) end a bit more to the left, as it goes a bit to far.
15. 02:14:817 (3,1) - combine into one slider
16. 02:16:768 (2,3) - move the tail end left so its directly straight facing down, and then (3) to x280 y368 for better flow.
17. 02:27:500 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/5UGjI.jpg ? | curving this slider would be nice, and repositioning the (1) after
18. 03:01:646 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/5UGqW.jpg | Blanket could be much better on this. Drag the (5) back 1/2 to make it easier to blanket, and put it back afterwards.
19. 03:07:500 (1,2,3,1) - since this is a beginner diff, why not make this break slightly longer. Instead of 4 seconds, it'll be more like 8-9 seconds, you could also make the spinner coming up a bit longer as well.
20. 03:16:036 (1) - how about a different shape? even a normal curved slider would work better here | The amount it angles at the end is a bit too much for it.
21. 03:27:012 (1,2,3) - how about this? | http://puu.sh/5UH57.jpg
22. 03:30:914 (1) - how about reducing this by 1/2 and adding a circle at 03:32:865 - | http://puu.sh/5UH99.jpg

1. 00:11:890 (1,2) - move the (1) over left a bit with distance snap, and the (2) accommodating it. | http://puu.sh/5UHCS.jpg | maybe add a some curve into the (2) as well? | http://puu.sh/5UHEX.jpg
2. 00:24:329 (2) - clap on end?
3. 00:25:548 (3,4) - Turn this into a slider. hitting 3/4 is really difficult for a normal difficulty.
4. 00:27:500 (1,2) - I doubt all these claps are necessary, how about just placing one on the slider's ends instead?
5. 00:38:231 (1,2,3) - bit more of a flowing curve would be nice here. | http://puu.sh/5UHOS.jpg
6. 00:57:743 (1) - ? I don't get the purpose of this slider. You should really only need a note at 00:58:231 - to be fine.
7. 01:32:865 (1,2,3,4) - a bit too complicated, even for a normal. Try this: http://puu.sh/5Vl3P.jpg | This makes use of sliders to catch akward notes and gaps. (1) is where (1) is currently
8. 01:45:548 (2) - how about placing this above the (1,3) instead of below it?
9. 01:46:524 (4) - for stuff like this, I highly highly suggest using two half sliders instead of all those reverses. maybe change the positions of the previous (1,2,3) as well to fit two 1/2 sliders
10. 02:07:012 (3,1) - end the (3) slider 1/2 later, and delete the (1) circle
11. 02:14:085 (2) - basically the same thing as 01:46:524 -
12. 02:38:231 (1) - how about giving this a little more breathing room in the curved part? | http://puu.sh/5VlAs.jpg is an example, I think you can come up with a better shape though. | actually, try something like you did at 02:40:914 (4) - for a shape
13. 03:00:670 (1) - again, I would suggest you use two 1/2 sliders or a circle + a 1/2 reverse slider.
14. 03:07:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - again I'll leave this up to you, but it might be better just to have a longer break here. It isn't as bad for Normal, but I think the Easy should try to have it at least. And as I mentioned, you could make the spinner longer as well if you wanted.
15. 03:16:280 (1,2) - combine these into a slider, and start the beginning 1/2 earlier at 03:16:036 - so it catches the main guitar instead of the background solo one.
16. 03:40:061 (2,3) - I would join these up as a slider as well, because hitting these would actually be pretty difficult.

1. 00:11:890 (7,8) - stick with the 3/2 rhythm here as well. 1/1 doesn't fit at all. | You can try a pattern like this as well if you wanted: http://puu.sh/5VmhM.jpg
2. 00:17:256 (3,4) - to differentiate the upcoming 3/4s you have from these, combine this into a slider. It makes it a lot more playable and readable.
3. 00:22:743 (10) - remove this. It isn't needed, You seem to only use 1/4s at the beginning of this map, so this extra really sticks out. I highly highly suggest removing it. The 1/4s before are actually not bad and can fit.
4. 00:27:500 (3) - Try this pattern: http://puu.sh/5VnlT.jpg | all those reverses in a hard don't fit at all. This pattern flows better with the music.
5. 00:31:402 (1,2,3,4) - Try adding a whistle to the head of all these sliders. (soft) | They sound so empty at 40% volume
6. 00:35:304 (1) - Finish on head | And try to make this slider more circular as well, like | http://puu.sh/5VnHj.jpg | rotate it anti-clockwise about 25-35%
7. 00:37:256 (5) - I'm not quite following the reasoning behind this slider. I don't notice any special things happening with the guitar.. or I just can't hear it.
8. 00:48:963 (6) - just make a full length slider instead of having this reverse. It really doesn't fit at all.
9. 00:50:914 (4) - stuff like this can have a finish on it as well
10. 00:52:378 (7,9) - Control+g the (9) twice, and move the (7) to x254 y84
11. 00:59:451 (3) - it would also be cool if you can get rid of the reverse in this one as well.
12. 01:05:061 (7) - try removing the reverse on this as well. and reposition if possible. nothing really plays on the end of this, so the little gap is nice.
13. 01:10:182 (1) - I don't see a purpose of this note. Might as well have a little breathing room after such a small spinner, so delete it.
14. 01:14:085 (1) - same with this one. ^
15. 01:15:061 (5,6) - instead of all this stacking business, why not make them symmetrical and put them in the corner or something? | http://puu.sh/5VpjB.jpg | copy paste (5) after you get the angle and rotate it 180° to make it even.
16. 01:27:987 (3) - why not just use two 1/1 sliders instead of all those reverses?
17. Also, its kind of sad that you decided to use spinners in this area as well instead of mapping to the guitar. It would be a lot more fun to play if you cut down on the spinners a bit.
18. 01:35:304 (8,9) - swap these. Go slider circle instead of circle slider because 01:35:548 - is really not a dominate place to hit compared to the spots before and after.
19. 01:39:695 (3) - same as 01:27:987 -
20. 01:43:109 (7) - delete this note. it'll work good with the spacing you have at 01:44:573 -
21. 01:48:475 (11) - delete this as well.. also this combo is getting really big XD | Don't add notes for the sake of fillers, map to the music, and the guitar calls for the 1/1 gap here.
22. 01:50:915 (3,4) - same as before, make these a slider
23. for this next section, pretty much everything I suggested above I guess could apply here. since this is a copy paste I think.
24. 02:19:695 (1) - remove this note.
25. 02:24:329 (1) - remove (same reason as before)
26. 02:29:207 (3) - make the tail end, stack on the (2)'s tail
27. 02:38:963 (8) - better as one full slider instead of reversed.
28. 02:39:939 (10,1) - blanket?
29. 02:53:841 (1,2) - no need for the reverses... why overmap? Honestly would play and sound better if you followed the main guitar here.
30. 02:57:743 (8,9) - make this a 3/4 slider with a reverse | http://puu.sh/5VuV3.jpg
31. 03:12:134 (3,4,5) - make the ends of these stack as well... If you need help, Control+g each one and stack them, then control+g each one back. | http://puu.sh/5Vv0t.jpg
32. 03:16:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - It doesn't matter how you try to look at this, it plays horrible and feels awful. It might just be easier to make simple 1/4 reverses like this, and have the first two notes circles. | http://puu.sh/5Vvaf.jpg
33. 03:21:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
34. 03:23:963 (2) - not really needed, but you can leave it if you want. reduce the distance spacing like I suggested in the opening for this though, because seeing this: http://puu.sh/5Vvi7.jpg is pretty nasty to look at. Try to keep your spacing consistent in hards except for jumps. This really applies to all your notes in this diff.
35. 03:31:646 (5,6,7) - extra junk.. how about a slider? I really feel like this whole section coming up is too overmapped, its hard to understand what you are mapping to anyways. Its up to you I guess if you want to make this part a little more pleasant to play, so I won't suggest much else on it besides list some spots that could use some toning down.. feel free to skip.
36. 03:35:792 (6) - This circle isn't needed.
37. 03:36:768 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - first off, the spacing is terrible on this. you jump from random 1.17 to 1.09 to 1.24 etc. streams should always be a constant Distance spacing. You may also want to think of changing the pattern as well on this. its a bit over the top for a hard difficulty.
38. 03:41:890 (1) - you don't need this circle either. Adds no value.
39. 03:44:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - so about this. First off if you don't want to change anything, you really really should change at least this one issue. | 03:46:524 (9) - delete this note, and move 03:46:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - back 1/3 | It's important when using sliders to try and stick to having them start on the main beat (white line) so moving them all back 1/3 would immediately play 100x better than what you currently have.
40. 03:44:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for these, why not just simplify it and use reverses on the sliders and kinda join them up like this: http://puu.sh/5Vw3p.jpg
41. 03:46:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing on these are really exaggerated.. reduce it a bit. no need to have such intense jumps on 1/3s on only a hard difficulty.